Comments on community poems by Dan Williams

• Blackness\' light (Sorenbarrett) First class work. \"A thought forgot cuts the knot\" and \"Drinking from...
  May 1st, 2025 21:21
• Predator and Prey (Hzugman) Bravo. Simple still accurate and timely. Humans; Bah.
  April 27th, 2025 00:33
• printed word (Arqios) Wind carried messages are all around us. Many listen, few care, fewer...
  April 27th, 2025 00:30
• Good taste (Sorenbarrett) Cold. Clever, but cold.
  April 27th, 2025 00:28
• pet company (Jim56) Lost a dear pet after more than twenty years, like a knife in the heart....
  February 10th, 2025 01:39
• The War (Distant View) How sad, a living death. Your effort to communicate is well spoken. Nice...
  February 10th, 2025 01:37
• As Time Goes By (ADarkerMind) \"no face that fits the torso of a tongue\", oblique, obtuse, deep. Hard...
  February 10th, 2025 01:34
• Fear and Pain (David Wakeling) Pretty grim, but reconciled at the end. Nice write.
  February 10th, 2025 01:31
• Inprismed (Neville) Catchy, clever, well done.
  February 10th, 2025 01:30
• The Battle Of Twickenham. (Goldfinch60) Times change, adversaries sometimes remain so. Good work.
  February 10th, 2025 01:29
• Flocks (Sorenbarrett) I think you also are often led by magnetic lines; \'Cryptic lines of...
  February 10th, 2025 01:27
• piecemeal (Arqios) Lovely and touching, more somber than sad. Nice work.
  February 10th, 2025 01:23
• A Solitude So Grand (ADarkerMind) \"nostalgia runs it\'s fingers through a breath of metaphors\" is a fine...
  February 8th, 2025 00:44
• The Fight (Tony36) Cliche for sure, but the journey is the truth of the seeking, of the...
  February 8th, 2025 00:41
• Will I have time ? (Lorenz) Not enough time, sure, but don\'t let that stop you from trying. We are...
  February 8th, 2025 00:38
• Poet\'s Can Dream Too (Teddy.15) Your optimism is praiseworthy, find time to dream sure, try not to always...
  February 8th, 2025 00:35
• Farmer (Tony36) Choices come with consequences, well said.
  February 8th, 2025 00:33
• The Horses Need Hay (Thomas W Case) The largest lie of all? Like, love conquers all? Good lives are rewarded?...
  February 8th, 2025 00:31
• Gold On Grey (Cassie58) A beautiful ode to springtime and good tidings. Well done.
  February 8th, 2025 00:28
• Warning (Sorenbarrett) And I thought I had a gruesome side! You do it so colorfully, articulate....
  February 8th, 2025 00:27
• I Say Your Name (Cassie58) So pretty, so sad. Your descriptive skills are just amazing. Very nice.
  February 2nd, 2025 01:17
• Night visitor (Sorenbarrett) A breath of darkness, mysteries\' wind? This is brilliant. I can\'t help...
  February 2nd, 2025 01:15
• Would It Be? (Tristan Robert Lange) The answer to this is, I think, everything that lives must die. We can...
  January 31st, 2025 00:00
• The visitors (Tony36) There is a lot more to this story, keep writing.
  January 30th, 2025 23:57
• bully-free (Arqios) Anger seeded by taunts, but then \"Replaced by a sense of resolve,\". I...
  January 30th, 2025 23:55
• bridge is out (Arqios) So nice. \"burying the past in shallow graves\" revolves into \"some...
  January 30th, 2025 23:53
• Part of A Whole That Needs Mending (Neville) Wow, short but so intense. I know loss is lessened by putting it into...
  January 30th, 2025 23:49
• Moments (Cassie58) Starts with sunbeams and laughter, then so sad. I guess all too often life...
  January 30th, 2025 23:46
• Field of flowers (RSM0812) What a nice build up to a satisfying ending \"And lied in the flowers and...
  January 27th, 2025 00:59
• an evolving presence (Arqios) mIDDLE OF THE NIGHT TYPING SKILLS FOUND WANTING FOR ME, EXCUSE THE ERRORS.
  January 27th, 2025 00:56
• an evolving presence (Arqios) \"truth ignites not a fire, but a gentle dawn, an explanation for...
  January 27th, 2025 00:55
• Love Seeds (Neville) I certainly wish you well, you\'d be a better man than me. Good work here.
  January 27th, 2025 00:52
• There Will Come Soft Rains (Mgentabumi) Amen. I have very often asked of after mankind\'s well-deserved...
  January 27th, 2025 00:50
• star signed (Arqios) A lot said in few words, a poet\'s aspiration. Nice.
