Comments on community poems by Dan Williams

• Perception – Am I Coming or Going? (Friendship) This is just wonderful. Starts out strong \"a breath caught in the hinge...
  February 28th, 2026 22:37
• “snake eating its tale” (Arqios) \"Lines chewed into new syllables\" seems the essence of poetry. the...
  February 28th, 2026 22:32
• Rise of the Dragon (Tristan Robert Lange) Conjures images easy to imagine in reality, nearly alive. The Dragon is...
  February 28th, 2026 22:27
• Ghost (Sorenbarrett) You as usual explain things much better than I. I am at the one-year...
  February 28th, 2026 22:23
• Us (Sorenbarrett) I just watched a documentary that validates everything you present here so...
  February 28th, 2026 22:20
• winter palette (Arqios) So nice, ad timely. Tree shadows sketch silver, indeed.
  January 28th, 2026 01:02
• Poetry Poems (Doggerel Dave) Amen. Tricky, this poetry gig. Nice.
  January 27th, 2026 01:25
• Are Ya Done!? (Arqios) \"as if the sound itself could clean a wound\' sets a wonderful tone here,...
  January 27th, 2026 01:23
• Covenant Bliss (Thomas W Case) You are sure one lucky guy. Well written, evocative, tastefully erotic....
  January 27th, 2026 01:18
• A Father\'s Love (Friendship) I wish I could have written this. My own Dad was a giant of honesty and...
  January 27th, 2026 01:15
• The way I like it (Sorenbarrett) This is just charming. Hits home for me in many different ways.
  January 27th, 2026 01:08
• Between the Lines (Thomas W Case) \"a laugh bounces off the wall\" is marvelous. \"electric whispers\" also....
  January 2nd, 2026 02:24
• The last day (Lorenz) Little things like \"scent of rust\" and \"nobility of disenchantment \"...
  January 2nd, 2026 02:21
• Any Day? (Tristan Robert Lange) Kind of nice to know others as jaded and maybe bitter like me. Eternal...
  January 2nd, 2026 02:15
• Why Do You Hate Me? (Friendship) This hits home, closely describing a twenty year relationship that turned...
  January 2nd, 2026 02:11
• That is That (Jerry Reynolds) Nice description and untypically from the spider\'s point of view.
  January 2nd, 2026 02:09
• Freedom in chains (Sorenbarrett) Imagery abounds and while generally moody, ends on slight optimism. Nice.
  January 2nd, 2026 02:05
• Like A River After Rain (Katie B.) Pretty sure the river does know your name. Great take on frustration.
  December 31st, 2025 04:31
• Mood is a Bouncing Ball (Friendship) Clever and witty. \"It defies rules, this wayward thing— a hiccup,...
  December 31st, 2025 04:29
• Guilt by association (Sorenbarrett) Brief but eloquent. \"Beware friends you keep, with whom you sleep, in...
  December 31st, 2025 04:26
• cartography of echoes (Arqios) \"Unpublishable\" is all too familiar to me. \"Between cursor and...
  December 31st, 2025 04:23
• Mozart\'s voice (Lorenz) \"\"The best way to learn is through the powerful force of rhythm\" and of...
  December 3rd, 2025 02:12
• The First Time (Thomas W Case) Fifteen? My god man, I was still building model cars. The false promise of...
  December 3rd, 2025 02:03
• Ignorance! (Friendship) I have read that idiots are often happier people than geniuses, with room...
  December 3rd, 2025 01:58
• wooden keys (Tristan Robert Lange) Yes, because the silences are at least as important as the struck (or in...
  December 3rd, 2025 01:55
• benign maleficense (Arqios) This is clever and unique, from \"clerk’s smile at the counter, forms...
  December 3rd, 2025 01:52
• Cold truth (Sorenbarrett) My Uncle Hank would be proud.
  December 3rd, 2025 01:47
• after-image (Arqios) Not sure to be saddened or or awakened, provokes thought as all poetry...
  November 9th, 2025 00:56
• Wasn\'t then but guilty now (Sorenbarrett) Almost mysterious, still speaks volumes. Nice.
  November 9th, 2025 00:53
• The Lord\'s Despair (Tristan Robert Lange) God works in strange ways, eh?
  November 9th, 2025 00:52
• a moment turning (Arqios) Amen. This is just wonderful, articulates so well what may be an epidemic....
  November 9th, 2025 00:50
• The majestic images in a fire. (Friendship) Ah, fire. It inspires yet can destroy. With my own eyes, in shadows soft...
