Comments on community poems by Mottakeenur Rehman

• Fondly Remembered. (Poetic Licence) Your words beautifully capture the timeless dance between past, present,...
  July 4th, 2025 13:44
• Turn out the lights (Sorenbarrett) Your poem masterfully weaves chaos and order, challenging nature and...
  July 4th, 2025 13:42
• time\'s door (Arqios) Your poem weaves stillness and unease so beautifully—each image lingers...
  July 4th, 2025 13:39
• Red umbrella (Caring dove) Beautiful imagery of longing and self-discovery—sometimes even umbrellas...
  July 3rd, 2025 13:50
• For My Mary. (Goldfinch60) Your words are as beautiful as your love for Mary—simple, deep, and...
  July 3rd, 2025 13:44
• Slumbering light (Sorenbarrett) Such a profound sleep of light and shadow—your imagery lingers like a...
  July 3rd, 2025 13:41
• Hello or Goodbye. (Poetic Licence) Your words dance between heartache and hope, beautifully raw and...
  July 3rd, 2025 13:38
• closed windows (Arqios) Your words echo in the hollow of the screen— a lighthouse I long to...
  July 3rd, 2025 13:36
• I Stand (Tony36) Your words roar with courage and compassion—never stay silent for those...
  July 3rd, 2025 13:34
• \"China\" (Damaso) Your words paint raw emotion with striking contrasts—both tender and...
  July 3rd, 2025 13:31
• June 14, 2010: journal entry (Arqios) Your words weave quiet magic—ordinary moments brim with grace. The...
  July 2nd, 2025 04:43
• Seed You Sow (Senryu). (Poetic Licence) A tender ode to growth, where love’s soil fosters miracles. Your poem is...
  July 2nd, 2025 04:40
• Little bird (Sorenbarrett) Your words weave a hauntingly beautiful tale of love and loss, timeless...
  July 1st, 2025 14:21
• Our Love Tanka. (Goldfinch60) Your words beautifully capture eternal love\'s glow—so heartfelt and...
  June 27th, 2025 15:04
• A Spring Storm (RSM0812) Your poem beautifully captures the contrast between spring\'s warmth and...
  June 27th, 2025 15:01
• You (Tony36) Your words beautifully capture the power of love’s light in the darkest...
  June 27th, 2025 14:59
• Don\'t mix them up (Sorenbarrett) This is such a brilliant and playful contrast between two iconic figures!...
  June 27th, 2025 14:55
• Children Had Fun. (Poetic Licence) This poem beautifully captures the bittersweet chaos of a family...
  June 27th, 2025 14:51
• peel back the neon (Arqios) Peel Back the Neon\" hits with raw, electric energy—stripping away...
  June 27th, 2025 14:43
• Mary\'s Fun Life. (Poetic Licence) Your playful rhymes and quirky humor shine through in Chuckles Week! Mary...
  June 25th, 2025 14:07
• Visit with a dream (Sorenbarrett) A moving glimpse into rural hardship and quiet resilience—loved the raw,...
  June 25th, 2025 14:03
• lore-keeping (Arqios) Celestial and cryptic, this poem unravels like starlight on silk....
  June 25th, 2025 14:00
• A strange guy (Sorenbarrett) Your words dance on the edge of wonder and wit—surreal, vivid, and...
  June 20th, 2025 03:43
• White sepulchers (Sorenbarrett) Haunting and raw—your words peel back the lies we wear like skin. The...
  June 20th, 2025 03:35
• my poetic side (Arqios) Your words weave a quiet magic, tender yet profound—like roots deepening...
  June 20th, 2025 03:32
• bridges (Arqios) This poem resonates deeply—bridges as symbols of connection, memory, and...
  June 20th, 2025 03:23
• Live Life Like A Sponge (Senryu) Go On Read It , You Might Like It!!!. (Poetic Licence) Clever metaphor—sponges teach us growth through openness! Absorb,...
  June 20th, 2025 03:19
• Freely Dance (Tony36) Good Wtite🙏
  June 18th, 2025 13:32
• Fields of Daffodils (RSM0812) Your words paint love like golden light, dancing with daffodils—pure...
  June 18th, 2025 13:30
• Do Not Be A Beaver. (Poetic Licence) Clever and concise—a poignant reminder to flow freely, not trap...
  June 18th, 2025 13:27
• My Friend (Sorenbarrett) Your poem paints her wild soul so bright— a beautiful, broken,...
  June 18th, 2025 13:25
• still the earth breathes (Arqios) Your words weave resilience into every line, echoing the earth’s untamed...
  June 18th, 2025 13:22
• where shadows do not drown (Arqios) Your poem weaves myth and exile with haunting beauty—shadows may shift,...
