Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave
- Promise To Penitents (Orchidee)
Neva felt more disqualified in my life!
Repent? Who? what? when? how?...
July 8th, 2024 07:33 - THE COMING DARK AGE (R. Gordon Zyne)
Prescient and grim.
Unplug? Chances?
Enjoyed the irony spread evenly...
July 7th, 2024 16:39 - Leaves (Sorenbarrett)
Leaves = poems....\'some dead, some alive\' says it all . Thanks Soren.
July 7th, 2024 16:28 - Concrete Crawling (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Any old night in the big city..
July 7th, 2024 02:41 - Four Apparitions O\'er the Rio Grande (MendedFences27)
A rich colourful parade and yarn, Phil. Enjoyed.
But a slight feeling of...
July 7th, 2024 02:39 - ~`` smile you\'re on camera (haiku) (Thad Wilk)
Every time I look at the pic he says \"vamoose, or I\'ll turn tourists...
July 6th, 2024 18:22 - Playing The Game. (Goldfinch60)
The kind of spirit and endurance which once made Britain great!...
July 6th, 2024 18:07 - Real Change Won\'t Happen (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Neatly writ, and I tend to agree. But let\'s give it a little (not too...
July 6th, 2024 02:43 - Aged (Tommytoons)
Dunno what that\'s all about....😅😂🤣😇🙃
But seriously? A...
July 5th, 2024 23:37 - ``* Global Warming form Monotetra (Thad Wilk)
Hey Thad! Your beleaguered tree looks very much like a close relative of...
July 5th, 2024 18:13 - In Lieu of Flowers (Thomas W Case)
I\'m very selective when it comes to love poetry....that one passes...
July 5th, 2024 17:57 - Their Lips Move. (Goldfinch60)
Hi Andy - I knew it!!
July 5th, 2024 17:48 - ```> Ar Luves Hot N Strong (Redneck) (Thad Wilk)
The concept \'love\' can encompass so many levels of subtle emotion....
July 4th, 2024 18:54 - Am I Free (Saidgodis)
Start looking - takes a lifetime of hard work.
July 4th, 2024 17:40 - Human? (Sorenbarrett)
This seems to me to be less a portrait of a dog than an oblique critique...
July 3rd, 2024 22:00 - ~~> Monkey Business (Thad Wilk)
Once upon a time, there were just three wise monkeys, but the...
July 3rd, 2024 21:53 - unbelievable (Poetic Dan)
Such pride and harmony you have with those kids, Dan. You are going to...
July 3rd, 2024 06:35 - No, There Will Be No Hurricane Tonight. (Goldfinch60)
Vivid reportage, Andy. Very much tells the tale of the effect nature can...
July 3rd, 2024 01:28 - Troll (Peto)
Evidently there\'s a lot of them about - they\'ve perfected their disguise...
July 3rd, 2024 00:23 - The invisible prison (Neilton)
First time I\'ve wandered in your direction, Neilton...through the crowd....
July 2nd, 2024 18:57 - Drunken lullabies (Sorenbarrett)
Could become an anthem for AA, Soren.
The above within your poem...
July 2nd, 2024 18:28 - A natural piece of art (Saleh Ben Saleh)
Couldn\'t agree more.
July 2nd, 2024 06:42 - True Colors (Cindy.Coverly)
Who me?
July 2nd, 2024 06:32 - How? (Thomas W Case)
The rhythm of life? Just one damn thing after another.......
July 2nd, 2024 01:57 - What is love (NafisaSB)
Yes, most of those would be love and not infatuation. Most take time to...
July 2nd, 2024 01:54 - Home Once More. (Goldfinch60)
No one robbed the joint while you were away? Glad it all went well, Andy.
July 2nd, 2024 01:46 - Confessions Of A White Feminist (Hans__)
Welcome to MPS. I am always open to different slants on gender relations,...
July 1st, 2024 19:34 - the cycle ride (NafisaSB)
No broken bones? The very first time I mastered the bicycle was a...
July 1st, 2024 18:51 - An Anniversary (Tom Dylan)
A reality based poem if ever I\'ve read one, Tom.
July 1st, 2024 07:09 - Give with one hand (2781)
Got that right. The future has an ominous smell? The present has it...
July 1st, 2024 07:04 - Coming (2781)
I feel quite aware of this situation actually, especially \"Whats in store...
June 30th, 2024 18:27 - ~> Since Ya Left Me Gal [ Redneck Free verse ] (Thad Wilk)
Well matey, all I can say is, I got lots a entertainment out of your...
June 30th, 2024 18:17 - Cocktails (Lorenz)
Not into cocktails, but the richness of your menu drew me in...I must now...
June 30th, 2024 18:10 - On The Great Stage Is A Poetess And An Angel (Teddy.15)
However much I refuse to consider angels Teddy, your poem forced me to...
