Comments on community poems by Dan Williams

• Lo and Behold! (MendedFences27) Lord, how this resonates with me. Writing about lost love has been , for...
  August 13th, 2024 00:37
• She (2781) I have to presume you are Bob. Very nice.
  August 13th, 2024 00:33
• Fragments of Us (Dev Parth) All of this is true of my second wife who left me after twenty years....
  August 13th, 2024 00:31
• Time eroded memories (Sorenbarrett) From dust we came . . .Classy stuff, my friend.
  August 13th, 2024 00:27
• Housing Wreck. (Goldfinch60) Hey, the eye of the beholder, right? Good work.
  August 13th, 2024 00:25
• Dawn Comes (Dan Williams) I count on folks being as perceptive as you when I am writing these...
  August 12th, 2024 22:06
• I Need To Be Near You (MendedFences27) So sad and regretful, insinuating tears, I sympathize. Good work.
  August 12th, 2024 00:32
• The bunny (Michael William Reid) Leaves me wondering about the identity of little bunny. Nice.
  August 12th, 2024 00:29
• Somewhere Between (ADarkerMind) \"palms of ridicule with spit\" and \"one final taste of mercy washed...
  August 12th, 2024 00:27
• The Devil\'s In Town (Teddy.15) Not rhyming is no great sin, especially when the devil is in town. Nice...
  August 12th, 2024 00:23
• Point of view (Sorenbarrett) You are the master of the short and sweet, when you are not looking I just...
  August 12th, 2024 00:21
• () Clever enough but kind of cold. Good work though.
  August 11th, 2024 22:38
• () Sweet without being clingy. Heartfelt. Nice.
  August 11th, 2024 22:36
• After the Ending (Dan Williams) Not sure what is dark about your mind. Thank you anyway.
  August 11th, 2024 22:29
• () How nice. One of my great Grandpa\'s was a Rupert, sure he would approve....
  August 11th, 2024 22:24
• () Short yet sublime. Nice work.
  August 11th, 2024 22:21
• Deep Sixed (MendedFences27) \"rude dancing in the nightclub\" will buy you grief every time. Kind of...
  August 11th, 2024 00:24
• Flames of Defiance (Dev Parth) I am so jealous of the kind of optimism you possess. I believe I will...
  August 11th, 2024 00:21
• Holding It All In (Hanible) You sure hit the nail on the head with your summation about love. Very...
  August 11th, 2024 00:17
• Oh Just Get On With It. (Doggerel Dave) Talk about bare minimum. No wasted words from this chap. Well done.
  August 11th, 2024 00:15
• Apricity (Mya) Not often I have to look up two words from the same poem. Apricity I...
  August 11th, 2024 00:12
• The Tree (Annemarie) The tree of life. This is just wonderful. We all could stand to be more...
  August 11th, 2024 00:04
• Darker than black (Sorenbarrett) I really like the way you use the minimum of words to get your mood...
  August 11th, 2024 00:00
• The Beast Within (Cocamedo) Wow. I thought I was bitter. I guess we all have, or are, our beasts. Good...
  August 9th, 2024 23:56
• i say i believe (Sheta) Makes me tear up. Nice work.
  August 9th, 2024 23:54
• `*` In Our Garden Of Love `*` (Thad Wilk) This will be easy to put to music. Very soft and sentimental. Nice
  August 9th, 2024 23:52
• In Spirit (Cassie58) Dance and pin prick, wings and spirit. Nice work.
  August 9th, 2024 23:51
• Maybe To Be Continued (Neville) Amen. There are a few people I can send this to. Nice.
  August 9th, 2024 23:48
• You\'re Just Too Good To Be True (Teddy.15) Aw come on. Not even him?
  August 9th, 2024 23:47
• Old fashioned political correctness (Sorenbarrett) Being kind of hard on the vultures dogs, pigs and chickens, eh? The...
  August 9th, 2024 23:43
• In Spirit (Cassie58) I don\'t know who to attribute to, I kind of borrowed it \"The price of...
  August 9th, 2024 23:40
• Steaming (Tom Dylan) \"Thier Fathers magic carpets made of steel\" says Arlo.
  August 9th, 2024 23:38
• One in all, all in one (Sorenbarrett) Are you cranking out these gems every day? Amazing.
  August 9th, 2024 23:33
• Squeaks (Dan Williams) Well thank you very much.
