Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave
- Where does one end and another begin? (Sorenbarrett)
So Soren you have listed the titles of twelve poems - when are we to see...
August 28th, 2024 21:35 - The Write Crowd (Tom Dylan)
Think you won that debate, Tom. But how does the proprietor allow you to...
August 28th, 2024 21:08 - Smoky Eyes of a Twilight Pretender ( A Platter-Tude ) (MendedFences27)
I was identifying right along Phil, and fully felt a sinking recrimination...
August 28th, 2024 20:17 - The balance of Faith (Fanita530)
I enjoyed the structure, rhythm and rhyme very much, including the...
August 28th, 2024 20:03 - Shadows in the Night: A Nation\'s Lament (GeekSusie)
So you are back with your trademark cutting crits, which I really...
August 28th, 2024 19:55 - ~> Chick Norris! [ Limericks ] (Thad Wilk)
There once was woz a chick name of Norris
Who grew up to be quite...
August 28th, 2024 19:11 - OOPS (Michael Edwards)
I want me money back - i seed that picture before.
Advice to Ruth, Pete...
August 28th, 2024 02:28 - All About Hats (Teddy.15)
A battle of the limericks is there
Because Teddy is up for the dare;
But...
August 28th, 2024 02:17 - ~> Jake And Lill, The Hanging Tree (Thad Wilk)
Good triumphs over evil, or Capitalism wins once more?
I can’t take...
August 27th, 2024 23:32 - War (Rrodriguez)
You might have a pleasant night now you got that out of your system - but...
August 27th, 2024 23:21 - World without war (Lakshya)
If you are really asking, then you must turn to History.
August 27th, 2024 23:04 - Ten Very Small Poems (MendedFences27)
Truth, The night Sky and buttonholes would have satisfied me, Phil - the...
August 27th, 2024 22:58 - Bello Casentino (Teddy.15)
Richness of sensation provided in so very few words, Teddy. Often I pass...
August 27th, 2024 07:06 - Definitely, maybe not (Tom Dylan)
Wise decision, I think Tom. Times past are best left in the rich nostalgic...
August 27th, 2024 06:54 - Ed Poe in Yellowknife (Paul W Conway)
Your poem rattled along in a way I really enjoyed. There are a couple of...
August 27th, 2024 02:03 - The Ferris Wheel. (Goldfinch60)
A rich memory, Andy. I\'ve always enjoyed the funfair, sideshow alley and...
August 27th, 2024 01:20 - ~> A True Turkey Tale! (Thad Wilk)
G’day Thad.
So This Give Thanks day… is that the only day of the...
August 26th, 2024 17:25 - Lost Journey (Zhangyuyouyu)
I have known that feeling: Where am I going? And why? But the truth is...
August 26th, 2024 17:05 - up and down (Sheta)
I can feel that, just as you have expressed it. But you do know that it is...
August 26th, 2024 16:48 - I will fall (BlessedbyGod)
I found this stoic and unyielding in the face of adversity. You have...
August 26th, 2024 16:40 - Senryu to Love (Teddy.15)
Words (perish the thought!) can be false, whereas actions speak for...
August 26th, 2024 07:13 - Here\'s Looking At You. (Goldfinch60)
You are obviously well aware of the rewards gained by looking back –...
August 26th, 2024 01:48 - A Nervous System (Elias H.F.)
Economy of word play in no way diminishes the meanings of this little...
August 26th, 2024 01:14 - Premonition (NafisaSB)
I know a competent tradesman who fixes roofs. Says he would be prepared to...
August 26th, 2024 00:54 - ``~ Guess Who! (Thad Wilk)
This is just a wee bit weird, Thad, if you don’t mind me mentioning.
I...
August 25th, 2024 20:27 - A mystery (Orchidee)
I avoid funerals. For me they mean nothing no matter how close I am/was to...
August 25th, 2024 03:47 - Conning the Bafflements: a Triple Triolet (Paul W Conway)
Not an easy form to stick strictly to and remain coherent - you\'ve...
August 25th, 2024 00:45 - ~` The Atmosphere Is Getting Heavy Here! - French Sonnet (Thad Wilk)
“Regrets, I’ve had a few…..’
Al P slightly the worse for wear...
August 24th, 2024 17:57 - Music of the heart (Sorenbarrett)
Assuming you mean close relationships, Soren they are always dynamic in my...
August 24th, 2024 16:26 - Have you ever seen a green flower? (Elias H.F.)
Neat and very much worth the read.
Welcome to MPS I hope you enjoy...
August 24th, 2024 16:16 - Woof, Woof! (Orchidee)
A digression from your obsession with your rodents which sends me into a...
August 24th, 2024 06:10 - Another Friday Morning. (Goldfinch60)
Andy – it feels (allowing for different game, different time) like Vitai...
