Comments on community poems by Dan Williams

• The Time Travellers Tragedy (TommyDingo) At 76 years almost all of my contemporaries have been swept away hard...
  September 15th, 2025 02:12
• Inferno manifesto (Lorenz) Nice to know I\'m not alone in disappointment. No, I am not Tarzan....
  September 15th, 2025 02:07
• The Games Some People Play… (Doggerel Dave) I\'ve always been mystified about the entertainment value of zombies. If I...
  September 15th, 2025 02:04
• Lost paper thoughts (Sorenbarrett) Simple but giant. Imagination? What\'s that?
  September 15th, 2025 02:00
• Bye-Bye Time (Thomas W Case) I have for the longest been of the opinion that the old hat about time...
  September 15th, 2025 01:58
• There is A Crease in Everything (Neville) Solid observation simply stated. Nice.
  August 17th, 2025 19:47
• The Wealth of Youth (Thomas W Case) \"When I was a child I spoke as a child...\" now as a man. Nice...
  August 17th, 2025 19:46
• week in a wink (Arqios) Clever take, amusing. Well done.
  August 17th, 2025 19:43
• The Open Door (Tristan Robert Lange) Heartfelt and encouraging. Nice.
  August 17th, 2025 17:00
• Poetic lightning (Sorenbarrett) Almost random, still making perfect sense.
  August 17th, 2025 16:58
• Numb (Peto) Touching and sincere, \"She navigates the seas by raft\" says chapters by...
  August 5th, 2025 02:05
• Back when I was a Kid (Thomas W Case) Amen. Music has so often empowered me, revived me. Too much of what passes...
  August 5th, 2025 01:59
• He\'s my best friend,l don\'t deserve to have. (Friendship) What a tribute to our humans sometimes forgotten true legacy. \"A...
  August 5th, 2025 01:56
• Is Life Dangerous? (Goldfinch60) The only thing we have to fear... Agreed
  August 5th, 2025 01:51
• reader, read her (Arqios) This is what poetry is supposed to be all about. I mean \"the page...
  August 5th, 2025 01:49
• Servitude (Sorenbarrett) Wow. I was going to highlight the third and fourth verses but that shadows...
  August 5th, 2025 01:45
• Thought (Bella Shepard) Like sometimes speaking out requires silence. Nice.
  August 5th, 2025 01:37
• Emotions (Tony36) Seems like repetitive dreams of mine. \"Darkness fills my sight\", so...
  July 25th, 2025 00:33
• No b in humanity (Sorenbarrett) How indeed can we be deaf to history? I thump my forehead at each new...
  July 25th, 2025 00:28
• riptide fantasia (Arqios) I like the short but intent phrases, \"Staccato sparks ignite\", \"in the...
  July 25th, 2025 00:24
• Witty wings (Priya Tomar)
  July 25th, 2025 00:21
• Witty wings (Priya Tomar) Evocative of nature tied to human existence. Well done.
  July 25th, 2025 00:20
• Wonderful Day!!!. (Poetic Licence) Seems like a plan. You are a good example of \'be careful what you wish...
  July 25th, 2025 00:18
• The forge (Sorenbarrett) Sometimes have to destroy something to save it, eh?
  May 31st, 2025 01:06
• My Pet Monkey Moses (Gray0328) I think all of us are the desert, at least part of the time. Not sure who...
  May 31st, 2025 01:04
• Hey Funny man (Tony36) Sad, but mostly true. A big reason why I write. Nice work.
  May 31st, 2025 01:01
• Surgery (Tony36) How timely for me. While this one is likely not as serious as yours, and...
  May 31st, 2025 01:00
• Beasts (Damaso) The mysterious Golden Beast. Clever, thought provoking. Well Done.
  May 31st, 2025 00:57
• flight ready (Arqios) How sweet and such optimism! Well done.
  May 31st, 2025 00:55
• Closure (Tristan Robert Lange) So very true. Mine was the most devoted of a number of companions. Thanks...
  May 31st, 2025 00:53
• adopt a friend (Jim56) Bless you for this. Too many of us humans seem to think we are all that...
  May 15th, 2025 00:56
• In My Heart I Cry. (Poetic Licence) Not sure if keeping all that grief suppressed is a good thing. Why no...
  May 15th, 2025 00:52
• The Lone Apostle (Tony Grannell) What a story this is. Just wonderfully phrased and engrossing. Well done.
  May 15th, 2025 00:50
• Give and take (Sorenbarrett) \"deep thoughts that are mined\' indeed. That\'s what poetry is all about,...
