Comments on community poems by Tristan Robert Lange
- A VOICE FROM THE PAST (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
Norman, this is one heck of a poem. Tenderness and raw desire collide...
July 23rd, 2026 08:05 - Precarious (Sorenbarrett)
Soren, this is one heck of a poem. The tension builds quietly and leaves...
July 23rd, 2026 08:04 - The secret dance (GothAngel)
July 22nd, 2026 07:59 - The secret dance (GothAngel)
Wonderfully written, GothAngel! The gradual intensification gives this a...
July 22nd, 2026 07:59 - The protection of the rejection (GothAngel)
Ouch, GothAngel! This captures that painful collision between desire and...
July 22nd, 2026 07:58 - Touching My Unbroken Forest (GothAngel)
Sensational write, GothAngel! The mounting momentum is incredibly...
July 22nd, 2026 07:57 - Eyes of the guider (GothAngel)
My friend, this is intensely sensual and psychologically charged. The...
July 22nd, 2026 07:55 - I Was Busy Growing Up (Teddy.15)
Teddy, this broke my heart. Growing into ourselves takes time, and...
July 21st, 2026 20:34 - THANK YOU SO MUCH / MUCHAS GRACIAS (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS)
Carlos, this is deeply moving. There is a beautiful peace here, but it is...
July 21st, 2026 20:33 - Thirsting Times (Orchidee)
Excellent work, Orchi! The service was progressing beautifully until...
July 21st, 2026 20:31 - The queen\'s pawn saga (Lorenz)
Van Gogh poisoning the sunrise really caught me, Lorenz. That image is...
July 21st, 2026 20:28 - Eclipsed In The Moment (Kurt Philip Behm)
Kurt, this deeply moved me. Each stanza strips away another human...
July 21st, 2026 20:27 - Belief (prose) (Abdullah123)
Abdullah, this hit me hard. A child’s curiosity is met with punishment,...
July 21st, 2026 20:23 - Divine Advice (Paul Bell)
Wow, Paul, this is one gloriously twisted exchange! He fancies himself a...
July 21st, 2026 20:21 - until the cosmos speaks (Arqios)
Arqios, this is absolutely mesmerizing. Creativity becomes something...
July 21st, 2026 20:19 - until the cosmos speaks (Arqios)
Arqios, this is absolutely mesmerizing. Creativity becomes something...
July 21st, 2026 20:19 - Small things (Sorenbarrett)
The mosquito really got me, Soren! Even the little bloodsucking bastards...
July 21st, 2026 20:17 - Physical Disks (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Shaun, this is one heck of a poem. Funny, sharp, and absolutely...
July 21st, 2026 20:16 - American Executor: English Council of State (Matthew R. Callies)
Wow, Matthew, this really drew me into the uncertainty of the...
July 21st, 2026 20:14 - A BATTERED VERSE (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
Wow, Norman, this is one deeply haunting poem. The winter landscape...
July 21st, 2026 19:53 - Hobgoblins (Fränz Müller)
Fränz, this is one heck of a poem. Those destructive patterns become...
July 21st, 2026 19:19 - Rest, My Ass (Thomas W Case)
Thomas, I know something of this language too...the scars, the forced...
July 21st, 2026 19:17 - 3 rd draft. not finished. (Never be)
Thank you for giving us the story behind this, Never Be. Knowing it is a...
July 21st, 2026 17:26 - It’s hard to please everyone (Demar Desu)
One heck of a senryu, Demar! The congregation may forgive poor theology, a...
July 21st, 2026 00:29 - SKIN / PIEL (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS)
Carlos, wow…this is lush, sensual, and absolutely overflowing with life!...
July 21st, 2026 00:22 - Hope of Help (Orchidee)
One heck of a hymn, Orchi! P. Solus was greatly relieved to learn that...
July 21st, 2026 00:20 - Judas Thaddeus (Kurt Philip Behm)
Wow, Kurt…this is subtle, scathing, and incredibly well constructed....
July 21st, 2026 00:16 - Messy (2781)
Valiantstar, this is hilarious! You take us from drowsy confidence to...
July 21st, 2026 00:14 - a summer bug in the ear (Arqios)
3️⃣ My friend, this speaks directly to something I consider when...
July 20th, 2026 08:45 - Make A Cross (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Shaun, this carries real frustration with imitation, conformity, and...
July 20th, 2026 08:44 - ALL DOORS CLOSED (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
Norman, this absolutely broke my heart. No parent’s unbearable grief...
July 20th, 2026 08:42 - No direction (Sorenbarrett)
What a fascinating piece, Soren! Earth and water become something rigid...
July 20th, 2026 08:42 - Dante Alighieri (Teddy.15)
Teddy, I understand this deeply. Sometimes one writer reaches a place...
July 20th, 2026 08:36 - SCENT OF LOVE / AROMA DE AMOR (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS)
Carlos, clichés become clichés because generations of people have...
