Comments on community poems by swingline

• For Your Eyes Only (HeartfullyFallen) You write good , and have good instincts . Especially for being only...
  June 2nd, 2017 21:15
• Hope (IDiedLastNight) Hope eternal , on your knees you prayed . Why yes said the Lord , we have...
  June 2nd, 2017 21:03
• 10 years Daddy. (Kayweejade) Suicide always leaves those living in much more pain than the one\'s who...
  June 2nd, 2017 20:55
• Such Good Such Bad (SorrowfullyHappy) All liars are bad . I know from experience .
  June 2nd, 2017 18:52
• Treasured lust (Thehippiepoet) Sounds like you are infatuated with this older man and find bliss in his...
  June 2nd, 2017 13:23
• LUCKY TIGER (Rajkumar) Much like a Greek tragedy , or Roman . Anyway everyone most mentioned dies...
  June 2nd, 2017 13:18
• My beautiful cordyline... (P.H.Rose) Yes , I can relate to the happiness growing flowers can bring and the pain...
  June 2nd, 2017 13:10
• Resurrection Reassurance (Orchidee) Jesus to the theif on the cross ,\"This day you will be with me in...
  June 2nd, 2017 11:55
• Exercise Program (Augustus) What a laugh , and another and another ! A masterpiece of joyful...
  June 2nd, 2017 09:15
• Tomorrow Will Do (Goldfinch60) If you put tomorrow\'s list onto today\'s then when yesterday comes you...
  June 2nd, 2017 05:02
• My Love (Grayc8814) That\'s why I took up poetry . To express my pain and isolation on paper...
  June 2nd, 2017 00:49
• You know (SorrowfullyHappy) Young love is about doing everything wrong .
  June 2nd, 2017 00:39
• SYNTACTIC AMBIGUITY 1 (Michael Edwards) While visiting a white racist antigay bar in America the English tourists...
  June 2nd, 2017 00:35
• The Old Home (Swingline) Thank you so much Goldfinch60 .
  June 2nd, 2017 00:28
• Young Love.... (P.H.Rose) The heart has reasons that reason knows nothing of . Blase Pascal 1670
  June 1st, 2017 18:45
• The Ascender (Augustus) Well constructed , rock solid , but I enjoyed more the uplifting...
  June 1st, 2017 13:11
• PEACE (Louis Gibbs) Rain can cleanse the body but it also cleanses the mind , spirit and soul...
  June 1st, 2017 13:02
• Vials Vicissitudes* (Orchidee) Great write ochidee . Has me in a daze thinking about everything Bible .
  June 1st, 2017 12:54
• The Old Home (Swingline) Thank you Agustus for reading and wonderful comment .
  June 1st, 2017 12:37
• The Old Home (Swingline) Thank you Michael .
  June 1st, 2017 08:15
• Lover\'s Resolve (Mandi) Love is sometimes like cutting teeth . But eventually everything gums out...
  May 31st, 2017 23:10
• A Letter to my Dad (Musikn0te) I glad you survived . There is a reason you did . Maybe what you endured...
  May 31st, 2017 16:46
• Never....Not....Ever......Afraid (P.H.Rose) Fear is like heat and sunlight , water and cold , pressure and twisting ....
  May 31st, 2017 16:33
• Available Access (Orchidee) Let not our faith waver as Mose\'s did when he struck the rock twice with...
  May 31st, 2017 16:16
• A Single Rose (Tony36) Roses are like love . If you grab for it , it\'s thorns will cut you ....
  May 31st, 2017 16:05
• Karma (Tiffany_Arnold) Poetry is emotions in motion . As long as you relate your emotions and...
  May 31st, 2017 03:26
• Which Path? (Goldfinch60) Is this a pathological question ? All paths lead to Gnome , Alaska . The...
  May 31st, 2017 03:13
• MEN IN SHORTS (Michael Edwards) I wear shorts year around and pants on top of those .
  May 31st, 2017 03:04
• Always Changing. (Kevin browne) Words of wisdom . It seems I find the time for everything but what\'s...
  May 30th, 2017 22:08
• Tell Me (Queen_Of_Darkness) Once the trust has become rust , it\'s time to move on and find someone...
  May 30th, 2017 22:02
• Chocolate (Mandi) I enjoy your infatuation with the only thing on Earth that won\'t let you...
  May 30th, 2017 21:59
• Deity Declarations (Orchidee) Beautiful words and video .
  May 30th, 2017 11:25
• Hug It Out (WriteBeLight) Was his first name Gomez and her name Morticia , and together known as...
