Comments on community poems by Dan Williams

• Closed Open in Bloom (Tristan Robert Lange) Stylish, evocative. Rated PG? Nice work.
  January 15th, 2025 02:03
• A twist of the tongue (Sorenbarrett) Clever and image rich, typical nice work.
  January 15th, 2025 01:58
• Lasting (Cassie58) Friends we had and are gone remain friends.
  January 15th, 2025 01:56
• faithful friend (Jim56) Amen. I so often prefer dogs to people. Well done.
  January 11th, 2025 01:43
• Every Night A City Sleeps (ADarkerMind) What a potent image; \"A lovers shawl of defensive chain and ball\". Then...
  January 11th, 2025 01:41
• Footprints Left In Sand and Snow (Cassie58) Another love filled gem from you. Wonderful images. So nice. Thanks for...
  January 11th, 2025 01:35
• Couple Goals (Tom Dylan) I will spend my last years alone, so jealous of these people. Very well...
  January 11th, 2025 01:33
• What happened to beauty? (Sorenbarrett) \"\"quality poured in a draught of a drought\" is so pretty, so effective....
  January 11th, 2025 01:31
• reflection by the sea (Arqios) Strikes me you are a very lucky person. Nicely done.
  January 11th, 2025 01:28
• For the Princes of the Alleys (Thomas W Case) Hooray for you. This is a subject too often unreported and ignored....
  January 11th, 2025 01:26
• Hope in Those Smiling Eyes (Poetic Licence) Sadly, this might all too likely come to pass. What a poor job we humans...
  January 8th, 2025 01:09
• roasted rice cake (Rin) Rice cake? Pizza might work. Clever.
  January 8th, 2025 01:06
• paranoid (NinjaGirl) Paranoid means all too often they really are out to get you. Hang on.
  January 7th, 2025 20:48
• Measures (Teddy.15) Perhaps indeed. All too often left in limbo. Nice work.
  January 7th, 2025 20:46
• Condemned (Sorenbarrett) Heartless progeny is the hinge all of this swings on. That, and it takes...
  January 7th, 2025 20:42
• Beach Stroll (Tony36) Aaww. Almost contradicts most of my experience. Thanks.
  January 7th, 2025 20:39
• Not Such a Silent Night (Thomas W Case) I spent Christmas 1999 in a psyche ward. Learned that people who claim to...
  January 7th, 2025 20:38
• A Seamstress\'s Courage (Arqios) Oh, there is always room for tragic, heroism maybe not so much. \"The...
  January 7th, 2025 20:35
• rejected (Tristan Robert Lange) You maybe need to rethink your definition of friendship, eh?
  January 7th, 2025 20:33
• Gone (Sorenbarrett) Sometimes I believe all love is ephemeral. Your hesitation is timely,...
  January 7th, 2025 20:31
• Darkest of Rhythm and Blues (Teddy.15) Sadly, I\'m not holding my breath. Well done.
  January 3rd, 2025 01:17
• Strange Days (Thomas W Case) Cruises through the specter of aging nicely. And I find it comforting that...
  January 3rd, 2025 01:15
• Lazy Loo Logic (Tristan Robert Lange) Has a lot to do with plumbing. We lads have it external and till about...
  January 3rd, 2025 01:11
• Mud Maid in Winter (Cassie58) So gentle and soothing, \"flakes softly falling to leave light kisses on...
  January 2nd, 2025 02:53
• You wouldn\'t understand (Arcane-) You underestimate yourself Your message is clear and well spoken. Nice...
  January 1st, 2025 01:53
• Pottersville (Tristan Robert Lange) Having been born color blind I pretty much live in a black and white...
  January 1st, 2025 01:52
• elemental forge (Arqios) What nice imagery. I can hear the wind. Nice work.
  January 1st, 2025 01:46
• these are the days (Arqios) This just glides along. \"unappreciative lovers roaming listlessly \"...
  January 1st, 2025 01:43
• under pressure (Arqios) And the ending nicely reveals your message. Nicely done.
  December 28th, 2024 20:02
• The Joy of Silence (Neville) Silence, like in classical music, says just as much or more than the...
  December 28th, 2024 20:00
• Shadows (Sorenbarrett) Sometimes I see shadows where no one is standing. Amen.
  December 28th, 2024 19:59
• The Write Fright (Tristan Robert Lange) Ah yes, the logjam. Sometimes I just have to let it alone for a while, no...
  December 28th, 2024 19:58
• They (Tony36) I often refer to them as sheep, but then I feel I am insulting the sheep....
  December 28th, 2024 19:56
• Legacy (Cassie58) Being Irish allows me to easily envision these scenes and references. And...
