Comments on community poems by Dan Williams
- Invisible Sword (Dan Williams)
Clumsy mistakes, sorry.
November 3rd, 2024 00:04 - The (W)Hole of Darkness (MendedFences27)
Very well understood my friend. Been there all too many times. Nice work.
November 2nd, 2024 23:53 - Old world (Lorenz)
You had me with \"who leaves history, forgetting to flush \" and rounded...
November 2nd, 2024 23:52 - Salute (David Wakeling)
Amen. Very nice.
November 2nd, 2024 23:48 - Blemished (Neville)
Reminds me of Kansas; \"Nothing last forever but the earth and sky\" Nice.
November 2nd, 2024 23:46 - Life\'s Passion (Tony36)
Again I find myself jealous of such heartfelt optimism. Only very seldom...
November 2nd, 2024 23:44 - Swing From Paris Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
I;m going to hazard a guess this is about a string quartet, my favorite...
November 2nd, 2024 23:42 - Time to Live (Arqios)
It cheers me to see people like you that can be so optimistic, something...
November 2nd, 2024 23:40 - Birth of a poem (Sorenbarrett)
Just love this. Most often I am inspired by a simple phrase or even one...
November 2nd, 2024 23:38 - Exclusion (Tristan Robert Lange)
I have spent most of my life striving to be different and yes, it can get...
October 31st, 2024 23:55 - glitter (Sixthwrites)
Short and sweet, but so sad. Nice work.
October 31st, 2024 23:51 - everybody ages (Jim56)
Not sure; still waiting for the \'Golden Years\' after 75. Nice work.
October 31st, 2024 23:50 - Scarlet solo (Alan R)
Touching, as lost love usually is. Nicely done.
October 31st, 2024 23:48 - Bear (Sorenbarrett)
Pretty clever for a consumed soul. Very well done, do I need to add \'as...
October 31st, 2024 23:46 - What Am I? (Dove)
What indeed. Your soul, maybe? Unsure of what canvas my life is drawn,...
October 31st, 2024 23:44 - Looking Beyond Spring (Neville)
Seems like anticipation thwarted. I too still look for certain people long...
October 31st, 2024 23:39 - Spider Queen: Sonnet (Dove)
Timely and graceful. Nice work.
October 30th, 2024 23:43 - Teddy Bear (Tony36)
Aw. Read this to my daughter; even at forty she is still my teddy bears....
October 30th, 2024 23:41 - A Very Special Journey (Teddy.15)
And it is indeed the journey that is the goal. Nice.
October 30th, 2024 23:37 - Sepia dreams (Sorenbarrett)
Like a dream. Cold reality at the end. Very nice.
October 30th, 2024 23:36 - Whispers of a Wandering Soul (Arqios)
Suitable praise for poetry and the poet, in this case, you. Nice work.
October 30th, 2024 23:33 - Dark Hallway (Tony36)
I think I\'ll take door number two. Nice work here.
October 30th, 2024 23:31 - Never (Sorenbarrett)
All here is wonderful but the last two lines are huge, magnificent. I...
October 30th, 2024 23:29 - The Mask of Deception (Ezekiel Olayemi)
And the wolf is. . .
October 27th, 2024 23:08 - Assets of the Soul (Gray0328)
A fine list of attributes we all should aspire to. Well done.
October 27th, 2024 23:06 - My eyes are crying for me (Dev Parth)
As fine a description of heartache as it can be defined, nice work.
October 27th, 2024 23:03 - Ember (Sorenbarrett)
The Wizard of Rhyme strikes again.
October 27th, 2024 23:00 - in the light (Arqios)
\"Shadows cast by doubt\" leads gracefully to the rest, very well said.
October 27th, 2024 22:58 - A nursery rhyme for us mature children (Sorenbarrett)
Here I sit, broken hearted . . .you know the rest.
October 27th, 2024 22:55 - Books (Tony36)
A school system near me, Akron Ohio, was not graduating enough students,...
October 27th, 2024 22:53 - Halfway to Hanoi (Neville)
Wow. This is sadness coming at you from different directions. If it helps,...
October 27th, 2024 22:49 - Small Ghosts (Dan Williams)
October 23rd, 2024 23:33 - Some Things Change Too Much (Neville)
Misplaced priorities and a pretty cold heart. I have been there too. Nice...
October 22nd, 2024 23:11 - Will I Ever Awaken? (Teddy.15)
So much hurt over something so unnecessary. Well Done.