August 24th, 2024 05:54 - My fitbit (NafisaSB)
Each to their own, Safina. Your poem is so clear, so descriptive that it...
August 24th, 2024 01:07 - Homework (Tony36)
My school days a very longtime ago, but.....seems not much has changed.
A...
August 23rd, 2024 17:54 - .~` Just One Glance `~. Sonnet (Thad Wilk)
Not much into love poetry, as you may have gathered by my absence and/or...
August 23rd, 2024 17:47 - Meltdown (Tristan Robert Lange)
Slightly more than a dissociative spell then?
I must say your write plus...
August 23rd, 2024 17:07 - The Ashes of Enlightenment (Prasun Goswami)
As a metaphor for willful ignorance burned books (yes it has happened,...
August 23rd, 2024 07:45 - Roots (Sorenbarrett)
Well put Soren. But let’s hope that at least some see the perhaps...
August 23rd, 2024 07:36 - Good Shopping. (Goldfinch60)
Dunno why you don\'t do it all online - you only have to get rid of the...
August 23rd, 2024 07:22 - Do Not Entice Us with Your World (Leni Marlina)
A measured poem, rich in detail.
Yes your focus is on the many...
August 23rd, 2024 07:14 - Temporal Lobe (Teddy.15)
I\'m going - doncha know it is wrong to make fun of the afflicted, Teddy?...
August 23rd, 2024 03:02 - For My Granddaughter on Her First Birthday & Before He Got Broken (Neville)
Yes, anywhere now - Thanks for the reminder, Neville.
These two went...
August 23rd, 2024 02:57 - Hide Yourself (Dev Parth)
Polished , neat and direct to me. I like that mode, but know I must...
August 22nd, 2024 17:50 - ~. pigeons ( haiku ) (Thad Wilk)
pigeon pie dinner
site cleared for the good of all
crap on roses...
August 22nd, 2024 17:42 - Gone The Summer (Cassie58)
A mild case of SAD: Seasonal Affective Disorder?
‘Tis a pity you must...
August 22nd, 2024 17:22 - In the Name of Peace (Prasun Goswami)
Great write, but with respect to content, not something I care to comment...
August 22nd, 2024 08:44 - Lurking in the Shadows (M.E.M.)
Boo!
August 22nd, 2024 08:38 - what if i die ????? (Sheta)
It\'s funny - when I was quite young , I used to worry about death a lot....
August 22nd, 2024 08:34 - Why? (Rrodriguez)
Don\'t delude yourself into expecting answers - just keep...
August 22nd, 2024 08:21 - A Walk On The Moors. (Goldfinch60)
Many thanks Andy - this is the only way I\'m ever going to experience...
August 22nd, 2024 08:10 - Profitable Pleadings (Orchidee)
From your title, I feel this is a plea when the plate comes round...but is...
August 22nd, 2024 08:04 - Senior\'s day (NafisaSB)
You can afford to be a day late when a Senior.... no more schedules ,...
August 22nd, 2024 07:55 - About to Be Forgot (Neville)
Probably for the best............................
August 22nd, 2024 07:47 - Right or wrong (Sorenbarrett)
The eye of the beholder well versed there, Sorern.
August 22nd, 2024 07:40 - `~ Grandpa Tell Me Why (Thad Wilk)
G\'day Thad,
I reckon he has now had a hairdo, a tint and is right now...
August 21st, 2024 06:57 - Dawn\'s Full Moon. (Goldfinch60)
Wot - a new rhymer has entered the ranks. Stiff competition by the...
August 21st, 2024 02:30 - Water (NafisaSB)
The promise, apparently is that as the world heats more evaporation and...
August 20th, 2024 23:49 - Corporate (Bella Shepard)
That was effort well expended (my small suggestion, I mean! 🙂)
Bella...
August 20th, 2024 19:07 - Tin Cups And Shacks (Garth Rakumakoe)
Poverty porn tourism?
August 20th, 2024 18:43 - Foreigner (Garth Rakumakoe)
Such a window into the experience of so many removed from their own...
August 20th, 2024 18:34 - A Co-Write With Shakespeare (Teddy.15)
Mustn\'t do this too often Teddy - it\'s too disturbing - especially when...
August 20th, 2024 08:05 - Not what it seems (Sorenbarrett)
Depravation then hallucination in a few short lines. Richly detailed hard...
August 20th, 2024 07:54 - Torpedoes (Maplespal)
You\'ve cracked the fact, and made it real that this happens more...
August 20th, 2024 07:48 - Apology (Thoughtless)
Might be poking fun now, but there\'s tragedy lurking in those seventeen...
August 20th, 2024 07:41 - Long Distance (Cassie58)
Oh Cassie your word pictures are so rich and here I\'m very keen to know...
