Comments on community poems by mvvenkataraman
- Fear (Gqam)
This reminds me of my 38 years of banking,
I was haunted by cash job, but...
February 2nd, 2023 06:47 - To My Grandson (Kinsley Lee)
Dear Friend,
Many won\'t be familiar with olden day\'s English,
Thou,...
January 29th, 2023 09:10 - The Lighthouse (Joakim Bergen)
Superb poetry my dear,
All beings have feelings,
You have highlighted...
January 21st, 2023 09:53 - THE MASK (Randy6)
A fine poem that carries a fine message,
So many minds are suffering from...
January 21st, 2023 09:44 - Poet (Darcy111)
Though short, smart enough to touch the heart!
January 21st, 2023 09:42 - MISCARRIAGE (Nephilim56)
Nice meaning and rhyme, but a poem mustn\'t be written in capital letters...
January 21st, 2023 09:40 - விதியின் விதி (Menaga)
Of course walking on the sea is also correct,
But, that will be very few...
January 20th, 2023 06:18 - விதியின் விதி (Menaga)
Here I compare sea with tears as both are salty,
And I assume I am...
January 20th, 2023 06:13 - The Old Lady and the Cat (Whiskers McGraw)
Resemble the poems of great poets,
Systematic rhyming pleases my...
January 19th, 2023 01:56 - Peace of mind (NafisaSB)
Outstanding poem indeed,
Thanks for this real beauty,
Perfect in every...
January 19th, 2023 01:50 - Presence, Power, Peace (Orchidee)
If you type this in Google,
Red lines will be fully there,
But, as a...
January 17th, 2023 08:12 - Goodbyes (Zhangyuyouyu)
The poet has left it to our imagination
As to why that was the final...
January 12th, 2023 02:57 - NOWHERE TO GO (Michael Edwards)
Your poem though brief has deep meaning,
I can understand the heroine\'s...
January 12th, 2023 02:48 - FALL (Minki)
Prayer is a sure cushion for depression,
Through deep sleep, a cure we...
January 12th, 2023 01:01 - Working Hard (BlessedbyGod)
Any poem that adores God is sacred,
Here you have given a holy...
January 12th, 2023 00:56 - Argentina (Jerry Wayne Lawrence)
I don\'t know if you talk about country Argentina
Or a person with the...
January 12th, 2023 00:53 - Struggles (Still Angry)
The poem is written very well,
With admirable advice to deliver,
Thanks...
January 11th, 2023 02:01 - The Dad I Never Knew (Tommytoons)
Ode to every dad,
Who is always sad,
As worries are had,
He never feels...
January 11th, 2023 01:55 - Im never alone. (Unspoken)
One great man said-
\"If you don\'t know the language of a country,...
January 11th, 2023 01:48 - in appreciation (NafisaSB)
Thank you for the poem as it has a positive note,
Being positive always...
January 10th, 2023 02:35 - Keep A Smile. (Goldfinch60)
A smile is a treasure,
That gives pleasure,
By removing the...
January 10th, 2023 02:32 - Tears And Joy. (Goldfinch60)
Out of the way comment-
Abdul Kalam, India\'s former President...
January 8th, 2023 04:34 - JUST BE YOURSELF (BlessedbyGod)
The poem exactly tells how to live in this world,
A clear easy language...
January 8th, 2023 04:29 - Wholesome Worshipping (Orchidee)
I was writing about Jesus earlier,
After Ukraine war, I honestly...
January 7th, 2023 03:41 - Believe In Dreams. (Goldfinch60)
After crossing 60 in age,
I can\'t remember the dream
That I had just...
January 7th, 2023 03:35 - Don\'t Tell The Truth (Satishverma)
I am not criticizing, but tell the fact,
I can\'t understand any of his...
January 6th, 2023 22:22 - The troubles of Love. (Poets Dream)
Mind of a woman can never be read by anyone,
They will love just for...
January 6th, 2023 22:16 - Money (Chris Duffy)
I like this poem as I am a commerce graduate,
In a fine and hilarious...
January 6th, 2023 22:10 - Giving Up Won\'t Help Develop (Mvvenkataraman)
I feel you are my guru in this connection,
I am learning a lot from your...
January 5th, 2023 03:28 - மிஞ்சியது என்ன? (Menaga)
Kindly send your Tamil poems as they are good
And give to brain enough...
