Comments on community poems by Mottakeenur Rehman
- Our Love Tanka. (Goldfinch60)
Your words beautifully capture eternal love\'s glow—so heartfelt and...
June 27th, 2025 15:04 - A Spring Storm (RSM0812)
Your poem beautifully captures the contrast between spring\'s warmth and...
June 27th, 2025 15:01 - You (Tony36)
Your words beautifully capture the power of love’s light in the darkest...
June 27th, 2025 14:59 - Don\'t mix them up (Sorenbarrett)
This is such a brilliant and playful contrast between two iconic figures!...
June 27th, 2025 14:55 - Children Had Fun. (Poetic Licence)
This poem beautifully captures the bittersweet chaos of a family...
June 27th, 2025 14:51 - peel back the neon (Arqios)
Peel Back the Neon\" hits with raw, electric energy—stripping away...
June 27th, 2025 14:43 - Mary\'s Fun Life. (Poetic Licence)
Your playful rhymes and quirky humor shine through in Chuckles Week! Mary...
June 25th, 2025 14:07 - Visit with a dream (Sorenbarrett)
A moving glimpse into rural hardship and quiet resilience—loved the raw,...
June 25th, 2025 14:03 - lore-keeping (Arqios)
Celestial and cryptic, this poem unravels like starlight on silk....
June 25th, 2025 14:00 - A strange guy (Sorenbarrett)
Your words dance on the edge of wonder and wit—surreal, vivid, and...
June 20th, 2025 03:43 - White sepulchers (Sorenbarrett)
Haunting and raw—your words peel back the lies we wear like skin. The...
June 20th, 2025 03:35 - my poetic side (Arqios)
Your words weave a quiet magic, tender yet profound—like roots deepening...
June 20th, 2025 03:32 - bridges (Arqios)
This poem resonates deeply—bridges as symbols of connection, memory, and...
June 20th, 2025 03:23 - Live Life Like A Sponge (Senryu) Go On Read It , You Might Like It!!!. (Poetic Licence)
Clever metaphor—sponges teach us growth through openness!
Absorb,...
June 20th, 2025 03:19 - Freely Dance (Tony36)
Good Wtite🙏
June 18th, 2025 13:32 - Fields of Daffodils (RSM0812)
Your words paint love like golden light,
dancing with daffodils—pure...
June 18th, 2025 13:30 - Do Not Be A Beaver. (Poetic Licence)
Clever and concise—a poignant reminder to flow freely, not trap...
June 18th, 2025 13:27 - My Friend (Sorenbarrett)
Your poem paints her wild soul so bright—
a beautiful, broken,...
June 18th, 2025 13:25 - still the earth breathes (Arqios)
Your words weave resilience into every line, echoing the earth’s untamed...
June 18th, 2025 13:22 - where shadows do not drown (Arqios)
Your poem weaves myth and exile with haunting beauty—shadows may shift,...
June 16th, 2025 20:23 - Frigid conversation (Sorenbarrett)
Haunting and vivid—your imagery chills to the bone. A masterpiece of...
June 16th, 2025 20:15 - Perfect Life. (Poetic Licence)
Truth echoes in your words—perfection is a myth, but authenticity is...
June 16th, 2025 20:12 - SILENT FLIGHT (Ferjohn Timung)
Your words beautifully honor their journey—so touching and heartfelt. A...
June 14th, 2025 13:20 - EMBRACED (Nephilim56)
Your words dance like starlight on water—ethereal and hauntingly...
June 14th, 2025 13:11 - Two Hearts (Tony36)
Such a touching ode to love’s timeless connection—your words resonate...
June 14th, 2025 13:08 - Untittled (RSM0812)
Your words weave darkness and light with haunting grace—
a raw, poetic...
June 14th, 2025 13:05 - Junk (Sorenbarrett)
Even in decay, your verses shine—mending despair into hope, one scrap at...
June 14th, 2025 13:01 - Dads Jokes For Father\'s Day (Poetic Licence)
These jokes are pure gold, Dad—you\'ve outdone yourself again!
Wishing...
June 14th, 2025 12:57 - The Maid (Sorenbarrett)
Life’s journey told in maids and dreams so true—
from milk to love to...
June 13th, 2025 03:35 - SILENT THOUGHTS (Nephilim56)
Silence becomes alive in your verses, a sanctuary and a storm. Truly...
June 13th, 2025 03:09 - Mademoiselle Beauty (Reynaldo Casison)
Every line sings with the passion of a thousand sunflowers, forever...
June 13th, 2025 02:58 - A Cup Of Kindness. (Poetic Licence)
Your words remind us that even small kindnesses can outshine endless hate....
June 13th, 2025 02:53 - I am who I am (Tony36)
Good Write ..resonated much..
