Comments on community poems by Dan Williams at My poetic side

Comments on community poems by Dan Williams

Ant Hill (Thomas W Case) Well, the mountain is sure not coming to me, maybe I\'ll find this one of...
September 7th, 2024 01:29
Mystery Girl (Tony36) Mystery girls have caused a fair amount of the trouble in my life, I...
September 7th, 2024 01:28
Amaranthine love (Neilton) Sure, I had to look up \'amaranthine\' but hey, was worth it. Very nice.
September 7th, 2024 01:26
And So It Is (Cassie58) \"a river’s flow in the waters of history \" nicely sums up many keen...
September 7th, 2024 01:22
Old Codgers Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) I am nearly overcome with jealousy. Fate decided I would spend these last...
September 7th, 2024 01:21
My poems are... (Tom Dylan) This pretty much sums things up for all of us here. Nice work.
September 7th, 2024 01:18
Tattoos and scars (Sorenbarrett) No tattoos but a nice selection of scars; History \"etched in flesh,...
September 7th, 2024 01:17
Remontant Hydrangeas (Gray0328) Yes, I did have to look up remontant. Like annuals times two. Very nice.
September 6th, 2024 01:14
Hula Hooping Thru Insignificance (Rocky Lagou) Hula Hoop? Really giving up your age here.
September 6th, 2024 01:11
it is not all just sad and gloomy (MR.apocalypse) Wow. You have definitely been reading my mail. I would be happy to sign my...
September 6th, 2024 01:10
What is the word? (Maplespal) Damned if I know. Gets a person thinking though.
September 6th, 2024 01:08
Majesty (Sorenbarrett) This has echos of, what, optimistic paganism? Your usual fine imagery. But...
September 6th, 2024 01:06
ABROGATIONS OF INTELLECT (Michael Edwards) I\'m guessing not a Christian, wanting better explanations?
September 5th, 2024 00:12
Dust of dreams (Sorenbarrett) I could make a rubber stamp for your work; Clear, concise, tasteful\" Keep...
September 5th, 2024 00:10
And All That\'s Gold (Teddy.15) Hard pressed to call any of the seasons my favorite, you seem to know why....
September 5th, 2024 00:08
Cats Comforts (Orchidee) I recently lost my dear companion of more than twenty years. Some people...
September 5th, 2024 00:06
You (Thomas W Case) Aren\'t we all hoping to connect with the Supreme Sculptor? I\'ve caught...
September 5th, 2024 00:02
No Way to Cotham (AuburnScribbler) OK I admit I had to look up Cotham, was well worth it. Nice work.
September 4th, 2024 00:49
Peace To All Acrostic. (Goldfinch60) Again, I must remark; Music will save us all if we just let it. Good...
September 4th, 2024 00:46
~ Bloody Red Riding Hood! (Thad Wilk) Warren Zevon says hello. Good work.
September 4th, 2024 00:45
Never back again (Vishakha) Recipe for heartache for sure. Nice job.
September 4th, 2024 00:43
- Blue Dragon And Viking Boy - (Thad Wilk) With a nod to \"Puff the Magic Dragon\" very nice.
September 4th, 2024 00:42
dont (NinjaGirl) OK, no back talk from me.
September 4th, 2024 00:41
Everything\'s Alright (Tom Dylan) No, everything does not have to rhyme. You have done a fine job here.
September 4th, 2024 00:40
Inferno (Sorenbarrett) Wow, this is grim and despairing, right up my alley. I approve.
September 4th, 2024 00:38
Here & There (Kurt Philip Behm) Real wisdom is notoriously hard to express, you have done a fine job here.
September 3rd, 2024 00:18
anxious (NinjaGirl) This is as good a definition of stress as I have seen. Fight it girl.
September 3rd, 2024 00:10
\"You- you, a poet???!\" (DeadRose) Besides here, it seems most people don\'t care. I usually fail to mention...
September 3rd, 2024 00:09
Roots of generosity (Sorenbarrett) And, don\'t forget, help process oxygen. Well spoken.
September 3rd, 2024 00:06
An Ode To The Kookaburra (Teddy.15) His cry is often mistaken for laughing. By itself that makes this poem a...
September 2nd, 2024 00:42
The Sullen Swimmer (Tristan Robert Lange) Very tasteful. I think E.A. Poe would approve.
September 2nd, 2024 00:39
Swing minor mode (Lorenz) A poem in minor key; interesting. Thoughts filtered through music. Nice.
