Comments on community poems by L. B. Mek

• I want to be with you* (Rebmasters) these lines: \'I want to place my palm on the trunk of an ancient...
  September 7th, 2021 05:44
• Decisions (Goldfinch60) by design or chaotic luck our fallibility is unquestioned, a part of...
  September 7th, 2021 05:31
• Murderers Lament (Saxon Crow) \'And never shall I return again To the light of freedom and a happy...
  September 7th, 2021 05:18
• My Dexterous Teacher (Arpita Maurya) not so \'abyss\', with your wonderful dedication floating around, thanks...
  September 7th, 2021 05:10
• Absence (Michael Anthony) \'And I’ve already been thinking a lot about holes, the empirical...
  September 7th, 2021 05:07
• Portents IV (Eugene S.) those blinked seconds between choice and consequence? or happenstance and...
  September 7th, 2021 05:03
• [ Keys of Disorder ] (Heart of Babel) Amen! say it like you see it: no more \'participation medals\' no more...
  September 7th, 2021 04:46
• Programmers Brew (John Prophet) an infinite loop, procedural then? good old pascal days, lol yes, it...
  September 7th, 2021 04:29
• Ears On Trumpets Hill (ADarkerMind) maggots foot, on the first line of a love poem that\'s so - uniquely, you...
  September 7th, 2021 04:06
• Swanage Pier (Kevin Michael Bloor) \'not age, but first love glowing!\' delightfully worded, what a...
  September 7th, 2021 03:52
• Spooning (BusyB) kitchen politics, devolving to our human reality, levels... like Neil...
  September 7th, 2021 03:48
• THE SEVENTH FLOOR (PETERHARRISON) its a devastating condition, to have someone look, act, speak the same,...
  September 7th, 2021 03:25
• Your Hands in Mine (Surucipe) what a beautiful dedication, thanks for sharing
  September 7th, 2021 03:15
• Weep No More (Jayasree) Empowering! what a great message and poetry its most suitable...
  September 7th, 2021 03:12
• Listen Through the Breeze (Neville) \'I never want you: choreographed For that would be, too much to...
  September 6th, 2021 07:53
• Wryneck (Neville) never seen one, although I doubt I would recognise it but, on a somewhat...
  September 6th, 2021 07:47
• Changes. (Fay Slimm.) \'inert\': indeed.. beautiful, dear Fay! may that eagerness remain,...
  September 6th, 2021 07:37
• Boring Tasks (Jo) why do I like these? I nod not knowing why maybe, trying to convince...
  September 6th, 2021 07:25
• Speak/Listen (Rebmasters) \'but deeper still, somewhere beyond the spaces between words. It...
  September 6th, 2021 07:21
• Slow Train. (Goldfinch60) the worst aspect of Time, for me is its lulling lope of indifference if...
  September 6th, 2021 06:57
• A Slow Death (Míchel Lex) those last two last lines are very poignant indeed, there\'s a lifeline -...
  September 6th, 2021 06:45
• Metamorphosis (HannahElisabeth) that unshakeable disconnect in life between, what we hope for and where,...
  September 6th, 2021 06:33
• Lone Danseur (Camelot) a fun spin (pun - unashamedly, intended) lol dating\'s dancing games: now...
  September 6th, 2021 06:24
• Black Forest (Samer Amin) \'The lonely heart of the forest which is inhabited by the horror of...
  September 6th, 2021 06:08
• Immaculate (Satishverma) I\'ve read an alarming amount of nihilistic write\'s this...
  September 6th, 2021 05:57
• Death Bed (Vacancy) we - too readily, assume being born is us being \'switched-on\' and...
  September 6th, 2021 05:44
• The Blue Dragonfly (Cygnus X-1) wonderful imagery, dragonfly or phoenix its all just glamourized yearning...
  September 6th, 2021 05:18
• Frequency (John Prophet) ...\'moments, of finite clusters escapism in all-things...
  September 6th, 2021 05:06
• Leap to Escape (Malayang.ibon) leap to where? \'Anywhere, but here!\' are the words, of a short-sighted...
  September 6th, 2021 04:50
• Not the Religion I Knew (Eugene S.) devoid of any alignment with your theological points this was a well...
  September 6th, 2021 04:23
• Wheel (John Prophet) (great read, dear poet your thought provoking writing, did it again got...
  September 3rd, 2021 06:31
• Ennui (Rebmasters) \'out of screen sight; something more real. The soft petals enfold over...
  September 3rd, 2021 05:58
• STONES KNOW (Fay Slimm.) \'Trysts and tresses were forsayed as shorn or capped the Bal Maidens...
