Comments on community poems by Dan Williams

• A warm meal (Sorenbarrett) Ah yes, the value of the fresh kill. Clever and amusing.
  September 30th, 2024 00:36
• Menopause (Written by a man - it\'s just a joke!!) (Pappy155) I\'m not sure this will make you many friends on the other side, but...
  September 29th, 2024 00:09
• Time (Tony36) So much truth in this. I try to remember every time I see a friend or...
  September 29th, 2024 00:08
• Fire and Ice (Jerry Reynolds) Sweet, heartfelt. Sounds like true love. Nice work.
  September 29th, 2024 00:06
• Modern Life (Doggerel Dave) The obsession with \"security\' only seems to make my life miserable. I am...
  September 28th, 2024 23:58
• Masters of the universe? (Sorenbarrett) Arrogance has brought me down more than once, enough to make me struggle...
  September 28th, 2024 23:54
• Fumbles (Teddy.15) It\'s hard being a rabbit, sure, but those harsh comments might not be...
  September 28th, 2024 23:50
• Loving Light (Cassie58) I relly need to find this place. Your usual fine work.
  September 28th, 2024 23:47
• ~> Teamwork - Form Trijan Refrain - (Thad Wilk) Very clever, both feeding and eating. Love the \"a marionet duplicate\"....
  September 28th, 2024 00:16
• It\'s alright Little Darling (Teddy.15) Very Lennon and McCartney-ish. Sounds like a song. Very nice.
  September 28th, 2024 00:14
• Him its him (Trix) I would have to change the gender but it makes perfect sense to me. Nicely...
  September 27th, 2024 13:16
• Willow Dance (Jerry Reynolds) So clever for such a short run! Very nice.
  September 27th, 2024 13:14
• Remembering An Orange Room (Neville) The heartache is wonderfully expressed. Good job.
  September 27th, 2024 13:13
• Hustler’s Lament (Jerry Reynolds) I think I met this guy, more than once. Good work.
  September 27th, 2024 13:12
• Loving Light (Cassie58) I can not seem to conjure your kind of optimism; happy that you can. Nice.
  September 27th, 2024 13:10
• Stars and Stripes (Teddy.15) 250 million folks in this country and these two are the best we could put...
  September 27th, 2024 13:09
• Music (Tony36) I repeat the message I have taken as my duty; music will save us all if we...
  September 27th, 2024 13:06
• From The Hilltop Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) You can\'t go far wrong appreciating nature. Well said.
  September 27th, 2024 13:04
• A River Song (Cassie58) What would we have to write about except the sun, the clouds, wonders of...
  September 27th, 2024 13:03
• A vision (Sorenbarrett) Seems writing Nation Drugged has left you morose, like me. Good work just...
  September 27th, 2024 13:01
• A nation drugged (Sorenbarrett) Bravo and hooray for you. You have stepped outside your normal short...
  September 27th, 2024 12:58
• Icecream Alley (Jerry Reynolds) Quite clever and wonderful imagery, amusing as hell. Nice work.
  September 26th, 2024 00:33
• The Horney Spider (Jerry Reynolds) Yes, life is hard for tarantula menfolk. Got to be some life lessons in...
  September 26th, 2024 00:31
• Go Figure (Cheeky Missy) Virtually all of my poems are old, some very old. This one of yours stands...
  September 26th, 2024 00:30
• The Leaves Are Down (Cassie58) One of my favorite cartoons shows a line of lemmings headed for the cliff,...
  September 26th, 2024 00:28
• Vibrant Colors (Tony36) I have lived my life color blind, something about defective cones, I am so...
  September 26th, 2024 00:26
• Weight of a shadow (Sorenbarrett) I read where at death a small fraction of weight ca ne measured. The soul,...
  September 26th, 2024 00:23
• Not gonna March (Tony36) I wish I could believe stands like yours would have good effect. There...
  September 25th, 2024 00:34
• Cry Myself To Sleep (𓆩Mase𓆪) This is epic. How do you find time for such detail? Well done.
  September 25th, 2024 00:30
• Mannequin (NinjaGirl) This relationship is in dire need of adjustment. Well said.
  September 24th, 2024 00:07
• Goodness (2781) I sure could use a handful of your optimism. Nice work.
  September 24th, 2024 00:05
• Dust of a dream (Sorenbarrett) so where can I find these jars of vintage air? Maybe then I could be...
  September 24th, 2024 00:02
• tiptoe (NinjaGirl) Love sure can make sleeping an ordeal, eh? Nice work.
  September 24th, 2024 00:00
• Autumn Equinox Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) If you stopped at \"The golden leaves like whispered secrets lie, A...
