Comments on community poems by Caring dove
- Wings (Unique)
i love your style of writing ! :-) again , another lovely read . so...
January 25th, 2018 07:34 - Howl (Unique)
amazing piece of poetry .. i truly loved reading this :-) :-)i love the...
January 25th, 2018 07:29 - Cracks In The Dam (Syd)
i think some tablets just cover up how we are feeling .. but what we need...
January 25th, 2018 06:54 - Cracks In The Dam (Syd)
\'\' i\'ll just paper over the dam, Hide the cracks in the bricks \'\' i...
January 25th, 2018 06:52 - Thirst (Syd)
hi syd , this is a good and strong piece of writing :-) i can only try and...
January 25th, 2018 06:41 - A Reminder That I\'m Human (Syd)
hi syd , i cannot help but love this :-) i love your reference to the...
January 25th, 2018 05:59 - floccinaucinihilipilification (Jo Middleton)
gosh , this is a real word lol floccinaucinihilipilification... never...
January 25th, 2018 05:01 - floccinaucinihilipilification (Jo Middleton)
you should check out my poem .. tunnel turning me to shadow \'\' same...
January 25th, 2018 04:57 - floccinaucinihilipilification (Jo Middleton)
wow, this is a very powerful piece of writing .. interesting how yo posted...
January 25th, 2018 04:56 - The Justice We Seek (Lizzie)
hello lizzie, great expression here :-) you did your best to stand up for...
January 24th, 2018 17:10 - Raindrops (DHA)
* interesting *
January 24th, 2018 17:00 - Raindrops (DHA)
interesing :-) i do love the reference to raindrops
January 24th, 2018 17:00 - Silence (Little_Write)
oh , very nice ! sometimes noise and distractions can be overwhelming and...
January 24th, 2018 05:00 - Caprice (Jabberwocky)
nice piece of writing :-) i am not sure cupid fires an arrow in ay...
January 24th, 2018 04:21 - A Daffodil Smiling In Yellow. (Kevin browne)
i have saved this as a favourite.. seriously loved reading this ! :-) i...
January 24th, 2018 04:17 - The embezzled halo (Jo Middleton)
hi jo.. wow :-) i can\'t help but enjoy this .. i love how you describe...
January 24th, 2018 04:09 - The Encase Wrap (Jo Middleton)
interesting way of writing .. i really liked this .. tho can i ask , who...
January 24th, 2018 04:01 - The Key of Life. (Goldfinch60)
aaw.... so sad :-( i feel so sorry for anybody who suffers with dementia ,...
January 24th, 2018 03:10 - Cold Bum (FredPeyer)
the cold bum distracted you momentarily from the deep thinking and your...
January 24th, 2018 02:48 - Empty Now (Naeners)
despite it being around \'\' emptiness \'\' it has a nice flow and a nice...
January 24th, 2018 02:07 - Empty Now (Naeners)
emptiness is not nice .. i like your repetition of the word empty and i...
January 24th, 2018 02:04 - Why (Anthony Stafford)
hello , i like you speak of your depression becoming a part of you , like...
January 24th, 2018 01:42 - She Wept And I Cried. (Kevin browne)
hi kevin :-) this is very beautiful :-) i love your mention of the...
January 23rd, 2018 16:12 - LAST NIGHT WITH ANGELA ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
how lovely :-) my favourite line .. Joined like two fallen snowflakes\'\'...
January 23rd, 2018 15:50 - The Search (Shwetafetagra)
hello .. i i really love how you have expressed yourself throughout ......
January 23rd, 2018 14:02 - Thought it stopped but it came straight back (Poetic Dan)
nice wording throughout this .. soryr to hear of yoru tinnitus , do you...
January 23rd, 2018 13:57 - I\'ll keep searching on (Poetic Dan)
sometimes it can feel hard to write out how we are feeling ... very...
January 23rd, 2018 13:53 - I Am Free (Birddie Jane)
\'\' i took that chip off my shoulder and i smashed it \'\' some powerful...
January 23rd, 2018 13:51 - Take Wing (Baylee)
this is a very dark piece of writing but so well expressed .. i can see...
January 23rd, 2018 10:05 - Winter-Clad. (Fay Slimm.)
winter does not care for its impact upon the land or on animals ... it...
January 23rd, 2018 06:19 - Winter-Clad. (Fay Slimm.)
great piece of writing fay .. i love your style of writing .. you seem...
January 23rd, 2018 06:17 - Souls Know. (Fay Slimm.)
loving the ending to this one \'\'
that destiny made them one single...