  May 15th, 2025 00:48
• Enamored by the Dormouse (Thomas W Case) I can\'t help but notice that \"it\" evolves to \"she\". Nicei work here.
  May 15th, 2025 00:46
• The Carousel of Critics (Tristan Robert Lange) I can only hope you are right about it ceasing. Politicians are, after...
  May 15th, 2025 00:43
• When the east wind cries (Sorenbarrett) This is just genius. Those Aztecs were quite serious people and you have...
  May 9th, 2025 22:15
• Too many (Sorenbarrett) I guess this is about the shortest can be made of the human condition. I...
  May 9th, 2025 22:11
• Blackness\' light (Sorenbarrett) First class work. \"A thought forgot cuts the knot\" and \"Drinking from...
  May 1st, 2025 21:21
• Predator and Prey (Hzugman) Bravo. Simple still accurate and timely. Humans; Bah.
  April 27th, 2025 00:33
• printed word (Arqios) Wind carried messages are all around us. Many listen, few care, fewer...
  April 27th, 2025 00:30
• Good taste (Sorenbarrett) Cold. Clever, but cold.
  April 27th, 2025 00:28
• pet company (Jim56) Lost a dear pet after more than twenty years, like a knife in the heart....
  February 10th, 2025 01:39
• The War (Distant View) How sad, a living death. Your effort to communicate is well spoken. Nice...
  February 10th, 2025 01:37
• As Time Goes By (ADarkerMind) \"no face that fits the torso of a tongue\", oblique, obtuse, deep. Hard...
  February 10th, 2025 01:34
• Inprismed (Neville) Catchy, clever, well done.
  February 10th, 2025 01:30
• The Battle Of Twickenham. (Goldfinch60) Times change, adversaries sometimes remain so. Good work.
  February 10th, 2025 01:29
• Flocks (Sorenbarrett) I think you also are often led by magnetic lines; \'Cryptic lines of...
  February 10th, 2025 01:27
• piecemeal (Arqios) Lovely and touching, more somber than sad. Nice work.
  February 10th, 2025 01:23
• A Solitude So Grand (ADarkerMind) \"nostalgia runs it\'s fingers through a breath of metaphors\" is a fine...
  February 8th, 2025 00:44
• The Fight (Tony36) Cliche for sure, but the journey is the truth of the seeking, of the...
  February 8th, 2025 00:41
• Will I have time ? (Lorenz) Not enough time, sure, but don\'t let that stop you from trying. We are...
  February 8th, 2025 00:38
• Poet\'s Can Dream Too (Teddy.15) Your optimism is praiseworthy, find time to dream sure, try not to always...
  February 8th, 2025 00:35
• Farmer (Tony36) Choices come with consequences, well said.
  February 8th, 2025 00:33
• The Horses Need Hay (Thomas W Case) The largest lie of all? Like, love conquers all? Good lives are rewarded?...
  February 8th, 2025 00:31
• Gold On Grey (Cassie58) A beautiful ode to springtime and good tidings. Well done.
  February 8th, 2025 00:28
• Warning (Sorenbarrett) And I thought I had a gruesome side! You do it so colorfully, articulate....
  February 8th, 2025 00:27
• I Say Your Name (Cassie58) So pretty, so sad. Your descriptive skills are just amazing. Very nice.
  February 2nd, 2025 01:17
• Night visitor (Sorenbarrett) A breath of darkness, mysteries\' wind? This is brilliant. I can\'t help...
  February 2nd, 2025 01:15
• Would It Be? (Tristan Robert Lange) The answer to this is, I think, everything that lives must die. We can...
  January 31st, 2025 00:00
• The visitors (Tony36) There is a lot more to this story, keep writing.
  January 30th, 2025 23:57
• bully-free (Arqios) Anger seeded by taunts, but then \"Replaced by a sense of resolve,\". I...
  January 30th, 2025 23:55
• bridge is out (Arqios) So nice. \"burying the past in shallow graves\" revolves into \"some...
  January 30th, 2025 23:53
• Part of A Whole That Needs Mending (Neville) Wow, short but so intense. I know loss is lessened by putting it into...
  January 30th, 2025 23:49
• Moments (Cassie58) Starts with sunbeams and laughter, then so sad. I guess all too often life...
  January 30th, 2025 23:46
• Field of flowers (RSM0812) What a nice build up to a satisfying ending \"And lied in the flowers and...
  January 27th, 2025 00:59
• an evolving presence (Arqios) mIDDLE OF THE NIGHT TYPING SKILLS FOUND WANTING FOR ME, EXCUSE THE ERRORS.
