Comments on community poems by arqios
- Just pass on by (Kevin Hulme)
This brings to me a melancholic reality of yearning for a specific...
January 11th, 2025 07:57 - Consistency, I have None. (Doggerel Dave)
Hah! You should see my pile! I’m glad we’re not alone mate...
January 11th, 2025 07:54 - Barely Visible Indentations (Neville)
Sometimes when the lighting is just so, they even look like henna tattoos...
January 11th, 2025 07:53 - JIM (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
Brings it home for me. Many of my relatives served at the frontlines in...
January 11th, 2025 07:50 - Flies buzz (Sorenbarrett)
The decay and haunting with their emotional resonance! Here spread out...
January 11th, 2025 07:47 - Grass (Tristan Robert Lange)
A truly compelling read - a response quite King Jamesian!...
January 10th, 2025 09:24 - La chandelle de mes jours (Cellinic)
The candle of my days is as tender as my life,
Enchanted pilgrim, I...
January 10th, 2025 08:25 - Picnica (Tony36)
Eating outdoors alone that’s alfresco eating not a picnic 🧺 , too...
January 10th, 2025 08:16 - Couple Goals (Tom Dylan)
And that’s the beauty of having found each other everyday ! Just...
January 10th, 2025 08:10 - As The Clouds Gently Roll On By (Poetic Licence)
Both a journey and a mantra-like melody… and all the while “the clouds...
January 10th, 2025 08:07 - A Poet\'s True Worth (2) (Teddy.15)
word painted pictures
along with each season’s change
colour-splashed...
January 10th, 2025 07:57 - faithful friend (Jim56)
None like them for sure! 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻
January 10th, 2025 07:53 - Footprints Left In Sand and Snow (Cassie58)
Gives me the vibe of a presence of someone now gone. Also a visual of how...
January 10th, 2025 07:51 - Train Wreck (Rocky Lagou)
Yes, it’s sad to be unable to do anything, like shattering glass all in...
January 10th, 2025 07:46 - Driftwood (Mutley Ravishes)
The mind and the surroundings, the distinctions and the indistinctive...
January 10th, 2025 07:43 - Winter Maples (Reynaldo Casison)
There is relief in love and in nature, having both a blessing and bonus!...
January 10th, 2025 07:41 - Strange (2781)
But by the Spirit! Shall he not!? My dermal allergies can attest to the...
January 10th, 2025 07:40 - My Path Of Life. (Goldfinch60)
The repetitions worked like a blanket stitch of thought, good stuff....
January 10th, 2025 07:31 - LOVE DYING (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
No matter how much we prepare and anticipate, it strikes just as heavily....
January 10th, 2025 07:29 - Clean Bed from \'ANOTHER COLLECTION\' (Michael Edwards)
Glad you didn’t! Knowing only too well that any toilet related dream...
January 10th, 2025 07:27 - What happened to beauty? (Sorenbarrett)
Here I found a powerful critique of modern society\'s disposable nature...
January 10th, 2025 07:25 - Majestic Marvellings (Orchidee)
No mouse to frighten underneath that throne, but it runs off to play with...
January 10th, 2025 07:21 - Mister Lattimer Explained (Kevin Hulme)
A quintessential gentleman that could be seen as out of place in today\'s...
January 9th, 2025 20:18 - Forges of Life (Tony36)
Like a prayer and a statement of being and becoming. Pure enjoyment!...
January 9th, 2025 17:25 - Twenty-Five (Tristan Robert Lange)
You’ve done the monorhyme justice! And definitely took ownership of...
January 9th, 2025 17:24 - ~> Ralphina The Ballerina (Thad Wilk)
Tutu donning Ralph, now there’s a dance not to miss!
January 9th, 2025 17:22 - For the Princes of the Alleys (Thomas W Case)
Great write TWC 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻
January 9th, 2025 17:20 - The muse\'s dirge (Sorenbarrett)
The muse does tend to come and go at will! Still trying to figure out how...
January 9th, 2025 06:52 - start the year a new (Jim56)
Same to you! 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
January 9th, 2025 06:50 - One Windy Morn (Teddy.15)
Loving this! An enjoyable read. And an intriguing interplay between the...
January 9th, 2025 06:48 - Unknown (Tony Grannell)
You definitely have a way with words! A swagging lyric that flows like the...
January 9th, 2025 05:50 - Praise Proclamation (Orchidee)
Differing types indeed! Have you been to a reformed worship service?...
January 9th, 2025 04:10 - picnic (Tylerintheclouds)
Welcome back! Your poem beautifully intertwines sensory experiences,...
January 9th, 2025 03:00 - MY DAD (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
Beautiful, heart rending in the same breath inspiring. Growing and...
