Comments on community poems by Mottakeenur Rehman

• Love your enemies (Sorenbarrett) Superb creation...A pure gem ..Eye kissing and Heart...
  February 24th, 2026 14:23
• Kobe beef (Sorenbarrett) I hear your whisper through the static and steel, your words bruise the...
  December 31st, 2025 21:57
• Life\'s schooling (Sorenbarrett) Superb creation my dear🙏🙏🙏💙💙💝
  December 27th, 2025 03:06
• Dark passion (Sorenbarrett) This is a haunting embrace of mortality, where desire and decay become...
  December 27th, 2025 03:04
• Wasn\'t then but guilty now (Sorenbarrett) Good Write🙏🙏
  December 24th, 2025 04:03
• broad-back city (Arqios) \"I see the work you carry.\" That’s the heart of it. This poem is an...
  December 23rd, 2025 14:45
• Merry Trumpmess (Sorenbarrett) This sharp satire masterfully wields holiday themes to critique policy and...
  December 23rd, 2025 14:34
• A DOG FOR CHRISTMAS (Michael Edwards) Delightful! The timeless clash of Christmas wishes, resolved with a pun...
  December 21st, 2025 09:23
• Lost paper thoughts (Sorenbarrett) Good Write💝🙏💙
  December 21st, 2025 08:41
• Crazy sonnet (Sorenbarrett) Your \'Crazy Sonnet\' is haunting and raw, gripping with its dark...
  July 14th, 2025 12:54
• “flight from self” (Arqios) Your poem cuts deep—the way it frames self-erasure as both armor and...
  July 14th, 2025 12:51
• I am proud (Tony36) Good Write Tony!
  July 8th, 2025 13:38
• vestibule (Arqios) Your poem weaves quiet tension with delicate grace, where every stillness...
  July 8th, 2025 13:34
• Cycles (Sorenbarrett) Your words paint a haunting cycle of suffering and resilience—powerful...
  July 8th, 2025 13:28
• Turn out the lights (Sorenbarrett) Your poem masterfully weaves chaos and order, challenging nature and...
  July 4th, 2025 13:42
• time\'s door (Arqios) Your poem weaves stillness and unease so beautifully—each image lingers...
  July 4th, 2025 13:39
• For My Mary. (Goldfinch60) Your words are as beautiful as your love for Mary—simple, deep, and...
  July 3rd, 2025 13:44
• Slumbering light (Sorenbarrett) Such a profound sleep of light and shadow—your imagery lingers like a...
  July 3rd, 2025 13:41
• closed windows (Arqios) Your words echo in the hollow of the screen— a lighthouse I long to...
  July 3rd, 2025 13:36
• I Stand (Tony36) Your words roar with courage and compassion—never stay silent for those...
  July 3rd, 2025 13:34
• \"China\" (Damaso) Your words paint raw emotion with striking contrasts—both tender and...
  July 3rd, 2025 13:31
• June 14, 2010: journal entry (Arqios) Your words weave quiet magic—ordinary moments brim with grace. The...
  July 2nd, 2025 04:43
• Little bird (Sorenbarrett) Your words weave a hauntingly beautiful tale of love and loss, timeless...
  July 1st, 2025 14:21
• Our Love Tanka. (Goldfinch60) Your words beautifully capture eternal love\'s glow—so heartfelt and...
  June 27th, 2025 15:04
• A Spring Storm (RSM0812) Your poem beautifully captures the contrast between spring\'s warmth and...
  June 27th, 2025 15:01
• You (Tony36) Your words beautifully capture the power of love’s light in the darkest...
  June 27th, 2025 14:59
• Don\'t mix them up (Sorenbarrett) This is such a brilliant and playful contrast between two iconic figures!...
  June 27th, 2025 14:55
• peel back the neon (Arqios) Peel Back the Neon\" hits with raw, electric energy—stripping away...
  June 27th, 2025 14:43
• Visit with a dream (Sorenbarrett) A moving glimpse into rural hardship and quiet resilience—loved the raw,...
  June 25th, 2025 14:03
• lore-keeping (Arqios) Celestial and cryptic, this poem unravels like starlight on silk....
  June 25th, 2025 14:00
• A strange guy (Sorenbarrett) Your words dance on the edge of wonder and wit—surreal, vivid, and...
  June 20th, 2025 03:43
• White sepulchers (Sorenbarrett) Haunting and raw—your words peel back the lies we wear like skin. The...
  June 20th, 2025 03:35
• my poetic side (Arqios) Your words weave a quiet magic, tender yet profound—like roots deepening...
