Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave
- Mary (Neville)
I\'m going for context (I\'m in a contextual mood today)... Wasn\'t...
September 18th, 2023 04:56 - Of Mice And Pork Pies (Orchidee)
Yeh, well you are getting brave....VC on the way if you continue to serve...
September 18th, 2023 04:30 - SAILBOAT (Nephilim56)
I have some sympathy for Roman Ragavan\'s position.
ln this imperfect...
September 18th, 2023 04:20 - Deluded (Kevin Michael Bloor)
You have been around this place (MPS) a long time - your work here always...
September 18th, 2023 00:54 - I am human (NafisaSB)
Never knew you are puny - don\'t believe it anyway.
Now then, you may...
September 17th, 2023 22:34 - Grace (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
(+1): Waste of time and energy even contemplating religion (though as a...
September 17th, 2023 21:59 - Mamma\'s Winter Coat (Bella Shepard)
Nostalgia - so rich I almost felt I knew that coat and would be looking...
September 17th, 2023 21:36 - Young Moon Killers (Parisab)
Parisab, your very short three liner made for some very interesting...
September 17th, 2023 20:57 - Swinging Topiary Trio (Summersounds68)
Alibaba rides again.... still, as the inspiration for a neat piece of...
September 16th, 2023 19:35 - Gracious Goodness (Orchidee)
Seems you got them all moving (wot kind of moving??) in the same...
September 16th, 2023 19:26 - Young Moon Killers (Parisab)
A situation (your second proposition) I\'m not familiar with.
What is...
September 16th, 2023 19:19 - The All-Nite Cafe (MendedFences27)
Yes - but it was a very long time ago, Phil.
Have I detected the...
September 16th, 2023 19:06 - i am just me (NafisaSB)
Please know I haven\'t ignored your poem, but do find your comment...
September 16th, 2023 17:01 - I am human (NafisaSB)
Don\'t scare me off, will you...... Feel like I\'m walking on...
September 16th, 2023 16:46 - The Misguided Dance of Digital Discourse (GeekSusie)
Couldn\'t be without - my choice to engage or ignore.. This time...
September 16th, 2023 16:29 - When All Said and Done it’s All Over (Neville)
Owwww (howl to the moon - in case you are tone deaf and couldn\'t...
September 16th, 2023 06:41 - Through the Eyes of Never Enough (GeekSusie)
Welcome back to English for a while (I\'m hesitant to trust Google...
September 15th, 2023 20:24 - Petrols down (2781)
A well wrought piece which depicts a situation I recognise all too...
September 15th, 2023 19:49 - The Night Visitor Arrived (Summersounds68)
A dream which involves a phantom visitor, ghost busters and an Amazon...
September 15th, 2023 19:21 - Soaring Heights of Platitude (Bliss)
Must keep (fave) this one for future reference. My occasional campaign...
September 15th, 2023 19:03 - Golden Memories (Dove)
Good \'un , Dove. Smooth as silk on a subject, memories which help to keep...
September 15th, 2023 06:44 - Doggy Style (Teddy.15)
Prada bag a knock off - look at the stitching....😇!!!
September 15th, 2023 02:25 - My People (EvenwheniLie)
Keep at it. Although I sometimes only partially get where you are coming...
September 15th, 2023 02:20 - The Grieving Silence of An Empty House (Neville)
Recent discussions? A bit Zen? Don\'t you do that alone?
I feel the...
September 15th, 2023 02:12 - Bold Battlers (Orchidee)
I really don\'t understand you, Sir Orchi NS - after all that your...
September 14th, 2023 04:37 - The Sound of Darkness (Neville)
Gonna UFFFF offff an stay outa this - too full ov metaphor for me......
September 14th, 2023 04:19 - Sitting on a Cornflake (Summersounds68)
Thought that woz you last Saturday.............. Does Kellogg\'s pay up...
September 13th, 2023 19:31 - U-Haul Trucks aren\'t Allowed in Heaven (Summersounds68)
A truth. Wherever I end up (and I\'m not sure it is heaven or anywhere...
September 13th, 2023 19:23 - Cracks on the Sidewalk (Summersounds68)
Be of good cheer Ss68 is back! I\'m sure it is going to get better...😂
September 13th, 2023 19:16 - The Internet (Joseph C Ogbonna)
Precisely that - both pros and cons: but more pros than cons since each of...
September 13th, 2023 18:42 - Life\'s Circumference (Pop64)
That was a fun write. NYC sounds like a dangerous place to be walking...
September 13th, 2023 18:25 - A Bit Dry - Ramblings (Orchidee)
The agony and ambivalence of being a persistent poet, Sir Orchi...
September 13th, 2023 05:50 - That Day Came. (Goldfinch60)
Disclosed your old history with Kathleen Ferrier, Andy? 😆
September 13th, 2023 04:37 - One\'s nation (Sonal monhyung)
I understand you are twelve, so by rights I should leave you alone and let...
