Comments on community poems by orchidee
- Refilled. (Goldfinch60)
Good write Gold. Pssst! No, not me whispering, but the sound of my syphon,...
July 22nd, 2020 01:53 - walk away (Dusk arising)
I know you walked away from my singing, but there\'s no need to rub it in,...
July 22nd, 2020 01:49 - THE GUITAR ~ WEEPS (LORCA) ~ TRANSLATION BY ANGELA ~ AN 8 4 2 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A fine write A&B. At one church they groaned when - yep, every week, the...
July 22nd, 2020 01:48 - Captured. (Fay Slimm.)
A fine write Fay. Erm, not quite a life on the ocean wave for me. More of...
July 21st, 2020 06:06 - Relationship Remedy (Orchidee)
The phrase \'born again\' or \'born from above\' or \'born of the Spirit\'...
July 21st, 2020 02:11 - Song, Jesus said I’m His man! (AwHec8)
A nice write don. I feel if we keep believing for, and thinking, negative...
July 21st, 2020 02:00 - I Love You (Goldfinch60)
A poignant write Gold.
July 21st, 2020 01:53 - NUTS (Michael Edwards)
Good write and pic M.
Hope Gertie Caria stays away!
July 21st, 2020 01:51 - Undressed. (Fay Slimm.)
Good write Fay.
July 20th, 2020 05:38 - Adrift With Nature. (Goldfinch60)
I would lay down too, but I keep walking near cows fields, and I would...
July 20th, 2020 01:50 - TWENTY-SIX ASPECTS OF LOVE ~ AN ABCDarian POEM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I keep meaning to finish reading my copy of the Kama Sutra, but I keep...
July 20th, 2020 01:48 - “Do You have The Time...” (Sheridan Hauf)
We may struggle, but we are not mother*******!
July 20th, 2020 01:45 - an interesting day (Dusk arising)
Should I try some of that \'sugar\'? And should I meet this gal? Or would...
July 20th, 2020 01:44 - Song, Believers Prayer (AwHec8)
I\'m sure you\'re one who is in the Kingdom of Heaven right now, \'this...
July 19th, 2020 09:23 - Iron Sharpens Iron (ForeverJesus7)
Good write Dion. I see what sense you say this in, sort of: \'Go away, I...
July 19th, 2020 04:18 - OUR FIRST GARDEN ~ BRIAN ~ A MODERN TRI-OCTET POEM (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Lovely write and clip A&B.
But - aww, I too sing in the garden. Me...
July 19th, 2020 04:15 - Moonbloom (Noah Malice)
Good write Gon.
July 19th, 2020 02:08 - fossil (Dusk arising)
One angle on this - some churches are fossils - not going to change; not...
July 19th, 2020 01:56 - L O N E L I N E S S ~ ANGELA ~ A MODERN POEM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
What is \'lonliness\' as in the title?! heehee. Was you going to do an...
July 19th, 2020 01:54 - Steaming Entitlement. (Goldfinch60)
Oh lol, good write Gold.
July 19th, 2020 01:50 - Song, Jesus is your Brother (AwHec8)
Good write Aw.
July 18th, 2020 10:44 - L O N E L I N E S S ~ ANGELA ~ A MODERN POEM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A sensitive write A&B.
I\'m gonna use verbiage and waffle on. No change...
July 18th, 2020 05:13 - Recalcitrant (for not being ‘this or that’ kind of poet) (Gary Edward Geraci)
Erm, there\'s a worldly gesture using the middle finger too - oops!
A guy...
July 18th, 2020 01:44 - No Separation. (Goldfinch60)
Good write Gold.
But doh! Some people we wish were not always there, can...
July 18th, 2020 01:39 - You\'re a Homewrecker (TWENTY3)
A fu.......erm, jolly good write there!
July 17th, 2020 06:11 - Kindred. (Fay Slimm.)
Good write Fay.
July 17th, 2020 06:09 - Quality Control: FAIL (DianeKey6)
You could try shuffling words around in sentences, to make them rhyme, if...
July 17th, 2020 06:07 - A letter from Anxiety (A passing lyric)
With friends like that, who needs enemies? as they say.
Anxiety - a...
July 17th, 2020 01:56 - In My Long Life. (Goldfinch60)
Yes, so very long us for us two - since before 1066 at least! lol.
July 17th, 2020 01:41 - dawns delight (Dusk arising)
Good write dusk. Eh, Saturday?!
I will get me lyre out, that I use to...
July 17th, 2020 01:39 - OVERSEAS HOLIDAYS FROM *ICELAND* ! ~ FRYING WITHOUT FLYING ~ ENJOY ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Oohh, it\'s the Co-op for me - not! Too expensive. Poundland...