  December 19th, 2024 02:19
• Quick Fingers (Neville) Ain\'t the ladies grand? I have to admit I love the contradictions. Well...
  December 19th, 2024 02:16
• Old land (Ellen Marsell) How sweet and sentimental. Chokes me up in a pleasant way. Nice work.
  December 19th, 2024 02:14
• Fate (Teardrop) You are right; nobody gets out alive. Will you let yourself suffer until...
  December 19th, 2024 02:13
• Love (Doggerel Dave) Damn doggerel of you, Dave. Clever too. Nice work.
  December 19th, 2024 02:11
• searching for a season (Arqios) \"These objects, devoid of memory, stand silent,\" as objects surely will....
  December 19th, 2024 02:06
• The fly (Sorenbarrett) I so love the rehearsed confusion line. As usual close your observations...
  December 19th, 2024 02:02
• autumn chofu (Arqios) Circle of life. Brings some remorse, some hope. Nice work here.
  December 18th, 2024 01:06
• Time Cannot Heal (Poetic Licence) The myth that \"time heals all wounds\" is a foolish attempt at...
  December 18th, 2024 01:04
• Like Butterflies in Snowstorms (Neville) My sympathy to the \'butterflies\', kudos to you for a fine write.
  December 18th, 2024 01:01
• I\'m Going to Miss Jail (Thomas W Case) Months in county jail on crap conviction, with maybe five books total to...
  December 18th, 2024 00:59
• Fortress of Mountains (Tristan Robert Lange) It seems the mountain sees, and the mountain disapproves. Fortress walls...
  December 18th, 2024 00:55
• Call of the earth (Sorenbarrett) It\'s nice to find someone as depressed and disappointed as I am. Finding...
  December 18th, 2024 00:51
• a moment in between (Arqios) Clear and smooth, annunciated well, very nice.
  December 16th, 2024 01:04
• Another Choice. (Goldfinch60) Well, all I have on my shelf is my good old Uncle Jack, maybe will try...
  December 16th, 2024 01:01
• friendship (Jim56) Dogs do everything to please us, their goal in life. We seem to struggle...
  December 16th, 2024 00:57
• Before Spill Kits and DNA Became a Thing (Neville) So, just what is the stain concealing or revealing? Hmmm.
  December 16th, 2024 00:55
• Mummy Tomorrow Will Be Better (Poetic Licence) Another all too frequent story, well told. Nice work.
  December 16th, 2024 00:53
• How (Sorenbarrett) Half full, half empty. Sobering.
  December 16th, 2024 00:51
• The Endless Spectator (Tristan Robert Lange) \"Countless ages of uselessness\" can truly separate any man from his...
  December 11th, 2024 01:40
• My Heart (Tony36) You are much fairer minded and understanding than I have ever been. I too...
  December 11th, 2024 01:36
• Reading Poetry (Tom Dylan) I can\'t be sure but it seems I might have been in at least some of these...
  December 11th, 2024 01:32
• The Last (Thomas W Case) Amen. My own love affair with words has carried me through success and...
  December 11th, 2024 01:30
• Strategically Lost (Neville) Damn I am so jealous. May all your encounters be as pleasant. Nice write.
  December 11th, 2024 01:27
• Ella Fitzgerald Acrostic. (Goldfinch60) Ain\'t it grand how much wonderful music there is to inspire and fortify...
  December 11th, 2024 01:21
• Words of the prophets (Sorenbarrett) I love how this makes me cringe with gospel truth. Should be \"words from...
  December 11th, 2024 01:20
• Driving Ambition (Cassie58) You serve as such a nice counterbalance to my usual pessimism. this is...
  December 11th, 2024 01:16
• Music With Dad. (Goldfinch60) My Dad always listened to the Mitch Miller show, loved Eddy Arnold and...
  December 8th, 2024 01:39
• Breakfast Wasn’t Over Easy (Bobby O) Hell of a way to start the day ,this always pre curses a trial till...
  December 8th, 2024 01:36
• a makar’s legacy (Arqios) Unsure of a Makar but consider this an education. Well done.
  December 8th, 2024 01:33
• Reaching (Cassie58) You have a thing with your last lines so exactly defining the rest. Spent...
  December 8th, 2024 01:31
• Maria\'s Last Dance (Tristan Robert Lange) Such a well described and heartfelt lament. And you are so right about...
  December 8th, 2024 01:26
• Points of light (Sorenbarrett) \"Songs of primitive memory\" indeed; you have outdone yourself again....
