Comments on community poems by Caring dove



  • Wings (Unique) i love your style of writing ! :-) again , another lovely read . so...
    January 25th, 2018 07:34
  • Howl (Unique) amazing piece of poetry .. i truly loved reading this :-) :-)i love the...
    January 25th, 2018 07:29
  • Cracks In The Dam (Syd) i think some tablets just cover up how we are feeling .. but what we need...
    January 25th, 2018 06:54
  • Cracks In The Dam (Syd) \'\' i\'ll just paper over the dam, Hide the cracks in the bricks \'\' i...
    January 25th, 2018 06:52
  • Thirst (Syd) hi syd , this is a good and strong piece of writing :-) i can only try and...
    January 25th, 2018 06:41
  • A Reminder That I\'m Human (Syd) hi syd , i cannot help but love this :-) i love your reference to the...
    January 25th, 2018 05:59
  • floccinaucinihilipilification (Jo Middleton) gosh , this is a real word lol floccinaucinihilipilification... never...
    January 25th, 2018 05:01
  • floccinaucinihilipilification (Jo Middleton) you should check out my poem .. tunnel turning me to shadow \'\' same...
    January 25th, 2018 04:57
  • floccinaucinihilipilification (Jo Middleton) wow, this is a very powerful piece of writing .. interesting how yo posted...
    January 25th, 2018 04:56
  • The Justice We Seek (Lizzie) hello lizzie, great expression here :-) you did your best to stand up for...
    January 24th, 2018 17:10
  • Raindrops (DHA) * interesting *
    January 24th, 2018 17:00
  • Raindrops (DHA) interesing :-) i do love the reference to raindrops
    January 24th, 2018 17:00
  • Silence (Little_Write) oh , very nice ! sometimes noise and distractions can be overwhelming and...
    January 24th, 2018 05:00
  • Caprice (Jabberwocky) nice piece of writing :-) i am not sure cupid fires an arrow in ay...
    January 24th, 2018 04:21
  • A Daffodil Smiling In Yellow. (Kevin browne) i have saved this as a favourite.. seriously loved reading this ! :-) i...
    January 24th, 2018 04:17
  • The embezzled halo (Jo Middleton) hi jo.. wow :-) i can\'t help but enjoy this .. i love how you describe...
    January 24th, 2018 04:09
  • The Encase Wrap (Jo Middleton) interesting way of writing .. i really liked this .. tho can i ask , who...
    January 24th, 2018 04:01
  • The Key of Life. (Goldfinch60) aaw.... so sad :-( i feel so sorry for anybody who suffers with dementia ,...
    January 24th, 2018 03:10
  • Cold Bum (FredPeyer) the cold bum distracted you momentarily from the deep thinking and your...
    January 24th, 2018 02:48
  • Empty Now (Naeners) despite it being around \'\' emptiness \'\' it has a nice flow and a nice...
    January 24th, 2018 02:07
  • Empty Now (Naeners) emptiness is not nice .. i like your repetition of the word empty and i...
    January 24th, 2018 02:04
  • Why (Anthony Stafford) hello , i like you speak of your depression becoming a part of you , like...
    January 24th, 2018 01:42
  • She Wept And I Cried. (Kevin browne) hi kevin :-) this is very beautiful :-) i love your mention of the...
    January 23rd, 2018 16:12
  • LAST NIGHT WITH ANGELA ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) how lovely :-) my favourite line .. Joined like two fallen snowflakes\'\'...
    January 23rd, 2018 15:50
  • The Search (Shwetafetagra) hello .. i i really love how you have expressed yourself throughout ......
    January 23rd, 2018 14:02
  • Thought it stopped but it came straight back (Poetic Dan) nice wording throughout this .. soryr to hear of yoru tinnitus , do you...
    January 23rd, 2018 13:57
  • I\'ll keep searching on (Poetic Dan) sometimes it can feel hard to write out how we are feeling ... very...
    January 23rd, 2018 13:53
  • I Am Free (Birddie Jane) \'\' i took that chip off my shoulder and i smashed it \'\' some powerful...
    January 23rd, 2018 13:51
  • Take Wing (Baylee) this is a very dark piece of writing but so well expressed .. i can see...
    January 23rd, 2018 10:05
  • Winter-Clad. (Fay Slimm.) winter does not care for its impact upon the land or on animals ... it...
    January 23rd, 2018 06:19
  • Winter-Clad. (Fay Slimm.) great piece of writing fay .. i love your style of writing .. you seem...
    January 23rd, 2018 06:17
  • Souls Know. (Fay Slimm.) loving the ending to this one \'\' that destiny made them one single...
