Comments on community poems by Augustus
- A Haiku (Will Hiltz)
I\'ve never done Haikus. Nice job.
February 25th, 2017 18:56 - I Think I Dropped A Quid Up Ya Old Ladies Skirt Last Night. (Kevin browne)
That\'s a bit of a bargain mate. Now all you need is penicillin. Enjoyed.
February 25th, 2017 18:55 - LIMERICKS 13, 14 & 15. (Michael Edwards)
Thanks for the smile.
February 25th, 2017 18:44 - You Are What You Are. (Goldfinch60)
Oh boy you read my biography. I am sooo jealous of musicians especially....
February 25th, 2017 18:43 - My life Pattern.... (P.H.Rose)
I love pats on the back for a job well done, planting a garden is lots of...
February 25th, 2017 18:32 - I WORE A HAT ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Fun write.
February 25th, 2017 18:27 - Soap And Water (WriteBeLight)
At first I thought it was some one at the office. Yes dogs can have a bad...
February 25th, 2017 18:25 - the Dragon King ( a fairytale of sorts) (Willyweed)
Precious.
February 25th, 2017 18:20 - A Smoldering Refrain (Kurt Philip Behm)
I believe I have clerked for others feelings too much in my life. It is a...
February 25th, 2017 18:18 - My favourite dream (Aa Harvey)
Filled with loving thoughts.
February 25th, 2017 18:00 - New Depths. (Fay Slimm.)
A nice way of viewing the soul.
February 25th, 2017 17:03 - Just Smell the Flowers (Iamwoman)
One of my favorite things to do and I am sometimes disappointed by the...
February 25th, 2017 16:58 - Mister “Know-It-All” (Notapoet)
Nice Poetic rant.
February 25th, 2017 16:56 - 25 February 2017 (Reivax Camlost)
Tightly woven. I have the image of a young Viking biding his time ashore...
February 25th, 2017 16:51 - An Apple For The Teacher (Augustus)
February 25th, 2017 16:42 - Acquainted with Much Pain (Rrodriguez)
Almost makes pain a beauteous thing. My favorite line is music flinging...
February 25th, 2017 16:36 - Softly she doth weep (TylerHathaway)
Beautiful tribute.
February 25th, 2017 16:31 - My parents (The lonely poet)
Lots of self realization. Nice.
February 25th, 2017 16:23 - An Apple For The Teacher (Augustus)
Thanks, written years ago. Simply creepy, strange, product of a sick mind....
February 25th, 2017 13:25 - Tracks (Augustus)
Thanks Mike, no telling what\'s up my sleeve today.
February 25th, 2017 13:19 - A sister given by God. (Aals)
\"One with the galaxy.\" Nice.
February 24th, 2017 22:56 - I went outside to pick up some leaves (Rrodriguez)
Love the tear anlagy. Could not help of thinking of the prominent veins...
February 24th, 2017 22:52 - Crescented Magic. (Fay Slimm.)
Oh my lady so much about rainbows and so beautifully expressed.
February 24th, 2017 22:01 - Angels in a nightclub (Aa Harvey)
Neat idea and execution.
February 24th, 2017 21:58 - Be A Link That Thinks (WriteBeLight)
Maybe put one of those whoopie cushions on her/his seat that makes some...
February 24th, 2017 21:56 - 24 February 2017 (Reivax Camlost)
Im with damaged soul on this one, but could also be the hereafter. Great...
February 24th, 2017 21:51 - The Proposal (Notapoet)
Makes the heart skip a beat. Nicely done.
February 24th, 2017 21:48 - Star Trek Moment (Tony36)
Precious. I can just picture you doing so.
February 24th, 2017 21:35 - Menopausal Mayhem.... (P.H.Rose)
This is so beautifully written on a subject few dare to discuss. Such...
February 24th, 2017 21:33 - Potpourri Babycakes (Kurt Philip Behm)
As always, stunned.
February 24th, 2017 21:25 - Queen for a day (Willyweed)
Your Ladyship, your wish is my command. I feel privileged to be in your...
February 24th, 2017 21:23 - The Over (John Snowdon)
This is nothing short of perfect. Sad but beautiful. Hugs.
February 24th, 2017 19:58 - The Joy of Old Age (Goldfinch60)
Welcome. Your free verse flowed nicely and was easily readable. A life...
