Comments on community poems by Tristan Robert Lange

• The Magic of Santa, Seen Through My Father\'s Eyes (Friendship) Friendship, this poem honors fatherhood as an inheritance of wonder. You...
  December 24th, 2025 11:17
• And there was light (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this is a thoughtful meditation on origins, belief, and the human...
  December 24th, 2025 11:14
• Benedictus Blessing (Orchidee) Orchi, this is beautiful…steady, faithful, and musically grounded in a...
  December 24th, 2025 11:13
• The Winter King, Sinterklaus (Mutley Ravishes) My friend, this blends myth, philosophy, and seasonal ritual without...
  December 24th, 2025 11:09
• Threads of day and night (Isa kemmy) Isa, this is tender and observant. There’s a quiet patience running...
  December 24th, 2025 11:07
• My Horse Lying Dead (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this is haunting and reflective. You let history, dream, and...
  December 24th, 2025 11:06
• The Running Man (2025) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Shaun, this comes across as relaxed, playful, and self-aware. You...
  December 24th, 2025 11:02
• Interflation (2781) ValiantStar, this is a thoughtful blend of social awareness and spiritual...
  December 23rd, 2025 09:51
• broad-back city (Arqios) arqios, this feels solid and earned. There’s weight in it, but not...
  December 23rd, 2025 09:50
• A gift for my best friend. (Friendship) Friendship, this poem feels like memory wrapped in ritual. The affection,...
  December 23rd, 2025 09:49
• The Son, the Saviour (Orchidee) Great hymn-poem, Orchi! The Son, the Savior, the... glug. Dang it...
  December 23rd, 2025 09:43
• Merry Trumpmess (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this piece cuts because it refuses subtlety. The rhymes move fast,...
  December 23rd, 2025 09:41
• Jedi Twins (Mutley Ravishes) My friend, this is clever and grounded at the same time. The humor lands...
  December 23rd, 2025 09:38
• Freeing The Words (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this carries a calm authority. It feels reflective without drifting...
  December 22nd, 2025 15:30
• Hannah (Paul Bell) My friend, this taps straight into that fragile space between hope and...
  December 22nd, 2025 15:29
• winterspeak (Arqios) arqios, this is understated and wise. It trusts silence, trusts time, and...
  December 22nd, 2025 15:27
• My nature home (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this is gentle, immersive, and deeply restorative. Nature isn’t...
  December 22nd, 2025 15:18
• Black Hearted Narcissists (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Pic reminds me of a young Maleficent! This, Shaun, is is sharp and...
  December 22nd, 2025 15:14
• Magnificat Munificence (Orchidee) Wonderful hymn-poem, my friend! Mary, Mary, quite contrary...but why Mary,...
  December 22nd, 2025 15:09
• Looking Ahead (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this resonates with how reflection can feel binding while...
  December 21st, 2025 12:55
• Watching is Safer (Thomas W Case) Thomas, the phrase “neon jazz” stands out. It captures the city’s...
  December 21st, 2025 12:53
• Deep love (2781) Valiantstar, this reads as a meditation on discernment. Faith,...
  December 21st, 2025 12:52
• Tucker Comes Through (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) GenXer, this chapter feels warm and steady. Grief, friendship, and quiet...
  December 21st, 2025 12:51
• hills to climb (Arqios) Arqios, this reads as a meditation on persistence without spectacle....
  December 21st, 2025 12:50
• \"He Was My Love\" (Friendship) Friendship, this is tender and deeply felt. The love here doesn’t fade...
  December 21st, 2025 12:49
• Born Anew (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Shaun, this reads like a confession in motion. Anger, doubt, resolve, and...
  December 21st, 2025 12:40
• A DOG FOR CHRISTMAS (Michael Edwards) Got a good laugh out of this, my friend. Well done!...
  December 21st, 2025 11:30
• Human beans (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this is sharply observant. There’s a steady accumulation here...
  December 21st, 2025 11:29
• Christmas (NafisaSB) Safina, this lands with quiet force. The contrast between comfort and...
  December 21st, 2025 11:27
• Canid Pro Forma (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Excellent writes, Kurt! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛
  December 21st, 2025 11:25
• 𝒪𝓃ℯ 𝒯ℴ 𝒪𝓃ℯ 𝒯𝓌ℴ (Keyara S Trotman) Dearest Kiki, this reads like a private dedication wrapped in atmosphere....
  December 21st, 2025 11:24
• 𝒪𝓃ℯ 𝒯ℴ 𝒪𝓃ℯ 𝒯𝓌ℴ (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, this reminds me how some poems aren’t meant for a room but for a...
  December 20th, 2025 09:27
• As an Artist. (Friendship) Friendship, this reads as both an artist’s credo and a love letter to...
  December 20th, 2025 09:26
• A Tokugawa Retainer Reflects (Mutley Ravishes) Mutley, this reads as a meditation on transmission across time and...
  December 20th, 2025 09:23
• a poem that builds itself (Arqios) arqios, this reads as a metaphor for creation itself. Thought becomes...
