Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave
- This is Rhetorical (M.E.M.)
I\'m not an advocate for absolute selfishness every time, but an...
August 19th, 2024 16:53 - If Looks Could Kill (Neville)
Feels like an old master I saw in a gallery somewhere, but cannot...
August 19th, 2024 16:48 - Learn (Bella Shepard)
I have and I do, but confess to be a little slack at times, so a gentle...
August 19th, 2024 16:35 - The Unfinished House of Stone (Maplespal)
Up there with all other explanations i\'ve ever heard.
Neat simple...
August 19th, 2024 06:36 - The universal (Lorenz)
In my old armchair an even older occupant who has greater truth, more...
August 18th, 2024 16:58 - An Ode to Sunday (Teddy.15)
Got to call out the set builders, but they won’t come out on a...
August 18th, 2024 08:17 - CLOSE OF DAY (Michael Edwards)
Great to see the pastoral theme back again Michael, but I do like the...
August 18th, 2024 08:02 - Goner (Zhangyuyouyu)
You say on your Public Profile that you are new to poetry and need some...
August 18th, 2024 07:35 - Understanding Songs. (Goldfinch60)
Well put, Andy. But there were also screamers right through the sixties,...
August 18th, 2024 07:21 - You, Me and My Dog .. and Blame It on Saint Marlo (Neville)
Zummerzet where the Zider apples grow....
Saint Malo - Got the title...
August 18th, 2024 07:06 - knight (Sheta)
Charge!😊....... please!
August 18th, 2024 06:55 - A mother\'s grief (Juliette72)
There are many anti war poems. Yours gets to the core in a very authentic...
August 18th, 2024 06:52 - ()
August 17th, 2024 17:30 - ()
Pirates with rhythm.
August 17th, 2024 17:29 - Yesterday (Sorenbarrett)
The passage of time Soren, modifies,and sometimes, grows into maturity.
I...
August 17th, 2024 05:52 - Making Green & Reflex (Neville)
Nah that\'s not right - them greens in chapter one weren\'t properly...
August 17th, 2024 02:40 - Blessing of Peace (Orchidee)
That is wonderfully short and direct, orchi with wishes even a heathen...
August 17th, 2024 02:30 - Light (MendedFences27)
Should be the world\'s Mission Statement.
Well put, Phil.
August 16th, 2024 22:34 - ~> On This Moonlit Beach, (Thad Wilk)
You incurable romantic, you.
August 16th, 2024 16:55 - IBERIBE ON THE STREETS (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke)
I’m heteronormative myself but feel that was just the luck of the...
August 16th, 2024 07:15 - Why Women Weren’t Safe (Dev Parth)
A worthwhile project, this one. Not only have you made clear in your...
August 16th, 2024 06:52 - Tigers Tearing (Dan Williams)
Grim, mate.
August 16th, 2024 02:25 - The Great Grey Beast. (Goldfinch60)
Sweet times past, I\'m afraid. Great evocation, Andy.
PS: Get any...
August 16th, 2024 02:21 - No One But Us Ghosts & a Haiku - Woken by Doves (Neville)
how lucky I am
how loud our morning arrives
bloody cockatoo..
Appears...
August 16th, 2024 02:12 - The Student? (Dan Williams)
\"illusion of liberty\" Does it for me, Dan. You really don\'t have to...
August 16th, 2024 01:17 - An Ode to Heartache (Tristan Robert Lange)
Her emotions are so overwhelming that tight control is the only way she...
August 15th, 2024 18:26 - Misunderstood (Cassie58)
A wonderfully polished piece with a great message, Cassie.
After the...
August 15th, 2024 17:56 - Canal Cyanide. (Goldfinch60)
Just go for a stroll by your river Andy and all will be well....😇
August 15th, 2024 07:36 - free (Sheta)
Yeh - You once gave me a like (along with many others if I read the user...
August 15th, 2024 07:11 - Olympics (2781)
Beyond me.......
August 15th, 2024 05:22 - A taste of honey (Sorenbarrett)
In \'love\' and passion a sting is always a possibility......
August 15th, 2024 05:15 - More Heritage Down the Pan & Fuck Ann Summers (Neville)
Well now, this took a bit of working through Neville.
My local post...
August 15th, 2024 02:36 - Politics over nature (EvenwheniLie)
\'all the actual important stuff is off the table\' - not only masked but...
August 14th, 2024 18:24 - Birth of another tortured artist (Kenny O\'Donnell)
And they do - in great numbers......
Robust writing I enjoyed very much.
August 14th, 2024 18:09 - I went under Bliss (Kenny O\'Donnell)
Agreed. If that\'s death (and it\'s quite high on my list of possibles)...
