Comments on community poems by baj-a
- Our Dance (Bigwolf)
what lovely images you have created for us to enjoy. may you dance
April 30th, 2013 07:59 - Rabbit Holes (Nair36)
as dark and frightening as this poem is it is also beautiful in the flow...
April 27th, 2013 07:44 - I Saw the Reaper (Diamonddagger)
well expressed and quite profound in your realization that you do not fear...
April 27th, 2013 07:43 - The Willow Tree (DaylightDawning36)
beautiful imagery! lovely lovely write!
April 26th, 2013 07:36 - I wish for Rainbows (Diamonddagger)
let me know if you find that pot of gold at the end of one of those...
April 26th, 2013 07:35 - Dog Song (Diamonddagger)
what a fun scene you give us with this poem. brought a smile to my face
April 22nd, 2013 07:34 - Oxygen (Jalso)
powerfully written and well expressed.
April 18th, 2013 10:26 - Tickle Fight (Nair36)
wow! excellent! truly enjoyed this one!
April 18th, 2013 10:26 - The Spider's Web (DaylightDawning36)
beautiful imagery! love it!
April 18th, 2013 10:25 - What Am I (Bigwolf)
isn't it time to reveal the answer :-)?
April 17th, 2013 07:53 - sinking (Jalso)
you are someone if you just look and see... you are a person worthy of...
April 17th, 2013 07:51 - Water Bottle (Nair36)
intriguing and interesting write
April 17th, 2013 07:49 - LOVE'S GIFTS (Sokibgb)
wise words my friend! and well said!
April 17th, 2013 07:48 - Go to Sleep (Jalso)
so sad and heartbreaking. it is hard to watch someone we love die...
April 17th, 2013 07:48 - HOLY WINGS (Satishverma)
your imagery is always so complex and fills my heart with sadness. your...
April 17th, 2013 07:46 - Fire Takes it All (Diamonddagger)
very sad and tragic poem. little kids sleep in their shoes now......
April 14th, 2013 07:21 - UV Rays (Nair36)
and this poem blooms with such beauty! the imagery is wonderful!
April 12th, 2013 08:16 - I've come home (Jalso)
what a beautiful dance! and a lovely way to describe the final dance we...
April 12th, 2013 08:15 - WHEREVER I MAY GO (Sokibgb)
so sweet and lovely it left me with a smile and a soft sigh.
April 12th, 2013 08:14 - Witch Hunters (Diamonddagger)
the sad thing is we will always distrust and fear what we don't understand...
April 12th, 2013 08:13 - Soulful Cries (Spirit_Of_Freedom)
dark and real! vivid images of a harsh reality fills this reader with such...
April 12th, 2013 08:12 - RAGS AND RICHES (Satishverma)
the imagery is both eye opening and intriguing. bronzed tongue digs the...
April 12th, 2013 08:10 - The Huddled Person (Diamonddagger)
has a mystical quality to it almost a dream state... they mysterious...
April 11th, 2013 07:48 - Ivory Combust (Nair36)
intriguing! quite intriguing!
April 11th, 2013 07:45 - Illusion (Jalso)
powerful and poignant and well expressed. the feeling of not being sure of...
April 11th, 2013 07:43 - HALLUCINATION (Satishverma)
this is one of those awe inspiring poems that leaves me breathless.
April 11th, 2013 07:41 - CURVATURE (Satishverma)
haunting images that sear the soul. to kiss the feet of a burning god......
April 10th, 2013 08:03 - MY CASTLE IN THE SKY (Sokibgb)
such a delicate topic and handled so beautifully and with such...
April 10th, 2013 08:02 - Mask (Nair36)
awesomely intriguing images that haunt the reader! If I had to pick a...
April 10th, 2013 08:00 - I Whisper Your Name (Diamonddagger)
hauntingly beautiful. I especially love the lines
I stare into your...
April 10th, 2013 07:57 - Feel The Love (Spirit_Of_Freedom)
very lovely poem! I enjoyed the softness of the words and the idea of...
April 10th, 2013 07:50 - INTO THE SUNSHINE (Sokibgb)
yay! love the end! the entire poem is lovely and though provoking but the...
April 8th, 2013 07:44 - Emotion about Possible Promotion (Mvvenkataraman)
each vignette has a charm and lesson of it's own. very well said and...
April 8th, 2013 07:43 - HALLUCINATION (Satishverma)
so profoundly sad and beautiful
April 8th, 2013 07:42 - The Bluebird (Diamonddagger)
lol! fun write and oh so very true!