  December 20th, 2025 09:21
• God, Please (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) God please, indeed. Well written and relatable, my friend!...
  December 20th, 2025 09:20
• Annunciation Awakening (Orchidee) Can you annunciate this word? S-P-I-N-A-C-H 🤮 Ah-gah-gah-gah-glug-glug....
  December 20th, 2025 09:19
• Myopic science (Sorenbarrett) Truth. This reminds me of a poem I wrote earlier this year, \"And They...
  December 20th, 2025 09:14
• Orspasm (Mutley Ravishes) Mutley, this reads as a critique of consumption masquerading as vitality....
  December 20th, 2025 09:11
• ℒ𝒶𝓈𝓉 ℒ𝒶𝓈𝓉𝓁𝓎 (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, this feels instinctive and unapologetic. It moves by feeling rather...
  December 20th, 2025 09:10
• Rinse & Repeat (Kurt Philip Behm) Wonderful, Kurt! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛
  December 19th, 2025 09:46
• Oh, pistachio shells, (Friendship) Friendship, this reads as both art-statement and quiet philosophy. The...
  December 19th, 2025 09:45
• travel companions (Arqios) Wow! Profoundly simple, and profoundly memorable. Will do! 🙂 Thanks for...
  December 19th, 2025 09:42
• Judas Judged - OT/NT Series 17 (Orchidee) Now for Chapter Glug of my comment book on your page! 🤣
  December 19th, 2025 09:38
• Judas Judged - OT/NT Series 17 (Orchidee) I know how the authors of the New Testament wrote of him, and...
  December 19th, 2025 09:25
• The brand you buy (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this reads as a critique of class performance itself. Objects,...
  December 19th, 2025 09:17
• Born Like This (Thomas W Case) Excellent write, Thomas! Well done, my friend!...
  December 15th, 2025 10:00
• there is a room (Arqios) My dear friend, this reads as a metaphor for the creative mind itself. The...
  December 15th, 2025 08:36
• Land of Opportunity (Doggerel Dave) Message delivers strong as ever my friend. Sounds like the USA…except...
  December 15th, 2025 08:35
• Sing of Salvation (Orchidee) Orchi, this hymn carries real weight. It’s confident, grounded, and...
  December 15th, 2025 08:31
• Wood table (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this lands as a meditation on what we take and what remains. The...
  December 15th, 2025 08:25
• Getting Along Well (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) GenXer, this chapter balances story and reflection well. The practical...
  December 15th, 2025 08:23
• ℜ𝔢𝔫𝔡𝔢𝔯𝔢𝔡 (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, this is playful, devoted, and emotionally generous all at once. The...
  December 15th, 2025 08:21
• Report (2781) Valiantstar, this is intense and disorienting in a way that feels...
  December 14th, 2025 09:16
• Hanukkah to Me of the stories l was told (Friendship) My friend, this is deeply moving…the family memory, the stubborn flame,...
  December 14th, 2025 09:14
• winter palette (Arqios) My friend, this is beautifully observed…the soft blues, the silver...
  December 14th, 2025 09:12
• 2 shots (Isa kemmy) My friend, this is devastating in its clarity…the drinks, the labels,...
  December 14th, 2025 09:11
• Noisy Neighbours (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) LOL! Fight fire with fire! Great Metallica song! Not sure it\'s wise...
  December 14th, 2025 09:09
• Birds (Sorenbarrett) My friend, this is a striking metaphor…the birds already inhabiting the...
  December 14th, 2025 09:07
• The Greatest Commandments - OT/NT Series 15 (Orchidee) Well done, Orchi Excellent this one be! Who glugs in a pineapple under the...
  December 14th, 2025 08:59
• unpanned memories (Isa kemmy) A wonderful write, Isa! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛
  December 14th, 2025 08:57
• Of Men, Mice, Liver, and Love (Thomas W Case) An excellent poem, my friend. Loved the title too!...
  December 13th, 2025 20:36
• Hope امید (Soheil khodaparasti) Beautiful poem on hope, my friend! A fave! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛
  December 13th, 2025 16:37
• Good And Evil (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) George Washington was a freemason too. I\'m wondering, do freemasons do...
  December 13th, 2025 13:17
• lantana in the clearing (Arqios) arqios, this is quietly devastating…the way beauty turns invasive...
  December 13th, 2025 13:01
• The Twelve days Of Christmas (Paul Bell) Paul, this is unhinged in the best way…the escalation is relentless and...
  December 13th, 2025 12:58
• Dream of the rich, nightmare of the poor (Sorenbarrett) Soren, that turn where people become “only mouths to feed” really...
  December 13th, 2025 12:56
• Special Stone - OT/NT Series 14 (Orchidee) Well done, Orchi! I truly do love these and your are on a roll! I\'ll add...