  June 20th, 2025 03:32
• bridges (Arqios) This poem resonates deeply—bridges as symbols of connection, memory, and...
  June 20th, 2025 03:23
• Freely Dance (Tony36) Good Wtite🙏
  June 18th, 2025 13:32
• Fields of Daffodils (RSM0812) Your words paint love like golden light, dancing with daffodils—pure...
  June 18th, 2025 13:30
• My Friend (Sorenbarrett) Your poem paints her wild soul so bright— a beautiful, broken,...
  June 18th, 2025 13:25
• still the earth breathes (Arqios) Your words weave resilience into every line, echoing the earth’s untamed...
  June 18th, 2025 13:22
• where shadows do not drown (Arqios) Your poem weaves myth and exile with haunting beauty—shadows may shift,...
  June 16th, 2025 20:23
• Frigid conversation (Sorenbarrett) Haunting and vivid—your imagery chills to the bone. A masterpiece of...
  June 16th, 2025 20:15
• SILENT FLIGHT (Ferjohn Timung) Your words beautifully honor their journey—so touching and heartfelt. A...
  June 14th, 2025 13:20
• EMBRACED (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Your words dance like starlight on water—ethereal and hauntingly...
  June 14th, 2025 13:11
• Two Hearts (Tony36) Such a touching ode to love’s timeless connection—your words resonate...
  June 14th, 2025 13:08
• Untittled (RSM0812) Your words weave darkness and light with haunting grace— a raw, poetic...
  June 14th, 2025 13:05
• Junk (Sorenbarrett) Even in decay, your verses shine—mending despair into hope, one scrap at...
  June 14th, 2025 13:01
• The Maid (Sorenbarrett) Life’s journey told in maids and dreams so true— from milk to love to...
  June 13th, 2025 03:35
• SILENT THOUGHTS (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Silence becomes alive in your verses, a sanctuary and a storm. Truly...
  June 13th, 2025 03:09
• Mademoiselle Beauty (Reynaldo Casison) Every line sings with the passion of a thousand sunflowers, forever...
  June 13th, 2025 02:58
• I am who I am (Tony36) Good Write ..resonated much..
  June 8th, 2025 11:57
• The Heart Has a Cost (RSM0812) Your poem beautifully captures the bittersweet dance of love and loss,...
  June 8th, 2025 09:35
• Years (Sorenbarrett) Time\'s harsh soil chokes even the strongest seeds of hope—yet still, we...
  June 8th, 2025 05:21
• Head of wheat (Sorenbarrett) Your beautiful poem weaves life\'s cycle with striking imagery—birth,...
  June 6th, 2025 04:54
• Birth, life, death (Sorenbarrett) Its enigmatic verses invite deep reflection on existence\'s dualities. The...
  June 4th, 2025 11:40
• Evening moon haiku (Reynaldo Casison) Sweet and small gem!
  June 4th, 2025 11:37
• the wind speaks (Arqios) Your poem flows like the wind itself—ethereal and haunting. The...
  June 4th, 2025 11:35
• Sometimes (Tony36) Your words resonate deeply—true strength lies in resilience and starting...
  June 4th, 2025 11:29
• Starlight (RSM0812) Your poem beautifully captures the cosmic dance of light and darkness,...
  June 2nd, 2025 14:07
• unrelenting horizon (Arqios) Beautiful....masterfully captures the weight of daily existence, where...
  June 2nd, 2025 14:04
• What is a poet? (Sorenbarrett) This poem beautifully captures the essence of a poet—dreamer,...
  June 2nd, 2025 14:01
• Gone (Sorenbarrett) Your words weave nature’s truth with haunting grace— a stark reminder...
  May 27th, 2025 04:24
• Pebbles (Sorenbarrett) Your words ripple through time, each verse a pebble in the mind’s...
  May 26th, 2025 04:38
• beautiful regret (Arqios) This poem aches with quiet wisdom— love’s presence lingers, not to...
  May 26th, 2025 02:26
• For My Dad. (Goldfinch60) Your words paint a beautiful, heartfelt tribute to your dad. The love and...
  May 22nd, 2025 04:17
• it walks, not me (Arqios) Your poem beautifully captures the haunting dance between memory and...
  May 22nd, 2025 04:14
• Ma an me (Sorenbarrett) This poem breaks me—the cold, the cancer, the ghost of \'Ma\' answering...
  May 22nd, 2025 04:10
• hair in the wind (Arqios) A whirl of imagery—wind, light, and myth collide. Nursery rhymes twist...
  May 21st, 2025 13:15
• Perfect World (RSM0812) Good Write ..nicely expressed..