February 24th, 2017 19:52 - My Knight (Christina8)
I believe hubby will be pleased. You lucky to have found him, and he, you,...
February 24th, 2017 19:08 - Scramble (Stephanie Showers)
Your poem is great food for thought.
Nicely done.
February 24th, 2017 19:04 - I don\'t know ? (What you were told?) (Willyweed)
By all over I believed it was your intent. It was very well put together....
February 23rd, 2017 23:08 - I don\'t know ? (What you were told?) (Willyweed)
February 23rd, 2017 23:05 - Poison (VictoriaOliviaGreene)
People wonder if they have enough love to give to many but love actually...
February 23rd, 2017 23:02 - Inner Sanctum (Tristan Robert Lange)
This theme of the inner sanctum as creepy and unnerving is consistent...
February 23rd, 2017 23:00 - I don\'t know ? (What you were told?) (Willyweed)
Love the way this goes all over the place. Cheers.
February 23rd, 2017 19:28 - Opinions (Tris Eaton)
Yes, please engage brain before opening mouth. You are exactly right.
February 23rd, 2017 19:24 - Humanity (Aals)
Doing for others gives joy. Well done.
February 23rd, 2017 19:17 - ON THE FARM (Bluecomet)
Reminds me so much of my own childhood. This flows well and is readable...
February 23rd, 2017 19:13 - Outside (Christina K)
Some days we are so happy to be alive. Nice.
February 23rd, 2017 19:09 - Waking Up in the grass. (Myinnervoice)
Kind of like reassessing your life up to this point with so heavy...
February 23rd, 2017 19:02 - Spring (Izzi Lynn)
Refreshing.
February 23rd, 2017 18:56 - She (SheWasTheSun)
Let and let be. Nicely done.
February 22nd, 2017 18:47 - Hiding In Your Heart. (Kevin browne)
Yes we have o be brave for all the demons there.
February 22nd, 2017 18:44 - Love Hurts? (Notapoet)
Naughty boy. Enjoyed.
February 22nd, 2017 17:54 - What was the reason? (Poems_)
I agree with mended fences. Nicely done.
February 22nd, 2017 17:33 - THE HOUSE OF LORDS ~ AT WORK ? (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Very educational.
February 22nd, 2017 17:29 - MEMORIES (Michael Edwards)
Beautifully written.
February 22nd, 2017 17:25 - Remand (Quemis)
Curse the plans. It\'s all for naught. Love the photo art.
February 22nd, 2017 17:01 - Just Sayin’ (Moontigerntn)
Am I detecting some ambivalence between love on one hand and ice cold wind...
February 22nd, 2017 16:53 - Three Faces. (Fay Slimm.)
It does not make you two faced as your canvases are full of your likeness,...
February 22nd, 2017 16:02 - Time Bandage (WriteBeLight)
Send me a bundle and your number for my speed dial. Neat concept.
February 22nd, 2017 15:57 - Spring Time Approaches (Ternic73)
Your poem is as lovely as springtime.
February 22nd, 2017 15:53 - 22 February 2017 (Reivax Camlost)
For some it is really hard to know and understand the self, it\'s needs...
February 22nd, 2017 15:25 - Spies (Tony36)
Who would have thought? Cool.
February 22nd, 2017 15:17 - A weep of fate (Aa Harvey)
Tear jerking beauty. Great story. Well told.
February 22nd, 2017 15:10 - Baptized There (Kurt Philip Behm)
I am familiar the short road to babtizm in hospice. Warm regards.
February 22nd, 2017 15:07 - My path in numbers... (P.H.Rose)
Suckled in the 30\'s,
Child of 40\'s
Teen of 50\'s
Lost virginity in...
February 22nd, 2017 15:02 - Flowers (Christina8)
You poem today is a flower on display. Enjoyed.
February 22nd, 2017 14:54 - Just Laugh (Iamwoman)
There are actually scientific studies proving your point. 🤗
February 22nd, 2017 14:51 - American psycho (Willyweed)
I have not had the cajones to write something like this. Love it. Way out...
February 22nd, 2017 14:32 - Some days I just want to die (Stephanie Showers)
Wow! Life must really suck. Achievement is supposed to be its own reward,...
February 22nd, 2017 14:27 - Vision of the Mind (Gerrylegister)
You are such an artist. Kudos.
