Comments on community poems by Caring dove
- Body dysmorphic me (Renzi)
hello .. such a pain filled write... so sorry to hear of your struggles....
January 29th, 2018 10:36 - Anxiety (Renzi)
anxiety can be so hard to deal with .. well expressed
January 29th, 2018 10:36 - Body dysmorphic me (Renzi)
hello .. such a pain filled write... so sorry to hear of your struggles....
January 29th, 2018 10:33 - A TEDDY BEAR IS ~ BETTER THAN A MAN ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
lol .. i love this ! i have about 4 teddies in my room and i love giving...
January 29th, 2018 10:25 - Butterfly (Jo Middleton)
i can\'t help thinking that the butterfly is another girl ... and she...
January 29th, 2018 09:55 - Butterfly (Jo Middleton)
hey jo :-) this is a very strong piece of writing and quite beautiful .....
January 29th, 2018 09:51 - The ballerina (Moom)
lovely :-)
January 29th, 2018 07:46 - A Lonely Toothbrush (Geordienick)
brilliant ! i really love this ... i love how you have used the idea of a...
January 29th, 2018 07:40 - Crocodile Tears (Mottakeenur Rehman)
interesting i like this ! i love how you have expressed yourself...
January 29th, 2018 07:34 - “Balloon” (AlinaVanderson)
i really like this , very expressive :-)
January 29th, 2018 07:27 - TOO MUCH MUFFIN (Michael Edwards)
your ending caught me off surprise a little but i enjoyed reading this !...
January 29th, 2018 07:16 - IF ALL THE WORLD...(1) (Michael Edwards)
lol.. bread and cheese is nice .. i think crusty frenchbread , cheese with...
January 29th, 2018 07:13 - The One I Took For Granted (DezareeCheyd)
hello dezaree, i can feel your regrets and your hurt thoughout this...
January 29th, 2018 04:48 - Poet Identity (Mottakeenur Rehman)
well expressed :-)
January 28th, 2018 05:25 - Help Me Lord. (Goldfinch60)
aaw bless you and i am so sorry for your wife....i am not sure if it is...
January 28th, 2018 05:00 - What are we doing here? (Avigail)
we are here to live but i think for those of us who struggle and hurt,...
January 28th, 2018 04:37 - What are we doing here? (Avigail)
i don\'t think i will ever understand life . i have hurt a lot in my life...
January 28th, 2018 04:36 - Inner self (Jordy L G)
hi jordy , oh wow , i truly find this amazing :-) you wrote this so very...
January 27th, 2018 17:32 - A Dragon (Nihility)
do we not need more then self belief tho ? what if we believe we can get...
January 27th, 2018 17:11 - A Dragon (Nihility)
i completely understand lol .. :-) just because the dragon has no wings,...
January 27th, 2018 17:09 - Under the Sturgeon Moon (August) (Lorna)
interesting , i love your repetition of the words \'\' we got the hay in ,...
January 27th, 2018 08:24 - Athene Noctua (Adam Shirley)
really enjoyed reading this ... i love how you expressed yourself .. very...
January 27th, 2018 03:32 - Sunflower (Adam Shirley)
*crimson*
January 27th, 2018 03:28 - Sunflower (Adam Shirley)
so sweet, so beautiful , i cannot help but love this :-) speaking of her...
January 27th, 2018 03:28 - Blown Force. (Fay Slimm.)
i also love how you have given each seasons wind a certain strength ... a...
January 26th, 2018 07:56 - Blown Force. (Fay Slimm.)
very nice fay :-) this is quite lovely .. i love how you have given each...
January 26th, 2018 07:55 - Uprooted (Baylee)
i love how you started this poem , with the idea of being uprooted and...
January 26th, 2018 07:51 - What Happened ? (RebeccaRose.x)
i like this , so much sadness but so well expressed .. i think sometimes...
January 26th, 2018 05:23 - A round (Moom)
however a circle has no points, no sharp bits, i think thats why the round...
January 26th, 2018 05:21 - A round (Moom)
i think i agree with you ... love is circular , for sure :-) i find the...
January 26th, 2018 05:19 - Watta Lotta Excrement. (Goldfinch60)
no offense intended ,
January 26th, 2018 04:40 - Watta Lotta Excrement. (Goldfinch60)
i find the title a little off- putting and that word excrement , its a...
January 26th, 2018 03:33 - Watta Lotta Excrement. (Goldfinch60)
lol goldfinch ! love this ... such a light hearted and fun read ! ha ha ....
January 26th, 2018 03:30 - I Can Dance What I See. (Kevin browne)
hi kevin .. i enjoyed reading this :-) it almost has a bouncy musical type...
