Comments on community poems by baj-a
- Sweet Summertime (Bigwolf)
the imagery is wonderful and makes summer sound magical and sweet.
March 23rd, 2013 07:17 - Reach The Sky (Jalso)
hey! interesting and intriguing poem. i got lost in the words and enjoyed...
March 23rd, 2013 07:15 - HOME TIME (Colin)
couldn't help but smile as I read this one. the scenario is so real and I...
March 23rd, 2013 07:12 - THE END (Satishverma)
your poetry always has a deep impact. always profound. that last line is...
March 23rd, 2013 07:10 - SEE? (Colin)
when that eye popped up it was a bit scary...and the poem is also...
March 23rd, 2013 07:09 - Winter Bone (Diamonddagger)
intriguing scenario presented with this poem. i understand the winter bone...
March 23rd, 2013 07:08 - I Cry For The Children (Bigwolf)
lost boys and golden girls... a line from one of my favorite meatloaf...
March 22nd, 2013 07:13 - Light to heal (Dolphine29)
wow! amazing insight in this poem.. we all carry that light that heals....
March 22nd, 2013 07:12 - FOREVER TOGETHER (Sokibgb)
beautiful in a mystical sort of way... I love that last verse! well done!
March 22nd, 2013 07:11 - If I Couldn't Hear Your Laughter (Diamonddagger)
bitter sweet and filled with love. beautiful poem!
March 22nd, 2013 07:09 - DESTINY (Satishverma)
Amen to that last line! nobody is blameless!
March 22nd, 2013 07:08 - Random Thoughts (Lezyl legaspi)
I love random thoughts! such an interesting mind! and a very good poem!
March 21st, 2013 08:20 - DARK (Colin)
very dark and compelling piece here.
March 21st, 2013 08:13 - MY MAN (Star)
and I hope your man appreciates you feel so strongly about him and his...
March 21st, 2013 08:12 - MEMORIES - thinking of you (Sokibgb)
you captured the pain of lost love so perfectly and the sadness of...
March 20th, 2013 17:36 - The Silent Storm (Bigwolf)
you write some of the most beautiful nature poems I have ever read. your...
March 20th, 2013 17:35 - KNOCK!!KNOCK!!!! (Colin)
knock knock...who's there? colins heart :-). lol...very sweet write. she...
March 20th, 2013 17:32 - The Root of my convictions (Gerrylegister)
I like how this poem starts off dark but leads us to a place of hope and...
March 20th, 2013 07:17 - MAKE'ING LOVE (Colin)
sensual without being overly graphic. good job.
March 20th, 2013 07:15 - The Waters Of Forever (Diamonddagger)
deep and insightful poem. like forever summers the waters of forever also...
March 20th, 2013 07:14 - ART AND DESIRE (Satishverma)
as always a powerful and insightful poem
March 20th, 2013 07:13 - DAISIES (Colin)
oh what a lovely write! I love daisies...when my sister and I were young...
March 19th, 2013 07:09 - REMINISCENCE (Satishverma)
your poems take me to a place that is not always comfortable but is always...
March 19th, 2013 07:07 - I Followed The Rainbow (Diamonddagger)
what a lovely whimsical piece! i hope your wishing star works soon!
March 19th, 2013 07:06 - Soft Hands (Diamonddagger)
beautifully written and so very very sweet with the picture.
March 18th, 2013 07:35 - Jesus Blesses All of Us Giving Bliss (Mvvenkataraman)
good thoughts and a sweet way of thinking.
March 18th, 2013 07:34 - DEAR YOU (Colin)
very sweet... I especially like the thought your words cure. very nice!
March 18th, 2013 07:34 - SLAIN ROSES (Satishverma)
I like the way you use words to make scenes come to life and make the...
March 18th, 2013 07:33 - Winter Birds (Bigwolf)
Ah! another window watcher :-). I also love to sit at my window and watch...
March 17th, 2013 07:08 - WAR (Colin)
very effective words.
March 17th, 2013 07:06 - FUTURITY (Satishverma)
very effective words and well written. the end is so sad and so honest.
March 17th, 2013 07:04 - To Be Me (BrokenWordsPoet)
your poem tells so much of human feelings and the confusion of being who...
March 16th, 2013 08:22 - FOREVER (Colin)
this is one of those awwwww inspiring poems :-). left me with a gentle...
March 16th, 2013 08:19 - The Storm (Diamonddagger)
I love storms...the bigger the better and you captured the mixed feelings...
