Comments on community poems by Tristan Robert Lange

• It\'s Time For Payback (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Soical commentary with a prophetic edge. My cup of tea! Love this Shawn!...
  October 26th, 2025 08:03
• The Intricate Lattice. (Friendship) My friend, this is powerful…not just a poem but a reclamation. You make...
  October 25th, 2025 10:40
• “Nevertheless you said” (Keyara S Trotman) My friend, this feels like a secret whispered between worlds…half prose,...
  October 25th, 2025 10:35
• Saviour.. (September 21st, 2025) (Doggerel Dave) Surely, Shirley will know! As for me, I surely don\'t know Shirley...or do...
  October 25th, 2025 10:24
• Soft dreams (Sorenbarrett) My friend, I’ve walked that same inner weather…rain that doesn’t...
  October 25th, 2025 10:20
• Prayer Piece (Orchidee) Orchi, somehow you keep turning scripture into seaside revival…Ol’ Tom...
  October 25th, 2025 09:53
• You cannot fix what\'s broken! (Friendship) Friendship, heartbreaking and beautiful…you’ve turned despair into...
  October 24th, 2025 20:06
• Societal Morality  (Rebellion_in_sanity) My friend, I’ve wrestled with that same conflict…truth or performance,...
  October 24th, 2025 20:04
• workday residue (Arqios) My friend, haunting in its restraint…the scaffolding, the receipts, the...
  October 24th, 2025 08:13
• The Thing (Paul Bell) Paul, this hit perfectly…the quiet build, the flicker, the way the story...
  October 24th, 2025 08:10
• Halloween (Sorenbarrett) Soren, love this…faith, folklore, and a flicker of fear braided...
  October 24th, 2025 08:09
• Comforter Consolings (Orchidee) Orchi, blessed be this aquatic gospel…Ol’ Tom\'s too tired to swim,...
  October 24th, 2025 08:03
• The Heaviness Of Halloween (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Well written Shawn. Philosophically/Theologically, what would the light be...
  October 24th, 2025 07:53
• a rare sight (NafisaSB) Safina, gentle and mournful all at once…that vision of sparrows and...
  October 24th, 2025 07:45
• The Shroud Of Darkness (+2) (Kurt Philip Behm) Friend, this triptych reads like America’s unholy trinity...fame,...
  October 23rd, 2025 18:56
• 𝒞𝒶𝓂ℯ 𝒲𝒾𝓉𝒽 𝒩ℴ 𝒮𝓅𝒶𝒸ℯ 𝒻ℴ𝓇 𝒶 𝒯𝒾𝓉𝓁ℯ (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, what a digital reliquary...half poem, half incantation. “Heaven...
  October 23rd, 2025 18:54
• Devon Pan (Arqios) This is poetry’s own origin story...Pan’s breath reborn in modern...
  October 23rd, 2025 18:50
• Tyrant (Sorenbarrett) Soren, “Tyrant” moves like thunder with a conscience...nature, God,...
  October 23rd, 2025 18:47
• Shelter Security (Orchidee) Orchi, my friend… this one rests easy on the spirit. “Lead me to the...
  October 23rd, 2025 18:41
• 80s Action (Part.2) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Idk, there were these whole subcultures of music back then Glam and Hair...
  October 23rd, 2025 18:35
• With Only Nine Trees Left (Neville) Neville, my friend… brutal truth beautifully spoken. “Only nine trees...
  October 23rd, 2025 18:29
• Tomorrow is no promise. (Friendship) Friendship, this one glows from within. “Tomorrow is a hazy shore” and...
  October 23rd, 2025 18:26
• Trusted Feathers (Teddy.15) A wonderful introduction to your beautiful Raven collection, indeed,...
