Comments on community poems by L. B. Mek
- Dowlish Wake (Goldfinch60)
\'The lawns so green
Surrounded by the wonder,
The wonder of...
September 13th, 2021 06:51 - May I absorb every word I\'ve ever written (Poetic Dan)
if I hadn\'t seen your name, I would have to go back and search through...
September 13th, 2021 06:45 - They Call Me Jealousy (Jay-Lee Jane)
\'And that’s why you’ll wish that I’m gone fast.
My fingertips of...
September 13th, 2021 06:33 - Lies I Learned (WhisperedWord)
the most poetic line, on this page
in my most humble opinion, is:
\'on...
September 13th, 2021 06:27 - Two Small Eyes (Satishverma)
much better than that \'Tyger, tyger\' poem
the world loves endlessly
in...
September 13th, 2021 06:23 - A Wicked Scheme (Jack Cohen)
\'Every night
awoken by fright
feeling me lose my mind.
The final...
September 13th, 2021 06:17 - No Evidence to be Found? (Cygnus X-1)
Brilliant!
thank you, for choosing to share and the gifted chuckle
September 13th, 2021 06:10 - Pinto: The nightmare is not mine (Pinto)
(\'I just wrote this thing this morning.. I\'m not even a poet.\'
and...
September 13th, 2021 06:07 - Love, The Holocaust (Pacifique Niyitanga)
this is wonderful
I think your evocative title, although attention...
September 13th, 2021 05:43 - Home (Jennifer Martin)
what a wonderfully vivid depiction
I\'m envious of this \'Home\' you...
September 13th, 2021 05:34 - Beauty and You (Marion Johnson)
these choice syllables
portray every inch, the scarlet
of our repressed...
September 13th, 2021 05:30 - [ Dominant Species ] (Heart of Babel)
indeed, its those that cater to their base instinct\'s of greed and power...
September 13th, 2021 05:17 - From Hell to Boot of Mandolin (ADarkerMind)
\'as rose of hyacinth
breaks bread with scarlet wings
as tortured...
September 13th, 2021 04:46 - The blind man (Fozzy)
\'He is used to the fact now he will never be eagle eyed.
But his other...
September 13th, 2021 04:30 - Fear Not One So Young (Accidental Poet)
\'Fear not one so young
The love song you both know will not go...
September 10th, 2021 05:56 - My Lotus and Me (Neville)
I have totalled three cars in my life, yet have had only six accidents in...
September 10th, 2021 05:48 - Narcissist (Neville)
I know these feeling\'s you articulate, so well my friend
only I lack the...
September 10th, 2021 05:38 - A Palette Of Colours (Jo)
beautiful, and offers so much depth for personalised...
September 10th, 2021 05:35 - You/Me (Rebmasters)
\'just to deprive me of
joy, laughter &
a sense of self.
Hoping to...
September 10th, 2021 05:34 - Autumn Comes Running. (Fay Slimm.)
\'It tosses relentless as with bounty it plays
and douses growth\'s hold...
September 10th, 2021 05:06 - Nelson Went To Battle. (Goldfinch60)
lol
there\'s always a bigger - badder bully, in the sea\'s
best to have...
September 10th, 2021 04:48 - The Darkest Place (Saxon Crow)
a wonderful shorty
\'darkness is a child of light, quicker we realise...
September 10th, 2021 04:43 - falling into autumn glory (Dusk arising)
Brilliant!
September 10th, 2021 04:39 - I See In Dark (Satishverma)
Brilliant!
\'The innocence will not
break. Moral sense will not rise. I...
September 10th, 2021 04:34 - The Bedtime Bees (Noveyre)
a poetic concept that would have never come to me, intriguing to say the...
September 10th, 2021 04:25 - On Poetry (Cygnus X-1)
Amen!
wonderful flow, nodded along to every line, thanks for sharing
September 10th, 2021 04:22 - I Don\'t Wanna Talk About It (GiraffineUploads)
like Dusk, wisely advised above:
\'Do not rush to be in love.
It\'s...
September 10th, 2021 04:19 - Tweeners (John Prophet)
\'Tweeners.
Dealing with
the animal
moving
toward...
September 10th, 2021 04:04 - Be Strong Disheveled Entity (ADarkerMind)
:that fig tree of prosperity, winking
between moonlit slits
of nightmare...
September 10th, 2021 03:58 - the hardest thing to do isn\'t dying. (The elder poet)
\'Knowing, that their time is short.
But not so short, as to ease their...
September 10th, 2021 03:26 - Iceberg (M.E.M.)
an impressive style and flow, there\'s a lulling theme to your word...
September 10th, 2021 03:12 - maybe (Dusk arising)
ready for us to take a bite, every night
as we soar up, in our drunken...
September 10th, 2021 03:07 - Sad (Rebmasters)
\'I take all of your sadness
in the palm of my hand
& say it belongs to...
September 9th, 2021 05:34 - Finding (Fay Slimm.)
