Comments on community poems by arqios

• Regrets (Keeter C) The rhyming made it quite fun to read and to soak in🕊️🙏🏻
  July 24th, 2025 06:17
• This is not funny - is it? (Orchidee) Too funny O 🤣
  July 24th, 2025 05:32
• riptide fantasia (Arqios) Something a bit different for a hopefully exciting read🕊️🙏🏻
  July 24th, 2025 05:14
• Wonderful Day!!!. (Poetic Licence) That many of us are familiar with and still there be those that seek out...
  July 24th, 2025 02:56
• Dead Stars (Fränz Müller) This poem appears to depict its speaker as the remnant of a collapsed...
  July 23rd, 2025 21:00
• Of Mercies, Panera, and...Ghosts (Cheeky Missy) Verily, thou whose quill transformeth common morn and simple feast into...
  July 23rd, 2025 20:54
• Witty wings (Priya Tomar) This to me reads like an ode to apprenticeship: earn your “witty...
  July 23rd, 2025 19:12
• Sammy Fane (Kevin Hulme) Touché! Loved this 😁🕊️🙏🏻
  July 23rd, 2025 18:27
• a moment in nature (Luke Bensing) Welcome to MPS 🕊️🙏🏻
  July 23rd, 2025 18:26
• 5 Varya and Anya’s Vigil (Arqios) his is the 5th in the Cherry Orchard suite, almost at the home stretch...
  July 23rd, 2025 18:12
• 5 Varya and Anya’s Vigil (Arqios) when doubts turn to reality, that\'s where the buck ends
  July 23rd, 2025 18:10
• Emotions (Tony36) Sorrow can be so overwhelming!
  July 23rd, 2025 15:29
• When the Lad Died (Tony Grannell) At first I thought, that’s when he turned into a man… and then an...
  July 23rd, 2025 15:25
• The Other Side (Tristan Robert Lange) He was a real large character, may he Rest In Peace ✌🏻
  July 23rd, 2025 15:23
• The magic show (Sorenbarrett) Thinks vanish as if by magic and likewise other things materialise by the...
  July 23rd, 2025 15:21
• 5 Varya and Anya’s Vigil (Arqios) perhaps it could be perceived as a down-vote on the cherry orchard...
  July 23rd, 2025 15:14
• 5 Varya and Anya’s Vigil (Arqios) and now we\'re back to 1/3, seems quite reflective...
  July 23rd, 2025 07:17
• Man\"s worst enemy (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽) Destruction is the inheritance of the house divided from itself.
  July 22nd, 2025 08:19
• Loving Hate (Poetic Licence) Strange how only the living know pain as far as we can attest. But it can...
  July 22nd, 2025 08:17
• Fido wants to know (Orchidee) Now there is a metaphor in there somewhere!
  July 22nd, 2025 08:13
• Gone (Tony36) That is so terribly sad. The heart goes out to the ones that go through...
  July 22nd, 2025 08:12
• ode to Goldfinch (Arqios) back to 1/3 that\'s a 33.3333% hit rate... must be the standard, let\'s...
  July 22nd, 2025 08:10
• The path of no return (Albix) Welcome to MPS 🕊️🙏🏻
  July 21st, 2025 18:40
• Have you ever? (Giù) Welcome to MPS🕊️🙏🏻
  July 21st, 2025 18:38
• How (Tony36) Superb
  July 21st, 2025 08:32
• 4 Trofimov, The Eternal Student (Arqios) not too bad, considering the current state
  July 21st, 2025 08:31
• Why me? (Sorenbarrett) What a fierce cascade of inversion,“Why Me?” reads like a howl against...
  July 21st, 2025 08:00
• Shower Meditation. (Goldfinch60) A very good way to start each day!
  July 21st, 2025 07:51
• Baphomet Rising (Tristan Robert Lange) This poem is a thunderous invocation and mirror that is no gentle verse...
  July 21st, 2025 07:47
• 4 Trofimov, The Eternal Student (Arqios) Halfway through the suite, hope the momentum holds up.
  July 21st, 2025 07:32
• weekend unleashed (Arqios) A good week to all and a happy weekend!
  July 20th, 2025 07:57
• 3 Lopakhin\'s Reflection (Arqios) Thanks for the Fave @sorenbarrett
  July 19th, 2025 08:14
• The tooth (Sorenbarrett) This poem hits like a blow to the jaw; visceral, darkly comic, and...
  July 19th, 2025 07:19
• Sound Investment. (Senryu) (Poetic Licence) The weekend is so good surrounded by friends lifts the mood!