January 9th, 2025 02:57 - Love and Hate (Poetic Licence)
So true! You can’t have one without the other. 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻 Now...
January 9th, 2025 02:55 - Exotic Beauty (Reynaldo Casison)
Truly a mesmerizing ode to love and the captivating presence of an...
January 9th, 2025 02:21 - An Evening Out. (Goldfinch60)
That seems to be in the past tense. Hope nights out like these won’t be...
January 9th, 2025 02:16 - Eighteen again (Kevin Hulme)
And later on grasp at wisps of sentimental hopes and visions… the odd...
January 9th, 2025 02:05 - Spring Day (Marigold02)
Welcome to MPS! In this poem, surreal makes a whole lot of sense...
January 9th, 2025 02:03 - Winter Midnight (Reynaldo Casison)
Very relaxing and atmospheric, much enjoyed! 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
January 8th, 2025 08:09 - The Tower (Tony36)
Parallels then surpassed Shrek. Hoping for a sequel but that would also...
January 8th, 2025 07:55 - take away today (Jim56)
Liked the pauses and spaces at just the right spots! Good stuff, jim!
January 8th, 2025 07:22 - WINTER SKY (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
Now that is a poem that nature sings. Liked and Faved!
January 8th, 2025 07:20 - Which Did You Choose (Poetic Licence)
Bam 💥 that was a one -two combo, so nice to be set up in such poetic...
January 8th, 2025 07:18 - Chickens (Sorenbarrett)
Now that just opens up the idea of being hen-pecked and growing a tortoise...
January 8th, 2025 07:17 - Bounteous Blessings (Orchidee)
Quite anthemic in its appeal!
January 8th, 2025 07:13 - Our Lakeside River. (Goldfinch60)
It’s so good to have something this beautiful to come back to. We have...
January 8th, 2025 07:08 - LIMERICK 136 (Michael Edwards)
Ah yes! Was it Bugs Bunny or Coyote that had to add water to get water…...
January 8th, 2025 07:06 - Answers Undiscovered (Dan Williams)
A poem poignantly explores the tension between hope and despair. The...
January 8th, 2025 07:04 - Come Back, It! (Mutley Ravishes)
Such an intriguing and dynamic exploration of the profound impact of an...
January 8th, 2025 07:00 - Out (2781)
What a poem outing the tension between control and surrender, connection...
January 8th, 2025 06:55 - Mostly Bitter (Dan Williams)
Got myself into a couple of scrapes like this, in my time. And it’s not...
January 8th, 2025 06:23 - Trepidation (James_Poet)
Welcome to MPS! Superb expression 👍🏻
January 7th, 2025 22:54 - Green Eric (Kevin Hulme)
As I first arrived at the doorstep of this poem I immediately thought;...
January 7th, 2025 19:25 - Measures (Teddy.15)
Love that floaty feeling. And when there is art out there that exudes the...
January 7th, 2025 18:03 - roasted rice cake (Rin)
Odango? With shōyu? 👍🏻
January 7th, 2025 18:01 - Reality hits (Xqw)
By any means we shall survive! 👍🏻🕊
January 7th, 2025 10:15 - ~> Mother Nature - form Rondeau- (Thad Wilk)
What vibrant imagery and joyful tone; making it a delightful celebration...
January 7th, 2025 09:46 - Final Retreat (Tristan Robert Lange)
This poem is a powerful exploration of the human condition, touching on...
January 7th, 2025 09:42 - The Chest (Tony36)
Now I want to know what’s inside! At your mercy kind sir....
January 7th, 2025 08:58 - The Over-thinking, late-night drinking, aspiring writer, insomniacs Club (Tom Dylan)
https://youtu.be/CIxYe3G3Iz4 “Is there anybody out there” Pink Floyd....
January 7th, 2025 08:43 - sun visit (Jim56)
More sun, longer days, really would be so nice!!! Thanks jim, can\'t wait...
January 7th, 2025 07:07 - Hope in Those Smiling Eyes (Poetic Licence)
War is never a good thing, both victor and vanquished loss a great deal,...
January 7th, 2025 06:42 - Praise Profession (Orchidee)
The Epiphany was my most favourite season as a child. It filled me with...
January 7th, 2025 06:37 - Watson And Homes Went Camping. (Goldfinch60)
Hahaha! Nice one! The first thought was I hoped they’d had the presence...
January 7th, 2025 06:32 - Tilt (Mutley Ravishes)
The micro and the macro mirroring. Something mind blowing....
January 7th, 2025 06:28 - Winter Nights (Mr. Not)
Your poetry speaks, and your abilities are fluid, improving with every...
