Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave
- Man on the over-bridge (Shantha Teldeniya)
More shelter under the bridge - or have I not understood the...
March 10th, 2024 04:39 - Bound by adversity : the journey of a girl (Dooli S)
The agony of it all - get out if you can......
March 10th, 2024 04:31 - Sorry (EvenwheniLie)
Re your response to Zamir Marshall (above): I obviously haven\'t made the...
March 10th, 2024 00:17 - The Hippies World. (Goldfinch60)
I wondered where they went, Andy.... These were fun times, the sixties...
March 9th, 2024 19:42 - Joy, Love, Sadness and Hate. (Goldfinch60)
I do need the news to find out what my government is not doing on my...
March 9th, 2024 01:53 - Out of Earshot (Tom Dylan)
A great moral tale, Tom (and I nearly missed it!) Never have I understood...
March 8th, 2024 22:06 - Pedestal (Teddy.15)
Teddy, I\'ve said all I want to say about poetic love, and I don\'t want...
March 8th, 2024 17:03 - Transcendence is a part of our Lives. (AwHec8)
Well welcome back, Don. 🙂
March 8th, 2024 16:23 - Forever (Chris Duffy)
Hesitate to make commentary here, Chris after your last entry disappeared...
March 8th, 2024 07:55 - Silly Me (Neville)
The unreachable enigma of some relationships, Neville....
March 8th, 2024 07:51 - The Great Journey Home (Teddy.15)
Yes, Teddy - this is one I\'ve been meaning to engage with you over a...
March 8th, 2024 07:27 - The Difference in Our Similarities (Neville)
Sir I stand as an exception, not an unusual standing for me...(oh git orf...
March 8th, 2024 07:06 - The George. (Goldfinch60)
Andy, you deserve to be top of the pops (\'Trending Now\')....filled me...
March 8th, 2024 06:53 - Over the Garden Wall (MendedFences27)
😅Love commeth in many stripes, Phil. I really enjoyed the garden..........
March 7th, 2024 16:12 - Death from Above (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Leaving its status as a villanelle aside, I really enjoyed this piece of...
March 6th, 2024 17:21 - The Man in the White Coat (Tom Dylan)
I too have those inconclusive debates from time to time, Tom. The question...
March 6th, 2024 06:40 - Death In Verona (Teddy.15)
\'Night Teddy - Sweet dreams. (For me? lol)
March 6th, 2024 06:31 - Death In Verona (Teddy.15)
From all reports the end is roughly right - they did both cark it, didn\'t...
March 6th, 2024 06:14 - From a Collection of First Times Remembered (Neville)
2023??? I dooon\'t belieeeve it....!!!
March 6th, 2024 05:59 - What do you see? (Sorenbarrett)
I cannot beat an examination of perception, Soren - a topic I\'m always...
March 6th, 2024 05:53 - Winter Dreams On The Horizon (MendedFences27)
Yeh – another love poem; a form I can have a certain antipathy towards...
March 5th, 2024 18:16 - On Waking Up in Rio (Neville)
Lifting your head could have been a very risky enterprise, Neville...best...
March 5th, 2024 07:51 - Algebra of Love (Teddy.15)
\'Tis because, as a grumpy old bugger, I believe that most poets don\'t be...
March 5th, 2024 07:32 - Wild Eyes (Noah Malice)
Smooth poetry.
The inaccessibility of the other penned with a degree of...
March 5th, 2024 07:21 - Making A Night of It (Tom Dylan)
Luckily (because it\'s the only one locally) my Indian is great - does...
March 4th, 2024 21:10 - What Would I Say (Kurt Philip Behm)
I remember the year of my 62nd birthday, the age my father died...I am now...
March 4th, 2024 16:18 - Peace On Earth Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
Must have worked overtime on that one Andy, and rewarded us all with the...
March 4th, 2024 06:47 - Must you.....? (Orchidee)
Sometimes, just sometimes I can only agree with you here, one hundred...
March 4th, 2024 06:36 - Recall (Neville)
Wot? to look back on what might have been but wasn\'t....I don\'t feel...
March 4th, 2024 06:26 - Grieving Heart (Teddy.15)
Your way of poeticising contradictions very much in evidence here, Teddy....
March 4th, 2024 06:13 - Unbounded (Teddy.15)
Full of metaphorical agony. And since I\'ve always claimed to not...
March 3rd, 2024 16:50 - Halloween (Peto)
Not quite sure where you live ,Peto, since there\'s a dearth of...
March 3rd, 2024 16:32 - Three Short poems on Medicines (Hugh)
I do believe there might be more than three short truths embedded within...
March 3rd, 2024 15:53 - Hidden in my Heart (Dove)
I really would like to cheer and empathise Dove, \'cos \'tis a lovely...
