Comments on community poems by Dan Williams at My poetic side

Comments on community poems by Dan Williams

Route 66 (Tony36) Ah, the lure of the open road, freedom lived. Everyone should do this
August 30th, 2024 00:21
All Was Well Forever. (Goldfinch60) Once again I say; Music can save us all if we just let it.
August 30th, 2024 00:17
Aging Captain\'s Lament (Dan Williams) Thank you very much. Your approval carries weight with me.
August 29th, 2024 17:49
Come Home, My Love (Cocamedo) Something from a dream? Well done.
August 28th, 2024 23:50
\'Made In Heaven\' (Kurt Philip Behm) Music is indeed a much higher master, can save us all if we will just let...
August 28th, 2024 23:49
Where does one end and another begin? (Sorenbarrett)
August 28th, 2024 23:45
Where does one end and another begin? (Sorenbarrett) Ah, life\'s eternal questions. When I have answers I Will try to let you...
August 28th, 2024 23:45
Society (Tony36) Society is the root of social media, which may well be the downfall of...
August 28th, 2024 00:43
Bello Casentino (Teddy.15) Yes! Perfect imagery! Very well done.
August 28th, 2024 00:40
Holes in the ground (Sorenbarrett) Many believe that merely by looking at something, you change it. Calling...
August 28th, 2024 00:38
Be strong (BlessedbyGod) A Mother\'s love; what could be more durable? Very nicely put.
August 27th, 2024 00:05
Senryu to Love (Teddy.15) Fundamental truth stated cleanly. Nice.
August 27th, 2024 00:02
My Love (Cassie58) I remember this after two ex-wives, still a pleasant one. Nice.
August 27th, 2024 00:01
A mystery (Orchidee) It was the Butler in the dining room. I like the form.
August 26th, 2024 00:10
their 1000 watt smile (NafisaSB) Hey, electricity runs everything else, why not smiles. A happy song. Nice...
August 26th, 2024 00:08
Forest Games (Tony36) I imagine a Hobbit or two. Short and sweet, I\'m jealous, I tend to run...
August 26th, 2024 00:07
The Bottoms (Thoughtless) Lovely, flowing. A lot said in not so many words. Nice work.
August 26th, 2024 00:04
A game no one can play (Saleh Ben Saleh)
August 26th, 2024 00:01
A game no one can play (Saleh Ben Saleh) Love is sometimes a curse, sometimes a game. Has deflated me more than...
August 26th, 2024 00:01
Two Bunnies Beneath a Cold Grey Sky (Thomas W Case) A drama teacher for a Father seems ideal to me. Trumps cold and windy....
August 25th, 2024 23:59
Guilt (Sorenbarrett) You have the amazing ability to summarize eloquently, another well-crafted...
August 25th, 2024 23:55
Through The Eyes Of Mnemosyne\'s Muse (ADarkerMind) I know who Mnemosyne was but I forgot . . .Seriously some great stuff here...
August 25th, 2024 23:53
``~ Guess Who! (Thad Wilk) Well, a little bit late but heartfelt and well phrased. Good work.
August 25th, 2024 23:49
think of yourself as the world (Emvd) If you can get this message to more humans maybe they would treat this...
August 25th, 2024 00:05
Hmm (Thoughtless) Wonderful. Just wonderful.
August 25th, 2024 00:04
One Recognizes His Own Kind (Thomas W Case) Even though evolved from wolves, dogs greatest wish is to please humans....
August 25th, 2024 00:00
Music of the heart (Sorenbarrett) I repeat myself again: music can save us all if we just let it. Nice work.
August 24th, 2024 23:58
The Lines, part one. (Dan Williams) Thank you for that. I keep trying.
August 24th, 2024 14:16
Cosmic Questions (ThoughtsFromB4) Ah, life\'s basic questions nicely put. Thank you for this.
August 24th, 2024 00:15
Do Not Entice Us with Your World (Leni Marlina) A paradox; a stern lullaby. Mothers tell this to children at sleepy time....
August 24th, 2024 00:07
there was a time (Sheta) A very good reason to ignore what people say. Everybody dreams, no? Good...
August 24th, 2024 00:05
For Dawn (Thomas W Case) Grief follows booze, booze invites death, I know this tune. Nice work.
August 24th, 2024 00:03
Missing (Cassie58) OK I admit I had to look up \"buddleia\" to completely enjoy this...
