Comments on community poems by arqios

• Moving Forward Tanka. (Goldfinch60) And together forward is all the merrier🕊🙏🏻
  April 23rd, 2025 06:02
• Possession (Mutley Ravishes) ...possession and occupation of sorts 🙏🏻🕊️
  April 22nd, 2025 23:10
• We Are Nothing but Uttered Words (Muntadher Saleh) Welcome to MPS🕊️🙏🏻
  April 22nd, 2025 23:05
• Seen Or Not Seen (Orchidee) Indubitably no doubt a good write O🙏🏻🕊
  April 22nd, 2025 16:22
• Patience and Chimney (Jerry Reynolds) A most enjoyed tale in verse🙏🏻🕊
  April 22nd, 2025 08:16
• The Roads Desire Built (Tristan Robert Lange) Warning signs could be more updated, but even then as mentioned so...
  April 22nd, 2025 08:15
• Express Yourself (Tony36) Good write Tony; so liberating 🕊🙏🏻
  April 22nd, 2025 08:13
• cavernous (Arqios) Not quite there, is it?
  April 22nd, 2025 05:26
• Overdone romance sonnet (Sorenbarrett) The phrasing and texture is strong and the drive is quite moving. Nice...
  April 22nd, 2025 04:00
• EAT CAKE (Michael Edwards) Images of the French Revolution keep intruding on my reading 📖...
  April 22nd, 2025 01:04
• Chopin\'s Nocturnes. (Goldfinch60) Oh yes, until proven, his name doesn’t do much for him, chopping,...
  April 22nd, 2025 01:01
• Molded (E.J. Waling) Chiseling form matches its poem🕊🙏🏻
  April 21st, 2025 20:43
• Commission Call (Orchidee) Good write O🕊🙏🏻
  April 21st, 2025 20:42
• In the garge (Tony36) Reminds me of a neighbour we had who of a weekend, garage door rolled up,...
  April 21st, 2025 20:39
• what now? (Tristan Robert Lange) And I was beginning to think that a new style was in its nascent period....
  April 21st, 2025 20:36
• Canned Meat is a Bad Idea (Thomas W Case) Nothing to disagree with here. Excellent write🕊🙏🏻
  April 21st, 2025 20:17
• The Right Honourable Gentleman (Kevin Hulme) Not cynical at all! Quite realistic to the facts, actually🙏🏻🕊
  April 21st, 2025 20:14
• a poem’s succession (Arqios) And the cycle begins anew…
  April 21st, 2025 04:29
• Foggy morning (Sorenbarrett) The melodious lines brought me there 🙏🏻🕊️
  April 21st, 2025 03:30
• IF TODAY HAD BEEN YESTERDAY (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Majestic expression and exploration🙏🏻🕊️
  April 21st, 2025 02:51
• Swans On My River, Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) Beautiful sight, beautiful poem 🙏🏻🕊️
  April 21st, 2025 02:13
• Hollow (Genesis) Welcome to MPS 🙏🏻🕊️
  April 20th, 2025 15:35
• the penumbral revelation (Tristan Robert Lange) Oh wow, feels like a progression from the last poem. Keep \'em coming...
  April 20th, 2025 08:35
• Lies of romance (Sorenbarrett) Now that’s the kind of place to go to🙏🏻🕊️
  April 20th, 2025 03:36
• THE EARTH IS CRYING (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Powerful write here neph 🙏🏻🕊️
  April 20th, 2025 03:27
• Download My Book For Free (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) O neat. Let’s trade, mine’s also on Amazon (DM later). If they’re...
  April 20th, 2025 03:21
• A Better Person Today. (Goldfinch60) No way but forward🙏🏻🕊️
  April 20th, 2025 03:11
• see you there (Arqios) A new day and the sun was out.
  April 20th, 2025 03:09
• Easter Exaltings (Orchidee) Oh good, it’s not East Ur egg salting…. Awesome write O🕊🙏🏻
  April 20th, 2025 00:32
• The Purpose That Lives in Our Shadow (Jaiden_noviqon)
  April 20th, 2025 00:21
• Winds (E.J. Waling) Such an exciting read, John 🙏🏻🕊️
  April 19th, 2025 07:48
• holy nothing (Tristan Robert Lange) Amazing textured poem 🙏🏻🕊️
  April 19th, 2025 07:30
• Cry (Tony36) very moving Tony 🙏🏻🕊️
  April 19th, 2025 07:28
• purity (Dimpy) From this poem it would seem that purity begins in thought and heart...
