Comments on community poems by Jon Nakapalau
- Freedom Found. (Goldfinch60)
Very nice Andy!
September 20th, 2021 18:49 - A New Journey (Ell Adams)
Well done Ell! Keep writing!
September 14th, 2021 16:09 - Untitled 2021-09-13 (Jon Nakapalau)
Thanks Andy.
September 14th, 2021 15:08 - Worry. (Goldfinch60)
Much to think on here - very nice Andy.
September 1st, 2021 16:54 - Do I Qualify? (Goldfinch60)
Nicely penned Andy!
August 25th, 2021 17:55 - A Night At The Opera. (Goldfinch60)
Very nice Andy!
August 23rd, 2021 16:13 - ELEGY FOR ANN (Jarcher54)
Wonderful - inspired.
August 20th, 2021 17:37 - Storm (Doggerel Dave)
Well done Dave!
August 14th, 2021 14:21 - Nigerian Dream: For Christopher Okigbo (Jarcher54)
Wonderful and inspired.
August 10th, 2021 14:29 - Winner Takes All. (Goldfinch60)
Really much to meditate on - nicely penned.
August 7th, 2021 15:59 - Oops! (Goldfinch60)
Wonderful - inspired!
August 7th, 2021 15:58 - Love Is There. (Goldfinch60)
Nice - inspired.
August 4th, 2021 16:40 - Passed The Universe. (Goldfinch60)
Last three lines - powerful.
July 10th, 2021 16:27 - At The Top Of The Hill. (Goldfinch60)
Wonderful meditation on what is truly important - inspired.
July 10th, 2021 16:27 - My Little Boy. (Goldfinch60)
Wonderful Andy.
July 1st, 2021 17:44 - All Through Music. (Goldfinch60)
Powerful - a song of life.
June 15th, 2021 17:34 - Life’s a river of memory and yearning. (Trenz Pruca)
Wonderful - inspired.
June 14th, 2021 17:53 - To be old (Trenz Pruca)
Powerful - well done.
June 14th, 2021 17:53 - What Is A Youth. (Goldfinch60)
Wonderful - inspired.
May 28th, 2021 17:04 - Creating Happiness. (Goldfinch60)
Liked this poem very much Andy - thanks for sharing.
May 26th, 2021 17:14 - Is The Livin\' Easy In Summertime? (Goldfinch60)
Wonderful - well done my friend.
May 26th, 2021 17:10 - Mary Lou Williams. (Goldfinch60)
Beautiful Andy - inspired.
May 26th, 2021 17:10 - at (Jon Nakapalau)
Well said Andy.
May 24th, 2021 16:37 - All My Dreams Have Died (A Boy With Roses)
Powerful poem - but dreams may still come to dreamers who see the next day...
May 22nd, 2021 16:11 - [vampire pool parties are fun] (Jon Nakapalau)
Now you have made me hungry Andy!
May 5th, 2021 15:57 - sometimes (Jon Nakapalau)
Hello everyone!
April 26th, 2021 16:03 - Único (SerenWise)
Beautiful poem!
March 6th, 2020 17:40 - Self Belief. (Goldfinch60)
Enjoyed this poem!
March 3rd, 2020 22:06 - Crossing Out/Thinking Again. (Goldfinch60)
Wonderful - inspired.
March 2nd, 2020 21:01 - My favourite anecdote from Urdu (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
Wonderful - thank you for sharing.
February 29th, 2020 14:41 - Human hues (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
Very layered and deep with meaning.
February 29th, 2020 14:40 - When life was really child\'s play (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
Took me back - inspired.
February 29th, 2020 14:39 - The better Gems (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
Wow! Love the many \'cuts\' of this poem!
February 29th, 2020 14:39 - Shining on My Life. Senryu (Goldfinch60)
Well done!
January 11th, 2020 15:31 - The New Watch. (Goldfinch60)
Well done my friend!
December 29th, 2019 19:05 - Wonder and Love. (Goldfinch60)
A very calm feeling came over me - nicely penned my friend.