October 22nd, 2024 23:08 - In the Beginning of Our Forever (Neville)
Ah, the mixed blessing of longevity. A perfect example of the trip being...
October 21st, 2024 23:18 - Isn\'t Deja Vu, Like, Badly Overused?! (Cheeky Missy)
I\'m quite sure I\'ve heard all this before somewhere.
October 21st, 2024 23:16 - Nursery rhyme just horsing around (Sorenbarrett)
Tongue very firmly in cheek, very nice.
October 21st, 2024 23:15 - Tell me a story (Tony36)
cleverness nicely put. Well done.
October 21st, 2024 23:14 - Smoke (Sorenbarrett)
Smooth reading and complicated rhymes. Another gem. \"ashes to new life...
October 21st, 2024 23:12 - Make the Static Go Away (Thomas W Case)
Life is just one unending search for contentment and sometimes solitude,...
October 16th, 2024 21:14 - Life (Tony36)
Good solid advice, well written.
October 16th, 2024 21:12 - The Moment Without (Steve Goldenfort)
Lots of clever observations in a small space. Nice work.
October 16th, 2024 21:11 - Sleep – Where and How to Find it (Doggerel Dave)
This hits close to me; years of all night and swing shifts have left my...
October 16th, 2024 21:10 - Let go (Sorenbarrett)
Another fine work from the wordsmith. \"On feathered dreams gleams of...
October 16th, 2024 21:07 - ATLAS (Qurrathul Ain)
Aw, that is just so sweet.
October 16th, 2024 21:05 - Music (Tony36)
I can only repeat the message I have tried for decades to spread; Music...
October 16th, 2024 21:05 - tide watch (Jim56)
Yes, sitting on the dock of the bay! Nice work.
October 16th, 2024 21:03 - Same Sky Different Rain. (David Wakeling)
This is first class work on a worthy subject. Nice phrasing and imagery.
October 16th, 2024 21:02 - Walking In Old Age Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
Bravo. This is a treasure you have, enjoy.
October 16th, 2024 20:59 - Don\'t (Sorenbarrett)
This is genius, then ten commandments V2.3.
October 16th, 2024 20:58 - The Dark Follows (Mark The Phenomenon)
A Halloween classic. Nice work.
October 13th, 2024 00:08 - Dad (Minh1502)
I share with you the wonderfulness of having a strong yet kin Father,...
October 13th, 2024 00:05 - Pain Of Pain (Satishverma)
Bloodless murder can be the cruelest kind. Nicely done.
October 13th, 2024 00:01 - Unknown self (Sorenbarrett)
I so wish I could embrace this view, another of your classics.
October 12th, 2024 23:53 - Whispers of Healing (Dev Parth)
\"In the circle of life, we find our blend.\" is a major truism. The rest...
October 12th, 2024 23:51 - *- IF -* (Thad Wilk)
This really needs to be set to music. Emaj maybe. Nice anyway.
October 12th, 2024 23:47 - Night Terrors (Thomas W Case)
Very nice from a fellow \'lost love\' specialist.
October 12th, 2024 23:45 - Where I you will find (Maplespal)
All is nice, \"all while the sun, its heavy head it lifts\" is special....
October 12th, 2024 23:43 - Rhyme Not Mine. (Doggerel Dave)
OK, you win the cleverness prize this round. Bravo.
October 12th, 2024 23:40 - A Mysterious Beauty (The Struggler)
Short, sincere, uplifting. Nice work.
October 12th, 2024 23:39 - Our Intense Love Tanka. (Goldfinch60)
Simple but effective. Nicely done.
October 12th, 2024 23:38 - Growing old together (Tony36)
This is a future that evade me, nice to hear others can live it. Very
October 12th, 2024 23:37 - meadow lark song (Jim56)
Me and Uncle Hank Williams are brightened by this. Nice work.
October 12th, 2024 23:36 - A drop (Sorenbarrett)
oooh, \"Droplets now cling adhesively
infinitesimally small\" is just...
October 12th, 2024 23:34 - The Lucky (Peet)
Aye, childhood is indeed half the battle. Without a caring one the rest is...
October 9th, 2024 00:17 - A leaf (Sorenbarrett)
Helps takes the demise easier and gently predicts the future. Sensitive...
October 9th, 2024 00:11 - Tomorrow Will Come. (Goldfinch60)
Forward for sure but tempered with and colored by the past. Nice job.
