Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave
- Bad Day Survival. (Goldfinch60)
Not has a bad day for over twenty years (retired over twenty years...
August 2nd, 2024 18:36 - Writer\'s Right (Goli.Standbypoet)
Right then Goali - I\'d better get on with it then.....
August 2nd, 2024 00:46 - `*~ Each Day My Love - form Trijan Refrain (Thad Wilk)
Since I feel I have your shtick most times I await a punch line,...
August 1st, 2024 18:02 - Hot Off the Press (MendedFences27)
Your Full Bore Safety Valve worked extremely efficiently from what I can...
August 1st, 2024 17:48 - The Weatherman (Dan Williams)
\"prophecies like knives of reason
he never really learned to throw.\"...
August 1st, 2024 05:56 - Just Me, Half a Love Song and An Idiopathic Itch (Neville)
Glad you got that off your chest?
Well I\'m glad it all worked out in the...
August 1st, 2024 03:26 - Forget Four Letter Words Redux (Plus Bonus....) (Doggerel Dave)
Precisely - got that in one.šBut not every day!
August 1st, 2024 00:32 - In the Hush of Summer\'s Fading Light (Mr. Poetic 243)
An idealised version of school life which I actually quite enjoyed....
July 31st, 2024 17:04 - ~> A Troglodyte Named Zog! (Thad Wilk)
Gāday Thad. āTrouble was his glasses set him back too early. Without...
July 31st, 2024 16:34 - NATURE OR NURTURE (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke)
An open window (as you have no hesitation doing) into, for me, another...
July 31st, 2024 07:47 - homeless (Jim56)
Hear hear, Jim.
July 31st, 2024 07:34 - Just a Few Thoughts on Getting Even (Neville)
A fantasy very similar to my own where I own a vaporiser which immediately...
July 31st, 2024 07:32 - Heat Exhaustion. (Goldfinch60)
Suggest you start getting acclimatised now, Andy.
Alternative strategy...
July 31st, 2024 07:26 - A Battle With Irony (Teddy.15)
Noooo - trouble with the neighbours, Teddy?...
July 31st, 2024 07:14 - New York Dreams (Santajah Douglass)
l stayed two weeks in New York, and too had the time of my life.
Thanks...
July 31st, 2024 07:03 - Guilty But Free as A Bird (Neville)
Time zones and odd domestic habits ā I got to this one late,...
July 30th, 2024 22:40 - ~> READ MY LIPS! - Form Monotetra (Thad Wilk)
Gāday Thad. I once lived in a share house (only once, Iām a quick...
July 30th, 2024 22:12 - The Mystery of a Woman (MendedFences27)
Better the poem popped into your head,
Than your head being popped by the...
July 30th, 2024 21:51 - Books (Goldfinch60)
I too get lost in books ā among the sagging shelves in my local charity...
July 30th, 2024 08:32 - My Favourite Colour Is Blue (Teddy.15)
I vacillate between precisely those two colours, Teddy.
āTie a Yellow...
July 30th, 2024 08:17 - A Genuine Fake (Tom Dylan)
The smart and sophisticated may well say ācaveat emptorā, while yer...
July 30th, 2024 07:56 - She Lay In Her Bed (Bella Shepard)
Bella, this is a perfect and realistic picture of a journey through time...
July 29th, 2024 18:18 - ~> Bugs AND Daffy - Limericks (Thad Wilk)
Gāday, Thad. Daffy and Bugs have certainly moved on (as have I) since...
July 29th, 2024 17:58 - Still I Know (MendedFences27)
I can give ninety percent of love poetry a miss, Phil, but
Still, I both...
July 29th, 2024 17:39 - Second Chance. (Goldfinch60)
For me you have a whole new dimension, Andy.
Thanks for the disclosure.
July 29th, 2024 08:03 - Between Clouds (Neville)
A surprisingly brief encounter can sometimes linger in memory and lighten...
July 29th, 2024 07:56 - Rusting Medals (M.M.)
All sounds pretty human to me.
And if you really feel bad about...
July 28th, 2024 17:52 - ~> Stan And The Wishing Well - A Fable (Thad Wilk)
Wot happened here, Thad is perfectly simple: The well was supplied by a...
July 28th, 2024 17:24 - video in the mail (Gary Edward Geraci)
Family history Gary, the twists and turns of which are mirrored in many a...
July 28th, 2024 16:59 - And I\'ll Write About That Too (Teddy.15)
Moody, but gives your muse plenty of scope and ensures a presence on these...
July 28th, 2024 16:52 - Wine for the ear (Sorenbarrett)
Great analogy (I\'m saving metaphor for another time). Subtle flavours ...
July 28th, 2024 08:03 - Unique is mom (Goli.Standbypoet)
I do feel uplifted by the poetry and idealism...... but I have to tell...
July 28th, 2024 07:54 - Friends With Benefits (Neville)
A day at a time, Neville...a day at a time....