  April 19th, 2025 04:40
• w o r d s (Arqios) Hope the video attached brings a ray of light to your day and your body as...
  April 19th, 2025 04:08
• Not what it seems (Sorenbarrett) A definite fave, Soren. Nicely presented on the page as
  April 19th, 2025 03:08
• Standing Eight Count (Thomas W Case) Intense and tremendous 🙏🏻🕊️
  April 19th, 2025 01:54
• Think Hippie Thoughts. (Goldfinch60) Those were the days. And the clothing of the day was quite colourful as...
  April 19th, 2025 01:45
• sleeping pills (Dimpy) So true. This is how writing became a pressure release valve for that...
  April 18th, 2025 07:54
• Graves (Tony36) Glad the baker made it, the butcher and the candlestick maker were not...
  April 18th, 2025 07:45
• ROBINS IN WINTER (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Quite the saddest state wherein the normal state of affairs of us...
  April 18th, 2025 06:55
• twilight trek (Arqios) And the day approaches
  April 18th, 2025 05:18
• Acts (Sorenbarrett) A meal of game done well is a wonderful thing and yet its tragedy 🎭...
  April 18th, 2025 03:33
• Damn it to Hell! (Mutley Ravishes) Outdone the devil himself, his pitchfork no longer secure🕊🙏🏻
  April 18th, 2025 02:50
• The Air That You Breathe. (Goldfinch60) The music takes me back to those days. Being somebody’s air and theirs...
  April 18th, 2025 01:37
• If you ever return (Chris Anderson) Welcome to MPS 🙏🏻🕊
  April 18th, 2025 00:32
• the women that saved my life (Bethan) Welcome to MPS 🕊🙏🏻
  April 17th, 2025 20:29
• When Somebody’s Dead (MDStone) “Nobody wins,” now ain’t that the truth!🙏🏻🕊
  April 17th, 2025 20:28
• Neck of These Woods (Justyouraveragewriter) Welcome to MPS 🕊️🙏🏻
  April 17th, 2025 15:31
• The Good Of Golgotha (Orchidee) Nothing like Calvary’s Love. Good write O🕊️🙏🏻
  April 17th, 2025 15:18
• The Streets (Tony36) Super dramatic and moving🕊️🙏🏻
  April 17th, 2025 08:31
• Muse\'s blood (Sorenbarrett) A poem’s intimate history no less!🙏🏻🕊
  April 17th, 2025 06:34
• The Four Composers. (Goldfinch60) This reply I am tempted to copy paste. Why are there so many to choose...
  April 17th, 2025 03:07
• Cut Me Some Slack...I Have a Crazy Streak (Cheeky Missy) Fun indeed! I’m wondering at my constant need of a periodical feed. Must...
  April 17th, 2025 00:54
• Lionel Groom (Kevin Hulme) All sorts of things peddled around us and to us, most of which we allow by...
  April 17th, 2025 00:52
• experimental haiku (Thoughtless) That relates so much in so few words! Jiminy among them🙏🏻🕊️
  April 17th, 2025 00:47
• Around Her (Salian) Welcome to MPS 🙏🏻🕊️
  April 17th, 2025 00:27
• Letters of Complaint (Tristan Robert Lange) A more mature and proactive “rain, rain, go away…” we do have to...
  April 16th, 2025 07:09
• pot plants (Arqios) Some get it, some don’t; a few are on a tangent of their own.
  April 16th, 2025 06:25
• Redeemer pains through window panes (Sorenbarrett) Brings to life all that ancient history and lore🙏🏻🕊️
  April 16th, 2025 05:47
• Not Perfect. (Goldfinch60) Relatable Andy. I laugh when there are no situational cues to do so. But...
  April 16th, 2025 03:04
• Immortal Chortles (Mutley Ravishes) Oh goody, inspired poetry 🙏🏻🕊️
  April 16th, 2025 00:46
• Enough? (Maydanae) Welcome to MPS 🙏🏻🕊️
  April 16th, 2025 00:19
• Like, How On Earth? (Cheeky Missy) What a build up to the third which shines and pulses with...
  April 15th, 2025 17:21
• Pilate\'s Perturbations (Orchidee) Good write O🙏🏻🕊
  April 15th, 2025 17:18
• Lost At Sea (MDStone) This poem will stay with me for quite a while 🙏🏻🕊️
  April 15th, 2025 07:50
• Go to sleep (Tony36) Beautiful as a lullaby🙏🏻🕊️
  April 15th, 2025 07:25
• Here (Tristan Robert Lange) Love the metaphor of tuberculosis which parallels and even surpasses that...
