Comments on community poems by Mottakeenur Rehman

• Peace At The End Of The Day. (Goldfinch60) \"Peace At The End Of The Day\" is a celebration of love, companionship,...
  August 25th, 2023 02:01
• Give What You Can. (Goldfinch60) The simplicity of the language and the repetitive structure contribute to...
  August 15th, 2023 15:12
• Let’s Play Sushi (Neville) The mention of \"chilled rice wine\" and the playful interaction with...
  August 15th, 2023 15:10
• Our Place. (Goldfinch60) Through its straightforward language and vivid imagery, it invites readers...
  August 8th, 2023 20:44
• The Day She Wore Flour in Her Hair (Neville) The poem\'s simplicity belies its complex layers of meaning, making it a...
  August 8th, 2023 20:37
• Fruits (2781) It emphasizes the importance of discernment in identifying those who might...
  July 29th, 2023 13:46
• African Proverb. (Goldfinch60) This thought-provoking piece encourages us to reflect on the real cost of...
  July 29th, 2023 13:43
• Another Local Legend (Neville) \"Another Local Legend\" is a thought-provoking poem that touches upon...
  July 29th, 2023 12:11
• A day makes (2781) The poem is a delightful celebration of gratitude, presence, and...
  June 2nd, 2023 21:44
• Each Moment. (Goldfinch60) It prompts us to reflect on the significance of our experiences and...
  June 2nd, 2023 21:38
• Problems To Opportunities. (Goldfinch60) It provides a motivational message that encourages personal growth and a...
  May 26th, 2023 01:27
• Uber Brides (Neville) This poem serves as a poignant reminder of the enduring power of human...
  May 26th, 2023 01:25
• Praise the Lord! (2781) \" Praise the Lord \" is a poem that celebrates faith, expresses...
  May 25th, 2023 04:19
• At Least to the Moon and Back (Neville) The poem reminds us that love can transcend boundaries and limitations,...
  May 25th, 2023 04:16
• I Shall Be Back. (Goldfinch60) The poem celebrates the profound impact of music on the human spirit,...
  May 25th, 2023 04:14
• A River-Flowing Freely (Mottakeenur Rehman) Dear Neville Sir, Thank you for your kind words and appreciation....
  May 18th, 2023 22:55
• A River-Flowing Freely (Mottakeenur Rehman) Sir you are rhythmic ...And Your comments too..that give me the roam to...
  May 18th, 2023 22:51
• Answers (2781) It presents a perspective on the importance of studying sacred texts,...
  May 18th, 2023 15:24
• Musing (Fay Slimm.) \"Musing\" is a thought-provoking and introspective poem that invites...
  May 18th, 2023 15:22
• Sans Echo’s (Neville) \"Sans Echo\'s\" is a captivating poem that offers a critical commentary...
  May 18th, 2023 15:20
• Air Instrumentation. (Goldfinch60) It is a celebration of a peaceful moment shared between lovers, surrounded...
  May 18th, 2023 15:17
• Kingdoms (2781) The poem\'s message is one of caution against the corrupting influence of...
  May 16th, 2023 11:02
• Seen (Fay Slimm.) The poem captures the sense of wonder and awe that we often feel when we...
  May 16th, 2023 11:00
• Not The Place To Travel. (Goldfinch60) The poem offers a thoughtful reflection on the value of human connections...
  May 16th, 2023 10:55
• Celsius Rising (Neville) \"Celsius Rising\" is a brief yet intriguing poem that captures the...
  May 16th, 2023 10:51
• Cannot Be Compared (Dr. Shailesh Gupta Veer) A nice tribute to Mother❤️
  May 14th, 2023 12:29
• The Loss Of Family? (Goldfinch60) It is a thought-provoking and timely poem that raises important questions...
  May 14th, 2023 12:28
• Equilibrium (Mottakeenur Rehman) Hey there! Just wanted to drop a quick note to say how much I appreciate...
  May 14th, 2023 12:22
• Mothers day (2781) Good write and well tribute to mother👌👌
  May 14th, 2023 05:39
• They Were Nothing But Fools (Neville) The poem invites the reader to reflect on the nature of reality and the...
  May 14th, 2023 05:38
• Strong (2781) This poem is a heartfelt and relatable expression of the human desire to...
  May 5th, 2023 13:45
• HAIKUS ARE EASY (Michael Edwards) \'Haiku\' is a beautiful and challenging form of poetry that rewards...
  May 5th, 2023 13:42
• Echoes Seldom Lie These Days (Neville) This poem is a poignant reflection on the endurance of love and the...