  May 30th, 2017 11:21
• The Foley (Augustus) It takes your health , your hope , your loved one\'s ability to cope . It...
  May 30th, 2017 11:14
• Catching attention, delivering  effective messages that make the difference (Avigail) Nothing grabs the attention like a suicide bomber when he goes bang . Or...
  May 30th, 2017 11:03
• THE ENDING (Louis Gibbs) I\'m sure the poets will have the first , present and the very last word .
  May 30th, 2017 10:57
• Colors ! (Swingline) Thank you Diamond for your comment .
  May 30th, 2017 08:09
• Colors ! (Swingline) Thank you Damaged Soul for reading .
  May 30th, 2017 07:38
• WHEN FIRST DISCOVERED (Michael Edwards) The painting reminds me of a sunset on the gold Coast of Flords ,...
  May 30th, 2017 04:04
• All Greek To Me. (Goldfinch60) Language does not present a barrier when it comes to food .
  May 30th, 2017 04:00
• Remember (Mandi) Sacrifice can be selfish or sacred . Our soldiers , certainly not selfish...
  May 29th, 2017 18:55
• will you miss me? (Mylittleheart) Is something missing or simply lacking Flagrant is the vagrant...
  May 29th, 2017 17:03
• Authenticity dead no knowledge of self. (CaitEva) We all are slaves to one of two masters . One is Heavenly and the other...
  May 29th, 2017 16:51
• Marriage (ShannonXx) A marriage without God binding everything together runs a doubtful course...
  May 29th, 2017 16:46
• Nuance of sex dialogue (Avigail) Your words resonate well , to be seen and contemplated before there is a...
  May 29th, 2017 16:38
• Cancer Dying (Augustus) God has a way of testing our resolve , even in the face of Death ....
  May 29th, 2017 16:31
• Delightful Dwellings (Orchidee) Another daily inspirational reminder .
  May 29th, 2017 16:16
• Joy of Desolation (Swingline) Thank you WriteBeLight for reading .
  May 29th, 2017 09:25
• Scathing (Baylee) Takes us into the moment with consequences .
  May 29th, 2017 09:17
• Our Glimpse of Eternity (Hali) Dark and beautiful . Truly a walk on the wild side .
  May 29th, 2017 09:13
• The Parade (WriteBeLight) They chose not war , but didn\'t back down , when into the gates of Hell ...
  May 29th, 2017 09:10
• Joy of Desolation (Swingline) Great wisdom Michael , thank you for reading .
  May 29th, 2017 08:25
• Joy of Desolation (Swingline) Thank you for reading Goldfinch60 .
  May 29th, 2017 07:41
• LIMERICK 31 (Michael Edwards) Ohhhhhhhhhhh !
  May 29th, 2017 06:50
• For The First Time (Queen_Of_Darkness) That happens when two halves become whole .
  May 29th, 2017 06:49
• Memorial Day (Ternic73) The military tradition runs deep in my family . On behalf of all those in...
  May 29th, 2017 06:47
• The Church of No Thanks. (Goldfinch60) So sad , I know you were appreciated in Heaven . Shake the dust from your...
  May 29th, 2017 06:42
• Doubt to my Friend ? (Rajkumar) You covered it I think .
  May 29th, 2017 06:34
• FISH🐠🐟🐠🐟 (Tallulahboo) A splashing good poem . Smart too ! Like the fish for they travel in...
  May 28th, 2017 10:28
• Prayer, Prosperity, Protection (Orchidee) Comforting words , full of God promise to protect his people .
  May 28th, 2017 10:24
• Warrior Poet (Augustus) Yes we live in a frightening time in the world today . Here in the U.S. we...
  May 28th, 2017 10:20
• Fear of God (Swingline) Thank you orchidee for your enlightening words .
  May 28th, 2017 08:10
• I LIKE SAID IT (Michael Edwards) You know , what I say , you know .
  May 28th, 2017 04:47
• Stillness Around Me (Goldfinch60) Eveningtude and prelude , three fingers of scotch and paradise .
  May 28th, 2017 04:43
• One Rose (Swingline) Thank you Goldfinch60 .
  May 28th, 2017 02:53
• Lost me (Queen_Of_Darkness) Once broken and put back together again it\'s never the same .
  May 27th, 2017 19:06
• Evil Twin (WriteBeLight) A juxtaposition of the self inside .
  May 27th, 2017 19:04
• Swings (Augustus) Swinging bells get the clapper .Swinging in the rain . War and swingers in...