January 5th, 2023 03:09 - Musical Travels. (Goldfinch60)
Your poem about music gives a pleasant kick,
Of course does the trick, no...
January 5th, 2023 03:05 - Who do you trust? (Hzugman)
Mind will act smart,
But, heart will comfort,
By playing a kind...
January 5th, 2023 03:02 - A Purpose To Live (Undreamed_friend)
We always need a purpose to live,
Once that is firmly established,
Then,...
January 4th, 2023 21:25 - Life As The Economy Drones (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
First I studied the meaning friend,
Only then I noticed the...
January 4th, 2023 21:20 - Bravery (Natalie Heisey)
In the eighth line, it is \"were\"
In the 16th line, it is...
January 3rd, 2023 12:53 - A Hearts Complications (Rick j. lewis)
At age 14, I didn\'t even know how to talk in English,
Language and...
January 3rd, 2023 12:45 - Fading Away (Sassy Lou)
Superb free verse indeed,
The flow is excellent,
The meaning is...
January 3rd, 2023 12:39 - Relax (PurpleGlasses)
Relax or else life will tax,
Tension and worry, you axe,
Relax to end...
January 3rd, 2023 12:36 - Bald Is Beautiful (BlessedbyGod)
One fully bald-headed actor in Tamil Nadu,
Who lost hair at the age of 25...
January 2nd, 2023 21:53 - Observe Wisdom. (Goldfinch60)
Knowledge is gathered by all,
But, unfortunately wisdom is...
January 2nd, 2023 21:46 - December (Undreamed_friend)
Great philosophy is sprinkled in your poem,
I feel you are sad and feel...
January 1st, 2023 22:13 - New Year (Dr. Soma)
I totally agree with your poetic message,
We must await solutions for...
January 1st, 2023 22:07 - 2023 (Randyjohnson71)
An optimistic poetry to bring great hope,
May your feelings become a...
January 1st, 2023 22:04 - Death (PurpleGlasses)
Though your poem contains just four lines,
It has colossal meaning to...
January 1st, 2023 22:00 - Welcome New Year. (Goldfinch60)
New Year and Nature are combined by you in your poem,
I am sure it is a...
January 1st, 2023 21:56 - Old year vs new (NafisaSB)
I like this reasonable comparison,
You have perfectly analyzed indeed,
A...
January 1st, 2023 01:28 - Sometimes (Kayla Jackson)
You are a noble poet indeed,
Nowadays none sees the Sky
With awe in the...
December 30th, 2022 22:41 - Perfectly planned (BlessedbyGod)
Your poem is rhymed with perfection,
Your words are also crystal...
December 30th, 2022 22:37 - உணர்வுகள் (Menaga)
In the morning time, caw of crow,
In the evening time, charm of the...
December 30th, 2022 12:36 - உணர்வுகள் (Menaga)
I am not just like that patting,
Indeed your poem is touching,
I am...
December 30th, 2022 12:28 - வளம் பொங்க வருது பொங்கல்! (Mvvenkataraman)
I thank you deeply my poetic side,
I am surprised over this...
December 29th, 2022 13:10 - இன்று நான் (Menaga)
O God- Tamil words are here seen,
What a lovely joy and true bliss,
My...
December 29th, 2022 12:50 - Time to say goodbye (TimeSpace29)
I loved the flow of the poem really,
As words are flowing like...
December 29th, 2022 12:40 - Merry Christmas (BlessedbyGod)
Happy Christmas!
December 22nd, 2022 10:16 - One Bullet Ended It All (Randyjohnson71)
Extraordinary poem indeed,
Amazed by the lovely rhyme,
Unbelievably...
December 22nd, 2022 10:13 - Regret (Jefferson3)
Superb poetry with lovely rhymes,
But, normally all the top class...
December 16th, 2022 10:21 - SUICIDE (Drniran)
I love deeply poems with rhyme,
It is a thrill to watch how all rhyme,
I...
December 9th, 2022 10:25 - DREAM (ALEXANDRIA.)
A lovely poem about love,
Nicely words are chosen,
Keep it up to write...
December 6th, 2022 10:06 - MEET ME (Gunwanti Harish Thanvi)
True love is expressed,
In the present trend
Such a pure love
Is...
December 6th, 2022 09:46 - Definitions (Hzugman)
Lovely definition,
It is indeed superb,
Great job dear poet,
Continue...
December 6th, 2022 09:42 - Merry Christmas, Mom - Part X (Randyjohnson71)
What a lovely poem that is clear in its meaning!
