Comments on community poems by Tristan Robert Lange

• Calling The Future (+2) (Kurt Philip Behm) I am searching around some darkened halls in a piece I am currently...
  February 27th, 2025 18:18
• Pop Tarts at Night (Whats write for me) 🤣 This made me laugh and laughter is the best medicine. It gets a fave,...
  February 27th, 2025 18:15
• You (Tony36) Love. When you have it, it makes the world go round, no? Beautiful, Tony!...
  February 27th, 2025 18:14
• It doesn\'t matter anymore (Sorenbarrett) Great job, Soren. This is a deep exploration of time, disillusionment, and...
  February 27th, 2025 18:10
• If i Were Made Off Glass (Poetic Licence) Great question that causes each reader to reflect on how they look at and...
  February 27th, 2025 17:54
• when echo lost its shadow (Arqios) Sorry it took me all day to get to read this. Been one of those days. Wow,...
  February 27th, 2025 17:52
• Distance (Caring dove) I would imagine it does, my friend. Hoping better days and feelings are...
  February 26th, 2025 22:40
• looking like crap (NinjaGirl) It really was one of those days. Hence my rabbit hole adventure this...
  February 26th, 2025 22:05
• Confused? (Orchidee) Wait, now I am confused! LOL! Not really, tell Fido I said hi and pat KP...
  February 26th, 2025 22:00
• Footnotes (Kurt Philip Behm) Truth. What more can be said. Profound truth, beautifully expressed in...
  February 26th, 2025 11:21
• Aide-Mémoire’s (Neville) Well, there you go, Neville. Taking simplicity and wrapping it up into a...
  February 26th, 2025 11:19
• Falls Relief (Whats write for me) 🤣 Poo-phoria sounds like it might hold even more meaning than just the...
  February 26th, 2025 11:17
• Pages not written (Sorenbarrett) Yes!!! Love this! The white pages of Colonial and American history bleed...
  February 26th, 2025 11:14
• ( weighing in ) (Arqios) Yes, no matter what...poetry is... Wonderful, friend. A very beautiful...
  February 26th, 2025 11:05
• commodifying myself (Demar Desu) Count me in bro. Purchased! Broke artists support broke artists. It\'s a...
  February 26th, 2025 11:00
• goodbye (NinjaGirl) This was painful to read, beautiful and painful. Well done, my dear...
  February 25th, 2025 20:14
• Jazz in Hell (Thomas W Case) Wonderful poem, Thomas! 🙏❤️
  February 25th, 2025 18:27
• HaHa, It Won\'t Be Long Now (Cheeky Missy) It\'s 50s where I am...I am so with you, Missy. The countdown is a...
  February 25th, 2025 15:10
• Whetting The Stone (Kurt Philip Behm) Wow. Love this. Easy fave!
  February 25th, 2025 15:08
• Taco Tuesday (Tony36) Taco Tuesday, Taco Thursday, heck Taco anyday! LOL! Well done on this, my...
  February 25th, 2025 15:07
• The Lies (Poetic Licence) Brief but very effective. A brlliant use of word economy. You paint a true...
  February 25th, 2025 15:06
• Some Kind of Curious Something (Neville) For some reason, I envision this scene being followed by a German Shepherd...
  February 25th, 2025 15:01
• Forgiveness Found (Orchidee) Oh my! After the past couple of days, I thought maybe this was Mrs. KP...
  February 25th, 2025 14:56
• True story (to be or not to be) (Sorenbarrett) A wonderful write, my friend. A piece that feels humorous on the surface,...
  February 25th, 2025 14:54
• Blossoming (2017) (Arqios) I love me my cherry blossoms. Growing up in NJ which has its imported...
  February 25th, 2025 14:27
• No3 From MORE OF THE DIFFERENT (Michael Edwards) Love it. The humor and the pic is stunning! Well done, Michael!
  February 25th, 2025 14:21
• directions to love (NinjaGirl) Awww! You deserve that love too. If you haven\'t found it yet, I have...
  February 24th, 2025 20:27
• Flammable (Mutley Ravishes) They burn both ways, methinks! A hellavu job indeed. Well done, my friend.
  February 24th, 2025 20:25
• Okay, Okay, Just Pat My Silly Head (Cheeky Missy) Enjoyed, for sure, Missy. Well done! 🌹👏
  February 24th, 2025 20:23
• VooDoo\'s Grasp (Lil_Bit0912) Loved this. Right up my alley! Welcome to MPS, btw! Glad you\'re here and...
  February 24th, 2025 20:21
• Awakened by His Call (Whats write for me) Powerful poem about the power of the resurrection through Jesus Christ....
  February 24th, 2025 11:44
• Cursed To Repeat (Kurt Philip Behm) There\'s much truth in this, for sure. Well done, Kurt!
  February 24th, 2025 11:42
• Individual (Tony36) Hear hear! Amen! 💯 Absolutely! Love this message! An easy fave, Tony!...
