Comments on community poems by Tristan Robert Lange

• Cop that (2781) Valiantstar, reading this felt like listening to someone finally say...
  November 20th, 2025 12:16
• Tomorrow\'s Child (Kurt Philip Behm) Yesterday\'s troll, indeed. Well done on this....
  November 20th, 2025 12:14
• 𝒜𝒹𝓂𝒾𝓇ℯ (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, reading this felt like listening to someone talk in the...
  November 20th, 2025 12:14
• Lost without a soul (Paul Bell) Paul, this whole piece moves like a hard march through trauma...jungle,...
  November 20th, 2025 12:12
• my only hymn (Arqios) Arqios, this is a slow descent through grief’s waterline…salt, spear,...
  November 20th, 2025 12:11
• Resting And Relying (Orchidee) Orchi, this flows like sung history…battle, prayer, trust, triumph. You...
  November 20th, 2025 12:09
• Vine (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this is gorgeous…old-world cadence with a sharp emotional bite....
  November 20th, 2025 12:06
• Siren caught the Sailor (NinjaGirl) Every damn time, too! Don\'t they learn...they being men in general! LOL!...
  November 20th, 2025 12:05
• It\'s you (2781) My friend, this carries a strong devotional pulse…raw faith, longing,...
  November 20th, 2025 12:04
• New Moments (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Excellent writes, both of them are, Kurt!
  November 20th, 2025 12:02
• ONLY RACISTS DRINK HERE (David Welch) David, this piece carries grit and truth…the music, the characters, the...
  November 19th, 2025 10:30
• Put It Back (Bella Shepard) Bella, not sure how I missed this...but here I am! This whole piece moves...
  November 19th, 2025 10:24
• the road ahead (Arqios) Arqios, this whole piece moves with quiet wisdom…loss, realism,...
  November 19th, 2025 09:55
• Encouraging Exhortation (Orchidee) Orchi, this flows like a sung prayer…faithful, rooted, anchored in the...
  November 19th, 2025 09:54
• Genesis (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this hits hard…mythic, modern, and brutal. You wrapped Genesis,...
  November 19th, 2025 09:52
• 𝒲𝒶𝓉𝒸𝒽 𝓉𝒽𝒾𝓈... (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, this one is wild in the best way…the swirl, the glitch, the myth,...
  November 19th, 2025 09:52
• Chef-Shocked (Mutley Ravishes) Profound and though-provoking. And yeah...the Matrix is real friend. You...
  November 19th, 2025 09:50
• Symbiotic Fratricide (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this hits with a sharp clarity…the way you frame truth and falsity...
  November 19th, 2025 09:49
• This is a Mess (Thomas W Case) Wow! Spiritually profound and deeply human, as your work is Thomas...this...
  November 19th, 2025 09:47
• The Fog and the Fever (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Hayleigh… the permanent daze… the dream that feels safer than...
  November 18th, 2025 20:56
• Three the Hard Way (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏) Still missing your work, my man. One can hope for a return, right? Hope...
  November 18th, 2025 09:52
• Empty (Sorenbarrett) Soren… I know that feeling of something once alive now standing still....
  November 18th, 2025 09:51
• The Book Of Shaun Matthew (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Well, I\'ve written The Book of Tittu and now the Book of Shaun Matthew...
  November 18th, 2025 09:45
• \'Seasons Go Round ...\' (Kurt Philip Behm) Truth! Have not been on the Tappan Zee Bridge in some time. Well done,...
  November 17th, 2025 18:16
• hello poetry (Arqios) My friend, this moves with such reverence…ink as breath, pauses as...
  November 17th, 2025 13:35
• A Renewed Prescence (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Everything Soren said. Well done, my friend!
  November 17th, 2025 12:55
• Rose (Sorenbarrett) Soren, that moment where “seeds of fornication slip from your...
  November 17th, 2025 12:52
• ODD AND ODDER (5) (Michael Edwards) And how! 🤣💨. Loved this Michael!!! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛
  November 17th, 2025 12:42
• 𝔄𝔫𝔡 𝔗𝔥𝔞𝔱\'𝔰 𝔍𝔲𝔰𝔱 𝔄𝔟𝔬𝔲𝔱 ℑ𝔱 (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, this feels like one of those days where thoughts loop and you just...
  November 17th, 2025 12:40
• Coming Home (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) My friend, this hit with real tenderness…you carried Henry’s final...
  November 17th, 2025 12:34
• The Sand and the Sea (Paul Bell) Paul, this piece carries such quiet bravery…the struggle, the fear, the...
  November 17th, 2025 12:33
• ℜ𝔢𝔠𝔦𝔱𝔢 (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, you’ve got this wild, swirling way of writing…soft edges, hidden...
  November 17th, 2025 11:31
• in the kitchen drawer (Arqios) My friend, this whole piece moves with such controlled intimacy...the...
  November 17th, 2025 11:29
• random inaccess (Arqios) Arqios, the whole piece breathes like someone moving through exile inside...
  November 15th, 2025 08:09
• Assumptions (Sorenbarrett) Soren, the way you link the natural world to our treatment of children is...
