Comments on community poems by Tristan Robert Lange
- On Writing (Tom Dylan)
Very timely read for me! Exactly how I am feeling today, my...
January 24th, 2025 15:47 - ~> The Bluebird Of Happiness! - Sonnet - (Thad Wilk)
And you know what, Thad, I bet that did not teach the cat anything! π€£...
January 24th, 2025 09:27 - Bella (Tony36)
Boy, I have a bad feeling this dark piece is a true story. I hope not;...
January 24th, 2025 09:20 - donβt know (Arqios)
I know this feeling...not knowing what to say, think or feel. Honestly, I...
January 24th, 2025 09:18 - No1 from JANUARY WRITES (Michael Edwards)
Indeed. Sometimes life really is that simple. Well done, Michael!
January 24th, 2025 09:13 - When Dressed to Kill (Neville)
Ooh....dangerous! The kind of person you desire, but then, if you get what...
January 24th, 2025 09:12 - Deflowered (Sorenbarrett)
As someone with major seasonal allergies, I started to sniffle reading...
January 24th, 2025 09:09 - Little Life (Orchidee)
Well done, Orchi! ππΉ
January 24th, 2025 09:07 - Mary and Jack (Night of Passion) (Poetic Licence)
π€£ Oh brother. After that the dog will be sleeping in the bed and Jack...
January 24th, 2025 09:05 - Thymus, Forgive Us (Mutley Ravishes)
Ignoring any part of our immune system is no bueno. Well written, my...
January 24th, 2025 09:02 - rainbows in the night (Demar Desu)
Truth! Well done! πΉπ
January 24th, 2025 08:59 - I Was Blind (Thomas W Case)
Wonderfully written. And the irony on the green jello bit, right?!?! Well...
January 23rd, 2025 23:05 - another little girl (NinjaGirl)
Truthfully, nor does God. I truly believe that God does not wish for us to...
January 23rd, 2025 15:53 - Kadoka (Kurt Philip Behm)
Wonderfully written, Kurt.
January 23rd, 2025 15:47 - ~> I Was Born To Be Free! (Thad Wilk)
That sounds like a real CATastrophe! LOL! I Guess Tom was a real scaredy...
January 23rd, 2025 15:45 - Dart and Soul (Tom Dylan)
This one hits the bullseye, my friend. You are a poet...you play...
January 23rd, 2025 09:25 - Where are you? (Olive Anderson)
So sorry that this is your reality, Olive. But wow, you have poignantly...
January 23rd, 2025 09:18 - At The Coffee Shop (Tony36)
Wonderful write, Tony! πΉπ
January 23rd, 2025 09:09 - intercourse isnβt everything (Demar Desu)
When one is so fortunate, there is nothing like it. Well done, bro!...
January 23rd, 2025 09:07 - Sensing (Cassie58)
Wow! Instantly got the connection your other poem. Animals just have that...
January 23rd, 2025 09:06 - not for lack of trying (Arqios)
First, love that picture! π€£ It really does say it all! As for the...
January 23rd, 2025 09:04 - Wake of a muse (Sorenbarrett)
Man this hits home for me. The last couple of nights (though it may not...
January 23rd, 2025 08:56 - From this moment (Poetaldo)
Aldo, I read your prayer and join in with you, my friend. Hang in there,...
January 23rd, 2025 08:49 - Meek Musings (Orchidee)
It\'s a mystery. But we who have faith in God understand that God will one...
January 23rd, 2025 08:45 - Heaving Mountains on Still Days (Neville)
Heaving mountains sounds like terribly heavy work, my friend! Still days,...
January 23rd, 2025 08:37 - On The Outside Looking In (Poetic Licence)
Wow, heartbreaking. But also true love, no? Love not only receives, but...
January 23rd, 2025 08:32 - Life in a⦠(Doggerel Dave)
My favorite description of humanity comes from The Matrix, when Agent...
January 23rd, 2025 08:14 - Young, but Once (Thomas W Case)
Wonderfully romantic, my friend! A beautifully penned poem! πβ€οΈ
January 22nd, 2025 21:18 - disappointment (NinjaGirl)
The disgraces are those who judge others and look a them with disgrace....
January 22nd, 2025 21:16 - A Bit of Mischief for \"Flavour\"?! (Cheeky Missy)
Another poem that leads me to fridge surf! And, viola, half an avocado!...
January 22nd, 2025 21:13 - `~ Pugsley The Pug ~` - Shakespearean Sonnet - (Thad Wilk)
Pugsley the pug rocks and so does this poem, my friend! A fun read and a...
January 22nd, 2025 10:00 - Pronunciation (Demar Desu)
Love the flow of this. Really makes you think, bro!
January 22nd, 2025 09:22 - looking glass (Arqios)
Ah, perception versus reality. Very thought-provoking. An easy fave!...
January 22nd, 2025 09:19 - Between heartbeats (Sorenbarrett)
The very title is brilliant, let alone the poem. The idea of fleeting...
