Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave
- Clean, Clean, Clean (Thomas W Case)
Look here, young man, you got clean away with that one...Can\'t fault it...
June 3rd, 2024 23:28 - Eleven and A Half Minutes (Neville)
So a memoir (with this dedication) is on its way, is it, Neville?
June 3rd, 2024 21:21 - The Purity Patrol (GeekSusie)
Surely there\'s none left................ are there?
June 3rd, 2024 21:17 - Moonlight Sonata. (Goldfinch60)
\"Put another nickel in
In the nickelodeon
All I want is having you
And...
June 3rd, 2024 05:48 - The Year\'s Adieu In Song (Orchidee)
A bit uncharacteristic for you orchi... I hope Alan, from whom we haven\'t...
June 3rd, 2024 05:39 - Do you see what I see? (Poetic Dan)
You\'ve covered a wide range of the themes there Dan, but overall your...
June 3rd, 2024 05:29 - Stars (Teddy.15)
Maybe don\'t come to the antipodes, Teddy - could be dangerous, You would...
June 3rd, 2024 05:20 - Disturbed (TJ7)
Only may be?
June 2nd, 2024 18:15 - Apology (TJ7)
A moderately timed apology would be of more worth than a hastily contrived...
June 2nd, 2024 18:14 - Different Measures (Neville)
Time and distance are quite different in a Newtonian world, aren\'t...
June 2nd, 2024 17:52 - Omnipresent lurch toward authoritarianism... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
\"not only self evident
across these United States of America,
but also...
June 2nd, 2024 17:40 - BMW Rant! (Goldfinch60)
I heard that it was Volvo drivers which other drivers did not...
June 2nd, 2024 08:48 - Descort Vision (Gary Edward Geraci)
Final sentence of your Comment: I have, somewhere between sometimes and...
June 1st, 2024 19:05 - Sandcastles (Cassie58)
A fitting tribute to a brother you so obviously miss, Cassie. A perfect...
June 1st, 2024 18:57 - You Broke Me (13LaurenD)
A \'what makes you stronger\' moral message. Well said.
June 1st, 2024 18:07 - Another Day. (Goldfinch60)
I don\'t know where you keep those \'sun shining brightly\' days - send a...
June 1st, 2024 08:40 - It is What it Is (Neville)
Sounds a bit competitive here, Neville.....
June 1st, 2024 08:25 - There Is An Angel Who Sits Upon My Shoulder Who Goes By The Name Of Death (ThoughtsFromB4)
I truly hope that someone somewhere will gain comfort or understand that...
May 31st, 2024 21:05 - If There Wasn\'t A Price....? (Goldfinch60)
Well writ, Andy.
May 31st, 2024 09:52 - Derbate (2781)
No laughing matter actually. On tenterhooks \'til November and quite...
May 31st, 2024 09:50 - Cooeee! (Orchidee)
It\'s a rumbling, rather regrettably.
May 31st, 2024 09:43 - Alive (Sorenbarrett)
Awareness of life itself - It may be the only one I have.
Great in its...
May 31st, 2024 09:38 - Palms Spring (Teddy.15)
“If you can talk with crowds and keep your virtue,” Some of those...
May 31st, 2024 01:02 - A Walk in the Sun (MendedFences27)
You were potentially at the wrong place, but definitely at the right...
May 31st, 2024 00:48 - Life Boat (M.E.M.)
Feels like a rich in detail allegory - so I hope you are really...
May 30th, 2024 18:57 - Too Long In the Tooth (Neville)
I like to assemble my own take with words I choose, Neville, but:
\"Let...
May 30th, 2024 07:05 - Poor Poet (Teddy.15)
Sometimes Teddy you creep me out a little…. You make odd connections...
May 30th, 2024 06:53 - Love Of My Life Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
Clever and neat, Andy. Never tried an acrostic, and I don\'t think I will...
May 30th, 2024 01:29 - Virtuous Visitation (Orchidee)
Family troubles?
May 30th, 2024 01:27 - Forget Four Letter Words Redux (Plus Bonus....) (Doggerel Dave)
So I go: Thanks Neville - I\'ve now got a list in one place of irritants I...
May 29th, 2024 17:39 - Speak for Them who Cannot (Nah Hannah)
I\'m glad you think so.
May 29th, 2024 07:53 - F----d (Sorenbarrett)
Buggered……. if I know…. Or rather (just asking) why don’t mining...
May 29th, 2024 07:42 - So Very Lightly Hued (Neville)
Hallucinatory write, Neville.
May 29th, 2024 02:53 - A Leap In The Dark (Teddy.15)
Having mildly sociopathic (delete – I’m a wee bit antisocial)...
