Comments on community poems by Tristan Robert Lange

• A Broken Brain / Insane / God\'s Game (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) This is raw and real here, Shawn...and I know you\'ve lived through the...
  July 16th, 2025 08:31
• Synchronicity (Sorenbarrett) Soren, you’ve taken the blender blade to chronology and somehow blended...
  July 16th, 2025 08:02
• A Silent Soul (Priya Tomar) Priya, this poem is stark and sorrowful, as it should be. Each stage of...
  July 16th, 2025 07:55
• trust ! (Friendship) My dear friend, there’s something beautifully nostalgic and metaphysical...
  July 16th, 2025 07:52
• Oracle (Doggerel Dave) Orry’s got sass! I had thought I commented on this and realized I never...
  July 15th, 2025 19:03
• Beyond these walls (Betty Miller) Betty, this is breathtaking in its bravery and craft. The clarity with...
  July 15th, 2025 14:53
• Morning Dew (Priya Tomar) This is quite the haunting, yet quiet parable...innocence undone by what...
  July 15th, 2025 14:51
• Locked Away (Kurt Philip Behm) This one struck a nerve. There’s a real sorrow in those winds, and that...
  July 15th, 2025 14:49
• Raven on the Road (Teddy.15) Dearest Teddy, you know my profound love for your Raven series. There’s...
  July 15th, 2025 14:46
• I Coulda Been a Poet (Tony Grannell) Absolutely brilliant. I was bracing for daggers and lust...then bam! Hit...
  July 15th, 2025 14:39
• Shine (Damaso) This wonderful poem feels like a vision walking itself into language, each...
  July 15th, 2025 14:35
• Some only see the outside (Tony36) A-friggin-men! You are on 🔥 Tony! Keep \'em coming, bro! I know you...
  July 15th, 2025 14:33
• an orchard’s lament (Arqios) This, my friend, is an elegy on the edge of collapse. That...
  July 15th, 2025 14:31
• Equal but not the same (Sorenbarrett) Wow! Soren, this is quite clever and complex...riddled with paradox and...
  July 15th, 2025 14:26
• (Re)lapse (DontSleepOnTheBoy) Great poem, my friend. The imagery is brutal in the best wa...those...
  July 15th, 2025 14:23
• Nothing.... (Orchidee) Pure literary genius! I laughed so hard I nearly choked on all 4,583...
  July 15th, 2025 14:17
• Alien Visitations (Mutley Ravishes) This feels like signal in the dark—brief, cryptic, and oddly comforting....
  July 15th, 2025 14:08
• Put on your happy face (Georgia Watson) Love this, Georgia. A fave. That last line wraps around you like a...
  July 15th, 2025 14:05
• Pretense, Eh? Go Figure (Cheeky Missy) And there you go again, my dear friend, folding the sacred into the scent...
  July 15th, 2025 14:01
• Can we talk (Tony36) I sadly know this feeling all too well. Well done, Tony, on conveying it....
  July 15th, 2025 12:38
• Words of Encouragement! (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) There’s such a steady truth in this, like a hand on the shoulder when...
  July 15th, 2025 12:36
• Our Terrorist Departed (Tony Grannell) This one doesn’t flinch, and neither did I while reading. You walk us...
  July 15th, 2025 08:52
• “flight from self” (Arqios) There’s a sharp honesty in this, the kind I have come to really...
  July 15th, 2025 08:47
• Crazy sonnet (Sorenbarrett) This one stares straight into the abyss and doesn’t blink, my dear...
  July 15th, 2025 08:43
• Pure Poison (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Truth, truth, truth. Preach!
  July 14th, 2025 21:08
• Once More With Feeling… (Doggerel Dave) Rock on, Dave! The call to sharpen the ol’ critical faculties is for...
  July 14th, 2025 21:07
• Favourites? (Orchidee) It costs you 50 quid and a pint for a fave! 😂 Though in your case,...
  July 14th, 2025 21:02
• Handing Over the Reins (Mutley Ravishes) Yes!!! This hits like a spark begging for ignition. The sheer scale of...
  July 14th, 2025 20:56
• The Quill of the Greats (Thomas W Case) Man, I love how you pull the veil back on the act itself…writing as...
  July 14th, 2025 20:52
• Waiting for Nora (Tony Grannell) This is the kind of poem that hikes the line between history and heartache...
  July 14th, 2025 10:10
• Hades Train (Kurt Philip Behm) This reads like the final boarding call etched in flame. That closing...
  July 14th, 2025 10:04
• Wassat? (Orchidee) Now that’s the kind of nonsense I’d pay exact Mars fare for. 😂...
  July 14th, 2025 10:03
• Vibrations in Equations: Where Science Meets Soul (Salvia.S) You have a most brilliant mind and a most beautiful soul, dearest Salvia!...
