Comments on community poems by Dan Williams
- Darkest of Rhythm and Blues (Teddy.15)
Sadly, I\'m not holding my breath. Well done.
January 3rd, 2025 01:17 - Strange Days (Thomas W Case)
Cruises through the specter of aging nicely. And I find it comforting that...
January 3rd, 2025 01:15 - Lazy Loo Logic (Tristan Robert Lange)
Has a lot to do with plumbing. We lads have it external and till about...
January 3rd, 2025 01:11 - Mud Maid in Winter (Cassie58)
So gentle and soothing, \"flakes softly falling to leave light kisses on...
January 2nd, 2025 02:53 - You wouldn\'t understand (ᴷᵉᶻᵉˣˣᵉ)
You underestimate yourself Your message is clear and well spoken. Nice...
January 1st, 2025 01:53 - Pottersville (Tristan Robert Lange)
Having been born color blind I pretty much live in a black and white...
January 1st, 2025 01:52 - elemental forge (Arqios)
What nice imagery. I can hear the wind. Nice work.
January 1st, 2025 01:46 - these are the days (Arqios)
This just glides along. \"unappreciative lovers
roaming listlessly \"...
January 1st, 2025 01:43 - under pressure (Arqios)
And the ending nicely reveals your message. Nicely done.
December 28th, 2024 20:02 - The Joy of Silence (Neville)
Silence, like in classical music, says just as much or more than the...
December 28th, 2024 20:00 - Shadows (Sorenbarrett)
Sometimes I see shadows where no one is standing. Amen.
December 28th, 2024 19:59 - The Write Fright (Tristan Robert Lange)
Ah yes, the logjam. Sometimes I just have to let it alone for a while, no...
December 28th, 2024 19:58 - They (Tony36)
I often refer to them as sheep, but then I feel I am insulting the sheep....
December 28th, 2024 19:56 - Legacy (Cassie58)
Being Irish allows me to easily envision these scenes and references. And...
December 19th, 2024 02:19 - Quick Fingers (Neville)
Ain\'t the ladies grand? I have to admit I love the contradictions. Well...
December 19th, 2024 02:16 - Old land (Ellen Marsell)
How sweet and sentimental. Chokes me up in a pleasant way. Nice work.
December 19th, 2024 02:14 - Fate (Teardrop)
You are right; nobody gets out alive. Will you let yourself suffer until...
December 19th, 2024 02:13 - Love (Doggerel Dave)
Damn doggerel of you, Dave. Clever too. Nice work.
December 19th, 2024 02:11 - searching for a season (Arqios)
\"These objects, devoid of memory, stand silent,\" as objects surely will....
December 19th, 2024 02:06 - The fly (Sorenbarrett)
I so love the rehearsed confusion line. As usual close your observations...
December 19th, 2024 02:02 - autumn chofu (Arqios)
Circle of life. Brings some remorse, some hope. Nice work here.
December 18th, 2024 01:06 - Time Cannot Heal (Poetic Licence)
The myth that \"time heals all wounds\" is a foolish attempt at...
December 18th, 2024 01:04 - Like Butterflies in Snowstorms (Neville)
My sympathy to the \'butterflies\', kudos to you for a fine write.
December 18th, 2024 01:01 - I\'m Going to Miss Jail (Thomas W Case)
Months in county jail on crap conviction, with maybe five books total to...
December 18th, 2024 00:59 - Fortress of Mountains (Tristan Robert Lange)
It seems the mountain sees, and the mountain disapproves. Fortress walls...
December 18th, 2024 00:55 - Call of the earth (Sorenbarrett)
It\'s nice to find someone as depressed and disappointed as I am. Finding...
December 18th, 2024 00:51 - a moment in between (Arqios)
Clear and smooth, annunciated well, very nice.
December 16th, 2024 01:04 - Another Choice. (Goldfinch60)
Well, all I have on my shelf is my good old Uncle Jack, maybe will try...
December 16th, 2024 01:01 - friendship (Jim56)
Dogs do everything to please us, their goal in life. We seem to struggle...
December 16th, 2024 00:57 - Before Spill Kits and DNA Became a Thing (Neville)
So, just what is the stain concealing or revealing? Hmmm.
December 16th, 2024 00:55 - Mummy Tomorrow Will Be Better (Poetic Licence)
Another all too frequent story, well told. Nice work.
December 16th, 2024 00:53 - How (Sorenbarrett)
Half full, half empty. Sobering.
December 16th, 2024 00:51 - The Endless Spectator (Tristan Robert Lange)
\"Countless ages of uselessness\" can truly separate any man from his...