  October 22nd, 2025 20:37
• 𝒜𝓈 𝒾𝓉𝓈 𝓌𝓇𝒾𝓉𝓉ℯ𝓃: ℳ𝒶𝓁𝒾ℊ𝓃𝒶𝓃𝓉 ℰ𝓃𝒸𝓇𝓎𝓅𝓉ℯ𝒹 (Keyara S Trotman) This is alchemy on the page...grief, risk, and lust blending into a...
  October 22nd, 2025 20:35
• To fly, is to fall (Georgia Watson) This reads like a confession echoing off canyon walls...failure reframed...
  October 22nd, 2025 20:33
• Diamonds (Paul Bell) This is seduction as ceremony...diamonds not just as adornment, but as...
  October 22nd, 2025 20:31
• In My Crosshairs (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Well, too civilized looking to be a politician at least. He\'s a bit...
  October 22nd, 2025 20:30
• Insomnia of life (Sorenbarrett) This is a poem of beautiful unease. Sleep and death blur into one gentle...
  October 22nd, 2025 20:26
• Fret Not Nor Fear (Orchidee) Another beautiful hymn, Orchi...meanwhile, in the back pew, Scooby’s...
  October 22nd, 2025 20:22
• ~~~~~~~~𝔍𝔲𝔰𝔱 𝔱𝔬 (𝕼𝔲𝔬𝔱𝔢) \"𝔅𝔢𝔰𝔱 --- 𝔖𝔢𝔩𝔩𝔦𝔫𝔤\" (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, this feels like a spell in motion…half love letter, half lightning...
  October 22nd, 2025 13:52
• English Sunset (Georgia Watson) This reads like a sunset caught mid-breath…tender, luminous, and...
  October 22nd, 2025 13:49
• Why Nothing Falls Together (Neville) That phrase...“a union occurs somewhere between my memories, perceptions...
  October 21st, 2025 07:22
• weapons of mass distraction (Arqios) This is prophecy dressed in poetry. You hold up a mirror and make us see...
  October 21st, 2025 07:21
• The Crows (Paul Bell) This reads like a gothic echo...two mourners, one presence, grief as...
  October 21st, 2025 07:20
• Scattered (Sorenbarrett) My friend, I’ve seen how time always exhumes what’s been hidden. You...
  October 21st, 2025 07:18
• Focus On Feet (Orchidee) A touching hymn-poem, Orchi...faithful and grounded. Then again, if Popeye...
  October 21st, 2025 07:16
• Bottling It (Tom Dylan) That image...“like Sangria, or the local cerveza”...is perfect. It...
  October 21st, 2025 07:13
• Unchanged (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) My friend, I know that tug-of-war between needing help and needing to...
  October 21st, 2025 07:11
• 𝒟ℯ𝓈𝒸𝒾𝓅𝓁ℯ𝓈𝒽𝒾𝓅 (Keyara S Trotman) This feels both prayer and commission...steady, heartfelt, and true. You...
  October 21st, 2025 07:10
• Answer me! (NinjaGirl) This piece is prayer stripped to bone. No artifice, no sermon…just the...
  October 20th, 2025 21:40
• Until Heaven (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) This is devotion wrapped in dread, a prayer that doesn’t flinch. You...
  October 20th, 2025 10:57
• dance in the wake (Arqios) Arqios, this is breathtaking…grief and grace woven together until...
  October 20th, 2025 10:55
• Meet Tucker! (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) That line about Henry teaching Tucker to grow food and build a home stands...
  October 20th, 2025 10:54
• Sonnet to war (Sorenbarrett) This is conscience turned into craft. Each rhyme lands like a tolling...
  October 20th, 2025 10:50
• Is There Fire in Love? (Salvia.S) Wow! Short and spectacular in it’s potency! Glad to see a poem from you,...
  October 20th, 2025 10:48
• Prayer Plea (Orchidee) Nice write Orchi! Praying that Popeye will finally not make it to anymore...
  October 20th, 2025 10:46
• Death of a Boxer (Tom Dylan) My friend, I’ve seen moments like that…when a community gathers,...
