Comments on community poems by Dan Williams

• Four Children (Dan Williams)
  August 2nd, 2024 00:07
• homeless (Jim56) California, one state, has fully a third of the homeless in this country....
  August 1st, 2024 00:20
• Nature god (Sorenbarrett) I sure wish I had some of your optimism. Todays world has me leaning more...
  August 1st, 2024 00:07
• To Be Loved (MendedFences27) \"does she ever think of me?\" is my epitaph. Many succumb to the escape...
  July 30th, 2024 00:02
• Longing (Angela) Very nice, sad but hopeful.
  July 29th, 2024 23:59
• She Lay In Her Bed (Bella Shepard) Amen. Music can save us all if we just let it. Nice work.
  July 29th, 2024 23:55
• The Whisper Tree (Dan Williams) This is old stuff, one of the first I felt confident enough to show...
  July 29th, 2024 12:55
• Friends With Benefits (Neville) Well done. Remember, the price of life is death.
  July 28th, 2024 22:38
• NIGHT SKY (Qurrathul Ain) I love the idea of falling into the sky. Nice work.
  July 28th, 2024 22:37
• Christmas In July. (Goldfinch60) You left out the maddening desperate suicidal shoppers after that great...
  July 28th, 2024 22:34
• Wine for the ear (Sorenbarrett) \"harmony into dissonances\", nice. Well rounded.
  July 28th, 2024 22:31
• SOMEONE\'S WORDS (Mompu) Not trying to but still I am impressed.
  July 28th, 2024 00:31
• Ceremony (2781) OK, you stumped me with \"obsurite\" and \"SOLENNITE\" on the way to a...
  July 28th, 2024 00:26
• Taste Bud Duel (Doggerel Dave) Clever. Nice work.
  July 28th, 2024 00:19
• Perfect (Sorenbarrett) Wise men indeed speak with the tongue of a child. Sometimes the result,...
  July 28th, 2024 00:17
• Outsiders (Neville) amen. lost in so many different ways. Bombs, plague, pollution of air and...
  July 28th, 2024 00:13
• Dancing Flames (Dev Parth) Bravo. Very nice work.
  July 27th, 2024 01:24
• In Our Hours (Orchidee) Amen.
  July 27th, 2024 01:23
• Meadows (MendedFences27) \"Recall smoky memories of things left undone\" You reading my mail? Good...
  July 27th, 2024 01:22
• The righteous side (Saleh Ben Saleh) Nice. Well spoken.
  July 27th, 2024 01:20
• Stuck On Repeat (Jojojoking) Those who ignore the past are bound to repeat it.
  July 27th, 2024 01:19
• Shadows (MendedFences27) Boy, and I thought I was grim. \"Am I truly insane or is my imagination\"...
  July 27th, 2024 01:18
• The Deep Dark Hole (The Struggler) Clever in spades, good imagery.
  July 27th, 2024 01:15
• An Hour Glass Acoustic Sound- (ADarkerMind) \"stranger on the streets of bone and prayer\" ...what a great line. Nice...
  July 25th, 2024 00:14
• Thoughts 11 (MendedFences27) All good, last line really nails it.
  July 25th, 2024 00:10
• Light Bites (Neville) Plain truth, always good.
  July 25th, 2024 00:09
• Funny Weed (Sorenbarrett) And legal, finally.
  July 25th, 2024 00:08
• Something Unnamed (Dan Williams) Thanks very much to all!
  July 24th, 2024 14:04
• False Promises and Little White Lies (Neville) People all too often make promises they are unable to keep, unrealistic or...
  July 24th, 2024 00:41
• Hurt. (Goldfinch60) Much more than the Man in Black, his music sustained me through a number...
  July 24th, 2024 00:39
• Whispers Of Dawn (Dev Parth) Aaahhh! Easy imagery, all too common sentiments. Thanks.
  July 24th, 2024 00:36
• The Last Day (MendedFences27) I know this song way too well. Sympathies. Nice work.
  July 24th, 2024 00:34
• Good Vibes (Tony36) Amen.
  July 22nd, 2024 23:43
• My neighbor\'s parties (Sorenbarrett) I think I smell politics; I think I concur. Good work.
  July 22nd, 2024 23:43
• A Life Lesson In Tapestry (Teddy.15) Wow, I thought I was negative. I agree and appreciate a fellow pessimist....