  November 15th, 2025 08:06
• The merry-go-round (NafisaSB) Safina, the shifts from storm to sunlight, from fear to song, make this...
  November 15th, 2025 08:05
• ℱ𝒾ℯ𝓇𝓎 𝒢ℴℴ𝒹𝓃ℯ𝓈𝓈 ℰ𝓃𝒿ℴ𝓎 ℐ𝓉 (Keyara S Trotman) My friend, this moves with your signature mix of beauty and warning…soft...
  November 15th, 2025 08:04
• Continuance of Submission (Rebellion_in_sanity) Amen to your comment! 🤣 My friend, this carries the weight of loss and...
  November 15th, 2025 07:48
• A Common Ground (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) My friend, this chapter carries heart, timing, and a bit of destiny woven...
  November 15th, 2025 07:44
• Contradicting Thoughts (NinjaGirl) 🥷, this hits like two voices wrestling in the same chest…hope and...
  November 14th, 2025 14:50
• Safely Surrounded (Orchidee) Great hymn-poem, Orchi….no one is safely surrounded…but surrounded...
  November 14th, 2025 14:49
• November Witchery (Jerry Reynolds) Any kind of witchery is wonderful to me! But, yes, that November Witchery...
  November 14th, 2025 14:46
• signals (Arqios) My friend, the whole piece hangs on that fragile line between hope and...
  November 14th, 2025 14:43
• The Village of Trill (Paul Bell) My friend, this had me cracking up…absolute chaos from start to finish....
  November 14th, 2025 14:42
• Crickets and frogs (Sorenbarrett) My friend, the whole piece settles in like warm dusk…the jasmine, the...
  November 14th, 2025 14:40
• 𝔄 𝔪𝔬𝔪𝔢𝔫𝔱 𝔬𝔣 𝔖𝔬𝔩𝔦𝔱𝔲𝔡𝔢 (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, this has such a gentle quiet to it…like the kind of solitude that...
  November 14th, 2025 14:30
• A thought on love (NinjaGirl) 🥷, the way you repeat “the hours I’ve spent” hits deep… it...
  November 13th, 2025 15:24
• Football Fan Philosophy (Tom Dylan) Tom, what a metaphor filled with hope…where stadiums and real life meet...
  November 13th, 2025 15:22
• The Soaring Bird of Time (Thomas W Case) Excellent write, Thomas!
  November 13th, 2025 15:20
• \'Pumping Irony\' (Kurt Philip Behm) Love this, Kurt. Well done!
  November 13th, 2025 15:19
• 𝒮𝓁ℴ𝓌 𝒜𝓃𝒹 𝒴ℯ𝓉 ℐ 𝒯𝓇𝓎 (Keyara S Trotman) My friend, this one feels like someone standing in a doorway…half...
  November 13th, 2025 15:18
• Companionship (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) My friend, this one blends humor, memory, and heartbreak so...
  November 13th, 2025 15:17
• unhinged (Arqios) Unhinged? Who? Me? 🤪 My friend, this feels like a scroll...
  November 13th, 2025 15:16
• Walking in the Way (Orchidee) Excellent hymn-poem Orchi...i really love the... What was that? Shh...
  November 13th, 2025 15:14
• Dust (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this reads like memory weather…leaves scattering, voices...
  November 13th, 2025 15:11
• What death would say to me (NinjaGirl) Dark...and been there! I love the format too! It really conveys the...
  November 13th, 2025 15:10
• Cute (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Hayleigh, this reads like a small confession…loneliness softened by...
  November 13th, 2025 08:21
• Your Tour De Force (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, both pieces cut clean…heartbreak in the first, unmasked arrogance...
  November 13th, 2025 08:16
• The Rose (Paul Bell) Paul, you move from gutter to garden in one steady sweep…street-tough...
  November 13th, 2025 08:15
• star black out (Arqios) Arqios, the way you link stars, cells, memory, and music creates a whole...
  November 12th, 2025 21:10
• 𝔇𝔬𝔢𝔰 𝔓𝔬𝔢𝔱𝔯𝔶 ℌ𝔞𝔳𝔢 𝔇𝔢𝔭𝔱𝔥? 𝔇𝔢𝔭𝔱𝔥 (Keyara S Trotman) My friend, this carries your signature...fluttery, bold, a little risky, a...
  November 12th, 2025 21:09
• The Smell of Absence  (Rebellion_in_sanity) Reading this, I felt that familiar ache…how loss can make silence louder...
  November 12th, 2025 21:08
• Deep slumber (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this is a gorgeous descent into the subconscious...melting time,...
  November 12th, 2025 21:06
• Message Received (Tom Dylan) Tom, this is honest and quietly powerful…the kind of true story that...
  November 12th, 2025 18:03
• Diamonds Delights (Orchidee) Orchi, this is luminous work—diamonds, grace, and devotion woven...
  November 12th, 2025 17:29
• PROBLEM SOLVED (Michael Edwards) Michael, this one’s sharp and wickedly funny—political satire done...
  November 12th, 2025 17:27
• Truth? (Jerry Reynolds) A beautiful poem on its own, and a wonderful reflection on another poem!...
