Comments on community poems by Tristan Robert Lange

• When The Heart Witnessed Love\'s Shadows (Salvia.S) Dearest Salvia, my friend, this is tender and heartbreaking…the...
  December 10th, 2025 09:49
• Poignant Procession - OT/NT Series 11 (Orchidee) This is a poignant hymn-poem Orchi!...Unfortunately, a certain clumb P and...
  December 10th, 2025 09:48
• Aisle twenty four (Sorenbarrett) My friend, this is hilarious…the piling wordplay, the frantic searching,...
  December 10th, 2025 09:45
• LIMERICK 147 (Michael Edwards) Another brilliant limerick, my friend! Thank you for sharing and for the...
  December 10th, 2025 09:43
• Sylvia Plath (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Donnie Darko is a classic! Love that film! As for being sick...oh no!...
  December 10th, 2025 09:42
• ℋℴ𝓌ℯ𝓋ℯ𝓇 𝒳𝒳𝒳 (Keyara S Trotman) My dearest friend, this piece glows…the softness, the finding of beauty,...
  December 10th, 2025 09:39
• In Winter\'s Depths, I Found Summer (Thomas W Case) Thomas, this one hits deep…the way you move from frostbitten nights to...
  December 10th, 2025 09:38
• Lost In The Moment (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) The last one really speaks to me. Too true! Well done on both of these,...
  December 10th, 2025 09:37
• True Tenderness, (Friendship) Friendship, this whole piece breathes in that soft, unrushed way…the...
  December 9th, 2025 11:30
• a leafy bloom’s pledge (Arqios) Arqios, this unfolds with such gentle gravity…a vow carried in breath...
  December 9th, 2025 11:26
• Mouth And Heart? - OT/NT Series 10 (Orchidee) Excellent hymn-poem, Orchi! Loving this series! And...Mr. P is P\'d...
  December 9th, 2025 10:38
• Life\'s schooling (Sorenbarrett) Indeed! Brilliantly short, witty, and well...yeah...it lands with a punch!...
  December 9th, 2025 10:28
• I Did.....! (Doggerel Dave) Dave, witty as always…you take a classic anthem of self-will and tilt it...
  December 8th, 2025 21:16
• Seductions of Identification (Mutley Ravishes) My friend, this reads like a quiet revelation. The seed becomes a...
  December 8th, 2025 21:14
• Copper Taste (NinjaGirl) 🥷, this hits like a pulse in the dark…quiet but relentless. The...
  December 8th, 2025 21:12
• Title: Enough. (Keyara S Trotman) Dearest Kiki, the warmth of your opening lines and the imagery that...
  December 8th, 2025 21:11
• First day on the Job (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) GenXer, the pacing, the quiet transformation, the way Uriah works through...
  December 8th, 2025 21:08
• Revelation (2781) Money rules everything, doesn\'t it? The ending also reminds of Jesus...
  December 8th, 2025 21:06
• Mistaken Steps (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this hits with real intensity…the way you move from pursuit to...
  December 8th, 2025 20:57
• The Falling Snow (Paul Bell) Paul…I know that feeling of seeing things clearly only at the end. Your...
  December 8th, 2025 20:55
• Mama\'s nasal hair, (Friendship) My friend, the blend of playfulness and reverence hits just right…it...
  December 8th, 2025 20:52
• as absence returns (Arqios) My friend, the shifting light, the drifting anchor, the rise of a wordless...
  December 8th, 2025 20:49
• The Bus Ride (Katie B.) Wonderful, heartbreaking...but truly wonderful poem, Katie....
  December 8th, 2025 20:21
• See, Hear, Perceive - OT/NT Series 9 (Orchidee) Great hymn-poem Orchi! Love it! 😍
  December 8th, 2025 20:19
• See, Hear, Perceive - OT/NT Series 9 (Orchidee) See, Hear, Perceive...glug.
  December 8th, 2025 20:18
• Who\'s the fool (Sorenbarrett) Soren, that image of “a dented can, only half a man” really catches...