  July 22nd, 2024 23:36
• Lonesome Neon Nights (Thomas W Case) Bravo. Very nice. Imagery to spare.
  July 22nd, 2024 23:33
• Apathy. (Goldfinch60) Use it carefully, it ca also deceive you. Nice work though.
  July 22nd, 2024 23:32
• A Prostitutes Heart (Dan Williams) Thank you much. I used to be proud of this country; now, not so sure.
  July 22nd, 2024 15:38
• Precious Thursday (Bella Shepard) Music can save us all if we just let it. You express that much better than...
  July 22nd, 2024 00:02
• A Sudden Touch Of Wood (ADarkerMind) Great imagery. And \"fallen trees more opium than bark\" is graceful...
  July 21st, 2024 23:59
• Another Cut This Love (ADarkerMind) Rhyme seems to have fallen out of fashion so kudos the different rhyme...
  July 21st, 2024 23:55
• rhytthm of the rain (Jim56) The world has a shortage of optimists, thanks for this effort.
  July 19th, 2024 23:56
• The Great Moon and The Baubab (Teddy.15) Keep going. I\'m sure you have more to say.
  July 19th, 2024 23:52
• Is anybody out there? (2781) I\'m going to presume you are at least reacting to screwed up politics in...
  July 19th, 2024 23:49
• Sitting Ducks. (Goldfinch60) I lived for a while near a stream with steep banks. Ducks, after a swim,...
  July 19th, 2024 23:45
• The wash (Sorenbarrett) OK. Short but to the point. Nice.
  July 19th, 2024 23:42
• Infinite (Bella Shepard) Boy, that is for sure. Arrogance leads to a fall.
  July 17th, 2024 00:26
• ~> Growing Older ( thoughts ) (Thad Wilk) Sad to say with the state of this country, this world; I\'m glad I\'m old....
  July 17th, 2024 00:23
• Timeless (Sorenbarrett) Clocks? You mean those clunky things our grandfathers used? Kidding. Nice...
  July 17th, 2024 00:21
• They Are Not You (ADarkerMind) \'sad bone\'s piccolo\" - great
  July 16th, 2024 00:05
• Corpses (Sorenbarrett) Short, sweet, good imagery.
  July 16th, 2024 00:00
• No Trespassing (Eileen Clark) Havn\'t we all been caught swimming sometime? Nice work.
  July 11th, 2024 00:35
• Pursuing Peace (Orchidee) I am sorry to say this, but as long as there have been humans there have...
  July 11th, 2024 00:31
• The Future of Man (MendedFences27) I\'m sorry to have to say most times I believe it is too late. Everything...
  July 11th, 2024 00:28
• Words of smoke (Sorenbarrett) Short, but the message is clear.
  July 11th, 2024 00:25
• Coming (2781) You are very right, no one knows what is coming.
  June 30th, 2024 23:38
• Where The Smaller People Go (ADarkerMind) Esoteric. Nice. Makes me wonder just who are the smaller people.
  June 30th, 2024 23:36
• Caged Hummingbird (Teddy.15) Amen. Who wants to be like everybody else.
  June 30th, 2024 01:12
• Innocence of a poet (Sorenbarrett) \"Doily in a spiderweb spun\" is just as imagery evoking as can be. Nice...
  June 30th, 2024 01:10
• No Hard Feelings (Justagirl) Again hits a note with me about my preference for lost love and the human...
  June 17th, 2024 00:29
• Corrosive Love (COGNOVA) Ahh yes, fits right in with my theories os the human condition. Well done.
  June 17th, 2024 00:18
• Anger v. love (Rose Gselle) No wasted lines. Nice.
  April 22nd, 2024 12:11
• Fog of the Mind (Paul Hughes) Yes, exactly.
  March 21st, 2024 23:17
• Emotionless (E.J. Waling) Huh?
  March 21st, 2024 23:15
• Strangers and other lovers (Hugh) Heartfelt. But you lost me with \"fruit machine\".
  March 18th, 2024 21:59
• Unveiling a Tiger (Revernd21) True, and in all fairness they were the best of the ww2 tanks.
  March 18th, 2024 21:57
• Dead Shoes (Poet Bee) Talks to us all.
  March 18th, 2024 21:54
• Green is my Bed (Thomas W Case) Jeez, I thought I was negative.
  March 18th, 2024 21:52