Comments on community poems by Caring dove
- now ready to depart (Dusk arising)
hello dusk rising .. i cannot help but LOVE this ! i love how you mention...
February 23rd, 2018 19:00 - Not in Sync (FredPeyer)
great poem ! :-) and i can completely relate . i deal with dissociation...
February 23rd, 2018 18:12 - “Antidote to Optimism” (Andrew Guzaldo)
hello andrew, this is a great piece of write, really truly enjoyed reading...
February 23rd, 2018 17:36 - Lost boy (JDswinnerton)
wow, really good , i\'m loving this :-) so well expressed , flowed really...
February 22nd, 2018 19:27 - When Yonder- Incomplete (MaddieJ)
hi virago , a brilliant piece of writing ! i love this , truly! :-) i love...
February 22nd, 2018 19:11 - Try Again (A.A.)
very nice :-) maybe the stars are a sign of hope
February 22nd, 2018 19:01 - Emotion (Mrskobrien)
i love how you use nature to describe emotions .. the clouds, fire.. the...
February 22nd, 2018 15:03 - Untitled (Its Raskolnikov)
great piece of writing !! :-) a great flow and beat to this one .. well...
February 22nd, 2018 14:53 - What is love? (Girl-online)
great poem and brilliant ending ! \'\'can you guess me now , i\'m LOVE ....
February 22nd, 2018 14:43 - Unfinished symphony (Poetic25)
i agree with little gift ... a very powerful piece of writing .. i love...
February 22nd, 2018 13:47 - Are you ready? (Chacepoet)
Because starving doesn’t hurt as bad as looking in the...
February 22nd, 2018 13:32 - After The Conflict (Raymond)
my favourite lines .. \'\' the things he whispers into the morning
are...
February 22nd, 2018 13:28 - \'Smashing\' (Poetic25)
oh , this is very nice .. so short yet so effective in its message :-)
February 22nd, 2018 13:21 - BEGINNINGS. (Fay Slimm.)
hi fay ,, this is very lovely :-) your wording in this is beautiful , a...
February 22nd, 2018 05:59 - Okay (DafiaEislyn)
hello dafia , you really speak of somebody who has been hurt badly and let...
February 22nd, 2018 03:52 - Little She (Germanamericanchurch)
amazing :-) such a great poem. does love show us who we really are, ...
February 22nd, 2018 03:20 - Nieve (Themerrypapist)
brilliant ending ! :-) \'\' they who in the face of all i contemplate...
February 22nd, 2018 03:01 - I don\'t think you love me (Birddie Jane)
one sided love can feel hard... good piece of writing with a nice...
February 22nd, 2018 02:53 - Sunshine Is Light (W c)
i really love this .. great feel to this :-)
February 21st, 2018 18:09 - Constant (Mrskobrien)
hello karina , i love this ! i deal with mental health problems and at...
February 21st, 2018 09:58 - Me (Wilson)
nice :-) i enjoyed reading this , i love how you have given reference to...
February 21st, 2018 07:46 - FORGIVE and FORGET (Laura🌻)
hi laura, great piece of writing! its very hard to forgive sometimes . we...
February 21st, 2018 04:38 - VITRIOL (Laura🌻)
hi laura, sometimes we get so wound up with peoples ways , and people can...
February 21st, 2018 04:14 - My candle of addiction (Poetic25)
hello poetic25... this seems like a very strong powerful and deep piece of...
February 20th, 2018 16:08 - The Great Poetry Or the Highest Part of Life (Mottakeenur Rehman)
the ending really stood out for me ... \'\'i often hear the tunes of...
February 20th, 2018 10:37 - RAINBOW ~ REFLECTIONS ~ A Mirror Acrostic ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
very lovely ! :-) and what a beautiful picture ! i once wrote a poem about...
February 19th, 2018 07:07 - SUCHNESS. (Fay Slimm.)
lovely fay :-)
February 19th, 2018 06:56 - Skiing for Life. (Goldfinch60)
knowing how to ski is one thing, but knowing how to do life is another...
February 19th, 2018 06:48 - Skiing for Life. (Goldfinch60)
i wish life were more like skiing down a snow covered hill lol it sounds a...
February 19th, 2018 06:46 - Skiing for Life. (Goldfinch60)
i love how you started to talk about skiing but then you brought in the...
February 19th, 2018 06:42 - The Last Rail Ticket (Lorna)
sad but beautiful , lorna x
February 19th, 2018 06:36 - Sun and Moon (Cynthia)
hi cynthia .. i love this ! beautiful poem , !! i love the idea of the sun...
February 19th, 2018 05:25 - A Date With Pain (LAWLIET)
this seems like a deep piece of writing , full of immense pain .. very...
