Comments on community poems by Dan Williams
- Forest Games (Tony36)
I imagine a Hobbit or two. Short and sweet, I\'m jealous, I tend to run...
August 26th, 2024 00:07 - The Bottoms (Thoughtless)
Lovely, flowing. A lot said in not so many words. Nice work.
August 26th, 2024 00:04 - A game no one can play (Saleh Ben Saleh)
August 26th, 2024 00:01 - A game no one can play (Saleh Ben Saleh)
Love is sometimes a curse, sometimes a game. Has deflated me more than...
August 26th, 2024 00:01 - Two Bunnies Beneath a Cold Grey Sky (Thomas W Case)
A drama teacher for a Father seems ideal to me. Trumps cold and windy....
August 25th, 2024 23:59 - Guilt (Sorenbarrett)
You have the amazing ability to summarize eloquently, another well-crafted...
August 25th, 2024 23:55 - Through The Eyes Of Mnemosyne\'s Muse (ADarkerMind)
I know who Mnemosyne was but I forgot . . .Seriously some great stuff here...
August 25th, 2024 23:53 - ``~ Guess Who! (Thad Wilk)
Well, a little bit late but heartfelt and well phrased. Good work.
August 25th, 2024 23:49 - think of yourself as the world (Emvd)
If you can get this message to more humans maybe they would treat this...
August 25th, 2024 00:05 - Hmm (Thoughtless)
Wonderful. Just wonderful.
August 25th, 2024 00:04 - One Recognizes His Own Kind (Thomas W Case)
Even though evolved from wolves, dogs greatest wish is to please humans....
August 25th, 2024 00:00 - Music of the heart (Sorenbarrett)
I repeat myself again: music can save us all if we just let it. Nice work.
August 24th, 2024 23:58 - The Lines, part one. (Dan Williams)
Thank you for that. I keep trying.
August 24th, 2024 14:16 - Cosmic Questions (ThoughtsFromB4)
Ah, life\'s basic questions nicely put. Thank you for this.
August 24th, 2024 00:15 - Do Not Entice Us with Your World (Leni Marlina)
A paradox; a stern lullaby. Mothers tell this to children at sleepy time....
August 24th, 2024 00:07 - there was a time (Sheta)
A very good reason to ignore what people say. Everybody dreams, no? Good...
August 24th, 2024 00:05 - For Dawn (Thomas W Case)
Grief follows booze, booze invites death, I know this tune. Nice work.
August 24th, 2024 00:03 - Missing (Cassie58)
OK I admit I had to look up \"buddleia\" to completely enjoy this...
August 24th, 2024 00:01 - Roots (Sorenbarrett)
Let me join the usual chorus of approval, typically nice work. A Wordsmith...
August 23rd, 2024 23:56 - Gunslinger (Dan Williams)
To tell the truth I was sorry to submit this as soon as I did, but no undo...
August 23rd, 2024 21:17 - Wrung Dry of Pointless Vanity (Dan Williams)
Well, Intake that, and thanks.
August 22nd, 2024 18:29 - God Revived (Helena Yonatan)
Your \"terrain of agony\" would explain and justify questioning your...
August 22nd, 2024 00:11 - Apology (Thoughtless)
Story told and explained in the simplest terms. Nice.
August 22nd, 2024 00:07 - Sonnet for an Angel (Thomas W Case)
Such a hopeless romantic! Maybe some will rub off on me. Thanks, nice
August 22nd, 2024 00:05 - The way it is (Tony36)
Pondering an all too possible apocalypse, I can seriously appreciate this....
August 22nd, 2024 00:02 - Inside Out (Teddy.15)
Where do you buy such optimism? I\'ll take a bushel of it! Nice work.
August 21st, 2024 23:59 - Dawn\'s Full Moon. (Goldfinch60)
So easily yet completely described! Very well done.
August 21st, 2024 23:57 - Poetry a la tartare (Sorenbarrett)
Damn \"cut with a pen as knife\" is just perfect, the whole thing is your...
August 21st, 2024 23:55 - ()
Amen. So easy to be turned into sheep, with apologies to the actual sheep.
August 21st, 2024 23:51 - Is it Blasphemous (EvenwheniLie)
Lots of times I feel ashamed to be \"human\". We have done such a poor job...
August 21st, 2024 00:11 - Steadfast Into Another World (ADarkerMind)
Gives cause to ponder any number of things. Brothers cast in stone? Great.
August 21st, 2024 00:09 - Corporate (Bella Shepard)
So you are the one who\'s been reading my mail! Bravo!