  February 24th, 2025 11:41
• Figment of Your Imagination (Poetic Licence) What can be said other than Truth 💯🌹👏 Well done on this brief...
  February 24th, 2025 11:38
• Morning Walk (Orchidee) 🤣😂😜 Another funny one. yay! Loved it, Orchi!
  February 24th, 2025 10:50
• Roll of the dice (Sorenbarrett) Yes. It certainly is. What else can be said. Great metaphor that speaks...
  February 24th, 2025 10:48
• Bleak House: The Fog (Arqios) Actually, the same song and scene came to mind. Good ol\' burth. Indeed,...
  February 24th, 2025 10:46
• My Dante Lives (ADarkerMind) Nicely done. Funny thing is I have been working on my own visitation to...
  February 23rd, 2025 23:16
• distort (NinjaGirl) Distorted soup sounds like my mental space! 😂 Your poem is brilliant...
  February 23rd, 2025 23:12
• No More Mr. Blue Skies (Neville) Powerful, true, and offers a sobering vantagepoint of human nature. Well...
  February 23rd, 2025 22:35
• Lazy Sunday Bit of Fun (Poetic Licence) Wow! Loving this series, my friend. 🌹👏
  February 23rd, 2025 22:29
• Word Wholeness (Orchidee) Great hymn poem with a very insightful note. Well done, Orchi! 🌹
  February 23rd, 2025 22:27
• Night of dream dust (Sorenbarrett) \"comfort, the enemy of poetry, a sleepiness without a dream\". Indeed!...
  February 23rd, 2025 19:33
• Share with me (Tony36) Here\'s looking at you, kid 👁️ 👁️ 👃 ...
  February 23rd, 2025 18:32
• … how to get to there (Arqios) Man, I am still wishing I could find and never leave Sesame Place! Loved...
  February 23rd, 2025 08:36
• assaulted (NinjaGirl) People say lots of things, and then show what side they are talking out of...
  February 23rd, 2025 07:36
• being poor (Demar Desu) Truth! The American Dream should really be called American Proapaganda!...
  February 23rd, 2025 07:12
• Peace (Tony36) Well done, Tony! Have a great weekend!
  February 22nd, 2025 10:00
• Gypsy Tart (Mutley Ravishes) This gets a fave! I don\'t need to analyze this, it speaks for itself!...
  February 22nd, 2025 09:58
• The Adventures of Mary & Harry(1) (Poetic Licence) A lot of fun. These are great! Happy weekend, my friend!
  February 22nd, 2025 09:55
• Why So Horrid? (Orchidee) I\'ve kinda missed catching up with you and KP! Another fun one, Orchi!...
  February 22nd, 2025 09:54
• Tho I\'m lost I shall grow. (Poems_From_Emotions) Great message and so this gets a fave from me. Well done and welcome to...
  February 22nd, 2025 09:51
• Reeling one in (Sorenbarrett) Ah fishing...and what a metaphor for writing too...often feels like...
  February 22nd, 2025 09:49
• Melbourne mosaic (Arqios) Would love to visit Melbourne and Australia as a whole. Thanks for the...
  February 22nd, 2025 09:44
• desperation (NinjaGirl) Wow! I get this for sure! Well expressed! Loved the word play and depth!...
  February 21st, 2025 21:15
• Grey Day Whispers (Cassie58) A wonderful poem, Cassie! Well done! I felt like I was on the walk with...
  February 21st, 2025 21:14
• To David (Kurt Philip Behm) A fitting tribute to your friend! Well done, Kurt! ❤️🙏
  February 21st, 2025 12:01
• Believe in yourself (Tony36) Great message, Tony! ❤️🙏
  February 21st, 2025 11:59
• Smoked (Mutley Ravishes) The last line makes it sound like we might already know. A well-written...
  February 21st, 2025 11:55
• Trapped (Caring dove) Butterflies will never be without caterpillars...but do all caterpillars...
  February 21st, 2025 11:25
• Flies (Sorenbarrett) Well, this one 🪰 would make for a great read at the start of fasting!...
  February 21st, 2025 11:17
• I Can`t Hide It (Poetic Licence) The question for me is, why hide it? Of course, there are reasons for...
  February 21st, 2025 11:13
• beneath the nightingale’s call (Arqios) Such a tragic yet juicy tale, Philopela\'s is. A wonderful homage to her,...
  February 21st, 2025 11:08
• Unending Love (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) A wonderful prose poem, my friend! 🌹👏
  February 20th, 2025 21:26
• She Smiles… (Doggerel Dave) This is...ehem...so damn aware in a way most men are not! Bravo! I applaud...
  February 20th, 2025 21:23
• There is Dust on my Mind and on the Wall (Thomas W Case) I feel your pain on the website, my friend. Poets do not necessarily make...
  February 20th, 2025 21:21
• I\'m tired (NinjaGirl) Yeah. I\'ve always said I\'ll put it on my \"75 list\". Meaning, I\'ll be...
