Comments on community poems by Dan Williams

• Like Butterflies in Snowstorms (Neville) My sympathy to the \'butterflies\', kudos to you for a fine write.
  December 18th, 2024 01:01
• I\'m Going to Miss Jail (Thomas W Case) Months in county jail on crap conviction, with maybe five books total to...
  December 18th, 2024 00:59
• Fortress of Mountains (Tristan Robert Lange) It seems the mountain sees, and the mountain disapproves. Fortress walls...
  December 18th, 2024 00:55
• Call of the earth (Sorenbarrett) It\'s nice to find someone as depressed and disappointed as I am. Finding...
  December 18th, 2024 00:51
• a moment in between (Arqios) Clear and smooth, annunciated well, very nice.
  December 16th, 2024 01:04
• Another Choice. (Goldfinch60) Well, all I have on my shelf is my good old Uncle Jack, maybe will try...
  December 16th, 2024 01:01
• friendship (Jim56) Dogs do everything to please us, their goal in life. We seem to struggle...
  December 16th, 2024 00:57
• Before Spill Kits and DNA Became a Thing (Neville) So, just what is the stain concealing or revealing? Hmmm.
  December 16th, 2024 00:55
• Mummy Tomorrow Will Be Better (Poetic Licence) Another all too frequent story, well told. Nice work.
  December 16th, 2024 00:53
• How (Sorenbarrett) Half full, half empty. Sobering.
  December 16th, 2024 00:51
• The Endless Spectator (Tristan Robert Lange) \"Countless ages of uselessness\" can truly separate any man from his...
  December 11th, 2024 01:40
• My Heart (Tony36) You are much fairer minded and understanding than I have ever been. I too...
  December 11th, 2024 01:36
• Reading Poetry (Tom Dylan) I can\'t be sure but it seems I might have been in at least some of these...
  December 11th, 2024 01:32
• The Last (Thomas W Case) Amen. My own love affair with words has carried me through success and...
  December 11th, 2024 01:30
• Strategically Lost (Neville) Damn I am so jealous. May all your encounters be as pleasant. Nice write.
  December 11th, 2024 01:27
• Imagianary Friends (Voices In My Head) (Poetic Licence) Wow. This is almost a detailed menu of madness. I was in a psyche ward for...
  December 11th, 2024 01:25
• Ella Fitzgerald Acrostic. (Goldfinch60) Ain\'t it grand how much wonderful music there is to inspire and fortify...
  December 11th, 2024 01:21
• Words of the prophets (Sorenbarrett) I love how this makes me cringe with gospel truth. Should be \"words from...
  December 11th, 2024 01:20
• Driving Ambition (Cassie58) You serve as such a nice counterbalance to my usual pessimism. this is...
  December 11th, 2024 01:16
• Music With Dad. (Goldfinch60) My Dad always listened to the Mitch Miller show, loved Eddy Arnold and...
  December 8th, 2024 01:39
• Breakfast Wasn’t Over Easy (Bobby O) Hell of a way to start the day ,this always pre curses a trial till...
  December 8th, 2024 01:36
• a makar’s legacy (Arqios) Unsure of a Makar but consider this an education. Well done.
  December 8th, 2024 01:33
• Reaching (Cassie58) You have a thing with your last lines so exactly defining the rest. Spent...
  December 8th, 2024 01:31
• Maria\'s Last Dance (Tristan Robert Lange) Such a well described and heartfelt lament. And you are so right about...
  December 8th, 2024 01:26
• Points of light (Sorenbarrett) \"Songs of primitive memory\" indeed; you have outdone yourself again....
  December 8th, 2024 01:22
• Silver and Gold (Thomas W Case) All kinds of wealth, you seem to have found the important ones. Good work.
  December 8th, 2024 01:19
• Hidden in Sight (Neville) This is, I think, the heart and essence of poetry. I think it is why more...
  December 7th, 2024 01:19
• caring dove (Jim56) Often mistakenly considered kind of dim witted, I see it as being at peace...
  December 7th, 2024 01:17
• Lady of The Night (Out of Need) (Poetic Licence) I love your recognition and sympathy for an often wrongly criticized...
  December 7th, 2024 01:15
• The Quiet Conqueror (Arqios) Very nice, tribute to another of nature\'s unsung heroes.
  December 7th, 2024 01:11
• Set you free (Tony36) Definite Yello Brick Road overtones. \"Your imagination is the only...
  December 7th, 2024 01:08
• Natural Art. (Goldfinch60) Colorblind I have not the ability to properly appreciate, say, the fall...