December 11th, 2024 01:40 - My Heart (Tony36)
You are much fairer minded and understanding than I have ever been. I too...
December 11th, 2024 01:36 - Reading Poetry (Tom Dylan)
I can\'t be sure but it seems I might have been in at least some of these...
December 11th, 2024 01:32 - The Last (Thomas W Case)
Amen. My own love affair with words has carried me through success and...
December 11th, 2024 01:30 - Strategically Lost (Neville)
Damn I am so jealous. May all your encounters be as pleasant. Nice write.
December 11th, 2024 01:27 - Imagianary Friends (Voices In My Head) (Poetic Licence)
Wow. This is almost a detailed menu of madness. I was in a psyche ward for...
December 11th, 2024 01:25 - Ella Fitzgerald Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
Ain\'t it grand how much wonderful music there is to inspire and fortify...
December 11th, 2024 01:21 - Words of the prophets (Sorenbarrett)
I love how this makes me cringe with gospel truth. Should be \"words from...
December 11th, 2024 01:20 - Driving Ambition (Cassie58)
You serve as such a nice counterbalance to my usual pessimism. this is...
December 11th, 2024 01:16 - Music With Dad. (Goldfinch60)
My Dad always listened to the Mitch Miller show, loved Eddy Arnold and...
December 8th, 2024 01:39 - Breakfast Wasn’t Over Easy (Bobby O)
Hell of a way to start the day ,this always pre curses a trial till...
December 8th, 2024 01:36 - a makar’s legacy (Arqios)
Unsure of a Makar but consider this an education. Well done.
December 8th, 2024 01:33 - Reaching (Cassie58)
You have a thing with your last lines so exactly defining the rest. Spent...
December 8th, 2024 01:31 - Maria\'s Last Dance (Tristan Robert Lange)
Such a well described and heartfelt lament. And you are so right about...
December 8th, 2024 01:26 - Points of light (Sorenbarrett)
\"Songs of primitive memory\" indeed; you have outdone yourself again....
December 8th, 2024 01:22 - Silver and Gold (Thomas W Case)
All kinds of wealth, you seem to have found the important ones. Good work.
December 8th, 2024 01:19 - Hidden in Sight (Neville)
This is, I think, the heart and essence of poetry. I think it is why more...
December 7th, 2024 01:19 - caring dove (Jim56)
Often mistakenly considered kind of dim witted, I see it as being at peace...
December 7th, 2024 01:17 - Lady of The Night (Out of Need) (Poetic Licence)
I love your recognition and sympathy for an often wrongly criticized...
December 7th, 2024 01:15 - The Quiet Conqueror (Arqios)
Very nice, tribute to another of nature\'s unsung heroes.
December 7th, 2024 01:11 - Set you free (Tony36)
Definite Yello Brick Road overtones. \"Your imagination is the only...
December 7th, 2024 01:08 - Natural Art. (Goldfinch60)
Colorblind I have not the ability to properly appreciate, say, the fall...
December 7th, 2024 01:05 - Sleep child (Sorenbarrett)
A little bitter, unsure of resolve, maybe none to be had. Truth here...
December 7th, 2024 01:02 - Veils Of Mystique (Cassie58)
So clever, and well expressed truths. Nice work.
December 6th, 2024 00:58 - The Power Of Silence. (Goldfinch60)
Amen. So many times silence trumps even clever words. Nice.
December 6th, 2024 00:57 - The bee and the fox (Sorenbarrett)
You manage to convey most of a message in ten lines that takes me five...
December 6th, 2024 00:56 - happy song (Jim56)
Absolutely. Music can save us all if we just let it.
December 4th, 2024 01:35 - You\'re Own Path (Tony36)
Amen. Don\'t be afraid to stand out. Eschew trends. Nice work.
December 4th, 2024 01:34 - The book (Lorenz)
I have almost no formal education but was taught to read very young, it...
December 4th, 2024 01:32 - When Love Takes Its Final Bow (Teddy.15)
How many ways to express love in its many forms? Well done.
December 4th, 2024 01:29 - Maternal Love (Cassie58)
An admirable depiction of a mother\'s love, brings out hope in me. Nice...
December 4th, 2024 01:27 - Precious Days Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
I stay jealous of those of you able to conjure optimism in the trouble...
December 4th, 2024 01:23 - Jewel discarded (Sorenbarrett)
Damn the critics, a jewel indeed. Hard to look past where you are bound....
December 4th, 2024 01:21 - When the Sun Illuminates a Sapphire Sky (Cassie58)
A wonderful lullaby, soothing. Nice.
