Comments on community poems by Augustus
- First light... (Justpatsy)
I get the idea you\'ve taken a fancy to this person. Heh, heh. Nicely...
March 3rd, 2017 16:10 - Heartache (Anora_aragon)
This really speaks to me. Love it!
March 3rd, 2017 16:04 - An Evening Stroll With Grandpa (Rrodriguez)
You write about the real treasure of our lives. Nuestros tesoros.
March 3rd, 2017 16:02 - Invite Intreaty (Orchidee)
I\'m trying. God knows I\'m trying.
Nicely done.
March 3rd, 2017 15:56 - Perdition Assured (5) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Or is it sedition? ------
Your fire enlightens
Even in dead of...
March 3rd, 2017 15:54 - Mother; I remain (Willyweed)
It appears you are saying that at birth the mother believed this child...
March 3rd, 2017 14:06 - Live in Peace - FIBS (Goldfinch60)
Did not know about FIBS. Love the message.
March 3rd, 2017 13:59 - THE VIEW FROM BEYOND (Michael Edwards)
Nice way to express your frustration.
March 3rd, 2017 13:53 - NORMAL (The lonely poet)
Helps to write about it.
March 2nd, 2017 20:04 - 2 March 2017 (Severus Alexander)
You must be a musician. Like the kestrel analogy or windhover can maintain...
March 2nd, 2017 20:02 - Pantomime (Tristan Robert Lange)
I no longer dance and am quickly running out of wick, so I take your poem...
March 2nd, 2017 19:52 - Your Heart (Concrete Form) (Gelyn)
You have love, hurt and pain all hearted up in this one. Well done.
March 2nd, 2017 13:59 - Resonant with Discontent (Stephanie Showers)
Wow lady. This is heavy stuff, and so well done.
March 2nd, 2017 13:55 - Thursday... (Myinnervoice)
I cannot force myself to throw even a bit of gum wrapper on the side of...
March 2nd, 2017 13:53 - Triumphant Testimony (Orchidee)
One of my favorite hymns. Sang it in highschool choir 60 years ago. Great...
March 2nd, 2017 13:48 - My Past Returns (+3) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Deference to the mundane--so true. Enjoyed.
March 2nd, 2017 12:59 - Beast Of Burden (Notapoet)
Wow! What a totally different slant on love. Terrific!
March 2nd, 2017 12:50 - In the midnight of our lives (Aa Harvey)
Thanks for sharing both your love and a lovely poem.
March 2nd, 2017 12:46 - B.O. Bomb (WriteBeLight)
Spontaneous combustion. That\'s what my mind does when I sit next to some...
March 2nd, 2017 12:38 - Still Climbing. (Fay Slimm.)
\"Innocence and calm hurled away\". You have such a unique descriptive...
March 2nd, 2017 12:30 - death was a lady (Willyweed)
I half expected her to put an ice pick through your heart at any moment....
March 2nd, 2017 12:19 - FIVE FRUITS A DAY ~ HELP YOU WORK REST & PLAY ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
We are so fortunate today. We eat better than kings of past...
March 2nd, 2017 12:15 - The Fibre In Our Souls. (Kevin browne)
Wonder if one day we will know the answers. Nicely done.
March 2nd, 2017 11:48 - Watson and Holmes Went Camping. (Goldfinch60)
From Louisiana, USA I interpreted \"nicked\" as a hole and it still made...
March 2nd, 2017 11:42 - Drought (Quemis)
\"Spices far from whispered waters\" wow. Great imagery.
March 2nd, 2017 11:37 - THREE LITTLE WORDS (Michael Edwards)
It takes some men a life time to learn that. Life is so much easier and...
March 2nd, 2017 11:34 - Over thinking ~ An acrostic (Poems_)
Nice free verse write.
March 2nd, 2017 11:32 - Looking Back! (Dford1)
Heavenly, listening to meaningful music. I\'d add a glass of wine for me...
March 1st, 2017 20:42 - The soul eater (Jooles)
What a great way to express what a lot of us have experienced.
March 1st, 2017 20:38 - Time\'s immortal hands .. (TylerHathaway)
Sorry, could not,resist.
March 1st, 2017 20:34 - Time\'s immortal hands .. (TylerHathaway)
March 1st, 2017 20:34 - Here in Yesterday (SheWasTheSun)
Very nice indeed!
March 1st, 2017 20:33 - Time\'s immortal hands .. (TylerHathaway)
Oh a Celtic raven, our winged dark spirit. I shudder thy sad tidings and...
