Comments on community poems by swingline

• Jimena and El Cid (Swingline) Thank you Michael Edwards for reading it twice and for your comment .
  May 16th, 2017 10:40
• Jimena and El Cid (Swingline) Thank you for reading Goldfinch60 .
  May 16th, 2017 09:23
• HIS NAME NOT HANDED DOWN (Michael Edwards) The painting reminds me of flying through clouds or a soul on journey to a...
  May 16th, 2017 05:23
• Reflections in My Life. (Goldfinch60) It sounds like God has blessed you well in this lifetime . I can only...
  May 16th, 2017 05:14
• COUNT BLESSINGS ! A 5 ~ 9 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Everything we have is on loan from God . Even oor life . And someday he...
  May 16th, 2017 05:07
• Choosing Considerations (Orchidee) Joseph , if he were in the Olympics would come in second and get the...
  May 15th, 2017 14:27
• The Garden (Swingline) Thank you WriteBeLight for reading and leaving a comment .
  May 15th, 2017 13:37
• Choosing Considerations (Orchidee) This reminds me of an age old question I have about Judas . Did Jesus...
  May 15th, 2017 11:05
• LIMERICK 27 (Michael Edwards) Hmm , they called him Mellow Yellow .
  May 15th, 2017 09:02
• Race for Love. (Goldfinch60) There will be one race that never ends . When over the horizon our spirit...
  May 15th, 2017 08:58
• BOTTLES ~ An ANAPHORA (BRIAN & ANGELA) I\'m glad your angst is not bottled up . You\'ve cut them off at the...
  May 15th, 2017 08:52
• Hostage Hacks (WriteBeLight) Good advice , more of a Public Service Warning . Soon the internet will be...
  May 15th, 2017 08:39
• Eternal Mother (Pintu Mahakul) Beautiful words .
  May 14th, 2017 20:12
• Body Language (Swingline) Ha ha , thank you so much Michael Edwards for a great comment .
  May 14th, 2017 14:17
• The Well of Men (Jabberwocky) Deep subject .
  May 14th, 2017 13:42
• Great Forces (Michael Edwards) Your painting looks like a dream . Or a conversation with God . Great...
  May 14th, 2017 12:47
• Elusive. (Goldfinch60) Time is payment for the wages of sin . We get paid every second for the...
  May 14th, 2017 12:37
• Mom (WriteBeLight) I take care of my invalid mother (she says invalad) who is soon to be 92 ....
  May 14th, 2017 12:26
• Judgement Joyfulness (Orchidee) A glorious reminder of our dependence upon God\'s mercy and forgiving...
  May 14th, 2017 12:05
• Body Language (Swingline) Ha Ha , Glad you liked it orchidee . Thank you for reading
  May 14th, 2017 11:55
• GOD\'S LOVE & GUIDENCE ~ A Monolittura Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) I have been studying the book of Psalms for the last two months now . It...
  May 14th, 2017 09:27
• Dressed in Darkness (J.thewriter) I\'ve had something similar to your experience . Except mine was one of...
  May 13th, 2017 22:45
• I am such a.... (Crow.) Then a change is due if you are unhappy with the present you . Set goals ,...
  May 13th, 2017 22:31
• Colors of the Ocean (Noveyre) I used to sail and this really rings true for me . Excellent poem .
  May 13th, 2017 22:11
• You are only listening (Nina.hayes) The insight into your life leaves me greatly disturbed . You have done...
  May 13th, 2017 22:09
• An Accident (Joe_Joe813) What agony you live knowing that everyday . May you find peace .
  May 13th, 2017 22:01
• m (Teaganrose) Ah , the innocence of young love Very good .
  May 13th, 2017 22:00
• this world (NEVER_LOSE_HOPE/ rachel...) It seems nowadays abusive narcissistic liars grow up to be abusive...
  May 13th, 2017 17:44
• Two modest haikus (Garry) I believe it all , especially the gasps .
  May 13th, 2017 14:16
• LIMERICK 26 (Michael Edwards) Maybe he could become a sailor Aboard a south Pacific whaler If they...
  May 13th, 2017 13:28
• Let\'s Get Lost. (Goldfinch60) I know the revelance you feel toward Jazz . I grew up listening to Benny...
  May 13th, 2017 13:04
• MAN IN BLACK ~ JOHNNY CASH (BRIAN & ANGELA) Truly a giant among all muscans . One with a productive career spanning...
  May 13th, 2017 12:53
• For The Victims (WriteBeLight) I see it\'s a touchy topic to many as everyone has/had a mother at one...
