Comments on community poems by arqios

• Test. I am struggling to post. (Without The Words) (Tom Dylan) In this day and age it is quite a production to write the way it used to...
  November 22nd, 2024 09:00
• Distant drumes (Sorenbarrett) Reminds me of what I consider a classic with Spencer Tracy as well as the...
  November 22nd, 2024 08:58
• united hearts (Jim56) Written only like one in love can!
  November 22nd, 2024 08:57
• Casual Ties and Other Loose Associations (Neville) Your Muse like Tinkerbell in a lantern has ensconced itself in this latest...
  November 22nd, 2024 08:56
• Ah Sleep (David Wakeling) Smiling through the sorrow and the pain and at times even through seething...
  November 22nd, 2024 08:50
• Who gives (2781) Songs in the night brings visions of chains scaling off and prison walls...
  November 22nd, 2024 08:48
• Life\'s Never Ending Span. (Goldfinch60) Here’s a path worthy of emulating. The span being ever shorter on one...
  November 22nd, 2024 08:46
• Moon light (Tharun) Welcome to MPS, Tharun. Very engaging composition!
  November 21st, 2024 17:12
• ~> Will Work For Head! - Monorhyme - (Thad Wilk) And on and on rides our Ichabod Crane... and his headless horseman!
  November 21st, 2024 17:11
• What good (2781) Appears on the surface to observe a superficiality of societal norms and...
  November 21st, 2024 06:50
• KP, she say.... (Orchidee) So much hilarity in place of hymns!
  November 21st, 2024 06:20
• Kiss of death (Sorenbarrett) Wow! Jam packed, vitriolic almost, seeping with cynicism. Powerfully...
  November 21st, 2024 06:15
• Amaterasu (Neville) Let’s take a dive into deep waters for a brief moment: Inner vision is a...
  November 21st, 2024 06:09
• The Seagulls over Rose Bay don’t like Wine. (David Wakeling) Yeah, they’d much prefer them greasy chips with chicken salt!
  November 21st, 2024 05:50
• The Literature Of Music. (Goldfinch60) Totally agree! Even know when my vinyls and cassettes have been replaced...
  November 21st, 2024 05:49
• Lockdown farewell (FrasMac) Aye, that’s a procession we are on either side of at varying times at...
  November 21st, 2024 05:47
• A Pirate From The Past (Cassie58) Now there’s the source of indelible memories! The pirate theme’s still...
  November 21st, 2024 05:45
• Why Complain? (Thomas W Case) OH for days to start more smoothly…. But start they do!
  November 21st, 2024 05:43
• Bullying (Liam) Standing by her side, I\'ve seen the shadows that haunt her, and it\'s...
  November 20th, 2024 06:20
• Little bird (Sorenbarrett) Now that’s so sad. As a child I’da thought otherwise. Had a green...
  November 20th, 2024 05:55
• The Terminal Generation (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Wow, atomic potency in word and image. Alaska and Western Europe is...
  November 20th, 2024 05:53
• After the Army (Dan Williams) I feel that. Over the weekend we met a former neighbour whose son, then...
  November 20th, 2024 05:50
• Sometimes it rains at night. (David Wakeling) Funny you’d say that. It was raining all last night and the mercury...
  November 20th, 2024 05:44
• Snow Of Beauty Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) A frigid crystalline hell…. Oh how I miss winter and how I wish for...
  November 20th, 2024 05:40
• Crushed (Neville) …snails in the snow 🐌 what an image! The sentiment echoes in the...
  November 20th, 2024 05:38
• Community - Go Find Yours. (Doggerel Dave) Lived there for 7 years! Another 6 in Tokyo. Same deal. Reminds me of...
  November 20th, 2024 05:36
• Left Hanging (Cedrick) And that is how it should be. True love does not alter but remains true...
  November 20th, 2024 05:29
• A Losing Game (Cassie58) Makes me muse about the disconnect… too many have been cut off from...
  November 19th, 2024 17:21
• INTENTIONS (Tristan Robert Lange) Ooh, “reality analysis“ sends shivers down along the spine!
  November 19th, 2024 17:18
• Pancakes (Tony36) Yum! 🥞
  November 19th, 2024 17:16
• Without a Sound (Dan Williams) This poem feels like a capturing of the turmoil and complexity of seeking...
  November 19th, 2024 07:42
• Culled (Neville) The first definition is a rough enough affair to involve the second....