    January 23rd, 2018 06:12
  • I Am Cloud. (Fay Slimm.) oh , wow , fay ! this is amazing .. the way you have spoken of the cloud...
    January 23rd, 2018 06:05
  • Silent Music. (Fay Slimm.) i love the reference to \' a flowers silent music \'\' i do not think i...
    January 23rd, 2018 05:50
  • mirror talk (Onepauly) oh , this is very nice , paul :-) i love the wording , its quite...
    January 23rd, 2018 05:41
  • ahoy! (Onepauly) hello , i like this , it sounds about someone who feels very lost and...
    January 23rd, 2018 05:32
  • The Essence (Laedie Willacaw) oh , this is very lovely :-) i love your style of writing , makes for a...
    January 23rd, 2018 05:21
  • Crow Shaman (Laedie Willacaw) hello Laidie :-) an enjoyable piece of writing here i do love how you...
    January 23rd, 2018 05:13
  • I Am Mentally Prepared (Malayzia) well expressed .. i don\'t understand why your friend was taken from you...
    January 23rd, 2018 03:32
  • The Things I Wish I Could Tell You (RIley) aaw, i am so sorry .. this is so so painful , but you did so well writing...
    January 22nd, 2018 13:23
  • Advantage (Mystic) this shows very well of a girl who feels unable to express her true...
    January 22nd, 2018 06:06
  • Hi Ho, Hi Ho, Its Off To Work I Go. (Wallace) i would much prefer to listen to the sounds of nature and animals then...
    January 22nd, 2018 04:43
  • Frowning. (Wallace) great ! i am agreeing with martina here, i love the repetition of these...
    January 22nd, 2018 04:33
  • Words. (Wallace) aaw, this is sweet :-) she sounds like a very gentle lovely person .. nice...
    January 22nd, 2018 04:29
  • Groundhog Day. (Wallace) and i am glad it does not rust ! lol. i would not want that ...
    January 22nd, 2018 04:27
  • Perfect Day. (Wallace) lovely :-) i love your reference to the strawberry tarts and the sheep...
    January 22nd, 2018 04:24
  • Safe Haven. (Wallace) heaven does indeed sound like it may be a nicer place then earth but who...
    January 22nd, 2018 04:21
  • Hell On Earth. (Wallace) so many evil and nasty people here on earth and that is so wrong for there...
    January 22nd, 2018 04:18
  • Nice Day. (Wallace) * nice piece of writing *
    January 22nd, 2018 04:16
  • Nice Day. (Wallace) completely true , nature does indeed speak to us , it talks to me too .. ...
    January 22nd, 2018 04:15
  • Heart Felt. (Wallace) so embaressing to fart in public lol i am sure anybody who does would be...
    January 22nd, 2018 04:12
  • Love (Jay123) \'\' to always catch yourself when you fall \'\' you fell but you kept...
    January 22nd, 2018 04:08
  • Love (Jay123) some very strong messages in this poem .. i love how you have spoken of...
    January 22nd, 2018 04:01
  • Explaining Anxiety (Naeners) the reference to the monster is a very good idea to describe anxiety it...
    January 21st, 2018 13:14
  • Explaining Anxiety (Naeners) wow .. very well said ! i like how the poem starts with less intensity and...
    January 21st, 2018 13:13
  • Hold The Sun Up (Naeners) i really like this .. you make it sound as if you are like a bird in the...
    January 21st, 2018 13:09
  • Unfit (Naeners) very very good :-) i love the ending , referring to ice cream . i love how...
    January 21st, 2018 13:03
  • Tense (Naeners) hello .. this is very expressive, i lke the reference to your chest...
    January 21st, 2018 12:57
  • Dreams (Naeners) hello .. i like the way you have worded this piece, i like the way you...
    January 21st, 2018 12:53
  • Rhythm (Mottakeenur Rehman) i really do like this .. a very good piece of writing , the first line...
    January 21st, 2018 10:32
  • We Can All Grow with Poetry All The Time (Mottakeenur Rehman) i love this .. writing poetry is in itself an acheivement , for sure and...
    January 21st, 2018 10:23
  • Superstition! (Sue.evans) haha lol i love the ending ! \'\' damn magpies- always causing a flap-...
    January 21st, 2018 09:01
  • ๐Ÿ˜‚My Thought Shower๐Ÿ˜‚ (Sue.evans) brilliant piece of writing ! really nice :-) and a good beat to this...
    January 21st, 2018 08:57
  • Black Angel (Lostinthisworld) abuse is such a terrible thing ... very well expressed !
    January 21st, 2018 08:55
  • I am Beautiful (Lostinthisworld) dark but well expressed !
    January 21st, 2018 08:54
  • Beauty Is Not For Me (Syd) very descriptive.. very interesting piece of writing ... i love your...
