Comments on community poems by arqios

• Another Midnight (Reynaldo Casison) A symphony of images and language! The rising and falling as well as the...
  January 13th, 2025 07:04
• January Snow (Tom Dylan) I remember the first time I lived in a snowy location in January,...
  January 13th, 2025 07:01
• Tender Death (Richard Grant) Welcome to MPS! And congratulations on posting your first poem...
  January 13th, 2025 06:57
• SUMMER HAZE (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Very relatable and moving! How some people seem to vanish and leave the...
  January 13th, 2025 06:56
• Cosmic lore (Theosmash) Welcome to MPS!
  January 12th, 2025 15:25
• nuance (Tristan Robert Lange) And what lay in between the imagined and the real? How provocative! Liked...
  January 12th, 2025 08:07
• dove love (Jim56) Now that truly speaks to me! 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻
  January 12th, 2025 06:32
• A True Broken Heart is not from Love (Teddy.15) What an intriguing title! But it all makes sense as well. 👍🕊️
  January 12th, 2025 05:43
• I Hymn For A Sweet Sigh (Reynaldo Casison) Love can be an otherworldly experience and there is no reason that it...
  January 12th, 2025 05:29
• Riddle (Sorenbarrett) I\'m really no good with riddles but this looks like it\'s talking about...
  January 12th, 2025 05:18
• STREETLIGHT (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Liking the shape of this poem and the contemplative and atmospheric feel,...
  January 12th, 2025 05:00
• My Live With Music. (Goldfinch60) Nursery, ante-natal, and preschool music are always there, almost like...
  January 12th, 2025 03:25
• Breaking a Myth About Bad Words (Neville) Ooh those bad words... don\'t you just hate it! 🤪🙏🏻👍🕊️
  January 12th, 2025 03:22
• The Post Office Girl (Kevin Hulme) A study of the picture of compassion and admiration at work in a busy day....
  January 11th, 2025 20:08
• Tails of love 💘 (Davidbrailsford) Subtle and fun! Welcome to MPS, if I haven’t welcomed you yet...
  January 11th, 2025 18:59
• Finding Solace in Ink: A Reflection on Love and Loss (Thepoeticfool) Welcome to MPS! A very stirring first posting… many good returns...
  January 11th, 2025 18:56
• People over Profit (Demar Desu) Yeah, tell it to the Man! Wage slaves unite!
  January 11th, 2025 18:54
• Aah-ree-man\'s Cylons (Mutley Ravishes) No hope. But you wouldn’t care either way for lack of imagination…...
  January 11th, 2025 18:44
• lifes school (Jim56) Oh but how true this testing is, lifelong learning and lifelong...
  January 11th, 2025 18:33
• ~> Frankenstein! - Form Acrostic - (Thad Wilk) Now that’s a fun read! And I imagine so as well to the tune of the...
  January 11th, 2025 18:32
• Baby giggles (Tony36) Makes one think if heaven could be in our ears 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
  January 11th, 2025 08:27
• Fireproof (Tristan Robert Lange) Sounds like what a phoenix rising would be!
  January 11th, 2025 08:26
• Never Blame. (Goldfinch60) Most parents instruct us to be careful about who we surround ourselves...
  January 11th, 2025 08:21
• Endangered Candles (Dan Williams) Heavy hitting stuff DWi 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
  January 11th, 2025 08:17
• A new day (NafisaSB) What an uplifting promise in new days that captures the essence of...
  January 11th, 2025 08:09
• Caress Sweetly (Reynaldo Casison) This is a true celebration of the intimate and nurturing aspects of love,...
  January 11th, 2025 08:06
• Sir Orchi NS (Orchidee) Nan just calls me the impertinent boy, lol!
  January 11th, 2025 07:58
• Just pass on by (Kevin Hulme) This brings to me a melancholic reality of yearning for a specific...
  January 11th, 2025 07:57
• Consistency, I have None. (Doggerel Dave) Hah! You should see my pile! I’m glad we’re not alone mate...
  January 11th, 2025 07:54
• Barely Visible Indentations (Neville) Sometimes when the lighting is just so, they even look like henna tattoos...
  January 11th, 2025 07:53
• JIM (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Brings it home for me. Many of my relatives served at the frontlines in...
  January 11th, 2025 07:50
• Flies buzz (Sorenbarrett) The decay and haunting with their emotional resonance! Here spread out...
  January 11th, 2025 07:47
• Grass (Tristan Robert Lange) A truly compelling read - a response quite King Jamesian!...
  January 10th, 2025 09:24
• La chandelle de mes jours (Cellinic) The candle of my days is as tender as my life, Enchanted pilgrim, I...