  August 8th, 2024 14:33
• Always Never (Dan Williams) Stop. Such heartfelt praise can make me cry. Thank you so much, again.
  August 8th, 2024 00:26
• A bee sips from a dewdrop (Jerry Reynolds) You been taking lessons from soren? like her, very nice.
  August 8th, 2024 00:21
• ~> Martians Landed Twice In Australia! (Thad Wilk) That\'ll show them.
  August 8th, 2024 00:18
• A Very Grand Finale (Teddy.15) Or, no?
  August 8th, 2024 00:17
• A Very Grand Finale (Teddy.15) Wow. Sadness with a capital \'S\'. Very well done.
  August 8th, 2024 00:16
• Memory Fades (Thomas W Case) I\'d like to say how much I liked about this, but I forget how.
  August 8th, 2024 00:14
• Life is what you make it (Sorenbarrett) Will you marry me?
  August 8th, 2024 00:12
• Ambrosia for Us (Thoughtless) Short and sweet, nicely done.
  August 6th, 2024 23:53
• Ambrosia for Us (Thoughtless)
  August 6th, 2024 23:53
• A Saucer Full Of Cabriolet (ADarkerMind) \"our skulls embraced the wish-bone of it\'s smell\" indeed! Clever and...
  August 6th, 2024 23:51
• I. (Goldfinch60) Ahh yes; womb to retirement and back. Neatly sums it all up. Good work.
  August 6th, 2024 23:46
• Too many (Sorenbarrett) Brazo! This is simply beautiful. I admit I am partial to you but this is...
  August 6th, 2024 23:43
• Can You Wash Me? (Dan Williams) You people are embarrassing me. I guess after fifty some years of trying I...
  August 6th, 2024 21:57
• Crying For Freedom (Dev Parth) I sure hope such optimism is rewarded. Nice work.
  August 5th, 2024 23:03
• Corona (MendedFences27) I\'m pretty sure I have done this dance. Nice work.
  August 5th, 2024 23:00
• All Along the Watchtower (Neville) Very astute observation. Nice work.
  August 5th, 2024 22:59
• From a tiny view (Sorenbarrett) I don\'t know where you come up with these jewels but do keep it up. I...
  August 5th, 2024 22:57
• How Un-Easy It Stands, This Sublime. (ADarkerMind) So many good lines to pick from, like \"the seventh earl of constant shade...
  August 4th, 2024 23:46
• Montana (Thomas W Case) No disrespect, but this reminded me of Frank Zappa \"Going to Montana...
  August 4th, 2024 23:42
• The hummingbird made me wonder (Saleh Ben Saleh) Nice take on one of the amazing things around us if we just take the time...
  August 4th, 2024 23:40
• Thank You Wolfgang. (Goldfinch60) Amen. This man has brought such inordinate amounts of pleasure to my life.
  August 4th, 2024 23:38
• Silent colors (Sorenbarrett) Being colorblind forces me to pay attention to descriptions of colors;...
  August 4th, 2024 23:36
• `* Heroin *` (Thad Wilk) So sad. This just has to be personal. Well done.
  August 3rd, 2024 23:54
• In the Clouds (MendedFences27) Gives Joni Mitchell a run for the money. Nicely done.
  August 3rd, 2024 23:52
• thank mum (Jim56) AAWWW! My mom was gone at 35 years old, still I think about her very much...
  August 3rd, 2024 23:50
• Silhouette (Alan R) 22 words have very seldom said more. Good work.
  August 3rd, 2024 23:48
• One Without Frills Would Be Fine (Neville) Beautiful wome have caused the lions share of the grief and hardship in my...
  August 3rd, 2024 23:47
• Sannyasi to love (Sorenbarrett) Wow. Discard your heart indeed.! Short and sweet. Bravo.
  August 3rd, 2024 23:44
• (I can stay here) For a while. (Weep little lion girl) Just lovely. We need to have our soul at rest in whatever way that works....
  August 3rd, 2024 23:41
• Breathing In Music. (Goldfinch60) The power of music always amazes me. It is the only truly universal...
  August 3rd, 2024 23:39
• The Machine Returns (Tristan Robert Lange) SkyNet lives, eh?
  August 2nd, 2024 00:27
• Mystery Tunnel (Tony36) AAwww, the road not traveled? Go back that way and choose again, eh?
