Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave
- Reading In The Park. (Goldfinch60)
Holiday - I read a book - only time I manage it - iron law - Universal...
May 8th, 2024 03:21 - Don’t You Dare Die, Just Yet .. (Neville)
Wot? Not done the washing up again?
May 8th, 2024 03:12 - Balanced Lines: A Call for Global Media Integrity (GeekSusie)
Oh well said . Here in Oz we, of course have fact checkers. I still...
May 7th, 2024 07:35 - The Great Grey Beast. (Goldfinch60)
Nostalgia fills the word-canvass. Enjoyed. Neva mind it probably weren\'t...
May 7th, 2024 07:27 - The Spilling of Orion’s Last Great Secret (Neville)
You poor buggers in the northern hemisphere have no idea. To look , away...
May 7th, 2024 07:15 - Knives (2781)
Complex social issues .
Needs society to sort it out - but there\'s...
May 7th, 2024 06:43 - Minds Unchained! (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Ask why this is happening ......and this can be a very long job, so...
May 7th, 2024 06:04 - Possessing Peace (Orchidee)
Mate, I go along with at least some of your hymns because I respect your...
May 7th, 2024 06:00 - Life (Sorenbarrett)
There really cannot be any end to it, but who knows what that process is...
May 7th, 2024 05:54 - Prayer Petitions (Orchidee)
Now if I have your proposition right (always a problematic area, orchi) I...
May 6th, 2024 07:01 - Back from the Dead (Thomas W Case)
Good write.
May 6th, 2024 01:51 - My Very Dearest of Coincidences (Neville)
Obviously going well, Neville. The flavour is sweet.
May 6th, 2024 01:37 - Our Book. (Goldfinch60)
That\'s the approved text which I possess and will never finish until I...
May 6th, 2024 01:31 - Firefly (Teddy.15)
Gone. And it takes a long time to reconcile, accept. Right at the start...
May 5th, 2024 08:01 - My Beau (NafisaSB)
Yes - precisely what I try to get across here... A teenager should be...
May 5th, 2024 05:16 - Access to Asking (Orchidee)
Neville must have gone to a better class of Sunday School than I. I don\'t...
May 5th, 2024 05:04 - Le Plagiaire (Neville)
Oh come on , mate I ain\'t got much time... if you are talking about a...
May 5th, 2024 04:52 - Knowledge (Alan R)
You sail by asking the right questions and demanding the right answers.
May 5th, 2024 04:43 - Health In Life. (Goldfinch60)
Perhaps, Andy - some truth there.......but only some.
Nice sentiments,...
May 5th, 2024 01:56 - What Makes Us Broken (Neville)
Feels like a spectator sport to me.... are you diversifying just a teensy...
May 4th, 2024 19:58 - A Very Epic Morning (Teddy.15)
I’m with sorenbarrett above, with the following exclusions or...
May 4th, 2024 19:44 - Disrespectful (2781)
Instructions to offspring? Well said , sir.
May 4th, 2024 06:05 - Creation Considerations (Orchidee)
Very gentle erotic it was, I suppose......
Am I able to conclude, on the...
May 4th, 2024 05:57 - Rats (Sorenbarrett)
😂🤣That\'s wot I calls a great story, Soren. I can relate to that...
May 4th, 2024 05:31 - And It Rained! (Goldfinch60)
If climate change can produce that kind of conviviality, then bring it...
May 4th, 2024 05:17 - What did Malcolm say (EvenwheniLie)
The tictoc Of Malcom X: He made much sense.
Your piece: About power and...
May 4th, 2024 00:30 - The Enigmatic Britain (Prasun Goswami)
Have to wait and see if Prasun Goswami has anything coherent to say for...
May 4th, 2024 00:18 - I Am A Loser (DLewis88)
Negative self talk - get some help.
May 3rd, 2024 06:44 - As a Woman (Nah Hannah)
A joke. In the \'seventies there were demonstrations, slogan \'Take Back...
May 3rd, 2024 06:27 - Hush Now Little Wren (Neville)
So gentle, so kind - such an excellent way to hint that it is time to...
May 3rd, 2024 06:14 - The Enigmatic Britain (Prasun Goswami)
I like it for some odd reason, but can\'t fully understand the references....
May 3rd, 2024 06:09 - Places I call home (Sorenbarrett)
Yep the grizzly is, if you don\'t mind Soren, a fella I would not wish to...
May 3rd, 2024 06:02 - GONE ARE THOSE DAYS... (Lady C)
I really liked this for the honesty of its expression. But I\'m not too...
May 3rd, 2024 05:56 - Retribution (Neville)
Terribly tempting, sometimes... Do I submit to temptation...
