Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave
- Funeral (M.E.M.)
Very descriptive.
Yes - funerals are for the living, It\'s just garbage...
August 7th, 2024 17:35 - I Think I Like You But .. (Neville)
I woulda asked how you spell \'intracitable\' and then the definition and...
August 7th, 2024 09:01 - PAINFUL REST (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke)
Tragic. Too hard. Painful
August 7th, 2024 08:45 - Life is what you make it (Sorenbarrett)
Certainly make it if you can, Soren.
August 7th, 2024 08:42 - Prolific (Tom Dylan)
Just don\'t bewail your state here when inspiration (muse?) deserts you -...
August 7th, 2024 08:36 - ~> Martians Landed Twice In Australia! (Thad Wilk)
This is the way myths and legends get built.
Theys weren’t no aliens...
August 6th, 2024 19:28 - Too many (Sorenbarrett)
Thanks for this, Soren. I hear population on decline through a combination...
August 6th, 2024 18:45 - Is There Anything More Beautiful Than the Bow of a Ship touching a New World (Gray0328)
Rich imagery, but horrendous when the results of that touching are...
August 6th, 2024 18:25 - Physical & Mental Scars (Mark The Phenomenon)
I found that a real account of what remains after extreme physical
August 6th, 2024 07:26 - I. (Goldfinch60)
Enjoyed it? I\'m sure you have, otherwise you have been submitting extreme...
August 6th, 2024 07:01 - A Very Sweet Dream of Home (Teddy.15)
Find an escape anyway you can, Teddy. Especially if it is London; what...
August 6th, 2024 06:49 - The Return of Lochinvar (A Knight-Mare) (Paul W Conway)
I didn’t want to know….! I became acquainted with Young Lochinvar from...
August 5th, 2024 21:32 - Poetry of the Undesired (Gaurav Gurung)
Have to agree with 2781 here. The trouble is..... \'those in power\' and...
August 5th, 2024 17:40 - ~`` Knees - Parody of Trees (Thad Wilk)
Grannie let me tell ya has it all over me,
‘Cos I neva did nor ever...
August 5th, 2024 17:22 - My Wedding Night (Thoughtless)
This is it. Sorry virgin ladies, go find the idiot who prizes you if that...
August 5th, 2024 07:49 - A Story (Thoughtless)
Same again. Lonely street. Woman in opposite direction I felt certain I...
August 5th, 2024 07:38 - All Along the Watchtower (Neville)
Oh no.... I\'m staying out of this one.......🙃
August 5th, 2024 07:06 - Montana (Thomas W Case)
Not much to add after Teddy, Neville and Soren have had their say.
A...
August 4th, 2024 17:39 - Corona (MendedFences27)
Got a refund scheme on the bottles? Cash the empties in and you\'ve got...
August 4th, 2024 17:29 - ~> My drunk Parrot Pete - true tale (Thad Wilk)
That be no parrot as far as I can see, Thad. That be a...
August 4th, 2024 17:19 - ~> So Sad, Cookie Monster\'s Gone Mad! (Thad Wilk)
I believe the poor fella’s been terribly misunderstood. All he needs is...
August 3rd, 2024 22:25 - One Without Frills Would Be Fine (Neville)
I’m not trying to claw pant and puff my way onto high moral or aesthetic...
August 3rd, 2024 19:14 - Let them Wonder - in Kamala\'s own words (Raidoc)
As parody it hits just the right spot.
You can slap it right on top of...
August 2nd, 2024 19:39 - `* Heroin *` (Thad Wilk)
Witnessed this Thad. Nothing there the slightest bit funny. I\'ll save you...
August 2nd, 2024 19:15 - A Pin Drop Moment (Teddy.15)
Nah - don\'t believe yer!😅😂🤣🙃
August 2nd, 2024 18:59 - Just Like Some Well Read Woman (Neville)
Sorry - can\'t get round this one, Neville....
All I have is a picture of...
August 2nd, 2024 18:43 - Bad Day Survival. (Goldfinch60)
Not has a bad day for over twenty years (retired over twenty years...
August 2nd, 2024 18:36 - Writer\'s Right (Golnarmoinamini.Standbypoet)
Right then Goali - I\'d better get on with it then.....
August 2nd, 2024 00:46 - `*~ Each Day My Love - form Trijan Refrain (Thad Wilk)
Since I feel I have your shtick most times I await a punch line,...
August 1st, 2024 18:02 - Hot Off the Press (MendedFences27)
Your Full Bore Safety Valve worked extremely efficiently from what I can...
August 1st, 2024 17:48 - The Weatherman (Dan Williams)
\"prophecies like knives of reason
he never really learned to throw.\"...
August 1st, 2024 05:56 - Just Me, Half a Love Song and An Idiopathic Itch (Neville)
Glad you got that off your chest?
Well I\'m glad it all worked out in the...
August 1st, 2024 03:26 - Forget Four Letter Words Redux (Plus Bonus....) (Doggerel Dave)
Precisely - got that in one.😊But not every day!