March 1st, 2017 20:28 - I am the Poet (Tony36)
Powerful message Tony.
March 1st, 2017 20:12 - DOCTOR HE SAY ~ 5 VEGGIE A DAY ~ HAIKU (BRIAN & ANGELA)
You are spot on about what the latest science has proven. A haiku of...
March 1st, 2017 20:05 - Good Turned Ugly And Bad, (Kevin browne)
All I can see is a whole lot of stinging hurt and rotten environment with...
March 1st, 2017 20:00 - Delusional Mind (Stephanie Showers)
I know the type. Nicely done. Powerful in few words.
March 1st, 2017 19:52 - Tilt (TomLovesey)
Do whatever you need to do to get a better understanding of the world...
March 1st, 2017 19:43 - Creator Contemplations (Orchidee)
Would love to be in the choir singing this.
March 1st, 2017 19:33 - My Depression (Christina8)
It helps to write about it. Nicely done. A warm hug.
March 1st, 2017 19:32 - The Hunger (Notapoet)
Light and serene, controlled passion. Enjoyed.
March 1st, 2017 19:30 - Live Silver. (Fay Slimm.)
Spoken like a true fishmonger. Enjoyed.
March 1st, 2017 19:27 - 1 March 2017 (Severus Alexander)
With eyes unsullied. Well now I\'ll have to think about who that may be....
March 1st, 2017 19:24 - 29 February 2017 (Reivax Camlost)
The old palaverer that I am enjoyed this.
March 1st, 2017 19:22 - Love, actually (Aa Harvey)
I like the part about passion.
March 1st, 2017 19:19 - love (Nicolerobinson)
Kind of message one likes to receive.
March 1st, 2017 19:16 - Get Off It! (WriteBeLight)
Great rant. Love the photo. And what a great metaphor for the indecisive....
March 1st, 2017 19:15 - dance with my shadow (Willyweed)
So much said in a positive, reflective way. You damn good!
March 1st, 2017 19:09 - FANTASIES DREAM (DaveG)
Lovely fantasy write.
March 1st, 2017 19:05 - Chet. (Goldfinch60)
This is so original and so refreshing. I look forward to your poems every...
March 1st, 2017 18:54 - Infidelity Sucks (Gelyn)
I remember the awful anger and sadness of a woman who had just found out...
March 1st, 2017 18:51 - THE RETURN (Michael Edwards)
And Gosh, I thought at first you went in for a cup of coffee. I can see...
March 1st, 2017 18:42 - For Elizabeth (Will Hiltz)
\"Feral hog of a woman\"--how sweet. Nicely done.
March 1st, 2017 18:39 - An Angels Hymn (+3) (Kurt Philip Behm)
I bet you have written more than a thousand, there again I don\'t believe...
March 1st, 2017 18:28 - My heart, My soul, My love (Poems_)
Very descriptive.
March 1st, 2017 18:22 - Coveted. (Fay Slimm.)
Appreciated more by those of us who used wood and coal that we gathered to...
February 28th, 2017 22:05 - False Assurance (Tristan Robert Lange)
Deep philosophical message here. Wow! Nicely done.
February 28th, 2017 21:59 - Lost part of me (The lonely poet)
That\'s real pain my friend. I\'m sad for you and your boy. Hugs.
February 28th, 2017 21:56 - Face to Face 2 (Tony36)
I can picture the two all riled up.
February 28th, 2017 21:47 - The Morning Breaks (John Snowdon)
A lot of work and thought went into this carefull penned piece.
February 28th, 2017 21:45 - 28 February 2017 (Reivax Camlost)
I can just picture entranced in your dance. Well done.
February 28th, 2017 21:37 - 27 February 2017 (Severus Alexander)
That the verse that flows so delicately off your never be staved. Very...
February 28th, 2017 21:35 - Neverland (Jooles)
Perfectly understandable. The inner child wants to play. Peter Pan is a...
February 28th, 2017 21:22 - Passionate Release (Notapoet)
What ever you do, do it with passion. Nice write.
February 28th, 2017 18:26 - My Little Rusty Playground (Aals)
Playgrounds used to be where men were forged, no offense to the ladies. I...
February 28th, 2017 18:19 - A D R E A M V A C A T I O N ! An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A man well traveled. Some of our cities today in the US are like visiting...
February 28th, 2017 18:12 - Butterflies Flew To Me. (Kevin browne)
Of butterflies and dragonflies and diamonds. These are a few of my...
