Comments on community poems by baj-a



  • Sweet Summertime (Bigwolf) the imagery is wonderful and makes summer sound magical and sweet.
    March 23rd, 2013 07:17
  • Reach The Sky (Jalso) hey! interesting and intriguing poem. i got lost in the words and enjoyed...
    March 23rd, 2013 07:15
  • HOME TIME (Colin) couldn't help but smile as I read this one. the scenario is so real and I...
    March 23rd, 2013 07:12
  • THE END (Satishverma) your poetry always has a deep impact. always profound. that last line is...
    March 23rd, 2013 07:10
  • SEE? (Colin) when that eye popped up it was a bit scary...and the poem is also...
    March 23rd, 2013 07:09
  • Winter Bone (Diamonddagger) intriguing scenario presented with this poem. i understand the winter bone...
    March 23rd, 2013 07:08
  • I Cry For The Children (Bigwolf) lost boys and golden girls... a line from one of my favorite meatloaf...
    March 22nd, 2013 07:13
  • Light to heal (Dolphine29) wow! amazing insight in this poem.. we all carry that light that heals....
    March 22nd, 2013 07:12
  • FOREVER TOGETHER (Sokibgb) beautiful in a mystical sort of way... I love that last verse! well done!
    March 22nd, 2013 07:11
  • If I Couldn't Hear Your Laughter (Diamonddagger) bitter sweet and filled with love. beautiful poem!
    March 22nd, 2013 07:09
  • DESTINY (Satishverma) Amen to that last line! nobody is blameless!
    March 22nd, 2013 07:08
  • Random Thoughts (Lezyl legaspi) I love random thoughts! such an interesting mind! and a very good poem!
    March 21st, 2013 08:20
  • DARK (Colin) very dark and compelling piece here.
    March 21st, 2013 08:13
  • MY MAN (Star) and I hope your man appreciates you feel so strongly about him and his...
    March 21st, 2013 08:12
  • MEMORIES - thinking of you (Sokibgb) you captured the pain of lost love so perfectly and the sadness of...
    March 20th, 2013 17:36
  • The Silent Storm (Bigwolf) you write some of the most beautiful nature poems I have ever read. your...
    March 20th, 2013 17:35
  • KNOCK!!KNOCK!!!! (Colin) knock knock...who's there? colins heart :-). lol...very sweet write. she...
    March 20th, 2013 17:32
  • The Root of my convictions (Gerrylegister) I like how this poem starts off dark but leads us to a place of hope and...
    March 20th, 2013 07:17
  • MAKE'ING LOVE (Colin) sensual without being overly graphic. good job.
    March 20th, 2013 07:15
  • The Waters Of Forever (Diamonddagger) deep and insightful poem. like forever summers the waters of forever also...
    March 20th, 2013 07:14
  • ART AND DESIRE (Satishverma) as always a powerful and insightful poem
    March 20th, 2013 07:13
  • DAISIES (Colin) oh what a lovely write! I love daisies...when my sister and I were young...
    March 19th, 2013 07:09
  • REMINISCENCE (Satishverma) your poems take me to a place that is not always comfortable but is always...
    March 19th, 2013 07:07
  • I Followed The Rainbow (Diamonddagger) what a lovely whimsical piece! i hope your wishing star works soon!
    March 19th, 2013 07:06
  • Soft Hands (Diamonddagger) beautifully written and so very very sweet with the picture.
    March 18th, 2013 07:35
  • Jesus Blesses All of Us Giving Bliss (Mvvenkataraman) good thoughts and a sweet way of thinking.
    March 18th, 2013 07:34
  • DEAR YOU (Colin) very sweet... I especially like the thought your words cure. very nice!
    March 18th, 2013 07:34
  • SLAIN ROSES (Satishverma) I like the way you use words to make scenes come to life and make the...
    March 18th, 2013 07:33
  • Winter Birds (Bigwolf) Ah! another window watcher :-). I also love to sit at my window and watch...
    March 17th, 2013 07:08
  • WAR (Colin) very effective words.
    March 17th, 2013 07:06
  • FUTURITY (Satishverma) very effective words and well written. the end is so sad and so honest.
    March 17th, 2013 07:04
  • To Be Me (BrokenWordsPoet) your poem tells so much of human feelings and the confusion of being who...
    March 16th, 2013 08:22
  • FOREVER (Colin) this is one of those awwwww inspiring poems :-). left me with a gentle...
    March 16th, 2013 08:19
  • The Storm (Diamonddagger) I love storms...the bigger the better and you captured the mixed feelings...