  November 19th, 2024 04:18
• The Rain Over Kiama. (David Wakeling) How’s the Kiama blowhole these day! So tucked away you’d miss it at...
  November 19th, 2024 04:07
• Laugh oneself blind (Sorenbarrett) Story of my existence! For years I’ve up and yelled at the illogical...
  November 19th, 2024 04:03
• A Walk Through The Woods. (Goldfinch60) Funny how ‘ruminating’ on your melodious lines I begin to realise the...
  November 19th, 2024 04:00
• Men\'s Mental Health Awareness Month (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) I’ve been unaware for so long it’s kinda scary to even have a peek!
  November 19th, 2024 03:56
• Live Well (Thomas W Case) Thoughtless but not mindless… it’s the womb of tomorrow’s society,...
  November 18th, 2024 17:15
• Getting To That Age (Tom Dylan) That’s how things are these days; creak, creak 👍🏻
  November 18th, 2024 16:58
• Just Imagine This world. (Goldfinch60) A litany of “if only’s” through every epoch and every generation…...
  November 18th, 2024 07:04
• The Author (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) The entertainment factor has gone so low it’s become mindless...
  November 18th, 2024 07:02
• See (2781) Sobering thoughts on reality splayed openly.
  November 18th, 2024 07:00
• Yukiko Snow Child (Neville) I have found that even in Nihongo there are awesome haiku that don’t...
  November 18th, 2024 06:58
• Truth (Sorenbarrett) Intriguing image: ‘the harlequin way!’
  November 18th, 2024 06:55
• Trapped (Sorenbarrett) Love it! “Intellection” now that’s gonna fly, perhaps not far but it...
  November 17th, 2024 05:57
• Meanwhile.... (Orchidee) Meanwhile….. I’m all for a good tally ho!
  November 17th, 2024 05:55
• A Few Things Wrong With the World Today (Neville) More than several, it would seem mate. And to ask some to snap a pic is to...
  November 17th, 2024 05:53
• Seven (2781) Utter completion, ultimate comprehensiveness, when the time of the given...
  November 17th, 2024 05:51
• The Precipice (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) The oppressed outnumber the oppressors, haven’t we learnt to mark the...
  November 17th, 2024 05:49
• My Wish For You. (Goldfinch60) The sound and warmth of reassurance. Someone’s lucky to have you, more...
  November 17th, 2024 05:47
• Paper lantern (FrasMac) Welcome to MPS, rather belatedly. And thanks for all you do at tpf
  November 17th, 2024 01:37
• Fields like That (FrasMac) Good of you to express this in verse, spoke my soul with a lilt that sings...
  November 17th, 2024 01:35
• Satanic Panic (Tristan Robert Lange) Back when fear ruled the day.
  November 16th, 2024 20:04
• The Scarecrow and the Raven (Tony36) Ah, what a distinction !
  November 16th, 2024 19:59
• nearly christmas (Jim56) “It’s the most wonderful time of the year…”
  November 16th, 2024 07:18
• Bonsai (Sorenbarrett) Stunted by intention pure at its core.
  November 16th, 2024 07:16
• The Poet\'s Cafe (Gray0328) A very likely scene , been there often, witnessing or enacting the poetic...
  November 16th, 2024 07:15
• Power (2781) Idle power, the workhouse of the power of the devil.
  November 16th, 2024 07:14
• Selene of All Skies (Neville) Sirens do have their allure!
  November 16th, 2024 07:12
• Croquet Supper. (Goldfinch60) Chicken tikka! Now there’s a meal 👍🏻
  November 16th, 2024 07:10
• Along the Way (Thomas W Case) More than 4 walls, magnificent!
  November 15th, 2024 17:02
• FOXES IN THE TREES (Bobby O) Life’s tightrope walk every single interaction we have, shifting gears...
  November 15th, 2024 08:11
• The Look (Neville) Quasi flirtations appear to humanise us in a sterile and anonymous...
  November 15th, 2024 08:00
• This Is Me Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) Apathy appears to be the path of least resistance…. a moderate rate of...
  November 15th, 2024 07:59
• Serrated pages (Sorenbarrett) Like the story of my vagabond life- familiar odours and textures; what a...
  November 15th, 2024 07:57
• A Transcendent Classic (Bobby O) True, jazz can be the best think at specific moments!
  November 14th, 2024 05:36
• Ode To Profiteroles. (Goldfinch60) Now that’s one of the delectations of dining! A titbit that brings me...