It touches the heart to...
December 2nd, 2022 10:18 - What A Waste (LibbyLane)
Many show false love and ditch,
We can\'t find it out that easily,
We...
November 27th, 2022 06:23 - Self Hate (Mr. Not)
All the hated things are solvable,
We can easily end them one day,
This...
November 27th, 2022 06:20 - Protecting Moon. (Goldfinch60)
Moon is for poets a boon,
Your Moon poem is nice,
Moon is for night a...
November 27th, 2022 06:16 - Miracles (J.H.Byron-Nuel)
Wait and try,
Don\'t cry,
Your advice,
Truly nice!
November 6th, 2022 06:07 - My Life is Meaningful (Feefee)
Starting with great dejection
Ending with hope\'s selection,
I greatly...
November 6th, 2022 05:55 - Blessings (Tayama)
A heart-touching poem indeed,
The poet brings not only tears,
But awe...
November 2nd, 2022 01:32 - Why get angry? (Hzugman)
When we delay anger is lost,
The poem tells that clearly,
These four...
October 28th, 2022 10:32 - Mind games (Amdimisko)
Life is nothing but adjustment,
If we adjust, life will be Heaven,
If we...
September 16th, 2022 22:21 - Nightmare (Dr. Soma)
Certain dreams arise out of the past normally,
Certain dreams seem to be...
September 16th, 2022 22:11 - Depress from inside (Tia17aurora)
Be happy and firmly decide to be jolly,
Take a cup of coffee and enjoy it...
September 16th, 2022 22:06 - Keep going (Icuffmyjeansdaily)
Nice, but in wake up state many mentally bleed with no consolation from...
September 16th, 2022 22:00 - A Righteous Life (How To Press On) (ForeverJesus7)
Nice message to boost morale,
It will make the listener a whale,
It...
September 10th, 2022 11:01 - A teacher (NafisaSB)
Lovely poem,
A true gem,
Words sparkle
Like stars twinkle!
September 10th, 2022 10:56 - Hope (Gary Edward Geraci)
Prayers can do miracles,
It can overcome obstacles,
It can eliminate...
September 10th, 2022 10:51 - Trapped (Poet Lees)
Those who lived amid wars can only understand this poem,
Those who never...
July 10th, 2022 02:35 - In Memoriam Of My Mom (The Depressed 1)
A lovely poem for his mother,
Simple, but effective indeed,
Like her,...
July 10th, 2022 02:28 - LEAD ME TO CHURCH (The Poet)
We have a Church before our apartments,
Only on Fridays and Sundays they...
July 1st, 2022 11:34 - I\'ve got a secret (Hzugman)
A humorous four lines,
They contain the truth,
If you want to keep a...
July 1st, 2022 11:28 - The Girl (Jooles)
How finely written is this poem !
A simple language is...
January 16th, 2017 02:54 - simplicity as a way (Bushido)
My dearest poet, I beg your pardon
As in many places lie sheer...
November 6th, 2013 09:39 - House but no Home (Toopka)
What a lovely poem from a pained child!
What a trauma is had by this...
July 19th, 2013 13:46 - Is she my mother? (Soumita Sarkar)
A bad mother is an absolute exception
Normally all mothers are holy...
July 19th, 2013 13:42 - Please forgive me (JoshuaConklin)
Heart is exactly like a glass/
Once it is broken by oversight/
Attaching...
July 19th, 2013 13:37 - "I thought you were for me..." (Marshak12)
The poetess has clubbed God and love
And my first reading gave me...
March 7th, 2013 11:30 - Pray for my brother (Peggi)
Highly silly to pray for getting a girl
Is she the only woman on this...
October 7th, 2012 11:39 - SIN... (Antonio Wright)
Your poem is wonderfully written
You have taken pains to create it
It is...
October 7th, 2012 11:32 - life goes on (Meigh)
A really wonderful poem though sad
The poet has followed poetic...
July 4th, 2012 10:17 - mother (Ironmaiden_81186)
Dear respected ironmaiden_81186,
Your love for your mother is...
November 16th, 2011 12:14 - Bring back your smile (Huzaidi Hashim)
Dear respected Huzaidi Hashim,
In spite of deepest sorrow
You have...
November 16th, 2011 12:05 - mommy (Bluesyzygy)
Dear respected bluesyzygy,
Your poem about mother is touching
Nothing...
November 16th, 2011 11:59
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