Comments on community poems by Mottakeenur Rehman
- Sans Echoโs (Neville)
\"Sans Echo\'s\" is a captivating poem that offers a critical commentary...
May 18th, 2023 15:20 - Air Instrumentation. (Goldfinch60)
It is a celebration of a peaceful moment shared between lovers, surrounded...
May 18th, 2023 15:17 - Kingdoms (2781)
The poem\'s message is one of caution against the corrupting influence of...
May 16th, 2023 11:02 - Seen (Fay Slimm.)
The poem captures the sense of wonder and awe that we often feel when we...
May 16th, 2023 11:00 - Not The Place To Travel. (Goldfinch60)
The poem offers a thoughtful reflection on the value of human connections...
May 16th, 2023 10:55 - Celsius Rising (Neville)
\"Celsius Rising\" is a brief yet intriguing poem that captures the...
May 16th, 2023 10:51 - Cannot Be Compared (Dr. Shailesh Gupta Veer)
A nice tribute to Motherโค๏ธ
May 14th, 2023 12:29 - The Loss Of Family? (Goldfinch60)
It is a thought-provoking and timely poem that raises important questions...
May 14th, 2023 12:28 - Equilibrium (Mottakeenur Rehman)
Hey there! Just wanted to drop a quick note to say how much I appreciate...
May 14th, 2023 12:22 - Mothers day (2781)
Good write and well tribute to mother๐๐
May 14th, 2023 05:39 - They Were Nothing But Fools (Neville)
The poem invites the reader to reflect on the nature of reality and the...
May 14th, 2023 05:38 - Strong (2781)
This poem is a heartfelt and relatable expression of the human desire to...
May 5th, 2023 13:45 - HAIKUS ARE EASY (Michael Edwards)
\'Haiku\' is a beautiful and challenging form of poetry that rewards...
May 5th, 2023 13:42 - Echoes Seldom Lie These Days (Neville)
This poem is a poignant reflection on the endurance of love and the...
May 5th, 2023 13:40 - Another Day Started. (Goldfinch60)
The text of the poem conveys a positive and hopeful outlook towards a new...
May 5th, 2023 13:38 - Frog And Henry. (Goldfinch60)
This poem is a beautifully written tribute to the artistry and skill of...
April 27th, 2023 04:37 - Love is .. (Neville)
The poem is an excellent example of how simplicity can sometimes be the...
April 27th, 2023 04:34 - The Poem What I Wrote (Sorry Ernie). (Goldfinch60)
This is a light-hearted and humorous piece that pokes fun at the different...
April 26th, 2023 01:59 - Make Love Not War Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
This poem is a wonderful example of how poetry can be used to express...
April 18th, 2023 11:11 - As Free As a Proverbial Bird (Neville)
The poem\'s conclusion suggests that true freedom may not be found in the...
April 18th, 2023 11:06 - Iโve always known Iโm different (Primrose)
The poem effectively captures the feeling of being an outsider and the...
April 17th, 2023 05:45 - WHERE THE BALLS OF HELL HANG LOW (Michael Edwards)
Sir๐ The poem conveys a sense of despair and hopelessness, and it is...
April 17th, 2023 05:37 - My Sunset (Dan Christian)
This poem is a simple yet effective expression of love and admiration.
April 17th, 2023 05:08 - Merciful Musings (Orchidee)
\"Merciful Musings\" is a well-crafted poem that effectively communicates...
April 17th, 2023 05:05 - Windscreen (2781)
The poem presents a critical view of the speaker\'s attitude towards...
April 17th, 2023 05:02 - In So Few Words Gone (Neville)
\"In So Few Words Gone\" is a beautifully crafted poem that explores the...
April 17th, 2023 05:00 - Sculpture Of Happiness. (Goldfinch60)
The poem offers a valuable insight into the nature of happiness and...
April 17th, 2023 04:56 - Still Calm, Safe and Free (Neville)
The poem is a beautiful meditation on stillness, calmness, safety, and...
April 14th, 2023 03:37 - Music Into My Heart. (Goldfinch60)
The poem is a testament to the transformative power of music. It shows how...
April 14th, 2023 03:31 - The stick (2781)
Good write๐
April 14th, 2023 00:29 - Under No Misconception (Neville)
\"Under No Misconception\" is a thought-provoking and well-crafted poem...
