Comments on community poems by Dan Williams
- Imagianary Friends (Voices In My Head) (Poetic Licence)
Wow. This is almost a detailed menu of madness. I was in a psyche ward for...
December 11th, 2024 01:25 - Ella Fitzgerald Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
Ain\'t it grand how much wonderful music there is to inspire and fortify...
December 11th, 2024 01:21 - Words of the prophets (Sorenbarrett)
I love how this makes me cringe with gospel truth. Should be \"words from...
December 11th, 2024 01:20 - Driving Ambition (Cassie58)
You serve as such a nice counterbalance to my usual pessimism. this is...
December 11th, 2024 01:16 - Music With Dad. (Goldfinch60)
My Dad always listened to the Mitch Miller show, loved Eddy Arnold and...
December 8th, 2024 01:39 - Breakfast Wasn’t Over Easy (Bobby O)
Hell of a way to start the day ,this always pre curses a trial till...
December 8th, 2024 01:36 - a makar’s legacy (Arqios)
Unsure of a Makar but consider this an education. Well done.
December 8th, 2024 01:33 - Reaching (Cassie58)
You have a thing with your last lines so exactly defining the rest. Spent...
December 8th, 2024 01:31 - Maria\'s Last Dance (Tristan Robert Lange)
Such a well described and heartfelt lament. And you are so right about...
December 8th, 2024 01:26 - Points of light (Sorenbarrett)
\"Songs of primitive memory\" indeed; you have outdone yourself again....
December 8th, 2024 01:22 - Silver and Gold (Thomas W Case)
All kinds of wealth, you seem to have found the important ones. Good work.
December 8th, 2024 01:19 - Hidden in Sight (Neville)
This is, I think, the heart and essence of poetry. I think it is why more...
December 7th, 2024 01:19 - caring dove (Jim56)
Often mistakenly considered kind of dim witted, I see it as being at peace...
December 7th, 2024 01:17 - Lady of The Night (Out of Need) (Poetic Licence)
I love your recognition and sympathy for an often wrongly criticized...
December 7th, 2024 01:15 - The Quiet Conqueror (Arqios)
Very nice, tribute to another of nature\'s unsung heroes.
December 7th, 2024 01:11 - Set you free (Tony36)
Definite Yello Brick Road overtones. \"Your imagination is the only...
December 7th, 2024 01:08 - Natural Art. (Goldfinch60)
Colorblind I have not the ability to properly appreciate, say, the fall...
December 7th, 2024 01:05 - Sleep child (Sorenbarrett)
A little bitter, unsure of resolve, maybe none to be had. Truth here...
December 7th, 2024 01:02 - Veils Of Mystique (Cassie58)
So clever, and well expressed truths. Nice work.
December 6th, 2024 00:58 - The Power Of Silence. (Goldfinch60)
Amen. So many times silence trumps even clever words. Nice.
December 6th, 2024 00:57 - The bee and the fox (Sorenbarrett)
You manage to convey most of a message in ten lines that takes me five...
December 6th, 2024 00:56 - happy song (Jim56)
Absolutely. Music can save us all if we just let it.
December 4th, 2024 01:35 - You\'re Own Path (Tony36)
Amen. Don\'t be afraid to stand out. Eschew trends. Nice work.
December 4th, 2024 01:34 - The book (Lorenz)
I have almost no formal education but was taught to read very young, it...
December 4th, 2024 01:32 - When Love Takes Its Final Bow (Teddy.15)
How many ways to express love in its many forms? Well done.
December 4th, 2024 01:29 - Maternal Love (Cassie58)
An admirable depiction of a mother\'s love, brings out hope in me. Nice...
December 4th, 2024 01:27 - Precious Days Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
I stay jealous of those of you able to conjure optimism in the trouble...
December 4th, 2024 01:23 - Jewel discarded (Sorenbarrett)
Damn the critics, a jewel indeed. Hard to look past where you are bound....
December 4th, 2024 01:21 - When the Sun Illuminates a Sapphire Sky (Cassie58)
A wonderful lullaby, soothing. Nice.
December 4th, 2024 01:18 - Signs of Things to Come (Neville)
Hard time picking which restroom to use, are you? Girls in the Boy Scouts?...
December 2nd, 2024 00:40 - I Now Say The Word. (Goldfinch60)
The B word and the H word for me. I got a card one year that said...
December 2nd, 2024 00:34 - Boy and Bonnet (Arqios)
So very sweet. Hits home, I lost my Mom at age of eight, some comfort...
