Comments on community poems by Dan Williams

• Invisible Sword (Dan Williams) Clumsy mistakes, sorry.
  November 3rd, 2024 00:04
• The (W)Hole of Darkness (MendedFences27) Very well understood my friend. Been there all too many times. Nice work.
  November 2nd, 2024 23:53
• Old world (Lorenz) You had me with \"who leaves history, forgetting to flush \" and rounded...
  November 2nd, 2024 23:52
• Salute (David Wakeling) Amen. Very nice.
  November 2nd, 2024 23:48
• Blemished (Neville) Reminds me of Kansas; \"Nothing last forever but the earth and sky\" Nice.
  November 2nd, 2024 23:46
• Life\'s Passion (Tony36) Again I find myself jealous of such heartfelt optimism. Only very seldom...
  November 2nd, 2024 23:44
• Swing From Paris Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) I;m going to hazard a guess this is about a string quartet, my favorite...
  November 2nd, 2024 23:42
• Time to Live (Arqios) It cheers me to see people like you that can be so optimistic, something...
  November 2nd, 2024 23:40
• Birth of a poem (Sorenbarrett) Just love this. Most often I am inspired by a simple phrase or even one...
  November 2nd, 2024 23:38
• Exclusion (Tristan Robert Lange) I have spent most of my life striving to be different and yes, it can get...
  October 31st, 2024 23:55
• glitter (Sixthwrites) Short and sweet, but so sad. Nice work.
  October 31st, 2024 23:51
• everybody ages (Jim56) Not sure; still waiting for the \'Golden Years\' after 75. Nice work.
  October 31st, 2024 23:50
• Scarlet solo (Alan R) Touching, as lost love usually is. Nicely done.
  October 31st, 2024 23:48
• Bear (Sorenbarrett) Pretty clever for a consumed soul. Very well done, do I need to add \'as...
  October 31st, 2024 23:46
• What Am I? (Dove) What indeed. Your soul, maybe? Unsure of what canvas my life is drawn,...
  October 31st, 2024 23:44
• Looking Beyond Spring (Neville) Seems like anticipation thwarted. I too still look for certain people long...
  October 31st, 2024 23:39
• Spider Queen: Sonnet (Dove) Timely and graceful. Nice work.
  October 30th, 2024 23:43
• Teddy Bear (Tony36) Aw. Read this to my daughter; even at forty she is still my teddy bears....
  October 30th, 2024 23:41
• A Very Special Journey (Teddy.15) And it is indeed the journey that is the goal. Nice.
  October 30th, 2024 23:37
• Sepia dreams (Sorenbarrett) Like a dream. Cold reality at the end. Very nice.
  October 30th, 2024 23:36
• Whispers of a Wandering Soul (Arqios) Suitable praise for poetry and the poet, in this case, you. Nice work.
  October 30th, 2024 23:33
• Dark Hallway (Tony36) I think I\'ll take door number two. Nice work here.
  October 30th, 2024 23:31
• Never (Sorenbarrett) All here is wonderful but the last two lines are huge, magnificent. I...
  October 30th, 2024 23:29
• The Mask of Deception (Ezekiel Olayemi) And the wolf is. . .
  October 27th, 2024 23:08
• Assets of the Soul (Gray0328) A fine list of attributes we all should aspire to. Well done.
  October 27th, 2024 23:06
• My eyes are crying for me (Dev Parth) As fine a description of heartache as it can be defined, nice work.
  October 27th, 2024 23:03
• Ember (Sorenbarrett) The Wizard of Rhyme strikes again.
  October 27th, 2024 23:00
• in the light (Arqios) \"Shadows cast by doubt\" leads gracefully to the rest, very well said.
  October 27th, 2024 22:58
• A nursery rhyme for us mature children (Sorenbarrett) Here I sit, broken hearted . . .you know the rest.
  October 27th, 2024 22:55
• Books (Tony36) A school system near me, Akron Ohio, was not graduating enough students,...
  October 27th, 2024 22:53
• Halfway to Hanoi (Neville) Wow. This is sadness coming at you from different directions. If it helps,...
  October 27th, 2024 22:49
• Small Ghosts (Dan Williams)
  October 23rd, 2024 23:33
• Some Things Change Too Much (Neville) Misplaced priorities and a pretty cold heart. I have been there too. Nice...
  October 22nd, 2024 23:11
• Will I Ever Awaken? (Teddy.15) So much hurt over something so unnecessary. Well Done.