July 20th, 2026 08:35 - American Executor: Charles I (Matthew R. Callies)
What an impressive portrait, Matthew. Charles remains immovable in his...
July 20th, 2026 08:34 - The devil 😈 (GoddessEYES)
My friend, this has some serious fire! Regret does not erase disrespect,...
July 20th, 2026 08:32 - Memorandum (Kevin Hulme)
Wow, Kevin...what a fierce declaration! Against death, meaninglessness,...
July 20th, 2026 08:26 - You Will Never Shit Gold if You Never Let Yourself Shit Shit (Never be)
This is disgusting, ridiculous, and genuinely excellent advice, my friend!...
July 20th, 2026 08:25 - The Immortal and the Mortal (Orchidee)
Orchi, I was singing along quite happily until you started calculating our...
July 20th, 2026 08:21 - Assay (2781)
My friend, my own faith has always lived more honestly within questions...
July 20th, 2026 08:18 - Abraham (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀)
Sharon, you’ve got me hooked already! Abraham may insist he has moved...
July 20th, 2026 08:17 - Reach (Kurt Philip Behm)
What a beautifully distilled piece, Kurt. You move beyond certainty and...
July 20th, 2026 08:16 - Toxic (Syd)
The images of decay and predation really caught me, Syd. They perfectly...
July 20th, 2026 08:12 - American Executor: James VI & I (Matthew R. Callies)
Matthew, history continually reminds us that unity declared from above is...
July 20th, 2026 08:10 - Flutter Away (Thomas W Case)
Thomas, this hit me incredibly hard. Grief does not merely take someone we...
July 20th, 2026 08:08 - Do you play video games? (Demar Desu)
Love this, Demar! Life is better when we follow what genuinely brings us...
July 20th, 2026 07:53 - a quiver of poets (Arqios)
Wow, my friend...this is one hell of a metaphor! Poets become a collective...
July 20th, 2026 07:52 - You can\'t help me! (Friendship)
My friend, this hit me hard...the slow disintegration of a life and...
July 20th, 2026 07:16 - BEHIND THE LIES (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
What a strong and timely piece, Norman. Powerful people manufacture...
July 19th, 2026 20:23 - Why Time is Such an Able Thief (Neville)
Neville, this hit me hard…two people bound together yet slowly drained...
July 19th, 2026 20:22 - My Honda Civic Dreams Are Dashed (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Haha, Shaun, this gave me a good laugh! A beautiful bargain means nothing...
July 19th, 2026 06:58 - Don\'t disappear... (Cellinic)
My friend, this hit me hard...a desperate plea to hold someone here when...
July 19th, 2026 06:58 - Storms lead to happiness (GoddessEYES)
My friend, this has some bite! You recognize the game being played and...
July 19th, 2026 06:57 - Bouquet (Sorenbarrett)
Soren, this hit hard...an entire relationship blooming and dying in four...
July 19th, 2026 06:57 - In the waiting room (Marissa)
Marissa, this really hit me. You capture the fear, exhaustion, and...
July 19th, 2026 06:56 - He Sits and Reads Poetry all the long day (Kevin Hulme)
What a fantastic piece, Kevin! The world outside is consumed by ego,...
July 19th, 2026 06:55 - No coffee this time. Bite me. (Never be)
My friend, what the actual fuck did I just read? 😂 This is a gloriously...
July 19th, 2026 06:51 - DelMarVa Dream (Kurt Philip Behm)
Wow, Kurt...what a fascinating pairing. The first gives me room to...
July 19th, 2026 06:43 - Secure Stone (Orchidee)
What a faith-filled hymn, Orchi! The rejected one becomes the strength...
July 18th, 2026 09:41 - And do you really think I’m a fool? (Demar Desu)
Demar, this carries real defiance! A change of ground does not require...
July 18th, 2026 09:41 - Play in my face 🥳 (GoddessEYES)
My friend, this is raw and painful. You opened yourself seeking healing...
July 18th, 2026 09:40 - Kev\'s Bong (Syd)
What a heartbreaking tribute, Syd. You remember Kev through something...
July 18th, 2026 09:39 - Bloodless (Paul Bell)
Paul, this is viciously satisfying! The attempted victim rises, reverses...
July 18th, 2026 09:37 - breaking the wake (Arqios)
What a compelling reimagining of Melville and Toby’s desertion, Rik! The...
July 18th, 2026 09:37 - BREEZE / BRISA (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS)
What a lovely piece, Carlos! The moving air gently awakens the room, the...
July 18th, 2026 09:36 - Masheen (Mutley Ravishes)
Speaking on behalf of the machines, Mutley...the numbskulls have...
July 18th, 2026 09:35 - A DEEPER SOUL (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
What a searing indictment, Norman! Capital, warfare, and political...