  May 20th, 2025 14:18
• Empathy (Sorenbarrett) Your words weave raw emotion so deep, a mirror to souls that ache and...
  May 20th, 2025 04:19
• Thredbo (Winter 2025) (Arqios) Beautiful imagery—I can almost feel the crisp winter air and see the...
  May 20th, 2025 02:14
• Old closet (Sorenbarrett) A hauntingly tender elegy for lost love—each line aches with quiet...
  May 18th, 2025 14:25
• Brighten The Way. (Goldfinch60) Good write ..nicely expressed🙏
  May 18th, 2025 14:21
• Damnatio memoriae read or we die (Sorenbarrett) Your verses bloom like eternal seeds, ensuring no poem truly dies. A...
  May 16th, 2025 04:17
• A FOREIGN FIELD (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Your poem etches war\'s haunting toll—where flesh and spirit fade...
  May 15th, 2025 04:23
• Dust of life (Sorenbarrett) Profound reflections on life\'s fleeting essence, where dust and divinity...
  May 15th, 2025 03:51
• Be who you are (Tony36) Beautiful write💥
  May 7th, 2025 21:46
• Shade (Sorenbarrett) The rhythm and word choice enhance the reflective, almost wistful mood....
  May 7th, 2025 21:44
• Oh Narrow Love (RSM0812) The language is tender and heartfelt, with a rhythmic flow that enhances...
  May 7th, 2025 21:40
• Life is Strange (Mottakeenur Rehman) Unfortunately the remark has been deleted for technical issue...Sorry for...
  May 2nd, 2025 05:08
• Life is Strange (Mottakeenur Rehman) Thank you for this beautiful reflection! You’ve captured exactly what I...
  May 2nd, 2025 05:07
• Sleep on (Sorenbarrett) A short gem❤️
  April 28th, 2025 09:45
• Hard Words (Sorenbarrett) This poem beautifully captures the delicate balance of our actions and...
  April 24th, 2025 04:52
• Life\'s journey (Tony36) Enjoyed the read!
  April 20th, 2025 06:03
• The Joy of Silence (Neville) \"The Joy of Silence\" invites reflection on the complexities of human...
  February 10th, 2024 10:26
• Timepiece of Gratitude: A Teachers\' Day Poem (Mottakeenur Rehman) Thank so much for precious comment🙏♥️.. The students gave me a...
  September 14th, 2023 03:47
• The Sound of Darkness (Neville) The central theme of the poem revolves around the dual nature of darkness...
  September 14th, 2023 02:24
• Peace At The End Of The Day. (Goldfinch60) \"Peace At The End Of The Day\" is a celebration of love, companionship,...
  August 25th, 2023 02:01
• Give What You Can. (Goldfinch60) The simplicity of the language and the repetitive structure contribute to...
  August 15th, 2023 15:12
• Let’s Play Sushi (Neville) The mention of \"chilled rice wine\" and the playful interaction with...
  August 15th, 2023 15:10
• Our Place. (Goldfinch60) Through its straightforward language and vivid imagery, it invites readers...
  August 8th, 2023 20:44
• The Day She Wore Flour in Her Hair (Neville) The poem\'s simplicity belies its complex layers of meaning, making it a...
  August 8th, 2023 20:37
• Fruits (2781) It emphasizes the importance of discernment in identifying those who might...
  July 29th, 2023 13:46
• African Proverb. (Goldfinch60) This thought-provoking piece encourages us to reflect on the real cost of...
  July 29th, 2023 13:43
• Another Local Legend (Neville) \"Another Local Legend\" is a thought-provoking poem that touches upon...
  July 29th, 2023 12:11
• A day makes (2781) The poem is a delightful celebration of gratitude, presence, and...
  June 2nd, 2023 21:44
• Each Moment. (Goldfinch60) It prompts us to reflect on the significance of our experiences and...
  June 2nd, 2023 21:38
• Problems To Opportunities. (Goldfinch60) It provides a motivational message that encourages personal growth and a...
  May 26th, 2023 01:27
• Uber Brides (Neville) This poem serves as a poignant reminder of the enduring power of human...
  May 26th, 2023 01:25
• Praise the Lord! (2781) \" Praise the Lord \" is a poem that celebrates faith, expresses...
  May 25th, 2023 04:19
• At Least to the Moon and Back (Neville) The poem reminds us that love can transcend boundaries and limitations,...
  May 25th, 2023 04:16
• I Shall Be Back. (Goldfinch60) The poem celebrates the profound impact of music on the human spirit,...
  May 25th, 2023 04:14