Comments on community poems by Aislinn Wilson

• Droplets (PoeticBiscuit) I appreciate the brevity
  November 5th, 2019 23:35
• I Held Your Hand (G84) Very sweet
  November 5th, 2019 23:05
• fright (Natalie Heisey) Really good internal rhyming
  November 5th, 2019 23:00
• The Bully (Jane Frye) Good use of rhyme
  November 5th, 2019 22:29
• Made On Earth (Satishverma) I love your unorthodox line breaks.
  November 5th, 2019 22:24
• [under amplified concern] (Jon Nakapalau) The last line really drives your whole poem home.
  November 5th, 2019 22:23
• There is nothing chivalrous about a sniper. (Aa Harvey) Very heavy. This is great
  November 5th, 2019 22:17
• Cyclops (Sindhuja) This is quite vivid for such a short snippet
  November 5th, 2019 14:28
• Through Troubled Times (Brooklyn6timesplus) Needed to hear this. Well written.
  November 5th, 2019 14:27
• She is Not There. (Goldfinch60) Very impactful. Fantastic emotion and use of repetition.
  November 5th, 2019 14:26
• Exalting Encouragement (Orchidee) Holy is his name! Great use of imagery and allusion, it\'s very effective.
  November 5th, 2019 14:25
• TRANSFORMATION. (Fay Slimm.) Simply hypnotic
  November 5th, 2019 14:23
• Take Me Somewhere (Neville) How delightfully playful. Great write.
  November 5th, 2019 14:11
• I Am Enough (SerenWise) This is powerful
  April 17th, 2019 16:38
• Christian Refugee (For K. V. B) (GaslitByAMadman) The rhyme scheme of this is amazing
  April 17th, 2019 16:37
• Snippet - Prisoner of Emotions (Suresh) This is a fantastic short write.
  April 17th, 2019 16:36
• Fry_Hy-Dration (Last Shadow) Sweet write.
  April 17th, 2019 16:35
• My show begins (Poetic Dan) This is truly thrilling
  April 17th, 2019 16:34
• Always Continue To Try (Brooklyn6timesplus) Great message
  April 17th, 2019 16:31
• Mental Wars (Asiakayy) Very emotionally honest
  February 11th, 2019 14:28
• Disillusioned (Andrew Charles Forrest) Reminded me of appaclachia. Good emotionally effective write.
  February 11th, 2019 14:08
• Southern Comfort Mountain Man (Laynie Cooper) Truly musical. I love the use of imagery.
  February 11th, 2019 13:43
• Put Together (ForeverJesus7) Is this about your bride or the bride of Christ?
  February 11th, 2019 13:42
• Last quest (Joseph M Marion) Impactful.
  February 11th, 2019 13:41
• Untitled (Suresh) Provocative
  February 11th, 2019 13:41
• Her Majesty (Kurt Philip Behm) What a lovely two lines.
  February 11th, 2019 13:39
• I (Joseph M Marion) This is truly wonderful.
  January 11th, 2019 14:10
• Mirrors and candles (Netashi) Great effort and message of hope!
  January 11th, 2019 13:55
• It Was All Of That (+5) (Kurt Philip Behm) All individually good and unique, the first being my favorite. May I ask...
  January 11th, 2019 13:48
• World Religions (Gary Edward Geraci) So very true. Wonderful
  January 9th, 2019 13:40
• WINTER CLOSES (1) (Michael Edwards) Reminds me of Bonnie Dobson and Vashti Bunyan in the best of ways.
  January 9th, 2019 13:09
• WINTER CLOSES (2) (Michael Edwards) Stunning. Am I to assume that is your artistic work as well? It\'s...
  January 9th, 2019 13:07
• Redneck (Redneckwriter) Great rhymes!
  January 9th, 2019 12:47
• vanish (TheLovers) This really connects with me. Thank you so much.
