Comments on community poems by Draven
- Orange Tree (A Boy With Roses)
Oh wow, this is beautifully written, heart wrenching full of imagery and...
July 16th, 2022 07:47 - Inclusive Incorporation (Orchidee)
Nicely done!
July 16th, 2022 07:46 - Circle Squared (Kurt Philip Behm)
So much truth in so few words. I love it.
July 13th, 2022 07:58 - Goodbye Furry Friend (Orchidee)
Oh no, I am so sorry. They are much more than pets, they are family.
July 13th, 2022 07:57 - Somewhere on a Family Tree (Neville)
Such raw honesty here, Neville. Nicely written.
July 13th, 2022 07:56 - Self-Denial Service (Orchidee)
Nice write!
July 12th, 2022 05:20 - Prayer Persevering (Orchidee)
Nice one Orchi. Positive vibes and comforting :)
June 8th, 2022 15:33 - Over and Out (Neville)
Say what you mean, mean what you say and yet sometimes the listening ears...
June 8th, 2022 14:34 - North Rim (Kurt Philip Behm)
Wonderfully written.
June 8th, 2022 14:12 - Lullaby (Poetry.aka)
A sweet poem. Thank you for sharing
June 8th, 2022 14:08 - Multiplicity Duplicities (Eugene S.)
Wow, such a good write, the last stanza is powerful!
April 25th, 2022 05:49 - Help Us To Hear (Orchidee)
Nice one, Orch
April 25th, 2022 05:44 - Wind Dancer .. a Haiku (Neville)
Whimsical and nicely written. I love a good haiku.
April 25th, 2022 05:43 - Gossiping (Rozina)
A very clever and witty write!
April 25th, 2022 05:41 - Strawberry Rain (Kurt Philip Behm)
Beautiful flow
April 15th, 2022 10:22 - Just for us Lemons (Neville)
Lovely write, Neville.
April 15th, 2022 06:28 - They (Eugene S.)
Very well written
April 15th, 2022 06:27 - Anti-Baptism (Kurt Philip Behm)
Wonderful, Kurt
April 10th, 2022 08:42 - Burnt Umber (A Boy With Roses)
Lovely written
April 10th, 2022 08:42 - Praise Procession (Orchidee)
Nice Sunday write Orchi
April 10th, 2022 08:41 - Down Under (Rozina)
Oh Rozina, thank you for sharing your experience here. I understand how...
April 10th, 2022 08:40 - Wishes (Screaming goat. (New and Improved))
I love all these contributions
March 31st, 2022 10:21 - Help Is At Hand (Orchidee)
Lovely rhythm and nicely written, again!
February 10th, 2022 14:30 - Full Bloom (Paul Bell)
Wow, intense poem!
February 10th, 2022 14:29 - glasses (Screaming goat. (New and Improved))
Wonderful concept and nicely written.
February 10th, 2022 14:27 - A God at the Wash Bowl (AuburnScribbler)
Clever and interesting concept!
February 10th, 2022 14:25 - The Lost Art (Dougster67)
Nicely written and I totally agree. Although one could argue they are...
February 5th, 2022 17:36 - Each Star in the Sky (Surucipe)
Very sweet message and nicely written.
February 5th, 2022 17:31 - Greenwich Equinox (A Boy With Roses)
Beautiful yet haunting and drowning imagery. Nicely written once again xx
February 5th, 2022 17:23 - Hope Never Hopeless (Orchidee)
Nicely written and nice message too
February 5th, 2022 17:22 - JBG (for Grand-dad) (AuburnScribbler)
A lovely message for your Granddad
January 31st, 2022 07:53 - Somewhere In A Poem Tonight (A Boy With Roses)
This makes me want to hug you!
January 31st, 2022 07:52 - To Fade Without Warning (Neville)
Wonderful
January 31st, 2022 07:50 - The Good Way (Orchidee)
Nicely written
January 29th, 2022 08:53 - Assassinated (Paul Bell)
Wonderfully written.
January 29th, 2022 08:52 - Double Jeopardy (Neville)
Haha, wow, so much spoken in such few words. I love poems like these. Well...
January 28th, 2022 14:54 - Thirst And Trust (Orchidee)
Amen, Orchi x
January 28th, 2022 14:53 - What it All Boils Down To (Neville)
Nicely written and well formatted. :)
January 28th, 2022 14:52 - guilt or loss (Screaming goat. (New and Improved))
A strong message in a well written piece. Thanks for sharing. xx
January 28th, 2022 14:52 - Missing (Screaming goat. (New and Improved))
Interesting write, it calls out and has a longing to it. Well done
January 25th, 2022 08:57 - Sheltering Security (Orchidee)
Nice Orchi
January 25th, 2022 08:55 - Like a Lark on the Rise (Neville)
This resonates. Lovely.
January 19th, 2022 06:59 - THE CROW (Keith)
Nicely written, beautiful imagery.
January 19th, 2022 06:56 - Riptide (Kurt Philip Behm)
What a beautiful flowing poem.
January 18th, 2022 04:20 - Revealing of the Church - Revealing Series (2) (Orchidee)
Nice Orchi. Love the flow of this one too. And that is a great idea with...
January 18th, 2022 04:17 - True Treasure (Orchidee)
I like this one, Orchi! x
January 17th, 2022 03:01 - Servant Success (Orchidee)
Nice Orchi xx
January 17th, 2022 02:59 - Earth to Dust (A Boy With Roses)
Such rawness in this poem. xx Beautifully written.
January 17th, 2022 02:58 - Now Pinned to the Sky (Neville)
Great read and very well written and set out.
January 17th, 2022 02:57 - Matthew 18:3 (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Beautiful
January 16th, 2022 11:25 - Purpose (Sorenbarrett)
Lovely message and well written.