June 8th, 2025 11:57 - The Heart Has a Cost (RSM0812)
Your poem beautifully captures the bittersweet dance of love and loss,...
June 8th, 2025 09:35 - Years (Sorenbarrett)
Time\'s harsh soil chokes even the strongest seeds of hope—yet still, we...
June 8th, 2025 05:21 - Wise Man Say (15). (Poetic Licence)
Wise and witty, your words dance with truth and humor—a refreshing blend...
June 8th, 2025 05:09 - Head of wheat (Sorenbarrett)
Your beautiful poem weaves life\'s cycle with striking imagery—birth,...
June 6th, 2025 04:54 - Your Heart Is Strong. (Poetic Licence)
Mind power is the supreme power ...Mind is the software of the...
June 6th, 2025 04:51 - False Impressions. (Poetic Licence)
Your words peel back layers, revealing truth beneath the surface. A...
June 4th, 2025 11:46 - Birth, life, death (Sorenbarrett)
Its enigmatic verses invite deep reflection on existence\'s dualities. The...
June 4th, 2025 11:40 - Evening moon haiku (Reynaldo Casison)
Sweet and small gem!
June 4th, 2025 11:37 - the wind speaks (Arqios)
Your poem flows like the wind itself—ethereal and haunting. The...
June 4th, 2025 11:35 - Sometimes (Tony36)
Your words resonate deeply—true strength lies in resilience and starting...
June 4th, 2025 11:29 - Starlight (RSM0812)
Your poem beautifully captures the cosmic dance of light and darkness,...
June 2nd, 2025 14:07 - unrelenting horizon (Arqios)
Beautiful....masterfully captures the weight of daily existence, where...
June 2nd, 2025 14:04 - What is a poet? (Sorenbarrett)
This poem beautifully captures the essence of a poet—dreamer,...
June 2nd, 2025 14:01 - Natures S.O.S. (Poetic Licence)
Your poem powerfully captures nature’s despair and humanity’s reckless...
June 2nd, 2025 13:57 - Gone (Sorenbarrett)
Your words weave nature’s truth with haunting grace—
a stark reminder...
May 27th, 2025 04:24 - Pebbles (Sorenbarrett)
Your words ripple through time,
each verse a pebble in the mind’s...
May 26th, 2025 04:38 - The Dream I Wanted. (Poetic Licence)
Your poem beautifully captures the longing for love and safety amidst...
May 26th, 2025 02:28 - beautiful regret (Arqios)
This poem aches with quiet wisdom—
love’s presence lingers, not to...
May 26th, 2025 02:26 - For My Dad. (Goldfinch60)
Your words paint a beautiful, heartfelt tribute to your dad. The love and...
May 22nd, 2025 04:17 - it walks, not me (Arqios)
Your poem beautifully captures the haunting dance between memory and...
May 22nd, 2025 04:14 - Ma an me (Sorenbarrett)
This poem breaks me—the cold, the cancer, the ghost of \'Ma\' answering...
May 22nd, 2025 04:10 - Just Because. (Poetic Licence)
This resonates deeply. Truth isn’t confined to agreement—your words...
May 22nd, 2025 02:51 - hair in the wind (Arqios)
A whirl of imagery—wind, light, and myth collide. Nursery rhymes twist...
May 21st, 2025 13:15 - Silenced. (Poetic Licence)
Your words cut deep, yet silence speaks louder still—
a poet\'s heart...
May 21st, 2025 02:28 - Perfect World (RSM0812)
Good Write ..nicely expressed..
May 20th, 2025 14:18 - Empathy (Sorenbarrett)
Your words weave raw emotion so deep,
a mirror to souls that ache and...
May 20th, 2025 04:19 - Broken Dreams. (Poetic Licence)
Such depth in so few lines—your poetry cuts straight to the soul. A...
May 20th, 2025 02:17 - Thredbo (Winter 2025) (Arqios)
Beautiful imagery—I can almost feel the crisp winter air and see the...
May 20th, 2025 02:14 - Wise Man Say (12) (Poetic Licence)
Each stanza a gem, balancing depth and clarity—life’s lessons polished...
May 18th, 2025 14:28 - Old closet (Sorenbarrett)
A hauntingly tender elegy for lost love—each line aches with quiet...
May 18th, 2025 14:25 - Brighten The Way. (Goldfinch60)
Good write ..nicely expressed🙏
May 18th, 2025 14:21 - Would You Call Me God?. (Poetic Licence)
A piercing critique of divine hypocrisy—your words unmask the silence of...
May 16th, 2025 04:23 - Damnatio memoriae read or we die (Sorenbarrett)
Your verses bloom like eternal seeds, ensuring no poem truly dies. A...