  February 20th, 2025 21:19
• No Tick. No Tock. (ADarkerMind) Oh, my friend, this is brilliance all the way around, and it rings so...
  February 20th, 2025 21:14
• Breakfast Reflection (Cassie58) I feel the loss and the absence in this Cassie! Moms leave that indelible...
  February 20th, 2025 21:12
• Breathless (Kurt Philip Behm) Short. But wow. Profound. Well done, Kurt!
  February 20th, 2025 21:08
• I Wonder, Will I Ever Know? (Cheeky Missy) Oh, I get it! Well done, Missy! It is so good to read you again after...
  February 20th, 2025 21:07
• Playing Cards (Tony36) Great write, Tony! Love me some card games!
  February 20th, 2025 21:03
• Beyong the Page (Whats write for me) Yes!!! I concur! A wonderful write, my friend! 👏
  February 20th, 2025 08:49
• Once I Felt Like a Sky Hungry Kite (Neville) I can relate to this. The feeling of once wanting to soar, to fly...but...
  February 20th, 2025 08:48
• The Same Picture Frame (Poetic Licence) Well done, Tobani! Thought-provoking, that makes me think of the old...
  February 20th, 2025 08:43
• Ultimate weapon (Sorenbarrett) At first read, this comes off as a poem about empathy and compassion;...
  February 20th, 2025 08:41
• The Love of Lichen (Demar Desu) Bro, I want to believe this; however, it seems so far from EVER happening....
  February 20th, 2025 08:18
• Three dots dancing (Arqios) Three dots dancing...they can be a source of hope, dread, or unnoticed...
  February 20th, 2025 08:16
• It’s Dark (AaliyahC.) Nicely written. my friend,. I certainly related! 🌹👏
  February 20th, 2025 08:10
• Fundamedical (Mutley Ravishes) This image-rich poem speaks of the immense life-creating power of the...
  February 20th, 2025 08:05
• Feminism, but can I keep my bra? (NinjaGirl) [Checks for wire support]🤣 All jokes aside, amen to this. Powerful...
  February 17th, 2025 19:54
• With A Gentle Dust Of Cinnamon (ADarkerMind) Melvin, I love your image-rich poetry. This poem has such a unique,...
  February 17th, 2025 13:25
• BBQ (Tony36) There ain\'t nothing like good BBQ. An easy fave for me. Now I am hungry!...
  February 17th, 2025 08:54
• Within The Wind (Kurt Philip Behm) \"to leave us zero zum\" indeed. Well done, my friend.
  February 17th, 2025 08:54
• Insatiated (A Neologism for Our Times) (Neville) Wonderful neologism. Well done, my friend. Cheers! 🍻
  February 17th, 2025 08:52
• Shadow (Cassie58) Oh...so heartbreaking. I knew a pup named Shadow, too; he actually shook...
  February 17th, 2025 08:51
• Trump the devil (2781) Well done, my friend. Thought-provoking poem. And no, to answer the...
  February 17th, 2025 08:44
• Not to be confused (Sorenbarrett) Ah...the distance between passion and love. Sometimes not so distant,...
  February 17th, 2025 08:33
• Beautiful Morning (Doggerel Dave) Got the song reference right away. Never been to Oklahoma either and,...
  February 17th, 2025 08:28
• Poor and Needy (Orchidee) Quite the wedding hymn, Orchi! LOL! All jokes aside, this is a wonderful...
  February 17th, 2025 08:27
• ‘til all my breath is You (Arqios) Well done, my friend! Who doesn\'t like a li\'l good poison, now and...
  February 17th, 2025 08:24
• The World Holds It`s Breath (Poetic Licence) Write on! It makes me feel less alone! LOL! That itch will come back, no...
  February 17th, 2025 08:19
• No1 from MORE OF THE DIFFERENT (Michael Edwards) Indeed. Major problem! 🤣 Well done, Michael. Looking forward to No. 2....
  February 17th, 2025 08:16
• One for the Ladies (Mutley Ravishes) A wonderful poem that speaks of aging and rejuvenation. A fascinating and...
  February 17th, 2025 08:15
• To Fight Another Day ... (Kurt Philip Behm) Wow! It flows beautifully and is another battle to remember. Well done,...
  February 16th, 2025 11:35
• Dear Winstun (Mutley Ravishes) Well done, my friend!
  February 16th, 2025 11:33
• Ode to Cheeseburger Casserole (Whats write for me) Love Weird Al. Great job!
  February 16th, 2025 11:32
• My Apologies, It IS Only...Nevermind (Cheeky Missy) Danishes, coffee, winter storm...what\'s not to enjoy about these! Snowy...
  February 16th, 2025 11:08
• Buttercup (Caring dove) To be in one place but another at the very same time. Different things can...
  February 16th, 2025 11:06
• Some Things She Once Said (Neville) Sometimes distance is necessary and healthy. Wonderfully written, my...
  February 16th, 2025 11:04