  June 16th, 2025 20:23
• Frigid conversation (Sorenbarrett) Haunting and vivid—your imagery chills to the bone. A masterpiece of...
  June 16th, 2025 20:15
• Perfect Life. (Poetic Licence) Truth echoes in your words—perfection is a myth, but authenticity is...
  June 16th, 2025 20:12
• SILENT FLIGHT (Ferjohn Timung) Your words beautifully honor their journey—so touching and heartfelt. A...
  June 14th, 2025 13:20
• EMBRACED (Nephilim56) Your words dance like starlight on water—ethereal and hauntingly...
  June 14th, 2025 13:11
• Two Hearts (Tony36) Such a touching ode to love’s timeless connection—your words resonate...
  June 14th, 2025 13:08
• Untittled (RSM0812) Your words weave darkness and light with haunting grace— a raw, poetic...
  June 14th, 2025 13:05
• Junk (Sorenbarrett) Even in decay, your verses shine—mending despair into hope, one scrap at...
  June 14th, 2025 13:01
• Dads Jokes For Father\'s Day (Poetic Licence) These jokes are pure gold, Dad—you\'ve outdone yourself again! Wishing...
  June 14th, 2025 12:57
• The Maid (Sorenbarrett) Life’s journey told in maids and dreams so true— from milk to love to...
  June 13th, 2025 03:35
• SILENT THOUGHTS (Nephilim56) Silence becomes alive in your verses, a sanctuary and a storm. Truly...
  June 13th, 2025 03:09
• Mademoiselle Beauty (Reynaldo Casison) Every line sings with the passion of a thousand sunflowers, forever...
  June 13th, 2025 02:58
• A Cup Of Kindness. (Poetic Licence) Your words remind us that even small kindnesses can outshine endless hate....
  June 13th, 2025 02:53
• I am who I am (Tony36) Good Write ..resonated much..
  June 8th, 2025 11:57
• The Heart Has a Cost (RSM0812) Your poem beautifully captures the bittersweet dance of love and loss,...
  June 8th, 2025 09:35
• Years (Sorenbarrett) Time\'s harsh soil chokes even the strongest seeds of hope—yet still, we...
  June 8th, 2025 05:21
• Wise Man Say (15). (Poetic Licence) Wise and witty, your words dance with truth and humor—a refreshing blend...
  June 8th, 2025 05:09
• Head of wheat (Sorenbarrett) Your beautiful poem weaves life\'s cycle with striking imagery—birth,...
  June 6th, 2025 04:54
• Your Heart Is Strong. (Poetic Licence) Mind power is the supreme power ...Mind is the software of the...
  June 6th, 2025 04:51
• False Impressions. (Poetic Licence) Your words peel back layers, revealing truth beneath the surface. A...
  June 4th, 2025 11:46
• Birth, life, death (Sorenbarrett) Its enigmatic verses invite deep reflection on existence\'s dualities. The...
  June 4th, 2025 11:40
• Evening moon haiku (Reynaldo Casison) Sweet and small gem!
  June 4th, 2025 11:37
• the wind speaks (Arqios) Your poem flows like the wind itself—ethereal and haunting. The...
  June 4th, 2025 11:35
• Sometimes (Tony36) Your words resonate deeply—true strength lies in resilience and starting...
  June 4th, 2025 11:29
• Starlight (RSM0812) Your poem beautifully captures the cosmic dance of light and darkness,...
  June 2nd, 2025 14:07
• unrelenting horizon (Arqios) Beautiful....masterfully captures the weight of daily existence, where...
  June 2nd, 2025 14:04
• What is a poet? (Sorenbarrett) This poem beautifully captures the essence of a poet—dreamer,...
  June 2nd, 2025 14:01
• Natures S.O.S. (Poetic Licence) Your poem powerfully captures nature’s despair and humanity’s reckless...
  June 2nd, 2025 13:57
• Gone (Sorenbarrett) Your words weave nature’s truth with haunting grace— a stark reminder...
  May 27th, 2025 04:24
• Pebbles (Sorenbarrett) Your words ripple through time, each verse a pebble in the mind’s...
  May 26th, 2025 04:38
• The Dream I Wanted. (Poetic Licence) Your poem beautifully captures the longing for love and safety amidst...
  May 26th, 2025 02:28
• beautiful regret (Arqios) This poem aches with quiet wisdom— love’s presence lingers, not to...
  May 26th, 2025 02:26
• For My Dad. (Goldfinch60) Your words paint a beautiful, heartfelt tribute to your dad. The love and...
  May 22nd, 2025 04:17
• it walks, not me (Arqios) Your poem beautifully captures the haunting dance between memory and...
  May 22nd, 2025 04:14
• Ma an me (Sorenbarrett) This poem breaks me—the cold, the cancer, the ghost of \'Ma\' answering...