August 1st, 2024 00:32 - In the Hush of Summer\'s Fading Light (Mr. Poetic 243)
An idealised version of school life which I actually quite enjoyed....
July 31st, 2024 17:04 - ~> A Troglodyte Named Zog! (Thad Wilk)
G’day Thad. ‘Trouble was his glasses set him back too early. Without...
July 31st, 2024 16:34 - NATURE OR NURTURE (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke)
An open window (as you have no hesitation doing) into, for me, another...
July 31st, 2024 07:47 - homeless (Jim56)
Hear hear, Jim.
July 31st, 2024 07:34 - Just a Few Thoughts on Getting Even (Neville)
A fantasy very similar to my own where I own a vaporiser which immediately...
July 31st, 2024 07:32 - Heat Exhaustion. (Goldfinch60)
Suggest you start getting acclimatised now, Andy.
Alternative strategy...
July 31st, 2024 07:26 - A Battle With Irony (Teddy.15)
Noooo - trouble with the neighbours, Teddy?...
July 31st, 2024 07:14 - New York Dreams (Santajah Douglass)
l stayed two weeks in New York, and too had the time of my life.
Thanks...
July 31st, 2024 07:03 - Guilty But Free as A Bird (Neville)
Time zones and odd domestic habits – I got to this one late,...
July 30th, 2024 22:40 - ~> READ MY LIPS! - Form Monotetra (Thad Wilk)
G’day Thad. I once lived in a share house (only once, I’m a quick...
July 30th, 2024 22:12 - The Mystery of a Woman (MendedFences27)
Better the poem popped into your head,
Than your head being popped by the...
July 30th, 2024 21:51 - Books (Goldfinch60)
I too get lost in books – among the sagging shelves in my local charity...
July 30th, 2024 08:32 - My Favourite Colour Is Blue (Teddy.15)
I vacillate between precisely those two colours, Teddy.
“Tie a Yellow...
July 30th, 2024 08:17 - A Genuine Fake (Tom Dylan)
The smart and sophisticated may well say “caveat emptor”, while yer...
July 30th, 2024 07:56 - She Lay In Her Bed (Bella Shepard)
Bella, this is a perfect and realistic picture of a journey through time...
July 29th, 2024 18:18 - ~> Bugs AND Daffy - Limericks (Thad Wilk)
G’day, Thad. Daffy and Bugs have certainly moved on (as have I) since...
July 29th, 2024 17:58 - Still I Know (MendedFences27)
I can give ninety percent of love poetry a miss, Phil, but
Still, I both...
July 29th, 2024 17:39 - Second Chance. (Goldfinch60)
For me you have a whole new dimension, Andy.
Thanks for the disclosure.
July 29th, 2024 08:03 - Between Clouds (Neville)
A surprisingly brief encounter can sometimes linger in memory and lighten...
July 29th, 2024 07:56 - Rusting Medals (M.M.)
All sounds pretty human to me.
And if you really feel bad about...
July 28th, 2024 17:52 - ~> Stan And The Wishing Well - A Fable (Thad Wilk)
Wot happened here, Thad is perfectly simple: The well was supplied by a...
July 28th, 2024 17:24 - video in the mail (Gary Edward Geraci)
Family history Gary, the twists and turns of which are mirrored in many a...
July 28th, 2024 16:59 - And I\'ll Write About That Too (Teddy.15)
Moody, but gives your muse plenty of scope and ensures a presence on these...
July 28th, 2024 16:52 - Wine for the ear (Sorenbarrett)
Great analogy (I\'m saving metaphor for another time). Subtle flavours ...
July 28th, 2024 08:03 - Unique is mom (Golnarmoinamini.Standbypoet)
I do feel uplifted by the poetry and idealism...... but I have to tell...
July 28th, 2024 07:54 - Friends With Benefits (Neville)
A day at a time, Neville...a day at a time....
July 28th, 2024 07:48 - Forgiveness Freedom (Orchidee)
At last! One of your hymns I can almost understand. I\'ll vote for that -...
July 28th, 2024 07:43 - Christmas In July. (Goldfinch60)
What happened there, Andy is that you momentarily shape shifted (or...
July 28th, 2024 07:36 - One Side of Still (Dan Williams)
An experienced moment. Perfect harmony.
July 28th, 2024 00:52 - Sleep Always Calls (Thomas W Case)
A complete word picture of a very sensible move - might follow your...
July 27th, 2024 23:59 - Feminine Rage (Aneenaelzabinod)
Believe it or not, much of the spirit of your poem applies to me, (though...
July 27th, 2024 19:16 - ~> This is No Lie! (Mono-rhyme) (Thad Wilk)
Any account which includes a proclamation that it is no lie is normally...
July 27th, 2024 19:03 - Outsiders (Neville)
Yes - both metaphor and reality inextricably locked together Neville.
To...