    March 16th, 2013 08:18
  • FARTHER AWAY (Satishverma) intriguing and mysteriously delicious!
    March 16th, 2013 08:17
  • Her Inner Beauty (Bigwolf) oh how sweet and so beautiful! we need more people like you who see past...
    March 16th, 2013 08:16
  • My Deer (Diamonddagger) what a lovely and gentle moment to have experienced! thanks for sharing it...
    March 16th, 2013 08:14
  • Writing on Walls (BrokenWordsPoet) wow! talk about the power of words! so much emotion in this poem that it...
    March 15th, 2013 07:59
  • Meeting (Bigwolf) you created some vivid images of autumn and the pending winter that...
    March 15th, 2013 07:58
  • That Only Love (Triple Qk) love is not easy and you have shown us that in your sweet poem.
    March 15th, 2013 07:56
  • Stand Alone (a pantoum) (Diamonddagger) what a beautiful poem of love and truth... I only wish a the grown man...
    March 15th, 2013 07:55
  • NO PERFECT LOVE POEM (Colin) I love the way you took on us on the search with you only to reach the...
    March 15th, 2013 07:53
  • THE VISITOR (Satishverma) such an ethereal mystical quality to this beautifully penned poem that it...
    March 15th, 2013 07:52
  • Confess (Pattiely) what a haunting scenario you paint with your words. words not spoken...
    March 14th, 2013 08:41
  • cheers! (Sarah) cheers dear poet to a wonderfully crafted and beautifully written poem.
    March 14th, 2013 07:48
  • FROZEN (Satishverma) I can only add a ditto to what diamonddagger said :-). very powerful and...
    March 14th, 2013 07:47
  • In the Haze (Diamonddagger) beautiful and intriguing poem! love the images the words paint. I found...
    March 14th, 2013 07:46
  • Wings of Wax (Duneman) I feel this is more than about Icarus and his plight, but a metaphor of...
    March 13th, 2013 17:02
  • CURVE'S OF LIFE'S CODE (Colin) kind of like that game psychiatrists like to play... what do you think of...
    March 13th, 2013 17:01
  • HER (Bigwolf) such a gentle poem that somehow leaves the reader feeling both sad and yet...
    March 13th, 2013 07:05
  • PREDATOR (Colin) what a great story you tell with this poem! vivid images that allow the...
    March 13th, 2013 07:03
  • Celestial Glow (Gerrylegister) you poem makes aging sound like a good place to be :-). to finish the...
    March 13th, 2013 07:02
  • ETERNITY (Satishverma) you have such a strong grasp on the use of imagery that your poems come to...
    March 13th, 2013 07:01
  • The Portcullis of Your Blessed Calender (Diamonddagger) what a conundrum you present to us. how do we know and how does the...
    March 13th, 2013 06:59
  • Once, A Crimson Rose (Bigwolf) such a sad poem and so beautifully written. your words paint a vivid...
    March 12th, 2013 07:56
  • DISMISS (Colin) such a wistful longing in this poem for that which is not to be. very...
    March 12th, 2013 07:53
  • Abused (Gerrylegister) wow! harsh realities often make the best poems. I especially love the...
    March 12th, 2013 07:52
  • CHESSBOARD (Satishverma) Amazing write! the title drew me in as I am a chess player... very...
    March 12th, 2013 07:51
  • PARADOX… (Sarah) Sarah, what an intriguing poem! I love the way beauty is used in each...
    March 12th, 2013 07:49
  • The Balance of Harmony (a Lento) (Diamonddagger) such a calming and gentle poem. especially love the first verse.
    March 12th, 2013 07:47
  • Daybreak (Bigwolf) beautiful use of imagery! I especially love the first two lines of the...
    March 11th, 2013 07:08
  • Untitled (BrokenWordsPoet) you have captured the world of the poet perfectly!
    March 11th, 2013 07:07
  • MY UMBRELLA (Sokibgb) nicely done and a story well told! i had expected to find you had left the...
    March 11th, 2013 07:06
  • SYMPHONY (Satishverma) powerful strong images created with your words! I can feel sadness and...
    March 11th, 2013 07:05
  • Spirit Of Love (Spirit_Of_Freedom) the photo and the words combine for a beautiful image both in picture and...
    March 11th, 2013 07:04
  • Books, Truths, Lies (BrokenWordsPoet) someone once said we all have a book inside us waiting to be written. some...
    March 10th, 2013 07:29
  • Desperation (Bigwolf) so many emotional images created with your words. While crimson tears...