  January 9th, 2019 12:46
• Land of the Heart Broken (Sunshinefalling) The opening line is strong
  January 9th, 2019 11:28
• Lost in the abyss (Asrealastheycome) Good poem.
  January 9th, 2019 11:27
• Michaela\'s Christmas Gift (Tiffany_Arnold) This is the sweetest cutest thing. I hope you shared it with them!
  January 9th, 2019 11:27
• Going Nowhere (TheStrongInHeart) A poem where I\'m the everyone. Well writ.
  January 9th, 2019 11:22
• Rambunctious Bunch (Netashi) There really is a serious vulnerability and anger that comes with the...
  January 9th, 2019 11:16
• Who am I (Mary73223) I\'m struggling with this too. I wish you the best. Well said.
  January 9th, 2019 11:15
• Methinks Mine Earlier Rhyme Came Across Desperate... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) I love the playfulness of this. Got a laugh out of me. Thanks for sharing!
  January 9th, 2019 11:03
• I Thought, I Said (Brie) You have such a sadness but it\'s so well captured. Well writ.
  January 9th, 2019 11:02
• Not Ready To Forget (Satishverma) You are so unlike any poet I\'ve ever seen, and I love it. What a vivid...
  January 9th, 2019 11:02
• Songbird\'s Blessing (DesertWords) Reminds me of the pope releasing the doves in Ukraine which were attacked...
  January 9th, 2019 10:59
• Taken (Sylviasearcher) This makes me homesick for a place I\'ve never been.
  January 9th, 2019 10:57
• Should Be (Brie) This is so tragic and truly feels fleeting and falling. What good writing
  January 9th, 2019 10:56
• True Lies, fake Truths (Seek) I take it you\'ve published? I feel like clapping, this could be read...
  January 9th, 2019 10:53
• Rainbow Rooms Incorporated (Neville) I was surprised just how erotic this got. This feels like if a Zach Helms...
  January 9th, 2019 10:51
• Missing You (Prettylittlepoet) Last line packs a punch. Great effort.
  January 9th, 2019 10:42
• This Feeling (Haydr Zurufi) Emotionally honest. I appreciate this poem. Good job.
  January 9th, 2019 10:41
• Wounded Heart (Myself and me) Not poetic cinema, but rather cinematic poetry. Great piece.
  January 9th, 2019 10:40
• How Can I Live Without You (Cinderella_Pixie) Real talent inside this. Keep writing!
  January 9th, 2019 10:38
• NO MORE A DREAMER (Michael Edwards) Hauntingly tragic but important and inspiring nonetheless. I\'m forever a...
  January 9th, 2019 10:34
• Evening Malt. (Goldfinch60) I\'d much like to hear this as a haunting sea shanty. It\'s good to be...
  January 9th, 2019 10:33
• Faith Focusing (Orchidee) A hymn / poem / prayer that would do me well to meditate on and return to....