  August 2nd, 2024 00:26
• lifelight (Sheta) A whisper of light indeed. So, this is what, cautious optimism? More nice...
  August 2nd, 2024 00:24
• Morning\'s Embrace (Dev Parth) I am so jealous of optimists like you. Good job of spreading it around.
  August 2nd, 2024 00:21
• On Hearing the Sea Gulls (Tom Dylan) Great imagery, which is the heart of poetry. Nice work.
  August 2nd, 2024 00:20
• Sorrow (MendedFences27) Sometimes I find it hard to describe lost love, you have done a fine job.
  August 2nd, 2024 00:17
• Songs Of My Youth (Goldfinch60) Music will save us all if we just let it. Nice work.
  August 2nd, 2024 00:14
• Honey on toast (Sorenbarrett) \"Passion walks into love on a broken crutch\" = killer line. Whole thing...
  August 2nd, 2024 00:12
• Four Children (Dan Williams)
  August 2nd, 2024 00:07
• homeless (Jim56) California, one state, has fully a third of the homeless in this country....
  August 1st, 2024 00:20
• Nature god (Sorenbarrett) I sure wish I had some of your optimism. Todays world has me leaning more...
  August 1st, 2024 00:07
• To Be Loved (MendedFences27) \"does she ever think of me?\" is my epitaph. Many succumb to the escape...
  July 30th, 2024 00:02
• Longing (Angela) Very nice, sad but hopeful.
  July 29th, 2024 23:59
• She Lay In Her Bed (Bella Shepard) Amen. Music can save us all if we just let it. Nice work.
  July 29th, 2024 23:55
• The Whisper Tree (Dan Williams) This is old stuff, one of the first I felt confident enough to show...
  July 29th, 2024 12:55
• Friends With Benefits (Neville) Well done. Remember, the price of life is death.
  July 28th, 2024 22:38
• NIGHT SKY (Qurrathul Ain) I love the idea of falling into the sky. Nice work.
  July 28th, 2024 22:37
• Christmas In July. (Goldfinch60) You left out the maddening desperate suicidal shoppers after that great...
  July 28th, 2024 22:34
• Wine for the ear (Sorenbarrett) \"harmony into dissonances\", nice. Well rounded.
  July 28th, 2024 22:31
• SOMEONE\'S WORDS (Mompu) Not trying to but still I am impressed.
  July 28th, 2024 00:31
• Ceremony (2781) OK, you stumped me with \"obsurite\" and \"SOLENNITE\" on the way to a...
  July 28th, 2024 00:26
• Taste Bud Duel (Doggerel Dave) Clever. Nice work.
  July 28th, 2024 00:19
• Perfect (Sorenbarrett) Wise men indeed speak with the tongue of a child. Sometimes the result,...
  July 28th, 2024 00:17
• Outsiders (Neville) amen. lost in so many different ways. Bombs, plague, pollution of air and...
  July 28th, 2024 00:13
• Dancing Flames (Dev Parth) Bravo. Very nice work.
  July 27th, 2024 01:24
• In Our Hours (Orchidee) Amen.
  July 27th, 2024 01:23
• Meadows (MendedFences27) \"Recall smoky memories of things left undone\" You reading my mail? Good...
  July 27th, 2024 01:22
• The righteous side (Saleh Ben Saleh) Nice. Well spoken.
  July 27th, 2024 01:20
• Stuck On Repeat (Jojojoking) Those who ignore the past are bound to repeat it.
  July 27th, 2024 01:19
• Shadows (MendedFences27) Boy, and I thought I was grim. \"Am I truly insane or is my imagination\"...
  July 27th, 2024 01:18
• The Deep Dark Hole (The Struggler) Clever in spades, good imagery.
  July 27th, 2024 01:15
• An Hour Glass Acoustic Sound- (ADarkerMind) \"stranger on the streets of bone and prayer\" ...what a great line. Nice...
  July 25th, 2024 00:14
• Thoughts 11 (MendedFences27) All good, last line really nails it.
  July 25th, 2024 00:10
• Light Bites (Neville) Plain truth, always good.
  July 25th, 2024 00:09
• Funny Weed (Sorenbarrett) And legal, finally.
  July 25th, 2024 00:08
• Something Unnamed (Dan Williams) Thanks very much to all!
  July 24th, 2024 14:04