October 9th, 2024 00:08 - Just As Sunsets (Neville)
And imagine you must, treasure these times to help offset less happy ones....
October 9th, 2024 00:06 - Star Gazing (MaxSmith)
Nice to hear of gentle kind nights, seem in short supply these days. Nice...
October 9th, 2024 00:04 - Writing (Tony36)
Well, your dedication pays off; nice write.
October 9th, 2024 00:02 - Those black jobs (EvenwheniLie)
Still one step above robots. Monkeys will create no SkyNet.
October 8th, 2024 00:04 - Summer Sweat to Woolen Blankets (Katdream)
Yes, has snuck up on us again. Having worked outside my whole long life in...
October 8th, 2024 00:03 - rhyme vs. reason (Hzugman)
You\'ve put in simple form something I have been uncomfortable with as...
October 8th, 2024 00:01 - Hippie (Tony36)
Good message, well said, even if it does reveal your age. Nice.
October 7th, 2024 23:58 - Benign Bridges (Neville)
While I empathize with your sentiment, I fear there will be wars as long...
October 7th, 2024 23:56 - My Alice (Thomas W Case)
Unsure about the guillotine part but pretty happy with the rest. Good
October 7th, 2024 23:54 - Each New Day Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
You are like my polar opposite, so optimistic. Well done.
October 7th, 2024 23:52 - ~> Let\'s Fly Away (Thad Wilk)
In my day this would be Steppenwolf and pretty much stronger. Yours is...
October 7th, 2024 23:50 - unconditional love (Jim56)
I think unfortunately this is all too scarce. For me anyway. Nice work...
October 7th, 2024 23:48 - Emotionless FREAK (Hey!)
Wow. A real wagon load of hurt here. Hopefully spelling it put like this...
October 7th, 2024 00:15 - Gardens (Lorenz)
Gardens of every mind\'s eye seem collectively satisfying. Yours seems...
October 7th, 2024 00:12 - Forest (Tony36)
I am so jealous. Years ago days spent like that were frequent, now I...
October 7th, 2024 00:09 - Piled logs (Sorenbarrett)
\"to become but an ashen memory\", kind of like us I guess. More good work...
October 7th, 2024 00:08 - Thank you so much for being my friend (Meera Mere)
I have few friends left at my age, but a couple are still around. So close...
October 7th, 2024 00:06 - Back In The Day. (Goldfinch60)
I believe I was there with you in my younger days. Amen.
October 7th, 2024 00:03 - Mad Dog in America (Neville)
If I thought building a bunker would help, I would be hard at it. When I...
October 7th, 2024 00:01 - Our Bitter End (Tristan Robert Lange)
Wow. You make me in my resident gloom seem almost cheerful. You are right,...
October 6th, 2024 23:58 - moana (Ellen Marsell)
Yes, but are you? Nice job here.
October 6th, 2024 00:19 - Masquerade (Tristan Robert Lange)
My skeletons seem to find their way out from time to time, sneaky devils....
October 6th, 2024 00:17 - Gaea’s Garden (Neville)
Gaea rules. This is what I answer when asked what religion I am. Short but...
October 6th, 2024 00:16 - Gitanes (Neville)
Also means Blondes, Ottawa, and burgers. Your use is much better.
October 6th, 2024 00:14 - Circles of the invisible (Sorenbarrett)
The idea of \"negatives of trees\" terrifies me. Especially when described...
October 6th, 2024 00:12 - Searching (2781)
Unfortunately, yes; man does seem so shallow. Enough to be destroying...
October 6th, 2024 00:08 - Another Year Gone. (Goldfinch60)
They say that everything that lives, dies. That somehow comforts as I get...
October 6th, 2024 00:05 - Same Sky Different Rain. (David Wakeling)
That\'s not a knife., THIS is a knife. I like it.
October 5th, 2024 00:10 - Slumber painted dreams (Sorenbarrett)
You are just too clever. Fine work.
October 5th, 2024 00:08 - The Bullfrog Dreams of Flying (Thomas W Case)
I\'m siding with the bullfrog. Nice work.
October 5th, 2024 00:06 - Echoing across (Maplespal)
That\'s the thing; after all the mental gymnastics you ended up still...
October 4th, 2024 00:35 - Running late (Sorenbarrett)
Hey, I think I was the guy in that other car. Nice work.
October 4th, 2024 00:32 - The Reading (Tom Dylan)
The acid test for my poems is to have someone read them out load. I choke...
October 4th, 2024 00:25
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