Comments on community poems by arqios

• Virgo boy (Eliaskayne) Welcome to MPS! Thanks for sharing something of yourself on your first...
  December 3rd, 2024 05:29
• Jewel discarded (Sorenbarrett) The notion that each poem contains a heartbeat underscores the emotional...
  December 3rd, 2024 05:19
• Maternal Love (Cassie58) Hey Cassie, this poem is a moving tribute to the enduring power of love...
  December 3rd, 2024 05:15
• Winter Has Just Phoned (Kevin Hulme) What a domineering winter as the seasons change, a guest perhaps not...
  December 2nd, 2024 23:04
• Haggis ghazal (FrasMac) It does seem that you had fun with this! It exudes of it.
  December 2nd, 2024 22:56
• Cryogenic Catharsis (Tristan Robert Lange) As long as they are red dancing shoes, however ill-fitting they may be,...
  December 2nd, 2024 22:53
• ~> OMG, I Needed A Job Fast! (Thad Wilk) oh wow... what\'s the hourly? and how does one rinse out their nostrils...
  December 2nd, 2024 22:52
• When the Sun Illuminates a Sapphire Sky (Cassie58) I imagine that as a reverse tree hug of sorts, having reclined against a...
  December 2nd, 2024 22:50
• A Hippie\'s Soul (Tony36) I grew up with hippies... toddling about in a bright sunny atmosphere.
  December 2nd, 2024 22:48
• Now (2781) The be opportunistic what to gain a winning vote and parasitic to remain...
  December 2nd, 2024 22:47
• She (Sorenbarrett) What eloquence in giving tribute to a figure embodying wisdom, resilience...
  December 2nd, 2024 06:10
• All a Glow (Teddy.15) Oh wow that took me for a ride!
  December 2nd, 2024 06:03
• A Hand Full of Ashes (Neville) Oh so deeply melancholic, of masks, isolation and most strikingly of...
  December 2nd, 2024 06:00
• Xmas and other stuff (Orchidee) Good one O!
  December 2nd, 2024 05:53
• Variety is the Spice……. (Doggerel Dave) Wow that\'s like 6 poems in one! The diversity can seem overwhelming but...
  December 2nd, 2024 05:53
• LIMERICK 131 (Michael Edwards) Oh my, what a day for a neutering!
  December 2nd, 2024 05:44
• The Three Noah\'s Arks (Rin) Now that is an interesting take on the story. Very creative.
  December 2nd, 2024 05:43
• Memories of the 70`s (Music Fans) (Poetic Licence) What what a songlist, gotta make a mixtape of this oh but perhaps just use...
  December 2nd, 2024 05:42
• To The Gym. (Goldfinch60) I was just considering that this week at work.. slower, more fatigued,...
  December 2nd, 2024 05:41
• Beauty (Kevin Hulme) Perhaps we go so fast and forget life in the slow lane and the beauty that...
  December 2nd, 2024 01:54
• Time Resigns (Dan Williams) I must agree. Having choked reading through the first half. Letting out...
  December 2nd, 2024 01:41
• ~> Another Day At The Vets! (Thad Wilk) Hope Ralphie is doing ok! Which we could be certain of that he is in your...
  December 1st, 2024 18:50
• Never Give Up (Tony36) Won’t give up seeing as I’m being reminded constantly not to. Thanks...
  December 1st, 2024 10:38
• Hourglass (Tristan Robert Lange) Good one Tristan! Down to the shapely hourglass ⌛️ curves; and Yes...
  December 1st, 2024 10:35
• Countless Times Have I Loved You (Ishwar Chandra) Some people are just paired that way. Always good to find our match!
  December 1st, 2024 10:32
• I Should Have (Cassie58) Sounds like someone overslept or caught up with missed sleep or just...
  December 1st, 2024 10:30
• Once there was a time (Sorenbarrett) Ah, that is the typical day\'s panorama for many of my years. Have a...
  December 1st, 2024 06:27
• Signs of Things to Come (Neville) What did we identify as today... guess it doesn\'t really matter now that...
  December 1st, 2024 06:25
• Return Readiness (Orchidee) The organ blares but to me it has a calming effect, in the semi-darkness...
  December 1st, 2024 06:23
• LIMERICK 130 (Michael Edwards) Limericks are always fun! And this one is no exception. Now eagerly...
  December 1st, 2024 06:21
• She Says Goodbye (Poetic Licence) Okay, so I double backed and went to the previous poem and our...
  December 1st, 2024 06:19
• Rescue (Teddy.15) Perhaps so, I often wonder that of myself. Just finished watching the new...
  December 1st, 2024 06:06
• I Now Say The Word. (Goldfinch60) Who was the first one today? Ah the tree\'s out and the lights are strung...