August 24th, 2024 00:01
Roots (Sorenbarrett) Let me join the usual chorus of approval, typically nice work. A Wordsmith...
August 23rd, 2024 23:56
Gunslinger (Dan Williams) To tell the truth I was sorry to submit this as soon as I did, but no undo...
August 23rd, 2024 21:17
Wrung Dry of Pointless Vanity (Dan Williams) Well, Intake that, and thanks.
August 22nd, 2024 18:29
God Revived (Helena Yonatan) Your \"terrain of agony\" would explain and justify questioning your...
August 22nd, 2024 00:11
Apology (Thoughtless) Story told and explained in the simplest terms. Nice.
August 22nd, 2024 00:07
Sonnet for an Angel (Thomas W Case) Such a hopeless romantic! Maybe some will rub off on me. Thanks, nice
August 22nd, 2024 00:05
The way it is (Tony36) Pondering an all too possible apocalypse, I can seriously appreciate this....
August 22nd, 2024 00:02
Inside Out (Teddy.15) Where do you buy such optimism? I\'ll take a bushel of it! Nice work.
August 21st, 2024 23:59
Dawn\'s Full Moon. (Goldfinch60) So easily yet completely described! Very well done.
August 21st, 2024 23:57
Poetry a la tartare (Sorenbarrett) Damn \"cut with a pen as knife\" is just perfect, the whole thing is your...
August 21st, 2024 23:55
() Amen. So easy to be turned into sheep, with apologies to the actual sheep.
August 21st, 2024 23:51
Is it Blasphemous (EvenwheniLie) Lots of times I feel ashamed to be \"human\". We have done such a poor job...
August 21st, 2024 00:11
Steadfast Into Another World (ADarkerMind) Gives cause to ponder any number of things. Brothers cast in stone? Great.
August 21st, 2024 00:09
Corporate (Bella Shepard) So you are the one who\'s been reading my mail! Bravo!
August 21st, 2024 00:07
for my grandma (Sheta) I hope I can be as gracious at the end. Nice work.
August 21st, 2024 00:04
Long Distance (Cassie58) Hard to find a better description of being in love. Well done.
August 21st, 2024 00:02
Not what it seems (Sorenbarrett) I\'d like to pick put a favorite line but no room here for the full poem....
August 21st, 2024 00:01
A Co-Write With Shakespeare (Teddy.15) Never been there but would sure like to visit. Well Done.
August 20th, 2024 23:59
Steps (Sorenbarrett) Resonates strongly with me. My heavy sack of provisions also got left...
August 20th, 2024 23:57
The universal (Lorenz) In \"the evening of life\" I do feel that clock ticking. I suppose we all...
August 19th, 2024 23:59
my poem (Justina) Mystery: \"a hidden thick smile\" calls up a questioning image, makes you...
August 19th, 2024 23:57
Those Cyclists on the Road (AuburnScribbler) There is a rule that fits here, verified by long personal experience;...
August 19th, 2024 23:52
Steps (Sorenbarrett) I hope this reflects an actual memory for you. Your economy of words again...
August 19th, 2024 23:48
Dapple and Down (Thomas W Case) \"A cradle that is rocked too fast\" is genius. Whole piece is so nice.
August 19th, 2024 23:45
Learn (Bella Shepard) Talk about short and sweet!
August 19th, 2024 23:43
Life (Rhmn_7) A nicely detailed explanation of \"the price of life is death\". Bravo.
August 19th, 2024 00:34
Are poets mad ? (Sami mulaj) Flirting with madness, anyway. Would be dull otherwise. Nice.
August 19th, 2024 00:32
You, Me and My Dog .. and Blame It on Saint Marlo (Neville) Yes, very cool indeed. Is she gone? Is the dog? Well done.
August 19th, 2024 00:31
Shadow\'s reflection (Sorenbarrett) Again you say things so simply but completely. Reflections shadows, a...
August 19th, 2024 00:29
Understanding Songs. (Goldfinch60) The picture says it all, these guys set standards few today can attain....
August 19th, 2024 00:26
CLOSE OF DAY (Michael Edwards) Sounds to me like you might just be in love. Nice work.
August 19th, 2024 00:22
An Ode to Sunday (Teddy.15) So uplifting, I\'m jealous. This kind of simple pleasure often eludes me;...
August 19th, 2024 00:21
() I feel a keen wisdom here, essential good advice eloquently presented....
August 18th, 2024 22:47
() \"Fell your existence\" indeed. Trees are so vital to our existence, thank...
