Comments on community poems by swingline

• Art (Ace-of-spades) Yes all art is therapeutic . That\'s why I write poetry , listen to music...
  May 7th, 2017 14:51
• Where Everything Falls into Place (Lauragarcia) You should let God bring you the right person . I didn\'t wait for God and...
  May 7th, 2017 10:36
• Apcolyspe (McKinsey Rose Lynn) It will happen someday and it will be awful .
  May 7th, 2017 10:30
• Vengeance Vindications (Orchidee) Was reading and studying Psalms 110 this morning and now I have two works...
  May 7th, 2017 10:05
• Babel (Jabberwocky) I picture a relationship with another person . With you rising in your...
  May 7th, 2017 09:53
• AT THE CONCERT (Michael Edwards) Abstract ? I see none in either the painting or poem . Words make music in...
  May 7th, 2017 07:55
• Finally Free (DarkRider) Ha ha , Outback\'s comments are the vegetable soup of emotions . Full of...
  May 7th, 2017 06:37
• Scratching (Jabberwocky) Oh I inhale coffee like air . Never an hour per cup . I never liked...
  May 7th, 2017 06:21
• Sad Songs (Edthepoet) Discombobulated , dazed , not there . A little sadness in the music helps...
  May 7th, 2017 06:13
• The Lily. (Goldfinch60) I love to garden too . Much hard work but the results are gratifying...
  May 7th, 2017 06:00
• PRAYER FOR GOD\'S BLESSING ~ EVERY DAY ~ A 6 6 2 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) I swing my feet out of bed and I pray to God . That way everyday starts...
  May 7th, 2017 05:51
• The Sitting Man (Poetboy123) Excellent from beginning to end . Such works do illuminate . I ponder from...
  May 6th, 2017 17:59
• I am a cat (Ollie192) I\'m a cat person and losing a cat is like losing a child . All my...
  May 6th, 2017 17:16
• Rain (LML) Yes I guess such manipulative people really don\'t care about a person...
  May 6th, 2017 17:12
• PLEASE DEPRESSION (NEVER_LOSE_HOPE/ rachel...) Not an easy task to accomplish but with hope and time and help you can .
  May 6th, 2017 17:08
• Nightmares (Bibbeck) This is a powerful look into our nightmares from youth to adulthood ....
  May 6th, 2017 13:36
• Last Night. (Ace-of-spades) Sleep is critical to our health . That\'s when our bodies repair...
  May 6th, 2017 13:32
• DINING ETIQUETTE (Michael Edwards) Impressive display , I\'m amazed at the attitude . Did Jesus wash his...
  May 6th, 2017 12:58
• Just Don\'t Film It (Garry) Dark as dried blood .
  May 6th, 2017 11:37
• SPRING SUNRISES ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) My sun rises when I have coffee . Even if it\'s still dark outside . Yes I...
  May 6th, 2017 07:55
• Definition of Optimist (Swingline) Thank you Diamond for reading .
  May 6th, 2017 06:55
• My girl asks a poem about her (Rajkumar) I imagine you have written many about her .
  May 5th, 2017 18:52
• The Best Moments (Kurt Philip Behm) The best moments cannot be found in our lifetimes . But after .
  May 5th, 2017 18:50
• Follow Me (Baylee) Going the wrong direction .
  May 5th, 2017 18:49
• Following My Crown (Keziah Amore\') So right when you say no one can save themselves or anyone else .
  May 5th, 2017 18:47
• help me. (Ruth Fadairo) You are angry at this world . You know there is something beyond Earth and...
  May 5th, 2017 18:46
• I\'m Fine. (Ace) If you can be content with your state of mind then you are one of the...
  May 5th, 2017 18:41
• Tired... (Ace-of-spades) You sound like you have been ground down to dust then blown away . You...
  May 5th, 2017 18:30
• Joy Unshared (Jabberwocky) I\'m left wondering about the circumstances of this poem . There must be...
  May 5th, 2017 18:25
• Ode to an Ant (Lizzy Renee) All life is sacred , those who take life for granted live to reget it . As...
  May 5th, 2017 18:22
• A Rag to Retire (Vivi) All things can be made new again .
  May 5th, 2017 18:15
• The Disembodied Hand part 1 (Short Story) (Tony36) I remember that \"thing\" . It had role on a TV show back in the sixties ....
  May 5th, 2017 18:01
• Caged (DarkRider) Yes I read and reread your poem from your perspective and I could feel the...
  May 5th, 2017 16:45
• RAINBOW OF ROSES ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Our roses have been blooming since late March . We went through a four...
