Comments on community poems by Tristan Robert Lange

• Industry Plants (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) My friend, this lands clean and honest…the Babel line, the shrinking...
  December 1st, 2025 17:54
• Who is I am Addicted? (Mutley Ravishes) I\'ll answer that question if you tell me where I Am Insane went, he took...
  December 1st, 2025 17:47
• Film Critic (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) It really is a great novel..and me too on Monday...of course, no Monday is...
  December 1st, 2025 17:38
• Impenetrable Sky (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Yes, an impenetrable sky indeed. There\'s so much that seems impenetrable...
  December 1st, 2025 17:34
• 𝔼𝕒𝕣𝕝𝕪 𝕄𝕠𝕣𝕟𝕚𝕟𝕘𝕤: 𝒯𝒽ℯ ℬℯ𝓉𝓉ℯ𝓇 𝒯𝒽ℯ 𝒯𝒾𝓂ℯ (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, I know this feeling…the swirl of early-morning words, the rush,...
  November 30th, 2025 08:51
• Final Retreat (Thomas W Case) Brilliant, Thomas! 🌹
  November 30th, 2025 08:50
• Off to the races? (2781) My friend, this is warm and witty…the saved coins, the thousand-percent...
  November 30th, 2025 08:49
• I Partake in Joy (Katie B.) My friend, this shines with soft depth…the red-velvet throne, the...
  November 30th, 2025 08:48
• Wynken, Blynken, and Nod (reprise) (Arqios) arqios, this lands with quiet grace…the sun-gold hair, the recollection...
  November 30th, 2025 08:47
• Reunited (Paul Bell) My friend, I’ve seen echoes of this kind of heartbreak up close…the...
  November 30th, 2025 08:45
• Leave Me Here to Dream (song lyrics) (Teddy.15) Beautiful lyrics and even more touching knowing the reason it was written....
  November 30th, 2025 08:41
• Letting go. (Friendship) Friendship, this lands with a gentle strength…the unclenching fingers,...
  November 30th, 2025 08:37
• Amenable Andrew (Orchidee) Andrew was quite the character, no? And, much better to be amenable Andrew...
  November 30th, 2025 08:36
• Foolishness compounded (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this is wild in the best way…a playful tumble of language that...
  November 30th, 2025 08:34
• Twilight on Sunday (NafisaSB) My friend, this lands with a calm clarity…the gentle pace, the bright...
  November 30th, 2025 08:33
• The Gift (Kurt Philip Behm) Well done, Kurt! And truth!
  November 30th, 2025 08:31
• panels and tears (Arqios) Yay! First comment! My friend, I’ve seen this…people polishing their...
  November 29th, 2025 09:26
• Uriah (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) My friend, this has a warm, steady pull to it…Uriah already feels like...
  November 29th, 2025 09:25
• 𝔈𝔫𝔡𝔩𝔢𝔰𝔰~ 𝔑𝔢𝔳𝔢𝔯 𝔈𝔫𝔡𝔦𝔫𝔤 (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, this feels like drifting…soft, dreamy, a little chaotic in that...
  November 29th, 2025 09:23
• Because I Write (Katie B.) A passion we all share on here for sure, and a wonderful poem at that!...
  November 29th, 2025 09:23
• Assumption (Friendship) My friend, I’ve lived this…having someone script who you are before...
  November 29th, 2025 09:22
• A Ruler To Reign - OT/NT Series 2 (Orchidee) Oh no, there\'s no ruler to reign! Why did she ever run away? Turns out...
  November 29th, 2025 09:18
• Falling apart (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this lands with a steady force…the falling petals, the dropped...
  November 29th, 2025 09:15
• Dollette (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Misery is EXCELLENT! Love King! And what a wonderful poem, Hayleigh! Great...
  November 29th, 2025 09:13
• The Joker Wild (Kurt Philip Behm) Hear hear! This one is VERY relatable for me right now! Love it, Kurt!...
  November 29th, 2025 09:12
• F-E-A-R (Friendship) Friendship, this is powerful…the “dust within the hand” moment names...
  November 28th, 2025 13:02
• Question of the Day (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, this is quietly steady…the “glimmer of hope” moment really...
  November 28th, 2025 11:06
• Rover (Paul Bell) Paul, this cracked me up…the chaos, the characters, the absurdity piling...
  November 28th, 2025 11:05
• hearth of language (Arqios) arqios, this lands softly but sure…the “small gestures put us back in...
  November 28th, 2025 10:46
• Poetic (Katie B.) Katie, this shines with a grounded joy…the “more I write, the more I...
  November 28th, 2025 10:45
• A Son Brings Salvation - OT/NT Series 1 (Orchidee) On another note, the whole virgin vs. young woman debate is actually...
  November 28th, 2025 10:40
• A Son Brings Salvation - OT/NT Series 1 (Orchidee) Great Orchi. A fave! A Song brings Salvation, part 1. Spinoff: A sailor...
  November 28th, 2025 10:35
• Immortalised Life (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) My friend, this hits with conviction…the Apocrypha reference nails a...
  November 28th, 2025 10:33
• Hard love (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this hits with real force…there’s no padding here, just the raw...
