Comments on community poems by Augustus
- WINTER INTO SPRING ~ An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Love tulips. Wife and I fortunate to visit keukenof festival several years...
March 9th, 2017 16:14 - Custer. (Goldfinch60)
Holy Mackerel was a common expression when I was younger. Don\'t hear it...
March 9th, 2017 16:08 - Times Grip (Kurt Philip Behm)
Interesting, it appears you wrote this \"trapped\" on a plane. For some...
March 9th, 2017 16:03 - LIMERICKS 19, 20 & 21 (Michael Edwards)
Hugs.
March 9th, 2017 15:54 - Transformation – life from the dead. (Avigail)
This is a whole new chapter on your perception. Wow! My dream is to end up...
March 8th, 2017 23:28 - Headless Horseman (Lovett4166)
May your demons conjure and raise the bloodthirsty and dear Dullahan finds...
March 8th, 2017 23:24 - Book of Horrors (Tristan Robert Lange)
If indeed it was your life then this is cathartic; if not it reminds us of...
March 8th, 2017 23:12 - Penguin (Byepolarbear)
Light and fun. Enjoyed.
March 8th, 2017 22:39 - Maiden fairest (TylerHathaway)
Nicely done.
March 8th, 2017 19:28 - My love song (Aa Harvey)
Great love message.
March 8th, 2017 19:26 - It\'s All About Women (Iamwoman)
Thanks for your service. Nicely done.
March 8th, 2017 19:25 - Just because ... (Justpatsy)
Great appeal. Well done.
March 8th, 2017 18:45 - To My Dearest Friend (Kebiin)
The choice of your words are very pleasant on the ear and easy for the...
March 8th, 2017 18:37 - God (Tony36)
Great alphabet prayer. Terrific and clever. Heartfelt.
March 8th, 2017 18:32 - Humility Honouring (Orchidee)
Amen. Enjoyed, felt the words.
March 8th, 2017 18:20 - TOGETHERNESS (Kaychee)
Great message.😊
March 8th, 2017 17:49 - Dream Ride (WriteBeLight)
Mine is an extended cab, v8, pickup with towpackage and winch. Enjoyed.
March 8th, 2017 17:46 - PIZZA PER FAVORE ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Love anchovies. My favorite are square pan home made. Enjoyed.
March 8th, 2017 17:39 - Vacancies. (Goldfinch60)
Kind of stuffy for my tastes. lol. Wow! On the edge of my seat. Love it!
March 8th, 2017 17:33 - TIME (Michael Edwards)
I am with Fay. Dynamite combination you have going. Enjoyed.
March 8th, 2017 17:29 - A Whisper Then To Shout (+2) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Where your first poem takes me personally is to that final phrase to end a...
March 8th, 2017 17:24 - You make me happy (Aa Harvey)
Happyness abounds. Makes for a great union. Well done.
March 7th, 2017 19:37 - women\'s rights? what is that? (Jooles)
I love women and you did a fine job with the poem. I too feel that the...
March 7th, 2017 19:35 - Dead Grass (Vvnrose)
Pining for those who depend on you. Your heart is right. Nice.
March 7th, 2017 19:30 - Those Dozen Red Roses. (Kevin browne)
Such a mountain of passion should not be left wanting. Hugs. Enjoyed.
March 7th, 2017 19:27 - Triumphant Tellings (Orchidee)
Loved the music. Reminds me of my choir days. Your version is a pleasant...
March 7th, 2017 19:18 - Morpheus Sings. (Goldfinch60)
Cavitina is \"small simple song in Italian\". Did not know that . Said so...
March 7th, 2017 19:14 - LADIES\' DAY 2017 ~ A Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Like a sky without stars. Nicely done. Great photo.
March 7th, 2017 19:06 - Feelings (VictoriaOliviaGreene)
Nice word play with emotion.
March 7th, 2017 17:56 - Lost (MendedFences27)
The cheapskate bought a ring that oxidizes. You wear a skirt well Phil....
March 7th, 2017 17:55 - ODE TO VAN GOGH (Dford1)
Great tribute. He is so well known and loved.
March 7th, 2017 17:45 - Sticks and Stones ( Blood and Bones) (Tony36)
Scary stuff. I can see a fist fight getting out of hand. Unfortunately...
March 7th, 2017 17:41 - A COCKNEYS LOT (Chapter One) (Michael Edwards)
Thanks for the lesson, humor and a glimpse at your sculpture.
March 7th, 2017 17:39 - 7 March 2017 (Severus Alexander)
Could the forest speak truly of our forbearers? Are we no...
