Comments on community poems by Dan Williams
- Cancer Eats (Amberlynn)
You have captured a fundamental truth; cancer is the scourge of humanity....
October 3rd, 2024 00:07 - The Caravan (Blessing Awoniyi)
Surely we are all just travelers.\", \"And the caravan of time moves on\"...
October 3rd, 2024 00:05 - Markets of peace.. (Adnan it is)
So sad, so true. Peace has drifted for sure. Nice work.
September 30th, 2024 00:44 - Knowledge (Tony36)
I have made it a serious goal to learn at least one new thing every day,...
September 30th, 2024 00:42 - Sunrise (Teddy.15)
Simple and direct, again. Nice.
September 30th, 2024 00:39 - Calling the Bluff (Neville)
I almost hesitate to say in this judgmental world, but I am also armed to...
September 30th, 2024 00:38 - A warm meal (Sorenbarrett)
Ah yes, the value of the fresh kill. Clever and amusing.
September 30th, 2024 00:36 - Menopause (Written by a man - it\'s just a joke!!) (Pappy155)
I\'m not sure this will make you many friends on the other side, but...
September 29th, 2024 00:09 - Time (Tony36)
So much truth in this. I try to remember every time I see a friend or...
September 29th, 2024 00:08 - Fire and Ice (Jerry Reynolds)
Sweet, heartfelt. Sounds like true love. Nice work.
September 29th, 2024 00:06 - Modern Life (Doggerel Dave)
The obsession with \"security\' only seems to make my life miserable. I am...
September 28th, 2024 23:58 - Masters of the universe? (Sorenbarrett)
Arrogance has brought me down more than once, enough to make me struggle...
September 28th, 2024 23:54 - Fumbles (Teddy.15)
It\'s hard being a rabbit, sure, but those harsh comments might not be...
September 28th, 2024 23:50 - Loving Light (Cassie58)
I relly need to find this place. Your usual fine work.
September 28th, 2024 23:47 - ~> Teamwork - Form Trijan Refrain - (Thad Wilk)
Very clever, both feeding and eating. Love the \"a marionet duplicate\"....
September 28th, 2024 00:16 - It\'s alright Little Darling (Teddy.15)
Very Lennon and McCartney-ish. Sounds like a song. Very nice.
September 28th, 2024 00:14 - Him its him (Hey!)
I would have to change the gender but it makes perfect sense to me. Nicely...
September 27th, 2024 13:16 - Willow Dance (Jerry Reynolds)
So clever for such a short run! Very nice.
September 27th, 2024 13:14 - Remembering An Orange Room (Neville)
The heartache is wonderfully expressed. Good job.
September 27th, 2024 13:13 - Hustler’s Lament (Jerry Reynolds)
I think I met this guy, more than once. Good work.
September 27th, 2024 13:12 - Loving Light (Cassie58)
I can not seem to conjure your kind of optimism; happy that you can. Nice.
September 27th, 2024 13:10 - Stars and Stripes (Teddy.15)
250 million folks in this country and these two are the best we could put...
September 27th, 2024 13:09 - Music (Tony36)
I repeat the message I have taken as my duty; music will save us all if we...
September 27th, 2024 13:06 - From The Hilltop Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
You can\'t go far wrong appreciating nature. Well said.
September 27th, 2024 13:04 - A River Song (Cassie58)
What would we have to write about except the sun, the clouds, wonders of...
September 27th, 2024 13:03 - A vision (Sorenbarrett)
Seems writing Nation Drugged has left you morose, like me. Good work just...
September 27th, 2024 13:01 - A nation drugged (Sorenbarrett)
Bravo and hooray for you. You have stepped outside your normal short...
September 27th, 2024 12:58 - Icecream Alley (Jerry Reynolds)
Quite clever and wonderful imagery, amusing as hell. Nice work.
September 26th, 2024 00:33 - The Horney Spider (Jerry Reynolds)
Yes, life is hard for tarantula menfolk. Got to be some life lessons in...
September 26th, 2024 00:31 - Go Figure (Cheeky Missy)
Virtually all of my poems are old, some very old. This one of yours stands...
September 26th, 2024 00:30 - The Leaves Are Down (Cassie58)
One of my favorite cartoons shows a line of lemmings headed for the cliff,...
September 26th, 2024 00:28 - Vibrant Colors (Tony36)
I have lived my life color blind, something about defective cones, I am so...
September 26th, 2024 00:26 - Weight of a shadow (Sorenbarrett)
I read where at death a small fraction of weight ca ne measured. The soul,...
