Comments on community poems by Caring dove
- Simplicity (AlexHoy)
the ending line caught my eye ! i feel that is true, in a way .. you speak...
February 9th, 2018 15:49 - breaking free (Adam brown)
hello brownie .. this is a really good piece of writing .. i love your...
February 9th, 2018 15:21 - Seeds... (Wolfangel73)
interesting .. i like the questioning at the end :-)
February 9th, 2018 15:10 - I\'m getting There (Discreation)
well i enjoyed reading this , so you can\'t be that bad at writing lol :-)...
February 9th, 2018 05:50 - Light or Dark (Discreation)
i like the repetiiton of the words \'\' darkness and light \'\' it...
February 9th, 2018 05:41 - Light or Dark (Discreation)
interesting and enjoyable read ! :-) nicely done .
February 9th, 2018 05:40 - Black and White (Discreation)
yes, nothing is simple as just black and white.. great piece of writing...
February 9th, 2018 05:36 - SONATA ALLA PASTA ! Per LAURA (BRIAN & ANGELA)
i think i have heard of 12 of those ... i love pasta but i don\'t like the...
February 8th, 2018 06:56 - Angels at the Diner (Lorna)
nice piece of writing :-) when we go to cafes/ diners we all need a nice...
February 8th, 2018 06:47 - Creative madness (Poetic25)
interesting ! i love this ! the wording throughout .. makes for a very...
February 8th, 2018 06:41 - Wispy bones of winter (Poetic25)
hello poetic25 .. this is truly very lovely :-) i very much enjoyed...
February 8th, 2018 05:17 - Annihilation (Jo Middleton)
wow, joe ! this is quite incredibly AMAZING for someone so young, you have...
February 8th, 2018 04:45 - Gold in the Cracks (Lily_)
wow, such a lovely and beautifully written piece of writing ... completely...
February 8th, 2018 03:32 - HOME IS WHERE THE CAT IS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
love this and i love cats , tho sadly i cannot have one of my own ! tho i...
February 7th, 2018 12:59 - THE GIRL I MARRIED (Lasergraph)
loving the ending to this \'\' you will always remain my rock \'\' good...
February 7th, 2018 12:51 - Someone needs to love you (Aa Harvey)
lovely :-) i especially love the ending .. with the healing of the heart...
February 7th, 2018 07:35 - Growing Love. (Goldfinch60)
lovely and sweet :-)
February 7th, 2018 02:57 - A daisy in the dirt (Tequilasangel)
this is lovely :-)
February 5th, 2018 17:03 - Help Me Please. (Kevin browne)
this is very sweet and lovely .. i especially love the ending :-)
February 5th, 2018 14:32 - For Gracious Greetings. (Kevin browne)
beautiful !! :-) such a deeply lovely piece of writing , my favourite...
February 5th, 2018 07:25 - If Life Lets You Love. (Kevin browne)
a beautiful and lovely piece of writing , i especially love your mention...
February 5th, 2018 07:16 - The Mighty Lion (Aa Harvey)
brilliant! i love this ! you have really given this lion a voice.. a voice...
January 31st, 2018 05:16 - A weep of fate (Aa Harvey)
wow, this is a very touching piece of writing , they both were in pain but...
January 31st, 2018 05:11 - Heart door (Aa Harvey)
oh, very lovely ! i do love the reference to the tape over your heart...
January 31st, 2018 05:04 - Beautiful eyes (Aa Harvey)
i love your style of writing AA Harvey , another lovely and well thought...
January 31st, 2018 04:59 - The thought beetle (Aa Harvey)
however the ladybird is the most beautiful out of them all , it sounds...
January 31st, 2018 04:54 - The thought beetle (Aa Harvey)
lol, i love the idea of a \'\' beetle \'\' a ladybird \'\' and a \'\' worm...
January 31st, 2018 04:52 - Phoenix (Aa Harvey)
i love this ! :-) nice work
January 31st, 2018 04:47 - Romance isn\'t dead (Aa Harvey)
i feel so sorry for the young boy who is hurting , and in pain..
January 31st, 2018 04:37 - Romance isn\'t dead (Aa Harvey)
brilliant piece of writing Harvey , i cannot help but love the repetition...
January 31st, 2018 04:36 - A little respect (Aa Harvey)
some people are inconsiderate towards our feelings despite love being...
January 31st, 2018 04:29 - Looking to the future (Aa Harvey)
this is truly lovely :-) the first line pulled me in .... a rainbow is so...