May 3rd, 2024 00:32 - Liking? (Orchidee)
You have my unbridled admiration, Sir - You took a stand and behold, it...
May 2nd, 2024 02:56 - Nepal (NafisaSB)
During a previous hospital stay (not my last) I, a public patient was...
May 1st, 2024 19:02 - Inner City Poetry (Tom Dylan)
...... and, plus they mostly carked it quite early, Tom; whereas you\'ve...
May 1st, 2024 18:15 - Enduring to the End (Orchidee)
It’s all there, orchi:
Stanza the first – ‘love like a morning...
May 1st, 2024 07:19 - Cycles (Sorenbarrett)
Even I can understand a metaphor when it points to the journey so clearly....
May 1st, 2024 07:03 - The Death Of A Poet (Teddy.15)
Teddy, for once I don’ t really know to how put this, but to me you so...
May 1st, 2024 06:55 - Thirteen Times the Cuckoo Called (Neville)
(send him over here - I\'d settle for a cuckoo which only called thirteen...
May 1st, 2024 01:06 - Smiling Depressives (Neville)
Thanks for the thought, Neville...I\'ll look out for it.
The smile that...
May 1st, 2024 00:54 - But Sleep Won\'t Come (Tom Dylan)
As you have written Tom...Know it as well as you have described it which...
May 1st, 2024 00:43 - Affections (Christina8)
If this kind of love is rare, then what is that other stuff which litters...
April 29th, 2024 23:52 - Heroin (Thomas W Case)
Confession or imaginative creation?
Either way well executed. Some can...
April 29th, 2024 23:29 - Forsaken (Neville)
The other pussy is a little mysterious, is she not?
April 29th, 2024 07:42 - Himalayas (NafisaSB)
So long as you don\'t specify Everest, which would appear to be quite...
April 29th, 2024 07:38 - Gospel Givers (Orchidee)
Bit of a bossy boots, aren\'t you when you speak to the geezer...
April 29th, 2024 07:34 - People (Sorenbarrett)
Nihilistic in the extreme, Soren. I both liked it and felt repelled by it....
April 29th, 2024 07:31 - Rocking Worlds (Teddy.15)
Sounds as reasonable a travel brochure advertising the after life as any...
April 29th, 2024 07:14 - L\' Chaim! (To Life!) (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Good for you man - go for it.
April 28th, 2024 17:50 - Random Outbursts And Microaggressions (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
You make a lot of change in so few lines - if you can, do it; I think you...
April 28th, 2024 06:58 - The Cruelest of All Bed Partners (Neville)
Rich and complex with progress and change conveyed by strong...
April 28th, 2024 06:52 - Time to Call Time (Neville)
Patchouli over there is, given the distances involved, no substitute for a...
April 27th, 2024 19:10 - Skid Marks and Secrets: An Underwear Odyssey (GeekSusie)
Always taken my own underwear very much for granted; have varying levels...
April 27th, 2024 18:06 - Locket (Cassie58)
Not keen on romantic poetry, but this is a good \'un, Cassie.
April 27th, 2024 06:03 - My Saving Grace. (Goldfinch60)
Ah, your river - I\'m really happy it gave you what you needed,...
April 27th, 2024 05:50 - Wild Garlic (Neville)
Gets the good old digestive juices flowing nicely Neville.
April 26th, 2024 06:17 - We All Have Our Beliefs (Accidental Poet)
Yes....if only..... Good for you AP
April 26th, 2024 06:14 - Raven\'s Encore (Teddy.15)
Glad you are spreading the joy, Teddy.
Now go spread it some where else,...
April 26th, 2024 06:11 - Raising water (Sorenbarrett)
Do you really believe there\'s relief from that kind of extreme psychic...
April 25th, 2024 07:04 - A Prayer of King Nebuchadnezzar (Orchidee)
Know this geezer from Sunday school - though I could never spell it, his...
April 25th, 2024 06:57 - Sixty Poems (Tom Dylan)
You are not even in second gear yet...Go for the ton, Tom - I\'m sure the...
April 25th, 2024 06:40 - My Collection of War Zones and Other Disasters (Neville)
Salutations Neville. Don\'t know how to phrase this tactfully (definitely...
April 25th, 2024 06:34 - Life In 2024 (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
You don\'t have to listen/watch/engage with social media, you know. I\'d...
April 25th, 2024 01:47 - Religion: Verse II (Kinsey Peterson)
Once upon a time I thought that all my parents passed to me were their...
April 24th, 2024 08:37 - Off the Beach (Tom Dylan)
There\'s more than enough resonance there for me in that rich but simple...
April 24th, 2024 07:16 - Sort of Struck Down (Orchidee)
I do hope you are getting better, orchi - I do like having a good sport to...