  December 7th, 2024 01:05
• Sleep child (Sorenbarrett) A little bitter, unsure of resolve, maybe none to be had. Truth here...
  December 7th, 2024 01:02
• Veils Of Mystique (Cassie58) So clever, and well expressed truths. Nice work.
  December 6th, 2024 00:58
• The Power Of Silence. (Goldfinch60) Amen. So many times silence trumps even clever words. Nice.
  December 6th, 2024 00:57
• The bee and the fox (Sorenbarrett) You manage to convey most of a message in ten lines that takes me five...
  December 6th, 2024 00:56
• happy song (Jim56) Absolutely. Music can save us all if we just let it.
  December 4th, 2024 01:35
• You\'re Own Path (Tony36) Amen. Don\'t be afraid to stand out. Eschew trends. Nice work.
  December 4th, 2024 01:34
• The book (Lorenz) I have almost no formal education but was taught to read very young, it...
  December 4th, 2024 01:32
• When Love Takes Its Final Bow (Teddy.15) How many ways to express love in its many forms? Well done.
  December 4th, 2024 01:29
• Maternal Love (Cassie58) An admirable depiction of a mother\'s love, brings out hope in me. Nice...
  December 4th, 2024 01:27
• Precious Days Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) I stay jealous of those of you able to conjure optimism in the trouble...
  December 4th, 2024 01:23
• Jewel discarded (Sorenbarrett) Damn the critics, a jewel indeed. Hard to look past where you are bound....
  December 4th, 2024 01:21
• When the Sun Illuminates a Sapphire Sky (Cassie58) A wonderful lullaby, soothing. Nice.
  December 4th, 2024 01:18
• Signs of Things to Come (Neville) Hard time picking which restroom to use, are you? Girls in the Boy Scouts?...
  December 2nd, 2024 00:40
• I Now Say The Word. (Goldfinch60) The B word and the H word for me. I got a card one year that said...
  December 2nd, 2024 00:34
• Boy and Bonnet (Arqios) So very sweet. Hits home, I lost my Mom at age of eight, some comfort...
  December 2nd, 2024 00:30
• Once there was a time (Sorenbarrett) All of the above (below?) a notch above even your usual fine work.
  December 2nd, 2024 00:28
• Flood (Cassie58) Very nice. leaves me wondering if this describes a good or not so good...
  December 2nd, 2024 00:25
• Sunrise in an Empty Field (RSM0812) So nice. Clear and eloquent. \"mother nature’s simplicity \" says...
  November 27th, 2024 00:55
• Then Can I Sleep? Perhaps. (ADarkerMind) First class. I also \'\"spied with but a single eye\" all to regularly....
  November 27th, 2024 00:53
• ode to the broken dream (Arqios) Be thankful you have relatively sedate dream awakenings. Mine can be...
  November 27th, 2024 00:50
• Echoes (Tristan Robert Lange) Right at the start you say \"words reverberate\", then you proceed to make...
  November 27th, 2024 00:47
• Thousands (Tony36) Millions my friend, millions at least.
  November 27th, 2024 00:44
• near or far of love (Arqios) I can\'t help but see you said true love \"should\" always pull through....
  November 27th, 2024 00:43
• Lying & Truly (Neville) This song plays in my head often when sleep is reluctant. Thanks.
  November 27th, 2024 00:40
• Upon Visiting the Dead (Thomas W Case) So, you don\'t want to shave your head and wear togas?
  November 27th, 2024 00:39
• Ads (Sorenbarrett) \"once despised now idolized\" sums it up nicely. The rest fills in the...
  November 27th, 2024 00:37
• Death Asked Life. (Goldfinch60) That pretty near describes life today.
  November 27th, 2024 00:34
• The Band (Tony36) My garage band only played out once but started me on a lifetime of...
  November 22nd, 2024 00:18
• Where do dreams flow? (Arqios) Ah, this guy. Shone brightly, briefly, fell into an open grave a few days...
  November 22nd, 2024 00:15
• KP, she say.... (Orchidee) So, how did you know my second wife?
  November 22nd, 2024 00:10
• Kiss of death (Sorenbarrett) Long distant mind meld my friend. Excellent.
  November 22nd, 2024 00:09
• Amaterasu (Neville) \"her halo shines brightest when I close my eyes\" indeed. Not sure why,...
  November 22nd, 2024 00:06
• The Literature Of Music. (Goldfinch60) I repeat; music can save us all if we just let it. Nice work.
  November 22nd, 2024 00:04
• A Pirate From The Past (Cassie58) \"creating lakes of puddled opportunity \" describes the better part of my...