July 28th, 2024 07:48 - Forgiveness Freedom (Orchidee)
At last! One of your hymns I can almost understand. I\'ll vote for that -...
July 28th, 2024 07:43 - Christmas In July. (Goldfinch60)
What happened there, Andy is that you momentarily shape shifted (or...
July 28th, 2024 07:36 - One Side of Still (Dan Williams)
An experienced moment. Perfect harmony.
July 28th, 2024 00:52 - Sleep Always Calls (Thomas W Case)
A complete word picture of a very sensible move - might follow your...
July 27th, 2024 23:59 - Feminine Rage (Aneenaelzabinod)
Believe it or not, much of the spirit of your poem applies to me, (though...
July 27th, 2024 19:16 - ~> This is No Lie! (Mono-rhyme) (Thad Wilk)
Any account which includes a proclamation that it is no lie is normally...
July 27th, 2024 19:03 - Outsiders (Neville)
Yes - both metaphor and reality inextricably locked together Neville.
To...
July 27th, 2024 08:06 - Ceremony (2781)
Now that\'s entertainment!!šš
July 27th, 2024 07:59 - Perfect (Sorenbarrett)
Well poemed there, Soren. Enjoyed very much.
Leadership (and I feel...
July 27th, 2024 07:54 - Another Beautiful Day. (Goldfinch60)
Another of your pastoral pieces well executed, Andy.
Hold onto them...
July 27th, 2024 02:03 - Kindness. (Doggerel Dave)
To whom it may concern:
Celebrating this five minute piece momentarily at...
July 26th, 2024 22:48 - ~> Fuckitol\'s The Real Deal (Thad Wilk)
Do not panic folks just because Shakespeare is spinning in his grave like...
July 26th, 2024 17:05 - My Friend Dale (Thomas W Case)
No insight, full of contradictions - like far too many people.
When Is...
July 26th, 2024 16:36 - Meadows (MendedFences27)
I see you smoothly transitioning through time with past memories trailing...
July 26th, 2024 16:22 - Laphroaig. (Goldfinch60)
Andy ā Iāve been wanting to tell you for a while now. I received a...
July 26th, 2024 01:50 - Shadows (MendedFences27)
That piece has more substance than those shadows, Phil. And I hope they...
July 25th, 2024 18:44 - Unoriginal (2781)
Well, if an old joke , I\'ve never heard it before....so I\'ve got to keep...
July 25th, 2024 08:31 - The Pirate (Thomas W Case)
Thomas, Iām not quite sure you properly understand what a serious...
July 25th, 2024 08:15 - Riopy Is Here. (Goldfinch60)
Smooth, Andy. (Sometimes music doesn\'t need the video utube...
July 25th, 2024 08:00 - The Seat by the Fire (Tom Dylan)
How did you know, Tom? That time - The Chancer\'s Arms (I think), pint of...
July 25th, 2024 07:48 - Jokes for everyone (Sorenbarrett)
Not sure I fully understand this one (that ain\'t nothing new) Soren....
July 25th, 2024 07:37 - Proverb Pieces 6 (Orchidee)
See all those diagonal lines throughout your reply at14:45, orchi? That\'s...
July 24th, 2024 18:01 - ~*` At The End Of My Rainbow `*~ (Thad Wilk)
Don\'t knock the gold, Thad - you could make an absolute fortune in the...
July 24th, 2024 17:55 - Prison wall (Goli.Standbypoet)
Understood completely. Lives curtailed in so many ways even outside prison...
July 24th, 2024 17:44 - Light Bites (Neville)
So this spider, in conformity with modern taste, has dispensed with the...
July 24th, 2024 08:49 - Brick by boring brick (Gloria Denise)
I know....I like the concept \'brick by boring brick\" ...evidence of some...
July 24th, 2024 08:46 - Another Day Arrives. (Goldfinch60)
If you get up? Go on, Andy - make the effort, LOL.
July 24th, 2024 08:23 - Funny Weed (Sorenbarrett)
Lawn? Neighbours?....who are they? Cool, Man, I\'ll do them a service...
July 24th, 2024 08:11 - Thoughts 11 (MendedFences27)
Champagne is well covered here, and yes I\'d agree. but I continue to be...
July 23rd, 2024 19:56 - ~> The Game Of Love ( Shakespearean Sonnet ) (Thad Wilk)
Poker and passion - no wonder you were royally flushed, Thad.
July 23rd, 2024 19:42 - Hurt. (Goldfinch60)
Andy: Hear Hear ā Johnny Cash was/is one of the greats.
That song ā...
July 23rd, 2024 19:13 - Flat Petulance (Villanelle) (Paul W Conway)
Could be (I say \'could be\') funniest villanelle on record.
Do hang in...
July 23rd, 2024 18:57 - False Promises and Little White Lies (Neville)
Bitter, or merely observation, Neville?
July 23rd, 2024 09:28 - Sex well done (Sorenbarrett)
As I ponder the worlds populationā¦.. but many arrived not without the...