  July 14th, 2025 09:56
• Haha, The Old Disappearing Trick (Cheeky Missy) Enjoy? I always do when it comes to your scrumptious sonnets! There’s...
  July 14th, 2025 09:52
• Line up the constellations (Georgia Watson) Wow, Georgia! Wow. That line...“my stars are shaped like...
  July 14th, 2025 06:36
• Put It Away (Bella Shepard) The restraint in this hits harder than shouting ever could. That quiet...
  July 13th, 2025 20:33
• Pirates (Tony36) Yo ho yo ho, more of your poems demands me! Hehe! Love this Tony, well...
  July 13th, 2025 08:21
• Memories of childhood. (Friendship) What a beautiful cascade of memory, love, and selfhood. This reads like a...
  July 13th, 2025 08:20
• from the Archives of the Sunbeam (Arqios) Need I say this, but this pure brilliance, arqios. You take something as...
  July 13th, 2025 08:18
• Scraps given (Sorenbarrett) Beautifully said, Soren. There’s something deeply human in the way you...
  July 13th, 2025 08:15
• None Left (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) OOh. What a Sinner, indeed. Like literally, it\'s his name! LOL! My...
  July 13th, 2025 08:14
• The storm (NafisaSB) What a relentless, vivid ride, my dear friend! I love how you give the...
  July 13th, 2025 08:05
• Aether Defends (Kurt Philip Behm) This is beautifully mythic, Kurt...airy and elemental, yet weighted with...
  July 12th, 2025 14:26
• Don\'t Give Me THAT Look (Cheeky Missy) I always adore how you blend the sacred and the everyday, Miss...and this...
  July 12th, 2025 14:24
• The First Flame (Leny) This is quietly powerful, Leny. I love how the flame becomes both comfort...
  July 12th, 2025 09:01
• The Queen of Dunes (Tony Grannell) Tony, this is utterly enchanting. Your command of rhythm and imagery here...
  July 12th, 2025 08:29
• Love yourself, (Friendship) My dear friend, this radiates with such sincere light. It reads like both...
  July 12th, 2025 08:27
• Not sure (Tony36) That inner storm...you’ve captured it with raw simplicity, Tony. The...
  July 12th, 2025 08:26
• crossings (Arqios) This is breathtaking, dear poet and friend. Every step feels like a rite...
  July 12th, 2025 08:24
• Probability (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this feels like a meditation unfolding in layers—time slipping...
  July 12th, 2025 08:20
• I never knew.... (Orchidee) Who knew? We know Popeye, Obi and Tom were too busy to notice! Fun write,...
  July 12th, 2025 07:40
• I was always here, but now I\'m gone today! (Friendship) Wow. A fave friend. There’s a quiet power in this, a kind of elegy for...
  July 11th, 2025 16:56
• Freeing The Circle (Kurt Philip Behm) There’s a beautiful stillness in this, Kurt—like breathing inside a...
  July 11th, 2025 16:50
• An Angler\'s Morn (Tony Grannell) Tony, this is breathtaking. I’ve read a lot of poetry on this site, but...
  July 11th, 2025 16:49
• drive on by (Arqios) I love your form here—the bold first lines anchor each stanza like mile...
  July 11th, 2025 16:46
• Depression (Tony36) All of that and how! Well written, Tony! A fave for the truth alone!...
  July 11th, 2025 16:44
• Well, Wouldn\'t You Like to Know? (Cheeky Missy) Well, of course we would, now that you ask! 🤣 Dearest friend, this...
  July 11th, 2025 16:42
• Not too smart (Sorenbarrett) Haha—this was a wild ride, Soren! You had me grinning the whole way...
  July 11th, 2025 16:39
• There Was No Epstein List? (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
  July 11th, 2025 09:33
• There Was No Epstein List? (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Preach it, mate! 🌹👏
  July 11th, 2025 09:33
• And the Story Goes (Thomas W Case) Excellent, Thomas! This one aches in quiet, steady beats—like the rain...
  July 11th, 2025 09:32
• Parts of Love (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Chilling in its restraint, Hayleigh. You let the quiet horror do its own...
  July 11th, 2025 09:31
• If Only I Were Dumpster Diving, Is It?! (Cheeky Missy) My dear Missy, this whole arc is a whirlwind of sacred absurdity—tender,...
  July 11th, 2025 09:29
• Terrorbred (Kurt Philip Behm) Whoa, Kurt! Talk about a thrilling, wicked ride! This gave me chills—in...
  July 11th, 2025 09:02
• Hyenas (Damaso) Wow, my friend—there is something sharply raw yet oddly comforting here....
  July 11th, 2025 09:00
• Fraternity (Doggerel Dave) Ha! Dave, this hits home more than you know. I genuinely laughed at your...