May 16th, 2025 04:17 - A FOREIGN FIELD (Nephilim56)
Your poem etches war\'s haunting toll—where flesh and spirit fade...
May 15th, 2025 04:23 - Dust of life (Sorenbarrett)
Profound reflections on life\'s fleeting essence, where dust and divinity...
May 15th, 2025 03:51 - Look In The Mirror. (Poetic Licence)
Your words reflect the timeless dance between past and present—deeply...
May 15th, 2025 03:48 - A Longing For Freedom (Poetic Licence)
This poem powerfully captures deep anguish and haunting despair, with...
May 7th, 2025 21:51 - Be who you are (Tony36)
Beautiful write💥
May 7th, 2025 21:46 - Shade (Sorenbarrett)
The rhythm and word choice enhance the reflective, almost wistful mood....
May 7th, 2025 21:44 - Oh Narrow Love (RSM0812)
The language is tender and heartfelt, with a rhythmic flow that enhances...
May 7th, 2025 21:40 - Life is Strange (Mottakeenur Rehman)
Unfortunately the remark has been deleted for technical issue...Sorry for...
May 2nd, 2025 05:08 - Life is Strange (Mottakeenur Rehman)
Thank you for this beautiful reflection! You’ve captured exactly what I...
May 2nd, 2025 05:07 - Sleep on (Sorenbarrett)
A short gem❤️
April 28th, 2025 09:45 - Hard Words (Sorenbarrett)
This poem beautifully captures the delicate balance of our actions and...
April 24th, 2025 04:52 - Life\'s journey (Tony36)
Enjoyed the read!
April 20th, 2025 06:03 - The Joy of Silence (Neville)
\"The Joy of Silence\" invites reflection on the complexities of human...
February 10th, 2024 10:26 - Timepiece of Gratitude: A Teachers\' Day Poem (Mottakeenur Rehman)
Thank so much for precious comment🙏♥️..
The students gave me a...
September 14th, 2023 03:47 - The Sound of Darkness (Neville)
The central theme of the poem revolves around the dual nature of darkness...
September 14th, 2023 02:24 - Peace At The End Of The Day. (Goldfinch60)
\"Peace At The End Of The Day\" is a celebration of love, companionship,...
August 25th, 2023 02:01 - Give What You Can. (Goldfinch60)
The simplicity of the language and the repetitive structure contribute to...
August 15th, 2023 15:12 - Let’s Play Sushi (Neville)
The mention of \"chilled rice wine\" and the playful interaction with...
August 15th, 2023 15:10 - Our Place. (Goldfinch60)
Through its straightforward language and vivid imagery, it invites readers...
August 8th, 2023 20:44 - The Day She Wore Flour in Her Hair (Neville)
The poem\'s simplicity belies its complex layers of meaning, making it a...
August 8th, 2023 20:37 - Fruits (2781)
It emphasizes the importance of discernment in identifying those who might...
July 29th, 2023 13:46 - African Proverb. (Goldfinch60)
This thought-provoking piece encourages us to reflect on the real cost of...
July 29th, 2023 13:43 - Another Local Legend (Neville)
\"Another Local Legend\" is a thought-provoking poem that touches upon...
July 29th, 2023 12:11 - A day makes (2781)
The poem is a delightful celebration of gratitude, presence, and...
June 2nd, 2023 21:44 - Each Moment. (Goldfinch60)
It prompts us to reflect on the significance of our experiences and...
June 2nd, 2023 21:38 - Problems To Opportunities. (Goldfinch60)
It provides a motivational message that encourages personal growth and a...
May 26th, 2023 01:27 - Uber Brides (Neville)
This poem serves as a poignant reminder of the enduring power of human...
May 26th, 2023 01:25 - Praise the Lord! (2781)
\" Praise the Lord \" is a poem that celebrates faith, expresses...
May 25th, 2023 04:19 - At Least to the Moon and Back (Neville)
The poem reminds us that love can transcend boundaries and limitations,...
May 25th, 2023 04:16 - I Shall Be Back. (Goldfinch60)
The poem celebrates the profound impact of music on the human spirit,...
May 25th, 2023 04:14 - A River-Flowing Freely (Mottakeenur Rehman)
Dear Neville Sir,
Thank you for your kind words and appreciation....
May 18th, 2023 22:55 - A River-Flowing Freely (Mottakeenur Rehman)
Sir you are rhythmic ...And Your comments too..that give me the roam to...
May 18th, 2023 22:51 - Answers (2781)
It presents a perspective on the importance of studying sacred texts,...
May 18th, 2023 15:24 - Musing (Fay Slimm.)
\"Musing\" is a thought-provoking and introspective poem that invites...
May 18th, 2023 15:22
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