August 14th, 2024 18:00 - ~. Why Is My Bowl Empty Bro? (Thad Wilk)
G\'day Thad.
Frequently told pit bulls are lovely dogs…. It’s just...
August 14th, 2024 17:38 - Temporary love (Natalie Heisey)
What is this \'love\' of which you write?
August 14th, 2024 17:11 - The Planet (Tristan Robert Lange)
Message received. Can you get home? Clearly we won\'t be returning.
August 14th, 2024 16:49 - What More Could You Want? (Thomas W Case)
A richly textured life which doesn\'t need laundering, and is all the more...
August 14th, 2024 16:41 - The Joy Of Old Age. (Goldfinch60)
\'Joy\' is a little over the top, but in a more general sense, I\'m pretty...
August 14th, 2024 06:48 - AT THE BEAUTIFUL GATE (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke)
This is nothing I can relate to on a personal level, but I do hope to try...
August 14th, 2024 06:40 - The markets (2781)
Got that, Mate.
August 14th, 2024 06:36 - Sex and the over Seventies (Saxon Crow)
Yes, Teddy - definitely over to you - he won\'t even acknowledge me....
August 14th, 2024 06:27 - Bitter Sweet Springs (Neville)
Corporate greed over environmental stress - don\'t get me going, but...
August 14th, 2024 06:19 - The 1990s were my 1960s. (Tom Dylan)
A contribution towards grater ( yes - it grates, but not too much) ...
August 14th, 2024 06:14 - A bad rap(tor)? (Sorenbarrett)
As one argument for Nature to be left to sort itself, without mankind’s...
August 14th, 2024 06:07 - GREEN MEANS GROW (Kelvin Kofi Apenteng Bamfo)
I know nothing , I repeat nothing about International Youth day: but what...
August 14th, 2024 05:59 - Familiarity of the nonexistent (Sorenbarrett)
Those dreams, Soren….. You’ve just hauled memories back of tormented...
August 13th, 2024 17:50 - ~> Halloween Demon BAT! (Thad Wilk)
I just feel it to be a little early to make any hasty decisions, Thad. You...
August 13th, 2024 17:29 - Because My Darling It all Belongs to You (Teddy.15)
That is a close impassioned tribute Teddy that I know your husband will...
August 13th, 2024 07:37 - Final Word Count (Tom Dylan)
Your ’Notice of absence’ plus your uncharacteristic pin is making me...
August 13th, 2024 06:40 - A Flower Without Soil (Thomas W Case)
Excellent
August 13th, 2024 01:57 - Clocked (Neville)
I\'m unsure if you find that pleasing....or not, Neville.
August 13th, 2024 01:53 - flowers without light are flowers that dont grow (MR.apocalypse)
Hard to know what to write, how to empathise.
Please, I hope you find a...
August 13th, 2024 01:49 - Home Another Way. (Goldfinch60)
Serendipitous satnav.
August 13th, 2024 01:13 - A GNATS CHUFF (Michael Edwards)
It\'s like old times - happy days, Michael.
Like your minimalist style,...
August 13th, 2024 01:09 - ~> Stupid Cupid! - form Monotetra (Thad Wilk)
Don\'t you be kidding me, Thad. You did make it up in order to get five...
August 12th, 2024 18:13 - Lo and Behold! (MendedFences27)
A thousand ways indeed....🥀I did feel for him, of course...
Can\'t say...
August 12th, 2024 17:57 - Firefly Date Night (Bella Shepard)
The richness of this as an experience, the final disclosure - it leaves me...
August 12th, 2024 17:47 - Housing Wreck. (Goldfinch60)
Let me know when Kevin McCloud has you in focus -promise I\'ll watch.....
August 12th, 2024 08:49 - The Object and Outcome of Dreaming Alone (Neville)
Cracked it, haven\'t you...What one is left to wonder is how a man and...
August 12th, 2024 08:29 - A Special Breed (Tom Dylan)
A story told as it is Tom, with just the right amount of pathos.
I really...
August 12th, 2024 08:21 - Abomination And Desolation (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Well you have your finger on the pulse, now. Just let\'s hope it doesn\'t...
August 11th, 2024 18:48 - ~> Snow White, Glock And Creepy! (Thad Wilk)
G\'day, Thad. Were the Brothers really that Grimm because they missed...
August 11th, 2024 18:19 - White hair (NafisaSB)
You stay with it Girl - I\'m sure your hair has texture and grace.
August 11th, 2024 08:13 - The Devil\'s In Town (Teddy.15)
Nah - leave the rhyming to the pedestrian proles. You, Teddy are more at...
August 11th, 2024 07:54 - Point of view (Sorenbarrett)
Yes, precisely Soren. Perception is never neutral, always dependent on POV...