  September 23rd, 2024 23:58
• Today (ADarkerMind) So much so well done. \"a face with a thousand land mines on it\'s chin\"...
  September 23rd, 2024 00:19
• A Mannequin\'s Scars (CarnationsCaretaker) This is just exquisite. Phrasing and imagery can bring tears. Very nicely...
  September 23rd, 2024 00:17
• We\'re Not Okay but Thanks for Asking (John Lee) The curse of insincerity perfectly described. Nice.
  September 23rd, 2024 00:15
• Fallen Angel (Tony36) Maybe there is more to this tale, I believe redemption is possible. Well...
  September 23rd, 2024 00:13
• A Gentleman\'s Lady (Teddy.15) Hopefully one of the ever fewer real gentlemen is the recipient of this....
  September 23rd, 2024 00:10
• ~> Heroin! - form Monotetra - (Thad Wilk) Wow. This is an all too frequent story. How is it that I feel I need to...
  September 23rd, 2024 00:08
• Love Must Ever Be Acrostic Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) I sure hope your vision is better than mine. Nice work.
  September 23rd, 2024 00:06
• Garden with no gardener (Sorenbarrett) A veritable symphony of flora and fauna. Very nicely done.
  September 23rd, 2024 00:04
• last nights end (Maplespal) Dare I add \"easily read\"? Clever and even amusing.
  September 22nd, 2024 01:23
• The eternal return (Ellen Marsell) Great description, well measured phrases. Well done.
  September 22nd, 2024 01:21
• Happy 18th Birthday!!! (Meera Mere) At this point in my 75 year life I have come to realize the impotence of...
  September 22nd, 2024 01:19
• Fading Echoes (Dev Parth) Nice to see someone seems to share my cynicism and despair. Good job.
  September 22nd, 2024 01:15
• The Door (Tony36) Well, you know you have to open it, no backing out now.
  September 22nd, 2024 01:12
• Old Codgers Love Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) Bravo and congratulations, this is good for my soul. Thank you.
  September 22nd, 2024 01:11
• Expectations (Sorenbarrett) Best advice I\'ve received this year. Nailed it again.
  September 22nd, 2024 01:09
• Puppets on a string (Tony36) Does not have to be this way.
  September 21st, 2024 00:24
• its a choice (MR.apocalypse) I would say that this is aimed directly at me but take issue with \"never...
  September 21st, 2024 00:21
• At Home On The Farm (ADarkerMind) \"she is here again\" is the heart of this; then \"it is only when I...
  September 21st, 2024 00:19
• A very Gracious Goodbye (Teddy.15) Greving properly is healing. The dead are hopefully at peace. Nice work...
  September 21st, 2024 00:13
• Better Than Gold (Thomas W Case) C#M leads smoothly into Dm, very natural progression. Just like this.
  September 21st, 2024 00:11
• Junkyard of time (Sorenbarrett) God that \"water of poetry\" is grand, inspired. Add this to your list of...
  September 21st, 2024 00:08
• A little (Alan R) A little of this is all it takes. Makes me think awe, so happy.
  September 20th, 2024 01:11
• I dream of peace (Tony36) I sure hope your vision is more accurate than mine. Nice work.
  September 20th, 2024 01:10
• A Pick Me Up (ADarkerMind) Nice rhythm and clever lines, a winner.
  September 20th, 2024 01:08
• Pastures In The Sky (Cassie58) Wonderful description of a sadness me most all have to try to deal with....
  September 20th, 2024 01:06
• Handicap (Sorenbarrett) Smooth, evocative, typical. Yet another winner.
  September 20th, 2024 01:03
• Soul-finder (Teddy.15) I sure hope you are right.
  September 20th, 2024 01:01
• Everyday Rarities (Tom Dylan) It is a lot of times hard to know what objects, and people, we will come...
  September 20th, 2024 01:00
• Love Into Light Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) I wish I could be more optimistic but my opinion of most of my fellow...
  September 20th, 2024 00:58
• Dark Night (Tony36) I keep expecting something to jump out and say \"BOO\". Well done.
  September 19th, 2024 01:11
• From Kingdom Come (ADarkerMind) Sometimes it seems like \"two miles shy of where I cannot be.\" is as...
  September 19th, 2024 01:10
• Bicycles in Beijing (Cassie58) Nice clarity and flow for such a tangled story. How did parking spaces get...
  September 19th, 2024 01:06
• Now Out in The Open (Neville) This is the coldness that can\'t be warmed by any blanket, and furnace....
  September 19th, 2024 01:04
• The Final Retreat (Thomas W Case) The city streets will curse you, the woods will help heal you. Stay with...