  December 13th, 2025 12:54
• Paned In Shame (Kurt Philip Behm) Truth bomb! 💣🔥 Love this, Kurt! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛
  December 13th, 2025 12:51
• 𝔉𝔩𝔲𝔱𝔱𝔢𝔯𝔦𝔫𝔤 𝔈𝔰𝔰𝔢𝔫𝔠𝔢 (Keyara S Trotman) My friend, this is gentle and atmospheric…the fluttering refrain, the...
  December 13th, 2025 12:49
• My thoughts (NafisaSB) Safina, this reads with real sincerity…the way you trace thought from...
  December 13th, 2025 12:48
• Seems About a Hundred Years Ago (Mutley Ravishes) My friend, this is clever and quietly prophetic…the rush of technology,...
  December 13th, 2025 12:47
• My body and You (NinjaGirl) 🥷, this is stark and unsettling in the right way. Each section tightens...
  December 12th, 2025 15:00
• To Winston (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Powerful write, my friend! Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛
  December 12th, 2025 11:39
• She walked not like many but rose to shine like few (Narayan Gadagkar) Wow! Such people are an inspiration for sure! Well done, my friend!...
  December 12th, 2025 11:38
• The Joy Is in the Cookies Made (Matthew R. Callies) Could not agree more. I love cookies...so naturally, I showed up. Now my...
  December 12th, 2025 11:03
• A childwood unde apartheid (Mistigris19) Dark, sad, raw, and honest! Powerful poem! Also, welcome to MPS!...
  December 12th, 2025 11:01
• Oh Internet, How You Let Me Down! (Friendship) Friendship, this resonates deeply…the disappointment, the grief, the way...
  December 12th, 2025 09:51
• Interesting Write (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, I felt the encouragement here…the reminder to keep moving even...
  December 12th, 2025 09:51
• on the border of another day (Arqios) My friend, this is quietly powerful…heat insisting, body moving, not to...
  December 12th, 2025 09:50
• The Mark (Sorenbarrett) My friend, this is sharp and unsettling…the careful probing, the hidden...
  December 12th, 2025 09:48
• Pigeon Diaries (Teddy.15) I have said there are 3 basic ways to end up in a poem. 1) Date/Marry a...
  December 12th, 2025 09:45
• Dead Or Living? - OT/NT Series 13 (Orchidee) Excellent hymn poem, Orchi! I prefer dead of course...beats living to hear...
  December 12th, 2025 09:37
• Train Wreck Women and Whiskey Nights (Thomas W Case) Excellent write, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛
  December 12th, 2025 09:35
• Somewhere Near the Far Side of Insight (Neville) I am not sure how I missed this poem, Neville, but late is better than...
  December 12th, 2025 09:33
• ℑ 𝔇𝔬… 𝔇𝔬𝔫\'𝔱 𝔐𝔦𝔰𝔰 𝔗𝔥𝔢 𝔖𝔥𝔬𝔱 (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, this pours out with real feeling…the drift, the love, the ache. It...
  December 11th, 2025 10:16
• \"Woven of Earth and Heart\" (Friendship) Friendship, this is gorgeous…the tenderness in every material, every...
  December 11th, 2025 10:16
• fractious fractals (Arqios) You have fractious fractals, me...spacious specters! 🤣 All jokes aside,...
  December 11th, 2025 10:13
• Temple Times - OT/NT Series 12 (Orchidee) Orchi, this is handled with real reverence…the Scripture woven into hymn...
  December 11th, 2025 10:11
• Wandering (Sorenbarrett) My friend, this is powerful…the desert bones, the wet sand, the undertow...
  December 11th, 2025 10:08
• Benighted (NinjaGirl) I’ve known that moment…the wanting to clear what’s settled, but not...
  December 11th, 2025 10:07
• a story from my life or my life\'s story? (NinjaGirl) 🥷, this is powerful…raw and brave in every line. The way you move...
  December 11th, 2025 10:05
• Message For Orchidee (Doggerel Dave) Wait, is this a goodbye message, in the form of a \"take care of KP...
  December 10th, 2025 19:15
• New Rhymes (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Chow Yun Fat! Wow! A name I have not heard in quite some time. Great...
  December 10th, 2025 19:00
• Go Home (Coracaodacripta) My friend, this one hits with a cold clarity…the sickness, the winter,...
  December 10th, 2025 12:15
• Family Tree (Teddy.15) Profound, dearest Teddy. This personally hits me this morning. Thank you...
  December 10th, 2025 09:57
• Songbird (Mutley Ravishes) Mutley, this cracked me up…the punch, the bite, the whole bird metaphor...
  December 10th, 2025 09:56
• of shards and fragments (Arqios) My friend, this is beautifully restrained…the desert, the fragments, the...
  December 10th, 2025 09:55
• Ode to the Wild Tresses (Friendship) My friend, this is powerful…the wild tresses as forest, fire, storm, and...
  December 10th, 2025 09:53
• The Chuckle Brothers (Paul Bell) My friend, this is brilliantly unhinged…the gossip spiraling, identities...
  December 10th, 2025 09:52