Comments on community poems by Dan Williams
- Young souls on social media (Unknownfemalepoet)
I firmly believe social media has the ability to bring down civilization. ...
September 14th, 2024 00:38 - If I Could I Would (Tom Dylan)
You are, as my Dad would say, a Peach of a guy. Go heavy on the music.
September 14th, 2024 00:35 - Hopes May Rise Over Grasmere (Tom Dylan)
Ah, the consummate romantic. Very nice tribute.
September 14th, 2024 00:33 - I CHOOSE ANGER (NinjaGirl)
Harsh. I do feel the need to remind that you don\'t forgive for the...
September 14th, 2024 00:30 - Karmasutra (Teddy.15)
Yes, sure, I had to look up Biryani. That, and bending like a pretzel?
September 14th, 2024 00:29 - Patriotism (Doggerel Dave)
Heavy. Makes one wonder what does make a patriot? Nice work.
September 14th, 2024 00:26 - Being Alive. (Goldfinch60)
Still waiting seemingly fresh out. Or maybe, as you say, I am just not...
September 14th, 2024 00:23 - Time flows backward (Sorenbarrett)
You and your economy of words still getting the message across. Jealous.
September 14th, 2024 00:20 - Down on the Corner (Tony36)
Creedence Clearwater approves.
September 12th, 2024 00:26 - Sonnet From Calliope. (Goldfinch60)
Ah, dear sweet Calliope, I think I met her once. Nice.
September 12th, 2024 00:24 - Shadows (Sorenbarrett)
The eternal question, almost unanswerable mystery; makes life interesting,...
September 12th, 2024 00:21 - The Why Begins to Show (Dan Williams)
September 12th, 2024 00:16 - IM NOT ALONE INSIDE MY HEAD (MR.apocalypse)
What a comforting poem. I believe most of us feel the weight of loneliness...
September 11th, 2024 00:42 - anger is better than peace (NinjaGirl)
Anger can be the answer but it needs to be channeled and directed, not hot...
September 11th, 2024 00:38 - Rust and steel (Sorenbarrett)
\"And rainbow’s ends were pinned\" is genius. Where the treasure is....
September 11th, 2024 00:37 - Potboy (AuburnScribbler)
Bravo Potboy. Clever and well told.
September 11th, 2024 00:35 - They laugh (Tony36)
Not sure. Never?
September 11th, 2024 00:32 - In Silence and Disbelief (Teddy.15)
Sorry, but this is entirely about terrorism, that scourge of modern times....
September 11th, 2024 00:31 - im done being politicaly correct (MR.apocalypse)
Bravo, and hooray for you. This attitude needs to be contagious. Very...
September 10th, 2024 01:03 - I Have Loved You (Dev Parth)
Aww, this is for some very lucky mate. Well done.
September 10th, 2024 01:00 - Thank You Dad Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
I have been fortunate enough to have a Dad who was kind, hardworking,...
September 10th, 2024 00:58 - A thirsty dream (Sorenbarrett)
Ah yes, the plight of the writer, expressed so eloquently. I especially...
September 10th, 2024 00:55 - I tried and tried (Sheta)
What a fine description of sadness, something that is not so easy to do....
September 9th, 2024 00:26 - The Last Dark Day (ADarkerMind)
As bitter as me, but the last line tempers it. Nice work.
September 9th, 2024 00:24 - lonlieness (Jim56)
Thank you. I can so whole heartedly relate to this. Especially the sleep...
September 9th, 2024 00:21 - Dead Poets (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Amen. Trying to write poems has been one of the most complicated things I...
September 9th, 2024 00:19 - STUCK (Adnan it is)
Hey, were all stuck some time or the other. This describes it very well.
September 8th, 2024 00:49 - My brother (Sorenbarrett)
periods of, well, poorer circumstance have taught me to be a little...
September 8th, 2024 00:45 - He\'s yours (Nicole Pritchard)
Can not really relate, but well done just the same.
September 7th, 2024 01:37 - cancer killer (Jim56)
Cancer has taken way too many people from me; mother at 36, father, at...
September 7th, 2024 01:36 - On the road to Novgorod (Lorenz)
OK now I have to find Novgorod and at least pretend to visit it. Nice
September 7th, 2024 01:32 - Ant Hill (Thomas W Case)
Well, the mountain is sure not coming to me, maybe I\'ll find this one of...
September 7th, 2024 01:29 - Mystery Girl (Tony36)
Mystery girls have caused a fair amount of the trouble in my life, I...