  October 16th, 2025 23:28
• DESCENT INTO MEDIOCRITY (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Amen. Just good enough has been promoted, the bar of accomplishment...
  October 16th, 2025 23:25
• The Art of Water (Gray0328) Mother and monster indeed. You have nicely captured something people often...
  October 16th, 2025 23:19
• Fading in the Shadows (A.N.) How sad. I\'ve been there, too often, yet still here I am. This too will...
  October 16th, 2025 23:16
• For A Girl Like Me (Meera Mere) Don\'t sell yourself short; you can write. I like your honesty.
  October 16th, 2025 23:14
• My farewell letter (Lorenz) So nice, pretty yet sad. The words take on this beautiful shade \"of...
  October 16th, 2025 23:12
• You still Not Getting It? (Orchidee) You must really struggle with my rants. It\'s fine, makes you think,...
  September 22nd, 2025 23:26
• Yard work. (Friendship) Ah, twenty years ago this could be any number of three season days for me....
  September 22nd, 2025 23:22
• undertow (Arqios) Amen. Elements in this earth remember even minute details and reveal them...
  September 22nd, 2025 23:18
• Heaven\'s rain (Sorenbarrett) \"A drop of sky caught by the eye\". . . just wonderful in its simple...
  September 22nd, 2025 23:15
• Just Before the Light Turns Green (Arquious) I used to be so impatient having to sit at a light or being stuck in...
  September 22nd, 2025 23:13
• the saga in the hall (Arqios) I worked for many years in a train terminal built in the 20\'s. Before...
  September 22nd, 2025 23:10
• Poet (Teddy.15) Such a simple ask but pitfalls abound. Cynical me can\'t believe it could...
  September 22nd, 2025 23:05
• The Time Travellers Tragedy (TommyDingo) At 76 years almost all of my contemporaries have been swept away hard...
  September 15th, 2025 02:12
• Inferno manifesto (Lorenz) Nice to know I\'m not alone in disappointment. No, I am not Tarzan....
  September 15th, 2025 02:07
• The Games Some People Play… (Doggerel Dave) I\'ve always been mystified about the entertainment value of zombies. If I...
  September 15th, 2025 02:04
• Lost paper thoughts (Sorenbarrett) Simple but giant. Imagination? What\'s that?
  September 15th, 2025 02:00
• Bye-Bye Time (Thomas W Case) I have for the longest been of the opinion that the old hat about time...
  September 15th, 2025 01:58
• There is A Crease in Everything (Neville) Solid observation simply stated. Nice.
  August 17th, 2025 19:47
• The Wealth of Youth (Thomas W Case) \"When I was a child I spoke as a child...\" now as a man. Nice...
  August 17th, 2025 19:46
• week in a wink (Arqios) Clever take, amusing. Well done.
  August 17th, 2025 19:43
• The Open Door (Tristan Robert Lange) Heartfelt and encouraging. Nice.
  August 17th, 2025 17:00
• Poetic lightning (Sorenbarrett) Almost random, still making perfect sense.
  August 17th, 2025 16:58
• Numb (Peto) Touching and sincere, \"She navigates the seas by raft\" says chapters by...
  August 5th, 2025 02:05
• Back when I was a Kid (Thomas W Case) Amen. Music has so often empowered me, revived me. Too much of what passes...
  August 5th, 2025 01:59
• He\'s my best friend,l don\'t deserve to have. (Friendship) What a tribute to our humans sometimes forgotten true legacy. \"A...
  August 5th, 2025 01:56
• Is Life Dangerous? (Goldfinch60) The only thing we have to fear... Agreed
  August 5th, 2025 01:51
• reader, read her (Arqios) This is what poetry is supposed to be all about. I mean \"the page...
  August 5th, 2025 01:49
• Servitude (Sorenbarrett) Wow. I was going to highlight the third and fourth verses but that shadows...
  August 5th, 2025 01:45
• Thought (Bella Shepard) Like sometimes speaking out requires silence. Nice.
  August 5th, 2025 01:37
• Emotions (Tony36) Seems like repetitive dreams of mine. \"Darkness fills my sight\", so...
  July 25th, 2025 00:33
• No b in humanity (Sorenbarrett) How indeed can we be deaf to history? I thump my forehead at each new...
  July 25th, 2025 00:28
• riptide fantasia (Arqios) I like the short but intent phrases, \"Staccato sparks ignite\", \"in the...
  July 25th, 2025 00:24
• Witty wings (Priya Tomar)
  July 25th, 2025 00:21
• Witty wings (Priya Tomar) Evocative of nature tied to human existence. Well done.