  July 18th, 2025 06:27
• where hermits go to shop (Arqios) ...not half as bad today... but the day is young, still.
  July 18th, 2025 06:26
• History (Keeter C) Cyclical lessons of history like spin cycle after a wash. But will we ever...
  July 18th, 2025 06:24
• Light of progress (Sorenbarrett) Reading “light of progress” feels like stepping through time’s...
  July 18th, 2025 06:22
• 2 Madame Ranevskaya\'s Reverie (Arqios) Thanks for the Fave @Priya Tomar
  July 17th, 2025 22:31
• My Dream (Tristan Robert Lange) This poem is not just a romantic longing, but as a raw emotional artefact:...
  July 17th, 2025 08:24
• Alchemy Of The Answers (ElizabethMoroz) That’s a stunning piece that is dense with imagery, rhythm, and...
  July 17th, 2025 07:33
• Introspection (Teddy.15) Superb!
  July 17th, 2025 07:31
• Insignificant (Sorenbarrett) Such a beautifully haunting poem; full of cosmic imagery and existential...
  July 17th, 2025 07:30
• The Morning Lark (Tony Grannell) And good morning to thee, the top of which begins with glee🕊️🙏🏻
  July 17th, 2025 07:28
• Springs Song (RSM0812) If we listened more and looked more about us and breathe... our Spring...
  July 17th, 2025 07:27
• It\'s Hot But by how much Hot (Kevin Hulme) Too hot to handle!
  July 17th, 2025 07:26
• Results (Keeter C) Quite so.
  July 17th, 2025 07:25
• Respect. (Goldfinch60) A truth you can take to the bank!
  July 17th, 2025 07:24
• I Thought I`d Prepared. (Poetic Licence) You have captured that so well. I have been riding shotgun at many a time...
  July 17th, 2025 07:24
• 2 Madame Ranevskaya\'s Reverie (Arqios) 1/3 slow start today
  July 17th, 2025 05:27
• 2 Madame Ranevskaya\'s Reverie (Arqios) Here’s the second instalment promised several days ago. The Cherry...
  July 17th, 2025 02:55
• The Paradox of Living (Tristan Robert Lange) Your lines carve open that narrow seam between presence and remembrance,...
  July 16th, 2025 19:14
• grocery aisle poetry (Arqios) Perhaps it would’ve made better sense to post the base poem first, lol...
  July 16th, 2025 08:10
• grocery aisle poetry (Arqios) 20% but not Pareto …. %
  July 16th, 2025 07:34
• an orchard’s lament (Arqios) The usual 2/3 with eyes open wide and not much else…
  July 15th, 2025 06:42
• I Met a Man Whose Eyes Were Like the Sea (Samuel Maximilian) I love how this poem shows memory’s magic; turning plain blue eyes into...
  July 14th, 2025 23:41
• Both, and Neither (Mottakeenur Rehman) This tender ode feels like a heartfelt conversation with the weather; an...
  July 14th, 2025 22:24
• Can we talk (Tony36) That has brought to words what I have had experienced and felt. Good one...
  July 14th, 2025 22:12
• The Storm (Tristan Robert Lange) The song that goes: \"should I stay or should I go...\" is playing in my...
  July 14th, 2025 21:51
• Pretense, Eh? Go Figure (Cheeky Missy) Oh wow, cats on the bed... I wondered if I had already posted the...
  July 14th, 2025 21:30
• sun fun (Jim56) Fun in the sun was always the happiest and at times the scariest of times....
  July 14th, 2025 21:24
• The Other Woman (Kurt Philip Behm) Especially tragic when there is that other woman up the family tree! Hits...
  July 14th, 2025 12:52
• Crazy sonnet (Sorenbarrett) Too wild to be untrue, it’s elements a poem would not subdue but made to...
  July 14th, 2025 12:49
• The Last Slice (Aman 12) Welcome to MPS, Aman🙏🏻🕊
  July 14th, 2025 12:40
• Happy Birthday Dave. (Goldfinch60) Love doesn’t grow old but expand both roots and branches, beautiful!
  July 14th, 2025 12:39
• Over What Hill? (Tristan Robert Lange) We never said so ourselves but Peter Pan was every bit as cool as Peter...
  July 14th, 2025 12:35
• Based on Anton Chekhov\'s The House with the Mezzanine (Ksey_Gan) Been meaning to brush up on dear Anton but found my way to this beaute...