Inspiration, in every gust
(a lovely depiction
succinct and light in...
September 9th, 2021 05:30 - Lets Sing Again! (Goldfinch60)
\'Is it the singer? YEAAAAAAAHH!\'
lmao!
as ever, dear poet
your zeal...
September 9th, 2021 05:21 - Oh, Georgia (HannahElisabeth)
I\'m currently reading, a walk in the woods by bill bryson
(try it out...
September 9th, 2021 05:17 - A pythonesque poem..... Well sort of.... Well I thought I\'d give it a go..... Shh!........ Sorry (Saxon Crow)
\'no dear poet, let your creativity roam free
like the custard, you...
September 9th, 2021 05:11 - What Must I Be? (Jack Cohen)
\'seat or strive
wait or strike
choices aplenty
but inevitability a...
September 9th, 2021 05:05 - The moon and her wolf (HannahElisabeth)
Life, to be lived
Memories, to be bequeathed
and for a lucky...
September 9th, 2021 04:57 - Penguin Rainbow (Gary Booker)
an important message that needs sharing, repeating, sharing,...
September 9th, 2021 04:44 - Paths (Quemis)
\'Though each stone looks the same,
Whisper again the magic;
The lesson...
September 9th, 2021 04:36 - Journey of a Dewdrop (Cygnus X-1)
Beautiful!
thank you for sharing
September 9th, 2021 04:32 - Song for emoticon (Cosmacpan)
\'How much you *belong to me\'..
this concept is a little archaic and...
September 9th, 2021 04:31 - Talking to Myself (AuburnScribbler)
situationally? - it depends, my friend
(everything temperate, even in...
September 9th, 2021 04:27 - HELL (Simple-Man87)
really well written
thanks for sharing
September 9th, 2021 04:22 - If You Ask Me! (IAli)
a good read
some insightful observations, thanks for sharing..
but love...
September 9th, 2021 04:19 - Visit With a Friend (Michael Anthony)
if only Time came with a replay button...
I would just have one sweet...
September 9th, 2021 04:03 - A Tribute – Voyage (Home World) (Nafis Light)
like the positivity and the accessibility in wording, a good read
September 9th, 2021 03:57 - Can you see me (Joleneadams)
Sing your Truth! a powerful write..
but remember, to utilise that same...
September 9th, 2021 03:54 - 𝒜𝓉𝒽𝒶𝓏𝒶𝑔𝑜𝓇𝒶𝓅𝒽𝑜𝒷𝒾𝒶 (Dove)
beautifully measured, introvert in its contemplative tone and yet bold, in...
September 9th, 2021 03:35 - The Sound Of Silence (Jayasree)
Nature is Very Loud
its just we\'re equally, obstinately, Very:...
September 9th, 2021 03:16 - When the Sea Fret Hit (Neville)
sounds rough
but hey, sailor\'s getting lucky with that peck, so can\'t...
September 7th, 2021 06:14 - The Silent House (Jo)
someone moving-in or are you moving out, either way I think you captured...
September 7th, 2021 05:59 - Untamed (Fay Slimm.)
\'Remote enough to cause
near claustrophobia to those prone,
clifftop...
September 7th, 2021 05:56 - distancing (Lonelyraccoon)
as is true for most of us
the only guaranteed certainty in existence, is...
September 7th, 2021 05:48 - I want to be with you* (Rebmasters)
these lines:
\'I want to place my palm
on the trunk of an ancient...
September 7th, 2021 05:44 - Decisions (Goldfinch60)
by design or chaotic luck
our fallibility is unquestioned,
a part of...
September 7th, 2021 05:31 - Murderers Lament (Saxon Crow)
\'And never shall I return again
To the light of freedom and a happy...
September 7th, 2021 05:18 - My Dexterous Teacher (Arpita Maurya)
not so \'abyss\', with your wonderful dedication floating around, thanks...
September 7th, 2021 05:10 - Absence (Michael Anthony)
\'And I’ve already
been thinking a lot about holes,
the empirical...
September 7th, 2021 05:07 - Portents IV (Eugene S.)
those blinked seconds between choice and consequence?
or happenstance and...
September 7th, 2021 05:03 - [ Keys of Disorder ] (Heart of Babel)
Amen! say it like you see it:
no more \'participation medals\'
no more...
September 7th, 2021 04:46 - Programmers Brew (John Prophet)
an infinite loop, procedural then?
good old pascal days, lol
yes, it...
September 7th, 2021 04:29 - Ears On Trumpets Hill (ADarkerMind)
maggots foot, on the first line of a love poem
that\'s so - uniquely, you...
September 7th, 2021 04:06 - Swanage Pier (Kevin Michael Bloor)
\'not age, but first love glowing!\'
delightfully worded, what a...
September 7th, 2021 03:52 - Spooning (BusyB)
kitchen politics, devolving
to our human reality, levels...
like Neil...