July 17th, 2020 01:38 - In These Strange Times. (Goldfinch60)
yes, aww. And what about Branson still? I think we should all give him...
July 16th, 2020 01:55 - ON READING A LETTER (Michael Edwards)
Good write and pic M.
Miss Berles received any letters lately?
July 16th, 2020 01:52 - Mullins Yard (Neville)
Good write Neville.
July 15th, 2020 09:10 - Lockdown Diary (FineB)
Good write Fine.
July 15th, 2020 02:14 - Towards My Lover. Senryu. (Plus answer to coded Haiku) (Goldfinch60)
I had it correct, except for the \'[\'. Or am I telling porkies?!
Good...
July 15th, 2020 02:13 - AGEING COUPLETS (6) (Michael Edwards)
Good write and pic M. lol. Miss Berles got.......?
July 15th, 2020 02:11 - MASQUERADE 💛 ANGELA & BRIAN 💛 SIX QUATRAINS (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Good write A&B.
July 15th, 2020 02:10 - Pessimistic Curse (PoeticBiscuit)
A poignant write PB.
July 14th, 2020 02:10 - covid robbery (Dusk arising)
Good write dusk. We know that some have had to go without far more than...
July 14th, 2020 02:06 - Coded Haiku. (Goldfinch60)
Bit of Welsh there?! I will be with you later, maybe when I\'ve cracked...
July 14th, 2020 02:04 - A MAN OF STUBBORN STEEL (Michael Edwards)
He might be on the way out, later in the year - we can all hope! Maybe he...
July 14th, 2020 02:03 - Awakened Side - Page Six (Nafis Light)
Good write J.
July 13th, 2020 09:49 - Ego\'s Down (Neville)
They need Barack back - all was sensible then.
They did not listen to me....
July 13th, 2020 06:39 - CONFUCIUS SAYS: (Michael Edwards)
You a.k.a. Confucius Berles?! lol.
July 13th, 2020 06:38 - See Success. (Fay Slimm.)
Good write Fay.
July 13th, 2020 02:06 - WISDOM OF MAHATMA GHANDI ~ TEN MANTRAS (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Good write A&B. Did he have any spiritual or Christian background?
July 13th, 2020 01:58 - Got That. (Goldfinch60)
They could have recommended Stockhausen - not!! lol.
July 13th, 2020 01:55 - deafen our ears (Dusk arising)
A couple of angles on this: Another ridicule is: \'Let\'s go to church on...
July 13th, 2020 01:53 - A Secret. (Fay Slimm.)
Good write Fay.
July 12th, 2020 07:01 - Perspective (JoshLohr)
Good write Josh.
July 12th, 2020 07:00 - LOOK YOUR OWN HEART : ALEXIS KARPOUZOS (Alexis karpouzos)
A fine write Alex. I prefer to \'see\' more from, and in, the light,...
July 12th, 2020 02:23 - LOOK YOUR OWN HEART : ALEXIS KARPOUZOS (Alexis karpouzos)
A fine write Alex. I prefer to \'see\' more from, and in, the light,...
July 12th, 2020 02:23 - Forever (Ron parrish aka wordman)
Good write Ron. And - I will sing forever. Arrgghhh, they say! lol.
July 12th, 2020 02:02 - Song, A Promise (AwHec8)
Good write Aw.
And yet we can have up to 30 mins message in some churches...
July 12th, 2020 02:01 - My Grandchildren. (Goldfinch60)
Good write Gold.
I too will write poems for folk - I just tell them to...
July 12th, 2020 01:57 - AGEING COUPLETS (4 & 5) (Michael Edwards)
Oh lol, good writes and pic M. Miss Berles forgot?
July 12th, 2020 01:55 - Forever Closed (Gary Edward Geraci)
Good write as a poem Gary. But on the Protestant side, we don\'t believe...
July 11th, 2020 10:55 - being (Dusk arising)
A fine write dusk.
July 11th, 2020 03:03 - It\'s Your Road. (Goldfinch60)
Good write Andy.
Tricky on some \'paths\' involving tracks, or even...
July 11th, 2020 02:05 - HAIR TODAY & GONE TOMORROW ~ A 7 7 6 VIGINTI (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Thirty pounds is a bit steep. But on one barber\'s window, I read:...
July 11th, 2020 02:02 - Falling Through Wonderland (PoeticBiscuit)
Good write PB.
July 10th, 2020 06:25 - she (Dusk arising)
I only know \'she who must be obeyed\', her who I married, KP!
I will...
July 10th, 2020 06:24 - Poet\'s Day. (Goldfinch60)
I saw a comedy show with a posh wife. She said \'Oh, I suppose SOME people...
July 10th, 2020 02:03 - AGEING COUPLETS (3) (Michael Edwards)
Erm, a change from \'out of their mouths... comes praise!\'
Miss Berles...