January 7th, 2025 06:25 - treasure hunt (Rin)
Now this approach is close to my heart, rin! This poem underscores the...
January 7th, 2025 06:18 - Still not sure what this Poems about (Kevin Hulme)
It seems to be exploring the very nature of purpose itself! Its...
January 7th, 2025 06:14 - Not Such a Silent Night (Thomas W Case)
Even the dead it seems don’t get silent nights, but that a whole other...
January 7th, 2025 06:07 - FOODBANKS (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
I used to be embarrassed as well. The food banks we have were we live are...
January 7th, 2025 06:05 - Condemned (Sorenbarrett)
Captured me entirely. As a child both being entirely fascinated and at...
January 7th, 2025 06:01 - Winds of time (RSM0812)
The winds of time don’t hibernate or migrate in the winter- a revelatory...
January 7th, 2025 05:55 - rejected (Tristan Robert Lange)
Nothing from what I can see! Other poems on this site today has made that...
January 6th, 2025 09:52 - \" Buy American Made! \" (Thad Wilk)
The economy has become a bedroom community, so I’m happy for this...
January 6th, 2025 09:47 - Galaxease (Mutley Ravishes)
Makes me wonder how our solar system at the wispy ends of the galaxy...
January 6th, 2025 09:24 - Jouney in Winter (Tharun_)
Welcome to MPS! We have another Tharun here as well. 🙏🏻👍🏻
January 6th, 2025 09:20 - So this is Love: Amen (Kevin Hulme)
Now here is a poem that weaves together the themes of tenderness,...
January 6th, 2025 09:18 - An Ode to the Day (Rebellion_in_sanity)
So soothing specially at the end of a long day’s toil! Much enjoyed...
January 6th, 2025 09:04 - Beach Stroll (Tony36)
I did have my walk along the beach in the mid 90s and those words and...
January 6th, 2025 08:03 - snowman verse (Jim56)
True to its nature! Such temporary fun that we can do again and again!
January 6th, 2025 07:59 - Free (Mik)
This is such a beautiful encapsulation of the transformative and...
January 6th, 2025 07:58 - Mummy`s Love (Hidden in Anger) (Poetic Licence)
Mum’s tend to be more articulate than dads in general. And that saying...
January 6th, 2025 07:55 - Gone (Sorenbarrett)
Such delicate balance between the intensity of love and its inevitable...
January 6th, 2025 07:51 - Midnight Moon (Reynaldo Casison)
We have a sliver of a (fingernail) moon this week going into first...
January 6th, 2025 07:43 - The Time Has Come. (Goldfinch60)
And that wonderful segue of unpacking and getting the home back to running...
January 6th, 2025 07:41 - Wasps (2781)
Sometime last year I was told that after smoking them out or whatever...
January 6th, 2025 07:39 - UNKNOWN VICTIM (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
I believe many will be just so if and when that time comes.
January 5th, 2025 08:00 - Chocolate cake (Tony36)
Ah , the cycle continues! Happy birthday 🎂 🎉 🥳
January 5th, 2025 07:58 - Hidden Words, Revealed Truths (Tristan Robert Lange)
Oh, it was a prompt that prompted this; all the while I was prepping for a...
January 5th, 2025 07:56 - country song (Jim56)
I\'m not much of a country song fan but I do listen to it every now and...
January 5th, 2025 05:46 - A Storms Gonna Come My Way (Teddy.15)
In the twinkling of an eye inner turmoil can arise! Majestic...
January 5th, 2025 05:36 - unreadable english poems (Rin)
Choosing not to choose is always a decision. What we can do as a work...
January 5th, 2025 05:33 - Are The Words Still Healing (Poetic Licence)
The word on words and our emotional journey, in a rhythmic and...
January 5th, 2025 05:28 - Reflections (Sorenbarrett)
Always fascinated me, the cyclical nature of beauty. Not much about this...
January 5th, 2025 05:26 - Random My Foot (Mutley Ravishes)
Banging bigly it seems and all our technology are neither products of...
January 5th, 2025 05:18 - Another New Day Tanka. (Goldfinch60)
Like fine vintage and never runs dry!
January 5th, 2025 05:15 - So this is Love: Revisited (Kevin Hulme)
Very energetic and evocative Kevin! Such a lifting of the intensity,...
January 5th, 2025 05:10 - Wet Orchids (Thomas W Case)
Simple elegance and vivid comparisons of natural beauty and human emotions...
January 5th, 2025 05:07 - A Saucer For My Combat Garb (ADarkerMind)
Just the other day in conversation, someone mentioned the fact that it...
January 5th, 2025 05:02
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