February 18th, 2018 12:17 - Depression. (Dysthymia)
writing can be a very good form of therapy , along with yoga, not sure if...
February 18th, 2018 07:12 - The Cold Moon (February) (Lorna)
i really love this! :-) and i love the moon x
February 18th, 2018 06:35 - Achtung Spitfire! (Lorna)
interesting how you have given a plane \'\' a red dress\'\' and you refer...
February 18th, 2018 06:23 - God\'s Mistake (Lorna)
god , if there is a god, he has nothing to do with the way human beings...
February 18th, 2018 06:15 - God\'s Mistake (Lorna)
hi lorna .. a well expressed poem here...\'\' man is a viscious little...
February 18th, 2018 06:11 - Numb in the bewildered hollows (Guglani29)
wow, so much intense lonliness , despair and pain ,, this is expressed so...
February 18th, 2018 04:21 - Beauty (Sidqiehs)
some very good questions ! enjoyed reading this
February 18th, 2018 03:59 - 21 again?! (Orchidee)
happy birthday orchidee, :-) however old you are lol
February 18th, 2018 03:52 - 21 again?! (Orchidee)
i like how you mention things in the past .. the dinosours, william the...
February 18th, 2018 03:50 - 21 again?! (Orchidee)
lol we are only as old as we feel . i love your reference to the dinosour...
February 18th, 2018 03:48 - The Soul\'s Window (PoeticPsycho)
a piece full of so much pain .. but so well expressed.
February 17th, 2018 04:35 - Ghetto Reality (PoeticPsycho)
hello , this poem speaks to me , of living in a reality which is harsh ,...
February 17th, 2018 04:31 - Clipped Wings (PoeticPsycho)
this seems quite a deep poem , \'\' like a bird with clipped wings \'\'...
February 17th, 2018 04:17 - Fed Up (Cynthia)
\'\' played like a card \'\' \'\' stepped on \'\' \'\' walked all over...
February 16th, 2018 15:32 - More Than. (Fay Slimm.)
wow, fay .. this is really lovely .. so many wonderful lines.. thanks for...
February 16th, 2018 04:31 - My Red Arrow (Lorna)
interesting lorna .. i love the idea of the red arrow soaring through the...
February 16th, 2018 03:19 - NOBODY (Pilled_up_snowball)
how is this a poem .. ??you have just repeated the same lines over and...
February 16th, 2018 03:09 - Under The Cloud (Satishverma)
i especially love the first few lines and your reference to the sing song...
February 16th, 2018 02:19 - The Gift Of Abandonment (Satishverma)
i love this :-)
February 16th, 2018 02:16 - Thousand Moons (Satishverma)
really lovely , i especially love this line .. \'\' the lone tree always...
February 16th, 2018 02:11 - Blue Valley (Satishverma)
\'\' a slice of moon will heal \'\' some very interesting lines here, i...
February 16th, 2018 02:05 - Love can never be denied (FredPeyer)
fred, i love this ! i love the mention of daybreak sneaking up on night, ...
February 16th, 2018 02:00 - of Teacups and Nothingness (Anais)
a teacup and a teapot should never be apart ! lol .. great piece of...
February 15th, 2018 17:51 - Loveless (Aa Harvey)
hi aa harvey , i like how you question life in this ... i think its sad ,...
February 15th, 2018 17:46 - Cover for the pain. (LonlyOne)
i think quite often we can cloud over what is truly causing us pain . a...
February 15th, 2018 17:37 - Golden Cane (StrayBray Jaramillo)
i really liike this , love the feel to this one ! :-)i love the repetiton...
February 15th, 2018 17:30 - Crooked Tree (StrayBray Jaramillo)
oh , i kind of feeli sorry for this tree.. sounds different to other...
February 15th, 2018 17:28 - HUE I (StrayBray Jaramillo)
interesting and lovely :-)
February 15th, 2018 17:25 - Unequivocal Bliss (FredPeyer)
oh , very lovely fredpeyer! i love the way she was soaked in that moment...
February 15th, 2018 17:22 - Just One Touch (Notapoet)
very lovely . heart- warming :-)
February 15th, 2018 17:19 - Finding love in this day in Age. (LonlyOne)
hello lonelyone , an interesting piece of writing , i like how you...
February 15th, 2018 17:15 - Silent words (Jo Middleton)
\'\' if the good i need is dead to me\'\' this says a lot jo , its like...
February 15th, 2018 14:00 - CAGELESS. (Fay Slimm.)
hi fay , no bird should be caged or trapped .. they have the right to be...
February 15th, 2018 05:47 - Seconds before dawn (Jo Middleton)
very good jo ! you are quite some writer ! i could feel the passion in...