  May 22nd, 2025 04:10
• Just Because. (Poetic Licence) This resonates deeply. Truth isn’t confined to agreement—your words...
  May 22nd, 2025 02:51
• hair in the wind (Arqios) A whirl of imagery—wind, light, and myth collide. Nursery rhymes twist...
  May 21st, 2025 13:15
• Silenced. (Poetic Licence) Your words cut deep, yet silence speaks louder still— a poet\'s heart...
  May 21st, 2025 02:28
• Perfect World (RSM0812) Good Write ..nicely expressed..
  May 20th, 2025 14:18
• Empathy (Sorenbarrett) Your words weave raw emotion so deep, a mirror to souls that ache and...
  May 20th, 2025 04:19
• Broken Dreams. (Poetic Licence) Such depth in so few lines—your poetry cuts straight to the soul. A...
  May 20th, 2025 02:17
• Thredbo (Winter 2025) (Arqios) Beautiful imagery—I can almost feel the crisp winter air and see the...
  May 20th, 2025 02:14
• Wise Man Say (12) (Poetic Licence) Each stanza a gem, balancing depth and clarity—life’s lessons polished...
  May 18th, 2025 14:28
• Old closet (Sorenbarrett) A hauntingly tender elegy for lost love—each line aches with quiet...
  May 18th, 2025 14:25
• Brighten The Way. (Goldfinch60) Good write ..nicely expressed🙏
  May 18th, 2025 14:21
• Would You Call Me God?. (Poetic Licence) A piercing critique of divine hypocrisy—your words unmask the silence of...
  May 16th, 2025 04:23
• Damnatio memoriae read or we die (Sorenbarrett) Your verses bloom like eternal seeds, ensuring no poem truly dies. A...
  May 16th, 2025 04:17
• A FOREIGN FIELD (Nephilim56) Your poem etches war\'s haunting toll—where flesh and spirit fade...
  May 15th, 2025 04:23
• Dust of life (Sorenbarrett) Profound reflections on life\'s fleeting essence, where dust and divinity...
  May 15th, 2025 03:51
• Look In The Mirror. (Poetic Licence) Your words reflect the timeless dance between past and present—deeply...
  May 15th, 2025 03:48
• A Longing For Freedom (Poetic Licence) This poem powerfully captures deep anguish and haunting despair, with...
  May 7th, 2025 21:51
• Be who you are (Tony36) Beautiful write💥
  May 7th, 2025 21:46
• Shade (Sorenbarrett) The rhythm and word choice enhance the reflective, almost wistful mood....
  May 7th, 2025 21:44
• Oh Narrow Love (RSM0812) The language is tender and heartfelt, with a rhythmic flow that enhances...
  May 7th, 2025 21:40
• Life is Strange (Mottakeenur Rehman) Unfortunately the remark has been deleted for technical issue...Sorry for...
  May 2nd, 2025 05:08
• Life is Strange (Mottakeenur Rehman) Thank you for this beautiful reflection! You’ve captured exactly what I...
  May 2nd, 2025 05:07
• Sleep on (Sorenbarrett) A short gem❤️
  April 28th, 2025 09:45
• Hard Words (Sorenbarrett) This poem beautifully captures the delicate balance of our actions and...
  April 24th, 2025 04:52
• Life\'s journey (Tony36) Enjoyed the read!
  April 20th, 2025 06:03
• The Joy of Silence (Neville) \"The Joy of Silence\" invites reflection on the complexities of human...
  February 10th, 2024 10:26
• Timepiece of Gratitude: A Teachers\' Day Poem (Mottakeenur Rehman) Thank so much for precious comment🙏♥️.. The students gave me a...
  September 14th, 2023 03:47
• The Sound of Darkness (Neville) The central theme of the poem revolves around the dual nature of darkness...
  September 14th, 2023 02:24
• Peace At The End Of The Day. (Goldfinch60) \"Peace At The End Of The Day\" is a celebration of love, companionship,...
  August 25th, 2023 02:01
• Give What You Can. (Goldfinch60) The simplicity of the language and the repetitive structure contribute to...
  August 15th, 2023 15:12
• Let’s Play Sushi (Neville) The mention of \"chilled rice wine\" and the playful interaction with...
  August 15th, 2023 15:10
• Our Place. (Goldfinch60) Through its straightforward language and vivid imagery, it invites readers...
  August 8th, 2023 20:44
• The Day She Wore Flour in Her Hair (Neville) The poem\'s simplicity belies its complex layers of meaning, making it a...
  August 8th, 2023 20:37
• Fruits (2781) It emphasizes the importance of discernment in identifying those who might...
  July 29th, 2023 13:46