January 31st, 2018 04:18 - New line (Aa Harvey)
loved every line .. a strong piece of writing .. enjoyed :-)
January 31st, 2018 04:07 - New world story (Aa Harvey)
this is very lovely :-) enjoyed reading this ..
January 31st, 2018 04:06 - Specialness. (Fay Slimm.)
hello fay , this is very beautiful :-) i love how you have used seasons...
January 31st, 2018 03:59 - Ocean (Carmine)
*lovely*
January 30th, 2018 06:18 - Ocean (Carmine)
amazing ... a really lovey read ..! :-) i love how you have used the rock...
January 30th, 2018 06:18 - Empty (Carmine)
\'\'i\'m empty
but you can fill me with anything even with your...
January 30th, 2018 06:13 - Little Sailboat (Carmine)
really love this ! enjoyed reading ... nice work :-) he sounds like he...
January 30th, 2018 06:09 - My heart (Carmine)
amazing ! :-) it sounds like to me like someone has ownership over your...
January 30th, 2018 06:06 - Family Tree (Carmine)
interesting , i enjoyed reading this , i also like how you have displayed...
January 30th, 2018 06:03 - A book and a side (Carmine)
great piece of writing :-) i think you do need to understands both sides,...
January 30th, 2018 05:59 - Enigma (TrystanBehm)
really good ! i love this ! this line really stands out , for me
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January 30th, 2018 05:52 - Nectar (TrystanBehm)
interesting ! i like the words used throughout .. :-)
January 30th, 2018 05:44 - Humans and the Stars: My Conversations (Niallprideaux)
amazing, beautiful :-) interesting how you have referred to your mind as a...
January 30th, 2018 04:36 - Cloudbusting Love (Niallprideaux)
sweet! lovely read ! i love how you have added in some lines from kate...
January 30th, 2018 04:29 - The Boy of Gold and Stone. (Niallprideaux)
wow , i completely love this ! you wrote this very well , completely...
January 30th, 2018 04:26 - Can you see me? (Niallprideaux)
such a sweet piece of writing for your grandma,... so sad when people are...
January 30th, 2018 04:21 - breathe in, breathe out... (Niallprideaux)
panic is a terrible thing, anxiety is not nice .. you expressed this very...
January 30th, 2018 04:18 - Comfort in the Winds (MaddieJ)
lovely.. very nice .:-)
January 30th, 2018 04:13 - \"Singing In The Rain\" (MaddieJ)
such a pleasant read, i truly enjoyed reading this , sometimes there is...
January 30th, 2018 04:09 - Our Mysterious World (Miss Xtraordinary)
i loved reading this . interesting , thought provoking and well expressed...
January 30th, 2018 04:01 - MY CAT TALKS TO ME ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
hi brian , i completely love this, my twin sister has a poster in her...
January 30th, 2018 03:51 - Pain or Feeling (Little_Write)
hello little write , i love this ! :-) i can imagine loving someone who...
January 30th, 2018 01:10 - Body dysmorphic me (Renzi)
hello .. such a pain filled write... so sorry to hear of your struggles....
January 29th, 2018 10:36 - Anxiety (Renzi)
anxiety can be so hard to deal with .. well expressed
January 29th, 2018 10:36 - Body dysmorphic me (Renzi)
hello .. such a pain filled write... so sorry to hear of your struggles....
January 29th, 2018 10:33 - A TEDDY BEAR IS ~ BETTER THAN A MAN ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
lol .. i love this ! i have about 4 teddies in my room and i love giving...
January 29th, 2018 10:25 - Butterfly (Jo Middleton)
i can\'t help thinking that the butterfly is another girl ... and she...
January 29th, 2018 09:55 - Butterfly (Jo Middleton)
hey jo :-) this is a very strong piece of writing and quite beautiful .....
January 29th, 2018 09:51 - The ballerina (Moom)
lovely :-)
January 29th, 2018 07:46 - A Lonely Toothbrush (Geordienick)
brilliant ! i really love this ... i love how you have used the idea of a...
January 29th, 2018 07:40 - Crocodile Tears (Mottakeenur Rehman)
interesting i like this ! i love how you have expressed yourself...
January 29th, 2018 07:34 - “Balloon” (AlinaVanderson)
i really like this , very expressive :-)
January 29th, 2018 07:27 - TOO MUCH MUFFIN (Michael Edwards)
your ending caught me off surprise a little but i enjoyed reading this !...
January 29th, 2018 07:16 - IF ALL THE WORLD...(1) (Michael Edwards)
lol.. bread and cheese is nice .. i think crusty frenchbread , cheese with...
