Comments on community poems by Dan Williams

• A mystery (Orchidee) It was the Butler in the dining room. I like the form.
  August 26th, 2024 00:10
• their 1000 watt smile (NafisaSB) Hey, electricity runs everything else, why not smiles. A happy song. Nice...
  August 26th, 2024 00:08
• Forest Games (Tony36) I imagine a Hobbit or two. Short and sweet, I\'m jealous, I tend to run...
  August 26th, 2024 00:07
• The Bottoms (Thoughtless) Lovely, flowing. A lot said in not so many words. Nice work.
  August 26th, 2024 00:04
• A game no one can play (Saleh Ben Saleh)
  August 26th, 2024 00:01
• A game no one can play (Saleh Ben Saleh) Love is sometimes a curse, sometimes a game. Has deflated me more than...
  August 26th, 2024 00:01
• Two Bunnies Beneath a Cold Grey Sky (Thomas W Case) A drama teacher for a Father seems ideal to me. Trumps cold and windy....
  August 25th, 2024 23:59
• Guilt (Sorenbarrett) You have the amazing ability to summarize eloquently, another well-crafted...
  August 25th, 2024 23:55
• Through The Eyes Of Mnemosyne\'s Muse (ADarkerMind) I know who Mnemosyne was but I forgot . . .Seriously some great stuff here...
  August 25th, 2024 23:53
• ``~ Guess Who! (Thad Wilk) Well, a little bit late but heartfelt and well phrased. Good work.
  August 25th, 2024 23:49
• think of yourself as the world (Emvd) If you can get this message to more humans maybe they would treat this...
  August 25th, 2024 00:05
• Hmm (Thoughtless) Wonderful. Just wonderful.
  August 25th, 2024 00:04
• One Recognizes His Own Kind (Thomas W Case) Even though evolved from wolves, dogs greatest wish is to please humans....
  August 25th, 2024 00:00
• Music of the heart (Sorenbarrett) I repeat myself again: music can save us all if we just let it. Nice work.
  August 24th, 2024 23:58
• The Lines, part one. (Dan Williams) Thank you for that. I keep trying.
  August 24th, 2024 14:16
• Cosmic Questions (ThoughtsFromB4) Ah, life\'s basic questions nicely put. Thank you for this.
  August 24th, 2024 00:15
• Do Not Entice Us with Your World (Leni Marlina) A paradox; a stern lullaby. Mothers tell this to children at sleepy time....
  August 24th, 2024 00:07
• there was a time (Sheta) A very good reason to ignore what people say. Everybody dreams, no? Good...
  August 24th, 2024 00:05
• For Dawn (Thomas W Case) Grief follows booze, booze invites death, I know this tune. Nice work.
  August 24th, 2024 00:03
• Missing (Cassie58) OK I admit I had to look up \"buddleia\" to completely enjoy this...
  August 24th, 2024 00:01
• Roots (Sorenbarrett) Let me join the usual chorus of approval, typically nice work. A Wordsmith...
  August 23rd, 2024 23:56
• Gunslinger (Dan Williams) To tell the truth I was sorry to submit this as soon as I did, but no undo...
  August 23rd, 2024 21:17
• Wrung Dry of Pointless Vanity (Dan Williams) Well, Intake that, and thanks.
  August 22nd, 2024 18:29
• God Revived (Helena Yonatan) Your \"terrain of agony\" would explain and justify questioning your...
  August 22nd, 2024 00:11
• Apology (Thoughtless) Story told and explained in the simplest terms. Nice.
  August 22nd, 2024 00:07
• Sonnet for an Angel (Thomas W Case) Such a hopeless romantic! Maybe some will rub off on me. Thanks, nice
  August 22nd, 2024 00:05
• The way it is (Tony36) Pondering an all too possible apocalypse, I can seriously appreciate this....
  August 22nd, 2024 00:02
• Inside Out (Teddy.15) Where do you buy such optimism? I\'ll take a bushel of it! Nice work.
  August 21st, 2024 23:59
• Dawn\'s Full Moon. (Goldfinch60) So easily yet completely described! Very well done.
  August 21st, 2024 23:57
• Poetry a la tartare (Sorenbarrett) Damn \"cut with a pen as knife\" is just perfect, the whole thing is your...
  August 21st, 2024 23:55
• () Amen. So easy to be turned into sheep, with apologies to the actual sheep.
  August 21st, 2024 23:51
• Is it Blasphemous (EvenwheniLie) Lots of times I feel ashamed to be \"human\". We have done such a poor job...
