Comments on community poems by Draven
- Touch A Leaf, Hug A Tree (Garth Rakumakoe)
Very beautiful and in touch with nature. :)
December 21st, 2021 17:01 - The Sea (Coyote)
Very haunting write, Coyote. Nicely penned.
December 21st, 2021 17:01 - Looking Out (Kurt Philip Behm)
This poem speaks wonders of wisdom. Thank you for sharing this.
December 21st, 2021 11:08 - Circulus Quadratus (Kurt Philip Behm)
I love that line, a circle squared from the inside out. And the difference...
December 21st, 2021 11:07 - Quarry (Neville)
Haha! Very witty!
December 21st, 2021 11:06 - Eclectic (John Prophet)
Interesting and nice poem. Love the layout too, to read it is very jarring...
December 21st, 2021 11:00 - Best Friend vs. Girlfriend (Anna Colette)
That sounds like a tricky situation. Is it something that you can discuss...
December 21st, 2021 10:59 - Our Paradise. (Goldfinch60)
Wonderful ♡ Love this.
December 21st, 2021 03:56 - Naive (Dgrigorian)
Rejection is painful, and it is always confusing not being on the same...
December 21st, 2021 03:54 - I\'m Horrible To Me...... (Orchidee)
Aww haha, maybe you need a new singing teacher then?! First poem I have...
December 21st, 2021 03:49 - Broken dreams (Jade Wolf)
I love this!! I have such a picture in my mind from these words. Well done
December 20th, 2021 22:11 - 12.20.04 and now (Lonelyraccoon)
Heartwrenching story. It is a struggle to find the meaning in such...
December 20th, 2021 22:10 - Stars In A Jar (Jayasree)
Imaginative and beautiful
December 20th, 2021 22:07 - my best friend (Jim56)
Very sweet :)
December 20th, 2021 22:06 - In Winter (KarvelD)
Beautiful :)
December 20th, 2021 22:05 - Prisms (Apieceeveryday)
Short, sharp and shiny. :) Nice write.
December 20th, 2021 22:04 - Nocturnal Mystery (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Nice poems :)
December 20th, 2021 21:59 - QUEER (Turbo1904)
Strong message here, and so true. Thanks for sharing
December 20th, 2021 21:57 - Topeo Julie (Paul Bell)
Sad story...but well written
December 20th, 2021 21:55 - Emmanuel Expressed (Orchidee)
Really nice write.
December 20th, 2021 21:54 - No Exit (Coyote)
Yikes that hit quite close to home! But very funny indeed!
December 19th, 2021 20:09 - Faces (Coyote)
It is wonderful finding poems from the past. :) I really like this one
December 18th, 2021 08:39 - Banshee (Coyote)
Love the rhythm.
December 18th, 2021 08:38 - Heavenly Hope (Orchidee)
Nice one Orchi :)
December 18th, 2021 08:38 - Whisper in Silence (Woundedheart)
You are right, words do get in the way. Less is more ♡ Beautiful poem
December 15th, 2021 07:58 - The Guy Who Wasn\'t There (Coyote)
Haha! Another great read. A well written and funny piece :)
December 12th, 2021 18:58 - Penitus (Coyote)
Bleak and brilliant
December 12th, 2021 18:56 - The Road to Perdition (Coyote)
This is an ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT poem. I couldn\'t stop reading it! Really...
December 12th, 2021 18:55 - Covid Blues (Coyote)
Nice rhythm, a good read. And too true!
December 12th, 2021 18:53 - Messiah\'s Mission (Orchidee)
Nice work Orchi!
December 12th, 2021 18:52 - Blue (Lorna)
Lovely poem. I am really enjoying your colour theme.
My first cat was...