July 27th, 2024 08:06 - Ceremony (2781)
Now that\'s entertainment!!👍😂
July 27th, 2024 07:59 - Perfect (Sorenbarrett)
Well poemed there, Soren. Enjoyed very much.
Leadership (and I feel...
July 27th, 2024 07:54 - Another Beautiful Day. (Goldfinch60)
Another of your pastoral pieces well executed, Andy.
Hold onto them...
July 27th, 2024 02:03 - Kindness. (Doggerel Dave)
To whom it may concern:
Celebrating this five minute piece momentarily at...
July 26th, 2024 22:48 - ~> Fuckitol\'s The Real Deal (Thad Wilk)
Do not panic folks just because Shakespeare is spinning in his grave like...
July 26th, 2024 17:05 - My Friend Dale (Thomas W Case)
No insight, full of contradictions - like far too many people.
When Is...
July 26th, 2024 16:36 - Meadows (MendedFences27)
I see you smoothly transitioning through time with past memories trailing...
July 26th, 2024 16:22 - Laphroaig. (Goldfinch60)
Andy – I’ve been wanting to tell you for a while now. I received a...
July 26th, 2024 01:50 - Shadows (MendedFences27)
That piece has more substance than those shadows, Phil. And I hope they...
July 25th, 2024 18:44 - Unoriginal (2781)
Well, if an old joke , I\'ve never heard it before....so I\'ve got to keep...
July 25th, 2024 08:31 - The Pirate (Thomas W Case)
Thomas, I’m not quite sure you properly understand what a serious...
July 25th, 2024 08:15 - Riopy Is Here. (Goldfinch60)
Smooth, Andy. (Sometimes music doesn\'t need the video utube...
July 25th, 2024 08:00 - The Seat by the Fire (Tom Dylan)
How did you know, Tom? That time - The Chancer\'s Arms (I think), pint of...
July 25th, 2024 07:48 - Jokes for everyone (Sorenbarrett)
Not sure I fully understand this one (that ain\'t nothing new) Soren....
July 25th, 2024 07:37 - Proverb Pieces 6 (Orchidee)
See all those diagonal lines throughout your reply at14:45, orchi? That\'s...
July 24th, 2024 18:01 - ~*` At The End Of My Rainbow `*~ (Thad Wilk)
Don\'t knock the gold, Thad - you could make an absolute fortune in the...
July 24th, 2024 17:55 - Prison wall (Golnarmoinamini.Standbypoet)
Understood completely. Lives curtailed in so many ways even outside prison...
July 24th, 2024 17:44 - Light Bites (Neville)
So this spider, in conformity with modern taste, has dispensed with the...
July 24th, 2024 08:49 - Brick by boring brick (Gloria Denise)
I know....I like the concept \'brick by boring brick\" ...evidence of some...
July 24th, 2024 08:46 - Another Day Arrives. (Goldfinch60)
If you get up? Go on, Andy - make the effort, LOL.
July 24th, 2024 08:23 - Funny Weed (Sorenbarrett)
Lawn? Neighbours?....who are they? Cool, Man, I\'ll do them a service...
July 24th, 2024 08:11 - Thoughts 11 (MendedFences27)
Champagne is well covered here, and yes I\'d agree. but I continue to be...
July 23rd, 2024 19:56 - ~> The Game Of Love ( Shakespearean Sonnet ) (Thad Wilk)
Poker and passion - no wonder you were royally flushed, Thad.
July 23rd, 2024 19:42 - Hurt. (Goldfinch60)
Andy: Hear Hear – Johnny Cash was/is one of the greats.
That song –...
July 23rd, 2024 19:13 - Flat Petulance (Villanelle) (Paul W Conway)
Could be (I say \'could be\') funniest villanelle on record.
Do hang in...
July 23rd, 2024 18:57 - False Promises and Little White Lies (Neville)
Bitter, or merely observation, Neville?
July 23rd, 2024 09:28 - Sex well done (Sorenbarrett)
As I ponder the worlds population….. but many arrived not without the...
July 23rd, 2024 09:23 - The Best Medicine (Tom Dylan)
Felt to me like you needed the potty............ ........Tom (keeping my...
July 23rd, 2024 09:04 - ~> Palmer The Snake Charmer ~> ( Limericks ) (Thad Wilk)
Bargains everywhere - cut price transgender procedure.😂
July 22nd, 2024 18:12 - Lonesome Neon Nights (Thomas W Case)
Rich in the rottenness of two existences. An even spread of misery.
Well...
July 22nd, 2024 07:17 - Apathy. (Goldfinch60)
Maybe, on occasion, someone needs to be told......
July 22nd, 2024 07:09 - A Life Lesson In Tapestry (Teddy.15)
There may quite possibly be a relevant entry in DSM5 - ask Neville , he...
July 22nd, 2024 07:05 - Witness Of The Word (Orchidee)
The only word is \'Hello\' as the Prodigal Son returns....
July 22nd, 2024 07:00 - Batteries (2781)
I cannot find anything to add to that. Great summary of the shit values...
July 22nd, 2024 06:57
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