Comments on community poems by P.X. Vexxus

• Torture [Graphic Content: Viewer Discretion Advised] (P.X. Vexxus) Thank you :)
  January 7th, 2018 16:58
• Escape (P.X. Vexxus) Thanks for the kind words. And I\'m glad you like my dark, twisted mind...
  October 10th, 2017 14:20
• Escape (P.X. Vexxus) Thanks for the kind words. And I\'m glad you like my dark, twisted mind...
  October 10th, 2017 14:20
• Flesh (P.X. Vexxus) Lmao 😂 thanks for reading friend :)
  October 10th, 2017 12:05
• Reading Glasses On. (Wallace) A nice perspective of things. Everyone has a choice.
  October 10th, 2017 00:27
• Disruption (John Prophet) Awesome! The formatting was a little weird and made it hard to read, but...
  October 10th, 2017 00:26
• Yami (Adam Shirley) Hmmm I never thought of writing in more than one language. Loved it....
  August 23rd, 2017 01:19
• It\'s Time To Stand Up And Fight, For What Is Right! (DreamersReality) Heartfelt and true, if only a little long. First poems should be just,...
  August 23rd, 2017 01:16
• Understanding The Cold (Noah) We all have our inner demons. Good write.
  August 23rd, 2017 01:11
• Forgotten desires, remembered dreams (Sunflowers Bloom) Hmmm an interesting topic. I enjoyed :)
  August 23rd, 2017 01:10
• Untitled (Sara Storkson) Happiness can be fleeting. A small moment that fades after the night ends,...
  August 21st, 2017 07:48
• Mediocre (Azura Nightsong) Reads like a song. A lot of repetition, but it works. Good write.
  August 21st, 2017 07:44
• Depravity\'s Eye (Kurt Philip Behm) Great piece, I love the font and formatting too. Well done. :)
  August 9th, 2017 15:12
• The Kindest Hearts Bear The Deepest Scars: (Scottcole178) Welcome to the site. A fine poem to start. May you rise up and soar.
  August 9th, 2017 15:11
• Graphite Moon (P.X. Vexxus) 1st: Thank you everyone for the support and for reading. 2nd: I fixed...
  August 9th, 2017 14:49
• Imagination (P.X. Vexxus) Thank you everyone for the comments! I hope you like my future writes! :D
  August 4th, 2017 02:11
• Scorching Sun (P.X. Vexxus) Thanks for reading. Sorry I\'ve been absent. With the death of Chester...
  July 22nd, 2017 01:30
• Grief (P.X. Vexxus) Thanks for reading :) a lot of my poems are relative, especially my older...
  July 13th, 2017 14:39
• Misery (P.X. Vexxus) This poem is one of my personal favorites, along with \"Heartless\",...
  July 8th, 2017 06:29
• Decay (P.X. Vexxus) Thanks everyone for reading and commenting! I am glad you enjoyed the...
  July 8th, 2017 06:23
• Blank (P.X. Vexxus) Thanks for the comments! I\'m glad you all liked it!
  July 8th, 2017 05:51
• Salvation (P.X. Vexxus) Thanks for all the wonderful comments! :D
  June 28th, 2017 00:53
• Broken (P.X. Vexxus) Wow, thanks for the comments guys. That was really fast. I posted it...
  June 12th, 2017 22:08
• Rebirth (Kurt Philip Behm) Great thoughts, diverse vocabulary, awesome structuring. This is quite the...
  May 18th, 2017 00:07
• Cumulus whispers (Whisperingquill) Awesome use of vocabulary to paint a picture in your readers\' heads....
  May 16th, 2017 03:31
• Wooden Castle (Niallprideaux) Loved it. Sparked my imagination, reminded me of what seems forever ago....
  May 12th, 2017 14:24
• The forgotten (Jooles) My grandfather suffers from Alzheimer\'s as well. I wrote this poem for...
  May 12th, 2017 04:01
• The Wall. (Goldfinch60) This is my favorite song by Pink Floyd, which my mom actually sings very...
  May 12th, 2017 03:55
• 40 SHADES OF GREEN ~ JOHNNY CASH (BRIAN & ANGELA) Johnny Cash was a great artist. I was a kid when he passed away, but I...