December 12th, 2019 17:00 - Covered. (Goldfinch60)
Powerful and inspired.
December 12th, 2019 16:59 - The Winning Sport. (Goldfinch60)
Well done!
November 5th, 2019 21:10 - She is Not There. (Goldfinch60)
Nice!
November 5th, 2019 21:09 - A Heart, Broken (Magic_in_the_pages)
Wonderful poem!
October 10th, 2019 17:31 - I Knew I was Right! (Goldfinch60)
A toast to you!
August 30th, 2019 17:49 - Candle or Mirror. (Goldfinch60)
Wonderful - really lifted my spirits!
August 30th, 2019 17:48 - Abandoning christianity. (Goldfinch60)
So many hard questions - so little time to find answers.
August 9th, 2019 18:47 - Walking Home. (Goldfinch60)
Wow - really hit me - inspired.
August 9th, 2019 18:46 - Doves. (Goldfinch60)
Very nicely penned!
July 15th, 2019 20:44 - Forgotten. (Goldfinch60)
Well done my friend!
July 15th, 2019 20:43 - The Light of Music. (Goldfinch60)
Love the title!
June 10th, 2019 16:22 - Does Size Matter. (Goldfinch60)
Well done!
June 10th, 2019 16:22 - Two Faces of Joy (Goldfinch60)
Well done!
April 23rd, 2019 18:14 - No Longer (Psychofemale)
Powerful!
April 5th, 2019 16:12 - A Meditation for Love (Sunshinefalling)
Well done!
April 5th, 2019 16:12 - For Our Hunting (Sunshinefalling)
Very deep - much to think on!
April 5th, 2019 16:10 - Lemon Rind (SerenWise)
Powerful!
February 15th, 2019 18:08 - The Pirate (SerenWise)
Nicely penned!
February 15th, 2019 18:07 - she speaks (Psychofemale)
Like the form and flow.
February 5th, 2019 21:40 - you always win (Psychofemale)
Winners who lose through winning - nicely penned.
February 5th, 2019 21:39 - a year full of reasons (Psychofemale)
I have been here - well done!
February 5th, 2019 21:37 - Scale (Quemis)
Very nice flow - took me away.
October 11th, 2018 16:33 - The Disciples (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Well written - powerful message.
September 19th, 2018 15:41 - Observation #27 (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Very nice!
September 19th, 2018 15:41 - Dinah (Crystal Hope)
Beautiful!
September 15th, 2018 15:36 - Progress (EnoBowie)
Well done!
September 10th, 2018 15:46 - I\'M A LONER (Michael Edwards)
Been here!
August 24th, 2018 17:49 - Hear my Tears (Crystal Hope)
Powerful - well done.
August 23rd, 2018 20:38 - Sometimes love... (Crystal Hope)
Very nice Crystal!
August 23rd, 2018 20:37 - The Sun is Rising (Crystal Hope)
Makes you think about how precious each day really is - well done!
August 12th, 2018 19:12 - She eyed the world... (Crystal Hope)
A wonderful poem about becoming an adult - I like the way you use the...
August 9th, 2018 17:52 - Lovely lilacs (Crystal Hope)
A very vivid poem that reminds us that beauty is all around if we only...
August 8th, 2018 17:04 - Life (Crystal Hope)
This captures powerful feelings of youthful hope - well done!
August 8th, 2018 17:01 - Lone Wolf (HangingbyaHalo)
Very nice!
August 7th, 2018 15:38 - Sun (Xcigsx)
Nice!
August 1st, 2018 17:38 - Desert Mural (DesertWords)
Very nice!
July 31st, 2018 16:58 - maybe (Nina)
Simple yet profound - well done.
July 30th, 2018 19:47 - Prevarication Invites Animadversion Plus Aggravation (Rew4er2nail)
Very original!
July 30th, 2018 19:46 - Second Choices and Second Chances (Clark)
Well done - very nice poem!
July 30th, 2018 19:46
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