  October 22nd, 2024 23:08
• In the Beginning of Our Forever (Neville) Ah, the mixed blessing of longevity. A perfect example of the trip being...
  October 21st, 2024 23:18
• Isn\'t Deja Vu, Like, Badly Overused?! (Cheeky Missy) I\'m quite sure I\'ve heard all this before somewhere.
  October 21st, 2024 23:16
• Nursery rhyme just horsing around (Sorenbarrett) Tongue very firmly in cheek, very nice.
  October 21st, 2024 23:15
• Tell me a story (Tony36) cleverness nicely put. Well done.
  October 21st, 2024 23:14
• Smoke (Sorenbarrett) Smooth reading and complicated rhymes. Another gem. \"ashes to new life...
  October 21st, 2024 23:12
• Make the Static Go Away (Thomas W Case) Life is just one unending search for contentment and sometimes solitude,...
  October 16th, 2024 21:14
• Life (Tony36) Good solid advice, well written.
  October 16th, 2024 21:12
• The Moment Without (Steve Goldenfort) Lots of clever observations in a small space. Nice work.
  October 16th, 2024 21:11
• Sleep – Where and How to Find it (Doggerel Dave) This hits close to me; years of all night and swing shifts have left my...
  October 16th, 2024 21:10
• Let go (Sorenbarrett) Another fine work from the wordsmith. \"On feathered dreams gleams of...
  October 16th, 2024 21:07
• ATLAS (Qurrathul Ain) Aw, that is just so sweet.
  October 16th, 2024 21:05
• Music (Tony36) I can only repeat the message I have tried for decades to spread; Music...
  October 16th, 2024 21:05
• tide watch (Jim56) Yes, sitting on the dock of the bay! Nice work.
  October 16th, 2024 21:03
• Same Sky Different Rain. (David Wakeling) This is first class work on a worthy subject. Nice phrasing and imagery.
  October 16th, 2024 21:02
• Walking In Old Age Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) Bravo. This is a treasure you have, enjoy.
  October 16th, 2024 20:59
• Don\'t (Sorenbarrett) This is genius, then ten commandments V2.3.
  October 16th, 2024 20:58
• The Dark Follows (Mark The Phenomenon) A Halloween classic. Nice work.
  October 13th, 2024 00:08
• Dad (Minh1502) I share with you the wonderfulness of having a strong yet kin Father,...
  October 13th, 2024 00:05
• Pain Of Pain (Satishverma) Bloodless murder can be the cruelest kind. Nicely done.
  October 13th, 2024 00:01
• Unknown self (Sorenbarrett) I so wish I could embrace this view, another of your classics.
  October 12th, 2024 23:53
• Whispers of Healing (Dev Parth) \"In the circle of life, we find our blend.\" is a major truism. The rest...
  October 12th, 2024 23:51
• *- IF -* (Thad Wilk) This really needs to be set to music. Emaj maybe. Nice anyway.
  October 12th, 2024 23:47
• Night Terrors (Thomas W Case) Very nice from a fellow \'lost love\' specialist.
  October 12th, 2024 23:45
• Where I you will find (Maplespal) All is nice, \"all while the sun, its heavy head it lifts\" is special....
  October 12th, 2024 23:43
• Rhyme Not Mine. (Doggerel Dave) OK, you win the cleverness prize this round. Bravo.
  October 12th, 2024 23:40
• A Mysterious Beauty (The Struggler) Short, sincere, uplifting. Nice work.
  October 12th, 2024 23:39
• Our Intense Love Tanka. (Goldfinch60) Simple but effective. Nicely done.
  October 12th, 2024 23:38
• Growing old together (Tony36) This is a future that evade me, nice to hear others can live it. Very
  October 12th, 2024 23:37
• meadow lark song (Jim56) Me and Uncle Hank Williams are brightened by this. Nice work.
  October 12th, 2024 23:36
• A drop (Sorenbarrett) oooh, \"Droplets now cling adhesively infinitesimally small\" is just...
  October 12th, 2024 23:34
• The Lucky (Peet) Aye, childhood is indeed half the battle. Without a caring one the rest is...
  October 9th, 2024 00:17
• A leaf (Sorenbarrett) Helps takes the demise easier and gently predicts the future. Sensitive...
  October 9th, 2024 00:11
• Tomorrow Will Come. (Goldfinch60) Forward for sure but tempered with and colored by the past. Nice job.