  May 12th, 2017 03:54
• Time Stops With You (Karmavervain) Welcome to the site! Good first poem! Try to place some more imagery in...
  May 12th, 2017 03:52
• How can I love you? I don\'t even know you. (Sarah24) Straightforward, could use some imagery. Place us in the scene with you....
  May 12th, 2017 03:50
• Lust (Dodger312) Good imagery, interesting choice of vocabulary. Keep writing. :)
  May 12th, 2017 03:48
• A Worldly Crown (Gino) Good use of vocabulary with an interesting story. Thanks. :)
  May 12th, 2017 03:47
• PERCEPTIONS MISPLACED (Michael Edwards) Nice. You paint your own artwork and write poetry to go with it. Great...
  May 12th, 2017 03:44
• Penny (Audreewho) Good work. Glad to see you don\'t let yourself be taken advantage of! The...
  May 9th, 2017 00:39
• The one. (Leftoverlovethings) Great work. Welcome to the site. I myself have learned a key thing from...
  May 9th, 2017 00:37
• Unseen, Unheard (ElenaGrace) Some would say if you raise your voice loud enough in an empty room,...
  May 9th, 2017 00:30
• Haiku. Growing darkness (Garry) Scary thought. To be completely consumed, enveloped by the thoughts of...
  May 9th, 2017 00:28
• insomniac (Brianna jean zeiger) I can relate to this, in a sense. I have a hard time getting to sleep,...
  May 9th, 2017 00:26
• Forgetting The Hymn (Satishverma) You, my friend, are a great writer. For a long time, I have read your...
  May 9th, 2017 00:20
• Alone (Shannahrose) Great thoughts penned. Don\'t be afraid to shine. If you never try,...
  May 9th, 2017 00:19
• The Chronicles of pain and suffering (Sada_bear) I can relate to this. I always lived in the shadows of others. One day I...
  May 9th, 2017 00:18
• To the boy who hurt her (Vicbed) Great story. Date rape is a real issue, and this poem helps to bring...
  May 9th, 2017 00:14
• It Is Quite Possible (Brooklyn6timesplus) Great inspirational words. Enjoyed.
  May 9th, 2017 00:12
• Mind over Matter (Mishi Stroud) When something is weighing on your mind, it can feel like your mind is...
  May 9th, 2017 00:11
• BUFFET FODDER (Michael Edwards) I love pizza but I also liked the poem!
  May 9th, 2017 00:08
• Second Chances. (Misaacs72) Liked it!
  April 16th, 2017 20:53
• Try to Run (Augustus) Wow, great story. I really enjoyed the use and placement of words within...
  March 10th, 2017 04:24
• Lost (Augustus) I\'ve often wondered about what would happen if the sun were to go out,...
  March 1st, 2017 20:49
• the scarred vile (Kira) Another vivid piece. The story sucked me in from beginning to...
  February 13th, 2017 05:34
• Skeptical cry (Kira) An interesting write. Vivid and made me think. If I had to criticize...
  February 13th, 2017 05:25
• SAINT VALENTINE ~ A Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Great poem as always Brian. I always read your writes, but I usually do so...
  February 13th, 2017 05:19
• I touch the rain (Lolomgwtf) Nice write! Criticism: Use more diverse vocabulary!
  February 13th, 2017 05:18
• Institutionalised (AJ) Great write!
  February 13th, 2017 05:17
• Water (LIGHT WARRIOR) I was a little late. I\'ve been too busy with work to write lately: The...
  December 2nd, 2016 16:18
• The Accused (Vanabba3) I like the thought involved in the poem. I would say she isn't guilty, for...
  October 10th, 2016 01:01
• Why do people hate the rain? (Princesslay) I love the rain. This poem definitely hits the nail on the head. many...
  October 6th, 2016 01:40
• Your Voice (SheWasTheSun) Love this. Our voices can be powerful, it can shape and change the lives...
  October 5th, 2016 01:42
• You Got It (TeArra Poetry) I enjoyed your poem. Great first write. Looking forward to reading future...
  October 1st, 2016 15:20
• INTERLUDE: (XERO - 10) \"A Planet Unknown; A Story Untold\" imagined, theorized, partly written, and typed by: King B. Rite - The Poet/Psychopath (King_B_Rite) I second Jeff on that. Wow. Mind blown. Great write.