  August 21st, 2024 00:11
• Steadfast Into Another World (ADarkerMind) Gives cause to ponder any number of things. Brothers cast in stone? Great.
  August 21st, 2024 00:09
• Corporate (Bella Shepard) So you are the one who\'s been reading my mail! Bravo!
  August 21st, 2024 00:07
• for my grandma (Sheta) I hope I can be as gracious at the end. Nice work.
  August 21st, 2024 00:04
• Long Distance (Cassie58) Hard to find a better description of being in love. Well done.
  August 21st, 2024 00:02
• Not what it seems (Sorenbarrett) I\'d like to pick put a favorite line but no room here for the full poem....
  August 21st, 2024 00:01
• A Co-Write With Shakespeare (Teddy.15) Never been there but would sure like to visit. Well Done.
  August 20th, 2024 23:59
• Steps (Sorenbarrett) Resonates strongly with me. My heavy sack of provisions also got left...
  August 20th, 2024 23:57
• The universal (Lorenz) In \"the evening of life\" I do feel that clock ticking. I suppose we all...
  August 19th, 2024 23:59
• my poem (Justina) Mystery: \"a hidden thick smile\" calls up a questioning image, makes you...
  August 19th, 2024 23:57
• Those Cyclists on the Road (AuburnScribbler) There is a rule that fits here, verified by long personal experience;...
  August 19th, 2024 23:52
• Steps (Sorenbarrett) I hope this reflects an actual memory for you. Your economy of words again...
  August 19th, 2024 23:48
• Dapple and Down (Thomas W Case) \"A cradle that is rocked too fast\" is genius. Whole piece is so nice.
  August 19th, 2024 23:45
• Learn (Bella Shepard) Talk about short and sweet!
  August 19th, 2024 23:43
• Life (Rhmn_7) A nicely detailed explanation of \"the price of life is death\". Bravo.
  August 19th, 2024 00:34
• Are poets mad ? (Sami mulaj) Flirting with madness, anyway. Would be dull otherwise. Nice.
  August 19th, 2024 00:32
• You, Me and My Dog .. and Blame It on Saint Marlo (Neville) Yes, very cool indeed. Is she gone? Is the dog? Well done.
  August 19th, 2024 00:31
• Shadow\'s reflection (Sorenbarrett) Again you say things so simply but completely. Reflections shadows, a...
  August 19th, 2024 00:29
• Understanding Songs. (Goldfinch60) The picture says it all, these guys set standards few today can attain....
  August 19th, 2024 00:26
• CLOSE OF DAY (Michael Edwards) Sounds to me like you might just be in love. Nice work.
  August 19th, 2024 00:22
• An Ode to Sunday (Teddy.15) So uplifting, I\'m jealous. This kind of simple pleasure often eludes me;...
  August 19th, 2024 00:21
• () I feel a keen wisdom here, essential good advice eloquently presented....
  August 18th, 2024 22:47
• () \"Fell your existence\" indeed. Trees are so vital to our existence, thank...
  August 18th, 2024 22:45
• () \"Poets and thinkers at the totem of infamy\" is so rich, accurate. The...
  August 18th, 2024 22:42
• Would Be Wordsmith (Dan Williams) I will take that as high compliment, especially from you. Thanks
  August 18th, 2024 22:34
• Closed and Clothed (Mya) You might be giving too much credit to people. Most are aloof,...
  August 17th, 2024 23:32
• Alone (Tony36) I know this lament all too well. Nicely done.
  August 17th, 2024 23:28
• Go Figure, Eight (MendedFences27) A generous serving of wisdom, this. Well done.
  August 17th, 2024 23:27
• Firth of the Clyde (Gray0328) \"the wind, indifferent, presses on\" ... Aye Laddie, a fine job you\'ve...
  August 17th, 2024 23:24
• Yesterday (Sorenbarrett) See previous comment. Uncertain more than sad. First rate.
  August 17th, 2024 23:21
• Ripples (Sorenbarrett) Again, knew this was you without looking. Fluid, concise, image calling....
  August 17th, 2024 23:18
• At the Bottom, In the Pit (Dan Williams) I suspect any number things could spell the demise of humans; greed is he...
  August 17th, 2024 23:08
• Tigers Tearing (Dan Williams) I did ask, and thanks. I tend to slip into rant but am working on it.
  August 16th, 2024 19:26
• The Student? (Dan Williams) I write a lot about this because I genuinely fear what this country will...
  August 16th, 2024 19:14
• Memory the cruelest reward (Sorenbarrett) Ah,\"glistening gossamer clouds devouring dusty shadows of doom\" This...