September 26th, 2024 00:23 - Not gonna March (Tony36)
I wish I could believe stands like yours would have good effect. There...
September 25th, 2024 00:34 - Cry Myself To Sleep (𓆩Mase𓆪)
This is epic. How do you find time for such detail? Well done.
September 25th, 2024 00:30 - How To Never Stop Being Sad (Gracie🍯)
Never stop writing. Graceful and eloquent.
September 24th, 2024 00:09 - Mannequin (NinjaGirl)
This relationship is in dire need of adjustment. Well said.
September 24th, 2024 00:07 - Goodness (2781)
I sure could use a handful of your optimism. Nice work.
September 24th, 2024 00:05 - Dust of a dream (Sorenbarrett)
so where can I find these jars of vintage air? Maybe then I could be...
September 24th, 2024 00:02 - tiptoe (NinjaGirl)
Love sure can make sleeping an ordeal, eh? Nice work.
September 24th, 2024 00:00 - Autumn Equinox Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
If you stopped at \"The golden leaves like whispered secrets lie,
A...
September 23rd, 2024 23:58 - Today (ADarkerMind)
So much so well done. \"a face with a thousand land mines on it\'s chin\"...
September 23rd, 2024 00:19 - A Mannequin\'s Scars (CarnationsCaretaker)
This is just exquisite. Phrasing and imagery can bring tears. Very nicely...
September 23rd, 2024 00:17 - We\'re Not Okay but Thanks for Asking (John Lee)
The curse of insincerity perfectly described. Nice.
September 23rd, 2024 00:15 - Fallen Angel (Tony36)
Maybe there is more to this tale, I believe redemption is possible. Well...
September 23rd, 2024 00:13 - A Gentleman\'s Lady (Teddy.15)
Hopefully one of the ever fewer real gentlemen is the recipient of this....
September 23rd, 2024 00:10 - ~> Heroin! - form Monotetra - (Thad Wilk)
Wow. This is an all too frequent story. How is it that I feel I need to...
September 23rd, 2024 00:08 - Love Must Ever Be Acrostic Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
I sure hope your vision is better than mine. Nice work.
September 23rd, 2024 00:06 - Garden with no gardener (Sorenbarrett)
A veritable symphony of flora and fauna. Very nicely done.
September 23rd, 2024 00:04 - last nights end (Maplespal)
Dare I add \"easily read\"? Clever and even amusing.
September 22nd, 2024 01:23 - The eternal return (Ellen Marsell)
Great description, well measured phrases. Well done.
September 22nd, 2024 01:21 - Happy 18th Birthday Bacha!!! (Meera Mere)
At this point in my 75 year life I have come to realize the impotence of...
September 22nd, 2024 01:19 - Fading Echoes (Dev Parth)
Nice to see someone seems to share my cynicism and despair. Good job.
September 22nd, 2024 01:15 - The Door (Tony36)
Well, you know you have to open it, no backing out now.
September 22nd, 2024 01:12 - Old Codgers Love Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
Bravo and congratulations, this is good for my soul. Thank you.
September 22nd, 2024 01:11 - Expectations (Sorenbarrett)
Best advice I\'ve received this year. Nailed it again.
September 22nd, 2024 01:09 - Puppets on a string (Tony36)
Does not have to be this way.
September 21st, 2024 00:24 - its a choice (MR.apocalypse)
I would say that this is aimed directly at me but take issue with \"never...
September 21st, 2024 00:21 - At Home On The Farm (ADarkerMind)
\"she is here again\" is the heart of this; then \"it is only when I...
September 21st, 2024 00:19 - A very Gracious Goodbye (Teddy.15)
Greving properly is healing. The dead are hopefully at peace. Nice work...
September 21st, 2024 00:13 - Better Than Gold (Thomas W Case)
C#M leads smoothly into Dm, very natural progression. Just like this.
September 21st, 2024 00:11 - Junkyard of time (Sorenbarrett)
God that \"water of poetry\" is grand, inspired. Add this to your list of...
September 21st, 2024 00:08 - A little (Alan R)
A little of this is all it takes. Makes me think awe, so happy.
September 20th, 2024 01:11 - I dream of peace (Tony36)
I sure hope your vision is more accurate than mine. Nice work.
September 20th, 2024 01:10 - A Pick Me Up (ADarkerMind)
Nice rhythm and clever lines, a winner.
September 20th, 2024 01:08 - Pastures In The Sky (Cassie58)
Wonderful description of a sadness me most all have to try to deal with....
September 20th, 2024 01:06 - Handicap (Sorenbarrett)
Smooth, evocative, typical. Yet another winner.