  October 20th, 2025 10:43
• Visiting the Dead (Thomas W Case) Thomas, this one hits with quiet rebellion…a refusal to buy into the...
  October 20th, 2025 10:42
• Tweaking Mona Lisa (Kurt Philip Behm) Truth and a fave!
  October 19th, 2025 11:25
• The uneven pact (Isa kemmy) Reclamation after a relationship ruined. Powerful and I love the form and...
  October 19th, 2025 11:24
• What is Forgiveness? (Friendship) Reading this, I think of the times I’ve had to forgive without...
  October 19th, 2025 11:21
• This Road is Not Easy (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) I’ve walked roads like this...ones that twist and test you until faith...
  October 19th, 2025 11:20
• Listened to Chosen One ꨄ➶︎∞︎︎ (Keyara S Trotman) This piece moves like a spell...champagne bubbles over tears. It’s a...
  October 19th, 2025 11:16
• Population explosion (Sorenbarrett) That moment...“Too many rats in a cage”...it’s where everything...
  October 19th, 2025 11:15
• consolation in the kitchen (Arqios) Arqios, this poem glows from the inside out. The everyday turned sacred,...
  October 18th, 2025 08:09
• TO you the Unbowed: final conversation (Isa kemmy) Isa, this is powerful…a thunderous elegy that still manages to kneel in...
  October 18th, 2025 08:08
• Calligraphy (Priya Tomar) Beautiful job, Priya! Haunting and the alliteration sings! Lilac lies!...
  October 18th, 2025 08:07
• Destiny (Paul Bell) This one hit like a back-alley sermon, my friend. The voices, the...
  October 18th, 2025 08:05
• Balance of nature (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this reads like creation’s own reflection—poetic, reverent, and...
  October 18th, 2025 08:04
• 𝔗𝔥𝔢 𝔄𝔱𝔱𝔯𝔞𝔠𝔱𝔦𝔬𝔫𝔰 𝔬𝔣 𝔇𝔞𝔯𝔨 𝔚𝔢𝔞𝔱𝔥𝔢𝔯 (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, this is tender and true. You turned stormlight into solace, finding...
  October 18th, 2025 08:03
• THE IRONY OF THE FULL HAND (Isa kemmy) Isa, this is exquisite…a parable dressed as a poem. The rhythm, the...
  October 17th, 2025 10:58
• With No Hint of An End (Neville) Neville, this reads like seafoam…each image drifting, circling, refusing...
  October 17th, 2025 10:55
• The Drake Havens 2 (Mutley Ravishes) Mutley, this one crackles with that trademark mischief of yours…heat,...
  October 17th, 2025 10:53
• drinking hemlock (Arqios) Et tu Socrates? 🤣 This one speaks from the gallows of creation...where...
  October 17th, 2025 10:48
• The Price of Instruction. (Friendship) My friend, this piece holds power in its poise. You dissect pride and...
  October 17th, 2025 10:45
• What you want (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this is grounded inspiration done right. No fluff...just the call...
  October 17th, 2025 10:43
• Just A Kiss Away🥰 (Keyara S Trotman) Poetry vibez back to you, my friend, who has one of the coolest vibez...
  October 17th, 2025 10:29
• 𝔊𝔞𝔪𝔢𝔯\'𝔰 𝔏𝔬𝔳𝔢 𝓍𝓍𝓍 𝔓𝔩𝔞𝔶𝔢𝔯𝔰 (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, this one shines...half vow, half vibe. The gothic flair, the emojis,...
  October 17th, 2025 10:23
• The majestic images in a fire. (Friendship) My friend, this glows with mystic reverence. The witch in the fire feels...
  October 17th, 2025 10:12
• Ignorance (Priya Tomar) Priya, this one aches softly…the child’s voice so pure it hurts. The...
  October 17th, 2025 10:09
• God Bless The Readers (Kurt Philip Behm) To be read. Ah. That is the highest achievement. Even studying is...