    March 10th, 2013 07:27
  • AT A DISTANCE - Part 2 Fused by Soki and BrokenWordsPoet (Sokibgb) wow! what a great fusion poem! beautifully and artistically done.
    March 9th, 2013 13:45
  • Cat Dance on the Keyboard (Duneman) lmao! yep! I know what you mean! those pesky cats do seem to like to add...
    March 9th, 2013 08:25
  • Human (Shyam) so sad and profound. powerful little poem!
    March 9th, 2013 08:14
  • LOVE LETTER (Sarah) such a beautiful and gentle reminder of what love is all about. well...
    March 9th, 2013 08:13
  • Accountability (Irontree) You said it well and you said it strong! Accountability is what life is...
    March 9th, 2013 08:06
  • The Tear (BrokenWordsPoet) wow! this is one of those awe inspiring poems that leaves the reader...
    March 8th, 2013 08:54
  • STILLBIRTH (Satishverma) this poem left me with chills it was so real and so haunting in it's...
    March 8th, 2013 08:53
  • The Gentle Touch (Diamonddagger) if only all words could contain that gentle touch. beautifully written.
    March 8th, 2013 08:52
  • My Father's Legacy (Baj-a) I should add the mural on the wall behind my father was painted by him.
    March 8th, 2013 07:57
  • Train Tracks (Duneman) I used to fall asleep to the sound of trains running along the tracks and...
    March 7th, 2013 16:16
  • DEPARTURE (Satishverma) truly and amazing and provocative write. so many feelings wrapped up in...
    March 7th, 2013 15:22
  • Chocolate and Cinnamon Buns (Sokibgb) brought back memories of cold winter Sunday mornings, when after church,...
    March 7th, 2013 15:21
  • A Fishing Story (BrokenWordsPoet) wow! this poem certainly evokes a lot of emotion from the reader. so...
    March 7th, 2013 15:19
  • For Action to Give Satisfaction (Mvvenkataraman) a wonderful message that hopefully many will hear and act upon. well...
    March 7th, 2013 15:17
  • you and me (Rajat mahaych) I am trying to figure out how to add to the fusion poems, but can't seem...
    March 6th, 2013 19:12
  • Butterflies (StormyDay) wow! beautifully written! wonderful use of imagery!
    March 6th, 2013 19:07
  • Untitled (Jeanne Fiedler) the imagery is wonderful. your words allow the reader to see the picture...
    March 6th, 2013 19:06
  • Ayesha's-Haikus (Espresso2014) you captured a life time in these few words. wonderfully written.
    March 6th, 2013 19:04
  • Soft Wind - Haiku () the beauty of these words took my breath away.
    March 6th, 2013 19:03
  • BEAUTY OF WOMEN (Colin) the photo you chose is perfect and enhances the gentle loving beauty of...
    March 6th, 2013 18:59
  • The Edge of Dreaming (Greg Davidson) what a gentle and lovely poem. i love the place you take us to. that warm...
    March 6th, 2013 18:56
  • Kiss The Back Of My Neck (Diamonddagger) so sweet and so sensual with great beauty in the words.
    March 6th, 2013 18:51
  • First Love (Shubert) I think a lot of readers will relate to the deep sadness felt in these...
    March 6th, 2013 09:01
  • Stare (Ianhm) this short poem packs a lot of power. well said!
    March 6th, 2013 09:00
  • SLEEPING BUDDHA (Satishverma) your poetry humbles me! you writings are only what I can dream and aspire...
    March 6th, 2013 08:50
  • SISTERS (Colin) lmao! when i first read the title I thought it would be a sweet poem about...
    March 6th, 2013 08:49
  • A WALK ON THE BEACH (Sokibgb) oh what a peaceful place to be inside your poem! wonderful images created...
    March 6th, 2013 08:48
  • I Love Your Flavor (Diamonddagger) sensual and beautifully written.
    March 6th, 2013 08:46
  • Nothing To Fear (BrokenWordsPoet) what a lovely poem or should I say what lovely poems! what a great job...
    March 6th, 2013 08:44
  • THE WANTING OF YOU (Sokibgb) what a beautifully sensual poem! very well written and filled with so much...
    March 5th, 2013 08:21
  • NED (Colin) lol! very funny stuff here! love the pic! that's how I feel sometimes...
    March 5th, 2013 08:18
  • RAGING KINDNESS (Satishverma) what a powerful and poignant write! exceptional work here! that last line...
    March 5th, 2013 08:17
  • Eyes Turned Around (Diamonddagger) This is so true! we either don't look inside at ourselves or don't want to...
    March 5th, 2013 08:09
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