Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave

• Where does one end and another begin? (Sorenbarrett) So Soren you have listed the titles of twelve poems - when are we to see...
  August 28th, 2024 21:35
• The Write Crowd (Tom Dylan) Think you won that debate, Tom. But how does the proprietor allow you to...
  August 28th, 2024 21:08
• Smoky Eyes of a Twilight Pretender ( A Platter-Tude ) (MendedFences27) I was identifying right along Phil, and fully felt a sinking recrimination...
  August 28th, 2024 20:17
• The balance of Faith (Fanita530) I enjoyed the structure, rhythm and rhyme very much, including the...
  August 28th, 2024 20:03
• Shadows in the Night: A Nation\'s Lament (GeekSusie) So you are back with your trademark cutting crits, which I really...
  August 28th, 2024 19:55
• ~> Chick Norris! [ Limericks ] (Thad Wilk) There once was woz a chick name of Norris Who grew up to be quite...
  August 28th, 2024 19:11
• OOPS (Michael Edwards) I want me money back - i seed that picture before. Advice to Ruth, Pete...
  August 28th, 2024 02:28
• All About Hats (Teddy.15) A battle of the limericks is there Because Teddy is up for the dare; But...
  August 28th, 2024 02:17
• ~> Jake And Lill, The Hanging Tree (Thad Wilk) Good triumphs over evil, or Capitalism wins once more? I can’t take...
  August 27th, 2024 23:32
• War (Rrodriguez) You might have a pleasant night now you got that out of your system - but...
  August 27th, 2024 23:21
• World without war (Lakshya) If you are really asking, then you must turn to History.
  August 27th, 2024 23:04
• Ten Very Small Poems (MendedFences27) Truth, The night Sky and buttonholes would have satisfied me, Phil - the...
  August 27th, 2024 22:58
• Bello Casentino (Teddy.15) Richness of sensation provided in so very few words, Teddy. Often I pass...
  August 27th, 2024 07:06
• Definitely, maybe not (Tom Dylan) Wise decision, I think Tom. Times past are best left in the rich nostalgic...
  August 27th, 2024 06:54
• Ed Poe in Yellowknife (Paul W Conway) Your poem rattled along in a way I really enjoyed. There are a couple of...
  August 27th, 2024 02:03
• The Ferris Wheel. (Goldfinch60) A rich memory, Andy. I\'ve always enjoyed the funfair, sideshow alley and...
  August 27th, 2024 01:20
• ~> A True Turkey Tale! (Thad Wilk) G’day Thad. So This Give Thanks day… is that the only day of the...
  August 26th, 2024 17:25
• Lost Journey (Zhangyuyouyu) I have known that feeling: Where am I going? And why? But the truth is...
  August 26th, 2024 17:05
• up and down (Sheta) I can feel that, just as you have expressed it. But you do know that it is...
  August 26th, 2024 16:48
• I will fall (BlessedbyGod) I found this stoic and unyielding in the face of adversity. You have...
  August 26th, 2024 16:40
• Senryu to Love (Teddy.15) Words (perish the thought!) can be false, whereas actions speak for...
  August 26th, 2024 07:13
• Here\'s Looking At You. (Goldfinch60) You are obviously well aware of the rewards gained by looking back –...
  August 26th, 2024 01:48
• A Nervous System (Elias H.F.) Economy of word play in no way diminishes the meanings of this little...
  August 26th, 2024 01:14
• Premonition (NafisaSB) I know a competent tradesman who fixes roofs. Says he would be prepared to...
  August 26th, 2024 00:54
• ``~ Guess Who! (Thad Wilk) This is just a wee bit weird, Thad, if you don’t mind me mentioning. I...
  August 25th, 2024 20:27
• A mystery (Orchidee) I avoid funerals. For me they mean nothing no matter how close I am/was to...
  August 25th, 2024 03:47
• Conning the Bafflements: a Triple Triolet (Paul W Conway) Not an easy form to stick strictly to and remain coherent - you\'ve...
  August 25th, 2024 00:45
• ~` The Atmosphere Is Getting Heavy Here! - French Sonnet (Thad Wilk) “Regrets, I’ve had a few…..’ Al P slightly the worse for wear...
  August 24th, 2024 17:57
• Music of the heart (Sorenbarrett) Assuming you mean close relationships, Soren they are always dynamic in my...
  August 24th, 2024 16:26
• Have you ever seen a green flower? (Elias H.F.) Neat and very much worth the read. Welcome to MPS I hope you enjoy...
  August 24th, 2024 16:16
• Woof, Woof! (Orchidee) A digression from your obsession with your rodents which sends me into a...
  August 24th, 2024 06:10
• Another Friday Morning. (Goldfinch60) Andy – it feels (allowing for different game, different time) like Vitai...