May 29th, 2024 02:51 - An Empty Space (Cassie58)
Your poem surrounds, encloses that empty space Cassie, and preserves it....
May 28th, 2024 19:35 - What\'s Up?! (Orchidee)
You posed the question \'what\'s up?\'
When I really want to know...
May 28th, 2024 09:04 - That Time of Year Again (Neville)
My partner feeds the birds (I no longer wish to debate this – she does...
May 28th, 2024 08:58 - Shingles Shenanigans (Teddy.15)
Teddy, I’m so sorry to hear that you are still suffering.
I must thank...
May 28th, 2024 08:36 - Covered in a dream (Sorenbarrett)
I have encountered one or two of those freeloaders Soren, but never all at...
May 28th, 2024 08:17 - Spaces (Gary Edward Geraci)
\'many with much, much less, find far more\'. How true - however, for many...
May 27th, 2024 23:28 - Time of Blindness (MendedFences27)
Oh so ethereal but reality impinges.
Good to see you back, MF.
May 27th, 2024 23:21 - Unsolicited Sages (GeekSusie)
Lovely irony. Glad I don\'t do that shit. Don\'t go there..... unless...
May 27th, 2024 17:00 - A load of rubbish! (Orchidee)
There\'s hint in the correspondence above that the three has some special...
May 27th, 2024 06:09 - Osmanthus Fragrans (Samreen Firdaus)
Conventional beauty or attractiveness – nonsense which identifies the...
May 27th, 2024 05:52 - The Poem What I Wrote (Sorry Ernie). (Goldfinch60)
Gives me MORE than a bit, Andy.
Do banks have holidays? No wonder the...
May 27th, 2024 01:34 - Singing In Hindi. (Goldfinch60)
You\'ll find me near the food........
My singing is much like orchi\'s,...
May 26th, 2024 01:32 - Love isn\'t Unconditional (Meera Mere)
Not sure you have discovered what love is beyond a word to be used in a...
May 26th, 2024 00:14 - Congress or Chaos? (GeekSusie)
😅😂🤣Gone beyond anger at the futility.
Same where I live.
Not...
May 26th, 2024 00:07 - Havan For Shivani. (Goldfinch60)
To gladly accept the invitation is definitely neighourberliness at its...
May 25th, 2024 08:04 - The True Nature of Loss (Neville)
Olfactory sensations are for me some of the strongest memory prompts I...
May 25th, 2024 07:51 - It\'s a mystery (Sorenbarrett)
Agreed Soren – but I’ve banged on about history and not taking account...
May 25th, 2024 07:01 - Good Week / Bad Week (Tom Dylan)
This meeting, Tom? Eaters Anonymous?? LOL
May 24th, 2024 18:33 - Cor Meum, Caput Meum (My Heart My Head) (Thomas W Case)
Good Stuff.
May 24th, 2024 02:07 - The Cages (Thomas W Case)
Good Write.
May 24th, 2024 02:06 - Trips to the Cemetery. (Thomas W Case)
Well told.
May 24th, 2024 02:03 - Torrential (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
I\'m full of empathy, Mate - I know precisely, feel precisely as you...
May 24th, 2024 01:58 - Commission Call (Orchidee)
Own up - Who has the evil ploys? Wasn\'t Fido having a day off, was it?
May 24th, 2024 01:49 - Looking Ahead. (Goldfinch60)
Go with the flow, Andy.
May 24th, 2024 01:44 - And That Has Never Changed (Teddy.15)
And you found me on the underside of that glittering orb. What vision...
May 23rd, 2024 15:38 - Journey to Myself (GeekSusie)
And each to their own. Hang in there.
May 23rd, 2024 15:31 - Chips (2781)
Sometime soon.............
May 23rd, 2024 07:02 - From Him To Me (Tom Dylan)
Don\'t wait too long to read it to your Dad. \"maybe one day\" just is too...
May 23rd, 2024 02:30 - General Election Rant! (Goldfinch60)
Consider yourself lucky, Andy. In Oz Federal elections are three years...
May 23rd, 2024 02:22 - Economics (2781)
Economics in its pure form is neutral. But when picked up and used by self...
May 22nd, 2024 20:03 - Smokes (Sorenbarrett)
Memories of my youth, the operative word being lingering. But memories...
May 22nd, 2024 19:50 - An Exceptional Moment (Teddy.15)
A reflection, you reckon, Teddy? But I just cannot picture you sitting...
May 22nd, 2024 19:36 - The Train in Spain Stays Mainly on the Plain (as elsewhere) (Doggerel Dave)
No, right there, Teddy - the smell, the filth and the loss of land.