March 7th, 2017 17:34 - Star (Gelyn)
The stars coming out in poetic form, their essence in verse. Great idea...
March 7th, 2017 17:30 - 7 March 2017 (Reivax Camlost)
No they rather the fools gold rather than the real thing. We don\'t know...
March 7th, 2017 17:27 - Cutting Free. (Fay Slimm.)
Your poem is full of hope for the future in the face of failure. Nicely...
March 7th, 2017 17:25 - About Pen brook Manor (Willyweed)
So Wiley Willy, how did you get away or does the ghost version of you...
March 7th, 2017 17:14 - Mother Earth , Death and life - dark poem (Avigail)
Did your mom just pass? My condolences. This is a heartfelt poem of life,...
March 7th, 2017 17:10 - Two good reasons (Notapoet)
Your heart was where it should be. I love that you thought of prayer as a...
March 7th, 2017 16:53 - In My Opinion (WriteBeLight)
Great opinion piece. And the cat! Precious.
March 7th, 2017 16:36 - Yellow (Byepolarbear)
Nice analogy.
March 7th, 2017 11:45 - My Last Etesian (+4) (Kurt Philip Behm)
The unborn are calling but many are deaf.
Enjoyed.?
March 7th, 2017 11:44 - My Last Etesian (+4) (Kurt Philip Behm)
The unborn are calling but many are deaf.
Enjoyed.?
March 7th, 2017 11:44 - The river (Aa Harvey)
All over the world Nature is messed with. Great write.
March 6th, 2017 19:28 - I Am A Soldier (Tony36)
\"March on through the wind, the rain, though your dreams be tossed and...
March 6th, 2017 19:25 - Being Ready. (Fay Slimm.)
That\'s as pretty as spring morning dew.
March 6th, 2017 19:22 - Being Ready. (Fay Slimm.)
That\'s as pretty as spring morning dew.
March 6th, 2017 19:15 - My f...... cat (Byepolarbear)
Welcome to MPS. Personally I prefer not using the real curse word so I am...
March 6th, 2017 18:55 - SUICIDE (VictoriaOliviaGreene)
It can come on suddenly as you say. Nicely done.
March 6th, 2017 18:46 - Dream Team (LIGHT WARRIOR)
I love this. Trapped in a nightmare for a week. Rich with imagery.
March 6th, 2017 18:29 - Melancholy Blue (WriteBeLight)
Especially if you have ever traveled To 3rd world countries. It\'s like...
March 6th, 2017 18:21 - a gray November day (Willyweed)
Great idea for a poem. Almost a haunting one would welcome. Kudos.
March 6th, 2017 18:12 - I DO LOVE TO VISIT ~ THE US of A ~ A Villanelle (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Kudos to our seasoned traveler. At this point the Vilanelle is a little...
March 6th, 2017 18:00 - Love For The Ones Who Breathe Just As I (Natashalovely678)
You sound like an upbeat and happy person. This well penned piece was...
March 6th, 2017 17:46 - Dementia - Senryu (Goldfinch60)
Great emotional write, a slipping that is so hard to stop. Don\'t forget...
March 6th, 2017 12:32 - A UNION NOW REGRETTED (Michael Edwards)
Chance encounters. Very well done. Clever innuendo.
March 6th, 2017 12:27 - Reality A Twin (+8) (Kurt Philip Behm)
In my memory my interest never compounded but I was forever searching...
March 6th, 2017 12:25 - Laugh. (Antoinette)
The poem read nicely. Sensed the frustration.
March 5th, 2017 22:26 - Afraid to Show (Jmcg)
Good rap message.
March 5th, 2017 22:10 - I\'m Sorry (WriteBeLight)
Apology accepted. Oh, that was not about me? I take everything so...
March 5th, 2017 22:09 - bruised purple (Willyweed)
Sort of a spiritual question. Does our suffering here on earth grant A...
March 5th, 2017 22:01 - Damaged Soul (Rrodriguez)
Great tribute.
March 5th, 2017 20:21 - Spring Knows. (Fay Slimm.)
And you know nature. Nicely done. Interesting concept of duty assigned to...
March 5th, 2017 19:03 - Heartful Hopes (Orchidee)
Second time I heard about the Holy Spirit within us today. Nicely done.
March 5th, 2017 18:59 - This Abyss. (Kevin browne)
Alone and different. Well done.
March 5th, 2017 18:55 - Stardust (Solomon)
A whole new meaning to stardust. I love the last 4 lines.