  May 5th, 2023 13:40
• Another Day Started. (Goldfinch60) The text of the poem conveys a positive and hopeful outlook towards a new...
  May 5th, 2023 13:38
• Frog And Henry. (Goldfinch60) This poem is a beautifully written tribute to the artistry and skill of...
  April 27th, 2023 04:37
• Love is .. (Neville) The poem is an excellent example of how simplicity can sometimes be the...
  April 27th, 2023 04:34
• The Poem What I Wrote (Sorry Ernie). (Goldfinch60) This is a light-hearted and humorous piece that pokes fun at the different...
  April 26th, 2023 01:59
• Make Love Not War Acrostic. (Goldfinch60) This poem is a wonderful example of how poetry can be used to express...
  April 18th, 2023 11:11
• As Free As a Proverbial Bird (Neville) The poem\'s conclusion suggests that true freedom may not be found in the...
  April 18th, 2023 11:06
• I’ve always known I’m different (Primrose) The poem effectively captures the feeling of being an outsider and the...
  April 17th, 2023 05:45
• WHERE THE BALLS OF HELL HANG LOW (Michael Edwards) Sir🙏 The poem conveys a sense of despair and hopelessness, and it is...
  April 17th, 2023 05:37
• My Sunset (Dan Christian) This poem is a simple yet effective expression of love and admiration.
  April 17th, 2023 05:08
• Merciful Musings (Orchidee) \"Merciful Musings\" is a well-crafted poem that effectively communicates...
  April 17th, 2023 05:05
• Windscreen (2781) The poem presents a critical view of the speaker\'s attitude towards...
  April 17th, 2023 05:02
• In So Few Words Gone (Neville) \"In So Few Words Gone\" is a beautifully crafted poem that explores the...
  April 17th, 2023 05:00
• Sculpture Of Happiness. (Goldfinch60) The poem offers a valuable insight into the nature of happiness and...
  April 17th, 2023 04:56
• Still Calm, Safe and Free (Neville) The poem is a beautiful meditation on stillness, calmness, safety, and...
  April 14th, 2023 03:37
• Music Into My Heart. (Goldfinch60) The poem is a testament to the transformative power of music. It shows how...
  April 14th, 2023 03:31
• The stick (2781) Good write👌
  April 14th, 2023 00:29
• Under No Misconception (Neville) \"Under No Misconception\" is a thought-provoking and well-crafted poem...
  April 13th, 2023 16:41
• Timeless (Lorna) The poem \"Timeless\" celebrates the beauty and joy of life, regardless of...
  April 13th, 2023 13:50
• Nature\'s Harmony. (Goldfinch60) the poem is a celebration of the beauty and tranquility of the natural...
  April 12th, 2023 07:04
• Beneath Her Pretty Dress (Neville) The poem\'s themes of hidden beauty and the complexity of human nature are...
  April 12th, 2023 07:00
• Morning Moon (Lorna) Short gem👌🙏
  April 12th, 2023 06:58
• Memories (Fay Slimm.) This poem is a beautifully crafted piece of writing that captures the...
  April 10th, 2023 14:16
• If I be remembered let it be: Kindness that names me (L. B. Mek) It is a beautifully crafted meditation on the human desire for connection...
  April 10th, 2023 12:50
• Knowing (Lorna) \"Knowing\" is a poignant and relatable exploration of the human...
  April 10th, 2023 12:46
• Shortcut (Mottakeenur Rehman) I wanted to remove this poem as I didnot get any comment ...but Now I got...
  April 10th, 2023 08:15
• Back In The Sixties. (Goldfinch60) The poem offers a heartfelt tribute to a bygone era and the lasting...
  April 8th, 2023 06:34
• April\'s Insistence (Fay Slimm.) \"April\'s Insistence\" is a beautiful ode to the arrival of spring and...
  April 8th, 2023 06:28
• Upon Wanting to Die (Neville) Its message of hope and love is a reminder that even in the darkest...
  April 8th, 2023 06:17
• Longing (Lorna) The poem effectively captures the human experience of longing for love and...
  April 8th, 2023 06:11
• When They Would Lose Their Shadows (Neville) This poem, \"When They Would Lose Their Shadows\", captures the sensuality...
  April 7th, 2023 04:36
• Speed (Lorna) \"SPEED\" is a wonderful piece of poetry that captures the essence of the...
  April 7th, 2023 01:34
• Joyful Day. (Goldfinch60) This short piece of writing is a beautiful reflection on the beauty of...
  April 7th, 2023 01:03
• Sorry about Sorry (2781) The language is accessible and the structure is simple, but there are...