  January 10th, 2025 08:25
• Picnica (Tony36) Eating outdoors alone that’s alfresco eating not a picnic 🧺 , too...
  January 10th, 2025 08:16
• Couple Goals (Tom Dylan) And that’s the beauty of having found each other everyday ! Just...
  January 10th, 2025 08:10
• A Poet\'s True Worth (2) (Teddy.15) word painted pictures along with each season’s change colour-splashed...
  January 10th, 2025 07:57
• faithful friend (Jim56) None like them for sure! 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻
  January 10th, 2025 07:53
• Footprints Left In Sand and Snow (Cassie58) Gives me the vibe of a presence of someone now gone. Also a visual of how...
  January 10th, 2025 07:51
• Train Wreck (Rocky Lagou) Yes, it’s sad to be unable to do anything, like shattering glass all in...
  January 10th, 2025 07:46
• Driftwood (Mutley Ravishes) The mind and the surroundings, the distinctions and the indistinctive...
  January 10th, 2025 07:43
• Winter Maples (Reynaldo Casison) There is relief in love and in nature, having both a blessing and bonus!...
  January 10th, 2025 07:41
• Strange (2781) But by the Spirit! Shall he not!? My dermal allergies can attest to the...
  January 10th, 2025 07:40
• My Path Of Life. (Goldfinch60) The repetitions worked like a blanket stitch of thought, good stuff....
  January 10th, 2025 07:31
• LOVE DYING (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) No matter how much we prepare and anticipate, it strikes just as heavily....
  January 10th, 2025 07:29
• Clean Bed from \'ANOTHER COLLECTION\' (Michael Edwards) Glad you didn’t! Knowing only too well that any toilet related dream...
  January 10th, 2025 07:27
• What happened to beauty? (Sorenbarrett) Here I found a powerful critique of modern society\'s disposable nature...
  January 10th, 2025 07:25
• Majestic Marvellings (Orchidee) No mouse to frighten underneath that throne, but it runs off to play with...
  January 10th, 2025 07:21
• Mister Lattimer Explained (Kevin Hulme) A quintessential gentleman that could be seen as out of place in today\'s...
  January 9th, 2025 20:18
• Forges of Life (Tony36) Like a prayer and a statement of being and becoming. Pure enjoyment!...
  January 9th, 2025 17:25
• Twenty-Five (Tristan Robert Lange) You’ve done the monorhyme justice! And definitely took ownership of...
  January 9th, 2025 17:24
• ~> Ralphina The Ballerina (Thad Wilk) Tutu donning Ralph, now there’s a dance not to miss!
  January 9th, 2025 17:22
• For the Princes of the Alleys (Thomas W Case) Great write TWC 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻
  January 9th, 2025 17:20
• The muse\'s dirge (Sorenbarrett) The muse does tend to come and go at will! Still trying to figure out how...
  January 9th, 2025 06:52
• start the year a new (Jim56) Same to you! 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
  January 9th, 2025 06:50
• One Windy Morn (Teddy.15) Loving this! An enjoyable read. And an intriguing interplay between the...
  January 9th, 2025 06:48
• Unknown (Tony Grannell) You definitely have a way with words! A swagging lyric that flows like the...
  January 9th, 2025 05:50
• Praise Proclamation (Orchidee) Differing types indeed! Have you been to a reformed worship service?...
  January 9th, 2025 04:10
• picnic (Tylerintheclouds) Welcome back! Your poem beautifully intertwines sensory experiences,...
  January 9th, 2025 03:00
• MY DAD (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Beautiful, heart rending in the same breath inspiring. Growing and...
  January 9th, 2025 02:57
• Exotic Beauty (Reynaldo Casison) Truly a mesmerizing ode to love and the captivating presence of an...
  January 9th, 2025 02:21
• An Evening Out. (Goldfinch60) That seems to be in the past tense. Hope nights out like these won’t be...
  January 9th, 2025 02:16
• Eighteen again (Kevin Hulme) And later on grasp at wisps of sentimental hopes and visions… the odd...
  January 9th, 2025 02:05
• Spring Day (Marigold02) Welcome to MPS! In this poem, surreal makes a whole lot of sense...
  January 9th, 2025 02:03
• Winter Midnight (Reynaldo Casison) Very relaxing and atmospheric, much enjoyed! 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
  January 8th, 2025 08:09
• The Tower (Tony36) Parallels then surpassed Shrek. Hoping for a sequel but that would also...
  January 8th, 2025 07:55
• take away today (Jim56) Liked the pauses and spaces at just the right spots! Good stuff, jim!
