Comments on community poems by swingline

• Holes in my head- a Poem about anxiety (Tori) Well you must be still young to ride a skateboard but you ability to write...
  May 24th, 2017 11:56
• Rainy Day Women (Swingline) Thank you Rajkumar for taking the time to read and leave a comment .
  May 24th, 2017 09:43
• THE WHITE FROCKED MAID (Michael Edwards) Phanstasmorigal is the vison I see . The vapours specter rendering a...
  May 24th, 2017 07:33
• Leftovers (WriteBeLight) ThanksgIvings turrkey , cold from the fridge , makes a good day ! With...
  May 24th, 2017 07:21
• Strengthened by Words. (Goldfinch60) Why can\'t writing be reality . As bright and beautiful and full of...
  May 24th, 2017 05:12
• M A N C H E S T E R ~ Choose Love ~ An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA) No other word I can think of fits better than the word grief . Grieving ,...
  May 24th, 2017 05:06
• Jamie (Mandi) A mother\'s love is the greatest love of all .
  May 23rd, 2017 20:56
• A light to manchester (Highlander50) I think the sense of community will be stronger . From the North , South ,...
  May 23rd, 2017 18:53
• Weather (SorrowfullyHappy) Ha ha , where would be if not for the weather to talk about .
  May 23rd, 2017 16:13
• Table Manners (WriteBeLight) Yes it is quite disconcerting . If you notice at all it\'s a problem . And...
  May 23rd, 2017 16:12
• Bubbles (Tony36) I like the ballerinas of the pond , the water spider . More graceful than...
  May 23rd, 2017 11:28
• SUICIDE BOMBERS ~ A Lament (7 7 Sonnet) (BRIAN & ANGELA) Death gives them validity . Take away their ability to destroy they are...
  May 23rd, 2017 11:25
• Rogation Wednesday (Orchidee) Basic Lord\'s prayer . What would we be without it . I recite it every day...
  May 23rd, 2017 11:15
• Muse Calling (Augustus) Amusing isn\'t it . The muse . While we stand (or more likely sit) bemused...
  May 23rd, 2017 11:08
• The Bubble. (Goldfinch60) My prayers and sympathy , all I have to give .
  May 23rd, 2017 02:07
• LIMMERICK 29 (Michael Edwards) Ha ha , a simple twist of fate .
  May 23rd, 2017 01:53
• Who Is God ? (Swingline) Thank you Goldfinch60 twice in one night .
  May 23rd, 2017 01:04
• Real (Queen_Of_Darkness) How can anything made of man be real . Stonehenge , the pyramids ,...
  May 23rd, 2017 00:56
• Mary (Swingline) Thank you Diamond for reading and great great comment .
  May 22nd, 2017 19:01
• Freight Train (WriteBeLight) Ha ha , where I last worked was between two tracks . Sometimes to avoid...
  May 22nd, 2017 18:19
• today is my birthday (Avigail) A positive approach to the aging masses .
  May 22nd, 2017 14:31
• Cook (Tony36) I cook too much as you can see My pants won\'t zip The buttons pop...
  May 22nd, 2017 11:11
• Rogation Tuesday (Orchidee) Seek first the Kingdom of God and all else will be provided . Another...
  May 22nd, 2017 11:00
• Mary (Swingline) Thank you Michael for reading and your smile .
  May 22nd, 2017 09:38
• Mary (Swingline) Thank you Tony36 for reading .
  May 22nd, 2017 08:38
• COOPERATION ? YES ! An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Good idea but for the sinful inclination of man . The golden rule goes so...
  May 22nd, 2017 03:48
• THE CLOAK I WEAR (Michael Edwards) Does the cloak of uncertainly protect the without from the within ? Or the...
  May 22nd, 2017 03:20
• Struggle to Nobility. (Goldfinch60) Nothing to be ashamed of if you know you did your best .
  May 22nd, 2017 03:14
• The Forge (Augustus) I watch Forged In Fire every chance I get . I see the personality in each...
  May 21st, 2017 18:36
• Rogation Monday (Orchidee) Another reminder of the day ofJesus\'s assecension into heaven . A sight...
  May 21st, 2017 17:33
• New Glasses (WriteBeLight) The right glasses are just spiffy When you look out they work...
  May 21st, 2017 17:14
• THE LOVE OF GOD ~ A 4 4 3 3 Rhyming Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) The message radiates loud and clear . Reminds me of Psalms 136 .
  May 21st, 2017 08:30
• Them and Us (Garry) And that cape keeps getting in the way . And that udderwear worn outside...