September 7th, 2021 03:48 - THE SEVENTH FLOOR (PETERHARRISON)
its a devastating condition,
to have someone look, act, speak
the same,...
September 7th, 2021 03:25 - Your Hands in Mine (Surucipe)
what a beautiful dedication, thanks for sharing
September 7th, 2021 03:15 - Weep No More (Jayasree)
Empowering!
what a great message and poetry
its most suitable...
September 7th, 2021 03:12 - Listen Through the Breeze (Neville)
\'I never
want you: choreographed
For that would be, too much
to...
September 6th, 2021 07:53 - Wryneck (Neville)
never seen one, although
I doubt I would recognise it
but, on a somewhat...
September 6th, 2021 07:47 - Changes. (Fay Slimm.)
\'inert\': indeed..
beautiful, dear Fay!
may that eagerness remain,...
September 6th, 2021 07:37 - Boring Tasks (Jo)
why do I like these?
I nod not knowing why
maybe, trying to convince...
September 6th, 2021 07:25 - Speak/Listen (Rebmasters)
\'but deeper still, somewhere beyond
the spaces between words.
It...
September 6th, 2021 07:21 - Slow Train. (Goldfinch60)
the worst aspect of Time, for me
is its lulling lope of indifference
if...
September 6th, 2021 06:57 - A Slow Death (Míchel Lex)
those last two last lines are very poignant
indeed, there\'s a lifeline -...
September 6th, 2021 06:45 - Metamorphosis (HannahElisabeth)
that unshakeable disconnect in life
between, what we hope for
and where,...
September 6th, 2021 06:33 - Lone Danseur (Camelot)
a fun spin (pun - unashamedly, intended) lol
dating\'s dancing games: now...
September 6th, 2021 06:24 - Black Forest (Samer Amin)
\'The lonely heart of the forest
which is inhabited by the horror
of...
September 6th, 2021 06:08 - Immaculate (Satishverma)
I\'ve read an alarming amount of nihilistic write\'s this...
September 6th, 2021 05:57 - Death Bed (Vacancy)
we - too readily, assume
being born is us being \'switched-on\'
and...
September 6th, 2021 05:44 - The Blue Dragonfly (Cygnus X-1)
wonderful imagery, dragonfly or phoenix
its all just glamourized yearning...
September 6th, 2021 05:18 - Frequency (John Prophet)
...\'moments, of finite clusters
escapism in all-things...
September 6th, 2021 05:06 - Leap to Escape (Malayang.ibon)
leap to where?
\'Anywhere, but here!\'
are the words, of a short-sighted...
September 6th, 2021 04:50 - To No One Else (Accidental Poet)
Beautiful!
wonderfully measured
the masterful characterisation
of...
September 6th, 2021 04:32 - Not the Religion I Knew (Eugene S.)
devoid of any alignment with your theological points
this was a well...
September 6th, 2021 04:23 - Wheel (John Prophet)
(great read, dear poet
your thought provoking writing, did it again
got...
September 3rd, 2021 06:31 - My Heart’s Forever Wife (Accidental Poet)
so sad, yet there\'s beauty - too, unquestionably:
(who of us, imbued...
September 3rd, 2021 06:16 - Ennui (Rebmasters)
\'out of screen sight;
something more real.
The soft petals
enfold over...
September 3rd, 2021 05:58 - STONES KNOW (Fay Slimm.)
\'Trysts and tresses were forsayed as shorn or capped the
Bal Maidens...
September 3rd, 2021 05:43 - Smaller Balls? (Goldfinch60)
you never know, Andy
in modernity\'s landscape of gender ambiguity
\'beg...
September 3rd, 2021 05:34 - Boredom (Aliyah Ib)
a powerful, poetic voice
I see you\'ve been writing for a while
look...
September 3rd, 2021 05:26 - I Do so Hope There are Saxophones in Heaven (Neville)
(\'Kebero\' drums, to herald our fluster of last blinks
trumpets and...
September 3rd, 2021 05:23 - Autumnal Leaves (Saxon Crow)
romantic\'s: indeed...
a wonderful shorty
such a crisp message and...
September 3rd, 2021 05:08 - Gnarled to Knurled (Flyingfish)
guess that\'s why plastic surgery
and age lengthening,...
September 3rd, 2021 05:04 - Tears (Jayy)
words that reveal just how much care and attention
the poetic voice is...
September 3rd, 2021 04:54 - RIPTIDE (Shadow424)
insightful, revealing and
thought provoking, a unique write
open to...
September 3rd, 2021 04:49 - New Light Through Pisces Window Snakes (ADarkerMind)
\'the air that gravels voice
and grave for the heavens pick
knots...
September 3rd, 2021 04:45 - A repressed, depressed soul (TAM)
before you let it all go
be sure you have an anchor, nearby
(a family,...
September 3rd, 2021 04:23 - Nightmare (Pacifique Niyitanga)
wonderful, really liked your flow
great use of contradiction in your...
September 3rd, 2021 04:18
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