Comments on community poems by Augustus
- The Ocean (Iamwoman)
Absolutely!
March 26th, 2017 21:42 - One Day;Maybe (Garry)
Fascinating subject matter. I am from the south USA and complete strangers...
March 26th, 2017 21:41 - Chapters (---mari0)
I gather that you are about to cross the Rubicon or so to speak; after...
March 26th, 2017 21:33 - Ant Farm (LIGHT WARRIOR)
Hello again my friend. I have been away for a while, missing your poetic...
March 26th, 2017 19:27 - SEEING GOD IN EVERYTHING ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I was about 8 years old and remember in amazement the nuns teaching in...
March 26th, 2017 19:01 - Festival of Lights (Gerrylegister)
Nicely done. Great metaphor.
March 26th, 2017 18:58 - My friend (Aa Harvey)
Both love and writing require skill. Appears you have both.
March 26th, 2017 18:55 - Caterpillar (The 2 A.M Writer)
Like feeling defective. Hugs.
March 26th, 2017 18:52 - Victory Voicings (Orchidee)
Prayerfully. Enjoyed.
March 26th, 2017 15:42 - Difference. (Fay Slimm.)
We are so blessed to have such a retinal display. Great!
March 26th, 2017 15:36 - Got Game (WriteBeLight)
In this dice game of life you rolled faith and family. Kudos.
March 26th, 2017 15:27 - WAS IT LOVE - PART3 (Michael Edwards)
Like a dream
March 26th, 2017 15:21 - Barren Heart (Shahla Latifi)
Intriguing!
March 13th, 2017 19:00 - Blue song in Morning (MendedFences27)
Seems a little more complicated than love sick blues, maybe some guilt...
March 13th, 2017 18:30 - White Nectar. (Fay Slimm.)
Sounds like you have milked a cow or two. Nicely done.
March 13th, 2017 18:17 - Sun\'s Out (WriteBeLight)
I hear that the salt tears up the underneath of the cars. Are you in the...
March 13th, 2017 18:14 - A While (Augustus)
Thanks ww, if you are a praying sort of guy, I need a few prayers too.
March 13th, 2017 17:44 - Sun Set (Alex Arnot)
Lovely nature poem.
March 12th, 2017 23:05 - Seraph (Sonnet) (Shakerite)
Was not familiar with volta or turn. We learn so much at MPS. As I...
March 12th, 2017 23:03 - Carpe diem (Jmanning5)
I like this. Living in the moment is the way to live. Liked your form. I...
March 12th, 2017 22:34 - My saviors (WG7)
Hey, you love it. It speaks to you. You are smart and like the words say,...
March 12th, 2017 22:28 - Little light inside (Aals)
Such reaching out to the universe for an inspiring poem. Kudos.
March 12th, 2017 22:22 - Fallen (Tweebtaztic)
I cannot hear or feel you but there is a churn in my abdomen that senses...
March 12th, 2017 22:09 - Deliver us. (Antoinette)
Vicktor Frankl survived Auschwish concentration holding on to the belief...
March 12th, 2017 21:58 - GOD IS IN CONTROL OF THE UNIVERSE ! A Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Nice tribute to God. She is smiling.
March 12th, 2017 21:48 - Words on This Page. (Goldfinch60)
Yes, it would have to be magical in some way. I feel your pain. Hugs.
March 12th, 2017 19:59 - Your turn (Aa Harvey)
Perhaps we can creat our own little worlds of family, friends, music,...
March 12th, 2017 19:56 - Singing On. (Fay Slimm.)
Love and loss captured in poetry as gentle as the foam of a retreating...
March 12th, 2017 19:49 - Controversial (Hypothesis)
If we knew the truth, would we be able to handle it. Do anything about it....
March 12th, 2017 19:45 - I looked inside (Willyweed)
I read this as positive, an awakening of sorts with hope for the future....
March 12th, 2017 19:37 - You Don\'t Kiss Me Goodnight (Gelyn)
Women always know when something is not right. Nicely done.
March 12th, 2017 19:32 - Space (---mari0)
As the lines of your poem are separated you are separated from your love....
March 12th, 2017 19:10 - Covenant Certainties (Orchidee)
Could that we all be captivated in the spirit. Enjoyed. Nice solo.
March 12th, 2017 19:05 - Bring on Summer (Byepolarbear)
Like the way you brought children into it as they are a large part of the...