March 5th, 2017 18:46 - Something For Gregg (+7) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Loved the bike trip.
March 5th, 2017 18:17 - Sales (Augustus)
Some things are involuntary, like my urine. LOL. Thanks.
March 5th, 2017 10:30 - Breathe (Solomon)
Welcome to MPS. Love, inspiration, and communication go both ways. I like...
March 4th, 2017 18:40 - Weathered Heart (Notapoet)
The prose reads nicely with a soft enchanting rhythm.
March 4th, 2017 18:32 - Beasts of insanity (DaveG)
I love \"your mind their toy\" line especially so thinking of kids. Great...
March 4th, 2017 18:28 - 4 March 2017 (Reivax Camlost)
The only recompense is the end which is untenable. Enjoyed.
March 4th, 2017 17:48 - I Feel Trapped (Iamwoman)
Our heart saddens to see anything caged. Freedom is everything. Nicely...
March 4th, 2017 17:43 - Solmonet (Rrodriguez)
The sun as a painter. Great idea and execution. I too have been fascinated...
March 4th, 2017 17:41 - What\'s the point (The lonely poet)
This reads very well. Understand where you\'re coming from.
March 4th, 2017 17:30 - Smidgies (MendedFences27)
Your \"fluff\" was packed full of things not taken lightly. Enjoyed.
March 4th, 2017 17:28 - Still (Yorke)
Conjures up some imagery. Enjoyed.
March 4th, 2017 17:21 - night fires (Willyweed)
Man has done a lot he regrets but the horse is out of the barn. Enjoyed
March 4th, 2017 17:17 - Writing 3 (Tony36)
We do understand and enjoy.
March 4th, 2017 17:08 - Be Reason Able (WriteBeLight)
My favorite was elephants were crossing the road. In days of the circus...
March 4th, 2017 17:06 - Time\'s Needle. (Fay Slimm.)
You awaken in the morning in a more gentile manner than I. This is just...
March 4th, 2017 16:59 - Yoga Practice (Philip)
Never tried it. Can\'t cross my legs and sit. Great tribute to your wife.
March 4th, 2017 16:56 - C A T E R P I L L A R S ~ Awesome Critters ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I prefer my cabbage without holes but I am willing to share. Just say a...
March 4th, 2017 16:54 - Searching for Answers. (Goldfinch60)
I looked. He told me to go pound sand. Heh, heh. Soooo true.
March 4th, 2017 16:50 - LIMERICKS 16, 17 & 18. (Michael Edwards)
Ear to ear. Nice.
March 4th, 2017 16:48 - Falling Leaves—A Poem From Long Ago (9) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Wow! A cornucopia of delight. I struggle with 3 or 4 poems a week and none...
March 4th, 2017 16:46 - Made In Heaven. (Kevin browne)
And you said you did not have the gift of rhyme. Well done.
March 4th, 2017 13:01 - Tracks (LIGHT WARRIOR)
Oh wise sage, hath thou a new love creating jealous discord amongst those...
March 3rd, 2017 18:13 - A N G E L A A R B O L E S ~ A Very Lovely Lady ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
\"With enough Spanish to incinerate\" love it! By the way, Love is a many...
March 3rd, 2017 18:04 - Carrying On. (Fay Slimm.)
We are both about the sea today. You congered up some thoughts: why does...
March 3rd, 2017 17:58 - lay Down With Me On This Planet. (Kevin browne)
In spite of all, it\'s damn worth it.
March 3rd, 2017 17:51 - Creation (Tony36)
Nice prayer. Nice hell. It\'s awesome!
March 3rd, 2017 17:44 - Lost Amours (TylerHathaway)
Such a ferocious wolf for such sweet memories. Enjoyed.
March 3rd, 2017 17:42 - 3 March 2017 (Severus Alexander)
Some thoughts like those of your poem bring joy to the heart.
March 3rd, 2017 17:19 - Validation (WriteBeLight)
I loved the pats on the back that I received at work. You are validating...
March 3rd, 2017 16:54 - Two Peas in a Pod (Notapoet)
Nice bit of humor to lighten the day.
March 3rd, 2017 16:46 - No more (Aa Harvey)
Great poetic philosophy.
March 3rd, 2017 16:44 - Encouraging Beauty (Spade1257)
Your poem is penned nicely with an important message, (but who am I to...
March 3rd, 2017 16:40 - 3 March 2017 (Reivax Camlost)
In the grand scheme of things we feel so insignificant at times. However...
March 3rd, 2017 16:37
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