Comments on community poems by Dan Williams
- Predator and Prey (Hzugman)
Bravo. Simple still accurate and timely. Humans; Bah.
April 27th, 2025 00:33 - printed word (Arqios)
Wind carried messages are all around us. Many listen, few care, fewer...
April 27th, 2025 00:30 - Good taste (Sorenbarrett)
Cold. Clever, but cold.
April 27th, 2025 00:28 - pet company (Jim56)
Lost a dear pet after more than twenty years, like a knife in the heart....
February 10th, 2025 01:39 - The War (Distant View)
How sad, a living death. Your effort to communicate is well spoken. Nice...
February 10th, 2025 01:37 - As Time Goes By (ADarkerMind)
\"no face that fits the torso of a tongue\", oblique, obtuse, deep. Hard...
February 10th, 2025 01:34 - Fear and Pain (David Wakeling)
Pretty grim, but reconciled at the end. Nice write.
February 10th, 2025 01:31 - Inprismed (Neville)
Catchy, clever, well done.
February 10th, 2025 01:30 - The Battle Of Twickenham. (Goldfinch60)
Times change, adversaries sometimes remain so. Good work.
February 10th, 2025 01:29 - Flocks (Sorenbarrett)
I think you also are often led by magnetic lines; \'Cryptic lines of...
February 10th, 2025 01:27 - piecemeal (Arqios)
Lovely and touching, more somber than sad. Nice work.
February 10th, 2025 01:23 - A Solitude So Grand (ADarkerMind)
\"nostalgia runs it\'s fingers through a breath of metaphors\" is a fine...
February 8th, 2025 00:44 - The Fight (Tony36)
Cliche for sure, but the journey is the truth of the seeking, of the...
February 8th, 2025 00:41 - Will I have time ? (Lorenz)
Not enough time, sure, but don\'t let that stop you from trying. We are...
February 8th, 2025 00:38 - Poet\'s Can Dream Too (Teddy.15)
Your optimism is praiseworthy, find time to dream sure, try not to always...
February 8th, 2025 00:35 - Farmer (Tony36)
Choices come with consequences, well said.
February 8th, 2025 00:33 - The Horses Need Hay (Thomas W Case)
The largest lie of all? Like, love conquers all? Good lives are rewarded?...
February 8th, 2025 00:31 - Gold On Grey (Cassie58)
A beautiful ode to springtime and good tidings. Well done.
February 8th, 2025 00:28 - Warning (Sorenbarrett)
And I thought I had a gruesome side! You do it so colorfully, articulate....
February 8th, 2025 00:27 - I Say Your Name (Cassie58)
So pretty, so sad. Your descriptive skills are just amazing. Very nice.
February 2nd, 2025 01:17 - Night visitor (Sorenbarrett)
A breath of darkness, mysteries\' wind? This is brilliant. I can\'t help...
February 2nd, 2025 01:15 - Would It Be? (Tristan Robert Lange)
The answer to this is, I think, everything that lives must die. We can...
January 31st, 2025 00:00 - The visitors (Tony36)
There is a lot more to this story, keep writing.
January 30th, 2025 23:57 - bully-free (Arqios)
Anger seeded by taunts, but then \"Replaced by a sense of resolve,\". I...
January 30th, 2025 23:55 - bridge is out (Arqios)
So nice. \"burying the past in shallow graves\" revolves into \"some...
January 30th, 2025 23:53 - Part of A Whole That Needs Mending (Neville)
Wow, short but so intense. I know loss is lessened by putting it into...
January 30th, 2025 23:49 - Moments (Cassie58)
Starts with sunbeams and laughter, then so sad. I guess all too often life...
January 30th, 2025 23:46 - Field of flowers (RSM0812)
What a nice build up to a satisfying ending \"And lied in the flowers and...
January 27th, 2025 00:59 - an evolving presence (Arqios)
mIDDLE OF THE NIGHT TYPING SKILLS FOUND WANTING FOR ME, EXCUSE THE ERRORS.
January 27th, 2025 00:56 - an evolving presence (Arqios)
\"truth ignites not a fire, but a gentle dawn, an explanation for...
January 27th, 2025 00:55 - Love Seeds (Neville)
I certainly wish you well, you\'d be a better man than me. Good work here.
January 27th, 2025 00:52 - There Will Come Soft Rains (Mgentabumi)
Amen. I have very often asked of after mankind\'s well-deserved...
January 27th, 2025 00:50 - star signed (Arqios)
A lot said in few words, a poet\'s aspiration. Nice.
January 27th, 2025 00:47 - Victim (Sorenbarrett)
I sometimes think you mind read my mind\'s hostility, negativity, etc. You...
