Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave
- Rejection Reflection (NinjaGirl)
Hard to compartmentalise when crap falls on you at different times.. Tend...
October 8th, 2025 21:27 - I couldn’t save you. (Friendship)
Stopped by and read it.
October 8th, 2025 15:56 - A Scientific Riddle, or Why the Aborigines Ate Cook by Vladimir Visotski (Ksey_Gan)
Racist and wrong.
October 8th, 2025 15:50 - When will I catch a win? (NinjaGirl)
Who???
Good to see you back, NG.😊👍
October 8th, 2025 00:46 - AND YET... (David Welch)
History provides the explanation, but often doesn\'t instil enough...
October 8th, 2025 00:34 - Never Put Food Near the Cat Named Knight(A kids short poem) (Bassie)
SEVEN You say??? Well you got the cat right anyway.
October 6th, 2025 19:04 - I\'m So Sorry (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
\'Got the feeling you are going to get there - you certainly have the...
October 6th, 2025 18:59 - High bar low (2781)
Can\'t see there\'s anything to excuse at all. The expectations of...
October 6th, 2025 18:52 - Devilishly Dreadful: God Save the Jack (Tristan Robert Lange)
Brilliant write I more than enjoyed, Tristan. With you on your commentary...
October 6th, 2025 18:37 - Thankyou for understanding. (Friendship)
If you need a \"loyal, true, unwavering friend.\" that involves a...
October 6th, 2025 18:25 - Prayer Petitions (Orchidee)
\'Tis the season for a return to orchi form again...KP a distant memory?
October 6th, 2025 18:13 - THE LEGEND OF SCREAMIN\' BILL WILCOX (David Welch)
A great easy read in good form with a story to tell,
Keep \'em coming...
October 6th, 2025 18:07 - Unsecure power (Maplespal)
\'Love it when the fridge gets warm and the food deteriorates. Need a...
October 6th, 2025 00:21 - Cateel Surf Girl (Gary Edward Geraci)
Would have very much liked the drawing, I think.
Good to know you are...
October 6th, 2025 00:17 - The Cage of Truth (William Hromada)
Truth at all costs... I really \'got\' this one. Many thanks.
October 5th, 2025 17:34 - Storm Amy (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Happening now? Didn\'t know. Thanks for the update.
We all in our...
October 5th, 2025 17:26 - Where Words End. (Goldfinch60)
Come off the grass - music isn\'t everything. There\'s croquet...Mary ...
October 5th, 2025 17:16 - Grounded (NafisaSB)
A set of ideas well rounded in great poetic form. I like both the...
October 5th, 2025 17:09 - The Church of depopulation, (Friendship)
So far your central proposition has not been addressed by anyone above...
October 5th, 2025 17:04 - Grande Gauleiter of Grotesquery (Tristan Robert Lange)
Somewhere actually, between extremely little and none.
Wish with all my...
October 5th, 2025 08:14 - Breakfast in Krakow (Neville)
The essence in a woman that many share.....I know...
More than glad to...
October 5th, 2025 07:54 - You bounder, you cad, you....! (Orchidee)
Stap me vitals - I\'m done for the rest of the day after that.....
October 4th, 2025 18:51 - Tainted Rose (Tristan Robert Lange)
Going to interpret this as I find it, Tristan: a glorious rose caught by...
October 4th, 2025 18:42 - MISSING PERSON\'S REPORT: DETECTIVE DEADROSE (DeadRose)
Definitely keep honing your skills in this genre. Keep at it.
October 4th, 2025 18:32 - Marie (Paul Bell)
Head and shoulders above many portraits of tortured relationships. I...
October 4th, 2025 09:56 - Without Poets (Sami Mulaj)
Grass without poets grows strong and even - come off. lol
October 3rd, 2025 20:43 - Sister mediator (EvenwheniLie)
Standing, arm out at ninety degrees, hand up and open, attempt to keep...
October 3rd, 2025 20:25 - Feast Your Eyes (Tristan Robert Lange)
I must continue to honour your creativity and talent, Tristan - as here....
October 3rd, 2025 17:37 - I Remained Unplugged (Rebellion_in_sanity)
They were doing the best they could...... I suppose.....
October 3rd, 2025 17:23 - The Fridge (Paul Bell)
Proof positive that the usurpation of power can always be a real...
October 3rd, 2025 17:17 - My body (Natavia Hobert)
Doctor\'s visit yet?
October 3rd, 2025 17:06 - a slow alarm (Arqios)
Increasing attempts to beat into submission by the rogue elements fire and...
October 3rd, 2025 16:58 - What Is Up With People Rant. (Goldfinch60)
You know the old saying; \"There\'s nowt as queer (update: \'strange\') as...