  November 22nd, 2024 00:03
• Little bird (Sorenbarrett) soren, this is just beautiful. Well-meaning intent railroaded by reality...
  November 22nd, 2024 00:00
• nature art (Jim56) Amen. All of nature is art, except maybe where humans have interfered....
  November 20th, 2024 02:03
• Pancakes (Tony36) Wow, great memories. As a child my Dad, a single parent, would make...
  November 20th, 2024 02:01
• Archeology of Understanding (Arqios) Graceful, sincere. \"Only time will reveal if we will find clarity or...
  November 20th, 2024 01:58
• Live Well (Thomas W Case) Drowned rats and funerals foe flies; something kind of out of whack. Well...
  November 20th, 2024 01:56
• A Losing Game (Cassie58) So hard to say fare well. I\'ve had a lot of practice. Well Written.
  November 20th, 2024 01:54
• Culled (Neville) So true. So very sad.
  November 20th, 2024 01:52
• Laugh oneself blind (Sorenbarrett) Amen, all is good. The part about needing experience to get a job really...
  November 20th, 2024 01:51
• a true marriage of minds (Arqios) \"In words exchanged, new dreams take flight\" hopeful and light, \"Minds...
  November 19th, 2024 01:23
• The city (Lorenz) You had me with \"a prison of liquorice\". This is serious pondering...
  November 19th, 2024 01:20
• time is silent (NinjaGirl) Indeed, understanding is impossible most of the time. Try for when it...
  November 19th, 2024 01:17
• Getting To That Age (Tom Dylan) You must be reading my mail. Nicely done.
  November 19th, 2024 01:15
• Truth (Sorenbarrett) I seem to dwell way too much in shadow\'s realm, leaves me struggling to...
  November 19th, 2024 01:14
• Just Imagine This world. (Goldfinch60) Appreciate the sentiment but it seems to get harder as time passes with so...
  November 19th, 2024 01:11
• Our Universe (MendedFences27) I read where if the timeline of this world was ten miles long, humans...
  November 18th, 2024 01:12
• Meanwhile.... (Orchidee) Hey, Poetic License applies here as well. Good work.
  November 18th, 2024 01:10
• Pirates’ Cove (Arqios) AAARRR Mate, me and the parrot sailing for Nassau.
  November 18th, 2024 01:08
• A Few Things Wrong With the World Today (Neville) Amen, could be twice as long. Not sure about world war, we humans may...
  November 18th, 2024 01:00
• When Words Bleed (Cassie58) \"traitor or a martyr \", fine line. Fine sentiment also. Well done.
  November 18th, 2024 00:57
• The Scarecrow and the Raven (Tony36) Same job, different executions. Nice.
  November 18th, 2024 00:54
• Trapped (Sorenbarrett) Not sure; half full or half empty? Well done as usual.
  November 18th, 2024 00:52
• Bonsai (Sorenbarrett) Yes and you are still you, I am still me. Almost a prophesy, certainly...
  November 18th, 2024 00:50
• Hearts That Break (RSM0812) Whew. Lots here. \"For time has lost us in the wind, And blown us back to...
  November 14th, 2024 00:34
• not quite forgotten (Arqios) Amen. For me, \"The strength to better humankind\" is what writing is all...
  November 14th, 2024 00:30
• The House of Tears. (David Wakeling) This is just wonderful. Pondering these last years also drives me to cry,...
  November 14th, 2024 00:26
• Scraps (Sorenbarrett) OK I have noticed falling rain on a sunny day. Clever all the same.
  November 14th, 2024 00:24
• The Colour of Void (Cassie58) This really hits home. Pirouette missing from the dance, and all that....
  November 14th, 2024 00:23
• I Am (Tony36) Common sense, trademark of optimism, nice work.
  November 14th, 2024 00:21
• Love cruise (Lorenz) I believe people who say they understand love are either liars or fools....
  November 10th, 2024 01:20
• The SLAYING. (David Wakeling) Amen. \"Cold seizing hands fondle them, imitating security,\" leads into a...
  November 10th, 2024 01:19
• i could know all truth and still have no meaning (MR.apocalypse) Amen brother. Lurch through life thinking something settled but no. Nice...
  November 10th, 2024 01:16
• Potential (Tony36) Hey, I got right up and started a new poem. Nice work.
  November 10th, 2024 01:14
• Emophilia (Neville) Yes, like me, an hour ago. Several times over fifty years. Nice work.
  November 10th, 2024 01:13
• The Beauty of a Kiss (Arqios) I think I was there once. Thanks for the reminder.
  November 9th, 2024 01:14