April 24th, 2024 07:03 - She Loved Him Because .. (Neville)
Too much, Neville. I think I\'m loved for approx. a quarter of those...
April 24th, 2024 06:47 - Awakening (Teddy.15)
A worthwhile example many should heed, Teddy.
I will always come down on...
April 24th, 2024 02:12 - Struck Down. (Goldfinch60)
Sydney has Rookwood Cemetery, very large with chapels etc relating to the...
April 24th, 2024 01:33 - Just to Hear your Laughter (Teddy.15)
A gem about which I have no comment because it just is - a gem.
April 23rd, 2024 20:38 - Safe inside (Sorenbarrett)
I\'d be offended if it wasn\'t so close to the truth, Soren. Conclusion...
April 23rd, 2024 20:31 - At Seventeen or Thereabouts (Neville)
Can\'t suppress the cough - three skins yes...five? Gotta share with too...
April 23rd, 2024 06:50 - First Day Back Syndrome (Tom Dylan)
This sounds like \'gotta go to work to eat, but is there not more to life...
April 23rd, 2024 06:37 - Nature\'s Blanket. (Goldfinch60)
Rarely happens these days, but i got a sudden rush of something like...
April 23rd, 2024 00:41 - Random Kindness (Cassie58)
Will try - I promise......
A simple straight from the heart gem,
April 22nd, 2024 19:52 - The Bells Of Lawson Tower (Accidental Poet)
\'Happy wife, happy life\'
but there was no way you were going to mention...
April 22nd, 2024 19:44 - The old ones (Lorenz)
Ignored by many Seniors, it seems.
April 22nd, 2024 09:08 - Lemon Lined Streets (Neville)
Pneumatic tyres then, Neville? 😂
April 22nd, 2024 06:47 - Omnipotent Observations (Orchidee)
Gothic.
April 22nd, 2024 06:41 - Our Skies Are Red With Blood (Teddy.15)
Hey Teddy – you’ve cracked it for me inasmuch as I experienced what...
April 22nd, 2024 06:38 - The Great War Of Ignorance (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
You\'ve slogged away to tell the story, but no one seems to take you...
April 22nd, 2024 06:02 - Cosmic Contemplations (GeekSusie)
Your word picture of the universe, I really recognized and felt its...
April 21st, 2024 20:07 - Uncommon Good Scents (Neville)
You would have more than a passing knowledge, Neville of the way the...
April 21st, 2024 06:48 - Are We Alone? (Accidental Poet)
\'Couple of things, AP:
- You have much of that right, IMHO.
-Your...
April 21st, 2024 00:59 - Colonoscopy (Bella Shepard)
Apologies, Bella – I’ve just had a flash back – memory safely buried...
April 21st, 2024 00:30 - The Angry Society (Katy_20)
Not a short story at all - It\'s a smart piece of poetry which engages...
April 20th, 2024 20:53 - Colonoscopy (Bella Shepard)
Nah - can\'t claim that, but rotate me180 degrees and a TURP was the order...
April 19th, 2024 19:03 - Blind Date (Teddy.15)
😅😂🤣 Take the Gin bottle, forget the T and do a bolt for home,...
April 19th, 2024 06:18 - A Big Wish Wrapped in A Little Prayer (Neville)
So you have enough, you assert, to avoid the need to ever weep or...
April 19th, 2024 06:06 - The Mountain Of Life. (Goldfinch60)
You take your path and I\'\'ll take mine, Andy. Pretty sure it will lead...
April 19th, 2024 05:55 - They Came To The Door. (Goldfinch60)
Yo spent an awful amount of energy being nice - you are never that...
April 18th, 2024 19:34 - Discrimination (Sorenbarrett)
I have one of Pollocks\' (as repro of course) on my door. It\'s Blue...
April 18th, 2024 06:34 - Angels Encore (Teddy.15)
Each for their own when it comes to bedtime, Teddy.
For you, peace and...
April 18th, 2024 06:24 - Apathy. (Goldfinch60)
With care and discretion - is there nothing which would get you riled up,...
April 17th, 2024 21:12 - Before it All Began to Go Wrong (Neville)
First: A fine line in pure nostalgia Neville, full of the most appealing...
April 17th, 2024 21:04 - The end (Sorenbarrett)
So you are beginning to poeticize your CV, Soren. Let\'s have more and...
April 17th, 2024 08:51 - Rort (2781)
Like to name names (whisper them if you are worried!)? lol
April 16th, 2024 18:40 - Do-over (Teddy.15)
Be careful Teddy - you feel like a right dodgy number there...😊
April 16th, 2024 18:37
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