August 11th, 2024 06:50 - Unrealistic Inclusion (Dan Williams)
The sad mess that is human existence today, both social and...
August 11th, 2024 01:44 - ~> Rapunzel And Jack Frost - form Monotetra (Thad Wilk)
I take it this was no open marriage, then Thad?
A pity the way it turned...
August 10th, 2024 19:42 - Behind the Sofa (AuburnScribbler)
A tale complete unto itself. Thanks AS. Good fun.
My partner has a cat....
August 10th, 2024 19:25 - Our Favourite Place Once More. (Goldfinch60)
You must have skills at packing and unpacking that I have yet to achieve,...
August 10th, 2024 06:45 - Swan\'s Lake (Teddy.15)
Richness and diversity - anything other than turning outward and...
August 10th, 2024 06:40 - Darker than black (Sorenbarrett)
The pain of separation... But when sleep and the nonexistent possibilities...
August 10th, 2024 06:30 - War, Who Is It Good For? (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Too true, but it stimulates the economy and keeps arms manufacturers happy
August 10th, 2024 01:59 - Rituals (Neville)
A new Kenyan dance, Neville?
August 10th, 2024 01:56 - Now lookie here.... (Orchidee)
That rat - \'twas a white rabbit and you are on the way to...
August 10th, 2024 01:51 - One in all, all in one (Sorenbarrett)
I think that\'s definitely chemistry. Or perhaps complementary. A well...
August 9th, 2024 21:22 - Unspoken Words (Rebellion_in_sanity)
Story of my life (well certain patches of it).
I\'m going to fave this...
August 9th, 2024 21:11 - Deep Sixed (MendedFences27)
\"parting is such sweet sorrow\"
Holidays are so brief - but I found...
August 9th, 2024 19:15 - ~> \"Redneck\" Rhymin\' Pickup Lines! (Thad Wilk)
You’ve got to take a rest old son. After being flooded with wins you...
August 9th, 2024 19:01 - You\'re Just Too Good To Be True (Teddy.15)
No gain out of staying round here then, is there....... 😂🙃?
August 9th, 2024 07:33 - In Spirit (Cassie58)
Swung through that in no time, Cassie; the smoothness of the ride was...
August 9th, 2024 07:28 - Be Still..... (Saxon Crow)
Hey Sax - you are missed. But when you come back, why not one of your...
August 9th, 2024 07:20 - Old fashioned political correctness (Sorenbarrett)
Soren, Soren, Soren – you know this is not what the whole debate,...
August 9th, 2024 07:11 - Maybe To Be Continued (Neville)
This is becoming a habit, Neville.
This is me showing concern:
Are...
August 9th, 2024 01:26 - Perfect Integration (Cassie58)
Neva tried a Haiku before....So....
Although I don’t know
The...
August 9th, 2024 00:04 - Steaming (Tom Dylan)
Inefficient, polluting, disgusting.
I still love \'em.
August 8th, 2024 17:36 - Brokenhearted Charities (MendedFences27)
Look at how technology and \'Love\' keep the economy stimulated.
Can you...
August 8th, 2024 17:28 - Squeaks (Dan Williams)
Where else do these sheep get their information from these days?
I’ve...
August 8th, 2024 06:59 - Betrayal by you (Natalie Heisey)
Got to realise not everyone in the world is perfect.... and perhaps try to...
August 8th, 2024 06:17 - Comforting Concerns (Orchidee)
Glad you can take comfort, orchi.
August 8th, 2024 06:03 - We Don\'t Need Kings and Queens (Rebellion_in_sanity)
Absolutely - to use the term \'democracy\' is a farce in most States in...
August 8th, 2024 05:58 - Fading Into The Night (Rebellion_in_sanity)
Contributing, at least in part, to my reservations re the Dylan Thomas...
August 8th, 2024 05:48 - BEAUTIFUL TRAP (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke)
So what is your advice for young men, beset with spontaneous erections,...
August 8th, 2024 05:32 - What Makes us Superior? (Maplespal)
Not sure what you are saying with this. Superior? Mankind has made a right...
August 8th, 2024 05:27 - Taking A Break (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Good work - you are dealing with what matters.
August 8th, 2024 05:23 - Steaming (Tom Dylan)
I am that man with (perhaps a little) grey hair. Pleased to meet you...
August 8th, 2024 05:19 - As Sure As God Made Little Green Apples (Neville)
Talking legislation here: Right to die? Dying with dignity.
So for...
August 8th, 2024 03:55 - Blue Song at Night (MendedFences27)
Age old tradition - do it in chapters, Phil.
I always find it...
August 7th, 2024 18:13 - ~~> Pin Head (Thad Wilk)
You trying to make it difficult for me ‘n get me to shut up, ain’t...
August 7th, 2024 18:03
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