  January 27th, 2025 00:47
• Victim (Sorenbarrett) I sometimes think you mind read my mind\'s hostility, negativity, etc. You...
  January 27th, 2025 00:46
• The Battle (Tony36) Which evil wizard, so many to pick from. Very thought provoking.
  January 20th, 2025 01:21
• Sunday School Afternoons (Neville) Ahh the lure and peace of Sundays. Picnics especially. \"Carefree\" covers...
  January 20th, 2025 01:18
• An impossible Quest (Teddy.15) Not sure we can survive with it. Not sure whether living with it is anu...
  January 20th, 2025 01:11
• Melting Snow (Cassie58) Almost a mystery, but \"my wings got crushed yet still i fly\" resolves it...
  January 20th, 2025 01:09
• Wound (Sorenbarrett) Nothing new under the sun, time is indeed circular \"always returning to...
  January 20th, 2025 01:06
• The power of words (Tony36) Lifelong love of words. Compliments, dismissals, approval, questioning,...
  January 15th, 2025 02:07
• Fallen Angel (Tony36) Leaves me curious as to the category of sin bring such reprisals. Nice...
  January 15th, 2025 02:05
• Closed Open in Bloom (Tristan Robert Lange) Stylish, evocative. Rated PG? Nice work.
  January 15th, 2025 02:03
• A twist of the tongue (Sorenbarrett) Clever and image rich, typical nice work.
  January 15th, 2025 01:58
• Lasting (Cassie58) Friends we had and are gone remain friends.
  January 15th, 2025 01:56
• faithful friend (Jim56) Amen. I so often prefer dogs to people. Well done.
  January 11th, 2025 01:43
• Every Night A City Sleeps (ADarkerMind) What a potent image; \"A lovers shawl of defensive chain and ball\". Then...
  January 11th, 2025 01:41
• As The Clouds Gently Roll On By (Poetic Licence) What would we do without clouds to express ourselves? \"I’m in desperate...
  January 11th, 2025 01:38
• Footprints Left In Sand and Snow (Cassie58) Another love filled gem from you. Wonderful images. So nice. Thanks for...
  January 11th, 2025 01:35
• Couple Goals (Tom Dylan) I will spend my last years alone, so jealous of these people. Very well...
  January 11th, 2025 01:33
• What happened to beauty? (Sorenbarrett) \"\"quality poured in a draught of a drought\" is so pretty, so effective....
  January 11th, 2025 01:31
• reflection by the sea (Arqios) Strikes me you are a very lucky person. Nicely done.
  January 11th, 2025 01:28
• For the Princes of the Alleys (Thomas W Case) Hooray for you. This is a subject too often unreported and ignored....
  January 11th, 2025 01:26
• Hope in Those Smiling Eyes (Poetic Licence) Sadly, this might all too likely come to pass. What a poor job we humans...
  January 8th, 2025 01:09
• roasted rice cake (Rin) Rice cake? Pizza might work. Clever.
  January 8th, 2025 01:06
• paranoid (NinjaGirl) Paranoid means all too often they really are out to get you. Hang on.
  January 7th, 2025 20:48
• Measures (Teddy.15) Perhaps indeed. All too often left in limbo. Nice work.
  January 7th, 2025 20:46
• Condemned (Sorenbarrett) Heartless progeny is the hinge all of this swings on. That, and it takes...
  January 7th, 2025 20:42
• Beach Stroll (Tony36) Aaww. Almost contradicts most of my experience. Thanks.
  January 7th, 2025 20:39
• Not Such a Silent Night (Thomas W Case) I spent Christmas 1999 in a psyche ward. Learned that people who claim to...
  January 7th, 2025 20:38
• A Seamstress\'s Courage (Arqios) Oh, there is always room for tragic, heroism maybe not so much. \"The...
  January 7th, 2025 20:35
• rejected (Tristan Robert Lange) You maybe need to rethink your definition of friendship, eh?
  January 7th, 2025 20:33
• Gone (Sorenbarrett) Sometimes I believe all love is ephemeral. Your hesitation is timely,...
  January 7th, 2025 20:31
• Darkest of Rhythm and Blues (Teddy.15) Sadly, I\'m not holding my breath. Well done.
  January 3rd, 2025 01:17
• Strange Days (Thomas W Case) Cruises through the specter of aging nicely. And I find it comforting that...
  January 3rd, 2025 01:15
• Lazy Loo Logic (Tristan Robert Lange) Has a lot to do with plumbing. We lads have it external and till about...