August 21st, 2024 00:07 - for my grandma (Sheta)
I hope I can be as gracious at the end. Nice work.
August 21st, 2024 00:04 - Long Distance (Cassie58)
Hard to find a better description of being in love. Well done.
August 21st, 2024 00:02 - Not what it seems (Sorenbarrett)
I\'d like to pick put a favorite line but no room here for the full poem....
August 21st, 2024 00:01 - A Co-Write With Shakespeare (Teddy.15)
Never been there but would sure like to visit. Well Done.
August 20th, 2024 23:59 - Steps (Sorenbarrett)
Resonates strongly with me. My heavy sack of provisions also got left...
August 20th, 2024 23:57 - The universal (Lorenz)
In \"the evening of life\" I do feel that clock ticking. I suppose we all...
August 19th, 2024 23:59 - my poem (Justina)
Mystery: \"a hidden thick smile\" calls up a questioning image, makes you...
August 19th, 2024 23:57 - Those Cyclists on the Road (AuburnScribbler)
There is a rule that fits here, verified by long personal experience;...
August 19th, 2024 23:52 - Steps (Sorenbarrett)
I hope this reflects an actual memory for you. Your economy of words again...
August 19th, 2024 23:48 - Dapple and Down (Thomas W Case)
\"A cradle that is rocked too fast\" is genius. Whole piece is so nice.
August 19th, 2024 23:45 - Learn (Bella Shepard)
Talk about short and sweet!
August 19th, 2024 23:43 - Life (Rhmn_7)
A nicely detailed explanation of \"the price of life is death\". Bravo.
August 19th, 2024 00:34 - Are poets mad ? (Sami mulaj)
Flirting with madness, anyway. Would be dull otherwise. Nice.
August 19th, 2024 00:32 - You, Me and My Dog .. and Blame It on Saint Marlo (Neville)
Yes, very cool indeed. Is she gone? Is the dog? Well done.
August 19th, 2024 00:31 - Shadow\'s reflection (Sorenbarrett)
Again you say things so simply but completely. Reflections shadows, a...
August 19th, 2024 00:29 - Understanding Songs. (Goldfinch60)
The picture says it all, these guys set standards few today can attain....
August 19th, 2024 00:26 - CLOSE OF DAY (Michael Edwards)
Sounds to me like you might just be in love. Nice work.
August 19th, 2024 00:22 - An Ode to Sunday (Teddy.15)
So uplifting, I\'m jealous. This kind of simple pleasure often eludes me;...
August 19th, 2024 00:21 - ()
I feel a keen wisdom here, essential good advice eloquently presented....
August 18th, 2024 22:47 - ()
\"Fell your existence\" indeed. Trees are so vital to our existence, thank...
August 18th, 2024 22:45 - ()
\"Poets and thinkers at the totem of infamy\" is so rich, accurate. The...
August 18th, 2024 22:42 - Would Be Wordsmith (Dan Williams)
I will take that as high compliment, especially from you. Thanks
August 18th, 2024 22:34 - Closed and Clothed (Mya)
You might be giving too much credit to people. Most are aloof,...
August 17th, 2024 23:32 - Alone (Tony36)
I know this lament all too well. Nicely done.
August 17th, 2024 23:28 - Go Figure, Eight (MendedFences27)
A generous serving of wisdom, this. Well done.
August 17th, 2024 23:27 - Firth of the Clyde (Gray0328)
\"the wind, indifferent, presses on\" ... Aye Laddie, a fine job you\'ve...
August 17th, 2024 23:24 - Yesterday (Sorenbarrett)
See previous comment. Uncertain more than sad. First rate.
August 17th, 2024 23:21 - Ripples (Sorenbarrett)
Again, knew this was you without looking. Fluid, concise, image calling....
August 17th, 2024 23:18 - At the Bottom, In the Pit (Dan Williams)
I suspect any number things could spell the demise of humans; greed is he...
August 17th, 2024 23:08 - Tigers Tearing (Dan Williams)
I did ask, and thanks. I tend to slip into rant but am working on it.
August 16th, 2024 19:26 - The Student? (Dan Williams)
I write a lot about this because I genuinely fear what this country will...
August 16th, 2024 19:14 - Memory the cruelest reward (Sorenbarrett)
Ah,\"glistening gossamer clouds
devouring dusty shadows of doom\" This...
August 15th, 2024 23:58 - More Heritage Down the Pan & Fuck Ann Summers (Neville)
I think I knew Ann Summers in another life. Pretty sure Halmark and...
August 15th, 2024 23:38 - Canal Cyanide. (Goldfinch60)
Outside of this place, my fellow humans rarely fail to disappoint me. ...