  May 13th, 2017 12:28
• Poems From Formal Prayers Series - 1 (Orchidee) I am most attracted to the spiritual significance here . Great lessons I...
  May 13th, 2017 12:18
• Toxic (The_broken_Angel) Wise decision .
  May 11th, 2017 17:29
• Revealing Nothing (Garry) Some secrets are best kept in the dark . (like mushrooms) Long walks at...
  May 11th, 2017 17:20
• Talking Owls of Evermore (Swingline) Analogy ? Who are the beasts , who are the civilized ? I will say...
  May 11th, 2017 17:13
• Minotaur (Swingline) Thank you GoldFinch60 for reading and taking the time to comment .
  May 11th, 2017 07:55
• Never Kid Myself (WriteBeLight) If only people never lied but told the truth to the best of their ability
  May 11th, 2017 06:49
• Golden Fly (Jabberwocky) It\'s not about cat-ching the bird that is important . Just like catching...
  May 11th, 2017 02:30
• Only Remembered. (Goldfinch60) Music and memories become so entwined they can never be undone . Enjoyed...
  May 11th, 2017 02:27
• Chaos in Fairy Town (Mizzy) My early life was devoid of any fairytales which was a grimm reality .
  May 11th, 2017 01:27
• Emotions (Mizzy) All sounds like a people problem , too many . It used to be people banded...
  May 11th, 2017 01:18
• Forever is over, tomorrows going to suck (Mizzy) Smiling here , reminds me of a song \"Dancing on our graves.\"
  May 11th, 2017 01:06
• The Storm (Chellewest) To put it tersely . . . life sux for the bottom 98% . And being in the top...
  May 11th, 2017 01:00
• Making a Deal (Chellewest) I guess people have been doing that for eons . Trying to fill the void...
  May 11th, 2017 00:50
• LIMERICK 25 (Michael Edwards) I\'m falling out laughing . Lost more than the leath on tha tweeth . He...
  May 11th, 2017 00:35
• The Shadow of my Passing (Garry) Must stand under light to cast a shadow .
  May 10th, 2017 19:57
• Lost Love (DarkRider) I guess you must keep score , 1 good , 2 bad and at the end of the day...
  May 10th, 2017 18:39
• Stay Young (WriteBeLight) It would make me blue to give up the Blues .
  May 10th, 2017 18:37
• Love To Recompose (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) There will come one day when the sun will not shine . Even the the...
  May 10th, 2017 18:24
• Monster (Stella_Suicide) Interesting view .
  May 10th, 2017 18:12
• Collar,Cuffs, and Chains (SorrowfullyHappy) Anything worth having is worth fighting for .
  May 10th, 2017 18:10
• I screwed up (The_broken_Angel) Sad poem , I relate .
  May 10th, 2017 18:09
• Oh My Captain (Swingline) Thank you Michael Edwards for reading
  May 10th, 2017 14:03
• Oh My Captain (Swingline) Thank you for reading WriteBeLight .
  May 10th, 2017 13:23
• King Arthur Dreams (Swingline) Thank you Ephraim your probably right . I am unhappy with the way the...
  May 9th, 2017 16:43
• When you used to care (Skyy) Your desparation is unhealthy . While in love you should learn to take...
  May 9th, 2017 13:45
• save me (NEVER_LOSE_HOPE/ rachel...) I\'m guessing (I may be wrong) another tragic story of rape of an innocent...
  May 9th, 2017 13:40
• Bookkeepers Deathbed (Jabberwocky) Image rich beautiful .
  May 9th, 2017 07:54
• My beautiful angel (Highlander50) Congratulations , God\'s blessings on you .
  May 9th, 2017 07:51
• Done With The Sick And Tired (WriteBeLight) Can\'t help it . I\'m a weather freak ! Live for tornadoes , floods , and...
  May 9th, 2017 07:47
• FOOD GLORIOUS FOOD ~ DECONSTRUCTED HAIKU (BRIAN & ANGELA) Like a car with four wheels , why not five . What looks like a good idea...
  May 9th, 2017 07:28
• WHAT\'S YOUR FAVORITE CITY IN THE WORLD & WHY ? (BRIAN & ANGELA) You probably could take the best from every city in the US and put it into...
  May 9th, 2017 02:15
• trust and honesty (Karla) Ouch that spelling ! Don\'t worry just write more poetry and the spelling...
  May 9th, 2017 01:59
• The Walls of Insanity (Tristan Robert Lange) What great poetry could come from those depths !
  May 9th, 2017 01:50
• Orange and Yellow. (Goldfinch60) Looks like one is looking out a window onto the floor of Death Valley at...
