Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave
- Emo: Journey of Resilience (Kholland1988)
Notice of absence? Sorry one poem here reduced you to exhaustion....
February 17th, 2024 19:07 - Most Blessed Cursing (Gary Edward Geraci)
I always look at your stuff with interest, Gary, but I believe here the...
February 17th, 2024 18:44 - NO LONGER SCARLET (Twizzle48)
See my entry to your first piece - Add \'engage\'.
February 17th, 2024 18:34 - We didn\'t build these streets for crazy people (Jaxxie)
Such a picture of some streets I\'ve walked down in my time....
February 17th, 2024 05:44 - Identity (Doggerel Dave)
You\'ve exceeded yourself, Sir Orchi Non Sequitur here to totally confuse...
February 17th, 2024 04:01 - Answer Phone. (Goldfinch60)
Perhaps someone is having a ball,
But they may not be your kids at all...
February 17th, 2024 03:38 - All the Wrong Buttons (Neville)
Come on Doc - is this a diagnosis?
February 17th, 2024 03:25 - Why Not Just Call it a Day (Neville)
Not fading away there, are you Neville?
February 16th, 2024 20:55 - Winter Snow (Jerry Reynolds)
How the hell in four short picturesque lines do you manage to throw in...
February 16th, 2024 19:27 - Choices (Sorenbarrett)
Solid build there, Soren. capped with the last four lines of which the...
February 16th, 2024 19:21 - A Bizarre Naked Dance (Aloo Denish Obiero)
If you delete all the embarrassment, then great fun for the punch...
February 16th, 2024 19:08 - I AM AFRICA (Aloo Denish Obiero)
As Parisab above, plus the hope that Africa is not beset by fresh...
February 16th, 2024 18:59 - Fresh Coffee? (Goldfinch60)
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Well that finally settles that then Dr Crippen. I\'ve...
February 15th, 2024 21:10 - How Many More Must Die? (Accidental Poet)
Seems size isn\'t everything.... one of the two biggest countries in the...
February 15th, 2024 07:36 - Apathy Rules Okay (Neville)
If life was once ânasty, brutish and shortâ - today we can thank...
February 15th, 2024 07:17 - Insurance (2781)
Bushrangers came and went.... but their spirit lives on.....
February 15th, 2024 07:03 - Prevarication (Sorenbarrett)
I\'d give both an equal rating, Soren. Circumstances dictate...
February 15th, 2024 00:34 - Rapture of my Heart (Teddy.15)
Quite possibly a good enough excuse, Teddy...... đ!!!
February 14th, 2024 07:23 - No Comment (Neville)
To hell with it - there\'s too much of this about - economic conditions...
February 14th, 2024 07:17 - You know Val? (Orchidee)
Yeh - I got the thought,, wrapped it up ready to send, but then what about...
February 14th, 2024 07:10 - Pyracantha Battle. (Goldfinch60)
This hasn\'t impinged upon my current knowledge base, Andy (can\'t you...
February 13th, 2024 07:30 - Dante and I (Teddy.15)
I feel I should know Dante\'s work (which I don\'t) in order to fully...
February 13th, 2024 07:12 - Snow Ghost (Bella Shepard)
Already has been highlighted that final stanza Bella, so all I can do is...
February 12th, 2024 07:46 - Two Sisters (Neville)
đ¤ŁToo much Neville - reminded me of the old \"Where\'s the soap?\" joke...
February 12th, 2024 07:24 - Prophets and Losses (Tom Dylan)
You\'ve lightened up my evening with your whimsy, Tom. Ready for a sound...
February 12th, 2024 07:17 - Dragonfly (Sorenbarrett)
I\'m enraptured by a dragonfly when I rarely see them, Soren. And...
February 12th, 2024 07:14 - Comforting Creator - Ye Olde Prayers series (18) (Orchidee)
Same with hymns? Do you reach maturity at 18, or must you wait \'til 21?
February 9th, 2024 08:00 - Senryu to Opera (Teddy.15)
For some reason this reminds me of Milan - such a contradiction....
February 9th, 2024 07:56 - The Late Great Hieronymus Bosch (Neville)
So the CV of Hieronymus is free public knowledge, Neville, images of his...
February 9th, 2024 07:51 - And It Rained. (Goldfinch60)
Didn\'t know you lived on the east coast of Australia, Andy......You are...
February 9th, 2024 07:13 - Altered Images (Neville)
đThe brain (and I\'m fully aware that I\'m trying to teach grannie to...
February 8th, 2024 03:53 - Lighten Our Darkness - Ye Olde Prayers series (17) (Orchidee)
\'17\' ??? - never ending is it: on to eternity via the scenic route?
February 8th, 2024 03:40 - Chinese (2781)
Defamed they are - constantly.
A self fulfilling prophesy on the...
