Comments on community poems by Tristan Robert Lange
- ~> The Mona Lisa CATastrophy! - Sonnet - (Thad Wilk)
LOL! I knew there was a backstory! Who knew it had nine lives! ๐คฃ Well...
January 21st, 2025 21:12 - Dust and Joy (Rebellion_in_sanity)
What a wonderfully positive message! Much needed and an easy fave! Well...
January 21st, 2025 21:10 - Trapped in the amber of the moment, there is no why?! (CL Lornna)
Wow! Powerful and relatable. Well done on this! I look forward to reading...
January 21st, 2025 08:57 - expectations causing depression (Demar Desu)
Another dynamite, relatable senryu, my friend! Well done! ๐น๐
January 21st, 2025 08:54 - The Old Neighborhood (Tony36)
Wonderful write! Very relatable. I feel the same way when I visit the town...
January 21st, 2025 08:53 - ( T S A ) if pigs could fly (Arqios)
This was a very fun poem, attached to a most interesting and informative...
January 21st, 2025 08:44 - Wind Chime Tree (Cassie58)
Oh my. RIP Olly. Why does stupidity have to carry such a weighty cost?...
January 21st, 2025 08:38 - From Mourning To Joy (Orchidee)
Indeed, with the resurrected sun/Son in the coming Dawn, morning brings...
January 21st, 2025 08:31 - Nature\'s poem (Sorenbarrett)
Nature is the greatest work of art and the of artists greatest muses. A...
January 21st, 2025 08:28 - Medusa Rattle (Mutley Ravishes)
This one is great! Relatable...says every husband ever. ๐คฃ Easily faved,...
January 21st, 2025 08:22 - choice? (NinjaGirl)
YES!!!! Let\'s bury these awful clichรฉs one-by-one...alive! LOL! For...
January 20th, 2025 12:00 - Foolish Love (Jino)
Well done, my friend. Welcome to MPS! A pleasure to meet you!
January 20th, 2025 10:23 - Just One Kiss ~* - Sonnet - (Thad Wilk)
Beautiful love sonnet, my friend! Happy Monday to you!
January 20th, 2025 10:22 - The Visitor (Tony36)
Wow! Interesting scenario! Can\'t cheat death! Well done, Tony!
January 20th, 2025 10:21 - Edgar Allan : Ravenous Poe, 216 years on (Arqios)
Wow! E. A. Poe is my all-time favorite poet and writer, a huge inspiration...
January 20th, 2025 10:19 - EN PLEIN AIR (Michael Edwards)
I am now hungry after reading this. The idea of outdoor \"baking\" in a...
January 20th, 2025 10:13 - It\'s Called...Yes, What, Precisely? (Cheeky Missy)
Missy, I would be shocked at this point to ever find you NOT having fun! I...
January 20th, 2025 10:09 - Friend or Foe? (CelticNinja)
Hello friend! A wonderful poem that I happen to know to be all too true....
January 20th, 2025 10:06 - Homographs (Sorenbarrett)
This, my friend, is the challenge with homographs, brilliantly put into...
January 20th, 2025 10:03 - Wait a While (Orchidee)
Thank you for buzzing in this wonderful hymn-poem set to St. ๐๐ ๐คฃ...
January 20th, 2025 09:48 - Why do I (Accross_world_with_u)
Poignant questions, my friend. Ones that I relate to in the asking, for...
January 20th, 2025 09:41 - Foolish Love (Dan Williams)
Wonderfully written, Dan. And I also echo Teddy\'s words. Well done, my...
January 20th, 2025 09:38 - bad dreams (Demar Desu)
Wow! What a way to interpret a dream...toward self-improvement! Must\'ve...
January 20th, 2025 09:36 - Shortcut (NinjaGirl)
Brilliant poem, and, ain\'t that the truth! ๐ฏ ๐๐น
January 19th, 2025 16:53 - Orpheus Rebooted (Thomas W Case)
Wonderful poem, my friend! Powerful!
January 19th, 2025 16:40 - Puerto Rico! (Demar Desu)
I am taking it this is where you are vacationing. If so, enjoy it, my...
January 19th, 2025 16:39 - My Inner Inhibitions (ADarkerMind)
\"Where hides the eyes that stalk my inner move\". Wonderful...just...
January 19th, 2025 16:38 - ~> Your Local News Reporter! (Thad Wilk)
Whew! Nothing wrong with stoned pigeons! ๐ตโ๐ซ ๐คฃ This made me...
January 19th, 2025 16:36 - The Battle (Tony36)
Loving the fantasy and the battles, Tony. Well done, friend! โค๏ธ๐
January 19th, 2025 16:34 - My right arm (2781)
This is powerful, my friend. Well done! ๐น๐
January 19th, 2025 16:32 - Melting Snow (Cassie58)
This is such a beautiful and inspiring piece, my dear friend! Seriously, I...
January 19th, 2025 16:29 - With Groundhog Day Two Weeks Awa.... (Cheeky Missy)
Wonderful write, my friend. Now, if I wake up on Ground Hog\'s Day and...