September 7th, 2024 01:28 - Amaranthine love (Neilton)
Sure, I had to look up \'amaranthine\' but hey, was worth it. Very nice.
September 7th, 2024 01:26 - And So It Is (Cassie58)
\"a river’s flow in the waters of history \"
nicely sums up many keen...
September 7th, 2024 01:22 - Old Codgers Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
I am nearly overcome with jealousy. Fate decided I would spend these last...
September 7th, 2024 01:21 - My poems are... (Tom Dylan)
This pretty much sums things up for all of us here. Nice work.
September 7th, 2024 01:18 - Tattoos and scars (Sorenbarrett)
No tattoos but a nice selection of scars; History \"etched in flesh,...
September 7th, 2024 01:17 - Remontant Hydrangeas (Gray0328)
Yes, I did have to look up remontant. Like annuals times two. Very nice.
September 6th, 2024 01:14 - Hula Hooping Thru Insignificance (Rocky Lagou)
Hula Hoop? Really giving up your age here.
September 6th, 2024 01:11 - it is not all just sad and gloomy (MR.apocalypse)
Wow. You have definitely been reading my mail. I would be happy to sign my...
September 6th, 2024 01:10 - What is the word? (Maplespal)
Damned if I know. Gets a person thinking though.
September 6th, 2024 01:08 - Majesty (Sorenbarrett)
This has echos of, what, optimistic paganism? Your usual fine imagery. But...
September 6th, 2024 01:06 - ABROGATIONS OF INTELLECT (Michael Edwards)
I\'m guessing not a Christian, wanting better explanations?
September 5th, 2024 00:12 - Dust of dreams (Sorenbarrett)
I could make a rubber stamp for your work; Clear, concise, tasteful\" Keep...
September 5th, 2024 00:10 - And All That\'s Gold (Teddy.15)
Hard pressed to call any of the seasons my favorite, you seem to know why....
September 5th, 2024 00:08 - Cats Comforts (Orchidee)
I recently lost my dear companion of more than twenty years. Some people...
September 5th, 2024 00:06 - You (Thomas W Case)
Aren\'t we all hoping to connect with the Supreme Sculptor? I\'ve caught...
September 5th, 2024 00:02 - No Way to Cotham (AuburnScribbler)
OK I admit I had to look up Cotham, was well worth it. Nice work.
September 4th, 2024 00:49 - Peace To All Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
Again, I must remark; Music will save us all if we just let it. Good...
September 4th, 2024 00:46 - ~ Bloody Red Riding Hood! (Thad Wilk)
Warren Zevon says hello. Good work.
September 4th, 2024 00:45 - Never back again (Vishakha)
Recipe for heartache for sure. Nice job.
September 4th, 2024 00:43 - - Blue Dragon And Viking Boy - (Thad Wilk)
With a nod to \"Puff the Magic Dragon\" very nice.
September 4th, 2024 00:42 - dont (NinjaGirl)
OK, no back talk from me.
September 4th, 2024 00:41 - Everything\'s Alright (Tom Dylan)
No, everything does not have to rhyme. You have done a fine job here.
September 4th, 2024 00:40 - Inferno (Sorenbarrett)
Wow, this is grim and despairing, right up my alley. I approve.
September 4th, 2024 00:38 - Here & There (Kurt Philip Behm)
Real wisdom is notoriously hard to express, you have done a fine job here.
September 3rd, 2024 00:18 - Ten small poems 3 (MendedFences27)
Wisdom reduced to phrases. Nice.
September 3rd, 2024 00:11 - anxious (NinjaGirl)
This is as good a definition of stress as I have seen. Fight it girl.
September 3rd, 2024 00:10 - \"You- you, a poet???!\" (DeadRose)
Besides here, it seems most people don\'t care. I usually fail to mention...
September 3rd, 2024 00:09 - Roots of generosity (Sorenbarrett)
And, don\'t forget, help process oxygen. Well spoken.
September 3rd, 2024 00:06 - An Ode To The Kookaburra (Teddy.15)
His cry is often mistaken for laughing. By itself that makes this poem a...
September 2nd, 2024 00:42 - The Sullen Swimmer (Tristan Robert Lange)
Very tasteful. I think E.A. Poe would approve.
September 2nd, 2024 00:39 - Swing minor mode (Lorenz)
A poem in minor key; interesting. Thoughts filtered through music. Nice.
September 2nd, 2024 00:37 - This realm in my dream (Vishakha)
Oh, it\'s me too allright. Nice work.