  August 24th, 2024 05:54
• My fitbit (NafisaSB) Each to their own, Safina. Your poem is so clear, so descriptive that it...
  August 24th, 2024 01:07
• Homework (Tony36) My school days a very longtime ago, but.....seems not much has changed. A...
  August 23rd, 2024 17:54
• .~` Just One Glance `~. Sonnet (Thad Wilk) Not much into love poetry, as you may have gathered by my absence and/or...
  August 23rd, 2024 17:47
• Meltdown (Tristan Robert Lange) Slightly more than a dissociative spell then? I must say your write plus...
  August 23rd, 2024 17:07
• The Ashes of Enlightenment (Prasun Goswami) As a metaphor for willful ignorance burned books (yes it has happened,...
  August 23rd, 2024 07:45
• Roots (Sorenbarrett) Well put Soren. But let’s hope that at least some see the perhaps...
  August 23rd, 2024 07:36
• Good Shopping. (Goldfinch60) Dunno why you don\'t do it all online - you only have to get rid of the...
  August 23rd, 2024 07:22
• Do Not Entice Us with Your World (Leni Marlina) A measured poem, rich in detail. Yes your focus is on the many...
  August 23rd, 2024 07:14
• Temporal Lobe  (Teddy.15) I\'m going - doncha know it is wrong to make fun of the afflicted, Teddy?...
  August 23rd, 2024 03:02
• For My Granddaughter on Her First Birthday & Before He Got Broken (Neville) Yes, anywhere now - Thanks for the reminder, Neville. These two went...
  August 23rd, 2024 02:57
• Hide Yourself (Dev Parth) Polished , neat and direct to me. I like that mode, but know I must...
  August 22nd, 2024 17:50
• ~. pigeons ( haiku ) (Thad Wilk) pigeon pie dinner site cleared for the good of all crap on roses...
  August 22nd, 2024 17:42
• Gone The Summer (Cassie58) A mild case of SAD: Seasonal Affective Disorder? ‘Tis a pity you must...
  August 22nd, 2024 17:22
• In the Name of Peace (Prasun Goswami) Great write, but with respect to content, not something I care to comment...
  August 22nd, 2024 08:44
• Lurking in the Shadows (M.E.M.) Boo!
  August 22nd, 2024 08:38
• what if i die ????? (Sheta) It\'s funny - when I was quite young , I used to worry about death a lot....
  August 22nd, 2024 08:34
• Why? (Rrodriguez) Don\'t delude yourself into expecting answers - just keep...
  August 22nd, 2024 08:21
• A Walk On The Moors. (Goldfinch60) Many thanks Andy - this is the only way I\'m ever going to experience...
  August 22nd, 2024 08:10
• Profitable Pleadings (Orchidee) From your title, I feel this is a plea when the plate comes round...but is...
  August 22nd, 2024 08:04
• Senior\'s day (NafisaSB) You can afford to be a day late when a Senior.... no more schedules ,...
  August 22nd, 2024 07:55
• About to Be Forgot (Neville) Probably for the best............................
  August 22nd, 2024 07:47
• Right or wrong (Sorenbarrett) The eye of the beholder well versed there, Sorern.
  August 22nd, 2024 07:40
• `~ Grandpa Tell Me Why (Thad Wilk) G\'day Thad, I reckon he has now had a hairdo, a tint and is right now...
  August 21st, 2024 06:57
• Dawn\'s Full Moon. (Goldfinch60) Wot - a new rhymer has entered the ranks. Stiff competition by the...
  August 21st, 2024 02:30
• Water (NafisaSB) The promise, apparently is that as the world heats more evaporation and...
  August 20th, 2024 23:49
• Corporate (Bella Shepard) That was effort well expended (my small suggestion, I mean! 🙂) Bella...
  August 20th, 2024 19:07
• Tin Cups And Shacks (Garth Rakumakoe) Poverty porn tourism?
  August 20th, 2024 18:43
• Foreigner (Garth Rakumakoe) Such a window into the experience of so many removed from their own...
  August 20th, 2024 18:34
• A Co-Write With Shakespeare (Teddy.15) Mustn\'t do this too often Teddy - it\'s too disturbing - especially when...
  August 20th, 2024 08:05
• Not what it seems (Sorenbarrett) Depravation then hallucination in a few short lines. Richly detailed hard...
  August 20th, 2024 07:54
• Torpedoes (Maplespal) You\'ve cracked the fact, and made it real that this happens more...
  August 20th, 2024 07:48
• Apology (Thoughtless) Might be poking fun now, but there\'s tragedy lurking in those seventeen...
  August 20th, 2024 07:41
• Long Distance (Cassie58) Oh Cassie your word pictures are so rich and here I\'m very keen to know...