February 8th, 2024 00:07 - The Friday Boys. (Goldfinch60)
This makes me laugh in the best possible way, Andy. It is so complete -...
February 7th, 2024 22:01 - A Boy from another Gaza (Keith Jeffries)
Born 1941 East End of London - the Anderson shelter - I slept there....
February 7th, 2024 21:39 - Ouroboros (Neville)
Oh you mean
...
February 7th, 2024 08:03 - Hope Of Help 3 (Orchidee)
Three times? Ain\'t no one listening? đ!!!
February 7th, 2024 07:40 - KNOWING AND WAITING (Nephilim56)
Deeply felt I feel, but deeply relevant to us all. A universal experience...
February 7th, 2024 07:29 - The Clear-Out (Tom Dylan)
Wish I had your courage, Tom, but do heed the salutary warning however...
February 7th, 2024 07:19 - Tares (Sorenbarrett)
As Teddy above - even I managed the imagery and metaphor - you pinned the...
February 7th, 2024 07:07 - Butterflies are rare (Teddy.15)
Upstairs somewhere you said you were a \'doomsday writer\', Teddy, I...
February 7th, 2024 07:03 - The View from Coal Country (JBentley)
Bumped into you on the poetic parade today.
And despite my misgivings...
February 6th, 2024 19:45 - Everything has a price (Sorenbarrett)
That soul, Soren - it\'s a tribute to your poetic skill that you almost...
February 6th, 2024 08:56 - The One Dreams are Made of (Teddy.15)
You tell a good yarn, Teddy. As I read with one side of my brain (never...
February 6th, 2024 08:51 - Days of Wine And...... (Orchidee)
Don\'t get which you are humouring....KP or Fido..........
February 6th, 2024 08:40 - At The End of The Line (Neville)
You are only causing confusion here Neville; the end of the line is a full...
February 6th, 2024 08:33 - Initially Speaking (Tom Dylan)
Yeh -same deal here, only in reverse, if you get my drift...
February 6th, 2024 08:24 - The mozzie (2781)
Empathised with every line.... My old mate was the huntsman, although both...
February 5th, 2024 07:14 - Crowned Creator (Orchidee)
When you own the real estate, you\'ve got the power......
February 5th, 2024 07:09 - Bigger Picture (Teddy.15)
You tell us it was a bus, but i believe it might have been a carriage for...
February 5th, 2024 06:57 - Monday morning office... (Tom Dylan)
All things pass, my friend...all things pass. One day in the distant...
February 5th, 2024 06:43 - Spillage (Neville)
Difficult to determine precisely just what is the situation...
February 5th, 2024 06:32 - Against all we want to believe (Sorenbarrett)
An odd process, but you\'ve got its essence, I believe Soren. After its...
February 5th, 2024 06:26 - Michael Jordanâs Boots (Doggerel Dave)
Tool:
\"An often disliked person who screws people over instead of using...
February 4th, 2024 17:28 - Going Green. (Chris Duffy)
PS: Last line coulda been \'greens\' - just remember to munch up your...
February 4th, 2024 04:44 - Paraclete\'s Presence - Ye Olde Prayers series (16) (Orchidee)
Definitely going to seek medical attention after that second stanza.
February 4th, 2024 04:21 - Going Green. (Chris Duffy)
Wonderfully surrealistic world you live in, Chris. neva mind - it won\'t...
February 4th, 2024 04:17 - Michael Jordanâs Boots (Doggerel Dave)
I do - but are you travelling incognito in order to evade detection during...
February 4th, 2024 03:40 - Without (Peto)
I may have mentioned somewhere that I\'m not very fond of love poetry...
February 3rd, 2024 20:20 - senryu to Gaza (Teddy.15)
The contrast between the picture and the poem was a meaningful choice - an...
February 3rd, 2024 20:05 - The Gagging of Gaza (Neville)
Neville - I\'m not sure you are OK. Just a feeling.....
February 3rd, 2024 16:47 - From time to time (Sorenbarrett)
I\'m not skilled with metaphor, as I may have mentioned before once or...
February 3rd, 2024 05:10 - Lost in the light (Tallisman)
Thanks for your return, T. (And for me a rhymer always wins the day)
A...
February 3rd, 2024 01:05 - Email Gmail (2781)
Do the best you can - no one can ask anymore of you than that.....except...
February 2nd, 2024 17:34 - Well Isnât That Something? (Teddy.15)
Well then, a preemptive Merry Birthday (I like \'Merry\' rather than...
February 2nd, 2024 17:26 - Poor Punxsutawney Phil (Accidental Poet)
Wot or who is a groundhog and how the hell did he end up with a...
February 2nd, 2024 17:04 - The Gagging of Gaza (Neville)
There\'s nothing I can add to the last three entries above, ignoring for...
February 2nd, 2024 16:38 - Broken (Tallisman)
What\'s up, Tallisman? Where are you?
Distance is a good...