January 25th, 2018 17:08 - Abortion is no solution (Sarah Marie)
i think there are certain exceptions and i agree with you there. however...
January 25th, 2018 12:04 - Deep inside I have wings (Avigail)
we all need wings to fly ! nice read
January 25th, 2018 11:53 - The dilemma of sensitive people (Avigail)
good piece of writing .. i think i am a empath so i can pick up on other...
January 25th, 2018 11:50 - Life is like an onion (Avigail)
ha lol .. yes :-) we can choose a new onion , maybe we could choose one...
January 25th, 2018 11:40 - If you feel that the universe is not responding (Avigail)
i cannot help but agree with this . i liked this :-)
January 25th, 2018 11:38 - shine inside out (Avigail)
hello avigail.. i really like this , firstly you bring a lot of truth into...
January 25th, 2018 11:35 - Unstitched (ShannonXx)
brilliant ! really like this .... the whole idea of his fingertips leaving...
January 25th, 2018 11:27 - Crystallised Dreams (ShannonXx)
lovely :-)
January 25th, 2018 11:25 - Our Thirsty Hearts (ShannonXx)
interesting shannon ! i am loving your wording throughout this .. very...
January 25th, 2018 11:24 - A broken mind (ShannonXx)
i am glad to hear this is not about you .. but gosh , you wrote this very...
January 25th, 2018 11:21 - Coffee House (ShannonXx)
hi shannon , i think some people can be careless in their words towards...
January 25th, 2018 11:16 - The Darker Side Of Wonderland (Shadowbox15)
brilliant!! i love how this is a combination of poets, writing together ....
January 25th, 2018 07:45 - Wings (Unique)
i love your style of writing ! :-) again , another lovely read . so...
January 25th, 2018 07:34 - Howl (Unique)
amazing piece of poetry .. i truly loved reading this :-) :-)i love the...
January 25th, 2018 07:29 - Cracks In The Dam (Syd)
i think some tablets just cover up how we are feeling .. but what we need...
January 25th, 2018 06:54 - Cracks In The Dam (Syd)
\'\' i\'ll just paper over the dam, Hide the cracks in the bricks \'\' i...
January 25th, 2018 06:52 - Thirst (Syd)
hi syd , this is a good and strong piece of writing :-) i can only try and...
January 25th, 2018 06:41 - A Reminder That I\'m Human (Syd)
hi syd , i cannot help but love this :-) i love your reference to the...
January 25th, 2018 05:59 - floccinaucinihilipilification (Jo Middleton)
gosh , this is a real word lol floccinaucinihilipilification... never...
January 25th, 2018 05:01 - floccinaucinihilipilification (Jo Middleton)
you should check out my poem .. tunnel turning me to shadow \'\' same...
January 25th, 2018 04:57 - floccinaucinihilipilification (Jo Middleton)
wow, this is a very powerful piece of writing .. interesting how yo posted...
January 25th, 2018 04:56 - The Justice We Seek (Lizzie)
hello lizzie, great expression here :-) you did your best to stand up for...
January 24th, 2018 17:10 - Raindrops (DHA)
* interesting *
January 24th, 2018 17:00 - Raindrops (DHA)
interesing :-) i do love the reference to raindrops
January 24th, 2018 17:00 - Silence (Little_Write)
oh , very nice ! sometimes noise and distractions can be overwhelming and...
January 24th, 2018 05:00 - Caprice (Jabberwocky)
nice piece of writing :-) i am not sure cupid fires an arrow in ay...
January 24th, 2018 04:21 - A Daffodil Smiling In Yellow. (Kevin browne)
i have saved this as a favourite.. seriously loved reading this ! :-) i...
January 24th, 2018 04:17 - The embezzled halo (Jo Middleton)
hi jo.. wow :-) i can\'t help but enjoy this .. i love how you describe...
January 24th, 2018 04:09 - The Encase Wrap (Jo Middleton)
interesting way of writing .. i really liked this .. tho can i ask , who...
January 24th, 2018 04:01 - The Key of Life. (Goldfinch60)
aaw.... so sad :-( i feel so sorry for anybody who suffers with dementia ,...
January 24th, 2018 03:10 - Cold Bum (FredPeyer)
the cold bum distracted you momentarily from the deep thinking and your...
January 24th, 2018 02:48 - Empty Now (Naeners)
despite it being around \'\' emptiness \'\' it has a nice flow and a nice...
January 24th, 2018 02:07 - Empty Now (Naeners)
emptiness is not nice .. i like your repetition of the word empty and i...