May 22nd, 2024 00:48 - A Day Out in The Country (Neville)
Buggered up nicely by mass tourism...It\'s everywhere. Your argument, so...
May 22nd, 2024 00:13 - Submerged In The Canals of Venice (Teddy.15)
One of my very favorite holidays – my fortnight’s stay in Venice. On...
May 21st, 2024 19:14 - Universe doesn\'t have to make sense to me or you (Poetic Dan)
I\'ll vote for that relationship (or non relationship) with the universe...
May 21st, 2024 09:32 - A tale with a tail (Sorenbarrett)
Started off easily enough – after all, History (which I revere) is the...
May 21st, 2024 09:14 - Unfinished (Tom Dylan)
“How will I know when its finished?” --- Grammar, Sir, Grammar! Stap...
May 21st, 2024 08:52 - Unstruck (Neville)
4′33″?
May 21st, 2024 08:39 - Just Judgement (Orchidee)
A little lost here - is this a poison prayer directed at unbelievers?
May 21st, 2024 02:22 - To Alca, my cat, who is missing (Bicicletta)
Is cycling your thing (when you are not worried about puss, that is)?
May 21st, 2024 02:07 - Impoverished courtesy scam artists Harvey Specter (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
Sorry to hear of your woes.
I do try to keep up, you know....
May 21st, 2024 02:01 - Tears Of Life. (Goldfinch60)
I suffer from dry eye for which I am forced to use lubricating drops, and...
May 20th, 2024 21:28 - Perfect By Chance (Neville)
Fate? Sorry Neville, not for me. But if luck and a good fit works.......
May 20th, 2024 21:21 - Mockery of Democracy (GeekSusie)
I endorse every word. A shit show par excellence. I could add \'God help...
May 20th, 2024 21:12 - Summer Sun (Tom Dylan)
☀️ ☀️ ☀️ You got your vitamin D, I can\'t understand why...
May 20th, 2024 03:21 - Springtime for the farmer (NafisaSB)
A very pastoral, idyllic view of country life - made a really lovely and...
May 19th, 2024 20:30 - Any moment now the 5th and last will land (Poetic Dan)
Good to know your are still around and seemingly quite productive,...
May 19th, 2024 09:25 - The Nature Of Wales. (Goldfinch60)
“A wonderful trip with Nature.”? This time I have little doubt …....
May 19th, 2024 09:18 - Philosophy of Me (Teddy.15)
You and I have had our differences in, I think, the distant past, but now...
May 19th, 2024 08:50 - Opposition in all things (Sorenbarrett)
As you so rightly say, every good, pleasant phenomenon (all I’m focusing...
May 19th, 2024 08:20 - homeless (Jim56)
Lovely - any reasons or answers, Jim?
May 19th, 2024 08:10 - Look To Infinity. (Goldfinch60)
Nice to see you be able to take infinity, embrace it, feel comfortable...
May 18th, 2024 08:32 - Weeds And Other Such Things (Dandelion.drafts)
A little information about yourself - on your profile page for starters...
May 17th, 2024 20:45 - Art of inovation (Sorenbarrett)
Notes for an art course at least (at very least) four terms long.
I\'m...
May 17th, 2024 20:26 - Portrait of A Wild Garden (Neville)
Procrastination is my middle name......
Plus I have an abiding...
May 17th, 2024 20:09 - Why Wars? (Goldfinch60)
Goof write, Andy. Answers not simple.
Who wants what when and why?
May 17th, 2024 08:20 - A Man With a Bucket and No Hat (Neville)
Missed out on this one first time round.
I challenge the assumption that...
May 17th, 2024 01:27 - Lovelorn Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
Where did that come from, Andy? Not all over with Mary Is it?
May 17th, 2024 01:17 - The Hellfire Satanic Sex Cult (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
There’s far too many of them – only they don’t advertise, but live...
May 16th, 2024 20:31 - In clouds (Sorenbarrett)
Not the first time you’ve used the term ‘herd’ in one of your...
May 16th, 2024 20:18 - Tentacles (2781)
Good write - the structure and rhyme does it for me as does the message....
May 16th, 2024 20:06 - Charting the Heights of Delight (GeekSusie)
Wot precisely was the \'it\' your local paper wrote about? If it was lab...
May 16th, 2024 20:02 - Cartoon Conundrum (GeekSusie)
Could always sing it, of course, in French…… (je ne regrette rien)....
May 15th, 2024 17:22 - Justified (Sorenbarrett)
Each of your lines, Soren in this densely packed poem translates to a red...
May 14th, 2024 19:30 - Raven and I (Teddy.15)
You are certainly giving Edgar a run for his money Teddy.
\"but the...
May 14th, 2024 19:12
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