Comments on community poems by Dan Williams
- An Hour Glass Acoustic Sound- (ADarkerMind)
\"stranger on the streets of bone and prayer\" ...what a great line. Nice...
July 25th, 2024 00:14
- Thoughts 11 (MendedFences27)
All good, last line really nails it.
July 25th, 2024 00:10
- Light Bites (Neville)
Plain truth, always good.
July 25th, 2024 00:09
- Funny Weed (Sorenbarrett)
And legal, finally.
July 25th, 2024 00:08
- Something Unnamed (Dan Williams)
Thanks very much to all!
July 24th, 2024 14:04
- False Promises and Little White Lies (Neville)
People all too often make promises they are unable to keep, unrealistic or...
July 24th, 2024 00:41
- Hurt. (Goldfinch60)
Much more than the Man in Black, his music sustained me through a number...
July 24th, 2024 00:39
- Whispers Of Dawn (Dev Parth)
Aaahhh! Easy imagery, all too common sentiments. Thanks.
July 24th, 2024 00:36
- The Last Day (MendedFences27)
I know this song way too well. Sympathies. Nice work.
July 24th, 2024 00:34
- Good Vibes (Tony36)
Amen.
July 22nd, 2024 23:43
- My neighbor\'s parties (Sorenbarrett)
I think I smell politics; I think I concur. Good work.
July 22nd, 2024 23:43
- A Life Lesson In Tapestry (Teddy.15)
Wow, I thought I was negative. I agree and appreciate a fellow pessimist....
July 22nd, 2024 23:36
- Lonesome Neon Nights (Thomas W Case)
Bravo. Very nice. Imagery to spare.
July 22nd, 2024 23:33
- Apathy. (Goldfinch60)
Use it carefully, it ca also deceive you. Nice work though.
July 22nd, 2024 23:32
- A Prostitutes Heart (Dan Williams)
Thank you much. I used to be proud of this country; now, not so sure.
July 22nd, 2024 15:38
- Precious Thursday (Bella Shepard)
Music can save us all if we just let it. You express that much better than...
July 22nd, 2024 00:02
- A Sudden Touch Of Wood (ADarkerMind)
Great imagery. And \"fallen trees more opium than bark\" is graceful...
July 21st, 2024 23:59
- Another Cut This Love (ADarkerMind)
Rhyme seems to have fallen out of fashion so kudos the different rhyme...
July 21st, 2024 23:55
- rhytthm of the rain (Jim56)
The world has a shortage of optimists, thanks for this effort.
July 19th, 2024 23:56
- The Great Moon and The Baubab (Teddy.15)
Keep going. I\'m sure you have more to say.
July 19th, 2024 23:52
- Is anybody out there? (2781)
I\'m going to presume you are at least reacting to screwed up politics in...
July 19th, 2024 23:49
- Sitting Ducks. (Goldfinch60)
I lived for a while near a stream with steep banks. Ducks, after a swim,...
July 19th, 2024 23:45
- The wash (Sorenbarrett)
OK. Short but to the point. Nice.
July 19th, 2024 23:42
- Infinite (Bella Shepard)
Boy, that is for sure. Arrogance leads to a fall.
July 17th, 2024 00:26
- ~> Growing Older ( thoughts ) (Thad Wilk)
Sad to say with the state of this country, this world; I\'m glad I\'m old....
July 17th, 2024 00:23
- Timeless (Sorenbarrett)
Clocks? You mean those clunky things our grandfathers used? Kidding. Nice...
July 17th, 2024 00:21
- They Are Not You (ADarkerMind)
\'sad bone\'s piccolo\" - great
July 16th, 2024 00:05
- Corpses (Sorenbarrett)
Short, sweet, good imagery.
July 16th, 2024 00:00
- No Trespassing (Eileen Clark)
Havn\'t we all been caught swimming sometime? Nice work.
July 11th, 2024 00:35
- Pursuing Peace (Orchidee)
I am sorry to say this, but as long as there have been humans there have...
July 11th, 2024 00:31
- The Future of Man (MendedFences27)
I\'m sorry to have to say most times I believe it is too late. Everything...
July 11th, 2024 00:28
- Words of smoke (Sorenbarrett)
Short, but the message is clear.
July 11th, 2024 00:25
- Coming (2781)
You are very right, no one knows what is coming.
June 30th, 2024 23:38
- Where The Smaller People Go (ADarkerMind)
Esoteric. Nice. Makes me wonder just who are the smaller people.
June 30th, 2024 23:36
- Caged Hummingbird (Teddy.15)
Amen. Who wants to be like everybody else.
June 30th, 2024 01:12
- Innocence of a poet (Sorenbarrett)
\"Doily in a spiderweb spun\" is just as imagery evoking as can be. Nice...
June 30th, 2024 01:10
- No Hard Feelings (Justagirl)
Again hits a note with me about my preference for lost love and the human...
June 17th, 2024 00:29
- Corrosive Love (COGNOVA)
Ahh yes, fits right in with my theories os the human condition. Well done.
June 17th, 2024 00:18
- Anger v. love (Rose Gselle)
No wasted lines. Nice.
April 22nd, 2024 12:11
- Fog of the Mind (Paul Hughes)
Yes, exactly.
March 21st, 2024 23:17
- Emotionless (John Prophet)
Huh?
March 21st, 2024 23:15
- Strangers and other lovers (Hugh)
Heartfelt. But you lost me with \"fruit machine\".
March 18th, 2024 21:59
- Unveiling a Tiger (Revernd21)
True, and in all fairness they were the best of the ww2 tanks.
March 18th, 2024 21:57
- Dead Shoes (Poet Bee)
Talks to us all.
March 18th, 2024 21:54
- Green is my Bed (Thomas W Case)
Jeez, I thought I was negative.
March 18th, 2024 21:52