December 2nd, 2024 00:30 - Once there was a time (Sorenbarrett)
All of the above (below?) a notch above even your usual fine work.
December 2nd, 2024 00:28 - Flood (Cassie58)
Very nice. leaves me wondering if this describes a good or not so good...
December 2nd, 2024 00:25 - Sunrise in an Empty Field (RSM0812)
So nice. Clear and eloquent. \"mother nature’s simplicity \" says...
November 27th, 2024 00:55 - Then Can I Sleep? Perhaps. (ADarkerMind)
First class. I also \'\"spied with but a single eye\" all to regularly....
November 27th, 2024 00:53 - ode to the broken dream (Arqios)
Be thankful you have relatively sedate dream awakenings. Mine can be...
November 27th, 2024 00:50 - Echoes (Tristan Robert Lange)
Right at the start you say \"words reverberate\", then you proceed to make...
November 27th, 2024 00:47 - Thousands (Tony36)
Millions my friend, millions at least.
November 27th, 2024 00:44 - near or far of love (Arqios)
I can\'t help but see you said true love \"should\" always pull through....
November 27th, 2024 00:43 - Lying & Truly (Neville)
This song plays in my head often when sleep is reluctant. Thanks.
November 27th, 2024 00:40 - Upon Visiting the Dead (Thomas W Case)
So, you don\'t want to shave your head and wear togas?
November 27th, 2024 00:39 - Ads (Sorenbarrett)
\"once despised now idolized\" sums it up nicely. The rest fills in the...
November 27th, 2024 00:37 - Death Asked Life. (Goldfinch60)
That pretty near describes life today.
November 27th, 2024 00:34 - The Band (Tony36)
My garage band only played out once but started me on a lifetime of...
November 22nd, 2024 00:18 - Where do dreams flow? (Arqios)
Ah, this guy. Shone brightly, briefly, fell into an open grave a few days...
November 22nd, 2024 00:15 - KP, she say.... (Orchidee)
So, how did you know my second wife?
November 22nd, 2024 00:10 - Kiss of death (Sorenbarrett)
Long distant mind meld my friend. Excellent.
November 22nd, 2024 00:09 - Amaterasu (Neville)
\"her halo shines brightest when I close my eyes\" indeed. Not sure why,...
November 22nd, 2024 00:06 - The Literature Of Music. (Goldfinch60)
I repeat; music can save us all if we just let it. Nice work.
November 22nd, 2024 00:04 - A Pirate From The Past (Cassie58)
\"creating lakes of puddled opportunity \" describes the better part of my...
November 22nd, 2024 00:03 - Little bird (Sorenbarrett)
soren, this is just beautiful. Well-meaning intent railroaded by reality...
November 22nd, 2024 00:00 - nature art (Jim56)
Amen. All of nature is art, except maybe where humans have interfered....
November 20th, 2024 02:03 - Pancakes (Tony36)
Wow, great memories. As a child my Dad, a single parent, would make...
November 20th, 2024 02:01 - Archeology of Understanding (Arqios)
Graceful, sincere. \"Only time will reveal if we will find clarity or...
November 20th, 2024 01:58 - Live Well (Thomas W Case)
Drowned rats and funerals foe flies; something kind of out of whack. Well...
November 20th, 2024 01:56 - A Losing Game (Cassie58)
So hard to say fare well. I\'ve had a lot of practice. Well Written.
November 20th, 2024 01:54 - Culled (Neville)
So true. So very sad.
November 20th, 2024 01:52 - Laugh oneself blind (Sorenbarrett)
Amen, all is good. The part about needing experience to get a job really...
November 20th, 2024 01:51 - a true marriage of minds (Arqios)
\"In words exchanged, new dreams take flight\" hopeful and light, \"Minds...
November 19th, 2024 01:23 - The city (Lorenz)
You had me with \"a prison of liquorice\". This is serious pondering...
November 19th, 2024 01:20 - time is silent (NinjaGirl)
Indeed, understanding is impossible most of the time. Try for when it...
November 19th, 2024 01:17 - Getting To That Age (Tom Dylan)
You must be reading my mail. Nicely done.
November 19th, 2024 01:15 - Truth (Sorenbarrett)
I seem to dwell way too much in shadow\'s realm, leaves me struggling to...
November 19th, 2024 01:14 - Just Imagine This world. (Goldfinch60)
Appreciate the sentiment but it seems to get harder as time passes with so...
November 19th, 2024 01:11 - Our Universe (MendedFences27)
I read where if the timeline of this world was ten miles long, humans...