August 20th, 2024 07:34 - Fairs (Tony36)
Yes - though I doubt sideshow alley is anything like it was....
Bought...
August 20th, 2024 07:30 - New Freedoms to Roam .. & Dissent (Neville)
Looks like once she rids herself of all that gear, she knows where she\'s...
August 20th, 2024 02:43 - All Was Well Once More. (Goldfinch60)
You know why it was a good day in the end? Because you\'re Andy, and...
August 20th, 2024 02:24 - A gentle presence (ᴷᵉᶻᵉˣˣᵉ)
A horse rider? A skill you have for life. Andyour poem, simple and clear,...
August 20th, 2024 02:15 - Memories (Sheta)
They are a mixed bag, aren\'t they? But the sad ones get easier over the...
August 20th, 2024 02:07 - Learn (Bella Shepard)
I try, Bella - Thanks once more.
August 19th, 2024 19:56 - ~. The Old Timer .~ (Thad Wilk)
\"You can\'t ever beat Father Time I find,
just enjoy your life and pay...
August 19th, 2024 17:01 - This is Rhetorical (M.E.M.)
I\'m not an advocate for absolute selfishness every time, but an...
August 19th, 2024 16:53 - If Looks Could Kill (Neville)
Feels like an old master I saw in a gallery somewhere, but cannot...
August 19th, 2024 16:48 - Learn (Bella Shepard)
I have and I do, but confess to be a little slack at times, so a gentle...
August 19th, 2024 16:35 - The Unfinished House of Stone (Maplespal)
Up there with all other explanations i\'ve ever heard.
Neat simple...
August 19th, 2024 06:36 - The universal (Lorenz)
In my old armchair an even older occupant who has greater truth, more...
August 18th, 2024 16:58 - An Ode to Sunday (Teddy.15)
Got to call out the set builders, but they won’t come out on a...
August 18th, 2024 08:17 - CLOSE OF DAY (Michael Edwards)
Great to see the pastoral theme back again Michael, but I do like the...
August 18th, 2024 08:02 - Goner (Zhangyuyouyu)
You say on your Public Profile that you are new to poetry and need some...
August 18th, 2024 07:35 - Understanding Songs. (Goldfinch60)
Well put, Andy. But there were also screamers right through the sixties,...
August 18th, 2024 07:21 - You, Me and My Dog .. and Blame It on Saint Marlo (Neville)
Zummerzet where the Zider apples grow....
Saint Malo - Got the title...
August 18th, 2024 07:06 - knight (Sheta)
Charge!😊....... please!
August 18th, 2024 06:55 - A mother\'s grief (Juliette72)
There are many anti war poems. Yours gets to the core in a very authentic...
August 18th, 2024 06:52 - ()
August 17th, 2024 17:30 - ()
Pirates with rhythm.
August 17th, 2024 17:29 - Yesterday (Sorenbarrett)
The passage of time Soren, modifies,and sometimes, grows into maturity.
I...
August 17th, 2024 05:52 - Making Green & Reflex (Neville)
Nah that\'s not right - them greens in chapter one weren\'t properly...
August 17th, 2024 02:40 - Blessing of Peace (Orchidee)
That is wonderfully short and direct, orchi with wishes even a heathen...
August 17th, 2024 02:30 - Light (MendedFences27)
Should be the world\'s Mission Statement.
Well put, Phil.
August 16th, 2024 22:34 - ~> On This Moonlit Beach, (Thad Wilk)
You incurable romantic, you.
August 16th, 2024 16:55 - IBERIBE ON THE STREETS (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke)
I’m heteronormative myself but feel that was just the luck of the...
August 16th, 2024 07:15 - Why Women Weren’t Safe (Dev Parth)
A worthwhile project, this one. Not only have you made clear in your...
August 16th, 2024 06:52 - Tigers Tearing (Dan Williams)
Grim, mate.
August 16th, 2024 02:25 - The Great Grey Beast. (Goldfinch60)
Sweet times past, I\'m afraid. Great evocation, Andy.
PS: Get any...
August 16th, 2024 02:21 - No One But Us Ghosts & a Haiku - Woken by Doves (Neville)
how lucky I am
how loud our morning arrives
bloody cockatoo..
Appears...
August 16th, 2024 02:12 - The Student? (Dan Williams)
\"illusion of liberty\" Does it for me, Dan. You really don\'t have to...
August 16th, 2024 01:17 - An Ode to Heartache (Tristan Robert Lange)
Her emotions are so overwhelming that tight control is the only way she...
August 15th, 2024 18:26 - Misunderstood (Cassie58)
A wonderfully polished piece with a great message, Cassie.
After the...
August 15th, 2024 17:56 - Canal Cyanide. (Goldfinch60)
Just go for a stroll by your river Andy and all will be well....😇
August 15th, 2024 07:36
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