Comments on community poems by Dan Williams

• Mother\'s place (Sorenbarrett) As someone who lost his Mother as a young child this rings as true to me;...
  September 15th, 2024 00:28
• Hold On Tight (Teddy.15) Highs and lows, agreed, but going so quickly from \"a little bumpier\"...
  September 15th, 2024 00:26
• Young souls on social media (Unknownfemalepoet) I firmly believe social media has the ability to bring down civilization. ...
  September 14th, 2024 00:38
• If I Could I Would (Tom Dylan) You are, as my Dad would say, a Peach of a guy. Go heavy on the music.
  September 14th, 2024 00:35
• Hopes May Rise Over Grasmere (Tom Dylan) Ah, the consummate romantic. Very nice tribute.
  September 14th, 2024 00:33
• I CHOOSE ANGER (NinjaGirl) Harsh. I do feel the need to remind that you don\'t forgive for the...
  September 14th, 2024 00:30
• Karmasutra (Teddy.15) Yes, sure, I had to look up Biryani. That, and bending like a pretzel?
  September 14th, 2024 00:29
• Patriotism (Doggerel Dave) Heavy. Makes one wonder what does make a patriot? Nice work.
  September 14th, 2024 00:26
• Being Alive. (Goldfinch60) Still waiting seemingly fresh out. Or maybe, as you say, I am just not...
  September 14th, 2024 00:23
• Time flows backward (Sorenbarrett) You and your economy of words still getting the message across. Jealous.
  September 14th, 2024 00:20
• Down on the Corner (Tony36) Creedence Clearwater approves.
  September 12th, 2024 00:26
• Sonnet From Calliope. (Goldfinch60) Ah, dear sweet Calliope, I think I met her once. Nice.
  September 12th, 2024 00:24
• Shadows (Sorenbarrett) The eternal question, almost unanswerable mystery; makes life interesting,...
  September 12th, 2024 00:21
• The Why Begins to Show (Dan Williams)
  September 12th, 2024 00:16
• IM NOT ALONE INSIDE MY HEAD (MR.apocalypse) What a comforting poem. I believe most of us feel the weight of loneliness...
  September 11th, 2024 00:42
• anger is better than peace (NinjaGirl) Anger can be the answer but it needs to be channeled and directed, not hot...
  September 11th, 2024 00:38
• Rust and steel (Sorenbarrett) \"And rainbow’s ends were pinned\" is genius. Where the treasure is....
  September 11th, 2024 00:37
• Potboy (AuburnScribbler) Bravo Potboy. Clever and well told.
  September 11th, 2024 00:35
• They laugh (Tony36) Not sure. Never?
  September 11th, 2024 00:32
• In Silence and Disbelief (Teddy.15) Sorry, but this is entirely about terrorism, that scourge of modern times....
  September 11th, 2024 00:31
• im done being politicaly correct (MR.apocalypse) Bravo, and hooray for you. This attitude needs to be contagious. Very...
  September 10th, 2024 01:03
• I Have Loved You (Dev Parth) Aww, this is for some very lucky mate. Well done.
  September 10th, 2024 01:00
• Thank You Dad Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) I have been fortunate enough to have a Dad who was kind, hardworking,...
  September 10th, 2024 00:58
• A thirsty dream (Sorenbarrett) Ah yes, the plight of the writer, expressed so eloquently. I especially...
  September 10th, 2024 00:55
• I tried and tried (Sheta) What a fine description of sadness, something that is not so easy to do....
  September 9th, 2024 00:26
• The Last Dark Day (ADarkerMind) As bitter as me, but the last line tempers it. Nice work.
  September 9th, 2024 00:24
• lonlieness (Jim56) Thank you. I can so whole heartedly relate to this. Especially the sleep...
  September 9th, 2024 00:21
• Dead Poets (Kevin Michael Bloor) Amen. Trying to write poems has been one of the most complicated things I...
  September 9th, 2024 00:19
• STUCK (Adnan it is) Hey, were all stuck some time or the other. This describes it very well.
  September 8th, 2024 00:49
• My brother (Sorenbarrett) periods of, well, poorer circumstance have taught me to be a little...
  September 8th, 2024 00:45
• He\'s yours (Nicole Pritchard) Can not really relate, but well done just the same.
  September 7th, 2024 01:37
• cancer killer (Jim56) Cancer has taken way too many people from me; mother at 36, father, at...
  September 7th, 2024 01:36
• On the road to Novgorod (Lorenz) OK now I have to find Novgorod and at least pretend to visit it. Nice
  September 7th, 2024 01:32
• Ant Hill (Thomas W Case) Well, the mountain is sure not coming to me, maybe I\'ll find this one of...