November 18th, 2024 01:12 - Meanwhile.... (Orchidee)
Hey, Poetic License applies here as well. Good work.
November 18th, 2024 01:10 - Pirates’ Cove (Arqios)
AAARRR Mate, me and the parrot sailing for Nassau.
November 18th, 2024 01:08 - A Few Things Wrong With the World Today (Neville)
Amen, could be twice as long. Not sure about world war, we humans may...
November 18th, 2024 01:00 - When Words Bleed (Cassie58)
\"traitor or a martyr \", fine line. Fine sentiment also. Well done.
November 18th, 2024 00:57 - The Scarecrow and the Raven (Tony36)
Same job, different executions. Nice.
November 18th, 2024 00:54 - Trapped (Sorenbarrett)
Not sure; half full or half empty? Well done as usual.
November 18th, 2024 00:52 - Bonsai (Sorenbarrett)
Yes and you are still you, I am still me. Almost a prophesy, certainly...
November 18th, 2024 00:50 - Hearts That Break (RSM0812)
Whew. Lots here. \"For time has lost us in the wind,
And blown us back to...
November 14th, 2024 00:34 - not quite forgotten (Arqios)
Amen. For me, \"The strength to better humankind\" is what writing is all...
November 14th, 2024 00:30 - The House of Tears. (David Wakeling)
This is just wonderful. Pondering these last years also drives me to cry,...
November 14th, 2024 00:26 - Scraps (Sorenbarrett)
OK I have noticed falling rain on a sunny day. Clever all the same.
November 14th, 2024 00:24 - The Colour of Void (Cassie58)
This really hits home. Pirouette missing from the dance, and all that....
November 14th, 2024 00:23 - I Am (Tony36)
Common sense, trademark of optimism, nice work.
November 14th, 2024 00:21 - Love cruise (Lorenz)
I believe people who say they understand love are either liars or fools....
November 10th, 2024 01:20 - The SLAYING. (David Wakeling)
Amen. \"Cold seizing hands fondle them, imitating security,\" leads into a...
November 10th, 2024 01:19 - i could know all truth and still have no meaning (MR.apocalypse)
Amen brother. Lurch through life thinking something settled but no. Nice...
November 10th, 2024 01:16 - Potential (Tony36)
Hey, I got right up and started a new poem. Nice work.
November 10th, 2024 01:14 - Emophilia (Neville)
Yes, like me, an hour ago. Several times over fifty years. Nice work.
November 10th, 2024 01:13 - The Beauty of a Kiss (Arqios)
I think I was there once. Thanks for the reminder.
November 9th, 2024 01:14 - Words On Paper (Tom Dylan)
Excellent. Words, numbers, we are becoming less human all the time. Nice...
November 9th, 2024 01:07 - Wilderness (Neville)
Worked outside most of my life, always look forward first cold, as much as...
November 9th, 2024 01:04 - Glass prison (Sorenbarrett)
Was this the prison with the glass ceiling?
November 9th, 2024 01:02 - At the Edge of the Lagoon (Gray0328)
Phrasing to die for, clear pertinent message. Well done.
November 8th, 2024 01:42 - jigsaw life (Jim56)
That\'s swell but I have four missing pieces.
November 8th, 2024 01:39 - The venom of days (Lorenz)
Well done Lorenze, high marks impressing my basic beliefs, \"A bitter sap...
November 8th, 2024 01:38 - ~> I\'M AN ANTEATER! (Thad Wilk)
cleverness bonus applies here. Nice break from my usual depression.
November 8th, 2024 01:34 - The dark days (David Wakeling)
This is just wonderful. There are some among us that can hear the violins,...
November 8th, 2024 01:31 - Aftermath. (Doggerel Dave)
Remember though; democracy rhymes with hypocrisy. Well written and...
November 8th, 2024 01:28 - A twisted tail (Sorenbarrett)
Lovely, flowing evocative imagery, I think you are the enlightened. First...
November 8th, 2024 01:25 - Glimpsed (Neville)
Excellent, prism logic.
November 8th, 2024 01:22 - TYRANT (Tristan Robert Lange)
This accurately describes the chaos I am sometimes quite certain, hoping...
November 8th, 2024 01:20 - Yell into the wind (Tony36)
I hear you.
November 8th, 2024 01:18 - Invisible Sword (Dan Williams)
Clumsy mistakes, sorry.
November 3rd, 2024 00:04 - The (W)Hole of Darkness (MendedFences27)
Very well understood my friend. Been there all too many times. Nice work.
November 2nd, 2024 23:53
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