April 13th, 2023 16:41 - Timeless (Lorna)
The poem \"Timeless\" celebrates the beauty and joy of life, regardless of...
April 13th, 2023 13:50 - Nature\'s Harmony. (Goldfinch60)
the poem is a celebration of the beauty and tranquility of the natural...
April 12th, 2023 07:04 - Beneath Her Pretty Dress (Neville)
The poem\'s themes of hidden beauty and the complexity of human nature are...
April 12th, 2023 07:00 - Morning Moon (Lorna)
Short gem๐๐
April 12th, 2023 06:58 - Memories (Fay Slimm.)
This poem is a beautifully crafted piece of writing that captures the...
April 10th, 2023 14:16 - If I be remembered let it be: Kindness that names me (L. B. Mek)
It is a beautifully crafted meditation on the human desire for connection...
April 10th, 2023 12:50 - Knowing (Lorna)
\"Knowing\" is a poignant and relatable exploration of the human...
April 10th, 2023 12:46 - Shortcut (Mottakeenur Rehman)
I wanted to remove this poem as I didnot get any comment ...but Now I got...
April 10th, 2023 08:15 - Back In The Sixties. (Goldfinch60)
The poem offers a heartfelt tribute to a bygone era and the lasting...
April 8th, 2023 06:34 - April\'s Insistence (Fay Slimm.)
\"April\'s Insistence\" is a beautiful ode to the arrival of spring and...
April 8th, 2023 06:28 - Upon Wanting to Die (Neville)
Its message of hope and love is a reminder that even in the darkest...
April 8th, 2023 06:17 - Longing (Lorna)
The poem effectively captures the human experience of longing for love and...
April 8th, 2023 06:11 - When They Would Lose Their Shadows (Neville)
This poem, \"When They Would Lose Their Shadows\", captures the sensuality...
April 7th, 2023 04:36 - Speed (Lorna)
\"SPEED\" is a wonderful piece of poetry that captures the essence of the...
April 7th, 2023 01:34 - Joyful Day. (Goldfinch60)
This short piece of writing is a beautiful reflection on the beauty of...
April 7th, 2023 01:03 - Sorry about Sorry (2781)
The language is accessible and the structure is simple, but there are...
April 6th, 2023 11:11 - Kinship (Fay Slimm.)
\"Kinship\" is a beautifully written poem that celebrates the enduring...
April 6th, 2023 04:58 - Slร inte Mhath. (Goldfinch60)
..Despite only knowing Gordon for a short time, the author appears to have...
April 6th, 2023 03:50 - When a Fine Line Might Just Make it Okay (Neville)
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April 6th, 2023 03:45 - Plans (Lorna)
Good write๐
April 6th, 2023 03:44 - The voice (2781)
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April 5th, 2023 12:15 - Resignation (Lorna)
The writer seems to be optimistic and determined to face whatever...
April 5th, 2023 04:14 - Dance of The Wind Children (Neville)
\"Dance of the Wind Children\" is a beautiful poem that celebrates the...
April 5th, 2023 04:09 - Passion is My Fashion (Mottakeenur Rehman)
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April 5th, 2023 03:54 - Spring Ascending (Lorna)
\"Spring Ascending\" is a beautiful poem that captures the essence of...
April 5th, 2023 03:53 - Libra Distressed (Lorna)
It is a powerful and evocative poem that captures the emotional and...
April 5th, 2023 03:49 - Martyr (Mottakeenur Rehman)
I\'m honored that my tribute to India resonated with you, and I hope that...
April 4th, 2023 04:51 - April Affair (Fay Slimm.)
\"April Affair\" is a beautifully crafted piece that uses language to...
April 4th, 2023 04:47 - Folly (Neville)
The poem is a celebration of the unconventional, of those who do not fit...
April 4th, 2023 04:37 - Indian summer (2781)
The poet encourages us to appreciate the passing of each season and not be...
April 3rd, 2023 12:45 - Numbers (2781)
your calculation provides a useful insight into the scale of energy...
April 3rd, 2023 12:35 - Seeing into the Eyes of Mother (Mottakeenur Rehman)
Thank you for your thoughtful comment. I appreciate your perspective on...