April 7th, 2013 07:44 - DISASTER AND AFTER (Satishverma)
powerful and true words that tear at the heart and bring us face to face...
April 7th, 2013 07:43 - LIFE (Sudarshan)
excellent words! glad to see some people still understand everything...
April 7th, 2013 07:42 - tomorrow (Jalso)
listen to that little voice that tells you there is always tomorrow :-)....
April 6th, 2013 07:44 - Getting Old is Not For Sissies (Diamonddagger)
lol! you got that right! a fun read!
April 6th, 2013 07:43 - FACE TO FACE (Satishverma)
this one just hit me in the gut with the powerful images...especially...
April 6th, 2013 07:40 - THE SCHOOL (Sudarshan)
I had to laugh at the line that teachers give you work to do that bores...
April 6th, 2013 07:39 - You Are Gone (Senryu) (Bigwolf)
beautiful in it's sadness.
April 5th, 2013 07:27 - How can I be (Jalso)
You put into words what I have sometimes asked myself? how can I be and am...
April 5th, 2013 07:27 - Her Eyes (Nair36)
powerfully intriguing! the imagery is very vivid and as cheeky missy said...
April 5th, 2013 07:25 - SOMEONE, SOMEWHERE (Sokibgb)
you captured the emotions of longing for someone to love and share your...
April 5th, 2013 07:22 - The Wild Deer (Diamonddagger)
what an exciting image you created for us to share in with this...
April 5th, 2013 07:20 - PINK CITY (Satishverma)
you have created such vivid and powerful images with each verse. while...
April 5th, 2013 07:18 - ~ (Diamonddagger)
beautifully presented. love the style. very sweet and soft and easy to...
April 4th, 2013 07:12 - SWEET REVENGE (Satishverma)
You are so right! it is the unspoken words that speak the loudest and...
April 4th, 2013 07:11 - PRESERVING NATURE (Sudarshan)
what a wonderful poem! i am one who believes that trees feel pain when we...
April 3rd, 2013 07:35 - REMIND ME PLEASE (Sokibgb)
Sometimes we all need a reminder of who we are. In this crazy sad world we...
April 3rd, 2013 07:32 - The Gentle Touch (Diamonddagger)
lovely write! you captured the mind of the poet very well in this one.
April 3rd, 2013 07:30 - IT HAPPENED (Satishverma)
wow! powerful and poignant and so true it is painful.
April 3rd, 2013 07:29 - Space Between (Jalso)
I know you categorized this as a love poem but I find it sad that there...
April 3rd, 2013 07:29 - UNTOUCHED (Sokibgb)
you expressed the feelings of being away from the one you love very well....
April 2nd, 2013 07:26 - I Cannot Disagree (Jalso)
I cannot disagree this is a well penned poem. So sad that it is true that...
April 2nd, 2013 07:25 - Butterfly (JayPoetry)
sweet and lovely write about that oh so elusive butterfly of love. :-)
April 2nd, 2013 07:23 - THE ALTERED WORLD (Sudarshan)
sadly your poem is to true, my friend, we have forgotten we are caretakers...
April 2nd, 2013 07:22 - What Am I (Bigwolf)
Other than a beautifully penned intriguing poem I don't know the answer to...
April 2nd, 2013 07:21 - THE WRITER (Sokibgb)
an intriguing and interesting write about the human psyche.
April 1st, 2013 07:52 - I WONDER WHY? (Sudarshan)
What a 'wonder'ful poem :-). so much to see and experience and to bring...
April 1st, 2013 07:50 - MOCKINGBIRDS (Satishverma)
you speak a lot of truth here! volumes!
April 1st, 2013 07:48 - Peace and Harmony (a pantoum) (Diamonddagger)
and maybe someday it will be more than a story :-). nice pantoum by the...
April 1st, 2013 07:47 - Southward (Bigwolf)
ah yes we have the beautiful feathered birds that migrate south for the...
March 31st, 2013 08:18 - New Age Philosophy (JayPoetry)
sometimes the harsh realities of life make the best poems because they are...
March 31st, 2013 08:15 - DAY OF SUNSHINE (Sokibgb)
don't you just love those perfect days that make you feel so glad to be...
March 31st, 2013 08:14 - Twister (a lento) (Diamonddagger)
lento's are not easy but are a fun form. this one was a fun and intriguing...
March 31st, 2013 08:13 - LOCKED DOOR (Satishverma)
for some reason this poem left me with a chilling feeling of doom. very...