January 29th, 2018 07:13 - The One I Took For Granted (DezareeCheyd)
hello dezaree, i can feel your regrets and your hurt thoughout this...
January 29th, 2018 04:48 - Poet Identity (Mottakeenur Rehman)
well expressed :-)
January 28th, 2018 05:25 - Help Me Lord. (Goldfinch60)
aaw bless you and i am so sorry for your wife....i am not sure if it is...
January 28th, 2018 05:00 - What are we doing here? (Avigail)
we are here to live but i think for those of us who struggle and hurt,...
January 28th, 2018 04:37 - What are we doing here? (Avigail)
i don\'t think i will ever understand life . i have hurt a lot in my life...
January 28th, 2018 04:36 - Inner self (Jordy L G)
hi jordy , oh wow , i truly find this amazing :-) you wrote this so very...
January 27th, 2018 17:32 - A Dragon (Nihility)
do we not need more then self belief tho ? what if we believe we can get...
January 27th, 2018 17:11 - A Dragon (Nihility)
i completely understand lol .. :-) just because the dragon has no wings,...
January 27th, 2018 17:09 - Under the Sturgeon Moon (August) (Lorna)
interesting , i love your repetition of the words \'\' we got the hay in ,...
January 27th, 2018 08:24 - Athene Noctua (Adam Shirley)
really enjoyed reading this ... i love how you expressed yourself .. very...
January 27th, 2018 03:32 - Sunflower (Adam Shirley)
*crimson*
January 27th, 2018 03:28 - Sunflower (Adam Shirley)
so sweet, so beautiful , i cannot help but love this :-) speaking of her...
January 27th, 2018 03:28 - Blown Force. (Fay Slimm.)
i also love how you have given each seasons wind a certain strength ... a...
January 26th, 2018 07:56 - Blown Force. (Fay Slimm.)
very nice fay :-) this is quite lovely .. i love how you have given each...
January 26th, 2018 07:55 - Uprooted (Baylee)
i love how you started this poem , with the idea of being uprooted and...
January 26th, 2018 07:51 - What Happened ? (RebeccaRose.x)
i like this , so much sadness but so well expressed .. i think sometimes...
January 26th, 2018 05:23 - A round (Moom)
however a circle has no points, no sharp bits, i think thats why the round...
January 26th, 2018 05:21 - A round (Moom)
i think i agree with you ... love is circular , for sure :-) i find the...
January 26th, 2018 05:19 - Watta Lotta Excrement. (Goldfinch60)
no offense intended ,
January 26th, 2018 04:40 - Watta Lotta Excrement. (Goldfinch60)
i find the title a little off- putting and that word excrement , its a...
January 26th, 2018 03:33 - Watta Lotta Excrement. (Goldfinch60)
lol goldfinch ! love this ... such a light hearted and fun read ! ha ha ....
January 26th, 2018 03:30 - I Can Dance What I See. (Kevin browne)
hi kevin .. i enjoyed reading this :-) it almost has a bouncy musical type...
January 25th, 2018 17:08 - Abortion is no solution (Sarah Marie)
i think there are certain exceptions and i agree with you there. however...
January 25th, 2018 12:04 - Deep inside I have wings (Avigail)
we all need wings to fly ! nice read
January 25th, 2018 11:53 - The dilemma of sensitive people (Avigail)
good piece of writing .. i think i am a empath so i can pick up on other...
January 25th, 2018 11:50 - Life is like an onion (Avigail)
ha lol .. yes :-) we can choose a new onion , maybe we could choose one...
January 25th, 2018 11:40 - If you feel that the universe is not responding (Avigail)
i cannot help but agree with this . i liked this :-)
January 25th, 2018 11:38 - shine inside out (Avigail)
hello avigail.. i really like this , firstly you bring a lot of truth into...
January 25th, 2018 11:35 - Unstitched (ShannonXx)
brilliant ! really like this .... the whole idea of his fingertips leaving...
January 25th, 2018 11:27 - Crystallised Dreams (ShannonXx)
lovely :-)
January 25th, 2018 11:25 - Our Thirsty Hearts (ShannonXx)
interesting shannon ! i am loving your wording throughout this .. very...
January 25th, 2018 11:24 - A broken mind (ShannonXx)
i am glad to hear this is not about you .. but gosh , you wrote this very...
January 25th, 2018 11:21 - Coffee House (ShannonXx)
hi shannon , i think some people can be careless in their words towards...
January 25th, 2018 11:16 - The Darker Side Of Wonderland (Shadowbox15)
brilliant!! i love how this is a combination of poets, writing together ....
January 25th, 2018 07:45
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