  May 9th, 2017 01:41
• Penny (Audreewho) Makes me want to shower . Unique view every man should read . There\'s two...
  May 9th, 2017 00:53
• BUFFET FODDER (Michael Edwards) Beautiful painting ! I used to love pizza . Now I don\'t . They used to...
  May 9th, 2017 00:46
• Mind over Matter (Mishi Stroud) Maybe this universe is just a thought in God\'s mind .
  May 9th, 2017 00:18
• It Is Quite Possible (Brooklyn6timesplus) Great minds think alike .
  May 9th, 2017 00:15
• The Chronicles of pain and suffering (Sada_bear) Everyone is unique . How they observe and deal with life is also unique to...
  May 8th, 2017 21:19
• Alone (Shannahrose) \"One is the loneliest number that you\'ll ever do\" a song by Three Dog...
  May 8th, 2017 21:04
• insomniac (Brianna jean zeiger) When it becomes a disorder treatment needs to be done . I lost my thyroid...
  May 8th, 2017 20:40
• Haiku. Growing darkness (Garry) You missed your calling Too long in stalling Should have joined the...
  May 8th, 2017 18:58
• Unseen, Unheard (ElenaGrace) Perhaps so true , who are we really looking at when one looks at another .
  May 8th, 2017 18:52
• Darkness (Hannahjosie) \"Hello darkness my old friend I\'ve come to talk to you again Because...
  May 8th, 2017 18:50
• BBQ (Tony36) Thank you..
  May 8th, 2017 18:39
• Please read My story. It\'s long, but please read it (LML) This is awful to read . Such people should be in jail if not executed for...
  May 8th, 2017 16:55
• Growing Old (Bibbeck) Old age beats dying young . When you\'re young you try to stay up all...
  May 8th, 2017 16:50
• Sleep A Little Longer (Anonymous_) I guess you\'re talking depression . I guess I had that addiction to sleep...
  May 8th, 2017 12:44
• Excessively Pure (SheWasTheSun) I\'m sure I don\'t run into such people , they run into me .
  May 8th, 2017 12:38
• The cool silver of the gun... (WG7) The sorrow feeds on itself and grows into depression . Depression is the...
  May 8th, 2017 12:36
• The wall (Wren Ann) Walls have doors . One should knock to let you in . Any attempt to break...
  May 8th, 2017 12:29
• Maybe This Will Be My Cure (Abpoet18) An occupied body (doing things) leaves no time to be occupied (in thought)...
  May 8th, 2017 12:26
• Depression Isn\'t Just a Mental Disorder (A. F. Naturaliy) You have captured the identity of depression as it has captured you .
  May 8th, 2017 12:22
• SHE IS TOUGH (Yasu Na) Reminds me the subtle truths that Haiku\'s employ .
  May 8th, 2017 12:20
• Five Favoured (Orchidee) Spiritual truth , for if you have the word of God in you you must let it...
  May 8th, 2017 12:16
• heart and brain (SorrowfullyHappy) If only the heart had a brain and the brain had a heart . He that isn\'t...
  May 8th, 2017 12:13
• Rolling Waves of the Sea (Lizzy Renee) I used to live in Panama City , Florida . I know how strong the call of...
  May 8th, 2017 09:44
• Toy (Jabberwocky) Bitter commentary on a bitter disappointment .
  May 8th, 2017 09:41
• Wish me luck... (Ace-of-spades) Ha ha , you will be tested everyday of your life . Goodluck !
  May 8th, 2017 09:40
• Talking Owls of Evermore (Swingline) Thank you so much Brian for such radiant words . I\'m posting one about...
  May 8th, 2017 08:41
• Leaving Midnight Scars (DarkRider) Life ripped apart , full of fear and uncertainties , With a bleak future...
  May 8th, 2017 07:26
• nana (Karla) I envy you . I barely knew my grandmothers . So few memories . But then...
  May 8th, 2017 05:06
• CHARACTER TRAIT ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Yes , I see you as having always all of these traits . Praiseworthy ...
  May 8th, 2017 05:03
• CASTAWAY (Michael Edwards) Anything about tropical storms I love . Though if I were castaway that...
  May 8th, 2017 04:58
• Sunset of Life. (Goldfinch60) I have a collection of sunrise and sunset pictures of clouds . I wish this...
  May 8th, 2017 04:53
• Love (Anonymous_) Much to love to write about yet we struggle to put it down . Love must be...
  May 8th, 2017 04:40
• Oh The Wolf (KathrineWillows) You catch the spirit and freedom of the Wolf . Good poem .
  May 8th, 2017 04:36