  July 25th, 2025 00:20
• The forge (Sorenbarrett) Sometimes have to destroy something to save it, eh?
  May 31st, 2025 01:06
• My Pet Monkey Moses (Gray0328) I think all of us are the desert, at least part of the time. Not sure who...
  May 31st, 2025 01:04
• Hey Funny man (Tony36) Sad, but mostly true. A big reason why I write. Nice work.
  May 31st, 2025 01:01
• Surgery (Tony36) How timely for me. While this one is likely not as serious as yours, and...
  May 31st, 2025 01:00
• Beasts (Damaso) The mysterious Golden Beast. Clever, thought provoking. Well Done.
  May 31st, 2025 00:57
• flight ready (Arqios) How sweet and such optimism! Well done.
  May 31st, 2025 00:55
• Closure (Tristan Robert Lange) So very true. Mine was the most devoted of a number of companions. Thanks...
  May 31st, 2025 00:53
• adopt a friend (Jim56) Bless you for this. Too many of us humans seem to think we are all that...
  May 15th, 2025 00:56
• The Lone Apostle (Tony Grannell) What a story this is. Just wonderfully phrased and engrossing. Well done.
  May 15th, 2025 00:50
• Give and take (Sorenbarrett) \"deep thoughts that are mined\' indeed. That\'s what poetry is all about,...
  May 15th, 2025 00:48
• Enamored by the Dormouse (Thomas W Case) I can\'t help but notice that \"it\" evolves to \"she\". Nicei work here.
  May 15th, 2025 00:46
• The Carousel of Critics (Tristan Robert Lange) I can only hope you are right about it ceasing. Politicians are, after...
  May 15th, 2025 00:43
• When the east wind cries (Sorenbarrett) This is just genius. Those Aztecs were quite serious people and you have...
  May 9th, 2025 22:15
• Too many (Sorenbarrett) I guess this is about the shortest can be made of the human condition. I...
  May 9th, 2025 22:11
• Blackness\' light (Sorenbarrett) First class work. \"A thought forgot cuts the knot\" and \"Drinking from...
  May 1st, 2025 21:21
• Predator and Prey (Hzugman) Bravo. Simple still accurate and timely. Humans; Bah.
  April 27th, 2025 00:33
• printed word (Arqios) Wind carried messages are all around us. Many listen, few care, fewer...
  April 27th, 2025 00:30
• Good taste (Sorenbarrett) Cold. Clever, but cold.
  April 27th, 2025 00:28
• pet company (Jim56) Lost a dear pet after more than twenty years, like a knife in the heart....
  February 10th, 2025 01:39
• The War (Distant View) How sad, a living death. Your effort to communicate is well spoken. Nice...
  February 10th, 2025 01:37
• As Time Goes By (ADarkerMind) \"no face that fits the torso of a tongue\", oblique, obtuse, deep. Hard...
  February 10th, 2025 01:34
• Inprismed (Neville) Catchy, clever, well done.
  February 10th, 2025 01:30
• The Battle Of Twickenham. (Goldfinch60) Times change, adversaries sometimes remain so. Good work.
  February 10th, 2025 01:29
• Flocks (Sorenbarrett) I think you also are often led by magnetic lines; \'Cryptic lines of...
  February 10th, 2025 01:27
• piecemeal (Arqios) Lovely and touching, more somber than sad. Nice work.
  February 10th, 2025 01:23
• A Solitude So Grand (ADarkerMind) \"nostalgia runs it\'s fingers through a breath of metaphors\" is a fine...
  February 8th, 2025 00:44
• The Fight (Tony36) Cliche for sure, but the journey is the truth of the seeking, of the...
  February 8th, 2025 00:41
• Will I have time ? (Lorenz) Not enough time, sure, but don\'t let that stop you from trying. We are...
  February 8th, 2025 00:38
• Poet\'s Can Dream Too (Teddy.15) Your optimism is praiseworthy, find time to dream sure, try not to always...
  February 8th, 2025 00:35
• Farmer (Tony36) Choices come with consequences, well said.
  February 8th, 2025 00:33
• The Horses Need Hay (Thomas W Case) The largest lie of all? Like, love conquers all? Good lives are rewarded?...
  February 8th, 2025 00:31
• Gold On Grey (Cassie58) A beautiful ode to springtime and good tidings. Well done.
  February 8th, 2025 00:28
• Warning (Sorenbarrett) And I thought I had a gruesome side! You do it so colorfully, articulate....
  February 8th, 2025 00:27
• I Say Your Name (Cassie58) So pretty, so sad. Your descriptive skills are just amazing. Very nice.
  February 2nd, 2025 01:17