December 12th, 2021 18:50 - Question (AnAlpaca)
Sweet
December 12th, 2021 18:49 - Lady Weather Makes No Promises (Garth Rakumakoe)
Very nice image you have drawn here. Well done :)
December 12th, 2021 13:18 - I Shan\'t (Raphael Shonibare)
Very nicely written and excellent messages throughout
December 11th, 2021 13:10 - Not Today (AnAlpaca)
Excellent Poem. And very powerful message of continuing on.
December 11th, 2021 13:08 - Yellow (Lorna)
Beautifully written. Really paints a picture in my mind.
December 11th, 2021 13:07 - The Night Dancer (Paul Bell)
Beautiful but quite sad. I really enjoyed reading this.
December 11th, 2021 13:06 - Prepared People (Orchidee)
Well written!
December 11th, 2021 13:03 - Ferris Wheel (A Boy With Roses)
beautifully hurtful, strong words x
December 11th, 2021 13:02 - Owl Said (Michael Anthony)
Wonderful. So true.
December 9th, 2021 19:18 - Tone Death (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Really like this
December 9th, 2021 19:17 - Dreams We Remember (M.E.M.)
I can relate, I have so many vivid dreams, sometimes I can\'t...
December 9th, 2021 18:57 - In Your Thoughts (Thusa)
Short and sweet :)
December 9th, 2021 18:55 - Time Spent, Time Gained (Greenfairy489)
Very relatable and nicely written!
December 9th, 2021 18:53 - Faith (Garth Rakumakoe)
Very nicely written. I like the ideas you\'ve put forth a lot.
December 9th, 2021 18:52 - My Tears Flow Like Rivers (A Boy With Roses)
Lovely poem xx
December 9th, 2021 08:44 - Red (Lorna)
a passion fueled poem. Nice ;)
December 9th, 2021 08:41 - The Twelve Days Of Christmas (Paul Bell)
Haha very funny!
December 9th, 2021 08:40 - Alone (AnAlpaca)
A heartwrenching poem. Good writing Alpaca
December 9th, 2021 08:39 - To Write Is To Go Further (Nafis Light)
Such true words here. Balance is key.
December 8th, 2021 16:49 - 10/22 (Hurtbutterfly)
I know this feeling well, too!
And interesting what you think about your...
December 8th, 2021 16:48 - Pen me thy love (Woundedheart)
Beautiful writing x
December 8th, 2021 16:45 - The Thing I Love (James Alexander)
Simply lovely :) I enjoyed reading this one
December 8th, 2021 16:43 - rusty crawler (Jim56)
Nicely written with a good flow. :) Wishing you the best with the project!
December 8th, 2021 16:42 - An Outhouse Door. (KarvelD)
Wonderful story!
December 8th, 2021 16:41 - PTSD (Mdrogers)
Strong words painting a horrific vivid picture, thank you for sharing.
December 8th, 2021 16:38 - When a Woman loves a man (haiku) (Stoneageheart)
Nice haiku! It reminds me of what Mama Ru always says \"If you don\'t love...
December 8th, 2021 16:34 - In Your Grace (Saxon Crow)
Very nice and warm.
December 8th, 2021 16:22 - Just a man (Chris Duffy)
These parting words are beautiful. xx
December 8th, 2021 16:18 - Spirits (Beary1112)
When you think you know someone...strong imagery and great writing here.
December 8th, 2021 16:17 - Notable Need (Orchidee)
Good writing Orchie!
December 8th, 2021 16:11 - Dump Protocol (Paul Bell)
Oopsie haha!
December 8th, 2021 16:07 - WRITE OR WRONG (Joe Marcello)
React to what? :P
December 8th, 2021 16:03 - Dementia (Ady123)
My deepest condolences. Love over death, love lasts forever xx
December 7th, 2021 17:50 - Numb (Anonymous_1226)
Really great read, thank you for sharing. Escapism vs dealing with pain vs...
December 7th, 2021 17:48 - Roadkill Hatecrime (A Boy With Roses)
Heartwrenching... writing full of feeling here. xx
December 7th, 2021 17:47 - Mercy Manifest (Orchidee)
By the way, nice writing here!