  May 21st, 2017 08:24
• I DELETED IT! (Mandi) That is so frustrating when then happens . So much so you never forget the...
  May 21st, 2017 08:17
• Feeding Frenzy (Jabberwocky) Image invoking , there was much not said .
  May 21st, 2017 08:11
• Hollow Reed (Swingline) Thank you Diamond for taking time to read .
  May 21st, 2017 07:38
• Hollow Reed (Swingline) Thank you Michael Edwards for reading .
  May 21st, 2017 07:34
• Sunlight - Haiku. (Goldfinch60) If you added \"So\" to the beginning of the poem I think it would make it...
  May 21st, 2017 01:51
• Hollow Reed (Swingline) Ah ! Thank you orchidee for such a beautiful comment .
  May 21st, 2017 01:44
• Troubesome Love (Swingline) Thank you Goldfinch60 for your reading and nice comment .
  May 21st, 2017 00:52
• LIMERICK 29 (Michael Edwards) Your lime. . . rick (hic) is spot on (hic)
  May 21st, 2017 00:39
• Try A Little Harder (Brooklyn6timesplus) Yes those who have dreams (I have a dream) move the gears of change .
  May 20th, 2017 22:36
• Empty (Mandi) You should write an acrostic poem using the word E M P T Y It...
  May 20th, 2017 22:32
• Thrown Around (Hale Strider) It seems all my life that girls were always attracted to boys who were no...
  May 20th, 2017 22:30
• Where did we go wrong (Queen_RayBaby) If it was wrong the first time , it\'s wrong the second time around .
  May 20th, 2017 20:10
• Hips and Ribs (SheWasTheSun) A titillating poem full of tease and exasperation . Well done .
  May 20th, 2017 20:07
• You Were Warned (SheWasTheSun) Ha ha , so good ! I was warned !
  May 20th, 2017 20:02
• me at my worst (CS Parker) Reminds me of lost love who left me for the paper boy .
  May 20th, 2017 19:57
• The fix (Sydneyshiann) Love is all about taking and not giving . The more two lover take of each...
  May 20th, 2017 19:56
• Back Against the Ground (BlueX) Sometimes you have to look in every room in the house of creation to find...
  May 20th, 2017 19:50
• Meaning. (Daniel Nolan) Keep looking , I was.like you once , now I\'m full of meaning .
  May 20th, 2017 19:44
• Not Sure (The 2 A.M Writer) I\'m not sure either . Turning wine into water would be a greater miracle
  May 20th, 2017 19:34
• An Ode to West Virginia (AppalachianHellFire) Pocket poverty . The United States has way too many pocket poverty sites ....
  May 20th, 2017 11:06
• Grieving? (Orchidee) Cats are so full of personality it\'s hard not to become attached to them...
  May 20th, 2017 10:47
• Voter (Jabberwocky) Poem and poet\'s comment give pause for reflections .
  May 20th, 2017 09:05
• Betrayal And Broken Trust (WriteBeLight) Jesus did not raise his hand against another . So what gives any man the...
  May 20th, 2017 06:12
• Nature\'s Masterpiece (Mandi) Sometimes the simplest things make the most beautiful art . Rain and...
  May 20th, 2017 06:06
• TEMPEST (Michael Edwards) The painting reminds me of photographs taken by the Hubble telescope of...
  May 20th, 2017 06:01
• FRIENDS ~ An Anaphoric Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Jesus is our greatest friend as you have already pointed out Brian . All...
  May 20th, 2017 05:54
• Ludwig. (Goldfinch60) The music was almost as remarkable as the man . The obstacles he had to...
  May 20th, 2017 05:50
• Poor Kevin (Garry) Throw the mirror away . Ignorance is bliss .
  May 20th, 2017 05:39
• Troubesome Love (Swingline) Thank you Michael for reading and I hope you liked the music . I loved the...
  May 20th, 2017 05:35
• tear drops (NEVER_LOSE_HOPE/ rachel...) Captivating , endearing , beautifully said .
  May 19th, 2017 19:47
• Kneeling stitches (SorrowfullyHappy) Everyone is a servant to someone or something . A master of the servant...
  May 19th, 2017 14:54
• Different (Coolgirl) Beauty comes from the inside . People are only pretty on the outside .
  May 19th, 2017 10:50
• There is no one like my God (Stonioha) Your spiritual light lights the way for many in the dark . Shine on for...
  May 19th, 2017 10:40
• Trust Through Trials (Orchidee) I look foreward to you inspirational poems , sort of my spiritual energy...