  April 6th, 2023 11:11
• Kinship (Fay Slimm.) \"Kinship\" is a beautifully written poem that celebrates the enduring...
  April 6th, 2023 04:58
• Slàinte Mhath. (Goldfinch60) ..Despite only knowing Gordon for a short time, the author appears to have...
  April 6th, 2023 03:50
• When a Fine Line Might Just Make it Okay (Neville) 👌👌Good ..
  April 6th, 2023 03:45
• Plans (Lorna) Good write👌
  April 6th, 2023 03:44
• The voice (2781) ✍️👌👌
  April 5th, 2023 12:15
• Resignation (Lorna) The writer seems to be optimistic and determined to face whatever...
  April 5th, 2023 04:14
• Dance of The Wind Children (Neville) \"Dance of the Wind Children\" is a beautiful poem that celebrates the...
  April 5th, 2023 04:09
• Passion is My Fashion (Mottakeenur Rehman) ❤️🙏🙏..
  April 5th, 2023 03:54
• Spring Ascending (Lorna) \"Spring Ascending\" is a beautiful poem that captures the essence of...
  April 5th, 2023 03:53
• Libra Distressed (Lorna) It is a powerful and evocative poem that captures the emotional and...
  April 5th, 2023 03:49
• Martyr (Mottakeenur Rehman) I\'m honored that my tribute to India resonated with you, and I hope that...
  April 4th, 2023 04:51
• April Affair (Fay Slimm.) \"April Affair\" is a beautifully crafted piece that uses language to...
  April 4th, 2023 04:47
• Folly (Neville) The poem is a celebration of the unconventional, of those who do not fit...
  April 4th, 2023 04:37
• Indian summer (2781) The poet encourages us to appreciate the passing of each season and not be...
  April 3rd, 2023 12:45
• Numbers (2781) your calculation provides a useful insight into the scale of energy...
  April 3rd, 2023 12:35
• Seeing into the Eyes of Mother (Mottakeenur Rehman) Thank you for your thoughtful comment. I appreciate your perspective on...
  April 3rd, 2023 11:01
• An Unconditional Exchange of Zero (Mottakeenur Rehman) thank you so much sir🙏
  April 3rd, 2023 08:25
• Seeing into the Eyes of Mother (Mottakeenur Rehman) Thank you for your kind words about my poem. Your encouragement and...
  April 3rd, 2023 03:24
• Our Sweet and Sticky Mouths (Neville) The poem is a celebration of the transformative power of intimacy and the...
  April 3rd, 2023 03:07
• Last Dance (Lorna) \"Last Dance\" is a beautiful and poignant poem that captures a fleeting...
  April 3rd, 2023 02:40
• Parting Question. (Goldfinch60) The poem\'s simplicity and accessibility make it relatable to a wide...
  April 2nd, 2023 07:24
• The Price of a Single Soul (Neville) \'\'The Price of a Single Soul\" is a well-crafted and thought-provoking...
  April 2nd, 2023 07:15
• Thermosphere is Descending (Mottakeenur Rehman) certainly..🙏❤️🙏
  April 2nd, 2023 06:32
• An Unconditional Exchange of Zero (Mottakeenur Rehman) Thank you so much ...your comment is priceless but...
  April 2nd, 2023 00:22
• An Unconditional Exchange of Zero (Mottakeenur Rehman) ❤️🙏🙏
  April 1st, 2023 06:27
• Love Changes Everything. (Goldfinch60) Love is not a temporary feeling or emotion..emotions and feelings...
  April 1st, 2023 06:12
• When Numbers No Longer Count (Neville) \"When Numbers No Longer Count\" is a powerful exploration of the...
  April 1st, 2023 06:07
• Huntress (Neville) The poem is a powerful and evocative exploration of the theme of pursuit...
  March 31st, 2023 05:11
• This Empty Page. (Goldfinch60) The worship of emptyness!,,Good write🙏👌✍️👌
  March 31st, 2023 01:46
• FOOTBALL PUNDITS (Michael Edwards) The poem is a commentary on the media industry and the way in which...
  March 31st, 2023 01:26
• Storked (Neville) 🙏Good write👌
  March 31st, 2023 01:00
• No Reason Required (Neville) Good write❤️
  March 30th, 2023 03:56
• The Marks on Our Ceiling (Neville) \"The Marks on Our Ceiling\" is a poem that captures the speaker\'s...
  March 30th, 2023 03:45
• I am a Father (Mottakeenur Rehman) ❤️🙏
  March 30th, 2023 03:34