January 27th, 2025 00:46 - The Battle (Tony36)
Which evil wizard, so many to pick from. Very thought provoking.
January 20th, 2025 01:21 - Sunday School Afternoons (Neville)
Ahh the lure and peace of Sundays. Picnics especially. \"Carefree\" covers...
January 20th, 2025 01:18 - An impossible Quest (Teddy.15)
Not sure we can survive with it. Not sure whether living with it is anu...
January 20th, 2025 01:11 - Melting Snow (Cassie58)
Almost a mystery, but \"my wings got crushed yet still i fly\" resolves it...
January 20th, 2025 01:09 - Wound (Sorenbarrett)
Nothing new under the sun, time is indeed circular \"always returning to...
January 20th, 2025 01:06 - The power of words (Tony36)
Lifelong love of words. Compliments, dismissals, approval, questioning,...
January 15th, 2025 02:07 - Fallen Angel (Tony36)
Leaves me curious as to the category of sin bring such reprisals. Nice...
January 15th, 2025 02:05 - Closed Open in Bloom (Tristan Robert Lange)
Stylish, evocative. Rated PG? Nice work.
January 15th, 2025 02:03 - A twist of the tongue (Sorenbarrett)
Clever and image rich, typical nice work.
January 15th, 2025 01:58 - Lasting (Cassie58)
Friends we had and are gone remain friends.
January 15th, 2025 01:56 - faithful friend (Jim56)
Amen. I so often prefer dogs to people. Well done.
January 11th, 2025 01:43 - Every Night A City Sleeps (ADarkerMind)
What a potent image; \"A lovers shawl of defensive chain and ball\". Then...
January 11th, 2025 01:41 - As The Clouds Gently Roll On By (Poetic Licence)
What would we do without clouds to express ourselves? \"I’m in desperate...
January 11th, 2025 01:38 - Footprints Left In Sand and Snow (Cassie58)
Another love filled gem from you. Wonderful images. So nice. Thanks for...
January 11th, 2025 01:35 - Couple Goals (Tom Dylan)
I will spend my last years alone, so jealous of these people. Very well...
January 11th, 2025 01:33 - What happened to beauty? (Sorenbarrett)
\"\"quality poured in a draught of a drought\" is so pretty, so effective....
January 11th, 2025 01:31 - reflection by the sea (Arqios)
Strikes me you are a very lucky person. Nicely done.
January 11th, 2025 01:28 - For the Princes of the Alleys (Thomas W Case)
Hooray for you. This is a subject too often unreported and ignored....
January 11th, 2025 01:26 - Hope in Those Smiling Eyes (Poetic Licence)
Sadly, this might all too likely come to pass. What a poor job we humans...
January 8th, 2025 01:09 - roasted rice cake (Rin)
Rice cake? Pizza might work. Clever.
January 8th, 2025 01:06 - paranoid (NinjaGirl)
Paranoid means all too often they really are out to get you. Hang on.
January 7th, 2025 20:48 - Measures (Teddy.15)
Perhaps indeed. All too often left in limbo. Nice work.
January 7th, 2025 20:46 - Condemned (Sorenbarrett)
Heartless progeny is the hinge all of this swings on. That, and it takes...
January 7th, 2025 20:42 - Beach Stroll (Tony36)
Aaww. Almost contradicts most of my experience. Thanks.
January 7th, 2025 20:39 - Not Such a Silent Night (Thomas W Case)
I spent Christmas 1999 in a psyche ward. Learned that people who claim to...
January 7th, 2025 20:38 - A Seamstress\'s Courage (Arqios)
Oh, there is always room for tragic, heroism maybe not so much. \"The...
January 7th, 2025 20:35 - rejected (Tristan Robert Lange)
You maybe need to rethink your definition of friendship, eh?
January 7th, 2025 20:33 - Gone (Sorenbarrett)
Sometimes I believe all love is ephemeral. Your hesitation is timely,...
January 7th, 2025 20:31 - Darkest of Rhythm and Blues (Teddy.15)
Sadly, I\'m not holding my breath. Well done.
January 3rd, 2025 01:17 - Strange Days (Thomas W Case)
Cruises through the specter of aging nicely. And I find it comforting that...
January 3rd, 2025 01:15 - Lazy Loo Logic (Tristan Robert Lange)
Has a lot to do with plumbing. We lads have it external and till about...
January 3rd, 2025 01:11 - Mud Maid in Winter (Cassie58)
So gentle and soothing, \"flakes softly falling to leave light kisses on...