  December 8th, 2024 01:22
• Silver and Gold (Thomas W Case) All kinds of wealth, you seem to have found the important ones. Good work.
  December 8th, 2024 01:19
• Hidden in Sight (Neville) This is, I think, the heart and essence of poetry. I think it is why more...
  December 7th, 2024 01:19
• caring dove (Jim56) Often mistakenly considered kind of dim witted, I see it as being at peace...
  December 7th, 2024 01:17
• Lady of The Night (Out of Need) (Poetic Licence) I love your recognition and sympathy for an often wrongly criticized...
  December 7th, 2024 01:15
• The Quiet Conqueror (Arqios) Very nice, tribute to another of nature\'s unsung heroes.
  December 7th, 2024 01:11
• Set you free (Tony36) Definite Yello Brick Road overtones. \"Your imagination is the only...
  December 7th, 2024 01:08
• Natural Art. (Goldfinch60) Colorblind I have not the ability to properly appreciate, say, the fall...
  December 7th, 2024 01:05
• Sleep child (Sorenbarrett) A little bitter, unsure of resolve, maybe none to be had. Truth here...
  December 7th, 2024 01:02
• Veils Of Mystique (Cassie58) So clever, and well expressed truths. Nice work.
  December 6th, 2024 00:58
• The Power Of Silence. (Goldfinch60) Amen. So many times silence trumps even clever words. Nice.
  December 6th, 2024 00:57
• The bee and the fox (Sorenbarrett) You manage to convey most of a message in ten lines that takes me five...
  December 6th, 2024 00:56
• happy song (Jim56) Absolutely. Music can save us all if we just let it.
  December 4th, 2024 01:35
• You\'re Own Path (Tony36) Amen. Don\'t be afraid to stand out. Eschew trends. Nice work.
  December 4th, 2024 01:34
• The book (Lorenz) I have almost no formal education but was taught to read very young, it...
  December 4th, 2024 01:32
• When Love Takes Its Final Bow (Teddy.15) How many ways to express love in its many forms? Well done.
  December 4th, 2024 01:29
• Maternal Love (Cassie58) An admirable depiction of a mother\'s love, brings out hope in me. Nice...
  December 4th, 2024 01:27
• Precious Days Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) I stay jealous of those of you able to conjure optimism in the trouble...
  December 4th, 2024 01:23
• Jewel discarded (Sorenbarrett) Damn the critics, a jewel indeed. Hard to look past where you are bound....
  December 4th, 2024 01:21
• When the Sun Illuminates a Sapphire Sky (Cassie58) A wonderful lullaby, soothing. Nice.
  December 4th, 2024 01:18
• Signs of Things to Come (Neville) Hard time picking which restroom to use, are you? Girls in the Boy Scouts?...
  December 2nd, 2024 00:40
• I Now Say The Word. (Goldfinch60) The B word and the H word for me. I got a card one year that said...
  December 2nd, 2024 00:34
• Boy and Bonnet (Arqios) So very sweet. Hits home, I lost my Mom at age of eight, some comfort...
  December 2nd, 2024 00:30
• Once there was a time (Sorenbarrett) All of the above (below?) a notch above even your usual fine work.
  December 2nd, 2024 00:28
• Flood (Cassie58) Very nice. leaves me wondering if this describes a good or not so good...
  December 2nd, 2024 00:25
• Sunrise in an Empty Field (RSM0812) So nice. Clear and eloquent. \"mother nature’s simplicity \" says...
  November 27th, 2024 00:55
• Then Can I Sleep? Perhaps. (ADarkerMind) First class. I also \'\"spied with but a single eye\" all to regularly....
  November 27th, 2024 00:53
• ode to the broken dream (Arqios) Be thankful you have relatively sedate dream awakenings. Mine can be...
  November 27th, 2024 00:50
• Echoes (Tristan Robert Lange) Right at the start you say \"words reverberate\", then you proceed to make...
  November 27th, 2024 00:47
• Thousands (Tony36) Millions my friend, millions at least.
  November 27th, 2024 00:44
• near or far of love (Arqios) I can\'t help but see you said true love \"should\" always pull through....
  November 27th, 2024 00:43
• Lying & Truly (Neville) This song plays in my head often when sleep is reluctant. Thanks.
  November 27th, 2024 00:40
• Upon Visiting the Dead (Thomas W Case) So, you don\'t want to shave your head and wear togas?
  November 27th, 2024 00:39
• Ads (Sorenbarrett) \"once despised now idolized\" sums it up nicely. The rest fills in the...
  November 27th, 2024 00:37
• Death Asked Life. (Goldfinch60) That pretty near describes life today.
  November 27th, 2024 00:34