August 15th, 2024 23:32 - Lemon Meringue Pie (Saxon Crow)
Novel, and the imagery is satisfying. I\'ll take lemon pie at the end,...
August 15th, 2024 23:29 - beneath the surface (Amogelang Mooketsi)
I see an awful lot of hurt here but at the end a touch of hope. That is...
August 15th, 2024 23:26 - Growth (Doggerel Dave)
Pessimists like me need people like you for balance; thank you.
August 15th, 2024 23:24 - Floating (JoyJoy)
What, no bright lights and angels? I like your vision better. Nice work.
August 15th, 2024 23:20 - Misunderstood (Cassie58)
How sweet this is. \"an abundance of saffron crocus smiles\" is so easy to...
August 15th, 2024 23:18 - A taste of honey (Sorenbarrett)
Honey will keep forever, hope this sentiment does too.
August 15th, 2024 23:16 - Moving On (MendedFences27)
This a summation of my second wife departing. Well said.
August 15th, 2024 00:16 - pain (Sheta)
So complaining of chronic pain to my Doctor got me the advice of going to...
August 15th, 2024 00:14 - The Joy Of Old Age. (Goldfinch60)
Well, maybe. Unsure about the ratio of ups and downs. Good work though.
August 15th, 2024 00:11 - Lonely Little Vagina (Thomas W Case)
I\'m not touching this.
August 15th, 2024 00:08 - A bad rap(tor)? (Sorenbarrett)
Well deserved praise for the subject and the author. nice.
August 15th, 2024 00:07 - These days (BlessedbyGod)
Funny, you share my pessimism but end with optimism. Hope you are right.
August 14th, 2024 00:46 - Clocked (Neville)
She once placed? How sad, how well expressed. Very nice.
August 14th, 2024 00:44 - Gertrude ......... (Saxon Crow)
Just \"Newton would have cried\" by itself sets this apart. Long writes...
August 14th, 2024 00:43 - Final Word Count (Tom Dylan)
I leave all manner of things unfinished but is almost paradoxically...
August 14th, 2024 00:39 - Because My Darling It all Belongs to You (Teddy.15)
Ahh, you successful lovers. I am so jealous.
August 14th, 2024 00:37 - Familiarity of the nonexistent (Sorenbarrett)
I\'m running out of adjectives to describe your work; this is just . ....
August 14th, 2024 00:36 - A GNATS CHUFF (Michael Edwards)
Such economy of words plays well here. Good work.
August 14th, 2024 00:31 - A Flower Without Soil (Thomas W Case)
Keeping the heart of it till the very end works well. Good job.
August 14th, 2024 00:29 - Lo and Behold! (MendedFences27)
Lord, how this resonates with me. Writing about lost love has been , for...
August 13th, 2024 00:37 - She (2781)
I have to presume you are Bob. Very nice.
August 13th, 2024 00:33 - Fragments of Us (Dev Parth)
All of this is true of my second wife who left me after twenty years....
August 13th, 2024 00:31 - Time eroded memories (Sorenbarrett)
From dust we came . . .Classy stuff, my friend.
August 13th, 2024 00:27 - Housing Wreck. (Goldfinch60)
Hey, the eye of the beholder, right? Good work.
August 13th, 2024 00:25 - Dawn Comes (Dan Williams)
I count on folks being as perceptive as you when I am writing these...
August 12th, 2024 22:06 - I Need To Be Near You (MendedFences27)
So sad and regretful, insinuating tears, I sympathize. Good work.
August 12th, 2024 00:32 - The bunny (Michael William Reid)
Leaves me wondering about the identity of little bunny. Nice.
August 12th, 2024 00:29 - Somewhere Between (ADarkerMind)
\"palms of ridicule with spit\" and \"one final taste of mercy washed...
August 12th, 2024 00:27 - The Devil\'s In Town (Teddy.15)
Not rhyming is no great sin, especially when the devil is in town. Nice...
August 12th, 2024 00:23 - Point of view (Sorenbarrett)
You are the master of the short and sweet, when you are not looking I just...
August 12th, 2024 00:21 - ()
Clever enough but kind of cold. Good work though.
August 11th, 2024 22:38 - ()
Sweet without being clingy. Heartfelt. Nice.
August 11th, 2024 22:36 - After the Ending (Dan Williams)
Not sure what is dark about your mind. Thank you anyway.
August 11th, 2024 22:29 - ()
How nice. One of my great Grandpa\'s was a Rupert, sure he would approve....
August 11th, 2024 22:24
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