    January 21st, 2018 08:50
  • Girl With The Black Hair (Syd) great piece of writing , i completely love this one .. you know sadly some...
    January 21st, 2018 08:43
  • He Sat On My Hamster (Syd) i have read this before.. if i am remembering rightly .. you are also on...
    January 21st, 2018 08:41
  • Normality? (2008) (Syd) yes, good piece of writing , interesting way with words .. enjoyed
    January 21st, 2018 08:31
  • Pain (Hoopie) pain is a hrd thing to deal with but somehow and sometime in our lives we...
    January 21st, 2018 06:54
  • Let\'s Go to the Heart (Mottakeenur Rehman) i really like this ...enjoyed reading .. there is never such a thing as...
    January 21st, 2018 06:49
  • Foreseeing (Mottakeenur Rehman) i guess maybe your mother was right lol .. your words are very beautiful...
    January 21st, 2018 06:46
  • Rapturous Rose (Orchidee) very lovely :-) roses are indeed very beautiful floweres , enjoyed reading...
    January 21st, 2018 06:12
  • Small Town Girl (Skyebellasario) lol i like the ending !
    January 21st, 2018 05:49
  • In the Company of Strangers (Lorna) interesting piece of writing , i like this
    January 21st, 2018 05:48
  • Home in My Dreams (Lorna) very nice ..:-)
    January 21st, 2018 05:47
  • Silver Bullet (Uma) (Lorna) oh wow , i am really liking this one .. very unique.. very clever.. the...
    January 21st, 2018 05:45
  • When You Find Someone. (Kevin browne) hi kevin, a really well expressed and beautiful piece of writing , such a...
    January 21st, 2018 05:30
  • Paradise Party (Orchidee) such a beautiful and heavenly feel to this piece.. very pleasant and...
    January 21st, 2018 05:02
  • Honey. (Wallace) lovely ๐Ÿ˜Š
    January 21st, 2018 04:56
  • Shards of glass and broken hearts (MelanieSkyes) hello melanie .. i agree with lawless , this is not the answer , i...
    January 20th, 2018 13:59
  • Sensitive soul (MelanieSkyes) i feel so sorry for this girl here, either everything or nothing , both...
    January 20th, 2018 13:57
  • Silver Charcoal (A__pott) very good ! :-) this is so cleverly expressed , \'\' a silver future with...
    January 20th, 2018 13:52
  • Sea & Sky (A__pott) hello, interesting writing , i love the reference to the sea andn the sky...
    January 20th, 2018 13:49
  • To Find Yourself (AlexHoy) very nice :-) we should never be scared to who we are , tho unfortunately...
    January 20th, 2018 13:47
  • wishing for wings (Symptomsofstarlight) so much pain in the last ending lines, i fel sorry for her .. she just...
    January 20th, 2018 11:53
  • \"Somebody as Nobody\" (Merissa) i like this :-) its good to feel different and unique but nobody should...
    January 20th, 2018 11:43
  • A flower (Mystic) was this a collaberation? because it says you and scrambled letters , i am...
    January 20th, 2018 11:38
  • Keep Taking Those Steps (Brooklyn6timesplus) lovely :-)
    January 20th, 2018 11:29
  • Perilous Oceans (Dorian Dark) very nice :-)
    January 20th, 2018 11:11
  • Moth Without The Flame (Abpoet18) i love how you speak of the angel of my soul , and the pretty moth which...
    January 20th, 2018 11:09
  • Purple Information (Abpoet18) interesting writing . \'\' the information turns purple and loses its...
    January 20th, 2018 11:03
  • On The Moon (Abpoet18) such great expression ! :-) i love the reference to the fire dragon and...
    January 20th, 2018 10:58
  • Merged Souls (Abpoet18) \'\' kissing is like breaking depression in half \'\' this is a very good...
    January 20th, 2018 10:54
  • Merged Souls (Abpoet18) brilliant! amazing piece of writing .. some very good wording here .....
    January 20th, 2018 10:52
  • Gold is your soul (Aa Harvey) hello aa harvey .. so nice to be able to read this :-) really , i read...
    January 20th, 2018 10:43
  • Chalk (Aa Harvey) really really beautiful :-) i especially love the first line , about her...
    January 20th, 2018 09:57
  • Rainy Day Imagination (Tony36) nice write :-) escapism is great and we should always escape into the...
    January 20th, 2018 09:55
  • I prefer the grey (Birddie Jane) you are so right in what you say .. grey can change colour, the grey...
    January 20th, 2018 08:15
  • I prefer the grey (Birddie Jane) hi jessie :-) wow , i love this :-) i like you thought about what is...
    January 20th, 2018 08:13


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