July 10th, 2020 02:02 - Guilty People. (Goldfinch60)
I never left me singing undone!
July 10th, 2020 01:59 - Untying Yes. (Fay Slimm.)
Ccooee, I\'m waiting! (I wish I would shut up. lol). Good write Fay.
July 9th, 2020 05:11 - Guilty People. (Goldfinch60)
What do you think? I feel that church needs maybe a Minster more of the...
July 9th, 2020 01:43 - Guilty People. (Goldfinch60)
Yet it\'s included in a \'Formal Prayer\': \'Forgive us - we have done...
July 9th, 2020 01:40 - Do you remember? (PoeticBiscuit)
I\'ll remember \'em too!
July 9th, 2020 01:37 - KNIVES - FORKS & SPOONS ~ A 6 6 2 RHYMING SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Ahh, I know now. I been hungry lately. I been using a fork for me soup,...
July 9th, 2020 01:36 - My Garden (ForeverJesus7)
Good write Dion.
July 9th, 2020 01:33 - Treasured. (Fay Slimm.)
I remember to say it\'s another fine poem Fay!
July 8th, 2020 05:24 - A WALK IN THE WOODS ~ AN 8 4 2 FLOW SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Good write A&B. I\'m off to the woods then, time and weather permitting!
July 8th, 2020 05:23 - Song, My Lament (AwHec8)
You may laugh at this, though in one way it is serious: \' I (a British...
July 8th, 2020 05:15 - Ripples (PoeticBiscuit)
Good write PB.
July 8th, 2020 05:12 - Human (JoshLohr)
A fine write Josh. Yes, more writes please!
July 8th, 2020 05:08 - Our Little Wing... (Andrew Charles Forrest)
A fine write Andrew.
July 8th, 2020 01:58 - Not a Bad House. (Goldfinch60)
Did the dogs have a bedroom each too?! Good write Gold.
July 8th, 2020 01:57 - AGEING COUPLETS (2) (Michael Edwards)
Good write and pic M.
You on the way out?! Not for along time, I hope....
July 8th, 2020 01:55 - Poor Git (Neville)
A fine write Neville.
Aww, why they wish I would only sing half a song?!...
July 7th, 2020 10:35 - Poem, Bittersweet (AwHec8)
Good write Don. I\'m waiting for the No.7 bus - seems to be even more...
July 7th, 2020 06:28 - Untenable. (Fay Slimm.)
A fine write Fay.
July 7th, 2020 06:26 - Song, Cry of those Left Behind (AwHec8)
Good write Don.
July 7th, 2020 01:47 - PLANET EARTH ~ MANS RESPONSIBILTY ~ A VILLANELLE (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Good write A&B. Yes, we are the care-takers. I will enjoy the poem when I...
July 7th, 2020 01:44 - Ennio Morricone. (Goldfinch60)
A sensitive write Gold.
Meanwhile - tears came to your eyes, when I sang?...
July 7th, 2020 01:41 - Just Thinking (PoeticBiscuit)
Good write PB.
July 7th, 2020 01:40 - AGEING COUPLETS (1) (Michael Edwards)
Oh lol good write and pic M.
Does Miss Berles have a sprout - or 10 - or...
July 7th, 2020 01:39 - Mother Nature’s Masterpiece (PoeticBiscuit)
Good write PB.
July 6th, 2020 10:41 - goodbye Morricone (Dusk arising)
Well, I am maybe his second newest fan now.....
July 6th, 2020 10:41 - Mid Summer Meadow (Neville)
Should I meet her too?! lol.
July 6th, 2020 05:09 - Bewildering. (Fay Slimm.)
A thoughtful write Fay.
July 6th, 2020 03:23 - Art Where No Men Tread (Goldfinch60)
A fine write and pic Gold.
Oh lol, on a quiz prog it said \'After the war...
July 6th, 2020 01:48 - My Dad is My Hero (PoeticBiscuit)
Good write PB.
July 5th, 2020 09:28 - White Violets (Neville)
A fine write Neville. You got any more lasses I should meet? Or should...
July 5th, 2020 09:27 - Undisturbed. (Fay Slimm.)
Yes, a walk in the woods can\'t be bad for anyone!
July 5th, 2020 07:36 - SEIZE THE DAY & REJOICE ~ ANGELA & BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I told ya, I wasted enough time finding out what carpe Diem meant! Now I...
July 5th, 2020 07:33 - Song, Jesus (AwHec8)
Good write Don.
July 5th, 2020 02:21 - Greatness Gloryings (Orchidee)
Erm, a bit jazzed up version of an oldie, in the clip!
July 5th, 2020 02:15 - Song, Believing in Jesus (AwHec8)
Good write Aw.
July 5th, 2020 01:57
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