January 22nd, 2025 09:17 - Value of Gifts (Poetic Licence)
A wonderful poem, well-written with a poignant message. Well done, my...
January 22nd, 2025 09:11 - Pleasant Praise (Orchidee)
A wonderful write, Orchi! A great way to start the morning off, thank you!...
January 22nd, 2025 09:07 - LIMERICKS 137, & 138 (Michael Edwards)
LOL! These made me laugh! And poor Samantha. Green must be the new clean!...
January 22nd, 2025 09:01 - Bleeding Ink (NinjaGirl)
Indeed, healing is a long, hard road out of hell. Our past, in part,...
January 22nd, 2025 08:58 - The Pull of the Streets (Thomas W Case)
Wonderful poem, Thomas!
January 21st, 2025 21:16 - Whispers Of The Dead (Kurt Philip Behm)
Wow! Profound with a deep, unsettling urgency to it. \"The future...
January 21st, 2025 21:14 - ~> The Mona Lisa CATastrophy! - Sonnet - (Thad Wilk)
LOL! I knew there was a backstory! Who knew it had nine lives! π€£ Well...
January 21st, 2025 21:12 - Dust and Joy (Rebellion_in_sanity)
What a wonderfully positive message! Much needed and an easy fave! Well...
January 21st, 2025 21:10 - Trapped in the amber of the moment, there is no why?! (CL Lornna)
Wow! Powerful and relatable. Well done on this! I look forward to reading...
January 21st, 2025 08:57 - expectations causing depression (Demar Desu)
Another dynamite, relatable senryu, my friend! Well done! πΉπ
January 21st, 2025 08:54 - The Old Neighborhood (Tony36)
Wonderful write! Very relatable. I feel the same way when I visit the town...
January 21st, 2025 08:53 - ( T S A ) if pigs could fly (Arqios)
This was a very fun poem, attached to a most interesting and informative...
January 21st, 2025 08:44 - Wind Chime Tree (Cassie58)
Oh my. RIP Olly. Why does stupidity have to carry such a weighty cost?...
January 21st, 2025 08:38 - From Mourning To Joy (Orchidee)
Indeed, with the resurrected sun/Son in the coming Dawn, morning brings...
January 21st, 2025 08:31 - Nature\'s poem (Sorenbarrett)
Nature is the greatest work of art and the of artists greatest muses. A...
January 21st, 2025 08:28 - Medusa Rattle (Mutley Ravishes)
This one is great! Relatable...says every husband ever. π€£ Easily faved,...
January 21st, 2025 08:22 - choice? (NinjaGirl)
YES!!!! Let\'s bury these awful clichΓ©s one-by-one...alive! LOL! For...
January 20th, 2025 12:00 - Foolish Love (Jino)
Well done, my friend. Welcome to MPS! A pleasure to meet you!
January 20th, 2025 10:23 - Just One Kiss ~* - Sonnet - (Thad Wilk)
Beautiful love sonnet, my friend! Happy Monday to you!
January 20th, 2025 10:22 - The Visitor (Tony36)
Wow! Interesting scenario! Can\'t cheat death! Well done, Tony!
January 20th, 2025 10:21 - Edgar Allan : Ravenous Poe, 216 years on (Arqios)
Wow! E. A. Poe is my all-time favorite poet and writer, a huge inspiration...
January 20th, 2025 10:19 - EN PLEIN AIR (Michael Edwards)
I am now hungry after reading this. The idea of outdoor \"baking\" in a...
January 20th, 2025 10:13 - It\'s Called...Yes, What, Precisely? (Cheeky Missy)
Missy, I would be shocked at this point to ever find you NOT having fun! I...
January 20th, 2025 10:09 - Friend or Foe? (CelticNinja)
Hello friend! A wonderful poem that I happen to know to be all too true....
January 20th, 2025 10:06 - Homographs (Sorenbarrett)
This, my friend, is the challenge with homographs, brilliantly put into...
January 20th, 2025 10:03 - Wait a While (Orchidee)
Thank you for buzzing in this wonderful hymn-poem set to St. ππ π€£...
January 20th, 2025 09:48 - Why do I (Across_world_with_u)
Poignant questions, my friend. Ones that I relate to in the asking, for...
January 20th, 2025 09:41 - Foolish Love (Dan Williams)
Wonderfully written, Dan. And I also echo Teddy\'s words. Well done, my...
January 20th, 2025 09:38 - bad dreams (Demar Desu)
Wow! What a way to interpret a dream...toward self-improvement! Must\'ve...
January 20th, 2025 09:36 - Shortcut (NinjaGirl)
Brilliant poem, and, ain\'t that the truth! π― ππΉ
January 19th, 2025 16:53 - Orpheus Rebooted (Thomas W Case)
Wonderful poem, my friend! Powerful!
January 19th, 2025 16:40 - Puerto Rico! (Demar Desu)
I am taking it this is where you are vacationing. If so, enjoy it, my...
January 19th, 2025 16:39 - My Inner Inhibitions (ADarkerMind)
\"Where hides the eyes that stalk my inner move\". Wonderful...just...