September 13th, 2023 04:31 - Forbidden Love (Stephwrites)
Have you just confessed that you are responsible for climate change and...
September 12th, 2023 19:20 - Three-Fourths Time (Sorenbarrett)
Experimental poetry?....well it felt experimental to a traditional plodder...
September 12th, 2023 19:07 - Abundant Carelessness (EvenwheniLie)
Bloody glad I don\'t live where you are, Mate
September 12th, 2023 05:47 - Prayer Petitioning (Orchidee)
Sir Orch NS, you have blinded me with numbers this time. Given up on Non...
September 12th, 2023 05:27 - THE STREETS (Nephilim56)
The ‘class war’ , some would argue, is dead.
BS. It’s just that the...
September 12th, 2023 05:13 - Ghetto Girls (Neville)
Keep \'em at it - encourage (or perhaps not even encourage, knowing the...
September 12th, 2023 04:41 - 9/11/2021 (Sirlocowicked AKA Bubba)
Shocking. Innocent people die in war.
September 11th, 2023 16:23 - My Little Fantasy (Bella Shepard)
A teaser, Bella. I know - you will tell me that it is YOUR fantasy, and...
September 11th, 2023 16:20 - Be One This Day (9-11 rememberance) (Pop64)
Tragic, terrifying. Innocent people die in war.
September 11th, 2023 07:52 - Another Perfect Day (Neville)
What ? she wanted rough - was this a message to me or you? She spoilt it...
September 11th, 2023 06:50 - Heavenly trial (EvenwheniLie)
I really find it hard to understand what gives in folks with religious...
September 11th, 2023 06:35 - What I, as a young author, know about 9/11 (Holy Onyx)
Tragic, terrifying. Innocent people die in war.
September 11th, 2023 06:19 - The Brave Young Men Of Ireland (Duggantherhymer)
Since WW1 was an exercise in futility.......
September 11th, 2023 06:16 - La Danse Des Illusions Cybernétiques (GeekSusie)
I, monolingual must rely on Google translate to provide access to your...
September 10th, 2023 23:10 - Chosen in Christ (Orchidee)
Wot abaut \'Ark the Erald Angels Sung\' or summat? I kan sing that one -...
September 10th, 2023 06:48 - Living the way i want.. (NafisaSB)
You are in the right position, Nafisa. Go lady, go.
September 10th, 2023 06:40 - With No Cage to Hold Her She Learnt How to Fly (Neville)
It is said (I said? - Nah) It is said - If yer can\'t make it, don\'t...
September 10th, 2023 06:34 - When We Are One (Bella Shepard)
Totally uncharacteristic, Bella. I sincerely hope this is not a new...
September 9th, 2023 17:16 - When You Know You Are Blessed (Neville)
Grandad role suits you.....but I hope it doesn\'t become (don\'t think it...
September 9th, 2023 07:51 - Equal opportunity yes, affirmative action no (Sorenbarrett)
This is a hard one to respond to Soren. Are you sure that equal...
September 9th, 2023 07:44 - In Silence and Disbelief (Teddy.15)
Tragic. Innocent people die in war, Teddy.
September 9th, 2023 02:31 - Miss. Esme G. Cameron (Neville)
Neville – I am in trouble here.. I need some guidance. I’ve tried to...
September 8th, 2023 22:04 - In Her Eyes: A Legacy Unfolded (GeekSusie)
I dislike most love poetry as often it seems to depict an emotionally...
September 8th, 2023 21:22 - Rapture (Saxon Crow)
To the extent that to mirror man is to be far short of aspiration, I would...
September 8th, 2023 21:07 - PRO NATIVITATE BEATAE MARIAE VIRGINIS LXX: Villanelle (Robert Southwick Richmond)
You have been away a long time, Robert - good to know we aren\'t...
September 8th, 2023 21:02 - Net Nuances (Orchidee)
Thanks for the warning - I\'ll be travelling in a flame retardant...
September 8th, 2023 20:52 - Victims of Sun Tzu’s book (EvenwheniLie)
You\'ve nailed it, and as I give this a second reading, I\'m left with the...
September 7th, 2023 15:48 - Miss. Esme G. Cameron (Neville)
Tributes and cigars - the wonder of it all....with emphasis on...
September 7th, 2023 15:25 - Troglodyte (MendedFences27)
Come on - cheer up!!
A very well written piece of misery.
( I\'m only...
September 7th, 2023 15:04 - Bridging the Divide: A Poetic Response to Political Fracture (GeekSusie)
I\'m five days late, I know - such a flow of pieces pass through MPS that ...
September 7th, 2023 14:50 - Lacrime (Teddy.15)
Saw this as \"lachrymose\" and in the end wasn\'t far off the mark.....
September 7th, 2023 06:47 - Reviving Refreshments (Orchidee)
Righteousness and peace wot a randy pair.....
September 7th, 2023 06:37 - No, There Will Be No Hurricane Tonight. (Goldfinch60)
Just got out in time....