July 23rd, 2024 09:23 - The Best Medicine (Tom Dylan)
Felt to me like you needed the potty............ ........Tom (keeping my...
July 23rd, 2024 09:04 - ~> Palmer The Snake Charmer ~> ( Limericks ) (Thad Wilk)
Bargains everywhere - cut price transgender procedure.š
July 22nd, 2024 18:12 - Lonesome Neon Nights (Thomas W Case)
Rich in the rottenness of two existences. An even spread of misery.
Well...
July 22nd, 2024 07:17 - Apathy. (Goldfinch60)
Maybe, on occasion, someone needs to be told......
July 22nd, 2024 07:09 - A Life Lesson In Tapestry (Teddy.15)
There may quite possibly be a relevant entry in DSM5 - ask Neville , he...
July 22nd, 2024 07:05 - Witness Of The Word (Orchidee)
The only word is \'Hello\' as the Prodigal Son returns....
July 22nd, 2024 07:00 - Batteries (2781)
I cannot find anything to add to that. Great summary of the shit values...
July 22nd, 2024 06:57 - Living Like Ghosts (Neville)
..... without any question re the source of those secrets (opinions -...
July 22nd, 2024 06:53 - Precious Thursday (Bella Shepard)
You are the only one that knows? Youāve well and truly blown your cover...
July 21st, 2024 20:17 - Chuang Tzu (Sorenbarrett)
I think I\'d be alright with him... Fosters spontaneity? Anti cultures,...
July 21st, 2024 10:07 - Scatterbrained (Jerry Reynolds)
And thoughts fly past at warp speed.....
July 21st, 2024 09:52 - ~.> Little Miss Muffet ( Parody ) (Thad Wilk)
Ah that\'s a shame - there could have been a whole new movie franchise on...
July 21st, 2024 09:48 - The Age Of Innocence. (Goldfinch60)
Good point, Andy........ But it isn\'t, is it?
You paint a good picture,...
July 21st, 2024 02:27 - Glory Be! (Orchidee)
As in \"Glory be! the Prodigal Son has returned!???\"
July 21st, 2024 02:23 - I Will Rise (Thomas W Case)
The increasing strength gained from small beginnings.
Familiar experience...
July 20th, 2024 23:53 - My Main Mission (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
\"Demented to think we live in a democracy\"
Without going into a multi...
July 20th, 2024 17:27 - An Old Man all Over (Thoughtless)
Speak for yourself, son............
(cf \'Tissue Paper Hearts\', with...
July 20th, 2024 17:05 - Tissue Paper Hearts (Thoughtless)
Not \'we\' - there are some few free of such superficiality.
But from...
July 20th, 2024 16:53 - Shrapnel in the Snow (Thoughtless)
Yes I know.... but The Reaper suddenly decided to take a break -hasn\'t...
July 20th, 2024 16:43 - Polite Enquiry: (Doggerel Dave)
I\'d like to plot the number of moves you\'ve made to avoid the Prodigal...
July 20th, 2024 06:21 - Drying Up? (Orchidee)
Surely then it\'s time to focus on (wait for it!) The Prodigal Son......?
July 20th, 2024 06:01 - ~> I Can Explain Dis! (Thad Wilk)
Udder cat obviously has a propensity for lateral thinking.
It was a worry...
July 19th, 2024 18:13 - The Coronation of Trump (Raidoc)
I do hope reflection becomes the order of the day. Needed in large...
July 19th, 2024 17:48 - Is anybody out there? (2781)
I can easily read that without religious connotations; and having read can...
July 19th, 2024 07:47 - I React (Bella Shepard)
Canāt answer for you in the big bad world out there, Bella, but here at...
July 18th, 2024 20:29 - CUT THE CRAP ! (Sheryffat)
Seems to be several themes in your poem. And Iām of course unsure of the...
July 18th, 2024 20:21 - ~> It Was, A Female Fly (Thad Wilk)
I found it fun: but with the honourable exception of Cassie above, you\'ve...
July 18th, 2024 20:06 - The mob at a politicianās door (EvenwheniLie)
Promises, promises... A man for all seasons bullshit. Well writ.
July 18th, 2024 19:19 - If Your Face Doesnāt Fit (Cassie58)
Your verses always flow smoothly through for me, Cassie. And this one is...
July 18th, 2024 19:15 - The gospel according to Paul (2781)
Two points: I very nearly gave this a miss because Iāve been dealing...
July 18th, 2024 02:47 - Three Poppies (Neville)
Beautifully symbolic, Neville. The general stupidities which caused the...
July 18th, 2024 02:37 - ~> Tiny Todd My Diddle Wad (children\'s story) (Thad Wilk)
Take it easy, Thad the -writer, you\'ll be having me see them little...
July 17th, 2024 19:19 - Welcome to Miami (Neville)
A close comfortable encounter of the country kind continued with no...
July 17th, 2024 08:00
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