December 7th, 2021 17:41 - Mercy Manifest (Orchidee)
I think Carol\'s surname is Baskin?! :P
December 7th, 2021 17:41 - Smothered (Lorna)
hehe, so clever. Really love this.
December 7th, 2021 17:35 - Something of a Quandary (Neville)
Good question. Then, we must ask, is the sky REALLY a sky without the sun...
December 7th, 2021 17:17 - Santa\'s Dilema (Paul Bell)
LOL!
December 7th, 2021 17:15 - Handyman (AnAlpaca)
Lovely poem Alpaca
December 7th, 2021 17:14 - Best Friends (TaraSeri_9of9)
Completely agree
December 7th, 2021 17:13 - untitled #2 (Razlin)
Wow, powerful words you write, my friend! Well written too.
December 7th, 2021 17:12 - The Family\'s Lie (AnAlpaca)
Thank you for sharing this story with us. These are some strong and very...
December 6th, 2021 19:15 - Still Waiting on Your Call (Annonymouswonder)
I\'m so sorry for your loss, heartbreaking, but thank you so much for...
December 6th, 2021 18:58 - Nigh (Eugene S.)
Nice rhythm here. I love twilight :)
December 6th, 2021 18:55 - Poet Insane (A Boy With Roses)
Deeply beautiful words x
December 6th, 2021 18:46 - my imaginary sartre quotes #1 (Jon Nakapalau)
So true. I have a post it note on my desk since last year saying \"accept...
December 6th, 2021 18:02 - comes (Jon Nakapalau)
Beautiful
December 6th, 2021 17:59 - the resonance of longing (Jon Nakapalau)
Whoa. I think I needed to read this tonight.
December 6th, 2021 17:58 - Winter\'s Song (AnAlpaca)
This could be a children\'s book!
December 6th, 2021 17:34 - Spring\'s Song (AnAlpaca)
This is a really refreshing read :) Thank you
December 6th, 2021 17:33 - The Dream (AnAlpaca)
Oh man ♡ This is beautiful but rough.
December 6th, 2021 12:29 - Kingdom Kindlings (Orchidee)
Very nice :)
December 6th, 2021 12:26 - A simple man (94sidrak)
Thank you for sharing this story. xx
December 6th, 2021 09:37 - Bilge (Neville)
Wow, that is quite haunting. Some nice thoughts and imagery there!
December 6th, 2021 09:34 - daddys little angel (Jim56)
Really lovely with great tempo xx
December 6th, 2021 09:32 - Stop the Chop (A Celebratory Acrostic) (AuburnScribbler)
I love an acrostic! I haven\'t read one for so long!
December 6th, 2021 09:31 - Boxes In The Attic (MDStone)
This is brilliant. Beautiful rhythm.
Just one note, by QUITE you mean...
December 6th, 2021 09:29 - Blank (AnAlpaca)
I feel your pain
December 6th, 2021 09:28 - bluebird song (Jim56)
December 5th, 2021 08:41 - Stage Back (AuburnScribbler)
I love this, really playful and fun with nervous energy. And welcome back...
December 5th, 2021 08:40 - My Lady is More Than a Poem (Neville)
Quite beautiful!
December 5th, 2021 08:37 - my black and white nightgown (Razlin)
Reading this fills me with dread. Very well written and so, so heavy x
December 5th, 2021 06:53 - untitled (Razlin)
Deep and dark words. xx
December 5th, 2021 06:51 - Notes (Lorna)
Lovely :)
December 5th, 2021 06:47 - A Bond (James Alexander)
I really like this :)
December 5th, 2021 06:45 - Something in the Air Maybe (Neville)
This is beautiful. My heart goes out to you.
December 5th, 2021 06:45 - Forever Jewels Sparkle (A Boy With Roses)
Beautiful
December 4th, 2021 20:46
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