  August 20th, 2024 07:34
• Fairs (Tony36) Yes - though I doubt sideshow alley is anything like it was.... Bought...
  August 20th, 2024 07:30
• New Freedoms to Roam .. & Dissent (Neville) Looks like once she rids herself of all that gear, she knows where she\'s...
  August 20th, 2024 02:43
• All Was Well Once More. (Goldfinch60) You know why it was a good day in the end? Because you\'re Andy, and...
  August 20th, 2024 02:24
• A gentle presence (ᴷᵉᶻᵉˣˣᵉ) A horse rider? A skill you have for life. Andyour poem, simple and clear,...
  August 20th, 2024 02:15
• Memories (Sheta) They are a mixed bag, aren\'t they? But the sad ones get easier over the...
  August 20th, 2024 02:07
• Learn (Bella Shepard) I try, Bella - Thanks once more.
  August 19th, 2024 19:56
• ~. The Old Timer .~ (Thad Wilk) \"You can\'t ever beat Father Time I find, just enjoy your life and pay...
  August 19th, 2024 17:01
• This is Rhetorical (M.E.M.) I\'m not an advocate for absolute selfishness every time, but an...
  August 19th, 2024 16:53
• If Looks Could Kill (Neville) Feels like an old master I saw in a gallery somewhere, but cannot...
  August 19th, 2024 16:48
• Learn (Bella Shepard) I have and I do, but confess to be a little slack at times, so a gentle...
  August 19th, 2024 16:35
• The Unfinished House of Stone (Maplespal) Up there with all other explanations i\'ve ever heard. Neat simple...
  August 19th, 2024 06:36
• The universal (Lorenz) In my old armchair an even older occupant who has greater truth, more...
  August 18th, 2024 16:58
• An Ode to Sunday (Teddy.15) Got to call out the set builders, but they won’t come out on a...
  August 18th, 2024 08:17
• CLOSE OF DAY (Michael Edwards) Great to see the pastoral theme back again Michael, but I do like the...
  August 18th, 2024 08:02
• Goner (Zhangyuyouyu) You say on your Public Profile that you are new to poetry and need some...
  August 18th, 2024 07:35
• Understanding Songs. (Goldfinch60) Well put, Andy. But there were also screamers right through the sixties,...
  August 18th, 2024 07:21
• You, Me and My Dog .. and Blame It on Saint Marlo (Neville) Zummerzet where the Zider apples grow.... Saint Malo - Got the title...
  August 18th, 2024 07:06
• knight (Sheta) Charge!😊....... please!
  August 18th, 2024 06:55
• A mother\'s grief (Juliette72) There are many anti war poems. Yours gets to the core in a very authentic...
  August 18th, 2024 06:52
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  August 17th, 2024 17:30
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  August 17th, 2024 17:29
• Yesterday (Sorenbarrett) The passage of time Soren, modifies,and sometimes, grows into maturity. I...
  August 17th, 2024 05:52
• Making Green & Reflex (Neville) Nah that\'s not right - them greens in chapter one weren\'t properly...
  August 17th, 2024 02:40
• Blessing of Peace (Orchidee) That is wonderfully short and direct, orchi with wishes even a heathen...
  August 17th, 2024 02:30
• Light (MendedFences27) Should be the world\'s Mission Statement. Well put, Phil.
  August 16th, 2024 22:34
• ~> On This Moonlit Beach, (Thad Wilk) You incurable romantic, you.
  August 16th, 2024 16:55
• IBERIBE ON THE STREETS (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke) I’m heteronormative myself but feel that was just the luck of the...
  August 16th, 2024 07:15
• Why Women Weren’t Safe (Dev Parth) A worthwhile project, this one. Not only have you made clear in your...
  August 16th, 2024 06:52
• Tigers Tearing (Dan Williams) Grim, mate.
  August 16th, 2024 02:25
• The Great Grey Beast. (Goldfinch60) Sweet times past, I\'m afraid. Great evocation, Andy. PS: Get any...
  August 16th, 2024 02:21
• No One But Us Ghosts & a Haiku - Woken by Doves (Neville) how lucky I am how loud our morning arrives bloody cockatoo.. Appears...
  August 16th, 2024 02:12
• The Student? (Dan Williams) \"illusion of liberty\" Does it for me, Dan. You really don\'t have to...
  August 16th, 2024 01:17
• An Ode to Heartache (Tristan Robert Lange) Her emotions are so overwhelming that tight control is the only way she...
  August 15th, 2024 18:26
• Misunderstood (Cassie58) A wonderfully polished piece with a great message, Cassie. After the...
  August 15th, 2024 17:56
• Canal Cyanide. (Goldfinch60) Just go for a stroll by your river Andy and all will be well....😇
  August 15th, 2024 07:36