June 30th, 2024 17:53 - Guess the Fruit (Thomas W Case)
Certainly no chance of vitamin C deficiency....... how were your iron...
June 29th, 2024 23:54 - IMITATION IS LIMITATION (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke)
Nothing to argue with there other than to say that no-one chooses to be...
June 29th, 2024 17:51 - Be LIE ve (Peto)
No obligation to believe in anything relating to what cannot be seen or...
June 29th, 2024 17:40 - [WHAT THE HELL AM I TALKING ABOUT!!!??? 🗣️🗣️🔥🔥🔥] (N1K0L41)
Good Question.
June 29th, 2024 17:26 - Caged Hummingbird (Teddy.15)
“I found out who I really am?” A rhetorical question, because you do...
June 29th, 2024 17:24 - Studying The Flaming Obvious! (Goldfinch60)
Owl\'s feathers may not disturb the air, but this information certainly...
June 29th, 2024 17:01 - Living forever (2781)
I know (knew) someone like that - busy, busy continually, never stopped....
June 29th, 2024 08:17 - 3rd Time Down (Thomas W Case)
Get well soon.
June 28th, 2024 22:08 - Finding me. (__INTROVERTME__)
Right - I won\'t bother you then.
June 28th, 2024 22:01 - Poetry Interpretation (Tom Dylan)
They pop in here occasionally: the lovely landscape and introverted navel...
June 28th, 2024 21:56 - ~`> A Bunny Tale ( for children ) (Thad Wilk)
Pleath Mithter, you dun a lully rhyme.....
June 28th, 2024 21:35 - The Cathedral Of Santa Ana (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Haven\'t popped in for a while - seems you are out there, somewhere in the...
June 27th, 2024 18:08 - Secrets of Slumberbash (Teddy.15)
I too have a recurring dream or rather the setting for a series of dreams,...
June 27th, 2024 17:54 - Eyes of a child (Sorenbarrett)
A child observes, begins to interpret, acquires language attempts to marry...
June 26th, 2024 07:38 - Focus Ahead. (Goldfinch60)
Forward, ever forward. Yes - that\'s the way to go, Andy.
June 26th, 2024 02:52 - Aggh! the heat! (Orchidee)
My commiserations, orchi. Mind you, it is entirely possible to have rain,...
June 25th, 2024 08:25 - Football Fever (Tom Dylan)
Spoil sport! I know what your mean, Tom. But you have so many other...
June 25th, 2024 08:02 - `~* I No Longer Live, Remember Me *~` (Thad Wilk)
Like the plea - raise folks\' consciousness of a sad history.
Some hope?...
June 24th, 2024 16:07 - Raindrop. (Goldfinch60)
A wet and wonderful piece of personification, Andy
June 24th, 2024 08:15 - Repentance Reality (Orchidee)
John appears to be a bit of a Marxist.......
June 24th, 2024 06:11 - Mosquito Mafia (Mutley Ravishes)
Yes - not an advertising jingle for a proprietary mosquito spray, is it?
June 24th, 2024 06:07 - Back from The Future (Teddy.15)
I feel I\'ve been let into the secret lives of two raunchy young girls...
June 24th, 2024 06:00 - Reigns (2781)
When the indigenous folks populated this land, I bet they never camped on...
June 24th, 2024 05:51 - Reaping (Peto)
A real and complete account of a passage through life in strong poetic...
June 23rd, 2024 19:16 - THE UK GHOST DANCE (Nephilim56)
Won\'t be long now....
June 23rd, 2024 19:09 - ~> If Ya Got It, Flaunt It (Thad Wilk)
Gay = happy; gay = happy; gay==happy.
Dickhead = Dickhead...
June 23rd, 2024 19:05 - Tasting As Good. (Goldfinch60)
Biscuits aren\'t good for your health - grow a carrot instead LOL.
...
June 22nd, 2024 18:04 - Trapped (Sorenbarrett)
I very much like the portrayal of a transition to a better person you...
June 22nd, 2024 17:55 - ~> holy cow, wow! [ form haiku ] (Thad Wilk)
Cows: \'Wot - only two?\'
June 22nd, 2024 17:47 - Reflecting in The Shower (Teddy.15)
Almost didn\'t catch this one - you were too slippery all soaped up like...
June 21st, 2024 20:31 - Their Land (Midnightblue)
Great poem, full of content and truths.
I think like it took longer...
June 21st, 2024 20:21 - Curtains Calling (Neville)
and this is my plea for a curtain call ASAP, Neville.
Wot no timing at...
June 21st, 2024 19:52 - Ruse of the evil grimace also known as \"Blondie\" (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
Terrible - there\'s a shortage of affordable housing everywhere and nasty...
June 21st, 2024 19:47 - *`> Turdle Catchin\' Cuntest ( REDNECK ) (Thad Wilk)
Blimey Tad I hain\'t got no hidea wat yur burbling on abaut...... no...