April 3rd, 2023 11:01 - An Unconditional Exchange of Zero (Mottakeenur Rehman)
thank you so much sir๐
April 3rd, 2023 08:25 - Seeing into the Eyes of Mother (Mottakeenur Rehman)
Thank you for your kind words about my poem. Your encouragement and...
April 3rd, 2023 03:24 - Our Sweet and Sticky Mouths (Neville)
The poem is a celebration of the transformative power of intimacy and the...
April 3rd, 2023 03:07 - Last Dance (Lorna)
\"Last Dance\" is a beautiful and poignant poem that captures a fleeting...
April 3rd, 2023 02:40 - Parting Question. (Goldfinch60)
The poem\'s simplicity and accessibility make it relatable to a wide...
April 2nd, 2023 07:24 - The Price of a Single Soul (Neville)
\'\'The Price of a Single Soul\" is a well-crafted and thought-provoking...
April 2nd, 2023 07:15 - Thermosphere is Descending (Mottakeenur Rehman)
certainly..๐โค๏ธ๐
April 2nd, 2023 06:32 - An Unconditional Exchange of Zero (Mottakeenur Rehman)
Thank you so much ...your comment is priceless but...
April 2nd, 2023 00:22 - An Unconditional Exchange of Zero (Mottakeenur Rehman)
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April 1st, 2023 06:27 - Love Changes Everything. (Goldfinch60)
Love is not a temporary feeling or emotion..emotions and feelings...
April 1st, 2023 06:12 - When Numbers No Longer Count (Neville)
\"When Numbers No Longer Count\" is a powerful exploration of the...
April 1st, 2023 06:07 - Huntress (Neville)
The poem is a powerful and evocative exploration of the theme of pursuit...
March 31st, 2023 05:11 - This Empty Page. (Goldfinch60)
The worship of emptyness!,,Good write๐๐โ๏ธ๐
March 31st, 2023 01:46 - FOOTBALL PUNDITS (Michael Edwards)
The poem is a commentary on the media industry and the way in which...
March 31st, 2023 01:26 - Storked (Neville)
๐Good write๐
March 31st, 2023 01:00 - No Reason Required (Neville)
Good writeโค๏ธ
March 30th, 2023 03:56 - The Marks on Our Ceiling (Neville)
\"The Marks on Our Ceiling\" is a poem that captures the speaker\'s...
March 30th, 2023 03:45 - I am a Father (Mottakeenur Rehman)
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March 30th, 2023 03:34 - Upon Learning to Fly (Neville)
The poem\'s themes of risk-taking and fear of the unknown are relatable...
March 29th, 2023 13:08 - A Question of Waste (Neville)
The use of the word \"waste\" in the title of the poem is significant, as...
March 28th, 2023 07:03 - Faith and Tolerance (Mottakeenur Rehman)
Thank you so much for taking the time to read my poem and for your...
March 22nd, 2023 12:54 - WITHIN (Michael Edwards)
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March 19th, 2023 04:46 - Morning To Night. (Goldfinch60)
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May 8th, 2022 02:09 - The Simple (Fay Slimm.)
Good writeโค๏ธ
March 10th, 2022 08:22 - Hooked. (Goldfinch60)
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February 27th, 2022 10:22 - Crumbs of Comfort (Orchidee)
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February 27th, 2022 10:21 - The Passing of Hermione (Neville)
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February 27th, 2022 08:08 - SHE WALKS ALONE (Michael Edwards)
touching and expressive linesโค๏ธ๐
February 27th, 2022 07:48 - SHE STANDS ALONE (Michael Edwards)
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February 4th, 2022 05:26 - Romance by Michelle Olds (1ofMyPassions)
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February 3rd, 2022 13:59 - Salvation Shown (Orchidee)
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February 3rd, 2022 03:15 - Occam\'s Retort (+4) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Good write๐๐
March 17th, 2021 12:45 - Totally Trusting (Orchidee)
Good Pious and spiritual,,๐๐
March 17th, 2021 11:43 - Catching the Drift (Fay Slimm.)
I enjoy your writing! Good write ๐๐๐
March 17th, 2021 11:42 - A Single Flower. (Goldfinch60)
Beautiful ..Very good write!
March 17th, 2021 11:40 - HIDDEN DEEP (Michael Edwards)
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March 17th, 2021 11:36 - EATING CURRY (Michael Edwards)
That\'s not good for our culture,,,We the people of Assam(India) never...
March 17th, 2020 11:50
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