  January 27th, 2025 00:56
• an evolving presence (Arqios) \"truth ignites not a fire, but a gentle dawn, an explanation for...
  January 27th, 2025 00:55
• Love Seeds (Neville) I certainly wish you well, you\'d be a better man than me. Good work here.
  January 27th, 2025 00:52
• There Will Come Soft Rains (Mgentabumi) Amen. I have very often asked of after mankind\'s well-deserved...
  January 27th, 2025 00:50
• star signed (Arqios) A lot said in few words, a poet\'s aspiration. Nice.
  January 27th, 2025 00:47
• Victim (Sorenbarrett) I sometimes think you mind read my mind\'s hostility, negativity, etc. You...
  January 27th, 2025 00:46
• The Battle (Tony36) Which evil wizard, so many to pick from. Very thought provoking.
  January 20th, 2025 01:21
• Sunday School Afternoons (Neville) Ahh the lure and peace of Sundays. Picnics especially. \"Carefree\" covers...
  January 20th, 2025 01:18
• An impossible Quest (Teddy.15) Not sure we can survive with it. Not sure whether living with it is anu...
  January 20th, 2025 01:11
• Melting Snow (Cassie58) Almost a mystery, but \"my wings got crushed yet still i fly\" resolves it...
  January 20th, 2025 01:09
• Wound (Sorenbarrett) Nothing new under the sun, time is indeed circular \"always returning to...
  January 20th, 2025 01:06
• The power of words (Tony36) Lifelong love of words. Compliments, dismissals, approval, questioning,...
  January 15th, 2025 02:07
• Fallen Angel (Tony36) Leaves me curious as to the category of sin bring such reprisals. Nice...
  January 15th, 2025 02:05
• Closed Open in Bloom (Tristan Robert Lange) Stylish, evocative. Rated PG? Nice work.
  January 15th, 2025 02:03
• A twist of the tongue (Sorenbarrett) Clever and image rich, typical nice work.
  January 15th, 2025 01:58
• Lasting (Cassie58) Friends we had and are gone remain friends.
  January 15th, 2025 01:56
• faithful friend (Jim56) Amen. I so often prefer dogs to people. Well done.
  January 11th, 2025 01:43
• Every Night A City Sleeps (ADarkerMind) What a potent image; \"A lovers shawl of defensive chain and ball\". Then...
  January 11th, 2025 01:41
• As The Clouds Gently Roll On By (Poetic Licence) What would we do without clouds to express ourselves? \"I’m in desperate...
  January 11th, 2025 01:38
• Footprints Left In Sand and Snow (Cassie58) Another love filled gem from you. Wonderful images. So nice. Thanks for...
  January 11th, 2025 01:35
• Couple Goals (Tom Dylan) I will spend my last years alone, so jealous of these people. Very well...
  January 11th, 2025 01:33
• What happened to beauty? (Sorenbarrett) \"\"quality poured in a draught of a drought\" is so pretty, so effective....
  January 11th, 2025 01:31
• reflection by the sea (Arqios) Strikes me you are a very lucky person. Nicely done.
  January 11th, 2025 01:28
• For the Princes of the Alleys (Thomas W Case) Hooray for you. This is a subject too often unreported and ignored....
  January 11th, 2025 01:26
• Hope in Those Smiling Eyes (Poetic Licence) Sadly, this might all too likely come to pass. What a poor job we humans...
  January 8th, 2025 01:09
• roasted rice cake (Rin) Rice cake? Pizza might work. Clever.
  January 8th, 2025 01:06
• paranoid (NinjaGirl) Paranoid means all too often they really are out to get you. Hang on.
  January 7th, 2025 20:48
• Measures (Teddy.15) Perhaps indeed. All too often left in limbo. Nice work.
  January 7th, 2025 20:46
• Condemned (Sorenbarrett) Heartless progeny is the hinge all of this swings on. That, and it takes...
  January 7th, 2025 20:42
• Beach Stroll (Tony36) Aaww. Almost contradicts most of my experience. Thanks.
  January 7th, 2025 20:39
• Not Such a Silent Night (Thomas W Case) I spent Christmas 1999 in a psyche ward. Learned that people who claim to...
  January 7th, 2025 20:38
• A Seamstress\'s Courage (Arqios) Oh, there is always room for tragic, heroism maybe not so much. \"The...
  January 7th, 2025 20:35
• rejected (Tristan Robert Lange) You maybe need to rethink your definition of friendship, eh?
  January 7th, 2025 20:33
• Gone (Sorenbarrett) Sometimes I believe all love is ephemeral. Your hesitation is timely,...
  January 7th, 2025 20:31