March 12th, 2017 18:59 - The Reality. (Samreen Chowdhury)
I know those little flashes of memory but could not describe them as...
March 12th, 2017 18:52 - One Little Moment (Clark)
Great visual. Young love is alive, sensual and vibrant. Good job.
March 12th, 2017 18:40 - 12 March 2017 (Reivax Camlost)
Some do wallow in self pity. They are lost to comfort and just want to...
March 12th, 2017 18:37 - Together Forever (Rrodriguez)
Like you say, we announce it publicly to the world with God watching. I...
March 12th, 2017 18:30 - Why (Saphira)
You have to be an adult and be able to listen and learn. Nicely none.
March 12th, 2017 18:26 - DALI (Michael Edwards)
You described Salvadore to a T. I prefered some of his tamer pieces like...
March 12th, 2017 18:23 - Tears (WriteBeLight)
With every poem you write I want to say it is your best yet. Let\'s just...
March 12th, 2017 15:48 - BĂȘte Noir (Tristan Robert Lange)
Seems more than bĂȘte noir. C\'est dommage. Nicely done.
March 12th, 2017 15:22 - Sat Upon A Star. (Kevin browne)
Sure it was a kiss and not a slap? Naugh, just teasing. I\'m just sitting...
March 12th, 2017 15:13 - The moon and the sun (WG7)
Liked the comparison to,the moon and the sun. You exposed your...
March 11th, 2017 19:46 - Broken (Gesenia Burley)
They\'re angels within that starfish. Hugs.
March 11th, 2017 19:37 - Land of the Free (Hypothesis)
Rome is burning. It was put out in 6 days but then used as an excuse to...
March 11th, 2017 19:35 - Passionate Penitence (Orchidee)
Such a beautiful prayer.
March 11th, 2017 19:17 - Walking down Main Street (Aa Harvey)
My home town use to look like that. Would be lovely to,return to that kind...
March 11th, 2017 19:02 - Elegy I for the death of Leonard Cohen (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Honestly, was not familiar with his work. But checked him out on you tube....
March 11th, 2017 18:50 - The Philosopher Clown (Tristan Robert Lange)
Great metaphor. Loved the photo.
March 11th, 2017 18:29 - Fly (Tony36)
I want to in your flock. Do we fly in Vs\' o in bunches? Enjoyed.
March 11th, 2017 18:08 - touched (Willyweed)
Well I\'ll be jiggered. Now thars a man in love. Great piece.
March 11th, 2017 18:06 - A roving (The Ides of March) (Shakerite)
Great idea for a poem. Carefully executed.
March 11th, 2017 16:30 - The Muse (AmySnitzel4)
Spoken like a photographer. Nice.
March 11th, 2017 16:28 - Down the Strait and Narrow in Spring (written in Lincoln) (AuburnScribbler)
I read that about the Magna Carta. Only 4 copies of the original and one...
March 11th, 2017 16:27 - Hidden In The Views (WriteBeLight)
You are that number that stands out. Nicely done. I feel,the same way at...
March 11th, 2017 16:23 - Together. (Fay Slimm.)
Teamwork at its zenith. Nicely done.
March 11th, 2017 16:21 - THE UPS & DOWNS OF LOVE ~ A Doublet Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Interesting for a Bri: Niagra,Old Faithful, Mount Rushmore and Heaven are...
March 11th, 2017 16:19 - God In The Year 3000. (Kevin browne)
Hard to wrap my mind around the stars and even more so 1000 plus years...
March 11th, 2017 16:14 - Acromegaly. (Goldfinch60)
I have a friend with that condition, rather large face and hands, reminds...
March 11th, 2017 16:08 - The time... (Poems_)
Nice poem acknowledging spring
March 11th, 2017 16:01 - A False Infinity (+3) (Kurt Philip Behm)
A few thoughts conjured: we keep repeating our mistakes, we have to accept...
March 11th, 2017 15:59 - Numb Hearts and Nice Eyes (Clark)
Nice piece with feeling. Hugs.
March 11th, 2017 15:46 - Waterside (Byepolarbear)
Struck at a loss of words for this mind catching, emotion tugging poem....
March 11th, 2017 15:43 - layers of perception (Avigail)
I usually am distracted by detail. Good write.
March 10th, 2017 21:00 - Dark not light (WG7)
Honest injun. Hard to relate. We\'re greater than a half century apart....
March 10th, 2017 17:29 - A Single Tree (Rrodriguez)
Reads easily and portrays divine message.