January 24th, 2018 02:04 - Why (Anthony Stafford)
hello , i like you speak of your depression becoming a part of you , like...
January 24th, 2018 01:42 - She Wept And I Cried. (Kevin browne)
hi kevin :-) this is very beautiful :-) i love your mention of the...
January 23rd, 2018 16:12 - LAST NIGHT WITH ANGELA ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
how lovely :-) my favourite line .. Joined like two fallen snowflakes\'\'...
January 23rd, 2018 15:50 - The Search (Shwetafetagra)
hello .. i i really love how you have expressed yourself throughout ......
January 23rd, 2018 14:02 - Thought it stopped but it came straight back (Poetic Dan)
nice wording throughout this .. soryr to hear of yoru tinnitus , do you...
January 23rd, 2018 13:57 - I\'ll keep searching on (Poetic Dan)
sometimes it can feel hard to write out how we are feeling ... very...
January 23rd, 2018 13:53 - I Am Free (Birddie Jane)
\'\' i took that chip off my shoulder and i smashed it \'\' some powerful...
January 23rd, 2018 13:51 - Take Wing (Baylee)
this is a very dark piece of writing but so well expressed .. i can see...
January 23rd, 2018 10:05 - Winter-Clad. (Fay Slimm.)
winter does not care for its impact upon the land or on animals ... it...
January 23rd, 2018 06:19 - Winter-Clad. (Fay Slimm.)
great piece of writing fay .. i love your style of writing .. you seem...
January 23rd, 2018 06:17 - Souls Know. (Fay Slimm.)
loving the ending to this one \'\'
that destiny made them one single...
January 23rd, 2018 06:12 - I Am Cloud. (Fay Slimm.)
oh , wow , fay ! this is amazing .. the way you have spoken of the cloud...
January 23rd, 2018 06:05 - Silent Music. (Fay Slimm.)
i love the reference to \' a flowers silent music \'\' i do not think i...
January 23rd, 2018 05:50 - mirror talk (Onepauly)
oh , this is very nice , paul :-) i love the wording , its quite...
January 23rd, 2018 05:41 - ahoy! (Onepauly)
hello , i like this , it sounds about someone who feels very lost and...
January 23rd, 2018 05:32 - The Essence (Laedie Willacaw)
oh , this is very lovely :-) i love your style of writing , makes for a...
January 23rd, 2018 05:21 - Crow Shaman (Laedie Willacaw)
hello Laidie :-) an enjoyable piece of writing here i do love how you...
January 23rd, 2018 05:13 - I Am Mentally Prepared (Malayzia)
well expressed .. i don\'t understand why your friend was taken from you...
January 23rd, 2018 03:32 - The Things I Wish I Could Tell You (RIley)
aaw, i am so sorry .. this is so so painful , but you did so well writing...
January 22nd, 2018 13:23 - Advantage (Mystic)
this shows very well of a girl who feels unable to express her true...
January 22nd, 2018 06:06 - Hi Ho, Hi Ho, Its Off To Work I Go. (Wallace)
i would much prefer to listen to the sounds of nature and animals then...
January 22nd, 2018 04:43 - Frowning. (Wallace)
great ! i am agreeing with martina here, i love the repetition of these...
January 22nd, 2018 04:33 - Words. (Wallace)
aaw, this is sweet :-) she sounds like a very gentle lovely person .. nice...
January 22nd, 2018 04:29 - Groundhog Day. (Wallace)
and i am glad it does not rust ! lol. i would not want that ...
January 22nd, 2018 04:27 - Perfect Day. (Wallace)
lovely :-) i love your reference to the strawberry tarts and the sheep...
January 22nd, 2018 04:24 - Safe Haven. (Wallace)
heaven does indeed sound like it may be a nicer place then earth but who...
January 22nd, 2018 04:21 - Hell On Earth. (Wallace)
so many evil and nasty people here on earth and that is so wrong for there...
January 22nd, 2018 04:18 - Nice Day. (Wallace)
* nice piece of writing *
January 22nd, 2018 04:16 - Nice Day. (Wallace)
completely true , nature does indeed speak to us , it talks to me too .. ...
January 22nd, 2018 04:15 - Heart Felt. (Wallace)
so embaressing to fart in public lol i am sure anybody who does would be...
January 22nd, 2018 04:12 - Love (Jay123)
\'\' to always catch yourself when you fall \'\' you fell but you kept...
January 22nd, 2018 04:08 - Love (Jay123)
some very strong messages in this poem .. i love how you have spoken of...
January 22nd, 2018 04:01 - Explaining Anxiety (Naeners)
the reference to the monster is a very good idea to describe anxiety it...
January 21st, 2018 13:14
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