March 3rd, 2024 08:25 - Among Poets (Rhmn_7)
Like the open ended nature of your piece on one level; I would think that...
March 3rd, 2024 08:14 - My Thoughts On Sexual Assault - Get Rid of Men (NinjaGirl)
😀not.
March 2nd, 2024 21:31 - The Eyes of Domestic Abuse (Melody Votoire)
Very honest.... I\'ll gladly tell you that \'you\' in the poem isn\'t me -...
March 2nd, 2024 21:16 - Slumberbashing with Raven (Teddy.15)
Don\'t often do this, Teddy - quote from the poem above , but here
\'the...
March 2nd, 2024 06:58 - Winsome Worship (Orchidee)
All those hymns, all those threats to sing the bible stories, yet I\'ve...
March 2nd, 2024 06:30 - Where Truth Lies (Neville)
But (good start) all truth inside would be subjective, and thus oftimes...
March 2nd, 2024 06:07 - Vuitton Clerihew (Doggerel Dave)
Neville, it will take me months if not years to match your word score in...
March 2nd, 2024 05:47 - Lost papers of a troubled man (EvenwheniLie)
I get it - I feel it - I understand it, but it is too far outside my own...
March 2nd, 2024 00:31 - Arc (Neville)
Garn - the air\'s just misdirection, \'twas the smile wot got you...
March 2nd, 2024 00:06 - Wisdom Ways (Orchidee)
So wot did Jim have to say in a couple of short lines?
Poetic language...
March 1st, 2024 04:33 - THEATRE (Nephilim56)
I\'ve worked in theatre (London, West End). You\'ve cracked it perfectly.
March 1st, 2024 04:23 - Fleeced (Neville)
On the tin: \'Smoking is not good for your health\' Especially when those...
February 29th, 2024 01:56 - The Goldenrod (Nat A. Spade)
OK - back to your huntin\' shootin\' and fishin\', then.😊
February 29th, 2024 01:37 - The Old Weathered Barn (Summersounds68)
A really like old weathered stuff (I really aught to, if the advice to...
February 28th, 2024 19:14 - The Goldenrod (Nat A. Spade)
Felt this might based on a true story, well told. Good for you, and...
February 28th, 2024 19:00 - Slumberbash (Teddy.15)
Certainly got them out from under the covers here!!!
No need for...
February 28th, 2024 18:49 - What if Jesus was a Woman (Chris Duffy)
Swift romping argument, Chris. Enjoyed.
Nil religion since age,...
February 28th, 2024 07:48 - THE UNIT OF YONK (Michael Edwards)
I do this all the time, having spent large portions of my life in both...
February 28th, 2024 07:36 - My Very Dearest Sigmund (Neville)
Yer old Sigmond, while decried in some (many?) circles, certainly had a...
February 28th, 2024 07:15 - Love Longings (Orchidee)
...or spiritually very virtual....
February 28th, 2024 07:01 - Things I Wish I’d Said (Cassie58)
Don\'t know how I missed this first time round, Cassie - but you are not...
February 27th, 2024 18:30 - Ignorance Rules Relentlessly (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Impossible not to agree there, Mate.
February 27th, 2024 18:05 - Grace Guardian (Orchidee)
The last?? So what happens now...You aren\'t going to start poeming about...
February 27th, 2024 18:01 - For All Those Once Beautiful (Neville)
My Doc told me I\'m maturing like fine wine when I popped in for my yearly...
February 27th, 2024 17:22 - Camille (1879) Monet (Cassie58)
As AP (above). Many thanks, Cassie.
February 27th, 2024 16:58 - Climate Change (Chiki1601)
I found that a neat well written piece.
Couldn\'t agree more, but why did...
February 27th, 2024 05:14 - Slumberbash (Teddy.15)
Wot you mean is you made \'slumberbash\' up! Google don\'t record it in...
February 27th, 2024 05:03 - ask a flight attendant (Carpe4diem)
A view from the trenches - feels authentic and I\'ve never much thought...
February 27th, 2024 04:43 - Don\'t forget (Rhmn_7)
No Sorry, I obviously didn\'t make myself clear (and, given the adulation...
February 27th, 2024 04:25 - The Circus Came to Town (Summersounds68)
The romance of the old fairground, the sideshow alley that turned up once...
February 26th, 2024 20:37 - The Hands Behind the Wheel (Rocky Lagou)
I found that very neat and very funny, Rocky.... but then I always enjoyed...
February 26th, 2024 20:23 - Prayer Requests (Orchidee)
Oh please Oh Lord, cannot you find a re-education facility somewhere in...
February 26th, 2024 05:15 - It\'s Not Cool. It\'s Rude. (Tom Dylan)
😂You tell \'em Tom - sort \'em out.