October 3rd, 2025 03:16 - Housing Crisis (Doggerel Dave)
Thanks Michael. (Have you blocked me? Very subtly done!🙃)
October 3rd, 2025 01:30 - Words define your actions. (Friendship)
Still not absolutely sure who you are or how you do it - but you can turn...
October 2nd, 2025 23:19 - Breakdown to breakthrough (Poetic Dan)
A very together insightful write, Dan. In terms of vision, I feel one or...
October 2nd, 2025 23:11 - Playing The Clarinet. (Goldfinch60)
Growth - you\'ve avoided a rut, Andy, and you have my fullest admiration...
October 2nd, 2025 18:29 - New Pages. (Goldfinch60)
Wait for the next edition, Andy - there could be an update.
October 1st, 2025 21:25 - Dystopian Rap (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Nobody can say they weren\'t warned.... well warned, Sir!
Neatly put,...
October 1st, 2025 21:22 - KINTSUGI (Michael Edwards)
A feast today, Michael - a rhyming haiku (a worthy new form I hope takes...
October 1st, 2025 21:12 - Strange Horizon (Tristan Robert Lange)
Up top there the term \'tone\' is examined, and for me that very much sums...
October 1st, 2025 20:52 - Forgive me (2781)
For the most part you captured a thought process I both recognize and am...
October 1st, 2025 20:38 - Save The Fish (Shahla Latifi)
I certainly felt the cold the darkness and your winter\'s depressive...
October 1st, 2025 20:15 - Sober Rhymes (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
A marker describing precisely where you are at now?
Interesting to see...
September 30th, 2025 18:03 - Saint Sinner (Tristan Robert Lange)
Almost got the acrostic and then my eyes went squiffy just before the end....
September 30th, 2025 17:47 - Tea And Coffee. (Goldfinch60)
Very tantalizing write as no specifics. Afraid you might get shafted for...
September 30th, 2025 03:04 - Bloody Foreigners… (Doggerel Dave)
Final stanza rewritten - for all to marvel....LOL!
September 29th, 2025 22:55 - Devilishly Dreadful: Vesuvian Vampire (Tristan Robert Lange)
I have to confess, without prejudice (or some such nonsense) Tristan, that...
September 29th, 2025 18:30 - not to offend the imbeciles (Gray0328)
Inclusiveness and conformity soundly thrashed.👍
September 29th, 2025 18:11 - Streets Of Rage (TommyDingo)
Great write. Could feel it
Glad it\'s classified as fiction; can\'t...
September 29th, 2025 18:03 - Solace (TommyDingo)
Not sure I got solace out of this; certainly involved and...
Did the...
September 29th, 2025 17:57 - When will you............? (Orchidee)
Please ask him to sort those who categorise their work as 18 + for...
September 29th, 2025 07:55 - The Answer Machine (Paul Bell)
Not all the messages on my phone are like that.........
Now back in the...
September 29th, 2025 07:50 - Digital ID For All (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Since 1945 this issue has a grand history of attempted introduction and...
September 28th, 2025 18:57 - Into Another Place. (Goldfinch60)
Continue to advocate for the book, please Andy - I understand it is going...
September 28th, 2025 18:37 - The Slow Burn (Gray0328)
The search for truth and enlightenment can be (is) a hard slog, clearly...
September 28th, 2025 18:29 - The Multiverse in Truth (Tristan Robert Lange)
Pleased to know I am relieved of the responsibility to know everything,...
September 28th, 2025 18:21 - Honeytrap (Paul Bell)
Not a Mickey Finn, was it Gaffer (I mean Gov\'nor)?
Smooth ride to bump...
September 28th, 2025 17:48 - Awww, no invite! (Orchidee)
I can see where this is going - as I await with playful (prayerful?)...
September 28th, 2025 17:30 - A fatal mistake - or con-fusion? (Orchidee)
You must at least attempt to establish a sense of self worth, orchi -...
September 27th, 2025 17:47 - Shadows Walk Again (Tristan Robert Lange)
Song itself has to stay with the words on page - A complete atmospheric...
September 26th, 2025 09:44 - On the level (2781)
There\'s something just slightly.. almost.. there.. but slightly out of...
September 26th, 2025 07:20 - The Vultures Dance (Paul Bell)
Visceral, Paul - Where did that come from?
September 26th, 2025 06:57 - Bad Week Breakdown (Tom Dylan)
Mud wrestling?😜
September 26th, 2025 06:49 - The Madness of Civil Tongues (Gray0328)
Spot on (Though unsure of the title - irony?).
September 25th, 2025 08:32 - The Sky (Tristan Robert Lange)
It\'s being so cheerful wot keeps you going😂
Got that kind of raw...