March 10th, 2017 17:15 - REACHING FOR THE SUN! (Dford1)
I don\'t believe you are talking about nature here. I read it as a...
March 10th, 2017 17:06 - What Is It (Tony36)
Made me smile. Thanks.
March 10th, 2017 17:02 - Blissfull Oblivion (Discreation)
I think about that sometimes with the Big Bang in reverse in so many...
March 10th, 2017 17:00 - Redemption Revealings (Orchidee)
\"See by the eye of faith the scene
Of glory, not small, mean
But scene...
March 10th, 2017 14:37 - Fate (Aals)
Oh, could all my mistakes suddenly disappear. So few words for a grand...
March 10th, 2017 14:29 - Broken Mirrors (LilMiss1988)
Such honesty needs applause as does your fine poem. Hugs.
March 10th, 2017 14:27 - Not Again. (Fay Slimm.)
The heart, the sea, a knight, a flood, and flames all weaved into an...
March 10th, 2017 14:24 - I am (Niallprideaux)
I am fortunate to live in the country. Those who do are closer to...
March 10th, 2017 14:13 - Up the Strait and Narrow in Spring (written in Lincoln) (AuburnScribbler)
Unlike Cities in the USA those of England have histories of thousands of...
March 10th, 2017 13:44 - Promise Me Please (WriteBeLight)
P.S. I noticed the pinky promise in the photo.
March 10th, 2017 13:11 - Promise Me Please (WriteBeLight)
You have no idea how I relate to this. This is very special.
March 10th, 2017 13:09 - the thorn bird (Willyweed)
An act of kindness from amongst the thorns. Nicely done.
March 10th, 2017 13:05 - Utopia (Aa Harvey)
Lovely dream. Nicely done.
March 10th, 2017 12:56 - TEN BEST COUNTRIES TO LIVE IN ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Surprised New Zealand did not make the list. Your poems are always so...
March 10th, 2017 12:53 - The Boat of Pleasant Dreams. (Goldfinch60)
You dream well, my friend.
March 10th, 2017 12:48 - Falling (Clark)
Welcome back. It\'s a great feeling and with nourishment can grow. Nicely...
March 10th, 2017 12:46 - There Is No Telling. (Kevin browne)
Keeps invading your thoughts and is as vicious as the bite of a shark....
March 10th, 2017 12:38 - Waiting (Tristan Robert Lange)
Waiting is the hard part. Nicely done.
March 10th, 2017 12:34 - Drunk (Anora_aragon)
This just perfectly describes what drives the addict in us. Well done.
March 9th, 2017 23:28 - Do you know (Crow.)
Getting it off your chest can be helpful. Enjoyed the poem and format.
March 9th, 2017 23:25 - Question (---mari0)
Sex is all about the mind. But nice to put that out as a poetic question....
March 9th, 2017 22:58 - Our World Now (Alex Arnot)
I like the clever stars-ours rhyme. This is very well penned and proves...
March 9th, 2017 22:56 - Sleep (Tris Eaton)
Being unable to do,anything is a common theme in dreams, especially those...
March 9th, 2017 22:51 - In Time (Byepolarbear)
I believe that it hurts more than an arrow to the chest. At least that...
March 9th, 2017 19:52 - what time is it (Avigail)
You\'ll find me \"two degrees eckwards of due fnord, and straight on till...
March 9th, 2017 19:48 - His hearing (Angel Smileyface)
Sounds like someone close to you did something awful. Nice free verse.
March 9th, 2017 19:38 - Lost (SorrowfullyHappy)
Common when a lot of our self worth seems dependent on another. Nicely...
March 9th, 2017 19:34 - Remember, Forget (SorrowfullyHappy)
Very well said.
March 9th, 2017 19:32 - 9 March, 2017 (Severus Alexander)
Teasing playfully like children, now guess what he wrote. Enjoyed.
March 9th, 2017 16:52 - In Collaboration With Severus Alexander (Reivax Camlost)
Ah, the wistful, nameless, whisperer strikes again. You 2 are a trip.
March 9th, 2017 16:46 - Inscrutable Incomparabilities (Orchidee)
Amen again.
March 9th, 2017 16:35 - rise & shine (Willyweed)
Lovely rhyme and rhythm. Love the darting dancing line. You get up with a...
March 9th, 2017 16:30 - Wishing Well Was Full. (Kevin browne)
There\'s comfort in your message.enjoyed.
March 9th, 2017 16:19
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