  September 7th, 2024 01:29
• Mystery Girl (Tony36) Mystery girls have caused a fair amount of the trouble in my life, I...
  September 7th, 2024 01:28
• Amaranthine love (Neilton) Sure, I had to look up \'amaranthine\' but hey, was worth it. Very nice.
  September 7th, 2024 01:26
• And So It Is (Cassie58) \"a river’s flow in the waters of history \" nicely sums up many keen...
  September 7th, 2024 01:22
• Old Codgers Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) I am nearly overcome with jealousy. Fate decided I would spend these last...
  September 7th, 2024 01:21
• My poems are... (Tom Dylan) This pretty much sums things up for all of us here. Nice work.
  September 7th, 2024 01:18
• Tattoos and scars (Sorenbarrett) No tattoos but a nice selection of scars; History \"etched in flesh,...
  September 7th, 2024 01:17
• Remontant Hydrangeas (Gray0328) Yes, I did have to look up remontant. Like annuals times two. Very nice.
  September 6th, 2024 01:14
• Hula Hooping Thru Insignificance (Rocky Lagou) Hula Hoop? Really giving up your age here.
  September 6th, 2024 01:11
• it is not all just sad and gloomy (MR.apocalypse) Wow. You have definitely been reading my mail. I would be happy to sign my...
  September 6th, 2024 01:10
• What is the word? (Maplespal) Damned if I know. Gets a person thinking though.
  September 6th, 2024 01:08
• Majesty (Sorenbarrett) This has echos of, what, optimistic paganism? Your usual fine imagery. But...
  September 6th, 2024 01:06
• ABROGATIONS OF INTELLECT (Michael Edwards) I\'m guessing not a Christian, wanting better explanations?
  September 5th, 2024 00:12
• Dust of dreams (Sorenbarrett) I could make a rubber stamp for your work; Clear, concise, tasteful\" Keep...
  September 5th, 2024 00:10
• And All That\'s Gold (Teddy.15) Hard pressed to call any of the seasons my favorite, you seem to know why....
  September 5th, 2024 00:08
• Cats Comforts (Orchidee) I recently lost my dear companion of more than twenty years. Some people...
  September 5th, 2024 00:06
• You (Thomas W Case) Aren\'t we all hoping to connect with the Supreme Sculptor? I\'ve caught...
  September 5th, 2024 00:02
• No Way to Cotham (AuburnScribbler) OK I admit I had to look up Cotham, was well worth it. Nice work.
  September 4th, 2024 00:49
• Peace To All Acrostic. (Goldfinch60) Again, I must remark; Music will save us all if we just let it. Good...
  September 4th, 2024 00:46
• ~ Bloody Red Riding Hood! (Thad Wilk) Warren Zevon says hello. Good work.
  September 4th, 2024 00:45
• Never back again (Vishakha) Recipe for heartache for sure. Nice job.
  September 4th, 2024 00:43
• - Blue Dragon And Viking Boy - (Thad Wilk) With a nod to \"Puff the Magic Dragon\" very nice.
  September 4th, 2024 00:42
• dont (NinjaGirl) OK, no back talk from me.
  September 4th, 2024 00:41
• Everything\'s Alright (Tom Dylan) No, everything does not have to rhyme. You have done a fine job here.
  September 4th, 2024 00:40
• Inferno (Sorenbarrett) Wow, this is grim and despairing, right up my alley. I approve.
  September 4th, 2024 00:38
• Here & There (Kurt Philip Behm) Real wisdom is notoriously hard to express, you have done a fine job here.
  September 3rd, 2024 00:18
• Ten small poems 3 (MendedFences27) Wisdom reduced to phrases. Nice.
  September 3rd, 2024 00:11
• anxious (NinjaGirl) This is as good a definition of stress as I have seen. Fight it girl.
  September 3rd, 2024 00:10
• \"You- you, a poet???!\" (DeadRose) Besides here, it seems most people don\'t care. I usually fail to mention...
  September 3rd, 2024 00:09
• Roots of generosity (Sorenbarrett) And, don\'t forget, help process oxygen. Well spoken.
  September 3rd, 2024 00:06
• An Ode To The Kookaburra (Teddy.15) His cry is often mistaken for laughing. By itself that makes this poem a...
  September 2nd, 2024 00:42
• The Sullen Swimmer (Tristan Robert Lange) Very tasteful. I think E.A. Poe would approve.