  November 14th, 2024 05:34
• Essence (Neville) A well traveled soul, quite enticing!
  November 14th, 2024 05:32
• Ants (Sorenbarrett) All we like ants are up for extermination, that’s how it feels on...
  November 14th, 2024 05:28
• Scraps (Sorenbarrett) Wow! Now that’s a style I can’t say I see often from you…. Wow, just...
  November 13th, 2024 05:22
• Messengers In Life. (Goldfinch60) More than a few right over here that do that and make us eager to emulate!...
  November 13th, 2024 05:21
• Superfluous Twists (Neville) I might do with a super floss but my teeth get a dunking every night so...
  November 13th, 2024 05:19
• Three Wishes (Bobby O) What a superb twist that turns the whole story on its proverbial heels!
  November 13th, 2024 05:17
• The Colour of Void (Cassie58) I can only hope that as of this time and day that poetry and wonderful...
  November 13th, 2024 05:14
• The House of Tears. (David Wakeling) Magnificently rendered, David!
  November 12th, 2024 07:34
• FEAR (Tristan Robert Lange) Scary indeed. There was this book on the net about an experiment in a jail...
  November 12th, 2024 07:30
• Romp (acrostic) (Sorenbarrett) Not to mention the thick or cut lips and cauliflower ears!
  November 12th, 2024 05:34
• Hooray, it\'s Ch......! (Orchidee) You better believe it! Once the pumpkins rolled over the wreath and tree...
  November 12th, 2024 05:33
• The Sun Shone On Us Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) Just bubbling over and effervescent!
  November 12th, 2024 05:31
• Letting Go of Your Ghost (Neville) Ah… there it is… something that I know about and sometimes wish I...
  November 12th, 2024 05:29
• North Carolina (Liam) Welcome to MPS!
  November 11th, 2024 15:41
• Lying In The Dark. (Goldfinch60) In wonder and amazement of vintage vines producing clusters that bring...
  November 11th, 2024 06:00
• Another November (Neville) Today’s athlete’s foot was once trench feet and one barely remembers...
  November 11th, 2024 05:53
• Remembrances (Orchidee) There are amens to be had in their. Bring it all in to view for the...
  November 11th, 2024 05:42
• Differences (Sorenbarrett) What a mash up of images and symbols! A feast to revel in…. A poem not...
  November 11th, 2024 05:38
• Sacred Pause (Thomas W Case) A swift and reactionary response is the reflex that shortens our reach and...
  November 10th, 2024 22:14
• The Song of the Ages: A History of Poetry (Matthew R. Callies) Historically magnificent. 👍🏻
  November 10th, 2024 17:07
• Hidden (it is what it is) (Sorenbarrett) All that makes us human, bound and discredited.
  November 10th, 2024 17:05
• The Harsh Light of Day. (David Wakeling) That’s quite a way to word the feelings and notions on the subject!...
  November 10th, 2024 17:03
• Caged Dancers (Tristan Robert Lange) Quite a visual menagerie in verse! 👍🏻
  November 10th, 2024 17:01
• Hell\'s Bells (Tony36) As Mum used to say: lHere come the Hell’s Belles!”
  November 10th, 2024 16:52
• Briefly Mentioned in Dispatches (Neville) And even as the ink is fast drying many such are bleeding out in various...
  November 10th, 2024 16:49
• Work Out Better Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) A few scuffs on the heels and music in the ears… not many things could...
  November 10th, 2024 16:42
• Fatal attraction (2781) As with beauty there must be a notion that age is in the heart of the...
  November 10th, 2024 16:40
• Potential (Tony36) It’s a path both intentional and forward facing, on and on and on.
  November 9th, 2024 07:34
• Crying out load (David Wakeling) Potent stuff here!
  November 9th, 2024 07:33
• Emophilia (Neville) Very pragmatic and astute conversationalist!
  November 9th, 2024 07:32
• Each New Day. (Goldfinch60) Many people I know don’t semi to like autumn quite as much, but I...
  November 9th, 2024 07:30
• Life Prelude Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) Now that’s a take on ripples that really lets rip resounding bell claps...
  November 8th, 2024 20:41
• Glass prison (Sorenbarrett) Visually captivating and unlocking the gates of interpretation and flight...
  November 8th, 2024 20:39
• Dead in Venice (Lorenz) Gripping and imbued with presence.
  November 8th, 2024 20:33