  January 8th, 2025 07:22
• WINTER SKY (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Now that is a poem that nature sings. Liked and Faved!
  January 8th, 2025 07:20
• Chickens (Sorenbarrett) Now that just opens up the idea of being hen-pecked and growing a tortoise...
  January 8th, 2025 07:17
• Bounteous Blessings (Orchidee) Quite anthemic in its appeal!
  January 8th, 2025 07:13
• Our Lakeside River. (Goldfinch60) It’s so good to have something this beautiful to come back to. We have...
  January 8th, 2025 07:08
• LIMERICK 136 (Michael Edwards) Ah yes! Was it Bugs Bunny or Coyote that had to add water to get water…...
  January 8th, 2025 07:06
• Answers Undiscovered (Dan Williams) A poem poignantly explores the tension between hope and despair. The...
  January 8th, 2025 07:04
• Come Back, It! (Mutley Ravishes) Such an intriguing and dynamic exploration of the profound impact of an...
  January 8th, 2025 07:00
• Out (2781) What a poem outing the tension between control and surrender, connection...
  January 8th, 2025 06:55
• Mostly Bitter (Dan Williams) Got myself into a couple of scrapes like this, in my time. And it’s not...
  January 8th, 2025 06:23
• Trepidation (James_Poet) Welcome to MPS! Superb expression 👍🏻
  January 7th, 2025 22:54
• Green Eric (Kevin Hulme) As I first arrived at the doorstep of this poem I immediately thought;...
  January 7th, 2025 19:25
• Measures (Teddy.15) Love that floaty feeling. And when there is art out there that exudes the...
  January 7th, 2025 18:03
• roasted rice cake (Rin) Odango? With shōyu? 👍🏻
  January 7th, 2025 18:01
• Reality hits (Xqw) By any means we shall survive! 👍🏻🕊
  January 7th, 2025 10:15
• ~> Mother Nature - form Rondeau- (Thad Wilk) What vibrant imagery and joyful tone; making it a delightful celebration...
  January 7th, 2025 09:46
• Final Retreat (Tristan Robert Lange) This poem is a powerful exploration of the human condition, touching on...
  January 7th, 2025 09:42
• The Chest (Tony36) Now I want to know what’s inside! At your mercy kind sir....
  January 7th, 2025 08:58
• The Over-thinking, late-night drinking, aspiring writer, insomniacs Club (Tom Dylan) https://youtu.be/CIxYe3G3Iz4 “Is there anybody out there” Pink Floyd....
  January 7th, 2025 08:43
• sun visit (Jim56) More sun, longer days, really would be so nice!!! Thanks jim, can\'t wait...
  January 7th, 2025 07:07
• Praise Profession (Orchidee) The Epiphany was my most favourite season as a child. It filled me with...
  January 7th, 2025 06:37
• Watson And Homes Went Camping. (Goldfinch60) Hahaha! Nice one! The first thought was I hoped they’d had the presence...
  January 7th, 2025 06:32
• Tilt (Mutley Ravishes) The micro and the macro mirroring. Something mind blowing....
  January 7th, 2025 06:28
• Winter Nights (Mr. Not) Your poetry speaks, and your abilities are fluid, improving with every...
  January 7th, 2025 06:25
• treasure hunt (Rin) Now this approach is close to my heart, rin! This poem underscores the...
  January 7th, 2025 06:18
• Still not sure what this Poems about (Kevin Hulme) It seems to be exploring the very nature of purpose itself! Its...
  January 7th, 2025 06:14
• Not Such a Silent Night (Thomas W Case) Even the dead it seems don’t get silent nights, but that a whole other...
  January 7th, 2025 06:07
• FOODBANKS (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) I used to be embarrassed as well. The food banks we have were we live are...
  January 7th, 2025 06:05
• Condemned (Sorenbarrett) Captured me entirely. As a child both being entirely fascinated and at...
  January 7th, 2025 06:01
• Winds of time (RSM0812) The winds of time don’t hibernate or migrate in the winter- a revelatory...
  January 7th, 2025 05:55
• rejected (Tristan Robert Lange) Nothing from what I can see! Other poems on this site today has made that...
  January 6th, 2025 09:52
• \" Buy American Made! \" (Thad Wilk) The economy has become a bedroom community, so I’m happy for this...
  January 6th, 2025 09:47
• Galaxease (Mutley Ravishes) Makes me wonder how our solar system at the wispy ends of the galaxy...
  January 6th, 2025 09:24
• Jouney in Winter (Tharun_) Welcome to MPS! We have another Tharun here as well. 🙏🏻👍🏻
  January 6th, 2025 09:20