  November 11th, 2025 09:38
• Chad on his soapbox (Arqios) Rik, this one preaches without sermonizing...clever, convicting, and...
  November 11th, 2025 09:37
• Behind The Wire (Paul Bell) Paul, this one chills me…raw, solemn, and stripped of sentiment....
  November 11th, 2025 09:36
• Remembrance At Eleven (Orchidee) Orchi, this flows with reverence and melody...Scripture, memory, and music...
  November 11th, 2025 09:34
• Spinoza\'s god (Sorenbarrett) Reading this, Soren, I felt that deep calm of dissolving into something...
  November 11th, 2025 09:32
• 𝒥ℴ𝓊𝓇𝓃𝒶𝓁𝒾𝓃ℊ (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, you’ve written something deeply human here...a diary that slips...
  November 11th, 2025 09:31
• Just no Justice (NinjaGirl) Reading this, 🥷, I felt the ache of legacy…the fear that what we...
  November 10th, 2025 21:17
• A Few Days (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, this reads like a love note to language…succinct, sensual, and...
  November 10th, 2025 21:16
• End of Day One (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) GenXer, this piece shines with simple humanity. You gave us burnt...
  November 10th, 2025 21:14
• Clutter Land (Jerry Reynolds) Excellent write, Jerry! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛
  November 10th, 2025 21:12
• eleventh hour remembrance (Arqios) Arqios, this is beautifully reverent…you’ve woven faith and...
  November 10th, 2025 21:10
• Glow (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this is the art within the art…a poem about the breath that keeps...
  November 10th, 2025 21:09
• A Sober Life Is A Peaceful Life (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Glad to hear sober, myself! Good one, friend!
  November 10th, 2025 21:07
• Omniscient Omnipresence (Orchidee) Great write, Orchi! By the way, P is screaming that the omniscient...
  November 10th, 2025 21:05
• A Nature Poem… (Doggerel Dave) Dave, you turned serenity into satire in four short stanzas. Beauty,...
  November 9th, 2025 22:54
• ℋℯ𝓇ℯ\'𝓈 𝒴ℴ𝓊𝓇 ℰ𝓋ℯ𝓇ℊ𝓇ℯℯ𝓃. (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, this is pure serenity...love entwined with earth, sky, and renewal....
  November 9th, 2025 22:51
• Lest We Should Ever Forget (Neville) Neville, this balances reverence and realism with care. The clouds, the...
  November 9th, 2025 22:50
• Old Soldier (Paul Bell) Paul, you wrote this with restraint that makes it devastating. No...
  November 9th, 2025 22:49
• farcical bloomery (Arqios) Arqios, this is delight and depth all at once…nature laughing through...
  November 9th, 2025 22:45
• Boogie (Sorenbarrett) Heck yes!!! I concur! I love to dance...it\'s so damn defiant and...
  November 9th, 2025 22:42
• Little Mo (Paul Bell) Paul, this is brilliant…biblical parody at its sweetest and strangest....
  November 8th, 2025 13:08
• after-image (Arqios) Arqios, you framed loneliness through light, glass, and movement until the...
  November 8th, 2025 13:07
• It\'s no poem...just telling that It\'s good to be back on the platform again! (Nayak) Welcome back!
  November 8th, 2025 13:06
• Wasn\'t then but guilty now (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this is dark alchemy...love, hunger, and guilt all mirrored in rose...
  November 8th, 2025 13:05
• It\'s Getting Dark (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Wonderful monorhyme my friend. And indeed, as in the pic, the brightness...
  November 8th, 2025 13:04
• Grace Given (Orchidee) Orchi, your hymnic heart always shines through. Reading this, I could...
  November 8th, 2025 13:01
• 𝒜𝓃𝒹 𝒯𝒽ℯ𝓃 (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, this reads like a vow whispered to the self...honest, stripped down,...
  November 8th, 2025 08:50
• Demons Lie (Jerry Reynolds) Jerry, short but sharp, alchemy and warning in six lines. The mix of hope...
  November 7th, 2025 08:46
• England\'s Falling (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) It ain\'t just England! Spot on! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛
  November 7th, 2025 08:45
• ......... 𝒮ℴ 𝒾𝓉 𝒾𝓈......... 𝒯𝒽𝒾𝓈 𝒲ℯ𝒷𝓈𝒾𝓉ℯ ℛ𝓊𝓃𝓈 ℐ𝓃𝓉ℴ 𝒜𝓃 ℰ𝓇𝓇ℴ𝓇 (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, this made me smile…you turned technical chaos into art. Even your...
  November 7th, 2025 08:44
• a moment turning (Arqios) Rik, this unfolds with such grace and grief…every line a slow step down...
  November 7th, 2025 08:43
• I\'m Listening (Paul Bell) Paul, this is classic you...deadpan, escalating, and wickedly funny. From...
  November 7th, 2025 08:42
• Comforting Cheer (Orchidee) P says to St. F, this sounds nothing like my theme song, see? I just...
  November 7th, 2025 08:41
• Awakening (Sorenbarrett) Wow. I get this and this certainly is speaking to me right now, my friend....
  November 7th, 2025 08:39