September 2nd, 2024 00:35 - Determined chaos (Sorenbarrett)
Thought provoking and your trademark economy of words gets the job done.
September 2nd, 2024 00:34 - real love (Sheta)
Ain\'t love grand?
September 2nd, 2024 00:32 - The Wandering Poet (MendedFences27)
Sorry but I have to disagree. The price of living is death. Nice write all...
September 2nd, 2024 00:31 - Look at Me, Mama (Thomas W Case)
This may be the saddest thing I have ever read. My Mother passed when I...
September 2nd, 2024 00:29 - My Broken Heart And My Foolish Mind (Hanible)
Wow. I thought I was doom and gloom. Dare I say cheer up, things could be...
September 1st, 2024 00:47 - For Tommy (ThoughtsFromB4)
Genuine and uplifting, nice work.
September 1st, 2024 00:44 - A man in my past (Neilton)
Thoughts racing, whirling. This guy embarrasses me, not a gentleman. Nice...
September 1st, 2024 00:42 - The knight (Tony36)
How very medieval. Nice.
September 1st, 2024 00:39 - Roses in Late Summer (DeadRose)
Well voiced, the last five lines push this into great work territory.
August 31st, 2024 01:22 - REVENGE BEST SERVED HOT (Kwrites)
Yow, this makes even me, the sultan of grim, cringe a little. I can...
August 31st, 2024 01:20 - Little 🐜 ants (Lakshya)
Humans would be so much better off if we modeled our society after ants....
August 31st, 2024 01:18 - Can you tell? (Neilton)
And a diamond this is. Very nice.
August 31st, 2024 01:16 - Books (Tony36)
This was me for a long time, then along came Kindle. Nice work.
August 31st, 2024 01:15 - When The Shadows Come Calling (Teddy.15)
I am at a point in my life when I don\'t welcome the dark stranger but...
August 31st, 2024 01:13 - The British Empire (Thepoetman1234)
Sure, but now they have BBC.
August 31st, 2024 01:11 - What\'s In A Name (Tom Dylan)
This is way past clever. Very amusing. Well done.
August 31st, 2024 01:09 - Without Grace (Sorenbarrett)
I fantasize that I have danced with each of these ladies. Thank you for...
August 31st, 2024 01:08 - My mind the sea (Sorenbarrett)
Jail bars on cribs? Pretty heavy. Graceful though, easy read.
August 30th, 2024 00:28 - Changing (2781)
We can only hope. Nice.
August 30th, 2024 00:25 - SOULFUL LONGING (Amogelang Mooketsi)
My Dad married my Mom, and even though she passed at 36 he stayed married...
August 30th, 2024 00:23 - Route 66 (Tony36)
Ah, the lure of the open road, freedom lived. Everyone should do this
August 30th, 2024 00:21 - All Was Well Forever. (Goldfinch60)
Once again I say; Music can save us all if we just let it.
August 30th, 2024 00:17 - Aging Captain\'s Lament (Dan Williams)
Thank you very much. Your approval carries weight with me.
August 29th, 2024 17:49 - Come Home, My Love (Cocamedo)
Something from a dream? Well done.
August 28th, 2024 23:50 - \'Made In Heaven\' (Kurt Philip Behm)
Music is indeed a much higher master, can save us all if we will just let...
August 28th, 2024 23:49 - Where does one end and another begin? (Sorenbarrett)
August 28th, 2024 23:45 - Where does one end and another begin? (Sorenbarrett)
Ah, life\'s eternal questions. When I have answers I Will try to let you...
August 28th, 2024 23:45 - Society (Tony36)
Society is the root of social media, which may well be the downfall of...
August 28th, 2024 00:43 - Bello Casentino (Teddy.15)
Yes! Perfect imagery! Very well done.
August 28th, 2024 00:40 - Holes in the ground (Sorenbarrett)
Many believe that merely by looking at something, you change it. Calling...
August 28th, 2024 00:38 - Be strong (BlessedbyGod)
A Mother\'s love; what could be more durable? Very nicely put.
August 27th, 2024 00:05 - Senryu to Love (Teddy.15)
Fundamental truth stated cleanly. Nice.
August 27th, 2024 00:02 - My Love (Cassie58)
I remember this after two ex-wives, still a pleasant one. Nice.
August 27th, 2024 00:01 - A mystery (Orchidee)
It was the Butler in the dining room. I like the form.
August 26th, 2024 00:10 - their 1000 watt smile (NafisaSB)
Hey, electricity runs everything else, why not smiles. A happy song. Nice...
August 26th, 2024 00:08
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