  December 8th, 2025 20:17
• For Peter (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Powerful! Very intimate, haunting. Wonderful poem, my friend!...
  December 8th, 2025 13:09
• Double-Edged (Mutley Ravishes) I mean. 💯 wow, man! Flawless all around. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛
  December 8th, 2025 13:07
• Bad Person (NinjaGirl) You are a beautiful soul, my friend! This poem? Beautiful expression of...
  December 8th, 2025 13:06
• 𝒯𝒽ℴ𝓊𝓈𝒶𝓃𝒹 Ways (Keyara S Trotman) Amen! Agreed! Love this insightful piece, dearest Kiki!...
  December 8th, 2025 13:04
• A glitch (2781) Wonderfully fun read, my friend. And true! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛
  December 8th, 2025 13:02
• When The Night is Still (Katie B.) Katie, this feels so peaceful… the way you let night become a refuge is...
  December 7th, 2025 09:21
• still waters stirred (Arqios) My friend, this hits with real force… that moment where the body falters...
  December 7th, 2025 09:20
• What Happened? (Part.2) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Good question in the opening line. Fun fact, we all know what happened...
  December 7th, 2025 09:13
• Passing shades (Sorenbarrett) Very powerful metaphor that really needs no explaining. Truth, powerful...
  December 7th, 2025 09:08
• No Flowers - Revisited (Orchidee) Great hymn-poem, Orchi! I was almost afraid to read, given the title. I...
  December 7th, 2025 08:47
• Utopia (NafisaSB) Safina, you shape a full arc from longing to invitation. Each couplet...
  December 7th, 2025 08:46
• Ode to 3 Voices (Thomas W Case) Love the Chris Cornell reference, too! Forgot to mention that! LOL!
  December 7th, 2025 08:44
• Ode to 3 Voices (Thomas W Case) I agree with Melvin...brilliant, mate! Great write!...
  December 7th, 2025 08:43
• Ass liquor both ways. (Friendship) Friendship, this is fierce, lyrical, and painfully honest. First, I love...
  December 7th, 2025 08:16
• Resighted (Kurt Philip Behm) Lovely poem with a great flow, my friend! Great job!...
  December 6th, 2025 13:16
• My Shadow Follows You (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Oof. I absolutely love this, Hayleigh! Gothic as hell! Totally relate!...
  December 6th, 2025 11:50
• Making the Cut? (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) GenXer, the pacing, the intrigue, the quiet emotional beats…all of it...
  December 6th, 2025 11:03
• Mindful (2781) Valiantstar, this piece moves like someone thinking out loud… layered,...
  December 6th, 2025 11:01
• ℳℯ𝒶𝓈𝓊𝓇ℯ (Keyara S Trotman) Dearest Kiki…there’s a quiet courage running through this piece. You...
  December 6th, 2025 11:00
• no flowers (Arqios) My friend, the poem moves with a quiet ache…personal mourning layered...
  December 6th, 2025 10:59
• Christ for Jews and Gentiles - OT/NT Series 8 (Orchidee) Well good for the Jews and the Gentiles, but a certain P (we knows who he...
  December 6th, 2025 10:58
• Sex has a leak (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this cracked me up…the whole comparison is wild and somehow makes...
  December 6th, 2025 10:56
• Christmas. (Friendship) Friendship, this whole piece carries the hush and glow of winter… the...
  December 6th, 2025 10:55
• Cobalt (Katie B.) Nothing like having coffee out of a special mug. Well done, my friend!...
  December 6th, 2025 10:51
• Critics (Kurt Philip Behm) Truth! Well done, my friend!
  December 5th, 2025 11:09
• Recognize. (Friendship) Friendship, the whole poem carries this gentle grief…the way memory and...
  December 5th, 2025 11:09
• When Sorrow Comes to Call (Katie B.) Katie, this one hit me hard…the way sorrow becomes a visitor in that...