March 16th, 2013 08:18 - FARTHER AWAY (Satishverma)
intriguing and mysteriously delicious!
March 16th, 2013 08:17 - Her Inner Beauty (Bigwolf)
oh how sweet and so beautiful! we need more people like you who see past...
March 16th, 2013 08:16 - My Deer (Diamonddagger)
what a lovely and gentle moment to have experienced! thanks for sharing it...
March 16th, 2013 08:14 - Writing on Walls (BrokenWordsPoet)
wow! talk about the power of words! so much emotion in this poem that it...
March 15th, 2013 07:59 - Meeting (Bigwolf)
you created some vivid images of autumn and the pending winter that...
March 15th, 2013 07:58 - That Only Love (Triple Qk)
love is not easy and you have shown us that in your sweet poem.
March 15th, 2013 07:56 - Stand Alone (a pantoum) (Diamonddagger)
what a beautiful poem of love and truth... I only wish a the grown man...
March 15th, 2013 07:55 - NO PERFECT LOVE POEM (Colin)
I love the way you took on us on the search with you only to reach the...
March 15th, 2013 07:53 - THE VISITOR (Satishverma)
such an ethereal mystical quality to this beautifully penned poem that it...
March 15th, 2013 07:52 - Confess (Pattiely)
what a haunting scenario you paint with your words. words not spoken...
March 14th, 2013 08:41 - cheers! (Sarah)
cheers dear poet to a wonderfully crafted and beautifully written poem.
March 14th, 2013 07:48 - FROZEN (Satishverma)
I can only add a ditto to what diamonddagger said :-). very powerful and...
March 14th, 2013 07:47 - In the Haze (Diamonddagger)
beautiful and intriguing poem! love the images the words paint. I found...
March 14th, 2013 07:46 - Wings of Wax (Duneman)
I feel this is more than about Icarus and his plight, but a metaphor of...
March 13th, 2013 17:02 - CURVE'S OF LIFE'S CODE (Colin)
kind of like that game psychiatrists like to play... what do you think of...
March 13th, 2013 17:01 - HER (Bigwolf)
such a gentle poem that somehow leaves the reader feeling both sad and yet...
March 13th, 2013 07:05 - PREDATOR (Colin)
what a great story you tell with this poem! vivid images that allow the...
March 13th, 2013 07:03 - Celestial Glow (Gerrylegister)
you poem makes aging sound like a good place to be :-). to finish the...
March 13th, 2013 07:02 - ETERNITY (Satishverma)
you have such a strong grasp on the use of imagery that your poems come to...
March 13th, 2013 07:01 - The Portcullis of Your Blessed Calender (Diamonddagger)
what a conundrum you present to us. how do we know and how does the...
March 13th, 2013 06:59 - Once, A Crimson Rose (Bigwolf)
such a sad poem and so beautifully written. your words paint a vivid...
March 12th, 2013 07:56 - DISMISS (Colin)
such a wistful longing in this poem for that which is not to be. very...
March 12th, 2013 07:53 - Abused (Gerrylegister)
wow! harsh realities often make the best poems. I especially love the...
March 12th, 2013 07:52 - CHESSBOARD (Satishverma)
Amazing write! the title drew me in as I am a chess player... very...
March 12th, 2013 07:51 - PARADOX… (Sarah)
Sarah, what an intriguing poem! I love the way beauty is used in each...
March 12th, 2013 07:49 - The Balance of Harmony (a Lento) (Diamonddagger)
such a calming and gentle poem. especially love the first verse.
March 12th, 2013 07:47 - Daybreak (Bigwolf)
beautiful use of imagery! I especially love the first two lines of the...
March 11th, 2013 07:08 - Untitled (BrokenWordsPoet)
you have captured the world of the poet perfectly!
March 11th, 2013 07:07 - MY UMBRELLA (Sokibgb)
nicely done and a story well told! i had expected to find you had left the...
March 11th, 2013 07:06 - SYMPHONY (Satishverma)
powerful strong images created with your words! I can feel sadness and...
March 11th, 2013 07:05 - Spirit Of Love (Spirit_Of_Freedom)
the photo and the words combine for a beautiful image both in picture and...
March 11th, 2013 07:04 - Books, Truths, Lies (BrokenWordsPoet)
someone once said we all have a book inside us waiting to be written. some...
March 10th, 2013 07:29 - Desperation (Bigwolf)
so many emotional images created with your words.
While crimson tears...