September 2nd, 2024 00:37
This realm in my dream (Vishakha) Oh, it\'s me too allright. Nice work.
September 2nd, 2024 00:35
Determined chaos (Sorenbarrett) Thought provoking and your trademark economy of words gets the job done.
September 2nd, 2024 00:34
real love (Sheta) Ain\'t love grand?
September 2nd, 2024 00:32
Look at Me, Mama (Thomas W Case) This may be the saddest thing I have ever read. My Mother passed when I...
September 2nd, 2024 00:29
My Broken Heart And My Foolish Mind (Anthony Hanible) Wow. I thought I was doom and gloom. Dare I say cheer up, things could be...
September 1st, 2024 00:47
For Tommy (ThoughtsFromB4) Genuine and uplifting, nice work.
September 1st, 2024 00:44
A man in my past (Neilton) Thoughts racing, whirling. This guy embarrasses me, not a gentleman. Nice...
September 1st, 2024 00:42
The knight (Tony36) How very medieval. Nice.
September 1st, 2024 00:39
Roses in Late Summer (DeadRose) Well voiced, the last five lines push this into great work territory.
August 31st, 2024 01:22
REVENGE BEST SERVED HOT (Kwrites) Yow, this makes even me, the sultan of grim, cringe a little. I can...
August 31st, 2024 01:20
Little 🐜 ants (Starlight) Humans would be so much better off if we modeled our society after ants....
August 31st, 2024 01:18
Can you tell? (Neilton) And a diamond this is. Very nice.
August 31st, 2024 01:16
Books (Tony36) This was me for a long time, then along came Kindle. Nice work.
August 31st, 2024 01:15
When The Shadows Come Calling (Teddy.15) I am at a point in my life when I don\'t welcome the dark stranger but...
August 31st, 2024 01:13
The British Empire (Thepoetman1234) Sure, but now they have BBC.
August 31st, 2024 01:11
What\'s In A Name (Tom Dylan) This is way past clever. Very amusing. Well done.
August 31st, 2024 01:09
Without Grace (Sorenbarrett) I fantasize that I have danced with each of these ladies. Thank you for...
August 31st, 2024 01:08
My mind the sea (Sorenbarrett) Jail bars on cribs? Pretty heavy. Graceful though, easy read.
August 30th, 2024 00:28
Changing (2781) We can only hope. Nice.
August 30th, 2024 00:25
SOULFUL LONGING (Amogelang Mooketsi) My Dad married my Mom, and even though she passed at 36 he stayed married...
August 30th, 2024 00:23
Route 66 (Tony36) Ah, the lure of the open road, freedom lived. Everyone should do this
August 30th, 2024 00:21
All Was Well Forever. (Goldfinch60) Once again I say; Music can save us all if we just let it.
August 30th, 2024 00:17
Aging Captain\'s Lament (Dan Williams) Thank you very much. Your approval carries weight with me.
August 29th, 2024 17:49
Come Home, My Love (Cocamedo) Something from a dream? Well done.
August 28th, 2024 23:50
\'Made In Heaven\' (Kurt Philip Behm) Music is indeed a much higher master, can save us all if we will just let...
August 28th, 2024 23:49
Where does one end and another begin? (Sorenbarrett)
August 28th, 2024 23:45
Where does one end and another begin? (Sorenbarrett) Ah, life\'s eternal questions. When I have answers I Will try to let you...
August 28th, 2024 23:45
Society (Tony36) Society is the root of social media, which may well be the downfall of...
August 28th, 2024 00:43
Bello Casentino (Teddy.15) Yes! Perfect imagery! Very well done.
August 28th, 2024 00:40
Holes in the ground (Sorenbarrett) Many believe that merely by looking at something, you change it. Calling...
August 28th, 2024 00:38
Be strong (BlessedbyGod) A Mother\'s love; what could be more durable? Very nicely put.
August 27th, 2024 00:05
Senryu to Love (Teddy.15) Fundamental truth stated cleanly. Nice.
August 27th, 2024 00:02
My Love (Cassie58) I remember this after two ex-wives, still a pleasant one. Nice.
August 27th, 2024 00:01
A mystery (Orchidee) It was the Butler in the dining room. I like the form.
August 26th, 2024 00:10
their 1000 watt smile (NafisaSB) Hey, electricity runs everything else, why not smiles. A happy song. Nice...
August 26th, 2024 00:08
Forest Games (Tony36) I imagine a Hobbit or two. Short and sweet, I\'m jealous, I tend to run...
