Comments on community poems by Aislinn Wilson
- SHORELINE DESECRATION ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Curious where you live (or were at the time of inspiration) that helped...
January 29th, 2018 13:58 - Tell Me. (Fay Slimm.)
This is entrancing, and causes something three steps short of a holy...
January 29th, 2018 13:56 - magic (Aals)
interesting concept
January 29th, 2018 13:52 - Criticism (ForeverJesus7)
You will never meet someone without bias no matter how much they may boast...
January 29th, 2018 13:51 - No, No, I am not a Lonely Being Anymore (Mottakeenur Rehman)
Wow this was really unique construction! Strong write!
\"Pierces the...
January 29th, 2018 13:47 - The Dream (Christina8)
Very sweet
January 29th, 2018 13:44 - A Matter Of Seconds (Writings From The Unknown13)
This is one of the few poems I\'ve read where centering it really aided...
January 29th, 2018 13:42 - Butterfly (Jo Middleton)
This is extremely strong writing with vivid imagery and a fantastic sense...
January 29th, 2018 13:40 - Princess Hopeless (Cipherink)
This is very enraged and strong writing. It\'s a great write.
That...
January 29th, 2018 13:32 - Sometimes (Dusk arising)
This really speaks to a deep emotion. Well done.
January 29th, 2018 13:30 - You Have The Ability To Do Well (Brooklyn6timesplus)
I\'m really intrigued by your title.
January 29th, 2018 13:29 - Senses (Shadowbox15)
Well, this tickled my own senses, mission accomplished. Fun write.
January 29th, 2018 13:27 - Hide and Seek (Lorna)
Very playful and clever! Great write!
January 29th, 2018 13:26 - Angel in Disguise (Ronyswizzle)
For having what I\'d say is a really strong beginning and overall content,...
January 29th, 2018 13:25 - OPEN BOOK (ZIGGY)
Truly amazing writing
January 29th, 2018 13:17 - Atari (Philip Daniel Cook)
It\'s really unique and affecting how you use nostalgia as a poetic tool
January 29th, 2018 13:16 - Sticks and Stones (Songbird)
Strong message.
January 29th, 2018 13:14 - The Next Morning (Christina K)
This is so very sad, but what a well written short piece.
January 29th, 2018 13:13 - MY YEAR PART Two Written By Reverend Joshua Edward Loburak (Mrexpressionz)
N back to my ?
January 26th, 2018 09:34 - Psychosis (Lorna)
Great description
January 22nd, 2018 10:32 - Consiousness (FredPeyer)
The final line really punched. Great write, I love your work!
January 20th, 2018 20:11 - How The Lovebirds Flew (Noveyre)
Very interesting
January 20th, 2018 20:03 - When You Find Someone. (Kevin browne)
This is beautiful and touching
January 20th, 2018 19:54 - Tore us apart (SorrowfullyHappy)
Neat
January 20th, 2018 19:44 - hearts beats (Aals)
This is so very sweet, and clever!
January 20th, 2018 19:25 - The Makings of a Mind (DHA)
Musical. Great write.
January 19th, 2018 16:25 - UNSUNG HEROES (Lasergraph)
This is really moving, well done
January 19th, 2018 14:04 - Thoughts. (Wallace)
Good and beautiful repetition
January 19th, 2018 13:59 - Dreams (Carmine)
Good freeform and unique fragmentation!
January 19th, 2018 13:58 - Wants (C-pain)
Interesting transition!
January 19th, 2018 13:52 - No Regret (FredPeyer)
Worth multiple reads in a sitting.
January 19th, 2018 12:37 - Defunct Marriage (FredPeyer)
The course of this poem is very entrancing, entrancing in a way that...
January 19th, 2018 12:36 - Human Merchandise (FredPeyer)
To say this has powerful imagery is really the least I can say
January 19th, 2018 12:35 - My life (Anthony Stafford)
Great poem, beautiful!
January 19th, 2018 12:32 - I hate you (Olivergreenwood19)
Great poem!
January 19th, 2018 12:31 - Breath (Pots-and-pans)
This is such an achievement! I love it!
January 18th, 2018 12:06 - Cut-out (KR)
This is splendid and so fresh!
January 18th, 2018 12:01 - A Thousanf Splendid Suns (KR)
How cool to see your creative process!
January 18th, 2018 12:00 - CAUSATION (Michael Edwards)
Very thought provoking!
January 18th, 2018 11:40 - Delirium\'s Flowers (Philip Daniel Cook)
I would love to know more about this, the language is absolutely languid....
January 18th, 2018 11:40 - UnderstandingEqualzLove (AlexHoy)
This is beautiful! I can\'t wait to see more from you!
January 18th, 2018 11:36 - I dont even know (Kailie Jackson)
I\'m very intrigued
January 18th, 2018 11:35 - But it\'s not my problem (Bryan.p_18)
Very Rythmic. This is great
January 18th, 2018 11:34 - Desperate (Jacob Bennett)
Weighty, but worth it. This was worth re-reading.
January 18th, 2018 11:33 - Gold is your soul (Aa Harvey)
Great poem. Well done!
January 18th, 2018 11:32 - The End. (Wallace)
Well writ, Wallace
January 18th, 2018 11:29 - To The Stars (Abpoet18)
Fascinating
January 18th, 2018 11:29 - Winter Is My Favorite Time of Year (DHA)
I like it too! Nice poem!
January 18th, 2018 11:28 - You Lied (Mariana Lorentz)
I love it
January 18th, 2018 11:13 - Suicide (Quiet45)
Compelling, it does cause me to think even if I can\'t say I agree
January 18th, 2018 11:12 - Okay? (She_was_torture)
Simply beautiful, I can feel it\'s palpable weight on my back
January 18th, 2018 11:11 - Happiness (Quiet45)
This is very impressive.