  September 19th, 2024 01:01
• Me (Bella Shepard) Me too.
  September 19th, 2024 00:59
• All Hail to the Rest…. (Doggerel Dave) Given the sorry state of the First Amendment I don\'t think free speech...
  September 19th, 2024 00:58
• 100 Not Out (Tom Dylan) All these things come slowly. Be patient, keep writing. Not too much...
  September 19th, 2024 00:55
• Perfectly polished (Teddy.15) I think I have been colour coordinated maybe twice in my life, probably by...
  September 19th, 2024 00:53
• Back To My Youth Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) Oh the skinned knees, I had my own seat at the local E.R. Still looking...
  September 19th, 2024 00:51
• What I left behind (Sorenbarrett) Sting would love this. I do too. Very nice work.
  September 19th, 2024 00:48
• Dishcloth Wisdom (AuburnScribbler) A big amen and thank you. With the first amendment in shambles this needs...
  September 18th, 2024 00:49
• Another One of The Lads (Tom Dylan) I think I was out drinking with this lout last week. A barroom fixture....
  September 18th, 2024 00:47
• DICHOTOMY (Bobby O) I think everybody fears lonely. I sure do. Nice work.
  September 18th, 2024 00:44
• Felt (Cassie58) Scary stuff. Plagues are pretty high on my list of ways human will undo...
  September 18th, 2024 00:39
• Our River Of Love. (Goldfinch60) Amen. When I am asked what religion I am I answer \"Nature\". This is
  September 18th, 2024 00:35
• Once a mighty tree (Sorenbarrett) \"where once towered mighty trees\" seems to be more and more places...
  September 18th, 2024 00:33
• The Sweetest of Slumberbash (Teddy.15) And a beautiful dream it was and cleverly reported. Nice work.
  September 17th, 2024 00:34
• A Winter Passing (Cassie58) I have unfortunately outlived most of my friends so this rings very true....
  September 17th, 2024 00:31
• They Lied About the Five Minute Warning (Neville) One thing is very sure; there will never be two more world wars.
  September 16th, 2024 00:51
• Now we are three.... (Orchidee) Calls up my Brother and I sitting with my Dad as he slipped away, so much...
  September 16th, 2024 00:48
• Devil Plays the Fiddle (Teddy.15) Touches a warm spot for a ballerina I lost many years ago to inner pain...
  September 16th, 2024 00:46
• My Father’s Daughters (Cassie58) I was raised to believe Family came first, always. That has worked well...
  September 16th, 2024 00:43
• Country walk (Sorenbarrett) Spoken like a true country boy, at heart anyway. Nice.
  September 16th, 2024 00:41
• Sonnet For Steven. (Goldfinch60) What a perfect remembrance, what a poignant description of love lost to...
  September 16th, 2024 00:39
• Wellcome to the 5:00 news (MR.apocalypse) Amen, amen. Watch CNN to learn what to think. It\'s so sad.
  September 15th, 2024 00:37
• On war.. (NafisaSB) It pains me to mention that there have been wars as long as there have...
  September 15th, 2024 00:34
• Reading Is A Crime. (Goldfinch60) This is so much scarier because it becomes likelier all the time. 1984...
  September 15th, 2024 00:31
• Mother\'s place (Sorenbarrett) As someone who lost his Mother as a young child this rings as true to me;...
  September 15th, 2024 00:28
• Hold On Tight (Teddy.15) Highs and lows, agreed, but going so quickly from \"a little bumpier\"...
  September 15th, 2024 00:26
• Young souls on social media (Unknownfemalepoet) I firmly believe social media has the ability to bring down civilization. ...
  September 14th, 2024 00:38
• If I Could I Would (Tom Dylan) You are, as my Dad would say, a Peach of a guy. Go heavy on the music.
  September 14th, 2024 00:35
• Hopes May Rise Over Grasmere (Tom Dylan) Ah, the consummate romantic. Very nice tribute.
  September 14th, 2024 00:33
• I CHOOSE ANGER (NinjaGirl) Harsh. I do feel the need to remind that you don\'t forgive for the...
  September 14th, 2024 00:30
• Karmasutra (Teddy.15) Yes, sure, I had to look up Biryani. That, and bending like a pretzel?
  September 14th, 2024 00:29
• Patriotism (Doggerel Dave) Heavy. Makes one wonder what does make a patriot? Nice work.
  September 14th, 2024 00:26
• Being Alive. (Goldfinch60) Still waiting seemingly fresh out. Or maybe, as you say, I am just not...
  September 14th, 2024 00:23