  May 5th, 2017 16:39
• Undertow. (Fay Slimm.) A stark insight into the devastation of war and how it affects the...
  May 5th, 2017 16:27
• Remembering Natures Wonder. (Goldfinch60) Can you even imagine the gift of Heaven and what it will be . Such...
  May 5th, 2017 14:40
• Portion Possession (Orchidee) Our purpose on Earth is to glorify his name in all we do and say .
  May 5th, 2017 14:33
• Honor (SorrowfullyHappy) Well if you don\'t stop doing illegal things you will become a...
  May 5th, 2017 14:23
• The school of awareness (Avigail) By hybrid I take it you mean we are created in the image of God . And...
  May 5th, 2017 14:13
• Rodney Dad (Angel-baby28) I was raised I the military and remember the absence of my father...
  May 5th, 2017 13:52
• scared (Shayl) Sometimes an optical illusion occurs in the mind of the heart . Like...
  May 5th, 2017 13:48
• \"All Lies\" (Hezekiahrose1) Some people want you to fail because they are a failure already and hate...
  May 5th, 2017 13:18
• Stop racism (Dave poet) Racism is a tool used by the elite to perpetuate their existence . Look at...
  May 5th, 2017 13:14
• Definition of Optimist (Swingline) Thank you twice and once again .
  May 5th, 2017 12:44
• Definition of Optimist (Swingline) My someone is feeling froggy this morning , ha ha . Touché ! Thank you...
  May 5th, 2017 06:52
• Wet Dreams (Mandi) 100 years ago it would have been banned in Boston . Sweet dreams are made...
  May 5th, 2017 01:05
• take caution with me (SorrowfullyHappy) Deep in the bottom of the sea , miles deep where no light penetrates from...
  May 5th, 2017 00:49
• Devil\'s Daughter (Stella_Suicide) Love the duality of this poem or I should say three poems . The first poem...
  May 5th, 2017 00:36
• Him. (Stella_Suicide) Love like ballast in a ship\'s hull keeps the ship upright , balanced ,...
  May 5th, 2017 00:30
• -Please- (Stella_Suicide) Do you put your razorblades in your mouth and suck on them to warm them up...
  May 5th, 2017 00:26
• TOOL (Tristan Robert Lange) Ha Ha , I\'m a fool for your wisdom .
  May 5th, 2017 00:02
• Perfectly Imperfect (Uniquemistique) Those who oppress you are certainly less than perect . I\'m sure in their...
  May 4th, 2017 23:43
• She Has Sadly Passed On (Brooklyn6timesplus) Any mother worth her salt wants the best for her child . Very well related...
  May 4th, 2017 23:40
• Lament Learnings (Orchidee) A very tangible message (and history of forgetfulness) A message I need to...
  May 4th, 2017 20:59
• For Are Fallen Soldiers (Angel-baby28) Beautiful tribute to those who fell and those still living . No one except...
  May 4th, 2017 20:51
• Human Sex Trafficking (SadInterior) Before any problem can be solved the public must be made aware . There is...
  May 4th, 2017 20:46
• Scared (Wren Ann) If he really loves you he will wait . And you should too . Without a bond...
  May 4th, 2017 20:39
• Know Me now (Himselforme) Deep well said . A waterfail wonder .
  May 4th, 2017 20:36
• CRITICAL PIVOTAL MOMENTS (AmbiguousOdist) My father served in WWII in the Pacific . He was seventeen when he went in...
  May 4th, 2017 20:22
• Opposites Attract (Misaacs72) Yes that caught me by surprise ! Well said . Ha Ha , such truth
  May 4th, 2017 19:44
• Sights of Mine. (Jal) I think I know where you are going here . One has to walk on both sides of...
  May 4th, 2017 19:39
• Home (ScottyWild) Everyone should have one great adventure in their lifetimes .
  May 4th, 2017 19:33
• Free (Jmanning5) One has to learn to forget their mistakes . What started off as a hike on...
  May 4th, 2017 18:09
• Storms , Sailboats and God at Sea (Swingline) \"Oh Well\" , song by Fleetwood Mac . Goes something like this . \"I...
  May 4th, 2017 17:46
• Wee Willy (Swingline) Thank you Bibbeck for taking the time to read .
  May 4th, 2017 16:19
• The secrets we hide. (Lost-but-not-broken17) Yes once you have told them and they no longer want to be your friend they...
  May 4th, 2017 15:48
• -Savior- (Stella_Suicide) It seems birds of a feather flock together . Here both parties dine on the...