January 19th, 2025 16:38 - ~> Your Local News Reporter! (Thad Wilk)
Whew! Nothing wrong with stoned pigeons! π΅βπ« π€£ This made me...
January 19th, 2025 16:36 - The Battle (Tony36)
Loving the fantasy and the battles, Tony. Well done, friend! β€οΈπ
January 19th, 2025 16:34 - My right arm (2781)
This is powerful, my friend. Well done! πΉπ
January 19th, 2025 16:32 - Melting Snow (Cassie58)
This is such a beautiful and inspiring piece, my dear friend! Seriously, I...
January 19th, 2025 16:29 - With Groundhog Day Two Weeks Awa.... (Cheeky Missy)
Wonderful write, my friend. Now, if I wake up on Ground Hog\'s Day and...
January 19th, 2025 16:26 - Sunday School Afternoons (Neville)
Sunday School was a staple in my life. My mom was a Sunday School teacher....
January 19th, 2025 16:19 - Wound (Sorenbarrett)
Different wounds lead to different outcomes. The most minor are not even...
January 19th, 2025 16:11 - new day (Arqios)
I love Kintsugi and its concept. Profound, my friend! πΉπ
January 19th, 2025 16:07 - Of Sprites and Other \"Nonsense\" (Cheeky Missy)
Yikes, a drink thrown at your head while driving! That\'s something I\'ve...
January 18th, 2025 22:03 - Buffering (Mutley Ravishes)
This is a fun, playful verse. For me, the message is that physical and/or...
January 18th, 2025 21:59 - f words (NinjaGirl)
LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS! This, my friend, is art! And much more than just...
January 18th, 2025 14:51 - ~> It\'s Not Easy, -Sonnet- (Thad Wilk)
I could feel the longing in this, my friend. Very impressive love sonnet,...
January 18th, 2025 11:44 - Commitment Call (Orchidee)
Familiar with the original hymn/tune. This is most impressive, Orchi! Love...
January 18th, 2025 11:43 - Field of Flowers (Tony36)
Well done, Tony! Enjoyed! Love fantasy! β€οΈ
January 18th, 2025 11:38 - Flight Benefits (Demar Desu)
No...not your fault. Companies that offer benefits should come through on...
January 18th, 2025 11:36 - bicnic py the sea (Arqios)
I don\'t have dyslexia, but I know those who do. Terribly tough to deal...
January 18th, 2025 11:28 - The people for people (Isa kemmy)
Well done, Isa. This poem, as I read it, speaks of abuse done to someone...
January 18th, 2025 11:26 - At The Risk of Reaching Out (Neville)
Truth in brevity. Profound. So, at the risk of reaching out, I will say......
January 18th, 2025 11:21 - Tequila (Sorenbarrett)
One tequila, two tequila, three tequila...floor! LOL! Love this poem, my...
January 18th, 2025 11:16 - Dust (Doggerel Dave)
I totally relate to this and, honestly Dave, I now feel a sniffle coming...
January 18th, 2025 11:13 - pain (NinjaGirl)
I swear you and I are like synched or sending mind vibes or something! I...
January 17th, 2025 20:00 - Digging For Gold (Kurt Philip Behm)
This speaks a trainload of truth, my friend...in just two short quatrains....
January 17th, 2025 15:11 - In Memory Of Rod Serling (Kurt Philip Behm)
Love Rod Serling and, of course, The Twilight Zone. Great tribute!
January 17th, 2025 15:10 - ~> Chameleons (Thad Wilk)
Great poem...speaks truth. One changes color for survival, and the other...
January 17th, 2025 15:07 - Bobby O. (Bellaperf)
Oh my, friend! I am so sorry to hear this! π Thank you for coming on...
January 17th, 2025 09:25 - The Abandoned McDonald\'s (Tony36)
Haunting indeed! I have seen plenty of abandoned restaurants and they are...
January 17th, 2025 09:16 - CTRL + ALT + DLT (Arqios)
Love this brief, but multilayered poem you wrote here, my friend. For me,...
January 17th, 2025 09:11 - At the Very End of Darkness (Neville)
The light within, waiting to be unleashed but blocked by circumstances....
January 17th, 2025 09:07 - sweet Revenge (Isa kemmy)
Wonderful! Love all of the dangerous animal references. Wonderful write,...
January 17th, 2025 09:05 - damn you networks (Demar Desu)
Ah! I hate it when this happens! And, as a Mac guy, don\'t get me started...
January 17th, 2025 09:03 - Muddy shoes (Sorenbarrett)
A wonderful metaphor and a powerful write, Soren. Indeed, we can\'t walk...
January 17th, 2025 08:59 - Inauguration Day 2025 - Monday, January 20, 2025, 12:00β―PM (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
A wonderful write that juxtaposes one timeless leader (Rev. Dr. Martin...
January 16th, 2025 21:56 - Whispers of the Long Night (Zuzu)
I know of what you speak. I have felt this way. Well done, Zuzu! Glad I...
January 16th, 2025 19:13
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