February 28th, 2017 17:42 - Party\'s Over (WriteBeLight)
Pain in the heart? I was thinking of other places. Heh, heh. Nicely done.
February 28th, 2017 17:31 - The Old Man (Goldfinch60)
From one old man to another, nicely done. Have you ever been in one of...
February 28th, 2017 17:27 - Unstable love (Poems_)
Very nicely written about a breakup. Hugs.
February 28th, 2017 17:23 - The Myth Of Fame (Kurt Philip Behm)
There were times my deeds did shine, but never to the extent divine.
The...
February 28th, 2017 17:19 - PREDICTION (Michael Edwards)
Yesterday, today and tomorrow was the name of a flowering shrub that grew...
February 28th, 2017 17:03 - Seed Sowing (Orchidee)
WriteBeLight said it. Uplifting and comforting. I read it with faith in my...
February 28th, 2017 16:53 - Young & Dumb (Omgoli)
Your excited anticipation is reflected in this well penned free verse.
February 28th, 2017 16:48 - Watch me fall (Stephanie Showers)
Like falling out of love. Enjoyed reading.
February 28th, 2017 16:44 - Cradle (TomLovesey)
Welcome to MPS. Split my soup?
February 28th, 2017 16:37 - How we grew up. (Antoinette)
Great story telling. Sad. Nice job. Hugs.
February 27th, 2017 22:57 - I see as you see but what? (Mello)
Yes , we do need more attention to the questions you pose. Nicely done.
February 27th, 2017 22:54 - running (Janetaylor)
Each phrase is alluring and transfixing. The words flow like a brook of...
February 27th, 2017 22:51 - Bloody Scars (Tristan Robert Lange)
This is reminding me of a relationship with death. Very...
February 27th, 2017 22:44 - Thoughts of a Hopeless Romantic (Kimble Williams)
When someone is desperate. Well done.
February 27th, 2017 22:37 - Forsaken. (Fay Slimm.)
Like drugs the monetary reward for the industry is incredibly rich. These...
February 27th, 2017 22:06 - Jingle Bells (Walk to Work Style) (VictoriaOliviaGreene)
Walk to work with a jingle.
February 27th, 2017 21:42 - Little Boys (Augustus)
Little girls had to write a hundred lines for misbehaving as well I am...
February 27th, 2017 15:41 - Fuel (Jeff)
Hello again my dear friend. Have not seen or heard from you in a while. I...
February 26th, 2017 21:37 - Our perfect little world (Notapoet)
Perfect little poem. Nicely done.
February 26th, 2017 16:08 - January (LIGHT WARRIOR)
George Burns used to,say he stopped going to doctors when he decided to...
February 26th, 2017 16:07 - My River Awaits (Goldfinch60)
Walks in nature help clear the mind. Nicely done.
February 26th, 2017 16:02 - LET US ALL PRAISE GOD ~ A Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
\"From Whom all blessings flow\". Thanks.
February 26th, 2017 15:59 - Paradise found (TylerHathaway)
Love captured in lovely verse. Sweet and lovely
February 26th, 2017 15:57 - Love\'s Due. (Fay Slimm.)
Love is very complicated for no rhyme or rhythm. Well done.
February 26th, 2017 15:29 - For Hopey: Lion\'s Heart (WriteBeLight)
Great poem for one of our favorites. Fine job. Love that photo in the lion...
February 26th, 2017 15:26 - I\'m sorry (Duet) (Aa Harvey)
Nicely done.
February 26th, 2017 15:22 - Goodbye (a song) (VictoriaOliviaGreene)
Often simple is good. Divorce is not easy to understand. Well done.
February 26th, 2017 15:19 - dream a dream (Willyweed)
What a beautiful family dream. Touching and memorable.
February 26th, 2017 15:11 - Morgan Freeman Got It Right (Kurt Philip Behm)
I believe he was God at one time was he not? Or was that George Burns?...
February 26th, 2017 15:09 - At The Master\'s Feet (Rrodriguez)
I am not a bible expert but remember a woman similar to whom you describe,...
February 26th, 2017 14:59 - Emotional punch bag (The lonely poet)
Been there. Good rant. Hugs brother.
February 26th, 2017 14:49 - Turn Normal People Blue. (Kevin browne)
I am often lost in wonder. Nice write.
February 26th, 2017 14:32 - An Apple For The Teacher (Augustus)
I wish that would stick to basics. Thanks.
February 26th, 2017 11:49
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