  December 5th, 2025 11:08
• cerulean chasm (Arqios) Arqios, you move so smoothly from dismissal to revelation…from seeing...
  December 5th, 2025 11:07
• 𝒢ℯ𝓉 ℴ𝓃 ℐ𝓉 (𝒯ℴ𝓌ℯ𝓇ℯ𝒹 ℱ𝓁ℴ𝓌ℯ𝓇𝒾𝓃ℊ ℱ𝓁ℴ𝓌ℯ𝓇𝓈) (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, that moment where the words “start writing” shift into this...
  December 5th, 2025 11:04
• Days Of Division - OT/NT Series 7 (Orchidee) Good write, Orchi! Powerful representation of the Scripture. I do love...
  December 5th, 2025 11:00
• An Open Letter To Jay-Z (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) I wish these creeps would just leave poor Baphomet alone. It\'s bad enough...
  December 5th, 2025 10:56
• Silent Tears (Teardrop) Teardrop…I am not sure how I missed this when you posted it, but the...
  December 5th, 2025 10:46
• It\'s all smoke (Sorenbarrett) My friend…the pipe becomes a portrait here…embers, fog, scent, all...
  December 5th, 2025 10:45
• Ocean Breeze and Theme (Thomas W Case) The ocean is in my blood, too, living here on the Atlantic side of things....
  December 4th, 2025 18:30
• running into the mirror (Arqios) Rik, the chase, the mirror, the night… you weave them into a truth...
  December 4th, 2025 18:28
• Nature (Katie B.) Agree with Soren, this can be taken both literally or metaphorically. This...
  December 4th, 2025 18:22
• Jack (Paul Bell) Paul, I’m struck by how you hold grief, grit, and wit in the same space....
  December 4th, 2025 18:19
• Hope Of Healing - OT/NT Series 6 (Orchidee) Jesus gave everyone...well almost everyone...the hope of healing. Who\'d...
  December 4th, 2025 17:23
• Random Rhyming (Part.6) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Love Tron...but would not want to be stuck in its world! LOL! Well done on...
  December 4th, 2025 17:19
• Sandy claws (Sorenbarrett) How did I miss this earlier? And, my dear friend, the title alone should...
  December 4th, 2025 17:17
• An Ode to Our True Ancestors (Overlords of All Creation) (Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard) My friend, this whole epic breathes. The science, the spirituality, the...
  December 4th, 2025 11:02
• Searchers Take Flight (Kurt Philip Behm) Yes, yes, yes! Simple and true! Ever new beginning is some other...
  December 4th, 2025 10:52
• ℛℯ𝒻𝓁ℯ𝒸𝓉 (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki… your words rise like a simple offering…steady and heartfelt....
  December 4th, 2025 10:50
• Eye Contact (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Who is that guy staring at me. No, I\'m not seeing things I tell you!...
  December 3rd, 2025 18:47
• A Multitude Of Notions (ElizabethMoroz) Elizabeth, this piece is an intellectual cyclone…philosophy, science,...
  December 3rd, 2025 18:45
• Tribute To Alex Honnold (Kurt Philip Behm) Been to El Capitan...and ain\'t it the truth! Wonderful poem, my friend!...
  December 3rd, 2025 18:43
• You\'re just not worth it. (Friendship) My friend, the strength here is quiet but undeniable…the reclaiming of...
  December 3rd, 2025 18:42
• Miss Strang (Paul Bell) Paul, this is comedy carnage…the glass eye, the vicar disguise, the...
  December 3rd, 2025 18:41
• call it survival (Arqios) My friend, this piece is soft but piercing…the “small sun” on the...
  December 3rd, 2025 18:39
• Thanksgiving (Teddy.15) Indeed. Everyday should be! Another fine selection from your Raven...
  December 3rd, 2025 18:08
• Imprisoned (Sorenbarrett) Soren…the loneliness in this piece is palpable. That move from nature as...
  December 3rd, 2025 18:06
• Dawning Day - OT/NT Series 5 (Orchidee) Whew! I almost forgot where I am. I swear I must have blacked out for a...