January 3rd, 2022 16:10 - Well-Being Water (Orchidee)
Nicely written, and now I am thirsty.
January 3rd, 2022 16:08 - Chase and Employ (A Song, inspired by Metallica’s “Seek and Destroy!”) (AuburnScribbler)
Haha! This fits perfectly, nice one!
January 3rd, 2022 16:07 - Barely Semi Touched (Neville)
A wonderfully written, heartwrenching poem, Neville. Thanks for sharing xx
January 3rd, 2022 16:05 - Within Us All... (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Beautifully written.
January 3rd, 2022 16:04 - Gone (Tayama)
This is heartwrenching in so few words. Thank you for sharing xx
January 3rd, 2022 16:03 - Winter Fog (Jerry Reynolds)
A picture painted out of a few words. Nicely done.
January 2nd, 2022 10:22 - but when (Siranswerer)
Amen to this. Short, sweet and I am in complete agreeance. :)
January 2nd, 2022 10:22 - It Don’t Help to Forget None (Neville)
That is so beautiful.
January 2nd, 2022 10:21 - Prerequisite Rhythm (A Boy With Roses)
Lovely poem, really well written and totally engaging.
January 2nd, 2022 10:20 - Sated (Neville)
Nicely written! Cheeky poem. :)
January 2nd, 2022 10:18 - Not That Type of Guy (A Boy With Roses)
Nicely written
January 2nd, 2022 10:15 - Immanent Incarnation (Orchidee)
Lovely, Orchi
January 2nd, 2022 10:14 - Blood Stains (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Both poems are wonderful.
January 2nd, 2022 10:13 - Momentous Miracles (Orchidee)
Nice one Orchi
January 2nd, 2022 10:12 - Boxes (Eugene S.)
Nice, liking this. Also, your formatting got me from the beginning :)...
January 2nd, 2022 10:11 - my silence is my undoing (NafisaSB)
Nice write. I don\'t think quietness is weak. I think when you finally...
December 30th, 2021 10:00 - This Fleeting Day (A.H. Browning)
What a lovely thing to read. Thank you x
December 30th, 2021 09:51 - Pub Folk (AuburnScribbler)
Cheers, prost, from one bar fly to another. Some of my closest, dearest...
December 30th, 2021 09:45 - Sincere Serving (Orchidee)
Nice words, Orchi x
December 30th, 2021 09:44 - Katana Slashings (Kurt Philip Behm)
Very interesting. I could ponder over this for some days!
December 30th, 2021 09:42 - beatles tribute (Jim56)
One of my favourite bands
December 30th, 2021 09:42 - Chasing Light (Neville)
Very nicely written.
December 30th, 2021 09:38 - In An Echoing Room (A Boy With Roses)
Wonderful imagery and chaos captured here. x
December 30th, 2021 09:36 - Jameth (Mercurial Voice)
Lovely :)
December 30th, 2021 09:35 - Birth Blessed (Orchidee)
Nicely written. xx
December 30th, 2021 09:34 - Freedom (Paul Bell)
Beautifully written. Wow.
December 30th, 2021 09:33 - though tears (Dusk arising)
So true and wonderfully written
December 27th, 2021 04:35 - Dancing (Ameljor)
Nice :) I like the idea of this
December 27th, 2021 04:32 - Merry Christmas? (AnAlpaca)
Nicely written. I agree with yellowrose - just another day
December 27th, 2021 04:30 - Bag For Life. (Paul Bell)
Nicely done
December 27th, 2021 04:28 - She, who shall not be named (Mercurial Voice)
Nicely written
December 27th, 2021 04:24 - Boys Want Love (A Boy With Roses)
Nice write
December 27th, 2021 04:23 - Life-Light (Orchidee)
Nice
December 27th, 2021 04:23 - blackness of night (Dusk arising)
Finally something other than tinsel! Nice write
December 25th, 2021 08:01 - CAN YOU (Turbo1904)
Well done.
December 25th, 2021 06:05 - The End (AnAlpaca)
This is wonderfully written Alpaca. You\'ve conveyed such dread but...
December 25th, 2021 06:04 - my intensities (Mercurial Voice)
A dangerous place indeed. Nicely written.
December 25th, 2021 06:02 - νεφέλη βάτης (Eugene S.)
Beautiful rhythm
December 24th, 2021 12:38 - Poetry-Evidence of Life (LADYHOLMES)
very nice
December 24th, 2021 07:10 - Wildflowers (Screaming goat. (New and Improved))
Some nice imagery. I like the way you\'ve written it.
It depends on where...
December 24th, 2021 00:36 - The Power of Words. (The BlackShakespeare)
very true! nicely done
December 24th, 2021 00:32 - Lapis Lazuli (LADYHOLMES)
I love this stone. My mum gifted me some earrings made out of them some...
December 23rd, 2021 17:46 - flutter (Mercurial Voice)
Beautiful piece and message ♡
December 23rd, 2021 17:43 - The Taking of Innocence (Neville)
Well written with such few words. It made me feel disgusted...yet I am...
December 23rd, 2021 07:27 - Angels (A Thank You to the NHS on Christmas 2021) (AuburnScribbler)
Nice tribute.
December 23rd, 2021 07:24 - Tasquiqui (A Boy With Roses)
Nicely written xx
December 23rd, 2021 07:23 - A Life Sadly Lived (Neville)
This is very bittersweet. Yet, I think 17 of the right, well chosen words...
December 23rd, 2021 07:18 - Did I Ever (A.H. Browning)
Even though we never once crossed paths
My life is filled with they way...
December 23rd, 2021 06:31 - Sleepless Night (A.H. Browning)
An amazing piece of writing.
December 23rd, 2021 06:25
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