  December 1st, 2024 06:04
• November November (Kevin Hulme) Only once did Gene Kelly dance in the rain? I woulda thort we was more...
  December 1st, 2024 06:01
• Poor Eddie Van Patten (Thomas W Case) That is a sad tale. We had several of our schoolmates go on ahead younger...
  December 1st, 2024 06:00
• House of Scars (FrasMac) Tremble we may but there is a path that won’t dismay. Somehow hearing a...
  November 30th, 2024 22:49
• Tomorrow It Could Be You (Poetic Licence) So true and so aggravating to the inner spirit. Our empathy levels are...
  November 30th, 2024 07:56
• Flood (Cassie58) Some memories are tied in with the season and the seeming fickleness of...
  November 30th, 2024 07:46
• Amiable Andrew (Orchidee) It’s been a while O! Are he back for good? Fido is orchi ok?
  November 30th, 2024 06:36
• Omnipresent (Sorenbarrett) No good byes here, just farewell, and houroo!
  November 30th, 2024 06:34
• Music Time Machine. (Goldfinch60) Ah, as you know from previous conversations, so had my dad influenced me....
  November 30th, 2024 06:32
• Footy (Doggerel Dave) As with knights in jousting they must be preparing for some real...
  November 30th, 2024 06:27
• Shepherds (Ishwar Chandra) Welcome to MPS! Mingle and relish the ambient poetics from various parts!
  November 30th, 2024 06:19
• Still Art For Art’s Sake (Neville) Now the products of these efforts I genuinely love to see!
  November 30th, 2024 06:17
• That Which Takes (Nerrith) Welcome again, on your new account. I was fortunate enough to reaccess my...
  November 30th, 2024 06:15
• Strolling Down Christmas Lanes (Tristan Robert Lange) A bunch of oddities and contradictory traditions, that seems to be part...
  November 29th, 2024 09:29
• I want to dance with you (Tony36) Makes me wonder what to do next, the best move if the other wasn’t in...
  November 29th, 2024 08:54
• Angel (senryu) (Teddy.15) Now that says so much with such economy and beautiful lines....
  November 29th, 2024 08:52
• PRAYER OF THANKS (Bobby O) And may we not kill each other before dinner is over and the dessert has...
  November 29th, 2024 06:37
• Here (Doggerel Dave) Oh, that will fit with the most hated phrases that Orc was on about!...
  November 29th, 2024 06:35
• Hanging On by My Fingertips. (Poetic Licence) This is like that slow motion all happening at once scene where everything...
  November 29th, 2024 06:32
• Gossip (NafisaSB) And a ‘running mouth’ is a well of trouble that never runs dry! Good...
  November 29th, 2024 06:18
• Buddha Says (Goldfinch60) Oh, how very interesting! My mind I think is somewhat nomadic, vacillating...
  November 29th, 2024 06:06
• Such a Waste of Fine Words (Neville) Oh man, to be on the other side of that, receiving such pronouncements!...
  November 29th, 2024 06:01
• My way (2781) Nothing ever goes my way, perhaps that is a good thing. But the perusal...
  November 29th, 2024 05:59
• Your Most Un-Favourite Saying (Orchidee) Not that comes to mind this instant. I’m sure if I hear it I’d go:...
  November 29th, 2024 05:58
• No sugar (Sorenbarrett) Technology seamlessly integrates into our lives, becoming both magical and...
  November 29th, 2024 05:57
• Tale of the Heike parody (Rin) I thought that name (Heike) sounded familiar. Must read up on them...
  November 29th, 2024 05:51
• Bake Day Beth (Cassie58) That makes me want to be invited over! No one really bakes anymore and...
  November 29th, 2024 05:49
• The Lunatics are On the Move (Poetic Licence) Quite so. Very insightful 🙏🏻
  November 28th, 2024 06:11
• Meant to last... (Noah Malice) As it should be. And still the rawness of having to go through life...
  November 28th, 2024 05:46
• Oyster Shucking - Factory Girls (Cassie58) I could only imagine though on one tropical holiday I was like Rambo by...
  November 28th, 2024 05:42
• We Are Piggies..... (Orchidee) This little piggie stayed at home. It’s angels were on annual leave.
  November 28th, 2024 05:38
• Green Tangents (Neville) A cure all Band-Aid or was it Kool Aid… nah, not climbing that tree...
  November 28th, 2024 05:36
• Best Dream Ever (senryu) (Teddy.15) Ack when the sweet tooth was well and kicking, that’s quite like heaven...
  November 28th, 2024 05:35
• Jazzy Night Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) Ah, there’s that shift! Had Bach playing for most of the day. Always...
