Comments on community poems by Tristan Robert Lange

• The children of Eridan (Lorenz) Lorenz, what I enjoyed most is how naturally the cosmic imagery becomes a...
  July 13th, 2026 15:29
• No Longer Sacred (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this is one powerful collection, my friend. Every piece cuts...
  July 13th, 2026 15:28
• Wings That Drink the Sun (Matthew R. Callies) Matthew, what a vivid piece. This has the sweep and grandeur of an old...
  July 13th, 2026 08:50
• Training in the Art of Elven Assumptions (Mutley Ravishes) Mutley, you got me with this one. It has that wonderfully playful logic...
  July 13th, 2026 08:50
• platform lights (Arqios) Arqios, I love the restraint in this piece. The metaphor of the platform...
  July 13th, 2026 08:49
• platform lights (Arqios) Neville, I love the restraint in this piece. The metaphor of the platform...
  July 13th, 2026 08:49
• Help me post a poem please (Neville) Oh no, my friend. This sucks. Let me know how I can help, and I will if I...
  July 13th, 2026 08:48
• Values (Sorenbarrett) Soren, I love the way you compress big ideas into such economical...
  July 13th, 2026 08:46
• EYES TO SLEEP (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Norman, this really brought a sense of peace over me, my friend. It feels...
  July 13th, 2026 08:44
• Super-Natural and Para-Normal (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Shaun, this is unapologetic from the first line to the last. I especially...
  July 13th, 2026 08:43
• Of Dreams and Facts, and Romance (Cheeky Missy) My friend, I smiled more than once reading these. Life really is like this...
  July 13th, 2026 08:42
• Happy 5th Anniversary (Marissa) Marissa, this really moved me. What begins as what sounds like a farewell...
  July 13th, 2026 08:40
• SUNSET (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) Carlos, this is one heavy piece, my friend. It doesn\'t romanticize escape...
  July 13th, 2026 08:39
• The conduit (2781) Valiantstar, this has such a peaceful cadence. I especially enjoyed how...
  July 13th, 2026 08:38
• Benediction\'s Song (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this really grabbed me, my friend. There’s a prophetic current...
  July 13th, 2026 08:38
• Dump Protocol (Paul Bell) Paul, what a hilarious piece. 😂 \"It\'s dump protocol\" was the moment...
  July 12th, 2026 07:40
• shoal about the tunaverse (Arqios) Arqios, this really moved me. I especially loved \"to follow the fish...
  July 12th, 2026 07:39
• Leave me alone; (ꜱʏʟᴠᴀ) Sylva, this really touched me. \"Listen to me, just don\'t tell me not to...
  July 12th, 2026 07:38
• THE FADED BEAUTY ( TO M ) (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Norman, this is a thoughtful piece. I especially appreciated the way it...
  July 12th, 2026 07:38
• \'orrible! (Orchidee) Orchi, you had me laughing from the first stanza. 😂 Poor KP...though I...
  July 12th, 2026 07:37
• Your Best Friend Jippy (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Shaun, this was a fun read. I smiled as soon as Jippy\'s name came up, and...
  July 12th, 2026 07:34
• What Really Matters. (Goldfinch60) Andy, this is a thoughtful piece. I especially appreciated the reminder...
  July 12th, 2026 07:33
• Ambiguity (Sorenbarrett) My friend, I love wordplay that makes me stop and reconsider words I\'ve...
  July 12th, 2026 07:33
• Desert Flight (Matthew R. Callies) Matthew, what a strong piece. \"The desert hums with every measured...
  July 12th, 2026 07:32
• Pick me (GoddessEYES) My friend, this carries a lot of intensity. The thought that we eventually...
  July 12th, 2026 07:31
• And One More Thing: (Doggerel Dave) Dave, this gave me a good chuckle, my friend. 😂 \"Life is a terminal...
  July 12th, 2026 07:30
• Virginia Green (Kevin Hulme) Kevin, what a fun poem. The vivid admiration pulls you right in, then Dave...
  July 12th, 2026 07:29
• Unblessed (Fränz Müller) Fränz, what a thoughtful poem. \"Every night and every morn / we get to...
  July 12th, 2026 07:29
• Mental prison (Lorenz) Lorenz, what a powerful piece. \"How to say \'Je t\'aime\' to an empty...
  July 12th, 2026 07:28
• Saturday Sound Bites: 7-11-2026 (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this really moved me. The entire sequence carries a quiet...
  July 12th, 2026 07:17
• A Tube of Light Becoming (Matthew R. Callies) Matthew, this brought me right back to childhood. You captured that little...
  July 12th, 2026 07:16
• Blue Bird of Paradise (Mutley Ravishes) That break in \"ear- / -ly\" caught my eye right away. It\'s a clever...