September 25th, 2025 08:27 - Cold and Raw (Thomas W Case)
Alienation personified, \"cold and raw\"
September 25th, 2025 08:09 - rusted edges, burning gears (Arqios)
Loss of control - nothing meshes properly - yet some metaphorical (!?)...
September 24th, 2025 21:24 - Queen Selene (Tristan Robert Lange)
Impossible not to pay attention to, or as through the ages revere, the...
September 24th, 2025 18:14 - Washed Away. (Goldfinch60)
Too much cleanliness - it\'s weakening.......... become a grotty old...
September 24th, 2025 02:48 - sins of the father (Queer-with-a-pen)
Separation from a parent and the acceptance of self as aseparate being...
September 24th, 2025 02:06 - But Sleep Won\'t Come (Tom Dylan)
Yeh...last night... can\'t stand another night like that...Forget the...
September 23rd, 2025 06:27 - before the quill falls silent (Arquious)
Everything felt more real then.... not, despite being so ephemeral today...
September 23rd, 2025 05:58 - Not Going Yet. (Goldfinch60)
Hear hear!
September 23rd, 2025 01:12 - You still Not Getting It? (Orchidee)
You is like that serial I used to see at Saturday Morning Pictures -...
September 22nd, 2025 17:01 - Atheism (RSM0812)
\"what ever will be will be...\" Truth can be found in odd places...
September 22nd, 2025 16:53 - The making of a sociopath (EvenwheniLie)
Sociopath? Feels pretty right to me..............
September 22nd, 2025 16:47 - Devilishly Dreadful: Unholy Loopholes (Tristan Robert Lange)
As an accompaniment to breakfast....sorry...I... ah - that\'s better; got...
September 22nd, 2025 16:43 - Try To.... (Orchidee)
Tension mounts............... thought I had the smelling salts...
September 21st, 2025 08:14 - Paywalled Proclamation (Tristan Robert Lange)
Hey Tristan, I thought you were more of an individualist than that.... and...
September 21st, 2025 08:08 - A Hammer a Day Keeps the Assholes Away (Matthew R. Callies)
Neva thought of the hammer - mine has always been the Majic Instant...
September 21st, 2025 01:19 - LIMERICKS 142, 143 & 144 (Michael Edwards)
There’s this geezer here name of Michael,
The limerick form he tends to...
September 20th, 2025 06:40 - of silences (Arqios)
The depth of your poetic insight needs no further commentary from me. Your...
September 20th, 2025 06:13 - And They Call It Patriotism (Tristan Robert Lange)
Don\'t get me started on Patriotism, Tristan. Try this contribution (plus...
September 20th, 2025 05:56 - When will it end? (NafisaSB)
Wish I knew, Nafisa. Very well stated, with the only question one could...
September 20th, 2025 03:04 - Polar Opposites (Katie B.)
Neat description of what living with bipolar must be like.
A brief but...
September 20th, 2025 03:00 - Rugby For Ladies. (Goldfinch60)
Good on them, or as I might have writ sometime back, \'Go Girls...
September 20th, 2025 02:40 - richer than old king Croesus (Arqios)
Full marks there, Rik. I almost ended up shouting \'Yes!\' at the end of...
September 19th, 2025 08:24 - The Listeners Joy Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
Andy I know your message, I’ve heard it before, but your skills in the...
September 19th, 2025 07:59 - To Soak in Reality (Tristan Robert Lange)
Still dozing...everywhere \'Defense\' spending is on the rise, while the...
September 18th, 2025 16:53 - The Time Travellers Tragedy (TommyDingo)
But what is the point? Someone here writes something which interests, so I...
September 18th, 2025 07:22 - Made of Wood (Orchidee)
You are far too young to have endured the Archers and PC49...
September 18th, 2025 06:28 - Robert Redford Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
Definitely got that one right, Andy.
September 18th, 2025 06:23 - Bins (Paul Bell)
Keep \'em coming Paul, particularly if the topic is as serious as...
September 17th, 2025 19:15 - Orchi\'s Own (Tristan Robert Lange)
Who?...Oh him!.. He\'s already headed for the hills...but will come back...
September 17th, 2025 15:10 - Pompous....F (Rebellion_in_sanity)
With \"Expository\", etc and of course the complaint of \"\"No ambiguity...
September 17th, 2025 08:48 - The Unheard Spoken Word (Tom Dylan)
A real experience of other\'s preoccupations, Tom. A phenomenon...
September 17th, 2025 08:28 - My own writing (NinjaGirl)
Poetry utilised very clearly as therapy... Has it worked?
For my money...
September 17th, 2025 00:12 - wolly mammoth (NinjaGirl)
Question well put.. though why it should be put at all is puzzling....must...
September 17th, 2025 00:00 - Counting Calories (NinjaGirl)
I feel wanting to be skinny ain\'t the way to go - to be healthy the...
September 16th, 2025 23:34
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