  October 17th, 2025 10:07
• Oh God (Paul Bell) Paul, this one’s cheeky as hell…irreverent but self-aware enough to...
  October 17th, 2025 10:04
• beneath black tides (Arqios) My friend, this one breathes from the deep…myth and marrow intertwined....
  October 17th, 2025 10:02
• No give in forgive, no get in forget (Sorenbarrett) Brilliant wordplay in the title alone. That closing image...“Let the...
  October 17th, 2025 10:01
• Thoughts Of Love (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Well done, Kurt. A wonderful love poem.
  October 15th, 2025 14:11
• Golf is Life (After Charles Bukowski) (Thomas W Case) Beautifully written, witty, true. Love it, my friend!...
  October 15th, 2025 13:55
• The Fierce Decree (Friendship) This is powerful, my friend...a manifesto of endurance. You blend strength...
  October 15th, 2025 13:53
• Title (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, this is chaotic brilliance, my friend…a meltdown turned manifesto....
  October 15th, 2025 13:51
• but words keep rising... (Arqios) Arqios, this is a quiet masterpiece…self-erasure turned confession. The...
  October 15th, 2025 13:42
• Done (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this is modern prophecy...our plastic paradise built on ashes.You...
  October 15th, 2025 13:40
• A mad interlude (Orchidee) This maade me laugh, Orchi!...
  October 15th, 2025 13:19
• _ underscore _ (Arqios) Arqios, this is breathtaking craftsmanship____the underscore____as symbol,...
  October 14th, 2025 08:22
• Critical thinking (2781) That phrase “algorithmic dilemma” caught me...it perfectly captures...
  October 14th, 2025 08:21
• Goodbye (Paul Bell) Paul, this piece feels like a requiem whispered through memory. You held...
  October 14th, 2025 08:18
• Missing you (William Hromada) Totally get this. Well done, my friend!
  October 14th, 2025 08:12
• AUTUMN RETURN (Michael Edwards) A beauty and a cutie wrapped in one post! Love it, Michael! Give Stanley a...
  October 14th, 2025 08:12
• Masquerade (Sorenbarrett) My friend, I’ve worn that same mask before...clown’s grin on the...
  October 14th, 2025 08:11
• 𝔚𝔯𝔦𝔱𝔱𝔢𝔫 (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, this radiates your signature...the mix of mystery, sensuality, and...
  October 14th, 2025 08:09
• Escape (NinjaGirl) 🥷, this is quiet devastation…the kind that doesn’t shout, just...
  October 14th, 2025 08:04
• A Few of My Favourite Juxtapositions (Neville) Neville, this is smart, intimate writing…wordplay and desire folding...
  October 14th, 2025 08:00
• Migräne (Isa kemmy) Well written, Isa, and described as the beast a migraine is. Well done!
  October 14th, 2025 07:58
• El Gran Canon (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this is haunting…a litany that feels like scripture turned inside...
  October 13th, 2025 09:45
• Cock Soft Days (Thomas W Case) Yay! First comment! Very well done, Thomas! Loved this!
  October 13th, 2025 09:45
• Lessons learned in Grief (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) GenXer, this piece carries grief’s weight with tenderness and light. The...
  October 13th, 2025 09:43
• gather your fragments (Arqios) Friend, this is sacred in its quiet…a prayer stitched in fragments. The...
  October 13th, 2025 09:42
• Good friends (William Hromada) A touching poem, my friend. Well done!
  October 13th, 2025 09:41
• Two Teeth (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Everyone\'s fave trip...the Dentist! LOL! Well done, mate!
  October 13th, 2025 09:40
• Opposites attract (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this is searing…nature becomes metaphor for us all, where need...
  October 13th, 2025 09:38
• STORY OF MY LIFE (Keyara S Trotman) My friend, this reads like a love spell caught between dream and...
  October 13th, 2025 09:35
• It stole my breath. (Friendship) My friend, this is breathtaking…a painting that turns itself inside out....
  October 13th, 2025 09:34