  May 19th, 2017 10:36
• storytellers (Mozart) Magsman , a word not heard in the United States . I got taken by a carnnie...
  May 19th, 2017 10:31
• Under Jazz with Coffee (Swingline) Ha ha , love of course ! Thank you Brian .
  May 19th, 2017 10:11
• Under Jazz with Coffee (Swingline) Thank you Diamond for reading , loved your comment .
  May 19th, 2017 07:45
• LIMERICK 28 (Michael Edwards) I looked at the picture I read every word Then scratched my head Then...
  May 19th, 2017 07:08
• Breaking the Code. (Goldfinch60) A day without music is a day lost . Except for Beethoven .
  May 19th, 2017 06:56
• THANK GOD FOR TODAY ~ An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA) Life is constructed out of those bricks called days . Sort of a time share...
  May 19th, 2017 06:42
• Content (WriteBeLight) A point that eludes most people . Cherish the moment for they seem to be...
  May 19th, 2017 06:39
• Under Jazz with Coffee (Swingline) Thank you Michael for reading .
  May 19th, 2017 06:30
• Friggen Hornets (WriteBeLight) Go to the store and buy some stingease , a liquid you can put on any...
  May 18th, 2017 18:53
• Poems From Formal Prayers Series - 2 (Orchidee) Another inspiring lesson on the value of prayer . A valuable tool...
  May 18th, 2017 10:00
• Withering Lows (Swingline) She dances good too . I love the early Kate Bush , Never For Ever ,...
  May 18th, 2017 06:50
• Restless (WriteBeLight) Ha ha , great picture . Well thoughtout plan for this poem . The dry humor...
  May 18th, 2017 06:30
• PATIENCE ~ An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA) I take care of my invalid mother who is almost 92 . I have been since 2010...
  May 18th, 2017 04:20
• Like a cigarette (Queen_Of_Darkness) The eyes get lock jaw , can\'t but help to gaze . As slow burning fire...
  May 18th, 2017 04:08
• SCOTLANDS INDEPENDENCE (Michael Edwards) Mountains , fields , trees and clouds . As I stare at the painting I...
  May 18th, 2017 04:04
• Knowledge. (Goldfinch60) Seek knowledge first . That leads to understanding and that is the basis...
  May 18th, 2017 03:43
• Waves (Swingline) Thank you Michael Edwards .
  May 17th, 2017 21:07
• Jimena and El Cid (Swingline) Thank you WriteBeLight for reading .
  May 17th, 2017 11:58
• Waves (Swingline) Squawk ! Watch it Cabin boy ! Squawk !
  May 17th, 2017 11:08
• Deliverance Desirings (Orchidee) Another inspirational message from a lamp upon the mountain .
  May 17th, 2017 10:25
• Waves (Swingline) Thank you for reading Orchidee .
  May 17th, 2017 09:13
• THROUGH THE NIGHT (Michael Edwards) A pub ? Stately is an understatement . In medieval London there were seven...
  May 17th, 2017 07:21
• Cried (Mandi) Crying is the body\'s mechanism of returning your body back to correct...
  May 17th, 2017 07:11
• The Innocence of Pens. (Goldfinch60) Yeah you can\'t pen that on your tools .
  May 17th, 2017 07:06
• Jungle (Jabberwocky) Every time I go to the Jungle I get jungle rot in my shoe , monkey butt ,...
  May 17th, 2017 07:00
• PEANUT BUTTER OK ~ A Rhyming Acrostic Sonnet ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) PB&J with a cold glass of milk that is a form of Paradise dressed up to...
  May 17th, 2017 06:54
• A little longer (Garry) Short , but floods my mind with thoughts from the brevity of life to just...
  May 17th, 2017 06:50
• Bullies Never Grow Up (WriteBeLight) Best advice as you say is to ignore them and not get down on their level ....
  May 17th, 2017 06:46
• Feelings unheard (A_lost_soul) Love the last two lines especially . Great expressive write .
  May 16th, 2017 19:00
• woke up (Coolgirl) I had to wear shades to read this . Happy Happy , Joy Joy !
  May 16th, 2017 18:58
• Ode to Peanut Butter (Mandi) Nuts!
  May 16th, 2017 18:33
• Plastered Poetry (WriteBeLight) I used to date his sister(guy in the picture) We used to catnip around ....
  May 16th, 2017 18:31
• Kingdom Kindlings (Orchidee) You are a daily inspiration to all who read . Or should be if they opened...
  May 16th, 2017 18:25