  July 14th, 2025 12:19
• Bound Beyond Time (Jainesh.D) It’s the building of worlds that transpire! 🙌 yes! 🙏🏻🕊
  July 14th, 2025 12:07
• “flight from self” (Arqios) Bleaker than dismal… but not unexpected
  July 14th, 2025 12:00
• “flight from self” (Arqios) Just hoping the extended version does not affect the enjoyment and...
  July 14th, 2025 06:20
• from the Archives of the Sunbeam (Arqios) Of the two versions, which is your preference?
  July 13th, 2025 08:28
• from the Archives of the Sunbeam (Arqios) Thanks for the Fave @Tristan, a lone light in dark beginnings, but still a...
  July 13th, 2025 08:25
• from the Archives of the Sunbeam (Arqios) Agreed. A day of rest and relaxation!
  July 13th, 2025 07:27
• Wise Man Say (20). (Poetic Licence) Glass slippers and glass hearts... and glass spectacles for those visually...
  July 13th, 2025 06:11
• The Queen of Dunes (Tony Grannell) Your poem is a rich, sensory journey; woven with romance, mystery, and...
  July 13th, 2025 06:10
• Oracle (Doggerel Dave) It\'s a very human longing, and an important one. Knowing who\'s one the...
  July 13th, 2025 05:39
• To Poetry (Samuel Maximilian) Welcome to MPS🕊️🙏🏻
  July 12th, 2025 22:35
• crossings (Arqios) Thanks for the Fave @Friendship 🕊🙏🏻
  July 12th, 2025 08:41
• The Catch (Tristan Robert Lange) Pocono sounds better in than Kokomo (sp.?)
  July 12th, 2025 07:58
• Father Time Is Undefeated. (Goldfinch60) Just as well since Time is indefatigable 🕊🙏🏻
  July 12th, 2025 07:09
• I never knew.... (Orchidee) And it’s still such a good write, O🙏🏻🕊
  July 12th, 2025 07:06
• Roasted Turkey. (Poetic Licence) Nice double entendre! Much enjoyed 🕊🙏🏻
  July 12th, 2025 07:05
• cancer evil (Jim56) Painfully relatable as that dread evil runs in our family’s genetic...
  July 12th, 2025 07:04
• Love yourself, (Friendship) A poem to run to when the world isn’t as it could be/should be....
  July 12th, 2025 06:59
• fairy garden (Jim56) Much enjoyed, Tony🙏🏻🕊
  July 12th, 2025 06:20
• crossings (Arqios) Thanks for the Fave @sorenbarrett🙏🏻🕊
  July 12th, 2025 06:20
• An Angler\'s Morn (Tony Grannell) Most wonderful poem Tony, absolutely somewhere anyone would want to be....
  July 11th, 2025 08:32
• Sea of Dreams (Tristan Robert Lange) Your song/poem carries a haunting sense of invitation—offering both...
  July 11th, 2025 08:21
• Arm Art. (Poetic Licence) Now this is a powerful piece—raw, confessional, and tender beneath its...
  July 11th, 2025 07:49
• drive on by (Arqios) Thanks @Cheeky_Missy for the Fave 🕊️🙏🏻
  July 11th, 2025 07:26
• Not too smart (Sorenbarrett) ...now that’s a gutsy yarn, served with a healthy dose of absurd bravado...
  July 11th, 2025 07:23
• drive on by (Arqios) thanks for that Fave @sorenbarrett
  July 11th, 2025 07:14
• starfall, freefall (Arqios) Thanks for the Fave @Damaso
  July 10th, 2025 17:08
• Chilling out (2781) Seems like Cloudflare is miffed at not having a poem written about them....
  July 10th, 2025 10:07
• Access Denied. (Poetic Licence) Much of us are quite befuddled by the afterlife 🕊️🙏🏻
  July 10th, 2025 09:58
• Lost art (Sorenbarrett) The mould has me transfixed and don’t know whether that is more...
  July 10th, 2025 09:51
• Stop Judging me (Tony36) An ailment of our time and day, surely🕊️🙏🏻
  July 10th, 2025 09:48
• The Storm (Tristan Robert Lange) Wow, my 15-year old self wrote mostly like a 12-year old inebriated on...
  July 10th, 2025 09:47
• Hyenas (Damaso) The last line strikes brilliantly, Damaso; capping up the poem...
  July 10th, 2025 09:43
• Following Thoughts (MendedFences27) Good one, Phil! Elementally encompassing.... love is their sum and more...
  July 9th, 2025 09:52
• nev (Arqios) thanks for the Fave @sorenbarrett and @Cheeky_Missy
  July 9th, 2025 09:30