I enjoyed that very much.
February 26th, 2024 05:09 - The Look on His Face That Said Everything (Neville)
Takes more than a clinician\'s view of the world to cope with....
A very...
February 26th, 2024 05:06 - Is the universe infinite? (Foreigner)
Not going to be harsh at all....just don\'t tell me what to do. Don\'t...
February 26th, 2024 05:02 - Assassinating My Own Character (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Wot a disappointment!! 😂...
February 25th, 2024 19:00 - I’ve seen the future (EvenwheniLie)
😂Like it, Mr Futurologist Spaceman.
February 25th, 2024 18:41 - Hook Him Up to the Machine (Thomas W Case)
Muscular poetry, but not quite sure what the problem is.
Free spirit to...
February 25th, 2024 18:31 - Don\'t forget (Rhmn_7)
Thanks for the advice!
February 25th, 2024 18:20 - The boy, his dream and me (Rhmn_7)
Definitely had a moment like that (way in the past)
I felt quite vividly,...
February 25th, 2024 18:08 - The Friday Boys. (Goldfinch60)
Wot no rain, quietly and unobtrusively living your life.. good for you,...
February 25th, 2024 05:38 - Song of a siren (Sorenbarrett)
Soren, if you keep on like this , I\'m going to have to have my GP...
February 25th, 2024 05:24 - It Is I Who Loves Thee More Than The Sun (Teddy.15)
As Soren so rightly points out, You are up there with, I\'ll say, the bard...
February 25th, 2024 05:09 - 575 (Neville)
Not good at numerology, Neville... after all, it took me a long time...
February 25th, 2024 04:57 - Je Reviens (Cassie58)
With you on love poetry. A sudden scent, fragrance can evoke (and has) a...
February 24th, 2024 18:34 - Party Animal (Teddy.15)
I do believe you may have made a typo here, Teddy.
I\'m pretty sure it\'s...
February 24th, 2024 18:17 - Have you heard of the crooked man? (Hey!)
Makes a change from your previous stuff - keep up the good work!
February 24th, 2024 05:30 - Father And Son. (Goldfinch60)
Of all that Neville stated, all of which feel true, the honesty shines...
February 24th, 2024 05:21 - Greatness Gloryings (Orchidee)
\'My tongue a pen it be\' - Are you spitting on one of those old indelible...
February 24th, 2024 05:15 - Three Summers (Neville)
Them\'s the breaks, Mate...nothing lasts forever (despite all the rhubarb...
February 24th, 2024 05:11 - Have you heard of the crooked man? (Hey!)
Great fun - enjoyed. Quite a lot of \'some stuff\' added?
February 24th, 2024 00:27 - SOLDIER (Nephilim56)
The guilt, I believe should be shared - although in some instances, for...
February 23rd, 2024 20:29 - What Day Is It? (Goldfinch60)
Happily retired, I presume....?
February 23rd, 2024 09:14 - Desirous Dwelling (Orchidee)
Is that estate agent going to sell me a decent dwelling at a knock down...
February 23rd, 2024 09:12 - Sundial (Sorenbarrett)
\"time and tide wait for no man\" - yours a much richer explanation,...
February 23rd, 2024 09:04 - Oh’ But For One Moment More Deeply (Neville)
You\'ve ex-seeded yourself there, Neville...
February 23rd, 2024 08:51 - The power of alone (EvenwheniLie)
Aloneness is fine most of the time....at least I can hear myself...
February 23rd, 2024 08:47 - God is an Artist (Thomas W Case)
I\'ve writ it before; I\'ll writ it again:
Man made God in his own...
February 22nd, 2024 23:07 - Maniac (Teddy.15)
Pass. I\'ve never been fond of a pretzel as the last one was followed by...
February 22nd, 2024 07:53 - Painting, Poetry, Music, Silence. (Goldfinch60)
A little polished gem, Andy (and I don\'t say that often).
February 22nd, 2024 07:42 - From where the wild roses grow (Teddy.15)
A wee bit enigmatic, this one if I may say so, Teddy.
If there\'s a call,...
February 21st, 2024 23:16 - Aliens (Doggerel Dave)
Not funny - ridiculous.
Thanks for the call.
February 21st, 2024 18:21 - I\'m that kind of tired (Tom Dylan)
You\'ve gotta make an appointment with a Career Advisor, Tom - is it...
February 21st, 2024 06:30 - Almost Famous Last Words (Neville)
So you embark on an odyssey - the quest for the perfect black....just rev...
February 21st, 2024 06:23 - Watch Out (Thomas W Case)
I think I\'ll give this one a big miss....
February 21st, 2024 06:14 - Santa Muerte (Lorenz)
Too many allusions I can\'t quite get to grips with, but get the general...
February 20th, 2024 18:34
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