  December 3rd, 2025 17:56
• Dawning Day - OT/NT Series 5 (Orchidee) Dawning day 337\'s light as dusked and is now well...dark. That\'s how it...
  December 3rd, 2025 17:52
• 𝔉𝔬𝔯 𝔗𝔥𝔦𝔰 ℑ 𝔖𝔥𝔞𝔩𝔩 ℌ𝔞𝔳𝔢 (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, this carries fire, longing, and strength all at once… you bring...
  December 3rd, 2025 17:50
• Dark Trophy (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this hits with real weight…the predator becoming his own final...
  December 2nd, 2025 10:51
• The First Time (Thomas W Case) My friend, this is raw and beautifully unfiltered…the neon wandering,...
  December 2nd, 2025 10:50
• 𝒜𝒻𝓉ℯ𝓇 𝒪𝓃𝒸ℯ 𝓂ℴ𝓇ℯ ℰ𝓋ℯ𝓇 𝒮𝒾𝓃𝒸ℯ 𝒪𝓃𝒸ℯ 𝒯𝒽ℯ𝓃 (Keyara S Trotman) Dearest Kiki, my friend, this is vibrant and full of heart…the angel...
  December 2nd, 2025 10:48
• Ignorance! (Friendship) My friend, this is beautifully crafted…the velvet dark, the planned...
  December 2nd, 2025 10:47
• benign maleficense (Arqios) arqios, I’ve felt this kind of institutional sleight of hand…the...
  December 2nd, 2025 10:46
• Hurt (Katie B.) I know the pain of depression all too well. Excellent write, Katie! Thank...
  December 2nd, 2025 10:44
• Santas Dilemma (Paul Bell) Paul, this one had me laughing…the sheer chaos of this “letter” and...
  December 2nd, 2025 10:43
• Cold truth (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this hits with a cold ache…the night bird’s loneliness really...
  December 2nd, 2025 10:42
• Our Fates (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) This reads and rhymes like rap, my friend., Absolutely love the flow of...
  December 2nd, 2025 10:40
• Voluminous Voice - OT/NT Series 4 (Orchidee) Well, we know one who has a voluminous laugh...Ah-gah-gah-gah-glug-glug!...
  December 2nd, 2025 10:38
• Magikali (Mutley Ravishes) #Truth! LOL! Well done, my friend. A fave from me!...
  December 2nd, 2025 10:35
• Faulted Lines (Kurt Philip Behm) As a poet among other things, I deeply, profoundly get this. Powerful...
  December 1st, 2025 18:14
• 𝒯𝒾𝓉𝓁ℯ 𝒜𝒻𝓉ℯ𝓇 𝒲𝓇𝒾𝓉𝓉ℯ𝓃 (Keyara S Trotman) My friend, this is vibrant…the symbols, the soft confessions, the little...
  December 1st, 2025 18:12
• Quieting stress (Friendship) My friend, this is soothing in the deepest way…the frantic hum settling...
  December 1st, 2025 18:10
• A (Katie B.) A wonderful love poem, Katie! Well written and a fave....
  December 1st, 2025 18:08
• outstaring a blank wall (Arqios) arqios, this hits with quiet honesty…the dread of the blank wall turning...
  December 1st, 2025 18:07
• Mysteries of the mato (Sorenbarrett) My friend, this is rich…the forest as mother, spirit, keeper of old...
  December 1st, 2025 18:06
• Sparrow that flies /Gorrión que vuela (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) Very well done, my friend! Joy is endless for those who have it, despite...
  December 1st, 2025 18:04
• Horror Of Herod - OT/NT Series 3 (Orchidee) Love this, my friend! All jokes aside, keep the lights off, it suits...
  December 1st, 2025 18:00
• Horror Of Herod - OT/NT Series 3 (Orchidee) Hey Orchi! Turn the lights on! It\'s kinda dark in here, with...💡 😱...
  December 1st, 2025 17:58