  November 28th, 2025 10:28
• Florida St. (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Me too and this just brought be back there! Rock on, Hayleigh!...
  November 28th, 2025 10:26
• The deal (2781) My friend, this hits hard…a bitter truth wrapped in a clean rhythm. The...
  November 28th, 2025 10:25
• 𝒮𝒽𝒽𝒽𝒽𝒽 𝒾𝓉𝓈 𝒲ℯ𝓁𝓁 𝒦ℯ𝓅𝓉 (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki… the frost, the encryption, the ache beneath the glyphs…This one...
  November 27th, 2025 10:38
• The Little Black Book (Paul Bell) My friend… the moment I saw that title, I heard that Manson lyric of his...
  November 27th, 2025 10:37
• Change (Friendship) My friend… you wrote Thanksgiving as transformation itself. The...
  November 27th, 2025 07:58
• ink on the Savannah (Arqios) arqios, this is such a vivid metaphor for creation itself…the teeth and...
  November 27th, 2025 07:56
• Taxation of Credulity (Rebellion_in_sanity) Rebellion… this hits hard. The bite, the satire, the way you peel every...
  November 27th, 2025 07:39
• I\'m \'orrible! (Orchidee) In the wee hours of the mornin\' Where the cock crows so loudly, A poet,...
  November 27th, 2025 07:33
• Within (Sorenbarrett) Soren… the way you braid breath, power, and ruin… it’s stunning. You...
  November 27th, 2025 07:30
• Why Is Nobody Angry? (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) I am all for socially responsible policies, and sometimes such policies...
  November 27th, 2025 07:23
• Living In Fear (Kurt Philip Behm) Truth! Truth! Truth! Amen! Hallelujah! I am not sure what else I can say!...
  November 27th, 2025 07:12
• Dirty Postcards (Kevin Hulme) Kevin… the humor, the pacing, the soft turn of heart at the end… you...
  November 27th, 2025 07:10
• The Shoes (Thomas W Case) I concur with Kevin! A poem with Sole! Wonderful job, my friend!...
  November 27th, 2025 07:08
• My Actions (NinjaGirl) 🥷, my friend… the innocence, the accident, the sudden grief… you...
  November 27th, 2025 07:07
• The Immeasurable Want {Lust} (Friendship) First comment! Yay!!! Friendship, this burns hot… the bigger meaning,...
  November 26th, 2025 11:30
• forever keep silent (Arqios) My friend, this reads like memory carved into stone… restrained, brutal,...
  November 26th, 2025 11:29
• Love Smoke (Paul Bell) Paul, you balance humor, heartbreak, and resignation in one clean sweep…...
  November 26th, 2025 11:28
• Ambiguous (2781) LOL! Loved this!
  November 26th, 2025 11:25
• The Living And The Lifeless (Orchidee) Great job Orchi! By the title, I thought you were differentiating between...
  November 26th, 2025 11:24
• The Fastest Man Alive (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Love, love, love The Flash...a fave from me, mate!
  November 26th, 2025 11:23
• America (Sorenbarrett) My friend, you blend prophecy, satire, and lament in a way only you...
  November 26th, 2025 11:22
• Fearing God (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) 😳 Whoa! Glad you did. There really are psychos out there...and I don\'t...
  November 26th, 2025 11:06
• Young love is silly (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽) Well done. Indeed, it feels less parents are, well, parenting nowadays. As...
  November 26th, 2025 08:11
• A Magnificent Day (Teddy.15) Dearest Teddy, you turned a cultural fracture into a clean, steady...
  November 25th, 2025 23:32
• Pass The Turkey You S.O.B. (Kurt Philip Behm) To think that the root word of politics is \"polite\". Does one 🤣 or...
  November 25th, 2025 23:31
• 𝔉𝔦𝔯𝔢 𝔱𝔬 𝔖𝔢𝔢 𝔗𝔥𝔞𝔱 𝔗𝔥𝔦𝔰 𝔦𝔰 𝔍𝔲𝔰𝔱 𝔐𝔶 𝔏𝔦𝔣𝔢 (Keyara S Trotman) Dearest Kiki, this moves like an opened window… soft, honest, a little...
  November 25th, 2025 23:29
• river’s ardent flame (Arqios) Rik, the way you let memory flicker through Argand flame… the way the...
  November 25th, 2025 23:20
• The Temporary And The Eternal (Orchidee) Great hymn poem too. Whew...snuck that in before ....do you hear that...
  November 25th, 2025 23:15
• The Temporary And The Eternal (Orchidee) Plenty is temporary...Ah-gah-gah-gah-glug-glug.... Sadly, that is not...
  November 25th, 2025 23:07
• There is no love (Sorenbarrett) My friend… the metaphors cut deep… the priest, the teacher, the poet,...
  November 25th, 2025 23:06
• True Civilisation (Rebellion_in_sanity) My friend… the way you move from celebration to the cold streets… from...
  November 25th, 2025 23:04
• Urania (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) My friend… this is warm, grounded, and full of spark. The way you frame...