February 14th, 2018 16:23 - Daffodil (Mottakeenur Rehman)
stunningly beautiful :-) :-) i loved every line , i found it so nice , how...
February 13th, 2018 11:20 - Hot and Cold (Syd)
loving you
is not a bomb,
its the diffusion of one\'\'
the bomb will...
February 13th, 2018 04:50 - Hot and Cold (Syd)
hi syd , wow, i love this :-) seems quite a strong piece and deep too . ...
February 13th, 2018 04:45 - The bright side (Jo Middleton)
beautiful jo :-) i love your mention of the flowerbed and butterflies......
February 13th, 2018 03:49 - The cup (Jo Middleton)
oh , interesting , i love your mention of your friend as a beautiful cup...
February 13th, 2018 03:42 - Disabuse is in My View (Michael J. Schaeffer)
lovely, both image and poem :-)
February 13th, 2018 03:26 - Śūnyatā (Jo Middleton)
hi Jo, wow, another brilliant piece of writing :-) it sounds to me ,...
February 13th, 2018 03:13 - Cherry Blossom Trees and Hurricanes (Clark)
\'\' cherry blossom trees and hurricanes \'\' wow, this is very lovely :-)...
February 12th, 2018 16:41 - The Wind Whispers But When Will You (Clark)
sweet and lovely :-) very nice
February 12th, 2018 16:37 - The Songbird Dove Hums (Michael J. Schaeffer)
hello i do believe you can sense such things . this was a very enjoyable...
February 11th, 2018 16:48 - Rainbow in the sky (Gerrylegister)
oh , this is very nice :-)
February 11th, 2018 15:41 - Pebble (Jabberwocky)
interesting .. i especially love the ending .. about the pebble :-)
February 11th, 2018 11:13 - Hand me down (Jo Middleton)
a sweater which has loose threads , and is itchy and scratchy .. maybe...
February 11th, 2018 06:08 - Hand me down (Jo Middleton)
BRILLIANT jo ! 😊 and i feel very sorry for the sweater.. seems nobody...
February 11th, 2018 05:54 - Charlotte (Jo Middleton)
BEAUTIFUL 😊 aaw , thankyou .. you are so kind and this is such a good...
February 10th, 2018 06:55 - Bird in the Cold Against a Warm Stone Wall (Lorna)
lovely lorna .. enjoyed :-)
February 10th, 2018 04:20 - Simplicity (AlexHoy)
the ending line caught my eye ! i feel that is true, in a way .. you speak...
February 9th, 2018 15:49 - breaking free (Adam brown)
hello brownie .. this is a really good piece of writing .. i love your...
February 9th, 2018 15:21 - Seeds... (Wolfangel73)
interesting .. i like the questioning at the end :-)
February 9th, 2018 15:10 - I\'m getting There (Discreation)
well i enjoyed reading this , so you can\'t be that bad at writing lol :-)...
February 9th, 2018 05:50 - Light or Dark (Discreation)
i like the repetiiton of the words \'\' darkness and light \'\' it...
February 9th, 2018 05:41 - Light or Dark (Discreation)
interesting and enjoyable read ! :-) nicely done .
February 9th, 2018 05:40 - Black and White (Discreation)
yes, nothing is simple as just black and white.. great piece of writing...
February 9th, 2018 05:36 - SONATA ALLA PASTA ! Per LAURA (BRIAN & ANGELA)
i think i have heard of 12 of those ... i love pasta but i don\'t like the...
February 8th, 2018 06:56 - Angels at the Diner (Lorna)
nice piece of writing :-) when we go to cafes/ diners we all need a nice...
February 8th, 2018 06:47 - Creative madness (Poetic25)
interesting ! i love this ! the wording throughout .. makes for a very...
February 8th, 2018 06:41 - Wispy bones of winter (Poetic25)
hello poetic25 .. this is truly very lovely :-) i very much enjoyed...
February 8th, 2018 05:17 - Annihilation (Jo Middleton)
wow, joe ! this is quite incredibly AMAZING for someone so young, you have...
February 8th, 2018 04:45 - Gold in the Cracks (Lily_)
wow, such a lovely and beautifully written piece of writing ... completely...
February 8th, 2018 03:32 - HOME IS WHERE THE CAT IS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
love this and i love cats , tho sadly i cannot have one of my own ! tho i...
February 7th, 2018 12:59 - THE GIRL I MARRIED (Lasergraph)
loving the ending to this \'\' you will always remain my rock \'\' good...
February 7th, 2018 12:51 - Someone needs to love you (Aa Harvey)
lovely :-) i especially love the ending .. with the healing of the heart...
February 7th, 2018 07:35 - Growing Love. (Goldfinch60)
lovely and sweet :-)
February 7th, 2018 02:57
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