January 2nd, 2025 02:53 - You wouldn\'t understand (ᴷᵉᶻᵉˣˣᵉ)
You underestimate yourself Your message is clear and well spoken. Nice...
January 1st, 2025 01:53 - Pottersville (Tristan Robert Lange)
Having been born color blind I pretty much live in a black and white...
January 1st, 2025 01:52 - elemental forge (Arqios)
What nice imagery. I can hear the wind. Nice work.
January 1st, 2025 01:46 - these are the days (Arqios)
This just glides along. \"unappreciative lovers
roaming listlessly \"...
January 1st, 2025 01:43 - under pressure (Arqios)
And the ending nicely reveals your message. Nicely done.
December 28th, 2024 20:02 - The Joy of Silence (Neville)
Silence, like in classical music, says just as much or more than the...
December 28th, 2024 20:00 - Shadows (Sorenbarrett)
Sometimes I see shadows where no one is standing. Amen.
December 28th, 2024 19:59 - The Write Fright (Tristan Robert Lange)
Ah yes, the logjam. Sometimes I just have to let it alone for a while, no...
December 28th, 2024 19:58 - They (Tony36)
I often refer to them as sheep, but then I feel I am insulting the sheep....
December 28th, 2024 19:56 - Legacy (Cassie58)
Being Irish allows me to easily envision these scenes and references. And...
December 19th, 2024 02:19 - Quick Fingers (Neville)
Ain\'t the ladies grand? I have to admit I love the contradictions. Well...
December 19th, 2024 02:16 - Old land (Ellen Marsell)
How sweet and sentimental. Chokes me up in a pleasant way. Nice work.
December 19th, 2024 02:14 - Fate (Teardrop)
You are right; nobody gets out alive. Will you let yourself suffer until...
December 19th, 2024 02:13 - Love (Doggerel Dave)
Damn doggerel of you, Dave. Clever too. Nice work.
December 19th, 2024 02:11 - searching for a season (Arqios)
\"These objects, devoid of memory, stand silent,\" as objects surely will....
December 19th, 2024 02:06 - The fly (Sorenbarrett)
I so love the rehearsed confusion line. As usual close your observations...
December 19th, 2024 02:02 - autumn chofu (Arqios)
Circle of life. Brings some remorse, some hope. Nice work here.
December 18th, 2024 01:06 - Time Cannot Heal (Poetic Licence)
The myth that \"time heals all wounds\" is a foolish attempt at...
December 18th, 2024 01:04 - Like Butterflies in Snowstorms (Neville)
My sympathy to the \'butterflies\', kudos to you for a fine write.
December 18th, 2024 01:01 - I\'m Going to Miss Jail (Thomas W Case)
Months in county jail on crap conviction, with maybe five books total to...
December 18th, 2024 00:59 - Fortress of Mountains (Tristan Robert Lange)
It seems the mountain sees, and the mountain disapproves. Fortress walls...
December 18th, 2024 00:55 - Call of the earth (Sorenbarrett)
It\'s nice to find someone as depressed and disappointed as I am. Finding...
December 18th, 2024 00:51 - a moment in between (Arqios)
Clear and smooth, annunciated well, very nice.
December 16th, 2024 01:04 - Another Choice. (Goldfinch60)
Well, all I have on my shelf is my good old Uncle Jack, maybe will try...
December 16th, 2024 01:01 - friendship (Jim56)
Dogs do everything to please us, their goal in life. We seem to struggle...
December 16th, 2024 00:57 - Before Spill Kits and DNA Became a Thing (Neville)
So, just what is the stain concealing or revealing? Hmmm.
December 16th, 2024 00:55 - Mummy Tomorrow Will Be Better (Poetic Licence)
Another all too frequent story, well told. Nice work.
December 16th, 2024 00:53 - How (Sorenbarrett)
Half full, half empty. Sobering.
December 16th, 2024 00:51 - The Endless Spectator (Tristan Robert Lange)
\"Countless ages of uselessness\" can truly separate any man from his...
December 11th, 2024 01:40 - My Heart (Tony36)
You are much fairer minded and understanding than I have ever been. I too...
December 11th, 2024 01:36 - Reading Poetry (Tom Dylan)
I can\'t be sure but it seems I might have been in at least some of these...
December 11th, 2024 01:32 - The Last (Thomas W Case)
Amen. My own love affair with words has carried me through success and...
December 11th, 2024 01:30 - Strategically Lost (Neville)
Damn I am so jealous. May all your encounters be as pleasant. Nice write.
December 11th, 2024 01:27 - Imagianary Friends (Voices In My Head) (Poetic Licence)
Wow. This is almost a detailed menu of madness. I was in a psyche ward for...
December 11th, 2024 01:25
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