  September 2nd, 2024 00:39
• Swing minor mode (Lorenz) A poem in minor key; interesting. Thoughts filtered through music. Nice.
  September 2nd, 2024 00:37
• This realm in my dream (Vishakha) Oh, it\'s me too allright. Nice work.
  September 2nd, 2024 00:35
• Determined chaos (Sorenbarrett) Thought provoking and your trademark economy of words gets the job done.
  September 2nd, 2024 00:34
• real love (Sheta) Ain\'t love grand?
  September 2nd, 2024 00:32
• The Wandering Poet (MendedFences27) Sorry but I have to disagree. The price of living is death. Nice write all...
  September 2nd, 2024 00:31
• Look at Me, Mama (Thomas W Case) This may be the saddest thing I have ever read. My Mother passed when I...
  September 2nd, 2024 00:29
• My Broken Heart And My Foolish Mind (Hanible) Wow. I thought I was doom and gloom. Dare I say cheer up, things could be...
  September 1st, 2024 00:47
• For Tommy (ThoughtsFromB4) Genuine and uplifting, nice work.
  September 1st, 2024 00:44
• A man in my past (Neilton) Thoughts racing, whirling. This guy embarrasses me, not a gentleman. Nice...
  September 1st, 2024 00:42
• The knight (Tony36) How very medieval. Nice.
  September 1st, 2024 00:39
• Roses in Late Summer (DeadRose) Well voiced, the last five lines push this into great work territory.
  August 31st, 2024 01:22
• REVENGE BEST SERVED HOT (Kwrites) Yow, this makes even me, the sultan of grim, cringe a little. I can...
  August 31st, 2024 01:20
• Little 🐜 ants (Lakshya) Humans would be so much better off if we modeled our society after ants....
  August 31st, 2024 01:18
• Can you tell? (Neilton) And a diamond this is. Very nice.
  August 31st, 2024 01:16
• Books (Tony36) This was me for a long time, then along came Kindle. Nice work.
  August 31st, 2024 01:15
• When The Shadows Come Calling (Teddy.15) I am at a point in my life when I don\'t welcome the dark stranger but...
  August 31st, 2024 01:13
• The British Empire (Thepoetman1234) Sure, but now they have BBC.
  August 31st, 2024 01:11
• What\'s In A Name (Tom Dylan) This is way past clever. Very amusing. Well done.
  August 31st, 2024 01:09
• Without Grace (Sorenbarrett) I fantasize that I have danced with each of these ladies. Thank you for...
  August 31st, 2024 01:08
• My mind the sea (Sorenbarrett) Jail bars on cribs? Pretty heavy. Graceful though, easy read.
  August 30th, 2024 00:28
• Changing (2781) We can only hope. Nice.
  August 30th, 2024 00:25
• SOULFUL LONGING (Amogelang Mooketsi) My Dad married my Mom, and even though she passed at 36 he stayed married...
  August 30th, 2024 00:23
• Route 66 (Tony36) Ah, the lure of the open road, freedom lived. Everyone should do this
  August 30th, 2024 00:21
• All Was Well Forever. (Goldfinch60) Once again I say; Music can save us all if we just let it.
  August 30th, 2024 00:17
• Aging Captain\'s Lament (Dan Williams) Thank you very much. Your approval carries weight with me.
  August 29th, 2024 17:49
• Come Home, My Love (Cocamedo) Something from a dream? Well done.
  August 28th, 2024 23:50
• \'Made In Heaven\' (Kurt Philip Behm) Music is indeed a much higher master, can save us all if we will just let...
  August 28th, 2024 23:49
• Where does one end and another begin? (Sorenbarrett)
  August 28th, 2024 23:45
• Where does one end and another begin? (Sorenbarrett) Ah, life\'s eternal questions. When I have answers I Will try to let you...
  August 28th, 2024 23:45
• Society (Tony36) Society is the root of social media, which may well be the downfall of...
  August 28th, 2024 00:43
• Bello Casentino (Teddy.15) Yes! Perfect imagery! Very well done.
  August 28th, 2024 00:40
• Holes in the ground (Sorenbarrett) Many believe that merely by looking at something, you change it. Calling...
  August 28th, 2024 00:38
• Be strong (BlessedbyGod) A Mother\'s love; what could be more durable? Very nicely put.
  August 27th, 2024 00:05
• Senryu to Love (Teddy.15) Fundamental truth stated cleanly. Nice.
  August 27th, 2024 00:02
• My Love (Cassie58) I remember this after two ex-wives, still a pleasant one. Nice.
  August 27th, 2024 00:01