January 23rd, 2018 06:12 - I Am Cloud. (Fay Slimm.)
oh , wow , fay ! this is amazing .. the way you have spoken of the cloud...
January 23rd, 2018 06:05 - Silent Music. (Fay Slimm.)
i love the reference to \' a flowers silent music \'\' i do not think i...
January 23rd, 2018 05:50 - mirror talk (Onepauly)
oh , this is very nice , paul :-) i love the wording , its quite...
January 23rd, 2018 05:41 - ahoy! (Onepauly)
hello , i like this , it sounds about someone who feels very lost and...
January 23rd, 2018 05:32 - The Essence (Laedie Willacaw)
oh , this is very lovely :-) i love your style of writing , makes for a...
January 23rd, 2018 05:21 - Crow Shaman (Laedie Willacaw)
hello Laidie :-) an enjoyable piece of writing here i do love how you...
January 23rd, 2018 05:13 - I Am Mentally Prepared (Malayzia)
well expressed .. i don\'t understand why your friend was taken from you...
January 23rd, 2018 03:32 - The Things I Wish I Could Tell You (RIley)
aaw, i am so sorry .. this is so so painful , but you did so well writing...
January 22nd, 2018 13:23 - Advantage (Mystic)
this shows very well of a girl who feels unable to express her true...
January 22nd, 2018 06:06 - Hi Ho, Hi Ho, Its Off To Work I Go. (Wallace)
i would much prefer to listen to the sounds of nature and animals then...
January 22nd, 2018 04:43 - Frowning. (Wallace)
great ! i am agreeing with martina here, i love the repetition of these...
January 22nd, 2018 04:33 - Words. (Wallace)
aaw, this is sweet :-) she sounds like a very gentle lovely person .. nice...
January 22nd, 2018 04:29 - Groundhog Day. (Wallace)
and i am glad it does not rust ! lol. i would not want that ...
January 22nd, 2018 04:27 - Perfect Day. (Wallace)
lovely :-) i love your reference to the strawberry tarts and the sheep...
January 22nd, 2018 04:24 - Safe Haven. (Wallace)
heaven does indeed sound like it may be a nicer place then earth but who...
January 22nd, 2018 04:21 - Hell On Earth. (Wallace)
so many evil and nasty people here on earth and that is so wrong for there...
January 22nd, 2018 04:18 - Nice Day. (Wallace)
* nice piece of writing *
January 22nd, 2018 04:16 - Nice Day. (Wallace)
completely true , nature does indeed speak to us , it talks to me too .. ...
January 22nd, 2018 04:15 - Heart Felt. (Wallace)
so embaressing to fart in public lol i am sure anybody who does would be...
January 22nd, 2018 04:12 - Love (Jay123)
\'\' to always catch yourself when you fall \'\' you fell but you kept...
January 22nd, 2018 04:08 - Love (Jay123)
some very strong messages in this poem .. i love how you have spoken of...
January 22nd, 2018 04:01 - Explaining Anxiety (Naeners)
the reference to the monster is a very good idea to describe anxiety it...
January 21st, 2018 13:14 - Explaining Anxiety (Naeners)
wow .. very well said ! i like how the poem starts with less intensity and...
January 21st, 2018 13:13 - Hold The Sun Up (Naeners)
i really like this .. you make it sound as if you are like a bird in the...
January 21st, 2018 13:09 - Unfit (Naeners)
very very good :-) i love the ending , referring to ice cream . i love how...
January 21st, 2018 13:03 - Tense (Naeners)
hello .. this is very expressive, i lke the reference to your chest...
January 21st, 2018 12:57 - Dreams (Naeners)
hello .. i like the way you have worded this piece, i like the way you...
January 21st, 2018 12:53 - Rhythm (Mottakeenur Rehman)
i really do like this .. a very good piece of writing , the first line...
January 21st, 2018 10:32 - We Can All Grow with Poetry All The Time (Mottakeenur Rehman)
i love this .. writing poetry is in itself an acheivement , for sure and...
January 21st, 2018 10:23 - Superstition! (Sue.evans)
haha lol i love the ending ! \'\' damn magpies- always causing a flap-...
January 21st, 2018 09:01 - ๐My Thought Shower๐ (Sue.evans)
brilliant piece of writing ! really nice :-) and a good beat to this...
January 21st, 2018 08:57 - Black Angel (Lostinthisworld)
abuse is such a terrible thing ... very well expressed !
January 21st, 2018 08:55 - I am Beautiful (Lostinthisworld)
dark but well expressed !
January 21st, 2018 08:54 - Beauty Is Not For Me (Syd)
very descriptive.. very interesting piece of writing ... i love your...