  October 1st, 2016 15:11
• MASQUERADE ~ ESCAPISM (BRIAN & ANGELA) Halloween is the BEST. Liked your poem greatly :)
  October 1st, 2016 15:05
• Diary Of A Mad Man (Jondoe909) Great write, liked this a lot. Very similar to my style of writing. Thanks...
  October 1st, 2016 15:03
• Hard Decision (Poeta de Cabra) Incredible poem. The ending took me by complete suprise. This poem is sad,...
  October 1st, 2016 15:01
• Survivor (Adara) The world is wrought with pain, fear and suffering. I write about the...
  October 1st, 2016 14:58
• My ribs are a cage, a cage for my heart. (The Dyslexic Poet) Let the poem be your guide. It will show you the way. Only action will...
  October 1st, 2016 14:54
• Blood Solace in a Eulogy (DezyraSatyre) This poem tells a tale, of sorrow and grief. But within the poem, you...
  October 1st, 2016 14:50
• Build Your World (Brooklyn6timesplus) Motivating and inspirational. Thanks for sharing.
  October 1st, 2016 14:41
• Silence (V.Hope) We all have our demons, and our insecurities. They can tear us up inside,...
  October 1st, 2016 14:40
• The Future\'s End (Jeff) I really liked the vibe this poem gives while reading. It echoes the pain...
  October 1st, 2016 14:34
• A terrible lie (Daniel dawes) I agree with this. Great write.
  September 28th, 2016 03:52
• Threads of Life (Jeff) Humanity's true nature is primitive. We will never change, until it is too...
  September 28th, 2016 03:02
• Eyes (Untoldpain) A very thoughtful write. This could not only help people facing...
  September 27th, 2016 02:25
• “Purgatory” (Nodine40) Depression limits the mind. It confines us to our darkest fears, to a...
  September 27th, 2016 02:22
• the scars (TheWritingInstrument) I've written a poem about cutting. I usually do a view from a third person...
  September 19th, 2016 02:10
• Inside (SheWasTheSun) Nice write. Like it a lot.
  September 13th, 2016 01:32
• 33 A CROSS (BRIAN & ANGELA) Happy birthday!
  September 8th, 2016 05:22
• Tortured Soul (Notapoet) This poem is nice. No rhyme scheme, but it didnt need one.
  September 6th, 2016 17:20
• The poem with no name (Aa Harvey) Nicely written, thanks for sharing :]
  September 6th, 2016 08:02
• Hearts That Never Mend (Jeff) This poem is awesome Jeff. I really like it. Great flow, great imagery!
  September 6th, 2016 07:55
• Womb (LIGHT WARRIOR) Just my style :]
  September 6th, 2016 07:13
• P O E T R Y IS ................. ? (BRIAN & ANGELA) I like your rebellious nature lol thanks for sharing
  September 6th, 2016 07:11
• One Rose (Tony36) Nice write (typo in 4th line 'ne' - 'me')
  September 6th, 2016 07:09
• A Criminal of Gold (The New Cry Atlantic) The flow was actually pretty good, despite there being no rhyme scheme. I...
  September 4th, 2016 14:03
• I\'m Glad You\'re Gone (Pterodactyl) Well written, a very thought induced poem.
  September 4th, 2016 13:59
• The plague (Codeman6311) You can edit the poem after you write it. It's right underneath your views...
  September 3rd, 2016 02:25
• Out of the Mist (Notapoet) Very nice. I love how you describe the importance of this person over your...
  September 1st, 2016 20:27
• A Note of Suicide (FruitfulSpirit) A very similar piece to what I would write. It holds a dark atmosphere,...
  September 1st, 2016 19:46
• goodbye (Daniellemiller7) A very sad poem. Death is a release from our pain and hurt. To die with...
  September 1st, 2016 19:44
• Hunger (Elphaba993) Very nice poem. I wrote a poem under the same subject, however, it will be...
  September 1st, 2016 19:34
• Goodbye (Jeff) Another great poem. You have a great style of writing I can definitely...
  September 1st, 2016 19:30
• Only In My Dreams (Jeff) I really like this poem. Your use of "near" rhymes makes the experience...
  September 1st, 2016 19:27