January 19th, 2025 16:26 - Sunday School Afternoons (Neville)
Sunday School was a staple in my life. My mom was a Sunday School teacher....
January 19th, 2025 16:19 - Wound (Sorenbarrett)
Different wounds lead to different outcomes. The most minor are not even...
January 19th, 2025 16:11 - new day (Arqios)
I love Kintsugi and its concept. Profound, my friend! ๐น๐
January 19th, 2025 16:07 - Of Sprites and Other \"Nonsense\" (Cheeky Missy)
Yikes, a drink thrown at your head while driving! That\'s something I\'ve...
January 18th, 2025 22:03 - Buffering (Mutley Ravishes)
This is a fun, playful verse. For me, the message is that physical and/or...
January 18th, 2025 21:59 - f words (NinjaGirl)
LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS! This, my friend, is art! And much more than just...
January 18th, 2025 14:51 - ~> It\'s Not Easy, -Sonnet- (Thad Wilk)
I could feel the longing in this, my friend. Very impressive love sonnet,...
January 18th, 2025 11:44 - Commitment Call (Orchidee)
Familiar with the original hymn/tune. This is most impressive, Orchi! Love...
January 18th, 2025 11:43 - Field of Flowers (Tony36)
Well done, Tony! Enjoyed! Love fantasy! โค๏ธ
January 18th, 2025 11:38 - Flight Benefits (Demar Desu)
No...not your fault. Companies that offer benefits should come through on...
January 18th, 2025 11:36 - bicnic py the sea (Arqios)
I don\'t have dyslexia, but I know those who do. Terribly tough to deal...
January 18th, 2025 11:28 - The people for people (Isa kemmy)
Well done, Isa. This poem, as I read it, speaks of abuse done to someone...
January 18th, 2025 11:26 - At The Risk of Reaching Out (Neville)
Truth in brevity. Profound. So, at the risk of reaching out, I will say......
January 18th, 2025 11:21 - Tequila (Sorenbarrett)
One tequila, two tequila, three tequila...floor! LOL! Love this poem, my...
January 18th, 2025 11:16 - Dust (Doggerel Dave)
I totally relate to this and, honestly Dave, I now feel a sniffle coming...
January 18th, 2025 11:13 - pain (NinjaGirl)
I swear you and I are like synched or sending mind vibes or something! I...
January 17th, 2025 20:00 - Digging For Gold (Kurt Philip Behm)
This speaks a trainload of truth, my friend...in just two short quatrains....
January 17th, 2025 15:11 - In Memory Of Rod Serling (Kurt Philip Behm)
Love Rod Serling and, of course, The Twilight Zone. Great tribute!
January 17th, 2025 15:10 - ~> Chameleons (Thad Wilk)
Great poem...speaks truth. One changes color for survival, and the other...
January 17th, 2025 15:07 - Bobby O. (Bellaperf)
Oh my, friend! I am so sorry to hear this! ๐ Thank you for coming on...
January 17th, 2025 09:25 - The Abandoned McDonald\'s (Tony36)
Haunting indeed! I have seen plenty of abandoned restaurants and they are...
January 17th, 2025 09:16 - CTRL + ALT + DLT (Arqios)
Love this brief, but multilayered poem you wrote here, my friend. For me,...
January 17th, 2025 09:11 - At the Very End of Darkness (Neville)
The light within, waiting to be unleashed but blocked by circumstances....
January 17th, 2025 09:07 - sweet Revenge (Isa kemmy)
Wonderful! Love all of the dangerous animal references. Wonderful write,...
January 17th, 2025 09:05 - damn you networks (Demar Desu)
Ah! I hate it when this happens! And, as a Mac guy, don\'t get me started...
January 17th, 2025 09:03 - Muddy shoes (Sorenbarrett)
A wonderful metaphor and a powerful write, Soren. Indeed, we can\'t walk...
January 17th, 2025 08:59 - Inauguration Day 2025 - Monday, January 20, 2025, 12:00โฏPM (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
A wonderful write that juxtaposes one timeless leader (Rev. Dr. Martin...
January 16th, 2025 21:56 - Whispers of the Long Night (Zuzu)
I know of what you speak. I have felt this way. Well done, Zuzu! Glad I...
January 16th, 2025 19:13 - Spazzm\'d (Mutley Ravishes)
Wow. This is direct enough to grab one\'s attention and cryptic enough to...
January 16th, 2025 19:11 - I Just Want to Swim (Thomas W Case)
Indeed, no pearl is worth drowning for. Well done, my friend. Really loved...
January 16th, 2025 19:06 - Highgate Cemetery (Cassie58)
Oh, dearest Cassie, now I really have to find my way back to London to...
January 16th, 2025 19:01 - Oh Juliet (Kurt Philip Behm)
This is a wonderful write, Kurt. This is lyrical and heartbreakingly...
January 16th, 2025 18:59 - Plentiful Providings (Orchidee)
Well done, Orchi! A fine treatment of the passage. ๐๐น
January 16th, 2025 18:54 - Kisses To Die For! - Sonnet - (Thad Wilk)
Last breath indeed. Kissing Booth meets final destination! A wonderful...