December 4th, 2024 01:18 - Signs of Things to Come (Neville)
Hard time picking which restroom to use, are you? Girls in the Boy Scouts?...
December 2nd, 2024 00:40 - I Now Say The Word. (Goldfinch60)
The B word and the H word for me. I got a card one year that said...
December 2nd, 2024 00:34 - Boy and Bonnet (Arqios)
So very sweet. Hits home, I lost my Mom at age of eight, some comfort...
December 2nd, 2024 00:30 - Once there was a time (Sorenbarrett)
All of the above (below?) a notch above even your usual fine work.
December 2nd, 2024 00:28 - Flood (Cassie58)
Very nice. leaves me wondering if this describes a good or not so good...
December 2nd, 2024 00:25 - Sunrise in an Empty Field (RSM0812)
So nice. Clear and eloquent. \"mother nature’s simplicity \" says...
November 27th, 2024 00:55 - Then Can I Sleep? Perhaps. (ADarkerMind)
First class. I also \'\"spied with but a single eye\" all to regularly....
November 27th, 2024 00:53 - ode to the broken dream (Arqios)
Be thankful you have relatively sedate dream awakenings. Mine can be...
November 27th, 2024 00:50 - Echoes (Tristan Robert Lange)
Right at the start you say \"words reverberate\", then you proceed to make...
November 27th, 2024 00:47 - Thousands (Tony36)
Millions my friend, millions at least.
November 27th, 2024 00:44 - near or far of love (Arqios)
I can\'t help but see you said true love \"should\" always pull through....
November 27th, 2024 00:43 - Lying & Truly (Neville)
This song plays in my head often when sleep is reluctant. Thanks.
November 27th, 2024 00:40 - Upon Visiting the Dead (Thomas W Case)
So, you don\'t want to shave your head and wear togas?
November 27th, 2024 00:39 - Ads (Sorenbarrett)
\"once despised now idolized\" sums it up nicely. The rest fills in the...
November 27th, 2024 00:37 - Death Asked Life. (Goldfinch60)
That pretty near describes life today.
November 27th, 2024 00:34 - The Band (Tony36)
My garage band only played out once but started me on a lifetime of...
November 22nd, 2024 00:18 - Where do dreams flow? (Arqios)
Ah, this guy. Shone brightly, briefly, fell into an open grave a few days...
November 22nd, 2024 00:15 - KP, she say.... (Orchidee)
So, how did you know my second wife?
November 22nd, 2024 00:10 - Kiss of death (Sorenbarrett)
Long distant mind meld my friend. Excellent.
November 22nd, 2024 00:09 - Amaterasu (Neville)
\"her halo shines brightest when I close my eyes\" indeed. Not sure why,...
November 22nd, 2024 00:06 - The Literature Of Music. (Goldfinch60)
I repeat; music can save us all if we just let it. Nice work.
November 22nd, 2024 00:04 - A Pirate From The Past (Cassie58)
\"creating lakes of puddled opportunity \" describes the better part of my...
November 22nd, 2024 00:03 - Little bird (Sorenbarrett)
soren, this is just beautiful. Well-meaning intent railroaded by reality...
November 22nd, 2024 00:00 - nature art (Jim56)
Amen. All of nature is art, except maybe where humans have interfered....
November 20th, 2024 02:03 - Pancakes (Tony36)
Wow, great memories. As a child my Dad, a single parent, would make...
November 20th, 2024 02:01 - Archeology of Understanding (Arqios)
Graceful, sincere. \"Only time will reveal if we will find clarity or...
November 20th, 2024 01:58 - Live Well (Thomas W Case)
Drowned rats and funerals foe flies; something kind of out of whack. Well...
November 20th, 2024 01:56 - A Losing Game (Cassie58)
So hard to say fare well. I\'ve had a lot of practice. Well Written.
November 20th, 2024 01:54 - Culled (Neville)
So true. So very sad.
November 20th, 2024 01:52 - Laugh oneself blind (Sorenbarrett)
Amen, all is good. The part about needing experience to get a job really...
November 20th, 2024 01:51 - a true marriage of minds (Arqios)
\"In words exchanged, new dreams take flight\" hopeful and light, \"Minds...
November 19th, 2024 01:23 - The city (Lorenz)
You had me with \"a prison of liquorice\". This is serious pondering...
November 19th, 2024 01:20 - time is silent (NinjaGirl)
Indeed, understanding is impossible most of the time. Try for when it...
November 19th, 2024 01:17 - Getting To That Age (Tom Dylan)
You must be reading my mail. Nicely done.
November 19th, 2024 01:15
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