June 21st, 2024 19:35 - ~> Santa Suspended For \"HO\" Comment (Thad Wilk)
Not even trying, are yer? You coulda made a challenge for yourself if you...
June 20th, 2024 21:26 - The machine (Sorenbarrett)
Yes, it is embryonic, Soren. I really enjoyed this – you make your...
June 20th, 2024 21:17 - To Be a Woman.. (Dn)
‘Does it have to….’ ‘…..what they say’ – I felt from the...
June 19th, 2024 19:58 - Mantis Chat (Mutley Ravishes)
If you can manage to stay off the medication, then please continue to do...
June 19th, 2024 19:45 - Secure Steps (Orchidee)
2781 above there knows more about your bible and sacred texts than I do,...
June 19th, 2024 08:09 - Rain,rain,rain (NafisaSB)
If rain is what you want and need, I\'m happy for you.... sometimes though...
June 19th, 2024 07:56 - Gratitude (Cassie58)
The last recognition, the last call rich enough to remain in your memory...
June 19th, 2024 07:51 - ~> Sammy The Squirrel [ form Trijan Refrain ] (Thad Wilk)
Entertaining, and thus good value Thanks Thad.
Request: Keep pushing...
June 18th, 2024 19:19 - Fear Wears Bowling Shirts (Thomas W Case)
Conformity (no matter what the current \'wisdom\' might be) is a curse. Oh...
June 18th, 2024 18:59 - Drying Up? (Orchidee)
A digression is an expression, or perhaps a regression to earlier times...
June 18th, 2024 08:32 - Mind\'s Eye (Teddy.15)
There\'s no learning if I forget my successes, failures, injustices - ...
June 18th, 2024 08:06 - Imagination (Sorenbarrett)
So let\'s misinterpret, Soren - not every hot randy coupling is smooth...
June 18th, 2024 07:51 - Afternoon Scene (Kinsley Lee)
Doggerel Dave
June 17th, 2024 07:44
For trees, definitely a...
June 17th, 2024 18:32 - `*` In The Harbor Of Our Love `*` ( Italian Sonnet ) (Thad Wilk)
Not keen on love poetry at all, Thad - but a read of your piece here makes...
June 17th, 2024 18:26 - Resilience (Cassie58)
‘Tis an ill wind…… For a ten year old those spaces were adventure...
June 17th, 2024 18:18 - Good Night, Baby (Thomas W Case)
Dystopia with just a glimmer of light.
A rich write, Thomas.
June 17th, 2024 18:02 - Bad Neighbor (Kinsley Lee)
For trees, definitely a haunting.
I enjoyed this very much for the...
June 17th, 2024 07:44 - Tricky Ideas. (Goldfinch60)
You speak for yourself, mate ............ Now do remind me, just what was...
June 17th, 2024 07:39 - Wilden Free (Neville)
Run free but subject to the elements becoming even more elemental due to...
June 17th, 2024 07:22 - A Man Like Me (Tom Dylan)
So what it means from your \'confession\' is that you have a wide...
June 17th, 2024 07:11 - ~> OMG! I Was Raped By an Alien (Thad Wilk)
As a rhymer me self I do acknowledge and admire your disciplined adherence...
June 16th, 2024 18:03 - Mediocrity (Sorenbarrett)
Yes – poetry is the form I find easy to use in order to push my views of...
June 16th, 2024 06:20 - Nobody Has The Time (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
if you will involve yourself in social media and popular culture, that\'s...
June 16th, 2024 06:05 - Chromatozed (Neville)
Rich write, Neville. 😂
June 16th, 2024 05:56 - Days Are Here. (Goldfinch60)
Play on \'count\' makes this a good rich write, Andy.
And I do.....
June 16th, 2024 03:03 - No Hard Feelings (Justagirl)
Not often you will witness a response from me to love poetry... . But this...
June 16th, 2024 02:51 - Hip hop hooray (Poetic Dan)
All over then? Nothing left to do......LOL
Congratulations to the...
June 16th, 2024 02:45 - Dear Spider (Mutley Ravishes)
Mutley - I believe you may be referring to the red back or black widow,...
June 16th, 2024 02:38 - Apostate (Gary Edward Geraci)
Did not know of a curtal sonnet, Gary - had to refer to Prof Google. ...
June 15th, 2024 22:08 - The Summer of ‘49 (Cassie58)
This was more than Kodak Monochrome, but more for me Eastman colour,...
June 15th, 2024 06:46 - Acronyms (Sorenbarrett)
What gets me to click on your entries Soren, is that you are always...
June 15th, 2024 06:40 - Sonnet (Neville)
A lovely effort, dragging me here under false pretenses, Neville. LOL
June 15th, 2024 06:23
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