  April 15th, 2025 07:05
• letting go: Anton Ego (Arqios) A film reference no less but for the younger crown and those disposed to...
  April 15th, 2025 05:56
• Who died and made you God (Sorenbarrett) Those that pull of a pretty cry-face could probably fool the rest of us...
  April 15th, 2025 05:36
• Our day (2781) Makes the heart burst with fearsome joy. That Word hovered about the whole...
  April 15th, 2025 03:18
• Loyal Hearts. (Goldfinch60) The exemplar of faithfulness, our canine companions 🙏🏻🕊️
  April 15th, 2025 01:17
• My domain (Angeline) Welcome to MPS 🙏🏻🕊️
  April 14th, 2025 14:31
• Cockerel Crowing (Orchidee) That statue of Peter’s denial was intense and that giant cistern cavern...
  April 14th, 2025 14:27
• Abuse (Tony36) Sad truth and necessary poem🙏🏻🕊️
  April 14th, 2025 09:38
• Should Sleep Spare (Tristan Robert Lange) Very realistic and so relatable 🙏🏻🕊️
  April 14th, 2025 06:50
• Differences (Sorenbarrett) They do indeed go together!🙏🏻🕊️
  April 14th, 2025 05:43
• midnight courage (Arqios) Here we go a writing
  April 14th, 2025 04:46
• TEETOTAL (Michael Edwards) Glad to have you back, Michael. Was wondering where you’d gone off to...
  April 14th, 2025 02:38
• Weeping (2781) Toughest words to utter from the heart and the will🕊🙏🏻
  April 14th, 2025 02:36
• Tests In Life. (Goldfinch60) Some are just unforgettable 🤩🙏🏻🕊️
  April 14th, 2025 02:32
• Cinnabarred (Mutley Ravishes) “Imaginative tracks” are quite what our life vessel is on. Liked and...
  April 13th, 2025 21:50
• Watch Out (Thomas W Case) Good write 🙏🏻🕊️
  April 13th, 2025 20:55
• Dear Miss Austen (Kevin Hulme) So good to have this wonderful poem resurface for some...
  April 13th, 2025 20:21
• Fine tune (2781) And indeed quite a show it is to witness; much of it in the surrounds...
  April 13th, 2025 14:24
• Anointing Memorial (Orchidee) Good one O 🙏🏻🕊️
  April 13th, 2025 14:21
• Gallows (Tony36) It kind of felt like the speaker in the poem went to the gallows...
  April 13th, 2025 07:43
• Words (Tristan Robert Lange) Hellspiring acrimony requiring antigrav! Now there’s a paradigm shift...
  April 13th, 2025 07:02
• song to the stars (Arqios) When in despair, look up
  April 13th, 2025 05:22
• Passing on (Sorenbarrett) Now that has compressed so much in so few lines, bursting with thought and...
  April 13th, 2025 04:12
• Tip Toe In Life. (Goldfinch60) And sometimes we glide forward! 🕊🙏🏻
  April 13th, 2025 03:12
• Knight’s Tale (MDStone) Brings me to the opening scene of the film with a similar title, where a...
  April 12th, 2025 22:23
• Jerusalem Journey (Orchidee) Good hymn-poem O🙏🏻🕊
  April 12th, 2025 18:26
• Lost girl (Yazmen scurry) Welcome to MPS 🙏🏻🕊
  April 12th, 2025 18:25
• The Spire (Tristan Robert Lange) Short and powerful. Has a kind of LOTR feel to it as well🙏🏻🕊️
  April 12th, 2025 09:04
• Dear Heart (Tony36) Brilliant work, very inspiring 🙏🏻🕊
  April 12th, 2025 08:13
• A Petal for His garden ([email protected]) Welcome to MPS 🙏🏻🕊
  April 12th, 2025 08:09
• celestial threads (Arqios) The straw that breaks the camel’s back may be nigh.
  April 12th, 2025 06:13
• Seasons pass (Sorenbarrett) It must well and truly be Spring… “everyone” is writing twitterpated...
  April 12th, 2025 05:32
• Gratitude For Life Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) A brand new day is such a beautiful thing!🙏🏻🕊
  April 12th, 2025 05:26