  October 9th, 2024 00:08
• Just As Sunsets (Neville) And imagine you must, treasure these times to help offset less happy ones....
  October 9th, 2024 00:06
• Star Gazing (MaxSmith) Nice to hear of gentle kind nights, seem in short supply these days. Nice...
  October 9th, 2024 00:04
• Writing (Tony36) Well, your dedication pays off; nice write.
  October 9th, 2024 00:02
• Those black jobs (EvenwheniLie) Still one step above robots. Monkeys will create no SkyNet.
  October 8th, 2024 00:04
• Summer Sweat to Woolen Blankets (Katdream) Yes, has snuck up on us again. Having worked outside my whole long life in...
  October 8th, 2024 00:03
• rhyme vs. reason (Hzugman) You\'ve put in simple form something I have been uncomfortable with as...
  October 8th, 2024 00:01
• Hippie (Tony36) Good message, well said, even if it does reveal your age. Nice.
  October 7th, 2024 23:58
• Benign Bridges (Neville) While I empathize with your sentiment, I fear there will be wars as long...
  October 7th, 2024 23:56
• My Alice (Thomas W Case) Unsure about the guillotine part but pretty happy with the rest. Good
  October 7th, 2024 23:54
• Each New Day Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) You are like my polar opposite, so optimistic. Well done.
  October 7th, 2024 23:52
• ~> Let\'s Fly Away (Thad Wilk) In my day this would be Steppenwolf and pretty much stronger. Yours is...
  October 7th, 2024 23:50
• unconditional love (Jim56) I think unfortunately this is all too scarce. For me anyway. Nice work...
  October 7th, 2024 23:48
• Emotionless FREAK (Hey!) Wow. A real wagon load of hurt here. Hopefully spelling it put like this...
  October 7th, 2024 00:15
• Gardens (Lorenz) Gardens of every mind\'s eye seem collectively satisfying. Yours seems...
  October 7th, 2024 00:12
• Forest (Tony36) I am so jealous. Years ago days spent like that were frequent, now I...
  October 7th, 2024 00:09
• Piled logs (Sorenbarrett) \"to become but an ashen memory\", kind of like us I guess. More good work...
  October 7th, 2024 00:08
• Thank you so much for being my friend (Meera Mere) I have few friends left at my age, but a couple are still around. So close...
  October 7th, 2024 00:06
• Back In The Day. (Goldfinch60) I believe I was there with you in my younger days. Amen.
  October 7th, 2024 00:03
• Mad Dog in America (Neville) If I thought building a bunker would help, I would be hard at it. When I...
  October 7th, 2024 00:01
• Our Bitter End (Tristan Robert Lange) Wow. You make me in my resident gloom seem almost cheerful. You are right,...
  October 6th, 2024 23:58
• moana (Ellen Marsell) Yes, but are you? Nice job here.
  October 6th, 2024 00:19
• Masquerade (Tristan Robert Lange) My skeletons seem to find their way out from time to time, sneaky devils....
  October 6th, 2024 00:17
• Gaea’s Garden    (Neville) Gaea rules. This is what I answer when asked what religion I am. Short but...
  October 6th, 2024 00:16
• Gitanes (Neville) Also means Blondes, Ottawa, and burgers. Your use is much better.
  October 6th, 2024 00:14
• Circles of the invisible (Sorenbarrett) The idea of \"negatives of trees\" terrifies me. Especially when described...
  October 6th, 2024 00:12
• Searching (2781) Unfortunately, yes; man does seem so shallow. Enough to be destroying...
  October 6th, 2024 00:08
• Another Year Gone. (Goldfinch60) They say that everything that lives, dies. That somehow comforts as I get...
  October 6th, 2024 00:05
• Same Sky Different Rain. (David Wakeling) That\'s not a knife., THIS is a knife. I like it.
  October 5th, 2024 00:10
• Slumber painted dreams (Sorenbarrett) You are just too clever. Fine work.
  October 5th, 2024 00:08
• The Bullfrog Dreams of Flying (Thomas W Case) I\'m siding with the bullfrog. Nice work.
  October 5th, 2024 00:06
• Echoing across (Maplespal) That\'s the thing; after all the mental gymnastics you ended up still...
  October 4th, 2024 00:35
• Running late (Sorenbarrett) Hey, I think I was the guy in that other car. Nice work.
  October 4th, 2024 00:32
• The Reading (Tom Dylan) The acid test for my poems is to have someone read them out load. I choke...
  October 4th, 2024 00:25