February 1st, 2024 21:57 - Immortal Music. (Goldfinch60)
You\'ve got me. Now, whenever I hear a piece of music (esp. jazz or...
February 1st, 2024 07:40 - From The Underside Of The Wild Roses (Teddy.15)
I\'m still pondering the title - haven\'t got to the main meal...
February 1st, 2024 07:32 - Poetry Competition (Tom Dylan)
I\'m not sure I\'d like to go to one of your poetry groups, Tom. Much...
February 1st, 2024 07:16 - Dare to Stray (Neville)
Premier advice there, Sir - analyze, decide and move on.... Neat...
February 1st, 2024 07:01 - Help For Humans - Ye Olde Prayers series (14) (Orchidee)
This Master - he\'s deaf as a post, ain\'t he?
February 1st, 2024 06:56 - Radicalisation Is Just Another Hate Definition (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
That one deserves more recognition than it will quite possibly get -...
January 31st, 2024 05:52 - One of the Lads (Tom Dylan)
Cracked that one, mate.... machismo such a farce.
Oh so well said....
January 31st, 2024 05:44 - Service Shown - Ye Olde Prayers series (13) (Orchidee)
I\'ve probably missed the point, but could not companionship involve a...
January 31st, 2024 05:38 - Just a Few Odd Diary Notes (Neville)
I have a a sneaking suspicion that some of your lines might be very well...
January 31st, 2024 05:34 - A Lesson Learned (Tom Dylan)
They\'ve told you the truth above, but with you I always feel that you...
January 30th, 2024 22:12 - When I Found Myself on eBay (Neville)
I do tend to agree..... Amazon (damn \'em)are very swift, whereas with...
January 30th, 2024 21:12 - The Edimpost (by two) (Michael Edwards)
The road to nowhere is precisely the way we all are going, I...
January 30th, 2024 21:04 - A Mantra of Life & Death (Tom Dylan)
It\'s the way you tell \'em, Tom - had me in to the very end.
I would...
January 30th, 2024 20:56 - Trash to treasure (Sorenbarrett)
Because much of that is bull shit (the \'Many think my poems are trash\'),...
January 30th, 2024 20:34 - Mortal-Hamas-ment (Israeli Shout) (Friend of Israel) (AuburnScribbler)
HI Ben - Is \'please do stay everyone\' a typo or intentional? Either way,...
January 30th, 2024 20:12 - Work Ethic (Accidental Poet)
Hats off for being so prolific versifying, AP. Is that your work ethic...
January 29th, 2024 22:23 - My Advice To Poets (+2) (Kurt Philip Behm)
\' The First Cut ...\' does it for me. No message, then form, rhythm,...
January 29th, 2024 00:15 - Diversity of Thought (Bella Shepard)
\"Ability\" = courage, because sometimes (not very often) a concept/idea...
January 28th, 2024 18:35 - When it Gets That Bad it Must be Broken (Neville)
Painful reminder of a wrong place wrong time situation I\'d like to keep a...
January 28th, 2024 18:10 - Administrative Malfunction (Quemis)
A breakdown? You broke it down skilfully. Technology gone...
January 28th, 2024 17:59 - Poetic Injustice (Alan R)
I\'m full of admiration for the time effort and tenacity which must have...
January 28th, 2024 00:37 - I\'m Closing The Books (Tom Dylan)
You are a change agent, Tom. A random phrase and you burst through into a...
January 27th, 2024 21:36 - No good deed goes unpunished (Sorenbarrett)
The rhymingâs great me old mate,
Not always easy to do;
It takes hard...
January 27th, 2024 18:19 - Can\'t argue (2781)
Got my attention - good one. More like this and you have a devoted reader
January 27th, 2024 17:40 - Now look.... woof! (Orchidee)
Arise, Sir Orchi Non Sequitur - off your knees; embrace the truth.....
January 27th, 2024 17:11 - Now look.... woof! (Orchidee)
This is absolute rubbish, orchi, and you know it. A bigger load of...
January 27th, 2024 05:16 - The Moon Looks Down. (Goldfinch60)
Enjoy it while you can, Andy - it is all going to be dug up...
January 26th, 2024 18:23 - Must Be Seven AM (Accidental Poet)
I think that hound has you by the tail......no, sorry he\'d got the...
January 26th, 2024 06:52 - Fruit Bats (Gray0328)
Campaign for fruit bats is very much needed - in some parts they are...
January 26th, 2024 06:39 - How Many More Planets (Neville)
Maybe one or twoâŚ.but itâs a very local issue â the Universe wonât...
January 26th, 2024 06:28 - \"9/11\" (Gray0328)
Tragic. Innocent people die in war.
January 26th, 2024 02:00 - A Songbird\'s Final Flight (GeekSusie)
âsomehow I never noticed you before today, Iâm afraid to sayâ
Joan...
January 25th, 2024 17:24
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