January 21st, 2018 08:50 - Girl With The Black Hair (Syd)
great piece of writing , i completely love this one .. you know sadly some...
January 21st, 2018 08:43 - He Sat On My Hamster (Syd)
i have read this before.. if i am remembering rightly .. you are also on...
January 21st, 2018 08:41 - Normality? (2008) (Syd)
yes, good piece of writing , interesting way with words .. enjoyed
January 21st, 2018 08:31 - Pain (Hoopie)
pain is a hrd thing to deal with but somehow and sometime in our lives we...
January 21st, 2018 06:54 - Let\'s Go to the Heart (Mottakeenur Rehman)
i really like this ...enjoyed reading .. there is never such a thing as...
January 21st, 2018 06:49 - Foreseeing (Mottakeenur Rehman)
i guess maybe your mother was right lol .. your words are very beautiful...
January 21st, 2018 06:46 - Rapturous Rose (Orchidee)
very lovely :-) roses are indeed very beautiful floweres , enjoyed reading...
January 21st, 2018 06:12 - Small Town Girl (Skyebellasario)
lol i like the ending !
January 21st, 2018 05:49 - In the Company of Strangers (Lorna)
interesting piece of writing , i like this
January 21st, 2018 05:48 - Home in My Dreams (Lorna)
very nice ..:-)
January 21st, 2018 05:47 - Silver Bullet (Uma) (Lorna)
oh wow , i am really liking this one .. very unique.. very clever.. the...
January 21st, 2018 05:45 - When You Find Someone. (Kevin browne)
hi kevin, a really well expressed and beautiful piece of writing , such a...
January 21st, 2018 05:30 - Paradise Party (Orchidee)
such a beautiful and heavenly feel to this piece.. very pleasant and...
January 21st, 2018 05:02 - Honey. (Wallace)
lovely ๐
January 21st, 2018 04:56 - Shards of glass and broken hearts (MelanieSkyes)
hello melanie .. i agree with lawless , this is not the answer , i...
January 20th, 2018 13:59 - Sensitive soul (MelanieSkyes)
i feel so sorry for this girl here, either everything or nothing , both...
January 20th, 2018 13:57 - Silver Charcoal (A__pott)
very good ! :-) this is so cleverly expressed , \'\' a silver future with...
January 20th, 2018 13:52 - Sea & Sky (A__pott)
hello, interesting writing , i love the reference to the sea andn the sky...
January 20th, 2018 13:49 - To Find Yourself (AlexHoy)
very nice :-) we should never be scared to who we are , tho unfortunately...
January 20th, 2018 13:47 - wishing for wings (Symptomsofstarlight)
so much pain in the last ending lines, i fel sorry for her .. she just...
January 20th, 2018 11:53 - \"Somebody as Nobody\" (Merissa)
i like this :-) its good to feel different and unique but nobody should...
January 20th, 2018 11:43 - A flower (Mystic)
was this a collaberation? because it says you and scrambled letters , i am...
January 20th, 2018 11:38 - Keep Taking Those Steps (Brooklyn6timesplus)
lovely :-)
January 20th, 2018 11:29 - Perilous Oceans (Dorian Dark)
very nice :-)
January 20th, 2018 11:11 - Moth Without The Flame (Abpoet18)
i love how you speak of the angel of my soul , and the pretty moth which...
January 20th, 2018 11:09 - Purple Information (Abpoet18)
interesting writing . \'\' the information turns purple and loses its...
January 20th, 2018 11:03 - On The Moon (Abpoet18)
such great expression ! :-) i love the reference to the fire dragon and...
January 20th, 2018 10:58 - Merged Souls (Abpoet18)
\'\' kissing is like breaking depression in half \'\' this is a very good...
January 20th, 2018 10:54 - Merged Souls (Abpoet18)
brilliant! amazing piece of writing .. some very good wording here .....
January 20th, 2018 10:52 - Gold is your soul (Aa Harvey)
hello aa harvey .. so nice to be able to read this :-) really , i read...
January 20th, 2018 10:43 - Chalk (Aa Harvey)
really really beautiful :-) i especially love the first line , about her...
January 20th, 2018 09:57 - Rainy Day Imagination (Tony36)
nice write :-) escapism is great and we should always escape into the...
January 20th, 2018 09:55 - I prefer the grey (Birddie Jane)
you are so right in what you say .. grey can change colour, the grey...
January 20th, 2018 08:15 - I prefer the grey (Birddie Jane)
hi jessie :-) wow , i love this :-) i like you thought about what is...
January 20th, 2018 08:13
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