  November 25th, 2025 23:03
• 𝒜𝒹𝓋𝒾𝓈ℯ 𝓂ℯ 𝒩ℴ𝓉 (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, you got me with this one… the softness, the switch-ups, the little...
  November 25th, 2025 15:43
• Get off the Bus (Thomas W Case) Excellent job, Thomas! And I ever do so concur with our good friends...
  November 25th, 2025 15:40
• Lucifer Resents Love (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) I mean...true story! LOL! Short, sweet, to the point. Well done, friend!
  November 24th, 2025 08:54
• Brenda (Paul Bell) Paul, this is pure unhinged brilliance…a whole sitcom squeezed into a...
  November 24th, 2025 08:53
• self-deprecation (Arqios) My friend, this one cracks like a whip…the grit, the bite, the full-on...
  November 24th, 2025 08:52
• Seek And Find (Orchidee) There was a sailor named P, He ate spinach till he was green. Cause he...
  November 24th, 2025 08:51
• Sleep (Sorenbarrett) My friend, this reminds me of those mornings where everything feels muted...
  November 24th, 2025 08:47
• LIMERICK 146  (Michael Edwards) Bwahahahaha! Yikes 😳🤣 Another great laugh had, my friend! Love your...
  November 24th, 2025 08:46
• funny little thing (NinjaGirl) 🥷, this one hits with a soft ache…the tug-of-war between affection...
  November 24th, 2025 08:45
• Creation (Bella Shepard) Ignorance is a cancer, no? Amen. Come, Lord Jesus. A straightforward,...
  November 23rd, 2025 16:17
• Am I what if (2781) My friend, there’s a tenderness in this…a heart reaching through doubt...
  November 23rd, 2025 16:15
• Wings In Song (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt…this pairing is luminous…voice becoming flight, wisdom becoming...
  November 23rd, 2025 16:13
• The Two Faces Of War (Paul Bell) Paul…this hits like shrapnel…the way you braid tenderness and horror...
  November 23rd, 2025 16:09
• tu me manques (what Fox says) (Arqios) Arqios…that line “not grammar but ache” is stunning…it says...
  November 23rd, 2025 16:08
• The wine cellar (Sorenbarrett) Soren…this hits like a door cracking open in the dark…I feel the...
  November 23rd, 2025 16:06
• ℑ 𝔇𝔬 𝔚𝔞𝔫𝔱 𝔗𝔦𝔪𝔢 𝔱𝔬 𝔊𝔬 𝔅𝔶 (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki…this feels like frozen time cracking open into sugar, shadow, and...
  November 23rd, 2025 16:05
• TAINTED EMOTION (David Welch) Well written, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛
  November 23rd, 2025 16:02
• Summer \'67 (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Wow! No marginal error (sorry, couldn\'t help the pun)...this is cute and...
  November 23rd, 2025 16:01
• Bats in the belfry (2781) Bats out of hell friggin\' yes!!! Excellent, my friend! A fave!...
  November 23rd, 2025 15:45
• The Money Rhymes (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Well, hello handsome! Can you give me INSURANCE...erm...ASSURANCE that I...
  November 23rd, 2025 15:37
• Letters from Heaven (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) And...God calls...still! Amen, dearest friend and sister in Christ. Amen....
  November 23rd, 2025 15:18
• Blood On The Toll Booth (Kurt Philip Behm) Excellent job, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛
  November 23rd, 2025 15:15
• That Damn Vagabond Wind (Thomas W Case) Excellent, Thomas! Well done, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛
  November 23rd, 2025 15:14
• senior formal (prom) (Arqios) arqios, this feels like nostalgia with a pulse… the shimmer, the ache,...
  November 22nd, 2025 08:32
• Walk (NafisaSB) My friend, the graveyard, the shadows, the aging body… then the gentler...
  November 22nd, 2025 08:30
• At end of day (Sorenbarrett) My friend, that line about being a sharecropper of death… that one...
  November 22nd, 2025 08:27
• 𝔄𝔭𝔭𝔯𝔢𝔠𝔦𝔞𝔱𝔢 𝔜𝔢𝔱 𝔑𝔢𝔳𝔢𝔯 𝔉𝔬𝔯𝔤𝔬𝔱𝔱𝔢𝔫 (Keyara S Trotman) My dearest Kiki, the ornate script and the raw confession make a striking...
  November 22nd, 2025 08:25
• Adieu (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this lands like a quiet letting go…heavy body, free spirit…and...
  November 21st, 2025 11:33
• Listened to Boone Self Meditation (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, this whole piece feels like someone trying to steady their own pulse...
  November 21st, 2025 11:31
• more than scribbles (Arqios) Rik, this lands with a calm sort of inevitability… the moment the line...
  November 21st, 2025 11:31
• Remember Reliance (Orchidee) Orchi, you shape this passage into something that feels sung… steady...
  November 21st, 2025 11:28
• A thousand (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this one feels gentle and reflective the whole way through… like...
  November 21st, 2025 11:24
• Nervosa (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Hayleigh, I know that thinning-out feeling… the slow wearing down...
  November 21st, 2025 11:23
• Forgive the Pug (Thomas W Case) Love the shameless plug! Good luck, Thomas! Rock on!...
  November 21st, 2025 11:18