  July 11th, 2026 08:08
• My Rifle (Paul Bell) Paul, this is a compelling piece. The stark reality of the battlefield...
  July 11th, 2026 08:07
• Loveable; (ꜱʏʟᴠᴀ) Sylva, this really hit me hard...the repetition builds such a deep sense...
  July 11th, 2026 08:06
• turncoat (Arqios) Rik, this is concise but carries real weight. The progression from...
  July 11th, 2026 08:06
• sometimes I hate the fakeness (Demar Desu) Demar, this one lands with a quiet sting...there\'s frustration here, but...
  July 11th, 2026 08:05
• Brush painted (Sorenbarrett) My friend, I love the reminder that some of the most beautiful things...
  July 11th, 2026 08:03
• Smell \'em (Boot) What stayed with me most was the progression through \"Conception......
  July 11th, 2026 08:02
• A POET DIED (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Norman, this is beautifully poignant. The imagery of fading wings,...
  July 11th, 2026 08:01
• Lord Jamar Entertains Me (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Shaun, this is an engaging piece. It captures the fascination of hearing...
  July 11th, 2026 08:00
• Lick my balls (Never be) well, well if i must.. i don’t lick but i’ll bust those...
  July 11th, 2026 07:56
• Fups (2781) Valiantstar, this carries both humility and resolve. It acknowledges our...
  July 11th, 2026 07:45
• Empowered ladies (NafisaSB) Safina, this is such an uplifting tribute...it celebrates strength without...
  July 11th, 2026 07:44
• Homework ✍🏿 (GoddessEYES) My friend, this is filled with genuine affection and hope. Building the...
  July 11th, 2026 07:43
• An Understanding Heart (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) Sharon, I always appreciate the heart you bring to your writing. This is a...
  July 11th, 2026 07:43
• Passages Inflamed (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, I really enjoyed both of these...one wrestles with the misuse of...
  July 11th, 2026 07:42
• I know (2781) Valiantstar, this spoke to me. The movement from praise, to questioning,...
  July 11th, 2026 07:41
• Got love? (Demar Desu) Demar, I like how much you leave unsaid here...it\'s brief, but it...
  July 11th, 2026 07:40
• On self-love (Teddy.15) Teddy, this is beautifully simple...and sometimes that\'s exactly what...
  July 11th, 2026 07:37
• THE MAP (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Norman, what a beautifully atmospheric piece. The moon, the miles, the...
  July 11th, 2026 07:35
• enough (Arqios) My friend, I love the simplicity of this. It starts with something almost...
  July 11th, 2026 07:33
• Out of sight (Sorenbarrett) Soren, what a touching piece. The passage of twenty-five years makes the...
  July 11th, 2026 07:32
• AGUAS ENSOÑADAS (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) Carlos, I loved this. The gentle repetition of the water imagery gives the...
  July 11th, 2026 07:31
• It\'s A New Day (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Shaun, this has a real conversational energy to it...like you\'re just...
  July 11th, 2026 07:30
• Calmicidal (Fränz Müller) Fränz, you got me with this one. That wonderfully restrained opening...
  July 9th, 2026 22:58
• Down the Mudrain (Mutley Ravishes) Mutley, haha...this gave me a good laugh. It\'s delightfully absurd, and...
  July 9th, 2026 22:57
• Contrast (Syd) Syd, this really struck me. I love how the entire piece embraces tension...
  July 9th, 2026 22:57
• sanity mask (Lorenz) Lorenz, this is one intense piece. It feels like stepping into a fractured...
  July 9th, 2026 22:56
• Bidding Them Access (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, what a powerful metaphor. From flattening the house to leaving...
  July 9th, 2026 22:55
• The Taste of Tea (Demar Desu) Demar, this reminds me how often creation teaches us lessons we overlook....
  July 9th, 2026 22:55
• Backhold on the Fell (Matthew R. Callies) Matthew, this is one heck of a poem. I really enjoyed the respect it shows...
  July 9th, 2026 22:54
• Released (Paul Bell) Paul, this left me sitting in silence for a while. It reminds me how the...
  July 9th, 2026 22:53
• bloom (Arqios) Rik, this really hit me. There\'s so much hope packed into so few...
  July 9th, 2026 22:53
• One and the same (Sorenbarrett) Soren, what a thoughtful piece. I especially loved the metaphors...
  July 9th, 2026 22:52
• TO A MOMENT (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Norman, what a haunting piece. That opening image of the broken anchor...
  July 9th, 2026 22:51
• World Weary (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Shaun, that image of people lifting their eyes instead of keeping them...
  July 9th, 2026 21:47
• Discovering (Orchidee) Orchi, I\'ve just received word from Popeyeus Glug Maximus Solus that your...