  May 27th, 2017 10:27
• One Rose (Swingline) Thank you so much Agustus for reading and comment .
  May 27th, 2017 10:18
• WHY DO THEY DO IT? (Michael Edwards) I can relate . Nothing like dinner served on a plate .
  May 27th, 2017 08:46
• On the Nature of Daylight. (Goldfinch60) Music and poetry both alike in ways . Music sways the minds ear while...
  May 27th, 2017 08:42
• THE \\\\\\\"SHE\\\\\\\" (Rajkumar) Love is like walking down a razor blade . It takes a lot of concentration...
  May 27th, 2017 08:38
• One Rose (Swingline) Thank you very much Hopey_XX .
  May 27th, 2017 06:33
• LITTLE PAIN (Rajkumar) Well said . I was afraid to fight when little . Then I got into a fight...
  May 26th, 2017 11:26
• Nam (Augustus) My best friend died in Nam . U.S. Marines . Came home in a coffin . Told...
  May 26th, 2017 11:18
• Back And Forth (WriteBeLight) Ha ha , love the humor here . And the push /pull dedication to doing the...
  May 26th, 2017 11:02
• Poems From Formal Prayers Series - 3 (Orchidee) Nice inspirational words and prayer .
  May 26th, 2017 10:57
• This is my crowd (Tony36) Sounds like my past . Especially float trips and camping under stars . I...
  May 26th, 2017 10:54
• Emotional Precipitation (Swingline) Thank you Agustus for reading .
  May 26th, 2017 08:24
• THE DARK OF MIDNIGHT HOUR (Michael Edwards) Superb image creation , last line creates another story . Always enjoy...
  May 26th, 2017 05:36
• But Nothing is There. (Goldfinch60) Oh the tiny twinge of fear that only poetry can create . Good job . And...
  May 26th, 2017 05:32
• When Righteousness Has Its Cons and The World Is Doomed (Rodent witch) Outback I\'m afraid is right . Terrorism is big business . The bombing in...
  May 25th, 2017 21:48
• what he said (SorrowfullyHappy) Feel triangulated , your angles bent out of shape , three coins in a...
  May 25th, 2017 21:24
• Innocence (Swingline) Thank so much Esmeraldaya for your comment .
  May 25th, 2017 19:16
• We Stand Together (Jenny1959) All I can do is pray all are in Heaven where they are happy , loved , and...
  May 25th, 2017 19:01
• Our New Reality (Esmeraldaya) All sound relationships are built upon communication . Each word shared is...
  May 25th, 2017 18:52
• Reaching (Augustus) Send to Don , maybe it would do some good . Nah , probably not . The...
  May 25th, 2017 14:29
• Flowers won 2nd prize (Rajkumar) Beautiful moments like beautiful flowers never last very long .
  May 25th, 2017 14:22
• Innocence (Swingline) Thank you Agustus for reading and leaving a comment .
  May 25th, 2017 12:09
• goodbye (NEVER_LOSE_HOPE/ rachel...) Don\'t look back at what you lost but forward to being reunited again in a...
  May 25th, 2017 11:08
• Faith Flowings (Orchidee) Jesus died to this world to rise victorious over death .Likewise we should...
  May 25th, 2017 11:06
• What\'s In A Bin (WriteBeLight) Oh it is not so in my home . The roadside trashed is the norm . The filth...
  May 25th, 2017 11:01
• Nature\'s Bounteous World. (Goldfinch60) The complexity of life on this planet is startling . I never tire of...
  May 25th, 2017 03:53
• PRAYER ~ A BLESSING (BRIAN & ANGELA) I remember Jesus praying in the garden of Gethsemane so hard he sweated...
  May 25th, 2017 03:45
• Rainy Day Women (Swingline) Ha ha , I would make a movie if they were ! Thank you for reading...
  May 25th, 2017 02:49
• HOPE ---PART IV (Rajkumar) Great words to have and hold .
  May 24th, 2017 19:03
• We\'re all under a spell. (CaitEva) I\'m doubtful of the direction that the occult offers .
  May 24th, 2017 12:08
• Ascension Aspirings (Orchidee) Yay ! He has gone to Heaven to prepare a place for me .
  May 24th, 2017 12:06
• Divorce (Miss Daisy) So true , don\'t make the same mistake twice .
  May 24th, 2017 12:03
• Lost One (Abpoet18) It\'s amazing how society has isolated each individual out . Singled them...
  May 24th, 2017 12:01