January 18th, 2018 11:04 - Platform Four (FredPeyer)
What a striking snapshot, this is a very good poem.
January 18th, 2018 11:02 - the devil (Comababy)
This is absolutely haunting, extremely emotional. Amazing write.
January 18th, 2018 10:59 - Fearful Fall - Good News Series - 2 (Orchidee)
Amazing style over all
January 18th, 2018 10:27 - The Key of Life. (Goldfinch60)
Well writ
January 18th, 2018 10:24 - way poem #16: open to new (Frank Prem)
This poem is delicious
January 18th, 2018 10:22 - Oh To Be A Swift (W c)
This makes me think of the lyrics of Cosmo Sheldrake! Great poem!
January 18th, 2018 10:19 - Regret (Carmine)
I love your writing style
January 18th, 2018 10:19 - I know of none (Poetic Dan)
Extremely revealing. This poem is quite the feat.
January 18th, 2018 10:04 - Dancing with the Dead (RK) (Lorna)
Beautiful, I love it.
January 18th, 2018 10:01 - Sing (Tony36)
Wonderful!! Strong message!
January 18th, 2018 09:46 - Forget (Olivergreenwood19)
Interesting
January 18th, 2018 09:45 - So what? (Fluatist)
So hopeful, so powerful, and so vulnerable. Good poem!
January 18th, 2018 09:35 - Zsolt (Joaquin Finn)
Very powerful
January 18th, 2018 09:26 - Poignant \'P\' (feat. Unexpected Gay Erotica) (Kyran)
I\'m in love with this, very fun, very sensual
January 18th, 2018 09:20 - The Past Repeats (Writings From The Unknown13)
Truly awesome poem
January 18th, 2018 08:59 - Love is (Connor_fennell)
Beautiful!
January 18th, 2018 08:46 - hold (me) tight (Queer-with-a-pen)
I really love the nod to the nonbinary nature of people as a whole, and...
January 18th, 2018 08:41 - a love letter to my mustache (Queer-with-a-pen)
Every time I search an LGBT term on this site, you seem to come up, but I...
January 18th, 2018 08:38 - Seven Deadly Sins- Envy (Izzi Lynn)
Good write, good write
January 17th, 2018 13:46 - Seven Deadly Sins: Gluttony (Izzi Lynn)
The longing resonates powerfully. I really like this one.
January 17th, 2018 13:46 - Woman (Mottakeenur Rehman)
This is a really interestingly written poem, the concept comes through...
January 17th, 2018 13:44 - Splice. (Noah)
\"harrowing reality\" is a bold phrase, I\'m a fan
January 17th, 2018 13:39 - Something in the Water (GeraldineTaylor)
This is very beautiful
January 17th, 2018 13:31 - i was a teenage lesbian (Queer-with-a-pen)
the title got me in the mindset of the song \"I Was A Teenage Anarchist\",...
January 17th, 2018 13:21 - Broken (Pretty.odd84)
Fantastic first poem! Well written!
January 17th, 2018 09:26 - To Give Is Better (W c)
Very wise
January 17th, 2018 09:24 - An Empty Seashell (Colacalippo)
Fascinating
January 17th, 2018 09:22 - LOVE\'S CYCLE (Michael Edwards)
This is so very beautiful and expressive.
January 17th, 2018 09:21 - I Once Knew You (Tristan Robert Lange)
Very powerful
January 17th, 2018 09:18 - Ruby Murray. (Wallace)
One of my favorites I\'ve had the pleasure to read today! Very funny!
January 17th, 2018 09:17 - ARMAGEDDON ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Oddly fun despite the content matter, probably my favorite I\'ve seen from...
January 17th, 2018 09:16 - Tidal (Kieran Garnett)
Wonderful devices at work here
January 17th, 2018 09:13 - Relationship Roots - Good News Series - 1 (Orchidee)
Wonderful language
January 17th, 2018 09:13 - Artists. (Goldfinch60)
Wonderful write!
January 17th, 2018 09:10 - Oh,My Flower Girl (Rosie_Posie)
Really lovely, very inspiring
January 17th, 2018 09:09 - Love ya sis (Poetic Dan)
This is so very sweet. I like the \"who\".
January 17th, 2018 09:04 - What Might Have Been (Lorna)
Good short beautifully expressed
January 17th, 2018 09:02 - Happy (KR)
Chillilng
January 17th, 2018 09:01 - It Hurts (Colacalippo)
Tragic, but well written
January 16th, 2018 13:07 - Campfire (Tony36)
Lovely piece!
January 16th, 2018 12:36 - ()
I was awfully confused by your persona upon seeing many of your comments,...
January 16th, 2018 12:31 - Her Rose Tattoo (Rosie_Posie)
This is fantastic, please keep writing
January 16th, 2018 12:27 - The Youngest Old Man You’ll Ever Meet (AuburnScribbler)
Wonderful poem
January 16th, 2018 12:23 - L-O-V-E (Olivergreenwood19)
The emotions are positively flagrant. Very affecting piece
January 16th, 2018 12:22 - she-ghost (Queer-with-a-pen)
You\'re writing style is really unlike any I\'ve ever seen before, and...
January 16th, 2018 12:21 - this body/my body (Queer-with-a-pen)
You\'re an amazing writer. This is tragic, but it\'s so well told and...
January 16th, 2018 12:17 - Kaleidoscope (Rrodriguez)
I never really felt permission to mourn my LGBT brothers and sisters from...
January 16th, 2018 12:13 - A Letter To My Mom (TruMisfit)
This is really beautiful poem and extremely emotionally effecting
January 16th, 2018 12:10
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