September 7th, 2023 06:34 - Miss. Esme G. Cameron (Neville)
If only.... if only we could all have just a smattering of the talent Esme...
September 7th, 2023 06:30 - We Are Bloody Hard To Please (Duggantherhymer)
I\'m a rhymer. Enjoyed the rhyme.
Not absolutely sure what the argument...
September 7th, 2023 05:02 - Scotch Mist (The Fife Wanderer)
Might be proud, but this means you have accepted your Mother\'s milk...
September 7th, 2023 04:53 - When A Wiz A Lad (The Fife Wanderer)
A moral tale I surprisingly fully understood and thoroughly enjoyed.....
September 6th, 2023 17:42 - Such A Lucky Man. (Goldfinch60)
Just hope the blowlamp doesn\'t come near your rear end....How could I...
September 6th, 2023 07:02 - Eclipse (Peto)
Full marks for a fantasy I enjoyed.....
September 6th, 2023 06:54 - Something About Shells (Neville)
Mary Anning comes to mind.... Tongue twisters can be considered...
September 6th, 2023 05:55 - TOMMY (Nephilim56)
You know I relate completely.
Poetry I\'m at one with all the...
September 6th, 2023 04:56 - Apology to Martha (all Beatles\' Song Titles) (Pop64)
Wot about \'I Wanna Hold Your Gland\'?🤣
September 5th, 2023 08:28 - Replace Coffee? (Goldfinch60)
Don\'t tell me you\'ve turned into a miserable old bugger that only coffee...
September 5th, 2023 02:12 - Mustard Multiplied (Orchidee)
So for a long time there wasn\'t room for anybody. Why was the decision...
September 5th, 2023 02:06 - Me and My Long List of Things (Neville)
What to do with this? OK, let’s go:
Of Yours I’ll admit to...
September 5th, 2023 01:57 - Find Myself (Bella Shepard)
That\'s where I\'m going to be - just got to make sure I have enough food...
September 4th, 2023 21:37 - Strangers (Andy Hunter)
The UK isn\'t the only place where \'development\' is rampant in the name...
September 4th, 2023 21:26 - Nothing is everything (Sorenbarrett)
This is now....
Thanks for defining it so clearly, Soren.
September 4th, 2023 04:48 - Non Figmental (Neville)
Wot, yer put up yer shingle as a tattooist did yer,,,,,,?
Given up on...
September 4th, 2023 04:28 - WHAT DID YOU THINK WOULD HAPPEN? (LIZ)
\' Sorry to be a party pooper, but you could do with being more selective ...
September 4th, 2023 04:19 - Morning Breaks (Bella Shepard)
The first two lines are enough , Bella - I can keep them in an...
September 3rd, 2023 20:16 - My Midnight Visitors (PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :))
Vid was great - your neat verse described it perfectly.
Species -...
September 3rd, 2023 20:02 - Cat mailed. (Chris Duffy)
A fine tale of feline frolics, Chris.
September 2nd, 2023 19:49 - 100 (M.E.M.)
For some reason I found the odd stanzas (starting with the first) said...
September 2nd, 2023 16:34 - The Rhymers Rhyme On (Duggantherhymer)
One vote for rhymers 👍
September 2nd, 2023 06:54 - To Stay Over Night At A Youth Hostel Which For Ecological Experience Vill In Upo Wetland (Kinsley Lee)
My Youth Hostel experiences (many years ago) were a little more...
September 2nd, 2023 06:49 - Eh?? (Orchidee)
It\'s the searching, the quest for truth which separates you from so many...
September 2nd, 2023 03:08 - Sweet Salted Caramel Eyes (Neville)
I was gonna say \'bet you say that to all the girls\' but you pre-empted...
September 2nd, 2023 03:02 - Life\'s Mistakes. (Goldfinch60)
Made a few, Andy? LOL
September 2nd, 2023 01:36 - On Wattle Day (Duggantherhymer)
I get the sneezes sometimes...
Don\'t expect too much rain now flighty...
September 1st, 2023 04:31 - Seasons Of Love. (Goldfinch60)
Really great that you have travelled that journey, Andy.
September 1st, 2023 02:01 - On Returning to Gullworthy (Neville)
Man oh man, a rich word painting if I\'ve ever read one... almost lived...
September 1st, 2023 01:57 - Always (Sorenbarrett)
I definitely got a feeling from your lines of the way our language renders...
August 31st, 2023 21:01 - Love (Poetry). (Doggerel Dave)
Bella, this is no laughing matter, I’ll have you know!!!!!!!!!
Not to...
August 31st, 2023 19:29 - Whatever Happened to Miriam (Neville)
Dunno what the final score was in the exchange above, but a quick scan of...
August 31st, 2023 04:52 - Ludwig. (Goldfinch60)
I find both scents and music have the ability to really evoke forgotten...
August 31st, 2023 04:38
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