March 31st, 2013 08:12 - The Inner Truth (JayPoetry)
mental anguish of any kind regardless of what brings it on is painful and...
March 30th, 2013 09:00 - THINKING - haiku (Sokibgb)
wow! so true and so beautiful. an old friend of mine, who passed away,...
March 30th, 2013 08:57 - Disillusions (Bigwolf)
but when I woke dear I was dreaming and I hung my head and I cried.. you...
March 30th, 2013 08:56 - The Air So Oddly Foul (Diamonddagger)
you said it all! there are times I feel invisible and even ask doesn't...
March 30th, 2013 08:54 - THE LOST ROUTE (Sudarshan)
the funny thing is that has happened to me too many times and not because...
March 30th, 2013 08:52 - RAGING STORM (Sokibgb)
Your poem took me back to nights when as a young person I would lie in my...
March 29th, 2013 07:59 - GENOCIDE (Satishverma)
you have such deep insight into the realities of life that at times it...
March 29th, 2013 07:57 - My Report (JayPoetry)
wow! dark and filled with harsh realities and well written! I especially...
March 29th, 2013 07:56 - THE GHOST SLAYER (Sudarshan)
Fun read but dang! why did he have to kill all the ghosts? Ghosts are not...
March 29th, 2013 07:54 - Tasteing (Jalso)
You had me from line one :-)! I understand what you are saying and applaud...
March 28th, 2013 07:10 - And The Band Played On (Diamonddagger)
I felt a little breathless as I read this poem :-). What a wonderfully...
March 28th, 2013 07:08 - Cold World (JayPoetry)
well written and powerful in the truth it tells. your use of imagery is...
March 28th, 2013 07:07 - OF TIME AND CHAINS (Satishverma)
the powerful images you make with your words leave me in awe of your...
March 28th, 2013 07:05 - The Light Show (Bigwolf)
I do believe you write the best nature poems I have ever read! I love the...
March 28th, 2013 07:04 - Along The Beach (Bigwolf)
Having grown up on the shores of Lake Erie I felt this poem in my heart. I...
March 27th, 2013 08:00 - THE SINGER (Sokibgb)
the last lines took my breath away... music stole my lovers soul... truly...
March 27th, 2013 07:56 - Going To The Land Of Forever (Diamonddagger)
i love the flow of this... like a song! i could hear music as I read.
March 27th, 2013 07:54 - FAITHLESS HANDS (Satishverma)
the entire poem is filled with truth but the last two lines are the truest...
March 27th, 2013 07:53 - A Poet's Web (Bigwolf)
I do love the imagery you have created... of what a tangled web we weave...
March 27th, 2013 07:52 - Where Do You Go (Diamonddagger)
sad and sweet ... the feeling of being shut out of part of the life of...
March 26th, 2013 07:18 - JUXTAPOSED (Satishverma)
profoundly sad and strong... give me a piece of your body... wow! amazing...
March 26th, 2013 07:17 - GENTLE MAN (Sokibgb)
you left me with a gentle sigh and a wish that I should know such a man
March 25th, 2013 16:49 - Mesmerized (Bigwolf)
you made the moment come so alive I felt as if I were actually witnessing...
March 25th, 2013 16:48 - Walking The Sidewalks Of Brooklyn (Bigwolf)
To be here in America on the streets of Brooklyn
where everything seemed...
March 25th, 2013 07:15 - SOMETIMES (Sokibgb)
Right there with you! I understand this poem! well done!
March 25th, 2013 07:11 - ANOTHER STROKE (Satishverma)
the horror of the scene is so vivid in the words you write. I am so pained...
March 25th, 2013 07:10 - Dance (Bigwolf)
I am one who believes everyone should dance! I love this one but...
March 25th, 2013 07:08 - The Last Pickle in the Jar (BrokenWordsPoet)
lol! left me with a smile! yep! we were all young once and this poem took...
March 24th, 2013 07:00 - MOONLIGHT DREAM (Sokibgb)
such a gentle and sweet poem of love. beautiful.
March 24th, 2013 06:58 - She Waits Like Spring (Bigwolf)
left me with a happy sigh....beautifully written.
March 24th, 2013 06:57 - HE (Satishverma)
I have to agree with everything diamonddager said. this is another wow!...
March 24th, 2013 06:56 - Stand Up and Take It (Diamonddagger)
you got that right! too many sit and wait for their dreams to come to them...
March 24th, 2013 06:55
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