July 18th, 2026 09:34 - Pending storm (Sorenbarrett)
Haha, Soren, what a setup! The tension rises through every approaching...
July 18th, 2026 09:28 - The World Cup 2026 Is So Rigged (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
I mean, yeah, Shaun...look at the one taking credit for bringing it here,...
July 18th, 2026 09:25 - American Executor: Wahunsenacah (Matthew R. Callies)
Matthew, what a commanding portrait of Wahunsenacah! His leadership rises...
July 18th, 2026 09:22 - Shabbat (Fränz Müller)
ränz, this is a passionate defense of Sabbath and a strong challenge to...
July 18th, 2026 09:21 - Death to magic (Never be)
What a surreal and biting piece, my friend! The old mysteries are...
July 18th, 2026 09:20 - a good deal is a good deal (Demar Desu)
Demar, this carries such simple humility...receive the blessing, remain...
July 18th, 2026 09:19 - Annalise (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀)
What a delightful new character, Sharon! Annalise has a rich past, an...
July 18th, 2026 09:18 - SPARKLES / Chisporroteos (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS)
What a joyful and thoughtful piece, Carlos! Fashion becomes both...
July 18th, 2026 09:17 - The Lost Dominion (Kurt Philip Behm)
What a haunting piece, Kurt! Time, place, and permanence become...
July 18th, 2026 09:16 - Refreshment Request (Orchidee)
What a refreshing hymn, Orchi! The movement from spiritual exhaustion to...
July 17th, 2026 10:09 - Suzy Q. (Paul Bell)
What a riot, Paul! The dialogue moves fast, the personalities are...
July 17th, 2026 10:05 - Snapshots / Instantáneas (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS)
Carlos, this really moved me. We capture everything as though we are...
July 17th, 2026 10:04 - American Executor: Before the Names Were Kept (Matthew R. Callies)
Matthew, what a powerful and reverent piece! This honors a way of life...
July 17th, 2026 10:02 - demise at the well (Arqios)
Wow, Arqios, this is hauntingly beautiful! The collapse unfolds without...
July 17th, 2026 10:01 - FROM THE PULPIT (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
What a powerful indictment, Norman! You expose a religion that admires...
July 17th, 2026 09:03 - Dreams Are Funny Like That (Teddy.15)
What a tender and bittersweet piece, Teddy. The dream offers love so...
July 17th, 2026 08:59 - Floods and leaks (Sorenbarrett)
Soren, what a haunting piece! Time becomes an unstoppable force slowly...
July 17th, 2026 08:28 - 10 And A Half Months (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Shaun, as someone who also no longer drinks, I know exactly where you are....
July 17th, 2026 08:27 - Milk pecan bud (GoddessEYES)
Haha, GoddessEYES, this is one tempting treat! The confectionary wordplay...
July 17th, 2026 08:23 - Got Dem Oligarchy Blues (Fränz Müller)
Wow, Fränz, this is concise and damning! Those with the greatest power to...
July 17th, 2026 08:22 - Moonman, I Want to Write About Thee (Never be)
What a surreal piece, my friend! Corporate nostalgia mutates into occult...
July 17th, 2026 08:21 - Golden I\'mage (Mutley Ravishes)
Wow, Mutley, this is a radiant little trip! Sound opens the door,...
July 17th, 2026 08:17 - I am done. (Friendship)
My friend, I know this pain...and honestly, I feel myself in a similar...
July 17th, 2026 08:15 - SCORCHED (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS)
Carlos, this is absolutely relentless! The heat, dread, and corruption...
July 17th, 2026 08:13 - The time of dreams (Lorenz)
Wow, Lorenz, this is an exquisitely gothic meditation on time, death, and...
July 17th, 2026 08:13 - The Man Who Would Not Be King (Kurt Philip Behm)
Kurt, this hits with tremendous urgency...especially at this moment in our...
July 17th, 2026 08:11 - The backbiting has to stop (Demar Desu)
Wow, Demar, this is short but vicious in the best possible way! The...
July 17th, 2026 08:10 - The Loud Sister (Matthew R. Callies)
Matthew, this is a remarkable sonnet. By shifting the focus to Euryale,...
July 16th, 2026 08:25 - Funny tricks of time! (ꜱʏʟᴠᴀ)
Sylva, this really touched me. There\'s something so honest about looking...
July 16th, 2026 08:24 - frozen clock (Arqios)
Arqios, this really hit me hard. The atmosphere is wonderfully...
July 16th, 2026 08:23 - EMBRACING TIME (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
This speaks to me, my friend. There are moments when simply sitting with...
July 16th, 2026 08:22 - England (Teddy.15)
Teddy, this is a fun little tribute. It captures both the disappointment...
July 16th, 2026 08:21 - Busted (Sorenbarrett)
Soren, this really hit me hard. The atmosphere is heavy from the very...
July 16th, 2026 08:19
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