January 16th, 2025 18:51 - You (Tony36)
Word of wisdom these are Tony! Well done!
January 16th, 2025 09:22 - Aliens are coming! (Demar Desu)
YES!!!!! Space folk, baffoons, space folk...not human beings who happen to...
January 16th, 2025 09:19 - forgotten soul (NinjaGirl)
It is. In fact, I can\'t have it because of my body\'s newfound aversion...
January 16th, 2025 09:15 - THE SWEET PAIN (Isa kemmy)
Wow! Powerful, my friend. The last stanza brings it all home. Playing a...
January 16th, 2025 09:09 - To L. B. (Sorenbarrett)
I do remember L. B. Mek. In fact, I was going over one of my poems from...
January 16th, 2025 09:04 - Flushed (Neville)
I absolutely love this beautiful and sensual poem. Wonderful job, Neville....
January 16th, 2025 08:52 - timeโs no friend (Arqios)
Wow! Good morning! I\'d like a decaf coffee, a side of home fries, a large...
January 16th, 2025 08:47 - Hell (Dan Williams)
Wow! Very visceral and powerful, Dan! Well done!
January 16th, 2025 08:43 - there (Isa kemmy)
I get this and it has a lyrical vibe and flow to it. A wonderful write,...
January 15th, 2025 17:00 - Beauty of Living (Demar Desu)
Very deep, my friend. This gives me lots to think about. Well done!
January 15th, 2025 16:56 - Healing Help (Orchidee)
A hymn that cries out to God for help and healing. Beautiful Orchi! You...
January 15th, 2025 16:54 - ~. > I Am An Anteater! (Thad Wilk)
Anteater\'s got attitude! ๐คฃ Love this, Thad! Well done, my friend!...
January 15th, 2025 16:48 - Lady warrior (Tony36)
A shieldmaiden...well, if she be a Viking! Well done, Tony!
January 15th, 2025 16:45 - spaces we inhabit: pre-dystopian reverie (Arqios)
Are we meant to catch up with the times when it comes to the increasing...
January 15th, 2025 16:41 - Purgatory (Dan Williams)
\"Paper mรขchรฉ morals\" indeed. Very thought-provoking and powerful Dan....
January 15th, 2025 16:25 - The Birds of November (Thomas W Case)
Wonderful poem Thomas. Love the way you use animals to convey the passage...
January 14th, 2025 19:48 - the Unfathomable (NinjaGirl)
Nor should you understand it. I don\'t understand it either, my dear...
January 14th, 2025 19:44 - Beef Hot Dawgs at Midnight....oh! (Cheeky Missy)
I no longer eat meat, and I still eat hot dogs (vegetarian), which are...
January 14th, 2025 19:39 - ~`` But, I Am A Tiger! - Tiger Sonnet - (Thad Wilk)
Tigers are illiterate...and if you critique them metrically...they\'ll...
January 14th, 2025 17:55 - The power of words (Tony36)
So true, my friend! Well done! ๐น๐
January 14th, 2025 08:21 - Help! Thereโs a dragon in my stew! (Arqios)
I have never been much of a soup fan...but stew...now you are talking....
January 14th, 2025 08:20 - A twist of the tongue (Sorenbarrett)
Love this exploration of the creative process of writing. Such a fun poem...
January 14th, 2025 08:16 - $1.86 in my bank account (Demar Desu)
I feel you bro. Hey, here\'s to sharing a payday! LOL! Yay us tomorrow!
January 14th, 2025 08:13 - red (NinjaGirl)
Rage. Indeed one sees red. I have been there. Poetry is a GREAT way to let...
January 14th, 2025 08:12 - Blue Star (Mutley Ravishes)
Wow! This says so much in its brevity, Mutley. I see some references in...
January 14th, 2025 07:58 - You Didn\'t Want the Photograph, Did You? (Cheeky Missy)
Well done Missy! Glad you are still having fun despite it! Only way to...
January 13th, 2025 19:36 - `~> Christmas Day, Far Away -Acrostic form- (Thad Wilk)
Wonderful acrostic, dear Thad! Truly powerful and meaningful. Well done!...
January 13th, 2025 19:32 - Life in America (Demar Desu)
You know it! ๐ฏ Short, sweet, to the point and true!
January 13th, 2025 09:36 - Lasting (Cassie58)
A fitting tribute to your friend Jen! Indeed, true friendship lasts. Not...
January 13th, 2025 08:53 - Fallen Angel (Tony36)
I am wondering what this angel did to end up banished. I agree with Soren...
January 13th, 2025 08:51 - Angels Watching Over You (Poetic Licence)
A lovely poem for your friend. I hope those wishes came true! Well done on...
January 13th, 2025 08:48 - Mist (Sorenbarrett)
The mist not only comes to life in your rich imagery, Soren, the shape of...
January 13th, 2025 08:46 - Hopeful Help (Orchidee)
Well done, Orchi Another fine hymn-poem from you! KP must be leaving you...
January 13th, 2025 08:43 - once there was a boy (Arqios)
Ah the loss of innocence...and in particular I like how that loss comes...
January 13th, 2025 08:41
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