  August 15th, 2024 23:58
• More Heritage Down the Pan & Fuck Ann Summers (Neville) I think I knew Ann Summers in another life. Pretty sure Halmark and...
  August 15th, 2024 23:38
• Canal Cyanide. (Goldfinch60) Outside of this place, my fellow humans rarely fail to disappoint me. ...
  August 15th, 2024 23:32
• Lemon Meringue Pie (Saxon Crow) Novel, and the imagery is satisfying. I\'ll take lemon pie at the end,...
  August 15th, 2024 23:29
• beneath the surface (Amogelang Mooketsi) I see an awful lot of hurt here but at the end a touch of hope. That is...
  August 15th, 2024 23:26
• Growth (Doggerel Dave) Pessimists like me need people like you for balance; thank you.
  August 15th, 2024 23:24
• Floating (JoyJoy) What, no bright lights and angels? I like your vision better. Nice work.
  August 15th, 2024 23:20
• Misunderstood (Cassie58) How sweet this is. \"an abundance of saffron crocus smiles\" is so easy to...
  August 15th, 2024 23:18
• A taste of honey (Sorenbarrett) Honey will keep forever, hope this sentiment does too.
  August 15th, 2024 23:16
• Moving On (MendedFences27) This a summation of my second wife departing. Well said.
  August 15th, 2024 00:16
• pain (Sheta) So complaining of chronic pain to my Doctor got me the advice of going to...
  August 15th, 2024 00:14
• The Joy Of Old Age. (Goldfinch60) Well, maybe. Unsure about the ratio of ups and downs. Good work though.
  August 15th, 2024 00:11
• Lonely Little Vagina (Thomas W Case) I\'m not touching this.
  August 15th, 2024 00:08
• A bad rap(tor)? (Sorenbarrett) Well deserved praise for the subject and the author. nice.
  August 15th, 2024 00:07
• These days (BlessedbyGod) Funny, you share my pessimism but end with optimism. Hope you are right.
  August 14th, 2024 00:46
• Clocked (Neville) She once placed? How sad, how well expressed. Very nice.
  August 14th, 2024 00:44
• Gertrude ......... (Saxon Crow) Just \"Newton would have cried\" by itself sets this apart. Long writes...
  August 14th, 2024 00:43
• Final Word Count (Tom Dylan) I leave all manner of things unfinished but is almost paradoxically...
  August 14th, 2024 00:39
• Because My Darling It all Belongs to You (Teddy.15) Ahh, you successful lovers. I am so jealous.
  August 14th, 2024 00:37
• Familiarity of the nonexistent (Sorenbarrett) I\'m running out of adjectives to describe your work; this is just . ....
  August 14th, 2024 00:36
• A GNATS CHUFF (Michael Edwards) Such economy of words plays well here. Good work.
  August 14th, 2024 00:31
• A Flower Without Soil (Thomas W Case) Keeping the heart of it till the very end works well. Good job.
  August 14th, 2024 00:29
• Lo and Behold! (MendedFences27) Lord, how this resonates with me. Writing about lost love has been , for...
  August 13th, 2024 00:37
• She (2781) I have to presume you are Bob. Very nice.
  August 13th, 2024 00:33
• Fragments of Us (Dev Parth) All of this is true of my second wife who left me after twenty years....
  August 13th, 2024 00:31
• Time eroded memories (Sorenbarrett) From dust we came . . .Classy stuff, my friend.
  August 13th, 2024 00:27
• Housing Wreck. (Goldfinch60) Hey, the eye of the beholder, right? Good work.
  August 13th, 2024 00:25
• Dawn Comes (Dan Williams) I count on folks being as perceptive as you when I am writing these...
  August 12th, 2024 22:06
• I Need To Be Near You (MendedFences27) So sad and regretful, insinuating tears, I sympathize. Good work.
  August 12th, 2024 00:32
• The bunny (Michael William Reid) Leaves me wondering about the identity of little bunny. Nice.
  August 12th, 2024 00:29
• Somewhere Between (ADarkerMind) \"palms of ridicule with spit\" and \"one final taste of mercy washed...
  August 12th, 2024 00:27
• The Devil\'s In Town (Teddy.15) Not rhyming is no great sin, especially when the devil is in town. Nice...
  August 12th, 2024 00:23
• Point of view (Sorenbarrett) You are the master of the short and sweet, when you are not looking I just...
  August 12th, 2024 00:21
• () Clever enough but kind of cold. Good work though.
  August 11th, 2024 22:38
• () Sweet without being clingy. Heartfelt. Nice.
  August 11th, 2024 22:36