February 22nd, 2017 14:24 - Who They Wanted Her To Be (Lost-but-not-broken17)
This is so beautiful in the way these simple phrases powerfully tug at...
February 21st, 2017 19:14 - Questions? (Poems_)
It never goes away. You live with it. Nicely done.
February 21st, 2017 19:02 - Child Wonders... (Maichael)
P.S. The sillouette is perfect for your piece.
February 21st, 2017 18:58 - Child Wonders... (Maichael)
Exactly the mind of a child. They need answers to all of those and need...
February 21st, 2017 18:57 - The moon (Jooles)
Celestial! Well done.
February 21st, 2017 18:55 - So what (DD.)
Yea so what. I believe in part we don\'t learn by reading or example. We...
February 21st, 2017 18:52 - Lighting the Torch (Notapoet)
Love on fire!
February 21st, 2017 18:46 - Accepted (Tony36)
You are more than accepted, you are loved.
February 21st, 2017 18:45 - A New Hope ( Short story) (Shahla Latifi)
So hard on a young mom in a poor country. Nice imagery. Nice resolution.
February 21st, 2017 15:23 - Three women, one bathroom .... (P.H.Rose)
My thoughts drifted away from the bath to 3 women all talking at the same...
February 21st, 2017 15:16 - LIMERICKS 10, 11, and 12 (Michael Edwards)
My favorite was going home early.
February 21st, 2017 15:09 - 21 February 2017 (Reivax Camlost)
Perhaps I have your life in my hands. Provocative.
February 21st, 2017 14:56 - AUTUMN (VictoriaOliviaGreene)
Don\'t mess with her either. Nice.
February 21st, 2017 14:53 - AUTUMN (VictoriaOliviaGreene)
Don\'t mess with her either. Nice.
February 21st, 2017 14:53 - A Motorcycle And Leather Bag (Kurt Philip Behm)
I saw the cover of your book about that trip. Gosh, what happened to...
February 21st, 2017 14:35 - I promise this is the last time I\'ll write for you. (Omgoli)
Great rant.
February 21st, 2017 14:27 - You Are My Academic (Gelyn)
Great. Enjoyed.
February 21st, 2017 11:49 - Anticipation (Stephanie Showers)
Nice to find yourself and look forward to experiencing something...
February 21st, 2017 11:48 - Fly With Me (Gelyn)
And sparks will fly. Nice.
February 20th, 2017 22:23 - Lungs (Lovedud)
This could be a metaphor for feeling undeserving of the love of another...
February 20th, 2017 22:18 - Simple Psalm (HarveyDent)
Right on, hang on and rise. Nicely done.
February 20th, 2017 21:55 - Remembering (Tris Eaton)
The mind is a curious thing. Great piece of self analysis. Very readable,...
February 20th, 2017 21:52 - House Of Sin (Willyweed)
To tell the truth it has been a long time since I read Poe. But your...
February 20th, 2017 21:28 - 3 good rhymes without one good reason (Willyweed)
I understand. Hugs.
February 20th, 2017 19:51 - SPRING HAS SPRUNG ~ A Supa Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
You need some Brexit, Trump, Putin Spring pudding to further brighten your...
February 20th, 2017 19:48 - She Knows What She Owns. (Kevin browne)
Sounds like a tribute to some great author. Enjoyed reading.\" Elegance...
February 20th, 2017 19:33 - Stars in your eyes (Aa Harvey)
The recipient is lucky. Great write.
February 20th, 2017 19:20 - PLUNDER (Michael Edwards)
In my youth I walked the Woods and. Swamps. The water was clear and...
February 20th, 2017 19:18 - The Kernel\'s Lost. Try Floss. (WriteBeLight)
I was embarrassed at the dentist a few years back when she found a piece...
February 20th, 2017 19:06 - Face to Face (Tony36)
I came face to face with that recently when I was reviewing my chances of...
February 20th, 2017 19:02 - Poetry in Motion (Notapoet)
Great tribute from proud dad.
February 20th, 2017 18:32 - How Does It Feel? (VictoriaOliviaGreene)
Sounds like an abused person believing all the crap she was told. I\'ll...
February 20th, 2017 17:47 - The Warrior Poet (Kurt Philip Behm)
The first reminds me of PTSD. The second of someone like Shakespear or...
February 20th, 2017 17:41
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