  July 11th, 2025 08:59
• Stop Judging me (Tony36) Great write, Tony! A fave from me! 🌹👏
  July 10th, 2025 09:00
• starfall, freefall (Arqios) Oh my friend (OMF 🤣)…this is one of those poems that appears and...
  July 10th, 2025 08:58
• Lost art (Sorenbarrett) This one strikes like a kiln-fired truth, dear poet and friend. 🔥 The...
  July 10th, 2025 08:56
• Chilling out (2781) Yikes! 30 minutes. Yesterday I tried to edit a poem and kept getting...
  July 10th, 2025 08:51
• Raging Sea (Tony Grannell) Tony…this is thunderous, confessional, and masterfully carved. 🌊 That...
  July 9th, 2025 19:51
• Towering Above (Kurt Philip Behm) A stirring call to valor here—rooted in that classical sense of honor...
  July 9th, 2025 19:45
• Pink and Grey Hearts (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Hayleigh…this one tugs on the heartstrings! The gray within the...
  July 9th, 2025 19:42
• Mum\'s Replacement Knee (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Now that’s what I call a bionic comeback! My mum went through one too....
  July 9th, 2025 11:00
• nev (Arqios) My friend…this was exactly the right kind of poem, at the right kind of...
  July 9th, 2025 10:58
• Let the bells of peace sound (Tony36) TONY. You did a shape poem—and I saw it before I even read it. 👀🔥...
  July 9th, 2025 10:47
• A vision (Sorenbarrett) Soren…this one reads like a haunted descent—layered with ache, hunger,...
  July 9th, 2025 10:43
• Meanwhile (Orchidee) Oh Orchi…the Meanwhile Maestro! 🤣🤪 This had me grinning from line...
  July 9th, 2025 10:36
• Forever Been (Teddy.15) Oh Tink…there you\'ve been! This one glides with grace, even under the...
  July 9th, 2025 10:31
• I forgot...... (Orchidee) Oh Orchi…this is classic you! 😂 Twisting time, tangled sticks, and...
  July 9th, 2025 10:28
• I understand, don’t I? (Georgia Watson) Oh Georgia…this one hit that quiet ache so many know but rarely name....
  July 9th, 2025 10:25
• Heads Or Tails (Kurt Philip Behm) Great job, Kurt! 🌹👏
  July 9th, 2025 10:24
• Vampyre (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Ooh. Now this one is hot 🔥, seductive 🫦, and bloody 🩸 brilliant...
  July 9th, 2025 10:22
• The Party\'s...In...The...Trash (Cheeky Missy) Ahh, my dearest Missy—the Sage of Sonnets, the Panera Prophet, the...
  July 9th, 2025 10:18
• I am proud (Tony36) And you damn well should be! Good for you and anyone heeding your wisdom...
  July 9th, 2025 10:15
• Some Kind of African Life (Neville) Neville…my dear poetic friend—it’s so good to see your voice again....
  July 9th, 2025 10:13
• Be the Light (Thomas W Case) Damn this is good, mate! Love it! The best literary device indeed! Can\'t...
  July 9th, 2025 10:10
• Between the Lines (Tristan Robert Lange) Minor update in progress. Final version coming soon once the server stops...
  July 9th, 2025 10:00
• vestibule (Arqios) Oh my friend…this one breathed. That fire line at the top already lit...
  July 9th, 2025 08:46
• Cycles (Sorenbarrett) Soren…this one hits with that heavy, grim rhythm—like boots trudging...
  July 9th, 2025 08:43
• Grace and Dignity. (Poetic Licence) On another note and another read through, the opening to this very much...
  July 9th, 2025 08:34
• Grace and Dignity. (Poetic Licence) A-fucking-men. That is all that I can say to this. THIS...right here...is...
  July 9th, 2025 08:31
• Demons and MK Ultra (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Powerful poem on brainwashing. Wow. Scary but profound stuff, my friend!...
  July 9th, 2025 08:28
• Disaster Relief (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Oh hayleigh…my gothic friend, this one burned. 🔥 The ache, the edge,...
  July 7th, 2025 09:24
• A Prayer Away (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) Always and evermore! Truth, my friend! Beautifully written! 🌹👏 A...
  July 7th, 2025 09:15
• Killing Clowns (Tony36) Oh no! Where\'s Grimace when one needs him! It must be that Hamburglar!...
  July 7th, 2025 09:15
• At what point? (Sorenbarrett) Soren…this one lands with weight. 😔 The questions here aren’t...
  July 7th, 2025 09:13
• The Influencer (Doggerel Dave) Oh Dave…this had me chuckling from the jump. 🤭 That closing line,...
  July 7th, 2025 09:11
• Butterfly. (Poetic Licence) Tobani…this one touched something deep. 🦋 That first half? Felt like...
  July 7th, 2025 09:07
• to the forgotten poet (Arqios) Oh, my dear poet and friend…this felt like it was speaking through me,...
  July 7th, 2025 09:05