  September 3rd, 2021 05:43
• Smaller Balls? (Goldfinch60) you never know, Andy in modernity\'s landscape of gender ambiguity \'beg...
  September 3rd, 2021 05:34
• Boredom (Aliyah Ib) a powerful, poetic voice I see you\'ve been writing for a while look...
  September 3rd, 2021 05:26
• I Do so Hope There are Saxophones in Heaven (Neville) (\'Kebero\' drums, to herald our fluster of last blinks trumpets and...
  September 3rd, 2021 05:23
• Autumnal Leaves (Saxon Crow) romantic\'s: indeed... a wonderful shorty such a crisp message and...
  September 3rd, 2021 05:08
• Gnarled to Knurled (Flyingfish) guess that\'s why plastic surgery and age lengthening,...
  September 3rd, 2021 05:04
• Tears (Jayy) words that reveal just how much care and attention the poetic voice is...
  September 3rd, 2021 04:54
• RIPTIDE (Shadow424) insightful, revealing and thought provoking, a unique write open to...
  September 3rd, 2021 04:49
• New Light Through Pisces Window Snakes (ADarkerMind) \'the air that gravels voice and grave for the heavens pick knots...
  September 3rd, 2021 04:45
• A repressed, depressed soul (TAM) before you let it all go be sure you have an anchor, nearby (a family,...
  September 3rd, 2021 04:23
• Nightmare (Pacifique Niyitanga) wonderful, really liked your flow great use of contradiction in your...
  September 3rd, 2021 04:18
• This is a woman’s world (Florence J) speak your Truth, but don\'t expect kindness from this cruel world be...
  September 3rd, 2021 03:57
• The Final Frontier (Beano) \'But space is bounded by the small corners in this room. I jangle...
  September 3rd, 2021 03:42
• My heart is on your Hand (Thusa) like your use of everyday items as a source for your metaphors, thanks...
  September 3rd, 2021 03:39
• Called to War (Neville) my words are too feeble, to honour your write with empty commentary, so...
  September 2nd, 2021 04:59
• Songs From a Room (Neville) \'show me the wonder you found hidden in poetry Then teach me to live, to...
  September 2nd, 2021 04:52
• Love Puppet (Noah) an intriguing read wonderfully worded, thanks for sharing
  September 2nd, 2021 04:49
• Grown (Rebmasters) my favourite of all of I\'ve read form you! this is sincere...
  September 2nd, 2021 04:47
• Blighted (Fay Slimm.) genuinely brought a tear to my eye such an impassioned write on a...
  September 2nd, 2021 04:41
• Music Revelation. (Goldfinch60) its the childhood favourites, that get me in a few choice notes a deluge...
  September 2nd, 2021 04:25
• Bleed (Ron parrish aka wordman) so much time, we spend shedding what we invested, so much...
  September 2nd, 2021 04:22
• Unattainable (Lorna) let it all go for as morning arrives, you\'ll soon realise it\'ll all be...
  September 2nd, 2021 04:15
• Behind Green Eyes (Saxon Crow) Beautiful! (to read, must be otherworldly to experience) thanks for...
  September 2nd, 2021 04:12
• dawns cry (Dusk arising) indeed, Aurora\'s chariot must be Blazing! a timely and important write,...
  September 2nd, 2021 04:10
• My Talk – 6 (Nafis Light) its cos, we get it twisted we assume, power is something external that...
  September 2nd, 2021 04:08
• Seahorse Sashay  (Flyingfish) a brilliant dedication they are, so wondrous! a true validation of the...
  September 2nd, 2021 04:00
• Fight (from Pirates Songs) (Isabel Szurlej) Pirates of the Caribbean with a wonderful twist thanks for the fun...
  September 2nd, 2021 03:57
• Ant Hills (Noveyre) Awesome! thanks for choosing to share, dear poet
  September 2nd, 2021 03:53
• A Virgin Grieves (Satishverma) drink your sacred herb and breathe easy, knowing all is: as all can...
  September 2nd, 2021 03:51
• An August Son (Cygnus X-1) really like the confident poetic voice thanks for sharing, a great...
  September 2nd, 2021 03:39
• My Talk – 5 (Nafis Light) there\'s a distinction between being finicky and discerning, your...
  September 2nd, 2021 03:32
• Feline Awakening (Coyote) is that feline named Euclid? dear poet thank you! for sharing your...
  September 2nd, 2021 03:22
• Healing (Pacifique Niyitanga) \'I sometimes feel pain but the healing- Numbs it and I feel alright with...
  September 2nd, 2021 03:18
• Peacock (John McChord) we dance, to survive noting all the feathers, we shed that get trodden,...