  January 9th, 2019 10:31
• it aint our summer (Dusk arising) vivid
  April 11th, 2018 15:06
• The Shade Garden (Lorna) Wonderful
  April 11th, 2018 14:23
• Byte Size Food Begets Best Benefits (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) One of the most worthwhile reads of the day
  April 11th, 2018 14:23
• More To A Meaning (Edthepoet) This is really good
  April 11th, 2018 13:58
• HER JOB (Lasergraph) Very interesting! Glad to have read it today
  April 11th, 2018 13:56
• LEAVES (Yasu Na) This is such lovely language The emotion comes through in this
  April 11th, 2018 13:55
• Jesus Keeps Me Warm (ForeverJesus7) Intriguing write
  April 11th, 2018 13:42
• The Lost Boys : Pain (Broken_kingdom) This is really sweet
  April 11th, 2018 13:40
• New Beginning (Jt) Great write
  April 11th, 2018 13:36
• Franks Psychiatry 2 #33: better than that (Frank Prem) sorry for your experience
  April 11th, 2018 13:04
• Nightmare. (Wallace) this is wonderful
  April 11th, 2018 12:42
• Rejoin the Dance (Sylviasearcher) oddly cryptic i like the turn you took
  April 11th, 2018 12:33
• mi amor (Queer-with-a-pen) i was really shocked by how vulnerable this is. it\'s really beautiful
  April 11th, 2018 11:24
• Healing (Redneckwriter) this was really interesting
  April 11th, 2018 11:21
• MUSIC OF THE SPHERES ~ A 7-7-7-7 DOUBLE SONNET ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) purely MUSICAL i love this one
  April 11th, 2018 08:58
• morning walk (Onepauly) this is a sweet snapshot
  April 11th, 2018 08:13
• Xenophobic (Daveyboyz) Very self aware
  April 11th, 2018 07:52
• unforgivable (Malos) The conclusion is very interesting
  March 27th, 2018 11:10
• Change . (Dysthymia) What a triumphant end
  March 27th, 2018 11:08
• Passover Pausings (Orchidee) Why the asterisk? I saw what it denoted, I just wondered why. I love what...
  March 27th, 2018 11:07
• Safe Haven. (Wallace) What an all surrounding poem. I really like this one, Wallace
  March 27th, 2018 11:06
• The Metropolitan Line (FineB) Great opening line
  March 27th, 2018 11:04
• CHANGELING (Fay Slimm.) Interesting use of imagery
  March 27th, 2018 11:02
• The Young Soldier (Lorna) Extremely well writ and obviously personal
  March 27th, 2018 10:48
• Orb (John Prophet) truly beautiful
  March 27th, 2018 10:42
• Carousel ... (Ivory) Good metaphor
  March 27th, 2018 10:23
• Electro-Dynamo (Noah) This is filled with movement and intention, I absolutely love that
  March 27th, 2018 10:21
• \'Her Purpose Fell Without a Pause\' (Lucaso) By far the best I\'ve see today. You have a command over language
  March 27th, 2018 10:20
• The Expected (YordanAthens) this is very interesting
  March 27th, 2018 09:51
• One time (Dantae) good use of repetition
  March 27th, 2018 09:49
• The Unlived life (Emile Dubois) strong word choice
  March 27th, 2018 09:48
• I don\'t like (JB) This is extremely cute
  March 27th, 2018 09:43
• Suicide (Stephenfairfax) I wish you the best. There is skill inside this
  March 27th, 2018 09:39
• You are not Unique... (TrystanBehm) The poem is striking and dark, but I have to wonder how it connects to the...
  January 31st, 2018 08:20
• A Different Kind of Poem (FredPeyer) Interesting rhyme scheme! I was awfully intrigued! Nice method of...
  January 30th, 2018 13:37
• Love In The Morning (Adam Shirley) Interesting choices
  January 29th, 2018 16:14
• Tuesday Night at Emile\'s: from the man at (Frank Prem) This is done in a very interesting way
  January 29th, 2018 14:16
• New line (Aa Harvey) Each line was surprisingly better than the last
  January 29th, 2018 14:15
• The Voice Distant (Kurt Philip Behm) Strong implications of a spider, I feel. What an enticing piece.
  January 29th, 2018 14:13
• Angel. (Wallace) Delicious word use
  January 29th, 2018 14:10
• IF ALL THE WORLD...(1) (Michael Edwards) Rhyming \"diocese\" with \"cheese\" is bold to say the least. I love your...
  January 29th, 2018 14:08
• Path of Love. (Goldfinch60) Interesting conclusion. Very revealing
  January 29th, 2018 14:07
• Shielded Safety (Orchidee) Beautiful hymn
  January 29th, 2018 14:04
• Vaporizer Eagle (Germanamericanchurch) I can nearly hear this in a raspy voice
  January 29th, 2018 14:02
• The One I Took For Granted (DezareeCheyd) Great refrain
  January 29th, 2018 14:00