  January 3rd, 2025 01:11
• Mud Maid in Winter (Cassie58) So gentle and soothing, \"flakes softly falling to leave light kisses on...
  January 2nd, 2025 02:53
• You wouldn\'t understand (ᴷᵉᶻᵉˣˣᵉ) You underestimate yourself Your message is clear and well spoken. Nice...
  January 1st, 2025 01:53
• Pottersville (Tristan Robert Lange) Having been born color blind I pretty much live in a black and white...
  January 1st, 2025 01:52
• elemental forge (Arqios) What nice imagery. I can hear the wind. Nice work.
  January 1st, 2025 01:46
• these are the days (Arqios) This just glides along. \"unappreciative lovers roaming listlessly \"...
  January 1st, 2025 01:43
• under pressure (Arqios) And the ending nicely reveals your message. Nicely done.
  December 28th, 2024 20:02
• The Joy of Silence (Neville) Silence, like in classical music, says just as much or more than the...
  December 28th, 2024 20:00
• Shadows (Sorenbarrett) Sometimes I see shadows where no one is standing. Amen.
  December 28th, 2024 19:59
• The Write Fright (Tristan Robert Lange) Ah yes, the logjam. Sometimes I just have to let it alone for a while, no...
  December 28th, 2024 19:58
• They (Tony36) I often refer to them as sheep, but then I feel I am insulting the sheep....
  December 28th, 2024 19:56
• Legacy (Cassie58) Being Irish allows me to easily envision these scenes and references. And...
  December 19th, 2024 02:19
• Quick Fingers (Neville) Ain\'t the ladies grand? I have to admit I love the contradictions. Well...
  December 19th, 2024 02:16
• Old land (Ellen Marsell) How sweet and sentimental. Chokes me up in a pleasant way. Nice work.
  December 19th, 2024 02:14
• Fate (Teardrop) You are right; nobody gets out alive. Will you let yourself suffer until...
  December 19th, 2024 02:13
• Love (Doggerel Dave) Damn doggerel of you, Dave. Clever too. Nice work.
  December 19th, 2024 02:11
• searching for a season (Arqios) \"These objects, devoid of memory, stand silent,\" as objects surely will....
  December 19th, 2024 02:06
• The fly (Sorenbarrett) I so love the rehearsed confusion line. As usual close your observations...
  December 19th, 2024 02:02
• autumn chofu (Arqios) Circle of life. Brings some remorse, some hope. Nice work here.
  December 18th, 2024 01:06
• Time Cannot Heal (Poetic Licence) The myth that \"time heals all wounds\" is a foolish attempt at...
  December 18th, 2024 01:04
• Like Butterflies in Snowstorms (Neville) My sympathy to the \'butterflies\', kudos to you for a fine write.
  December 18th, 2024 01:01
• I\'m Going to Miss Jail (Thomas W Case) Months in county jail on crap conviction, with maybe five books total to...
  December 18th, 2024 00:59
• Fortress of Mountains (Tristan Robert Lange) It seems the mountain sees, and the mountain disapproves. Fortress walls...
  December 18th, 2024 00:55
• Call of the earth (Sorenbarrett) It\'s nice to find someone as depressed and disappointed as I am. Finding...
  December 18th, 2024 00:51
• a moment in between (Arqios) Clear and smooth, annunciated well, very nice.
  December 16th, 2024 01:04
• Another Choice. (Goldfinch60) Well, all I have on my shelf is my good old Uncle Jack, maybe will try...
  December 16th, 2024 01:01
• friendship (Jim56) Dogs do everything to please us, their goal in life. We seem to struggle...
  December 16th, 2024 00:57
• Before Spill Kits and DNA Became a Thing (Neville) So, just what is the stain concealing or revealing? Hmmm.
  December 16th, 2024 00:55
• Mummy Tomorrow Will Be Better (Poetic Licence) Another all too frequent story, well told. Nice work.
  December 16th, 2024 00:53
• How (Sorenbarrett) Half full, half empty. Sobering.
  December 16th, 2024 00:51
• The Endless Spectator (Tristan Robert Lange) \"Countless ages of uselessness\" can truly separate any man from his...
  December 11th, 2024 01:40
• My Heart (Tony36) You are much fairer minded and understanding than I have ever been. I too...
  December 11th, 2024 01:36
• Reading Poetry (Tom Dylan) I can\'t be sure but it seems I might have been in at least some of these...
  December 11th, 2024 01:32
• The Last (Thomas W Case) Amen. My own love affair with words has carried me through success and...
  December 11th, 2024 01:30
• Strategically Lost (Neville) Damn I am so jealous. May all your encounters be as pleasant. Nice write.
  December 11th, 2024 01:27