  September 2nd, 2021 03:14
• Confused (Trevor_Ricardo17$) read, read, read then read some more or get a short cut, by attending a...
  September 2nd, 2021 03:10
• End of Summer Days (Soph) understated grace, in its sublime of simplicity a wonderfully relatable,...
  September 2nd, 2021 03:00
• Where white lies become black truths (Trenz Pruca) no dear poet, you are not and by sharing your wonderful poem you\'ve...
  September 2nd, 2021 02:56
• The Cross (Matthew jay) good for you! just please, keep an open mind see the potential for harm,...
  August 31st, 2021 06:43
• A - Z Love’s Breath (Dove) maybe a mantra for life, a guide to hang on the door and read, before we...
  August 31st, 2021 06:32
• Too Soon October (Lorna) \'Looking to the rear instead of forward Not escaping the clamp of past...
  August 31st, 2021 06:28
• Hidden (Fay Slimm.) indeed, dear Fay Nature is truly, our creativity\'s sustainable source,...
  August 31st, 2021 06:22
• the lake of time (Dusk arising) fish, can have that effect well, until fished then that romance, is all...
  August 31st, 2021 06:17
• Wreckage (HannahElisabeth) we\'ve all been there for most of us, on both sides of that blame...
  August 31st, 2021 06:13
• Valium Day (Rebmasters) \'Later, at a party, I overdo it on caffeine trying to be human, but...
  August 31st, 2021 06:06
• COVID-19 (BusyB) true words a wonderful read, thanks for sharing
  August 31st, 2021 06:04
• To Be Continued Maybe (Neville) with baited expectancy: I await dear Poet.. (beautiful characterisation,...
  August 31st, 2021 06:02
• Starwatch. (Goldfinch60) Brilliant!
  August 31st, 2021 05:39
• [ Bloom ] (Heart of Babel) beautiful poem unnerving image a meaningfully memorable, poetic...
  August 31st, 2021 05:37
• Expectation Feud (Flyingfish) a child\'s furrowed brow a damning mirror, of modernity\'s \'age of...
  August 31st, 2021 05:31
• The Fabulous Dream (Satishverma) \'I am sad. This world is too much. I can not read the unreadable. Poems...
  August 31st, 2021 05:25
• MIND GAMES (Andy Hunter) onwards, to that next chapter keep those cliffsnotes and cherished...
  August 31st, 2021 05:16
• Fathers (Tayama) \'Love comes when hearts are open, As tears are wiped dry, Suffering is...
  August 31st, 2021 05:00
• Smile (DreamingKikyo) we all experience momentary moments of weakness that, they can never:...
  August 31st, 2021 04:56
• Current (Dakota) \'Peace with everyone can be found once we find peace for...
  August 31st, 2021 04:37
• Don\'t Wake me Up (The Incomplete Metaphor) a little dramatic in wording but, I genuinely feel this isn\'t \'just for...
  August 31st, 2021 04:24
• Dancing in the snow (HannahElisabeth) its important, that we share to gift others an opportunity, to...
  August 30th, 2021 07:25
• a summer night (Dusk arising) truly, subtle be the ways of the universe our simple everyday, actions...
  August 30th, 2021 07:16
• Ghost (Kevin Michael Bloor) an intriguing read, wonderfully penned as always thanks for sharing,...
  August 30th, 2021 07:01
• Lines Written by the Lake (Surucipe) \'The delicate lull of unhurried boats, The rapid wings of the birds that...
  August 30th, 2021 06:58
• Dumbness (Fay Slimm.) \'dumbness fixed, on stunted responses admits, no warmth so...
  August 30th, 2021 06:54
• Heartbeat to heartbeat (Florence J) pixelated, ink to ink I\'m sorry for the harsh costs of life\'s,...
  August 30th, 2021 06:45
• The Treatise of Love (Neville) this write underlines my root argument for not throwing out, everything...
  August 30th, 2021 06:33
• In Your Right Eye (InsomniaTeaS) such raw and unfiltered, worded images can only come from personal...
  August 30th, 2021 06:00
• It\'s Not My Problem. (Goldfinch60) as long as I\'m not hurting someone on purpose or where necessary have...
  August 30th, 2021 05:52
• The Canyon (JWKP98) what a hauntingly bleak depiction yet, in being so its a tangible thread...
  August 30th, 2021 05:33
• Dream Street (Flyingfish) an open ended, worded frame to encapsulate a blurred weary, portrait of...
  August 30th, 2021 05:22
• Love (IAli) a well thought-out, opinion thanks for sharing
  August 30th, 2021 05:11
• The dance of time (Florence J) what a bravely transparent depiction of deeply sensitive and personal...
  August 30th, 2021 05:00