September 20th, 2024 01:03 - Soul-finder (Teddy.15)
I sure hope you are right.
September 20th, 2024 01:01 - Everyday Rarities (Tom Dylan)
It is a lot of times hard to know what objects, and people, we will come...
September 20th, 2024 01:00 - Love Into Light Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
I wish I could be more optimistic but my opinion of most of my fellow...
September 20th, 2024 00:58 - Dark Night (Tony36)
I keep expecting something to jump out and say \"BOO\". Well done.
September 19th, 2024 01:11 - From Kingdom Come (ADarkerMind)
Sometimes it seems like \"two miles shy of where I cannot be.\" is as...
September 19th, 2024 01:10 - Bicycles in Beijing (Cassie58)
Nice clarity and flow for such a tangled story. How did parking spaces get...
September 19th, 2024 01:06 - Now Out in The Open (Neville)
This is the coldness that can\'t be warmed by any blanket, and furnace....
September 19th, 2024 01:04 - The Final Retreat (Thomas W Case)
The city streets will curse you, the woods will help heal you. Stay with...
September 19th, 2024 01:01 - Me (Bella Shepard)
Me too.
September 19th, 2024 00:59 - All Hail to the Rest…. (Doggerel Dave)
Given the sorry state of the First Amendment I don\'t think free speech...
September 19th, 2024 00:58 - 100 Not Out (Tom Dylan)
All these things come slowly. Be patient, keep writing. Not too much...
September 19th, 2024 00:55 - Perfectly polished (Teddy.15)
I think I have been colour coordinated maybe twice in my life, probably by...
September 19th, 2024 00:53 - Back To My Youth Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
Oh the skinned knees, I had my own seat at the local E.R. Still looking...
September 19th, 2024 00:51 - What I left behind (Sorenbarrett)
Sting would love this. I do too. Very nice work.
September 19th, 2024 00:48 - Dishcloth Wisdom (AuburnScribbler)
A big amen and thank you. With the first amendment in shambles this needs...
September 18th, 2024 00:49 - Another One of The Lads (Tom Dylan)
I think I was out drinking with this lout last week. A barroom fixture....
September 18th, 2024 00:47 - DICHOTOMY (Bobby O)
I think everybody fears lonely. I sure do. Nice work.
September 18th, 2024 00:44 - Felt (Cassie58)
Scary stuff. Plagues are pretty high on my list of ways human will undo...
September 18th, 2024 00:39 - Our River Of Love. (Goldfinch60)
Amen. When I am asked what religion I am I answer \"Nature\". This is
September 18th, 2024 00:35 - Once a mighty tree (Sorenbarrett)
\"where once towered mighty trees\" seems to be more and more places...
September 18th, 2024 00:33 - The Sweetest of Slumberbash (Teddy.15)
And a beautiful dream it was and cleverly reported. Nice work.
September 17th, 2024 00:34 - A Winter Passing (Cassie58)
I have unfortunately outlived most of my friends so this rings very true....
September 17th, 2024 00:31 - They Lied About the Five Minute Warning (Neville)
One thing is very sure; there will never be two more world wars.
September 16th, 2024 00:51 - Now we are three.... (Orchidee)
Calls up my Brother and I sitting with my Dad as he slipped away, so much...
September 16th, 2024 00:48 - Devil Plays the Fiddle (Teddy.15)
Touches a warm spot for a ballerina I lost many years ago to inner pain...
September 16th, 2024 00:46 - My Father’s Daughters (Cassie58)
I was raised to believe Family came first, always. That has worked well...
September 16th, 2024 00:43 - Country walk (Sorenbarrett)
Spoken like a true country boy, at heart anyway. Nice.
September 16th, 2024 00:41 - Sonnet For Steven. (Goldfinch60)
What a perfect remembrance, what a poignant description of love lost to...
September 16th, 2024 00:39 - Wellcome to the 5:00 news (MR.apocalypse)
Amen, amen. Watch CNN to learn what to think. It\'s so sad.
September 15th, 2024 00:37 - On war.. (NafisaSB)
It pains me to mention that there have been wars as long as there have...
September 15th, 2024 00:34 - Reading Is A Crime. (Goldfinch60)
This is so much scarier because it becomes likelier all the time. 1984...
September 15th, 2024 00:31 - Mother\'s place (Sorenbarrett)
As someone who lost his Mother as a young child this rings as true to me;...
September 15th, 2024 00:28 - Hold On Tight (Teddy.15)
Highs and lows, agreed, but going so quickly from \"a little bumpier\"...
September 15th, 2024 00:26
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