  May 4th, 2017 15:45
• 4 May, 2017 (Severus Alexander) Between the darkness and light gives me a secure sense of balance ,...
  May 4th, 2017 15:39
• thinking of you (Karla) When two become one and then devided again the two haves will crave the...
  May 4th, 2017 15:37
• The Storm (Bibbeck) Ha Ha , I love thunder storms but hate lightning !
  May 4th, 2017 15:34
• Dreams (Highlander50) All I see is skin and bone . Throw some flesh on that skeleton . What kind...
  May 4th, 2017 11:09
• Ode to Rain (Ed Ward) I see no need for changes .
  May 4th, 2017 11:05
• GIVING UP (NEVER_LOSE_HOPE/ rachel...) Yes God will be here always for us if we only ask . But we have to seek ,...
  May 4th, 2017 10:02
• Death Grip (Lizzy Renee) You have nothing to fear in the hands of God .
  May 4th, 2017 09:18
• Wee Willy (Swingline) I was hoping for funny but I will take very good anyday . Thank you Gary .
  May 4th, 2017 08:28
• Wee Willy (Swingline) Left or right or down the middle. Thank you Goldfinch 60 for reading .
  May 4th, 2017 08:04
• Wee Willy (Swingline) I\'m glad you liked it Diamond . Thank you for reading .
  May 4th, 2017 07:57
• Raindrop. (Goldfinch60) A gentle rain is so soothing to everything it touches .
  May 4th, 2017 05:17
• WHATS YOUR NUMBER (1 - 10) ? (BRIAN & ANGELA) \"7:12\" Do unto others as you would have then do unto you . A universal...
  May 4th, 2017 05:13
• Broken Heart (Angel-baby28) Oh the bond between mother and daughter . So great even when it is gone .
  May 3rd, 2017 20:23
• burn (Not Important) Impressive . Two tales of destruction welded into one disaster .
  May 3rd, 2017 20:14
• On a Silent Motion (Poetae Opus) Image rich . The conquest of the soul liberates .
  May 3rd, 2017 20:02
• The Last Goodbye (Garry) Perhaps you could do those things alone in remembrance of him . After my...
  May 3rd, 2017 19:37
• Distorted Reality (Keziah Amore\') Wonderful attitude , there is a destined purpose for us on Earth . And it...
  May 3rd, 2017 19:24
• Behind the Farce (Bibbeck) The connection between mother and daughter is an unbreakable bond no...
  May 3rd, 2017 19:02
• -Fear- (Stella_Suicide) Fear is a natural instinct of survival . It tells us when to run or fight...
  May 3rd, 2017 18:49
• i give up (Mrnoname1999) You are depending on her to make your world instead of you making a world...
  May 3rd, 2017 18:42
• Face the Music (Etquivivuntlibersuntpauci) When you live in the pit of depression it becomes increasingly difficult...
  May 3rd, 2017 18:35
• what is it about me (SorrowfullyHappy) You are probably way too over sensitive . Tell me , can you read the minds...
  May 3rd, 2017 12:39
• Storms , Sailboats and God at Sea (Swingline) Thank you BRIANSODES ! I\'m overwhelmed by your comment .
  May 3rd, 2017 12:19
• Direction (Dave poet) Few know what they will be when they grow up . That\'s why a well rounded...
  May 3rd, 2017 11:16
• C H L O R O P H Y L L ~ A Blank Verse Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA) Don\'t forget the algae in the sea . Most of our oxygen comes from such ....
  May 3rd, 2017 11:13
• PAIN (NEVER_LOSE_HOPE/ rachel...) Yes God does answer prayers . He feels your pain . Reach out and ask for...
  May 3rd, 2017 11:08
• Just An Octave Away (Magenta1) Thre perfect song has but one note . Such cannot be said of a perfect poem...
  May 3rd, 2017 10:58
• to who it may concern (Elizabeth) I would say this concerns everyone and their cat , dog , and the pet...
  May 3rd, 2017 10:51
• pretending (Shayl) Life\'s a mess isn\'t it . As the North Mississippi Allstars say ,...
  May 3rd, 2017 10:49
• The Stones Know. (Fay Slimm.) Epic encapsulation of the dire dread of mining and the children who were...
  May 3rd, 2017 10:44
• Other People\'s Voices (Garry) Hmm , I can\'t sing so what are her choices ?
  May 3rd, 2017 08:03
• stop (SYLVIA) The poem meanders around dancing upon truths and comes to a stunning...
  May 3rd, 2017 02:36
• Hand in hand (Garry) That relationship I\'m sorry to say was cut short . I heard that happened...
  May 3rd, 2017 02:21