  July 9th, 2026 21:43
• Who\'s who? (2781) Valiantstar, what a heartfelt expression of faith. The thread of Hebrews...
  July 9th, 2026 21:35
• HISTORIAS CORRIENTES (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) Carlos, it was the image of love never reaching your mailbox that caught...
  July 9th, 2026 21:34
• Tribulations (Fränz Müller) Fränz, what a powerful piece. The conflict here feels deeply human, and...
  July 9th, 2026 21:33
• Materialistic 🤣 (Ms.divine) GoddessEYES, this has some real fire to it. There\'s a strong sense of...
  July 9th, 2026 08:53
• I Shall Love Me (Teddy.15) Teddy, this really touched me. There\'s something deeply freeing about...
  July 8th, 2026 21:04
• ✍🏿 anxiety high (GoddessEYES) GoddessEYES, this feels honest and unfiltered. I like how you center the...
  July 8th, 2026 21:04
• My birthday (Allie561) Allie, this gave me a smile. It\'s short, lighthearted, and so easy to...
  July 8th, 2026 21:03
• Nowhere island (Lorenz) Lorenz what a fascinating piece. I love how you lean fully into the...
  July 8th, 2026 21:03
• Lunar Respite (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this really drew me in. There\'s something beautifully wistful about...
  July 8th, 2026 21:02
• by their fruit (Arqios) My friend, what a powerful piece. I love how restrained it is...you let...
  July 8th, 2026 21:00
• by their fruit (Arqios) My friend, what a powerful piece. I love how restrained it is...you let...
  July 8th, 2026 21:00
• Bolts in the Wall (Matthew R. Callies) Matthew, what a strong piece. I love how the climb never feels like it\'s...
  July 8th, 2026 20:59
• Thunderstorm (Cellinic) w, cellinic, this is a gut-punch in the best way. There’s such a mythic...
  July 8th, 2026 19:34
• THE SHADING TREE (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) This is one of those pieces that earns its ending, my friend. The poet’s...
  July 8th, 2026 19:26
• Red Alert (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Shaun, this carries real fire. There’s a fierce protectiveness running...
  July 8th, 2026 19:25
• His father\'s chair (Sorenbarrett) Soren, I’ve stood in that exact spot before…not literally, but that...
  July 8th, 2026 19:24
• my favorite quote from a book (Demar Desu) Taken as a whole, this is a beautiful piece, my friend. It’s reverent,...
  July 8th, 2026 19:22
• COME (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) Wow, Carlos, this really moved me. There’s such an intense, unguarded...
  July 8th, 2026 19:18
• Buried Bones (Fränz Müller) Fränz, I’ve felt that same delayed ache…not seeing the knife until...
  July 8th, 2026 19:17
• Inviolable (Kurt Philip Behm) This is one heck of a poem, Kurt. Spare, rhythmic, and relentless in its...
  July 8th, 2026 19:14
• Proud Of Our Poverty (Syd) Syd, this stirred up so much for me…the shared bath times, the...
  July 8th, 2026 19:12
• Karmic resurfaced 🤡 (GoddessEYES) Wow, GoddessEYES, this is bold and unapologetic. There’s a real...
  July 8th, 2026 19:11
• Modular homes (2781) Wow, my friend, this is one heck of a poem. It’s righteous anger wrapped...
  July 8th, 2026 19:09
• Porch Cat Gospel (Thomas W Case) Wow, Thomas…this one made me laugh out loud while also landing an oddly...
  July 7th, 2026 23:09
• the ashen crossing (Arqios) This was powerful, Rik…from the sacred fire that becomes destruction to...
  July 7th, 2026 23:07
• SUNSET (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Wow, this hit me hard, Norman…I’ve had that same feeling watching a...
  July 7th, 2026 23:04
• Man (Sorenbarrett) This was fantastic, Soren…the whole poem builds this relentless list of...
  July 7th, 2026 23:00
• Gone (Boot) This was fantastic, James…the image of ounces measuring a loss too...
  July 7th, 2026 22:59
• Vertical Marathon (Matthew R. Callies) This was fantastic, Matthew…the relentless physical build of this poem,...
  July 7th, 2026 22:57
• Prior being (Boot) This is one heck of a poem, my friend…the sense of a former self still...
  July 7th, 2026 22:29
• Clouds (Fränz Müller) Fränz, the image of extending friendship to the stranger you’ve become...
  July 7th, 2026 22:21
• Last Place (ThatsSoRavenn) Raven, this hit me hard…the exhaustion of asking and not being met is so...
  July 7th, 2026 22:18
• FLOWERS IN MY DESERT (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) Carlos, this is beautifully done. A whole life\'s worth of growing into...
  July 6th, 2026 16:50