  November 28th, 2024 05:31
• All American turkey (Sorenbarrett) Oh, so you know about that shift! Not to be indelicate but even cushioned...
  November 28th, 2024 05:28
• Angels (Doggerel Dave) So much lore, legend, and even cult following in some parts. But logically...
  November 28th, 2024 05:23
• Keep an open mind (Jeremy Leach) It’s the best practice, proven over and over again! TFS 👍🏻
  November 27th, 2024 15:27
• ~> A Voodoo Christmas (Thad Wilk) Now there’s a twist!
  November 27th, 2024 15:25
• Thousands (Tony36) Without the fight, many humans just fall through societal cracks. And...
  November 27th, 2024 15:24
• Labeled (Tristan Robert Lange) In a world where labels sting, Let words of healing take wing. Lift the...
  November 27th, 2024 15:21
• Seen With Sadness (Cassie58) This is so touching. I see a sepia photograph clutched closely in an...
  November 27th, 2024 15:03
• Bold (2781) And that wisdom can’t be conjured up but received!
  November 27th, 2024 15:00
• Silent Poem (Orchidee) Next time we can use a metronome to help us keep time with this silent...
  November 27th, 2024 10:16
• Nursery mantra (Sorenbarrett) Too enjoyable, trying to make out the barbs from the hilarity! Here’s a...
  November 27th, 2024 07:24
• Saccharine Succor (Tristan Robert Lange) Spot on, poignantly capturing the dehumanizing and isolating experience of...
  November 27th, 2024 07:05
• Unreasonable Logic  (Neville) Thanks for challenging the restrictive norms of masculinity and the...
  November 27th, 2024 06:48
• An Unreal Dream. (Goldfinch60) That punchline puts the punch where punches are meant to land! A waking...
  November 27th, 2024 06:39
• The transparent wall (Rin) Rin! You had me at the title! My ginkgo leaves are yellow but these are...
  November 27th, 2024 06:37
• Writer\'s Cramp (Dan Williams) Wow DW, that’ a neat encapsulation, eloquently capturing the struggles...
  November 27th, 2024 06:35
• ADULT FUN (Bobby O) So that’s how you make seventy bucks…. Takes a bit of haggling in the...
  November 27th, 2024 06:30
• Ads (Sorenbarrett) Mmm… quite thought provoking! It might also be interesting to see how...
  November 26th, 2024 07:14
• Lying & Truly (Neville) How do we say good by, turn away and walk into our own tomorrow?
  November 26th, 2024 07:06
• Death Asked Life. (Goldfinch60) Bam! Now that’s the way to swing a poem to its curtain call!
  November 26th, 2024 07:03
• Upon Visiting the Dead (Thomas W Case) I haven’t fished in forever! Take me along, I say!
  November 26th, 2024 06:59
• KP Nuts (Orchidee) Let Fido have a paw at this!
  November 25th, 2024 12:39
• Love is a Noun (Tharun) At first I thought this would be something that couldn’t be agreed with,...
  November 25th, 2024 06:28
• Forever Thinking (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) We have a tax called ‘environmental levy’ which means we are breathing...
  November 25th, 2024 06:25
• Acronyms – not an inspiring title, is it? (Doggerel Dave) Acronyms just mess me up, I’ll have the letters fine but what they stand...
  November 25th, 2024 06:22
• The Sun-Spilled Honey (HarrisHan2k) Welcome to MPS Harris Han! So much in minimal lines and word count. You...
  November 25th, 2024 06:17
• Cricket and Grasshopper (Rin) Bravo! Something to continue where we left off in our younger years, keep...
  November 25th, 2024 06:11
• Team Building (Neville) There is a reversing of thinking on many fronts and the drumbeat is...
  November 25th, 2024 06:09
• Filled With Joy. (Goldfinch60) Oh and this version rivals the 70s version… if I’m thinking of the...
  November 25th, 2024 05:51
• Filled With Joy. (Goldfinch60) Oh you did it this time Andy! The language, the tone, the cadence, the...
  November 25th, 2024 05:50
• LOSSES SWIFTLY CUT (Bobby O) ‘Absolutely nothing!’ Don’t get me started! So powerful the knee...
  November 25th, 2024 05:46
• Forget Me Not (Teddy.15) A very holistic and well rounded self appraisal and examination! Glad to...
  November 25th, 2024 05:41
• Drip from the tap (Sorenbarrett) Like the incessant dripping of the tap! Soren, this is marve!
  November 25th, 2024 05:40
• Here\'s Looking At You. (Goldfinch60) I love the style and how it sits “on the page!” The atmosphere is like...
  November 25th, 2024 04:46
• Enough (Tristan Robert Lange) Only to me and that is the sad point where a sharedness can be lacking,...
  November 24th, 2024 07:35