March 10th, 2013 07:27 - AT A DISTANCE - Part 2 Fused by Soki and BrokenWordsPoet (Sokibgb)
wow! what a great fusion poem! beautifully and artistically done.
March 9th, 2013 13:45 - Cat Dance on the Keyboard (Duneman)
lmao! yep! I know what you mean! those pesky cats do seem to like to add...
March 9th, 2013 08:25 - Human (Shyam)
so sad and profound. powerful little poem!
March 9th, 2013 08:14 - LOVE LETTER (Sarah)
such a beautiful and gentle reminder of what love is all about. well...
March 9th, 2013 08:13 - Accountability (Irontree)
You said it well and you said it strong! Accountability is what life is...
March 9th, 2013 08:06 - The Tear (BrokenWordsPoet)
wow! this is one of those awe inspiring poems that leaves the reader...
March 8th, 2013 08:54 - STILLBIRTH (Satishverma)
this poem left me with chills it was so real and so haunting in it's...
March 8th, 2013 08:53 - The Gentle Touch (Diamonddagger)
if only all words could contain that gentle touch. beautifully written.
March 8th, 2013 08:52 - My Father's Legacy (Baj-a)
I should add the mural on the wall behind my father was painted by him.
March 8th, 2013 07:57 - Train Tracks (Duneman)
I used to fall asleep to the sound of trains running along the tracks and...
March 7th, 2013 16:16 - DEPARTURE (Satishverma)
truly and amazing and provocative write. so many feelings wrapped up in...
March 7th, 2013 15:22 - Chocolate and Cinnamon Buns (Sokibgb)
brought back memories of cold winter Sunday mornings, when after church,...
March 7th, 2013 15:21 - A Fishing Story (BrokenWordsPoet)
wow! this poem certainly evokes a lot of emotion from the reader. so...
March 7th, 2013 15:19 - For Action to Give Satisfaction (Mvvenkataraman)
a wonderful message that hopefully many will hear and act upon. well...
March 7th, 2013 15:17 - you and me (Rajat mahaych)
I am trying to figure out how to add to the fusion poems, but can't seem...
March 6th, 2013 19:12 - Butterflies (StormyDay)
wow! beautifully written! wonderful use of imagery!
March 6th, 2013 19:07 - Untitled (Jeanne Fiedler)
the imagery is wonderful. your words allow the reader to see the picture...
March 6th, 2013 19:06 - Ayesha's-Haikus (Espresso2014)
you captured a life time in these few words. wonderfully written.
March 6th, 2013 19:04 - Soft Wind - Haiku ()
the beauty of these words took my breath away.
March 6th, 2013 19:03 - BEAUTY OF WOMEN (Colin)
the photo you chose is perfect and enhances the gentle loving beauty of...
March 6th, 2013 18:59 - The Edge of Dreaming (Greg Davidson)
what a gentle and lovely poem. i love the place you take us to. that warm...
March 6th, 2013 18:56 - Kiss The Back Of My Neck (Diamonddagger)
so sweet and so sensual with great beauty in the words.
March 6th, 2013 18:51 - First Love (Shubert)
I think a lot of readers will relate to the deep sadness felt in these...
March 6th, 2013 09:01 - Stare (Ianhm)
this short poem packs a lot of power. well said!
March 6th, 2013 09:00 - SLEEPING BUDDHA (Satishverma)
your poetry humbles me! you writings are only what I can dream and aspire...
March 6th, 2013 08:50 - SISTERS (Colin)
lmao! when i first read the title I thought it would be a sweet poem about...
March 6th, 2013 08:49 - A WALK ON THE BEACH (Sokibgb)
oh what a peaceful place to be inside your poem! wonderful images created...
March 6th, 2013 08:48 - I Love Your Flavor (Diamonddagger)
sensual and beautifully written.
March 6th, 2013 08:46 - Nothing To Fear (BrokenWordsPoet)
what a lovely poem or should I say what lovely poems! what a great job...
March 6th, 2013 08:44 - THE WANTING OF YOU (Sokibgb)
what a beautifully sensual poem! very well written and filled with so much...
March 5th, 2013 08:21 - NED (Colin)
lol! very funny stuff here! love the pic! that's how I feel sometimes...
March 5th, 2013 08:18 - RAGING KINDNESS (Satishverma)
what a powerful and poignant write! exceptional work here! that last line...
March 5th, 2013 08:17 - Eyes Turned Around (Diamonddagger)
This is so true! we either don't look inside at ourselves or don't want to...
March 5th, 2013 08:09
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