August 26th, 2024 00:07
The Bottoms (Thoughtless) Lovely, flowing. A lot said in not so many words. Nice work.
August 26th, 2024 00:04
A game no one can play (Saleh Ben Saleh)
August 26th, 2024 00:01
A game no one can play (Saleh Ben Saleh) Love is sometimes a curse, sometimes a game. Has deflated me more than...
August 26th, 2024 00:01
Two Bunnies Beneath a Cold Grey Sky (Thomas W Case) A drama teacher for a Father seems ideal to me. Trumps cold and windy....
August 25th, 2024 23:59
Guilt (Sorenbarrett) You have the amazing ability to summarize eloquently, another well-crafted...
August 25th, 2024 23:55
Through The Eyes Of Mnemosyne\'s Muse (ADarkerMind) I know who Mnemosyne was but I forgot . . .Seriously some great stuff here...
August 25th, 2024 23:53
``~ Guess Who! (Thad Wilk) Well, a little bit late but heartfelt and well phrased. Good work.
August 25th, 2024 23:49
think of yourself as the world (Emvd) If you can get this message to more humans maybe they would treat this...
August 25th, 2024 00:05
Hmm (Thoughtless) Wonderful. Just wonderful.
August 25th, 2024 00:04
One Recognizes His Own Kind (Thomas W Case) Even though evolved from wolves, dogs greatest wish is to please humans....
August 25th, 2024 00:00
Music of the heart (Sorenbarrett) I repeat myself again: music can save us all if we just let it. Nice work.
August 24th, 2024 23:58
The Lines, part one. (Dan Williams) Thank you for that. I keep trying.
August 24th, 2024 14:16
Cosmic Questions (ThoughtsFromB4) Ah, life\'s basic questions nicely put. Thank you for this.
August 24th, 2024 00:15
Do Not Entice Us with Your World (Leni Marlina) A paradox; a stern lullaby. Mothers tell this to children at sleepy time....
August 24th, 2024 00:07
there was a time (Sheta) A very good reason to ignore what people say. Everybody dreams, no? Good...
August 24th, 2024 00:05
For Dawn (Thomas W Case) Grief follows booze, booze invites death, I know this tune. Nice work.
August 24th, 2024 00:03
Missing (Cassie58) OK I admit I had to look up \"buddleia\" to completely enjoy this...
August 24th, 2024 00:01
Roots (Sorenbarrett) Let me join the usual chorus of approval, typically nice work. A Wordsmith...
August 23rd, 2024 23:56
Gunslinger (Dan Williams) To tell the truth I was sorry to submit this as soon as I did, but no undo...
August 23rd, 2024 21:17
Wrung Dry of Pointless Vanity (Dan Williams) Well, Intake that, and thanks.
August 22nd, 2024 18:29
God Revived (Helena Yonatan) Your \"terrain of agony\" would explain and justify questioning your...
August 22nd, 2024 00:11
Apology (Thoughtless) Story told and explained in the simplest terms. Nice.
August 22nd, 2024 00:07
Sonnet for an Angel (Thomas W Case) Such a hopeless romantic! Maybe some will rub off on me. Thanks, nice
August 22nd, 2024 00:05
The way it is (Tony36) Pondering an all too possible apocalypse, I can seriously appreciate this....
August 22nd, 2024 00:02
Inside Out (Teddy.15) Where do you buy such optimism? I\'ll take a bushel of it! Nice work.
August 21st, 2024 23:59
Dawn\'s Full Moon. (Goldfinch60) So easily yet completely described! Very well done.
August 21st, 2024 23:57
Poetry a la tartare (Sorenbarrett) Damn \"cut with a pen as knife\" is just perfect, the whole thing is your...
August 21st, 2024 23:55
() Amen. So easy to be turned into sheep, with apologies to the actual sheep.
August 21st, 2024 23:51
Is it Blasphemous (EvenwheniLie) Lots of times I feel ashamed to be \"human\". We have done such a poor job...
August 21st, 2024 00:11
Steadfast Into Another World (ADarkerMind) Gives cause to ponder any number of things. Brothers cast in stone? Great.
August 21st, 2024 00:09
Corporate (Bella Shepard) So you are the one who\'s been reading my mail! Bravo!
August 21st, 2024 00:07
for my grandma (Sheta) I hope I can be as gracious at the end. Nice work.
August 21st, 2024 00:04

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