August 18th, 2024 22:45
() \"Poets and thinkers at the totem of infamy\" is so rich, accurate. The...
August 18th, 2024 22:42
Would Be Wordsmith (Dan Williams) I will take that as high compliment, especially from you. Thanks
August 18th, 2024 22:34
Closed and Clothed (Mya) You might be giving too much credit to people. Most are aloof,...
August 17th, 2024 23:32
Alone (Tony36) I know this lament all too well. Nicely done.
August 17th, 2024 23:28
Go Figure, Eight (MendedFences27) A generous serving of wisdom, this. Well done.
August 17th, 2024 23:27
Firth of the Clyde (Gray0328) \"the wind, indifferent, presses on\" ... Aye Laddie, a fine job you\'ve...
August 17th, 2024 23:24
Yesterday (Sorenbarrett) See previous comment. Uncertain more than sad. First rate.
August 17th, 2024 23:21
Ripples (Sorenbarrett) Again, knew this was you without looking. Fluid, concise, image calling....
August 17th, 2024 23:18
At the Bottom, In the Pit (Dan Williams) I suspect any number things could spell the demise of humans; greed is he...
August 17th, 2024 23:08
Tigers Tearing (Dan Williams) I did ask, and thanks. I tend to slip into rant but am working on it.
August 16th, 2024 19:26
The Student? (Dan Williams) I write a lot about this because I genuinely fear what this country will...
August 16th, 2024 19:14
Memory the cruelest reward (Sorenbarrett) Ah,\"glistening gossamer clouds devouring dusty shadows of doom\" This...
August 15th, 2024 23:58
More Heritage Down the Pan & Fuck Ann Summers (Neville) I think I knew Ann Summers in another life. Pretty sure Halmark and...
August 15th, 2024 23:38
Canal Cyanide. (Goldfinch60) Outside of this place, my fellow humans rarely fail to disappoint me. ...
August 15th, 2024 23:32
Lemon Meringue Pie (Saxon Crow) Novel, and the imagery is satisfying. I\'ll take lemon pie at the end,...
August 15th, 2024 23:29
beneath the surface (Amogelang Mooketsi) I see an awful lot of hurt here but at the end a touch of hope. That is...
August 15th, 2024 23:26
Growth (Doggerel Dave) Pessimists like me need people like you for balance; thank you.
August 15th, 2024 23:24
Floating (JoyJoy) What, no bright lights and angels? I like your vision better. Nice work.
August 15th, 2024 23:20
Misunderstood (Cassie58) How sweet this is. \"an abundance of saffron crocus smiles\" is so easy to...
August 15th, 2024 23:18
A taste of honey (Sorenbarrett) Honey will keep forever, hope this sentiment does too.
August 15th, 2024 23:16
Moving On (MendedFences27) This a summation of my second wife departing. Well said.
August 15th, 2024 00:16
pain (Sheta) So complaining of chronic pain to my Doctor got me the advice of going to...
August 15th, 2024 00:14
The Joy Of Old Age. (Goldfinch60) Well, maybe. Unsure about the ratio of ups and downs. Good work though.
August 15th, 2024 00:11
Lonely Little Vagina (Thomas W Case) I\'m not touching this.
August 15th, 2024 00:08
A bad rap(tor)? (Sorenbarrett) Well deserved praise for the subject and the author. nice.
August 15th, 2024 00:07
These days (BlessedbyGod) Funny, you share my pessimism but end with optimism. Hope you are right.
August 14th, 2024 00:46
Clocked (Neville) She once placed? How sad, how well expressed. Very nice.
August 14th, 2024 00:44
Gertrude ......... (Saxon Crow) Just \"Newton would have cried\" by itself sets this apart. Long writes...
August 14th, 2024 00:43
Final Word Count (Tom Dylan) I leave all manner of things unfinished but is almost paradoxically...
August 14th, 2024 00:39
Because My Darling It all Belongs to You (Teddy.15) Ahh, you successful lovers. I am so jealous.
August 14th, 2024 00:37
Familiarity of the nonexistent (Sorenbarrett) I\'m running out of adjectives to describe your work; this is just . ....
August 14th, 2024 00:36
A GNATS CHUFF (Michael Edwards) Such economy of words plays well here. Good work.
August 14th, 2024 00:31
A Flower Without Soil (Thomas W Case) Keeping the heart of it till the very end works well. Good job.
August 14th, 2024 00:29

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